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    Quote Originally Posted by BehemothV2 View Post
    So, Western dragons would be a Phantasmal Species, Eastern Dragons would be Divine Spirits... and Slavic Dragons, demons?
    It's a lot more complicated than that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Funderfullness View Post
    Personality-wise I'd say she wouldn't harm innocents, so she'd be restricted to prana from herself, her Master and the leylines.

    I just came up with a good mechanical restriction, and that's taking a leaf out of Golem Keter Malkuth and the Hanging Gardens by requiring specific materials as well as an exorbitant prana cost. In this case, it'd be water from the river where she found the egg. I'm on mobile now but I'm gonna edit that in when I get home.

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    you don't need to think about it that hard
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    Quote Originally Posted by Funderfullness View Post
    Well if they can manage to get 800 year old parchment and jewels or rocks from Baghdad it shouldn't be any harder. Dragons are expensive, man. The only thing that's impossible is China giving you a travel visa within 2 weeks.
    Go to Hong Kong, get one the next day. Money makes things easier

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    Another fairytale Servant! From the same set as the Little Mermaid, which is also pretty much the Shota Grail War. This one's pretty trippy.

    faceclaim

    "It's fine... isn't it? Because Big Sis is here for me, I don't have to be scared of the dark or pain or scary things or even the Big Bad Witch! Because Big Sis is here for me, right?"


    Name:
    Hansel 'and Gretel', The Lost Child(ren)
    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    STR: E
    AGI: B
    CON: D
    MGI: A
    LCK: A
    NP: E


    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment
    The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant.

    • B+: Rather than becoming impossible to see or remaining undetected, this represents Assassin's ability to completely conceal his nature as a Servant, appearing no different from a normal boy, allowing him to 'hide in plain sight' with ease. When combined with his other skills, Assassin is able to avoid suspicion up to the point where preparations to attack are made.



    Personal Skills:

    Mental Pollution
    Makes it highly possible to shut out any mental interference Thaumaturgy, due to possessing a distorted mentality. However, at the same time it becomes impossible to come to an understanding with individuals that do not possess an equivalent rank of mental pollution.

    • EX: The Servant has become completely divorced from conventional human logic, and is entirely dependent on the effects of his Noble Phantasm to achieve some semblance of sanity. Reasoning is only possible through clever exploitation of said Noble Phantasm, and mental interference is entirely futile. Assassin's thought processes have reached the point where they are only strenuously 'human'.


    Murderer of the Misty Night
    A skill associated with the Servant's nature as a serial killer rather than as an Assassin, which permits preemptive strike against all opponents. However, if certain conditions are not met, the enemy will be allowed a Luck check.

    • B: Due to Hansel's nature as a 'Witchkiller', a guaranteed attack may be made against enemies who possess a strong association with magic, or a Mana parameter of C or above.


    Self-Modification
    The aptitude to merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero.

    • B: Perhaps due to crossing the limit of what should be considered 'human', Assassin is capable of modifying his own form through devouring corpses, allowing him to change his own physical appearance (though he will always retain a form of a young Germanic child), incorporate things that would not normally be considered 'parts' of the body such as Magic Crests and Command Spells into his own, and gain the abilities of his enemy. In this regard he has already consumed a mighty witch, along with several minor magi, and is thus treated as though he possesses a B rank in Magecraft, Rune Magic, Mystic Eyes (Whisper) and High-Speed Incantation.



    Noble Phantasms:

    Name:
    Gretel
    My Beloved Elder Sister

    Rank: E
    Type: Anti-Unit

    An aspect of Assassin's very being rather than a true Noble Phantasm, this is the 'Gretel' of 'Hansel and Gretel' - an alternate personality created within Hansel's mind. While the word alternate is used, she is probably comparable to the voice of a normal person's conscience, as the two personalities are constantly in contact with other and find nothing unusual about their predicament. She has received what remains of Hansel's reason, and thus is crucial to keeping the otherwise uncontrollable Assassin in line, a task she performs with a surprisingly high level of skill, able to construct elaborate plans and weigh the pros and cons of a single decision in a moment's notice. Despite this, she has no concern for anything other than Hansel's well-being, and will do nothing to deter him from his usual antics if not required. When one adds this to her personality flaws, such as her overwhelming dislike for anyone other than Hansel and her refusal to be parted from him, it becomes clear that Gretel makes a poor ally.

