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    天使 The Angel LilyasAvalon's Avatar
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    I'm extremely disappointed nobody has done Captain Jacksparrow for a rider class servant. :<

    Also, wouldn't nearly anyone from Code count in their own way as being a rider? The Knightmare frames and all, if I remember right, Lelouch had a pretty sweet frame.
    Last edited by LilyasAvalon; October 24th, 2012 at 08:17 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mcjon01 View Post
    >trying to trick people into going to the fanfic section

    Ohoho, not today, Satan! You'll have to come up with some other scheme to plunge my eternal soul into an endless era of fiery torment.
    Pfft, plunging you into an endless era of fiery torment? No such thing is necessary. You have dammed yourself several times already.

    Should have stayed away from that loli porn, tsk tsk tsk.

    I am looking for innocent souls. Not pitch black ones.

    EDIT: INB4 I need to go through 7 pages of S++ statted One Piece characters to reach one decent mythological/historical Servant.
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    Well, this was always open for fictional characters, look at the register on the front page. And we kinda managed to avoid all EX everywhere fictional Servants until now.

    I think the most wanked ones were the mythological/historical ones (I am looking at you, Five)
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    > EX everywhere
    > All E rank except Luck
    > Pioneer of the Stars

    Hm, maybe a Rider Lelouch with a Knightmare as an NP would work. I didn't want to make his NP something similar to Alexander's though since I see a lots of NPs with stuff like "summons his friends" or something. Plus Assassin fits him better, with the way he operates. He's always supposed to be weak except for his Geass and genius tactical abilities.

    There's already lots of other fictional Servants from games and stuff in here already.
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    Nanoha should be a servant. She'd be a bit like Iskander, except instead of lightning bulls she has anti-everything lazors.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mAc Chaos View Post
    > EX everywhere
    > All E rank except Luck
    > Pioneer of the Stars

    Hm, maybe a Rider Lelouch with a Knightmare as an NP would work. I didn't want to make his NP something similar to Alexander's though since I see a lots of NPs with stuff like "summons his friends" or something. Plus Assassin fits him better, with the way he operates. He's always supposed to be weak except for his Geass and genius tactical abilities.

    There's already lots of other fictional Servants from games and stuff in here already.
    Apocrypha has a class for Ruler/Lord, maybe he could fit into that? other than that, I would much prefer other characters getting servant profiles, like Todoh or Shinke.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Five_X View Post
    On a more serious/plausible note, here's something.


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    Servant: God (YHWH)
    Class: Caster/Ruler/Any, depending on current desire

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance - EX

    Territory Creation - EX

    Personal Skills:

    Omnipotence - EX (has access to all possible personal and class skills at will, without any associated flaws)

    Omniscience - EX

    Noble Phantasm:

    Genesis - Kingdom of Heaven/God's Greatest Will - EX

    With a thought, God (YHWH) can bring into existence anything possible, and at the same time destroy anything. He has absolute power in every universe, due to being the de facto Creator according to most of the population of Earth.

    Stats:

    Strength - EX
    Agility - EX
    Mana - EX
    Endurance - EX
    Luck - EX
    Does God qualify as fictional?
    Last edited by aldeayeah; October 24th, 2012 at 12:15 PM.

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    Actually now that I think about it, why doesn't God have divinity?

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    Quote Originally Posted by LilyasAvalon View Post
    I'm extremely disappointed nobody has done Captain Jacksparrow for a rider class servant. :<
    Someone has.

    It would be in the index, but the current version of that thing is too big for the forum or something, so I can't update it.
    Last edited by Petrikow; October 24th, 2012 at 01:17 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by firloz View Post
    Donkey Kong: Berserker, Archer?

    Strength: C
    Endurance: D
    Agility: C
    Magic: E
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: D

    Class skills
    As berserker: Mad Enhancement B (rank up all parameters)

    As Archer:
    Independant action: E

    Personal Skills

    Golden Rule: B
    His vast wealth of golden bananas makes him able to buy mostly whatever he desires.

    Kong Fu: B
    B: At this rank Donkey Kong is capable of utilizing his fighting prowess even while under mental duress.
    Though not a traditional martial arts style it is much better suited to his non-human frame.

    Monstrous Strength: C
    C: At this rank Donkey Kong is capable of increasing his strength by a full rank, however it causes him
    to have his features revert further to that of an ape rather than being able to have Humanistic characteristics

    Noble Phantasm: C
    Coconut Gun, thus wooden hand-cannon fires out explosive coconuts that explode on impact with similar force
    to a C-rank explosive spell.

    ---
    Kimimaro- Lancer/Saber/Caster (if chakra is magic)/Berserker/Archer?/assassin?

    Strength: C
    Endurance: B
    Agility: C
    Magic: E (C if chakra is magic)
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: ???

