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    Greatness, at any cost mAc Chaos's Avatar
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    This reminds me of some crazy Ranma 1/2 parody or something.
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    “It is kind enough to include one escape clause.” Rin said with a smirk, “If one of us dies, the survivors are released from any obligations.”
    Actually, with this sentence, I immediately thought that she was gonna ask him to die.

    =|

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewAgeOfPower View Post
    Doesn't have to be smut. Would love to read a Caren/Shirou comedy.
    Sure, why not write more Fate fics! Its not like there is a thousand of them, meanwhile we have a pile of Tsukihime fics to read.
    Lancer x Archer OTP
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Suddenly, Kiritsugu is Genma! =P
    Nice to know I'm not the only one who had that thought.


    Nice work, Pata. XD
    Very - thank you for it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    Dude, we get it, you want more Tsuki, but your complaints only make fic writer's resistance funnier.
    Eh, I'm usually more capable of keeping those comments to myself, I don't know why that one just slipped trough.
    Lancer x Archer OTP
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    Quote Originally Posted by Servant Shiki View Post
    Sure, why not write more Fate fics! Its not like there is a thousand of them, meanwhile we have a pile of Tsukihime fics to read.
    I think it's funny because there is a pile of Tsukihime fics but like, 1 kinda sorta notes fic, that one russian DDD fic, and like five canaan fics.

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    Oh wow, this was brilliantly funny I guess I'm too used to top quality lemon by others such as Elf or Arashi, so I was mostly laughing instead of being aroused when I read this.
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    Elf: Crack Dealer. Story at eleven.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kelnish View Post
    I think it's funny because there is a pile of Tsukihime fics but like, 1 kinda sorta notes fic, that one russian DDD fic, and like five canaan fics.
    Yeah, but Notes is hardly long enough to even develop much interest in, no fanfic writers care about DDD, and Canaan really doesn't have an excuse so yeah we need more Canaan.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    ...Canaan really doesn't have an excuse so yeah we need more Canaan.
    More sugoi sugoi sugoi~ Maria x Canaan.
    Also Alphard. The world can never have enough Alphard.
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    Okay, I laughed way more than I should have. Good work, Pata.

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    “Good evening, Emiya-kun,


    I didn't read anymore the instant you didn't have a comma, which is the ​most basic part of dialogue ever
    in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it

    #THELEGENDNEVERDIES

    [01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.


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    Hey hey, if you're gonna be a pedant, start with the first line!

    Authors note: Please do not take this terrible tale of bad jokes and smut any seriously then I did.
    Then instead of than? No wai! Wut is any seriously? Authors note?

    You shouldn't even have gotten to the dialogue, for shame for continuing on!

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    I happen to be an expert on this topic Pata Hikari's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frantic Author View Post


    I didn't read anymore the instant you didn't have a comma, which is the ​most basic part of dialogue ever
    Thank you for pointing out this typo, who's presence reverberates throughout all I have created and brings to ruin my whole writing career. Destroying my body and soul, reducing me to a hollow shell, doomed to wander for eternity.

    Also, wouldn't it be a period since it's the end of a sentence and there's no "X Said" afterwords.
    Last edited by Pata Hikari; April 26th, 2013 at 08:05 PM.
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    “Evening Senpai.” Sakura said. “Can we come in?


    Clearly you know how to do dialogue good when the sentence like right after that breaks the rule you just used to argue with me
    in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it

    #THELEGENDNEVERDIES

    [01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.


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    I happen to be an expert on this topic Pata Hikari's Avatar
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    Arguing?

    I would never do that.

    I am merely a humble wretch, recoiling to the true failure of my works.

    Nay, I am grateful to people helping me by pointing out errors, both big and small. Surely you have only the kindest motives in aiding a miserable being like myself.
    Fate/Stay Night: Life is an Endless Dream Chapter 12: Settling into place
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frantic Author View Post
    Clearly you know how to do dialogue good when the sentence like right after that breaks the rule you just used to argue with me[/FONT]
    well
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    frantic author's avatar surprisingly relevant
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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