    While a different 'personality' is usually considered a distinct soul and given its own form by the Holy Grail, this refusal means that Hansel and Gretel remain bound together... usually. Upon his summoning, Assassin is capable of branding any (non-Servant) individual of his choosing as his 'Big Sis'. While this would appear to have no immediate effect, the target will eventually begin to notice changes in themselves, such as a regression to a more childlike frame of mind and an unexplainable affection for Assassin, until such time that these effects pile up and the target's original personality is destroyed. In this undefined state, where they are unable to recognise themselves, Assassin will then recognise them as Gretel, causing her 'soul' to overwrite their own. In this sense, it is an inversion of a technique once used on Assassin himself, and the target will immediately be given power on par with a Servant who possesses no abilities and an E in all parameters.

    It is also worth noting there is no limit to the number of 'Gretel's that can conceivably exist, provided Assassin possesses sufficient mana.


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    Twin protagonist of an old German fairytale, he is both Hansel and Gretel, two children who became lost in the woods.

    Born to a kind woodcutter and his wife, those first few years of Hansel's life were completely innocent, almost idyllic in a sense, until tragedy struck. His mother died before he could even understand the notion of 'death', and his father was forced to remarry, found a woman who was as capable as she was cruel. And so under his new stepmother Hansel was made to suffer all many of abuses, forced to work himself to the bone, went hungry as he slept bruised and bloody. While his father, ever kind-hearted, tried time and time again to defend him, time and time again he bowed to the demands of his terrifying new wife.

    Like that, it was not long before Hansel broke, and created within himself a new self, one that was everything he was not - Gretel. Because while Hansel knew that he was 'an ugly, ignorant, disgusting little boy who shouldn't even be around', for he was told so every day, Gretel then must surely be beautiful, wise, admirable and truly deserving of having been born, and 'she' would tell Hansel that he was the same each night. Broken as he was, it was now possible for the child - now two - to go on living, until famine struck. Despite the fact that he barely ate to begin with, it was not long before his stepmother demanded that 'they' be abandoned, and once again their father buckled before her. While Hansel, following Gretel's wise words, was able to foil her plans once, soon the two found themselves lost in the forest with no way home.

    After days of wandering, they followed a bird to a clearing in the woods and discovered a large cottage made entirely of sweets. Exhausted and starving, the children gladly dug into the treat before them, until the witch who lived inside the house, Black Aliss. A kind-hearted witch who had exiled herself away from the cruel world of Magecraft, she gladly took the boy in, even sealed away Gretel to cure him of his madness, and let him eat delicious meals everyday. In that sense, those days are probably still the happiest of Hansel's life, and he could have quite easily lived out the rest of his years like that, had disaster not occurred. For but a moment, Gretel returned, desperate and enraged, urge Hansel to believe that the witch who had cared so tenderly for him planned to eat him and Hansel, now so used to heeding his sister's words, pushed the unsuspecting woman into the oven and with tears streaming down his face fed on her well-cooked corpse! Truly a story for the ages.

    The children stole the witch's fortune, killed their mother while making it look like an accident, and returned to their father. Soon after, Hansel killed his weak-willed father out of boredom, and roamed the world killing Magi and seeking an appropriate host for Gretel, with the same ritual once used to bind her. As a Servant, Hansel is both despondent and deranged, self-loathing and mania combined, likely to attempt to kill his own Master on Gretel's urging, seizing his own Command Spells and setting his sights on bringing the rest of the Servants under his dominion as 'playmates'. While Gretel seeks to grant Hansel immortality so they might once again travel the world without end, Hansel himself... lacks any real wish, perhaps at his core longs again for the witch, for those innocent days where all the world seemed bright to resume.

    Should he learn of the fairytale that surrounds him and his sister, he will likely delight in it.

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    Creepy. Very creepy.

