This reminds me of some crazy Ranma 1/2 parody or something.
This reminds me of some crazy Ranma 1/2 parody or something.
He never sleeps. He never dies.
Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.
Actually, with this sentence, I immediately thought that she was gonna ask him to die.“It is kind enough to include one escape clause.” Rin said with a smirk, “If one of us dies, the survivors are released from any obligations.”
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Dude, we get it, you want more Tsuki, but your complaints only make fic writer's resistance funnier.
Localizationing stuff
“Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”
— Carmilla Theme
"Evil isn't the real threat to the world. Stupid is just as destructive as Evil, maybe more so, and it's a hell of a lot more common. What we really need is a crusade against Stupid. That might actually make a difference."
―Jim Butcher, Vignette
Oh wow, this was brilliantly funny I guess I'm too used to top quality lemon by others such as Elf or Arashi, so I was mostly laughing instead of being aroused when I read this.
Okay, I laughed way more than I should have. Good work, Pata.
“Good evening, Emiya-kun,”
I didn't read anymore the instant you didn't have a comma, which is the most basic part of dialogue ever
in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it
#THELEGENDNEVERDIES
[01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.
Hey hey, if you're gonna be a pedant, start with the first line!
Then instead of than? No wai! Wut is any seriously? Authors note?Authors note: Please do not take this terrible tale of bad jokes and smut any seriously then I did.
You shouldn't even have gotten to the dialogue, for shame for continuing on!
Thank you for pointing out this typo, who's presence reverberates throughout all I have created and brings to ruin my whole writing career. Destroying my body and soul, reducing me to a hollow shell, doomed to wander for eternity.
Also, wouldn't it be a period since it's the end of a sentence and there's no "X Said" afterwords.
Last edited by Pata Hikari; April 26th, 2013 at 08:05 PM.
Fate/Stay Night: Life is an Endless Dream Chapter 12: Settling into place
Tsukihime: Role Revert Part 10: Were you here the whole time?
Fate + Tsuki: Slayer/Savior Part 1: Forge/Assassin
Pata Hikari's Tsukihime Short stories: Lastest story: A Midnight Dreary
“Evening Senpai.” Sakura said. “Can we come in?
Clearly you know how to do dialogue good when the sentence like right after that breaks the rule you just used to argue with me
in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it
#THELEGENDNEVERDIES
[01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.
Arguing?
I would never do that.
I am merely a humble wretch, recoiling to the true failure of my works.
Nay, I am grateful to people helping me by pointing out errors, both big and small. Surely you have only the kindest motives in aiding a miserable being like myself.
Fate/Stay Night: Life is an Endless Dream Chapter 12: Settling into place
Tsukihime: Role Revert Part 10: Were you here the whole time?
Fate + Tsuki: Slayer/Savior Part 1: Forge/Assassin
Pata Hikari's Tsukihime Short stories: Lastest story: A Midnight Dreary
frantic author's avatar surprisingly relevant
He never sleeps. He never dies.
Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.