Redemption By Steel

[RadiantBeam]

I'll see what I can do.

But remember it has been a while, and I have forgotten some of the plans I had in store for them.

I can still hope!

[Olive]

I remember reading the first chapter somewhere, so it's nice to see it continued.

Regarding the second chapter, there's really nothing constructive I can think of that needs to be said. So, uh, keep it up, I suppose.

[Altima of the Gates]

This has promise, and hopefully Rin will have learned something from fouling up the watch to tone down the vodka.

[Kelnish]

I think alcoholic Rin is a pretty cool guy. I remember reading the first part a while ago and loved the shit out of it, and seeing it continued makes me smile. I really liked the runic system, it gives Ayako a pretty neat edge without making her a capable magus which would make her tread on other character's territory. And bad luck enchantments make me happy.

psssst will you ever continue The Second Killer? Because I liked that a lot!

Welcome back!

[kay4today]

I'd like to see where this is going as well.

It's been enjoyable so far.

[Flere821]

I don't really have anything constructive to say, but I like it so far and think the idea is pretty interesting.

What he said. I'm liking this and would like to see more, though like Beam said I'm mainly reading your stuff for the Lorelei/Shirou scenes ^^;

[Nacho the Doritosedge]

the Lorelei/Shirou scenes

As much as I love writing the super awkwardness couple, I don't get why they're so much more liked than the rest of my stuff.

Could someone explain that to me?

[warellis]

It's novel because we don't expect Lorelei to act in such a manner.
In addition to this, are there any other snippets you're thinking of starting/expanding? Has anything been thought on about the Touhou/FSN snippets?

Also who is your new avatar?

[Nacho the Doritosedge]

It's novel because we don't expect Lorelei to act in such a manner.
In addition to this, are there any other snippets you're thinking of starting/expanding? Has anything been thought on about the Touhou/FSN snippets?

Also who is your new avatar?

What, Lorelei being awkward? I totally expected from the first time I read up on her. I mean, even if she doesn't act over-innocent and retarded like most Japanese writers' idea of it, she was essentially raised with extremely little contact (EDIT: scratch that, no contact at all) with the outside world. Of course any romantic thoughts and actions would be awkward as dick. It's not something that can be taught to deal with that easily, if at all, after all.

As for other stuff, we'll see. What I'm doing now, more than anything, is completing a multi-chapter fic to prove to myself that I can, before anything. After that, well, I'll figure something out.

btw, My new avatar is Black Rock Shooter. If you watch the anime, expect little to no sense being made.

[RadiantBeam]

If you watch the anime, expect little to no sense being made.

The whole anime? The first episode alone makes absolutely zero sense.

[Troika]

PROCEED.

[RadiantBeam]

As much as I love writing the super awkwardness couple, I don't get why they're so much more liked than the rest of my stuff.

Could someone explain that to me?

Hm....

I think mostly because, it's a different thing to see and there's so little of Lorelei written to begin with, so it's interesting to see how she would handle a romantic situation. Not to mention, it's a completely different scenario for Shirou as well, so some of how he handles it and reacts won't be like how he would in canon. I guess really, the answer is it's different, but the way you wrote it, it really worked and I immensely enjoyed reading it.

[Aiden]

Hm....

I think mostly because, it's a different thing to see and there's so little of Lorelei written to begin with, so it's interesting to see how she would handle a romantic situation. Not to mention, it's a completely different scenario for Shirou as well, so some of how he handles it and reacts won't be like how he would in canon. I guess really, the answer is it's different, but the way you wrote it, it really worked and I immensely enjoyed reading it.

Also because both you and I enjoy teacher/student romance far too much for our own good.

[RadiantBeam]

Also because both you and I enjoy teacher/student romance far too much for our own good.

Yes, also this. I willingly admit that I find student/teacher romances intriguing, when they're well developed like the Lorelei/Shirou stuff was.

[YeOfLittleFaith]

THIS STORY. IT IS BACK.

Names, you wonderful wonderful person, you!

[Lycodrake]

STRENGTH is my favorite Black*RockShooter character - and design.
But on to the topic of the thread (le gasp): nicely done and rather unexpected (or my memory of the original or whatever is poor) with a good dose of emotions all around. ^^

[Etcetera]

Any chance you'll also be continuing your Shirou/Lorelei stuff? I liked those a lot.

Ok what I miss? Where is this Shirou/Lorelei stuff??? A link would be most appreciated.

[khagerou]

It's in Name's drabble thread. Search and find it.
OR.... CLikc here

[NewAgeOfPower]

Eagerly awaiting the next part of your creation.