    Also good.
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    canon finish apo vol 3

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    Servant info:
    Spoiler:

    God damn it.

    Name:
    MYSTERY, Babylon the Great, Mother of Harlots
    Class: Rider
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    Strength: E
    Endurance: C
    Agility: B
    Mana: A
    Luck: A
    Noble Phantasm: A+++


    Skills
    Spoiler:
    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: B
    Cancels spell with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected. One might say this is a useless skill for Rider, considering she possesses a much more effective Personal Skill.

    Riding: A+
    Creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.

    Personal Skills:

    Charisma: A-
    Rider is capable of leading multiple nations. However, those who follow her will become increasingly corrupt and twisted, equivalent to a Servant gaining a rank in Mental Pollution every day.

    Mental Pollution: B+
    High chance of negating Mental Interference. Like her Magic Resistance, this skill is rendered almost useless due to Ten Crowns. Should Rider's master perform perverted actions alongside her (be it because of their own personality, or because of the corruption inflicted by her Noble Phantasms), her rank in this skill might rise.

    Ten Crowns: A
    Riders takes no damage from attacks, Magecraft and Noble Phantasms of Rank A or lower. It is also possible to negate the activation and effects of Rank A or lower Noble Phantasms and Magecraft, even if they do not target her.


    Noble Phantasms
    Spoiler:
    נרו קסר - The Seven-Headed Beast

    Anti-Army, Rank A+++

    The Demonic Red Beast, the Whore's throne, her seat of power. A Divine Beast comparable to a dragon, and one of the many abominations that shall appear during the Apocalypse, having the body of a leopard, the paws of a bear, seven crowned lion heads and ten horns.

    Within 616 meters of the Beast, effectiveness of sacramentes will greatly decrease, and all sapient, conscious beings which see the Beast will suffer a Mental Interference attack (Fascination). All those that fail to resist will become Babylon's minions, being affected by her Charisma skill. Along the skills that provide protection against Mental Interference, Mad Enhancement and Magic Resistance also increase the chance of resisting this effect.

    The Beast does not possess other special abilities such as breathing fire or generating lightning. However, it is still a force to be reckoned with. Its physical attacks can easily break defensive Noble Phantasms, and it is extremely durable: even the Sword of Promised Victory would require multiple activations to defeat it. In addition, as the Beast is a representation of Rome and the Roman Empire, which subjugated other nations and persecuted saints, damage is increase against Servants with the Charisma and Saint skills.

    However, as the Seven-Headed Beast inevitably "goes to perdition", and every time Babylon summons it, her Luck parameter drops by 1 Rank. If she summons it with Rank E Luck, both her and the Beast will disappear after 40 turns.


    Angra Mainyu/Babylon - Whore's Grail, All the World's Filthiness

    Anti-Populace, Rank EX

    The crimson "wine" that endlessly pours from the goblet held by Babylon: the physical manifestation of humanity's depravity. It is an unlimited source of prana, very similar to a certain Persian devil.

    But while the Black Mud attempts to kill humans, the Crimson Wine corrupts and perverts them. Any human being that comes in touch with it will immediately lose any belief and idea that limits their actions. Their morals will be utterly destroyed, and they will no longer be able to function in society, becoming extreme, irreparable hedonists. They will seek to perform all sorts of perverted, twisted and evil actions: murder, rape, torture, betrayal... However, unlike those affected by the Beast, they will not become Rider's followers (although, this corruption definitely makes it easier to convince humans to join her).

    Similarly, any Servant corrupted will be "reddened". They are granted a physical body, their alignment shifts towards Chaotic Evil, they will be supplied with prana by this Noble Phantasm, and, like the humans, their mind will be twisted. Skills that are achieved through faith and virtues, such as Protection of the Faith and Vitrification, will be rendered null, while Mental Pollution is given to the Servant, or has its rank increased if already present. And whereas the blackened Servants inflict death and destruction, the reddened ones will seek to sate their own lusts, often the new ones "granted" by the Wine. Rider herself is immune to this effect, and drinking from the chalice will only restore her health.


