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  1. April 19th, 2013, 02:53 PM #201
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    Quote Originally Posted by unu View Post
    Nice chapter but I noticed that when shirou was trying to convince nanoha kiritsugu wasn't on a trip you put fuyuki instead of u
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    ... ... ... That was... quite heavy at the end there fraggle.
    She's going to carry that weight....


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  2. April 19th, 2013, 02:57 PM #202
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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    She's going to carry that weight....
    And be crushed by it. =,= *c*<(With snu snu!)
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    counter guardian takamachi?
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    Well I admit to liking this version a lot better well i am now happy about the rewrites as if it continues to increase in quality the long wait will be justified.
    Also are you guys going to update the rewritten version to fanfiction?
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  5. April 19th, 2013, 03:47 PM #205
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    Quote Originally Posted by rajvir View Post
    Well I admit to liking this version a lot better well i am now happy about the rewrites as if it continues to increase in quality the long wait will be justified.
    Also are you guys going to update the rewritten version to fanfiction?

    hmm, hero is the one who posted the original version to ff.net, so ask him


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  6. April 19th, 2013, 03:55 PM #206
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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    hmm, hero is the one who posted the original version to ff.net, so ask him
    Think I should PM him or just wait til he checks out the thread?
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    Quote Originally Posted by rajvir View Post
    Think I should PM him or just wait til he checks out the thread?

    wait for him i think


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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    wait for him i think
    Alright well just to repost it and make it somewhat easier for heroslayer to find.
    Are you going to post the rewritten version in fanfiction?
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  9. April 19th, 2013, 05:57 PM #209
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    Dammit, fraggle why is it that i read your chapters, I just want more?

    Though something that does bother me but I understand is Shirou's faint memories of his parents does he remember bit or images of before the fire or does he only remember shadows or almost mechanical gestures that when Momoko does overlaps and kind of complete a vague memory?

    If it's the latter will there be a backlash to that?


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  10. April 19th, 2013, 06:05 PM #210
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    That was... I don't even... Well I guess when you guys mentioned changes in the plot you meant it.

    Damn, so Kiritsugu's now fully involved in all of this now, huh? I suddenly feel very sorry for poor Fate. She has no idea what kind of situation she's getting herself into. Not to mention that ending makes me think that the first Nano-Fate encounter isn't going to be so one-sided this time around...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sky Master View Post
    That was... I don't even... Well I guess when you guys mentioned changes in the plot you meant it.

    Damn, so Kiritsugu's now fully involved in all of this now, huh? I suddenly feel very sorry for poor Fate. She has no idea what kind of situation she's getting herself into. Not to mention that ending makes me think that the first Nano-Fate encounter isn't going to be so one-sided this time around...
    I think Fraggle mentioned this when the first comments on spacebattle for the first chapter.

    I think it went "Is Kiritsugu going to cap a bitch" or something like that.


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  12. April 19th, 2013, 06:45 PM #212
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    Yay new chapter Though didn't Alisa have cats, not dogs?
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    recovery mission would be send out.”
    sent out."

    why does shirous acto so suprised at the linker core descripton, it sounds very similar to the magic circuite explanation to me. \

    What is this crap Kiritsugu is feeding her about creating magic circuites? In nasuverse you don't normaly create magic circutes, you activate those that you have. I think the switch he mentions is just mental training to open and close them.

    became irradical.
    I don't know if thats a word and I don't think it should be used here.
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  14. April 19th, 2013, 08:01 PM #214
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    Quote Originally Posted by bigreader View Post
    recovery mission would be send out.”
    sent out."

    why does shirous acto so suprised at the linker core descripton, it sounds very similar to the magic circuite explanation to me. \
    Shirou is surprised because the linker core is an actual organ, and completely different from circuits ( Core = generation + storage. circuits = instantaneous converter)

    What is this crap Kiritsugu is feeding her about creating magic circuites? In nasuverse you don't normaly create magic circutes, you activate those that you have. I think the switch he mentions is just mental training to open and close them.
    He doesn't actually say she has to create them. You probably misread something. Then again Kerry is a crappy teacher in the first place :P


    became irradical.
    I don't know if thats a word and I don't think it should be used here.
    should have been erratic.

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    Yay new chapter Though didn't Alisa have cats, not dogs?
    Suzuka has the cats :P


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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Suzuka has the cats :P
    Indeed. When the cast went with Touya to visit his gf, Suzuka's older sister, they had the adventure with the giant cat. And the normal sized cats that chased Yuuno around.
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    Kiritsugu haz active role in story?!
    ....... Oh I'm gonna enjoy this
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    Hmm will the kiri vs précia snippet become canon?
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    Quote Originally Posted by kojiro kakita View Post
    Hmm will the kiri vs précia snippet become canon?
    No way. Precia will keel off death for no apparent reason at all. And then Fate will cry.
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    Quote Originally Posted by rajvir View Post
    Well I admit to liking this version a lot better well i am now happy about the rewrites as if it continues to increase in quality the long wait will be justified.
    Also are you guys going to update the rewritten version to fanfiction?
    Hmm, I forgot about that. Right, we'll have to figure that out.
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  20. April 20th, 2013, 01:04 AM #220
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    Name it Mahou Senki Lyrical Days Redux (or insert your "Hey guys this is clearly a rewrite" title of choice), call it a day, and watch the old guard of previous readers flock back.
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