A bit of a problem with this guys stats in my opinion, they're far too low, lower than my Julie d'Aubigny and Nero. I'd boost endurance and mana to C or D. Everything else seems fine though.
A bit of a problem with this guys stats in my opinion, they're far too low, lower than my Julie d'Aubigny and Nero. I'd boost endurance and mana to C or D. Everything else seems fine though.
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Oh, I like the Saber. He's kind of a funny concept, but it seems like the kind of thing I could see happening in a Type-Moon setting because of how silly it is.
And I'm not sure what Guinevere should have, but I think you could make her into a Caster somehow. Though she's one of those tricky figures where the existing containers are very hard to make her work.
I was in a bit of a predicament with Ockham since Saber's typically have really high stats but he himself is a scholar who never used a sword in life. Though even Nero had higher stats (including Agility- A) so he could definitely use a boost.
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Made the changes. Endurance is now C, Mana is D and Agility is B.
Thanks for the advice Hermes!
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Caster
Sir Isaac Newton
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of birth: Lincolnshire
STR: E
END: E
AGI: E
MAG: C++
LUCK: A
NP: EX
Class Skills
Territory Creation (B): The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. At this rank, creation of a "Workshop" becomes possible.
Item Construction (B): The skill to manufacture magical items. As an alchemist, Caster possesses the ability to create a number of magical tools and artefacts through his magecraft. Though he lacks the skill of many of the great alchemists, his skill is still sufficient enough to produce homunculi to aid in his work, though they are of a subpar quality. He is also able to use prisms to trap light energy, though again it lacks the power of true gem magecraft.
Personal Skills
Magecraft (C-): The ability to use various magecraft techniques as both a combat and support technique. Despite his enthusiasm for magic, alchemy and the occult, Caster is a distinctly subpar magus, as he doesn’t come from an established family, nor did he ever receive formal training. As a result, the spells he creates and works with are decidedly slipshod in method, constructed mainly through trial and error. Despite this, Caster’s natural genius and determination to succeed means that this actually works for him, allowing him to be, if by no means a master, at least competent. Despite his questionable talents, he is incredibly confident in his abilities; in his eyes, he is the greatest archmage who ever lived.
Natural Born Genius (A): A skill for those prodigies who were born with an unnaturally high intellect. As an individual who is in most minds (not least his own) one of the greatest scientists who ever lived, Caster has one of the highest possible ranks in this skill, reflecting both his natural intellect and the skills he picked up in his constant efforts.
Memory Partition (B): A specific skill cultivated by alchemists that allows the user to separate out their thoughts into independent processes that work towards the same goal. This allows the user to have much more complicated thought processes than otherwise would be available. Though not a trained magus, Caster developed this technique independently to help him with the calculations he used in his work. As a side-effect, he also possesses an effective C rank High Speed Incantation.
Weak Constitution (False) (D): A weakness struck by the nature of frail health. There is a risk of random stat drops in combat situations, though at this rank, the drop is not very great, though Caster’s low physical stats mean it is still dangerous for him. A false variant, as Caster’s illness is not natural, rather it was brought on by being poisoned by the mercury that he used in his alchemical experiments.
Noble Phantasm
Principia Mathematica – Mathematical Principles of Natural Philosophy (Anti-Army, EX): The Noble Phantasm representing the greatest mark Isaac Newton left on history: his work into motion and force, work which still stands today. Taking the name of his great three-volume series of books, it is a Noble Phantasm that grants absolute control over motion, essentially granting him the power of telekinesis even without its name being released. Though he still needs to calculate the trajectory and velocity of his objects, this is a mere trifling detail for Newton. Its true power, however, is of gravity: upon release of its true name, Newton gains control over ‘universal gravitation’, granting him enough power to even pull the moon from the sky.
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#shamlessTeslaripoff
He actually was an alchemist in RL. Hence Caster.
Lancer
ThemeTrue Name- Jashobeam
Alignment- Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin- Israel
Likes- Loyalty, Overcoming any odds, Housework, Eleazar, Shammah
Dislikes- Disloyalty, Cowards, His master/king being uncomfortable, Eleazar
Weapons- Two Spears
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Stats-
Strength- B (A)
Endurance- D (C)
Agility- B (A)
Mana- B
Luck- C
Noble Phantasm- B
Class Skills-
Magic Resistance- B
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected.
Personal Skills-
Three of Thirty- A+
A unique skill granted to only those of David's Three Mighty Warriors. This Skill provides the Servant with the skills Bravery- A, Battle Continuation- B, and Guardian Knight- C.
This skill is based on David's three mightiest Warriors that served as his personal body guards. All three of these men were close to the same level as Samson in terms of fighting ability, and have served David for countless years in his army. All have shown great bravery and skill on the battlefield.
Military Tactics- C
Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.
Lancer was the leader of David's Mighty Men, and an officer in David's army with more than 20,000 men under his command.
Fighting to the Well- B+
Another unique skill shared by The Three. As long as Lancer does not disobey a single order or request from his master, no matter how small, he receives a rank up to Strength, Endurance, and Agility. However should refuse to do something as small as "cook me a meal" he will lose this boost and the skill will be sealed for the rest of the Grail War.