    (Very Short) Lore:
    Spoiler:
    A devilish woman that rides a blasphemous beast towards perdition, and carrying a cup filled with abominations and filthiness, which appears in the Book of Revelation. A twisted version of the goddess Roma, she is a symbol of depravity and immorality. Her existence is similar to that of a demon.

    At first sight, Babylon might seem like a desirable Servant: good Parameters, great skills, and amazing Noble Phantasms. However, the risk might not be worth it: even if you spend a Command Spell to prevent her from using her Noble Phantasms to corrupt you, she will still try to corrupt you through other means. She seems to be in a perpetual state of calmness, and has very little interest in fighting, preferring to spend her time getting drunk and laying with men (or maybe women, if she feels like it).

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    That you mentioned Roma at all is worthy of a "good job!".
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    <Insert 'her Riding is A+ if you know what I mean' joke>

    I demand a HGW of fairy tale characters.
    "We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet

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    That Hensel. Awesome retelling.



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    Quote Originally Posted by BehemothV2 View Post
    Servant info:
    Spoiler:

    God damn it.

    Name:
    MYSTERY, Babylon the Great, Mother of Harlots
    Class: Rider
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    Strength: E
    Endurance: C
    Agility: B
    Mana: A
    Luck: A
    Noble Phantasm: A+++


    Skills
    Spoiler:
    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: B
    Cancels spell with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected. One might say this is a useless skill for Rider, considering she possesses a much more effective Personal Skill.

    Riding: A+
    Creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.

    Personal Skills:

    Charisma: A-
    Rider is capable of leading multiple nations. However, those who follow her will become increasingly corrupt and twisted, equivalent to a Servant gaining a rank in Mental Pollution every day.

    Mental Pollution: B+
    High chance of negating Mental Interference. Like her Magic Resistance, this skill is rendered almost useless due to Ten Crowns. Should Rider's master perform perverted actions alongside her (be it because of their own personality, or because of the corruption inflicted by her Noble Phantasms), her rank in this skill might rise.

    Ten Crowns: A
    Riders takes no damage from attacks, Magecraft and Noble Phantasms of Rank A or lower. It is also possible to negate the activation and effects of Rank A or lower Noble Phantasms and Magecraft, even if they do not target her.


    Noble Phantasms
    Spoiler:
    נרו קסר - The Seven-Headed Beast

    Anti-Army, Rank A+++

    The Demonic Red Beast, the Whore's throne, her seat of power. A Divine Beast comparable to a dragon, and one of the many abominations that shall appear during the Apocalypse, having the body of a leopard, the paws of a bear, seven crowned lion heads and ten horns.

    Within 616 meters of the Beast, effectiveness of sacramentes will greatly decrease, and all sapient, conscious beings which see the Beast will suffer a Mental Interference attack (Fascination). All those that fail to resist will become Babylon's minions, being affected by her Charisma skill. Along the skills that provide protection against Mental Interference, Mad Enhancement and Magic Resistance also increase the chance of resisting this effect.

    The Beast does not possess other special abilities such as breathing fire or generating lightning. However, it is still a force to be reckoned with. Its physical attacks can easily break defensive Noble Phantasms, and it is extremely durable: even the Sword of Promised Victory would require multiple activations to defeat it. In addition, as the Beast is a representation of Rome and the Roman Empire, which subjugated other nations and persecuted saints, damage is increase against Servants with the Charisma and Saint skills.

    However, as the Seven-Headed Beast inevitably "goes to perdition", and every time Babylon summons it, her Luck parameter drops by 1 Rank. If she summons it with Rank E Luck, both her and the Beast will disappear after 40 turns.


    Angra Mainyu/Babylon - Whore's Grail, All the World's Filthiness

    Anti-Populace, Rank EX

    The crimson "wine" that endlessly pours from the goblet held by Babylon: the physical manifestation of humanity's depravity. It is an unlimited source of prana, very similar to a certain Persian devil.