    Class skills

    Lancer:
    Magic resistance D

    Saber:
    Magic resistance C
    Riding E (for some reason this is granted to sabers from what I can tell... though I have no idea WHY)

    Caster:
    Item Construction: E
    Territory Creation: A (without the assistance of his noble phantasm it is D-)

    Berserker:
    Mad Enhancement: C

    Archer:
    Independant Action: B

    Assassin:
    Presence Concealment: E
    Independant action: C

    Personal Skills

    Battle Continuation: B (moves up to A while transformed)
    He manages to still keep going depite grievous injuries, and only dies to a disease that has been slowly
    killing him for at least months, and presumably years)

    Bravery: B

    Charisma: E
    The Sound Four actually look up to him as both an older brother figure and a leader, which presumes he has
    some leadership ability.

    Instinct: B
    During his fight with Rock Lee Kimimaro was able to predict him to a T, it was only when the boy began
    using the drunken fist (which in-universe is presumably the most confusing and random martial arts style
    there is) that he begins to have trouble.

    Ninjutu: D
    Able to identify most ninjutsu on sight, but very little aptitude for using them.

    Projectile (bones): B
    He is capable of firing out his phlanges as bullets.

    Shikotsumyaku: Ex? (I have no idea where this should go.
    Kimimaro is capable of fully manipulating both the stucture and density of his bones, and has a minor
    healing factor associated with this ability. This skill allows Kimimaro to utilize several other subskills.

    Shikotsumyaku- Tsubaki no Mai: E
    By pulling out and lengthening his humeruses he creates two very strong swords of dense bone.

    Shikotsumyaku- Yanagi no Mai: E
    By extending bone blades from both shoulders the back, both feet and the palm of each hand he increases
    his ability to deal damage via all parts of his body.

    Shikotsumyaku- Karamatsu no Mai: C
    By extending his existing skeletal structure Kimimaro creates a powerful defensive layer of protruding bones.
    While utilizing this skill Kimimaro gains the equivalent of a C rank in Protection from arrows, as his
    bone armor will simply deflect them either away entirely or to far less harmful areas.

    Shikotsumyaku- Tessenka no Mai, Tsuru: D
    By removing his spinal column he creates a whip-like polearm.

    Shikotsumyaku- Tessenka no Mai, Hana: C
    He encases his entire forearm in bone to create a giant bone drill, it is said to look somewhat like a
    flower, this drill has a reach of nearly 10 ft.

    Shikotsumyaku- Sawarabi no Mai: B (will be A rank when used)
    This skill may only be utilized after activating his noble phantasm.
    This ability at first glance resembles a reality marble or marble phantasm. On closer inspection it is actually
    much closer to a high-level evocation. Through manipulating his bones Kimimaro creates a veritable forest
    of bone in close to a fifty meter radius. Usilizing the giant bone pillars and spikes he can instantly
    traverse the entirety of the 'forest', this area is essentially an extension of his body. (this skill is what
    grants Kimimaro an A rank in territory creation.).

    Shikotsumyaku- Tenjshi Sendan: C
    Kimimaro can fire his fingertips as projectiles up to 30 feet.

    Noble Phantasm: Chi no Juin (Cursed Seal of Earth). Unknown rank support type phantasm.
    This cursed seal was implanted in Kimimaro by his previous lord Orochimaru. In exchange for taking away some
    of his will and sanity Kimimaro can receive a great boost in power. The seal acts as a conceptual weapon with
    the concept of "strengthening and corrupting".

    There are two levels of activation of this phantasm, level 1 and level 2.
    While level 1 is active it grants an increase to his bonuses from mad enhancement as if it were of one rank
    higher. It also causes Kimimaro to have a huge temporary surge of prana upon activation, effectively granting
    his magic parameter a +. While active Kimimaro gains access to the Prana burst personal skill, with the prana
    spent deciding the rank.

    When Level 2 is activated it will consume all of the excess prana generated from the level 1 activation.
    While level 2 is active it will grant him the personal skill Monstrous Strength (at B rank). It will also
    increase his mad enhancement again (this time granting an effective + to his mad enhancement rank), he will
    still not suffer the mental downsides from this increase in rank. Finally, while this is active all of his
    Shikotsumyaku personal skills increase by a full rank.

    Not sure how wanked kimimaro is, I am mostly just translating what I had for his character sheet when I used him, and I don't remember if I intentionally powered him up at all back then.
    Misssed this after replying to your previous posts. Donkey Kong's stats, Skills, and NP all look okay, but he himself is kind of boring as a Servant. He lacksa certain something. Not sure what, but he doesn't really grab your attention even though the profile itself is technically sound.

    Kimimaro on the other hand is kind of wanked.

    As for Kimimaro, his stats are fairly balanced, though I'd think he'd be confined to Assassin or Berserker. Also its better in general to stick to one Class when doing a profile. I am guilty of the same thing and I have since realized it makes the profile look needlessly cluttered.

