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Wow, I only wish my take on Hou Yi's NP was as cool as yours, Hermes! Great job.
Also, I wouldn't say I made my Hou Yi sheet 'recently'. It was quite a while ago...
Image doesn't work for me.
On second thoughts, you're right. I got a different one with the same 'Moon Vibe'. Is it better?
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Went back and fixed the links for my faceclaims as half of them were broken
Last edited by Bird of Hermes; April 24th, 2016 at 04:30 AM.
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Class: Caster
True Name: Adolf Hitler
Sex: Male
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Again not really a face claim as it IS him
Personality:
Caster sees himself as a patriot, wanting to see his nation become strong and be able to match or even surpass the great empires of the time and past. He wanted to have a part in the making of that golden age, to be someone that mattered and remembered as a great man who brought prosperity to his fellow countrymen. And for a brief moment in time, that dream seemed to be within his grasp after all the work, struggles, hard decisions and sacrifices. And then, just like that, the hands of fate snatched the dream away.
The Holy Grail... As much as he would prefer to not rely on such things, it is a means to an end. His last chance to finally achieve the dream...
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: D
Mana: C-
Luck: A+
Noble Phantasm: B+
Class Skills
Territory Creation: B
The ability to create a territory that benefits the maker.
Caster can construct a workshop that resembles that of a small library and artist’s studio.
Item Construction: D
The skill to manufacture magical items
Caster is able to write books that can subconsciously influence a person’s thoughts when they are reading them and paint paintings that can be used by Caster or his master as portals to and from his workshop.
Personal Skills
Cult of Personality: A
An ability that, due the insistence of the owner, Skills that are essentially impossible to possess can be obtained for a short period of time. In cases when the Rank is А or above, even the "burden to the body" is acquired (such as Divinity).
For Caster, the relevant skills are Incitement, Military Tactics, Rune Magic, fine arts, writing and others. However, the skill ranks can be reduced to B or even lower due to Internal Struggle, depending on how much Caster dislikes and/or distrusts the person or people he is communicating to.
Internal Struggle: A
A skill that makes one highly resistant to mental interference due to an ever constant turmoil in one’s self that prevents external influence to take hold. However, this also makes it difficult for the skill’s owner to communicate with others and to perform skills that require good face-to-face communication with others.
Distrust, insecurity and emotional detachment, these are the specters that have haunted Caster for most his life, born from the tragedies, misfortunes and disappointments he experienced as a youth.
Eye for Art: D+
Infatuation with works of art.
If Caster happens to see a Noble Phantasm that possesses artistic anecdotes, there is a reasonable chance that he might be able to figure out its true name.
Charisma: B-
The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles.
Caster, for the most part, has the capacity to be a competent leader. However, his insecurities have a tendency of getting in the way.
Noble Phantasms
Mein Kampf: One’s Struggle in Life: B
Caster has the ability to “sense” a person’s desires and insecurities, be they Servant, Master or a non-combatant, providing him with possibly useful information for him to make successful deals and form temporary alliances. This Noble Phantasm represents a pair of books Caster had written in life, a personal account of his life, ideals, struggles and frustrations
Germanischer Urhund: Loyal Companions Until Death: A
Caster can summon a group of ethereal spirit hounds that are immune to physical attack. He can summon them individually or as a group with each hound can be considered a master-less Servant with Rank E Independent Action. The hounds all have names, those being Fuchl, Prinz, Muckl, Bella, Blondi and two named Blonda who are mother and daughter, names of the various dogs Caster owned in his life, some of the very few things he had a genuine emotional attachment to.
Last edited by NightEye; May 10th, 2016 at 05:12 AM. Reason: Revising the sheet again
It's good yeah.
Anyway, I'm not really sure how comfortable I am reviewing a Hitler sheet, but whatever. Okay:
1. His stats are too high. Ignoring the fact that he's a recent/young Servant and how they all usually have terrible stats, Hitler didn't really... do anything impressive enough to deserve those stats? I mean, I guess he fought in WWI so maybe not all his physical stats would be E-Rank, but none of them should be higher than D-Rank. His Mana stat is fine, I suppose, though I still feel like it's a bit high for a simple soldier/politician/madman. Luck is... eh, I won't comment on that one.
2. That's not really how Territory Creation works, to my knowledge at least.
3. Rank seems a bit high on Item Construction considering what it does, but to be honest ranks in that skill are all over the place.
4. Yeah, Hitler was actually pretty good at speeches and stuff, though I don't think he's at A-Rank level.
5. Charisma is fine.
6. Yeah... no. I don't think he should even have EOTM(T), though if you must give it to him make it lower level than that.
7. Eye for Art is fine, though perhaps a bit high based on the description you gave it.
8. NP is... um... why does it give him A-Rank Magic Resistance? The 'sensing a person's desires' I get, but not that. I also don't get the whole 'permanently take control of another Servant, at a cost'. If you're gonna give it those affects, you'd better damn well explain it.