    But while the Black Mud attempts to kill humans, the Crimson Wine corrupts and perverts them. Any human being that comes in touch with it will immediately lose any belief and idea that limits their actions. Their morals will be utterly destroyed, and they will no longer be able to function in society, becoming extreme, irreparable hedonists. They will seek to perform all sorts of perverted, twisted and evil actions: murder, rape, torture, betrayal... However, unlike those affected by the Beast, they will not become Rider's followers (although, this corruption definitely makes it easier to convince humans to join her).

    Similarly, any Servant corrupted will be "reddened". They are granted a physical body, their alignment shifts towards Chaotic Evil, they will be supplied with prana by this Noble Phantasm, and, like the humans, their mind will be twisted. Skills that are achieved through faith and virtues, such as Protection of the Faith and Vitrification, will be rendered null, while Mental Pollution is given to the Servant, or has its rank increased if already present. And whereas the blackened Servants inflict death and destruction, the reddened ones will seek to sate their own lusts, often the new ones "granted" by the Wine. Rider herself is immune to this effect, and drinking from the chalice will only restore her health.


    (Very Short) Lore:
    Spoiler:
    A devilish woman that rides a blasphemous beast towards perdition, and carrying a cup filled with abominations and filthiness, which appears in the Book of Revelation. A twisted version of the goddess Roma, she is a symbol of depravity and immorality. Her existence is similar to that of a demon.

    At first sight, Babylon might seem like a desirable Servant: good Parameters, great skills, and amazing Noble Phantasms. However, the risk might not be worth it: even if you spend a Command Spell to prevent her from using her Noble Phantasms to corrupt you, she will still try to corrupt you through other means. She seems to be in a perpetual state of calmness, and has very little interest in fighting, preferring to spend her time getting drunk and laying with men (or maybe women, if she feels like it).
    The Ten Crowns skillis worth a Noble Phantasm by itself. I mean, cmon. Negating even other Noble Phantasm?
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    Ten crowns is canon. Just in canon it's EX and wasn't in the profile.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sutaa View Post
    Another fairytale Servant! From the same set as the Little Mermaid, which is also pretty much the Shota Grail War. This one's pretty trippy.

    faceclaim

    "It's fine... isn't it? Because Big Sis is here for me, I don't have to be scared of the dark or pain or scary things or even the Big Bad Witch! Because Big Sis is here for me, right?"


    Name:
    Hansel 'and Gretel', The Lost Child(ren)
    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    STR: E
    AGI: B
    CON: D
    MGI: A
    LCK: A
    NP: E


    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment
    The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant.

    • B+: Rather than becoming impossible to see or remaining undetected, this represents Assassin's ability to completely conceal his nature as a Servant, appearing no different from a normal boy, allowing him to 'hide in plain sight' with ease. When combined with his other skills, Assassin is able to avoid suspicion up to the point where preparations to attack are made.



    Personal Skills:

    Mental Pollution
    Makes it highly possible to shut out any mental interference Thaumaturgy, due to possessing a distorted mentality. However, at the same time it becomes impossible to come to an understanding with individuals that do not possess an equivalent rank of mental pollution.

    • EX: The Servant has become completely divorced from conventional human logic, and is entirely dependent on the effects of his Noble Phantasm to achieve some semblance of sanity. Reasoning is only possible through clever exploitation of said Noble Phantasm, and mental interference is entirely futile. Assassin's thought processes have reached the point where they are only strenuously 'human'.


    Murderer of the Misty Night
    A skill associated with the Servant's nature as a serial killer rather than as an Assassin, which permits preemptive strike against all opponents. However, if certain conditions are not met, the enemy will be allowed a Luck check.

    • B: Due to Hansel's nature as a 'Witchkiller', a guaranteed attack may be made against enemies who possess a strong association with magic, or a Mana parameter of C or above.


    Self-Modification
    The aptitude to merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero.

    • B: Perhaps due to crossing the limit of what should be considered 'human', Assassin is capable of modifying his own form through devouring corpses, allowing him to change his own physical appearance (though he will always retain a form of a young Germanic child), incorporate things that would not normally be considered 'parts' of the body such as Magic Crests and Command Spells into his own, and gain the abilities of his enemy. In this regard he has already consumed a mighty witch, along with several minor magi, and is thus treated as though he possesses a B rank in Magecraft, Rune Magic, Mystic Eyes (Whisper) and High-Speed Incantation.