    Shooting his fingertips for one attack shouldn't make him an Archer unless someone was specifically summoning him and that was the only Class left. More to the point his Independant Action should be much lower though. He was dying afterall and worked himself to death just before he could win.

    He shouldn't count as a Caster since his ninjutsu revolves entirely around his bloodline limit anyay, but if he was one his Territory Creation and Item Creation should both be Rank E. All he can make is bone weapons and his field of bones. That's not good enough for a higher Rank regardless of how effective said weapons/techniques are.

    He definitely shouldn't get Bravery. He wasn't brave, he was a fanatic. There's a difference (and he is obviously vulnerable to the very things Bravery is supposed to protect you from like fascination and the Charisma of others).

    He shouldn't have Charisma either. I don't know where you got that the Sound 4 looked up to him, but in the actual chapters they seemed to fear him and only followed him because he was the strongest of them. He definitely wasn't charismatic. You don't get Charisma just for having leadership skills, you have to be exceptional at inspiring others to follow you.

    He probably shouldn't have Instinct either or at least not that high. Simply reading your opponent isn't enough to have Instinct.

    Again, EX means impossible to calculate. Kimimaro's Shikotsumyaku should indeed be a Personal Skill, you got that right, but he's Rank A+ at best because we can calculate his strength with it, we know he was considered exceptionally strong by his clan's standards, possibly the strongest his clan has ever produced. That's not EX.

    Listing his individual techniques is kind of needless. We know he makes iron hard bones. That's really all we need to know (also Protection From Arrows means a superhuman talent for sensing and deflecting projectiles, not just being so tough that they bounce off).

    Sawarabi no Mai doesn't even begin to resemble a Reality Marble or Marble Phantasm. Any half-way decent magus wouldn't even mistake it for a Bounded Field. He just makes a bunch of his bones grow from under the ground over a large area.

    His Curse Seal is too wanked. The lvl 2 grants a huge boost but it'd be a Rank up (plus another Rank up to STR due to the Monstrous Strength) at best. That'd be a C Rank Noble Phantasm. You could probably make it so his Mad Enhancement is just an aspect of his Curse Seal while you're at it, but that's just personal preference.

    One last tip, its best to try and confine the Servant to 4 Personal Skills at the absolute most (and you usually want less), anything more makes them looked wanked even if they are skills the Servant actually had in life. Its better to combine multiple skills under one umbrella, like say someone is good at sneaking in to places, picking locks, cracking safes, etc. instead of giving those all an individual Personal Skill you can just put them all under a Skill like Thievery (because they all relate to theft). In fact you might want to get rid of Kimi's Projectiles skill as its merely an aspect of his bloodline and not any actual skill with projectile weapons on his part.

    Remember, with profiles less is often more when it comes to Skills and even NPs to a certain extent. You don't want to needlessly clutter a rpofile listing every individual technique or spell someone has. If you have to add more details make them something about the Servant's personality and how they relate to certain Masters or what their wish would be if they won (if they even have a wish and aren't just participating for sport). That gives your Servant profile more character so to speak!
    Last edited by G-Man; October 24th, 2012 at 02:48 PM.

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    The index is updated now. It covers 40 more pages of this thread now, up to the latest one.

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    Just a thought: since Jezebel's from the Bible, shouldn't she go under Christianity and Judaism?
    Also, thanks for updating.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KAIZA View Post
    Just a thought: since Jezebel's from the Bible, shouldn't she go under Christianity and Judaism?
    Also, thanks for updating.
    That is true, when I read "Book of Kings" my mind ran to the Shahnameh, which means "Book of Kings" in Persian.

    If anyone else sees anything wrong, please feel free to tell me.

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    Petrikow is the true hero of this thread for actually keeping track of all these profiles.

    Spoiler:

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    Someone make him a Servant sheet
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    Quote Originally Posted by I3uster View Post
    Someone make him a Servant sheet

    Servant Petrikow

    Strength: E--
    Agility: E--
    Mana: E----------------
    Endurance: E--
    Luck: D-
    Noble Phantasm: ???


    Bio:

    He's some guy, who does stuff on an online forum.

    Skills:

    He's really diligent, or you know, just skimmed through the pages and copypasta'd the ones that were actual profiles. Somebody hire this guy to be a clerk or accountant.

    Noble Phantasm:

    ...what, are you kidding me?

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    Quote Originally Posted by TypeWannabe View Post

    Servant Petrikow

    Strength: E--
    Agility: E--
    Mana: E----------------
    Endurance: E--
    Luck: D-
    Noble Phantasm: ???


    Bio:

    He's some guy, who does stuff on an online forum.

    Skills:

    He's really diligent, or you know, just skimmed through the pages and copypasta'd the ones that were actual profiles. Somebody hire this guy to be a clerk or accountant.

    Noble Phantasm:

    ...what, are you kidding me?
    This is accurate.

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    10/10 profile, would summon.
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