This skill is a crystallization of what took place at the Cave of Adullam. The three of the thirty visit David when he is located at the cave of Adullam. While there, David expresses a heartfelt desire for water from a well near Bethlehem, which was occupied by Philistines. The three therefore forcefully crush the Philistine army alone, and draw water from the well, which they take back to David. David refuses to drink the water, instead pouring it out "before Yahweh", arguing that it was the blood of the men who had risked their lives.
Noble Phantasms-
Chief of the Three
Spears to Slay 800- B
Anti-Army/Anti-Personal
Lancer has the ability to create short lances that can either be used at close range of thrown as javelins. When a lance pierces the enemy's skin, no matter how shallow the cut, the spear will immediately break down into raw magical energy from the butt of the lance to the tip like a fuse. The magic energy travels through the tip into the wound dealing a small blast of magic damage. The spear transforms into magic energy so fast that it is impossible to avoid the bonus damage unless the target has EX Agility or Magic Resistance- B. Once one spear has been destroyed by the effect lancer can create another lancer to replace it in a split second. Lancer can create a total of 800 spears per day. Lancer can choose to create a lance that will create an extremely large explosion at the cost of the mana it would take to create 100 spears. This enhanced lance would also carry the payload of 100 lances and count as 100 lances for his total of 800 per day.
This Noble Phantasm is a crystallization of Jashobeam killing an army of 800 by himself, with just his spears. This battle is what caused him to gain fame and eventually would cause Philistines to run in fear upon seeing him. His fighting style was based upon using one lance per man, killing each soldier in one blow and as soon as he pierced them dropping his lance and then creating another.
(Like this but with his own spears)
Personality
Background info
Shammah Sheet
Eleazar Sheet
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When I saw Issac Newton, I thought he was a genderswap when I saw the faceclaim. I had an idea that was similar to this but yours is FAR more polished than mine (which never left the drawing boards) the noble phantasm... Definitely worthy of an EX rank. I wonder how he'd get along with Tesla, Babbage and Edison.
Jashobeam's Noble Phantasm seems like a halfway house between Vlad and EMIYA with creating exploding spears. With his three-in-one skill, maybe boost it to A+ as you may as well have them all individually if not.
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Also, anyone got any idea what Elizabeth I's Noble Phantasm might be like?
Well, aside from summoning the storm that destroyed the Spanish fleet as that's already been done by asterism42.
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video et taceo" ("I see, and say nothing"). Or something like a support noble phantasm that unleashes others potentials granting them skills (and possibly NPs) they would only have in other classes representing how she supported Shakespeare and Francis Drake
You could tweak that into "unlocking full potential" or some such and let it work for the Master as well. Though that's stretching the concept a bit further.
Wasn't Francis Drake hinted to be Elizabeth in disguise?
This obviously means that Servant Elizabeth is a trap pirate pretending to be a queen.
I've heard of that theory - it would make a lot more sense than another genderswap. What's the backing up behind it?
I may may or may not rework the sheet to acomadate for it...
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The hints were in the Japanese version of Fate/EXTRA.
Unfortunately, they were all either cut, forgotten or just didn't translate over to the english translation, so I can't actually tell you what any of the hints were.
Maybe somebody else of BL can, though?
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Basically, it mentioned in the Servant matrix that "there was a, probably fictional, story that just before setting sail on his ship, he [Francis Drake] switched places with Queen Elizabeth, who couldn't go out anymore due to her face being scarred."
That never made it into the english version, though.
Also worth noting is that Elizabeth really did have a scar on her face due to smallpox, which is why she looks so white/pale in all the pictures of her - she wore a lot of makeup to try and cover it up.
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Yes. I would literally pay money to see that.
Last edited by Crying; April 12th, 2016 at 06:35 AM. Reason: Actually being helpful
I had heard of the scar and Lizzies smallpox but was wondering if there was more to it than using so much makeup she looked kind of like a marshmallow. When I went through Extra (English edition) I saw nothing on the identity swap and thought the scar was a stylistic choice.
Chances are I won't bother with it. Thank you anyways Crying.
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The one other Elizabeth I sheet is the trap pirate.
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Okay, two things:
One, that trap Francis/Elizabeth is fucking awesome.
Second, I'm kind of dissapointed that you're ignoring it, but it's your sheet so do what you want, man.
Actually... I think I know I way I can work it in and make everyone happy, maybe.
I'll get to it after work.
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People, can we please stop using "trap"?
Is a Servant the same person even when they're in different classes, with their only differences being temporally? Caster Cu and Lancer Cu, for example.
In Nasuverse's reality, King Arthur is a girl. According to Shirou, however, mainstream depiction of him remains a dude. Copy recorded in the Throne of Heroes thus seems to be the "actual" one rather than from any culture's interpretation. Yet, non-existent Servant can apparently be summoned?
Does the above means that King Arthur the Wild Hunt Leader cannot be summoned? Or, if summoned, it'd be some random spirit acting in their stead?