    Noble Phantasms:

    Name:
    Gretel
    My Beloved Elder Sister

    Rank: E
    Type: Anti-Unit

    An aspect of Assassin's very being rather than a true Noble Phantasm, this is the 'Gretel' of 'Hansel and Gretel' - an alternate personality created within Hansel's mind. While the word alternate is used, she is probably comparable to the voice of a normal person's conscience, as the two personalities are constantly in contact with other and find nothing unusual about their predicament. She has received what remains of Hansel's reason, and thus is crucial to keeping the otherwise uncontrollable Assassin in line, a task she performs with a surprisingly high level of skill, able to construct elaborate plans and weigh the pros and cons of a single decision in a moment's notice. Despite this, she has no concern for anything other than Hansel's well-being, and will do nothing to deter him from his usual antics if not required. When one adds this to her personality flaws, such as her overwhelming dislike for anyone other than Hansel and her refusal to be parted from him, it becomes clear that Gretel makes a poor ally.

    While a different 'personality' is usually considered a distinct soul and given its own form by the Holy Grail, this refusal means that Hansel and Gretel remain bound together... usually. Upon his summoning, Assassin is capable of branding any (non-Servant) individual of his choosing as his 'Big Sis'. While this would appear to have no immediate effect, the target will eventually begin to notice changes in themselves, such as a regression to a more childlike frame of mind and an unexplainable affection for Assassin, until such time that these effects pile up and the target's original personality is destroyed. In this undefined state, where they are unable to recognise themselves, Assassin will then recognise them as Gretel, causing her 'soul' to overwrite their own. In this sense, it is an inversion of a technique once used on Assassin himself, and the target will immediately be given power on par with a Servant who possesses no abilities and an E in all parameters.

    It is also worth noting there is no limit to the number of 'Gretel's that can conceivably exist, provided Assassin possesses sufficient mana.


    detail
    Detail:

    Twin protagonist of an old German fairytale, he is both Hansel and Gretel, two children who became lost in the woods.

    Born to a kind woodcutter and his wife, those first few years of Hansel's life were completely innocent, almost idyllic in a sense, until tragedy struck. His mother died before he could even understand the notion of 'death', and his father was forced to remarry, found a woman who was as capable as she was cruel. And so under his new stepmother Hansel was made to suffer all many of abuses, forced to work himself to the bone, went hungry as he slept bruised and bloody. While his father, ever kind-hearted, tried time and time again to defend him, time and time again he bowed to the demands of his terrifying new wife.

    Like that, it was not long before Hansel broke, and created within himself a new self, one that was everything he was not - Gretel. Because while Hansel knew that he was 'an ugly, ignorant, disgusting little boy who shouldn't even be around', for he was told so every day, Gretel then must surely be beautiful, wise, admirable and truly deserving of having been born, and 'she' would tell Hansel that he was the same each night. Broken as he was, it was now possible for the child - now two - to go on living, until famine struck. Despite the fact that he barely ate to begin with, it was not long before his stepmother demanded that 'they' be abandoned, and once again their father buckled before her. While Hansel, following Gretel's wise words, was able to foil her plans once, soon the two found themselves lost in the forest with no way home.

    After days of wandering, they followed a bird to a clearing in the woods and discovered a large cottage made entirely of sweets. Exhausted and starving, the children gladly dug into the treat before them, until the witch who lived inside the house, Black Aliss. A kind-hearted witch who had exiled herself away from the cruel world of Magecraft, she gladly took the boy in, even sealed away Gretel to cure him of his madness, and let him eat delicious meals everyday. In that sense, those days are probably still the happiest of Hansel's life, and he could have quite easily lived out the rest of his years like that, had disaster not occurred. For but a moment, Gretel returned, desperate and enraged, urge Hansel to believe that the witch who had cared so tenderly for him planned to eat him and Hansel, now so used to heeding his sister's words, pushed the unsuspecting woman into the oven and with tears streaming down his face fed on her well-cooked corpse! Truly a story for the ages.