As for a random challenging Servant... I'd suggest Bismarck, but I'm working on him. So maybe... Lamia?
I agree with Crying with everything said. I also would also say his alignment is evil because, well, yeah...
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Hmm... Back to the drawing board with Dolph then. And Lamia it is.
How do I use the [img] BB code, it isn't working for me... I must be an idiot.
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Class: Archer
Master:
True Name: Shirou Emiya, Hero of Justice/Fool of Blades/No-Named Hero/etc...
Sex: Male
Height/Weight: 187cm/78kg
Alignment: Neutral Good
Appearance
Stats
Skills
Noble Phantasm
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So, yeah. I turned the Realta Nua True End Shirou into a Servant. Why? I'm honestly not sure, especially when I should be finishing Bismarck, or working on my two Nimrods...
I managed to figure the BB code out before rechecking the forum and seeing your answer, but thanks anyway for the help Bird.
Last edited by Crying; April 24th, 2016 at 11:45 AM. Reason: formatting
So he's basically servant EMIYA who got a happy ending?
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It's the Shirou from the Realta Nua True End. Like I said in the original post.
So yeah, he's EMIYA who, because of his love for Saber, didn't become a Counter Guardian and managed to reach Avalon somehow.
Servant: Caster
True Name: Circe
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: Greece
Strength- D
Endurance- C
Agility- B
Mana- A++
Luck- B
NP- A+
Height/Weight: 179cm/61kg
Likes: Amusing people, Transforming others into pigs
Dislikes: Most men in general
Talent: Crafting, Physical Intimacy
Natural Enemy: Helios
Class Skills:
- Territory Creation (A) - Creation of a temple, superior to a workshop is possible.
- Item Creation (A+) -. She is capable of brewing love potions, drug the mightiest of heroes, and temporarily revive the dead with powerful herbal remedies.
Personal Skills:
- Animal Dialogue (B) - Communication of intention with animals that don't speak a "language of words". She can command animals without having to say a word; it's unknown if it's through mutual understanding or sheer force of personality.
- Divinity (A) - The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster, Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due one's dislike for the gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. Daughter of Helios and demigoddess of magic in the Greek pantheon. In some circles, she is worshiped as a goddess of magic.
- High Speed Divine Words (A) - The power to activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. The language of the Age of Gods, back when words played a heavy role in spellcasting. As such, it is power long lost by modern magi. At this rank, High-Thaumaturgy-level Magecraft can be cast at the speed of Single-Action spells.
- Shapeshift (C+) - A skill that allows one to change form. She can alter organic material on a molecular level to turn herself as well as others into any animal and alter its size.
Noble PhantasmLore
Last edited by Bird of Hermes; July 2nd, 2016 at 09:14 AM. Reason: Buffing
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Was Circe the one who taught Medea magic? Regardless, she's certainly a natural choice for Caster. A little surprised she wasn't shown up in some Fate spinoff already, to be honest. Aeaea NP is pretty cool, simple but powerful and with a logical weakness that she needs it in her hand to tap into its effects. The 'bolstering nature' part adds a nice bit of flavor.
Good Circe Sheet, but I feel as though Agility and Endurance could be raised to C, as Medea has D in Endurance and C in Agility. Circe was a goddess and should be physically stronger than a human like Medea.
Yeah, I feel gods/goddesses can get away with being a little stronger than they should as well. Aside from that it's a great sheet and the NP is way more creative than what I would have came up with if I did her.
Anyway, I edited my Hitler post with a revised sheet, mind giving that a look? Hopefully it's better. Also, would a Berserker/Assassin Double Summon work?
Last edited by NightEye; April 25th, 2016 at 12:42 AM.
It's possible, though I don't know how good it would be.
Didn't even notice your Hitler sheet the first time around. Personality section seems dangerously close to whitewashing him, but you do make it clear that he is still evil so I guess it's okay. Still a bit odd that it doesn't at all mention genocide or Anti-Semitism at all...
Imperial Privilege is maybe a bit unfitting since he was never an emperor. I mean, in terms of effect its very fitting, but I'd maybe consider giving him a unique Skill ('Cult Of Personality', or something) with a similar effect. It's up to you, though. That's what I did for the first draft of my own Hitler sheet, though I ended up scrapping it utterly when I heavily redesigned his Skills and NPs. Speaking of which...
Congrats on finding a way Mein Kampf could work as an NP. Iffy about the dog NP, though. For one thing, what's with the 'immunity to physical attacks' part? Do you mean they're only affected by magic, spiritual beings such as Servants (who can still be said to attack 'physically') or what? Also the idea just seems a little... I dunno, 'dinky' (not sure if that's the right word). I mean, can Hitler's dogs (as much as he may have loved them) really be considered an important part of his legend at the level of... say, his lust for conquest or rumored occultism (there's a lot you could do with that)?
Now that you've brought up your own, what do you think of my own Hitler sheet that I put up a while back? Personally, I think it's one of my not-so-good ones (made marginally better after revision), but I'm curious as to what others might think...