    The children stole the witch's fortune, killed their mother while making it look like an accident, and returned to their father. Soon after, Hansel killed his weak-willed father out of boredom, and roamed the world killing Magi and seeking an appropriate host for Gretel, with the same ritual once used to bind her. As a Servant, Hansel is both despondent and deranged, self-loathing and mania combined, likely to attempt to kill his own Master on Gretel's urging, seizing his own Command Spells and setting his sights on bringing the rest of the Servants under his dominion as 'playmates'. While Gretel seeks to grant Hansel immortality so they might once again travel the world without end, Hansel himself... lacks any real wish, perhaps at his core longs again for the witch, for those innocent days where all the world seemed bright to resume.

    Should he learn of the fairytale that surrounds him and his sister, he will likely delight in it.
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    Ten Crowns always and forever OP. Thanks CCC.

    I do like the way you've built her as a reflection of Dark Sakura, pretty neat.

    Hansel is badass. I like that he's basically just specialised in one-shotting magi with a surprise attack and if that doesn't work then he's fucked.

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    I do like the way you've built her as a reflection of Dark Sakura, pretty neat.
    I... did?

    Hansel is pretty great. An Assassin that actually does what an Assassin should do.
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    Yeah. the reddening is specifically compared to Dark Sakura's blackening process.

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    Oh, that. I was thinking about Angra Mainyu actually... but then again, Dark Sakura IS Angra Mainyu. With boobs.
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    True Name:Guan Yu
    Also known as: The God of War, the Beautiful Bearded One
    Gender:Male
    Alignment:Chaotic Good(Normally Lawful Good)
    Other Classes:Lancer, Rider

    Parameters and Skills
    STR: B~A++
    END: B~A++
    AGI: C~A+
    MGI: C
    LCK: C


    Class Skills


    Mad Enhancement - None
    Thanks to his Mental Pollution and his NP he has no Mad Enhancement to balance it out

    Personal Skills


    Mental Pollution
    B - This skill makes it highly possible to shut out any mental interference Thaumaturgy, due to possessing a distorted mentality. However, at the same time it becomes hard to come to an understanding with individuals that do not possess an equivalent rank of mental pollution. In Guan Yu's case he is resistent against most forms of mental interference, but because of a combination his NP and current class he was unable to receive all the information that servants normally receive to fully function in the Grail War and he believes to be back in the Three Kingdoms period, more specifically, at the start of his journey to find his Sworn Brother Liu Bei after leaving Cao Cao. Guan Yu upon being introduced to the new people & concepts will be unable to fully understand then and he will link them to anything or anyone from his past close to that person/concept. Whom and What link Guan Yu will make between past or present varies from person to person with two sole exceptions.
    The Holy Grail in Guan Yu's mind is his Sworn Brother Liu Bei and his current master is Cao Cao. Upon being summoned Guan Yu will immediately begin to recreate his journey leaving Cao Cao/his master and trying to find Liu Bei/The Holy Grail. He will not be violent at first with his master but if the master refuses to let him go he is not afraid to use force, and he understands that he needs to defeat the other 6 servants, whom he thinks are generals under the order of Cao Cao or someone from his army, to finally reach his goal.
    Its possible to reason with Guan Yu if you understand that he is a man lost in time.


    Independent Action
    EX - This is the ability to remain independent even when rejecting the prana supply from the Master. Guan Yu is special because as long as the Grail exists in this world, he doesn't need a single prana from his master. While normally Guan Yu would have a high rank already in this skill thanks to his Noble Phantasm "Riding Alone for Thousands of Miles", that references his journey to find his brother, this skill rises to truly absurd level thanks to his Mental Pollution caused by the combination of class and noble phantasm. Thanks to his Mental Pollution skill in which the Holy Grail gains the property of "Sworn Brother, Liu Bei" to Guan Yu is able to call upon the Peach Garden Oath made by himself, Liu Bei, and Zhang Fei his other sworn brother, in which those three promised to be always together and die in the same day. Because of this promise Guan Yu, as long as the grail exists, refuses to die or fade away so he is able to refuse any prana from his current master and work using the grail as his fuel though his effectiveness will lower. Because he also can't "fade" away he is unable to enter in his Spirit Form

    Noble Phantasms

    Crossing Five Passes, Slaying Six Generals
    Riding Alone For a Thousand Miles(千里走單騎/Qiānlǐ zǒu dān qí)

    The Crystalization of the Journey made by Guan Yu famous, respected, and feared across the realm as God of War. Guan Yu, who had sworn his life to Liu Bei, once saw himself separated from his brother and thinking he had died in a battle almost killed himself but was convinced to live thanks to a rival warlord to his brother, Cao Cao who admired Guan Yu's skills and character. Cao Cao was able to convince Guan Yu that Liu Bei could be alive so he shouldn't kill himself yet and invited Guan Yu to join his army at least temporally. Guan Yu agree but with three conditions:

    1- Liu Bei's spouses(whom Guan Yu was taking care of) must not be harmed and must be well taken care of.
    2- In name, Guan Yu surrenders to the emperor and not Cao Cao (who actually wields state power).
    3- Guan Yu is allowed to leave and reunite with Liu Bei if he one day he ever finds out the latter's whereabouts.

    Cao Cao agreed and for a brief period Guan Yu fought for Cao Cao bringing many victories for the warlord, but it wasn't long til Guan Yu discovered Liu Bei location. And just like him and Cao Cao agreed, he was free to go find Liu Bei. But while Cao Cao remorsefully allowed Guan Yu to go away, his army thought Guan Yu was too dangerous to just let go, so they send orders hidden from Cao Cao to kill Guan Yu. Guan Yu had to force his way through five passes and slew six generals and his followers essentially by himself to finally reach his sworn brother
    This Noble Phantasm takes form of a passive effect that replicates Guan Yu long and bloody journey to reach his brother. To Guan Yu the grail becomes an equivalent to Liu Bei and the other servants become replacements to those six generals that stood in his way. To reach Liu Bei Guan Yu has to defeat those six generals and cross five passes. Whenever a servant falls in the Grail War, Guan Yu reaches a step closer to reach his brother and is considered to have crossed one path(the only exception is the second pass that needs the death of two generals to be considered crossed). The closer Guan Yu gets to Liu Bei, the closer he also gets to future title as the God of War, so to symbolize that his STR, AGI and END will have its ranks raised. A Guan Yu that fully crossed all paths could be considered one of the strongest servants.
    Rank A Anti-Unit(oneself)

    Berserker also carries with him his trusted Guan Dao.
    He is able to use it skifully, but because his memory is too jumbled he can't use it to its full potential, like he would if summoned as a Lancer

    Keywords
    Peach Garden Oath

    The oath of brotherhood made by Guan Yu, Liu Bei and Zhang Fei shortly after they met to symbolize the friendship between those three. If one were to die, then the other two should also die with him. During their carreer those three were inseparable and Guan Yu and Zhang Fei did everything they could to help their sworn brother.

    "When saying the names Liu Bei, Guan Yu and Zhang Fei, although the surnames are different, yet we have come together as brothers. From this day forward, we shall join forces for a common purpose: to save the troubled and to aid the endangered. We shall avenge the nation above, and pacify the citizenry below. We seek not to be born on the same day, in the same month and in the same year. We merely hope to die on the same day, in the same month and in the same year. May the Gods of Heaven and Earth attest to what is in our hearts. If we should ever do anything to betray our friendship, may heaven and the people of the earth both strike us dead."

    Unfortunately with age, it was not only their power that grew but also their ego, and soon Guan Yu and Zhang Fei were betrayed by their fellow generals and died. Liu Bei did not kill himself convinced by his other followers but swore vengeance against the killers, but after a disastrous military campaign Liu Bei shortly died and with him any chances of his Kingdom to truly grow and prosper

    So how it is?
    My wanked sheet?
    I was creating him as a lancer but somehow he turned into a Reverse Lu Bu. Where you had to summon Lu Bu as a lancer to not betray you, you shouldn't summon Guan as a Berserker or he will leave you
    I don't think his independent action really makes sense
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