Diaries of a Youthful Maiden

[Laith]

So it turns out that the nice man in the red coat shows up if you poke at time long enough. Then he explodes you with his bow for your hard work. I am starting to think someone out there doesn't like me! Me, of all people; honestly, how could they not like me? Why would they try to get in my way?

Best part.

[Gabriulio]

Oh, Manaka...

[zhead]

Messed with time so much that Archer, Gil, and even Aoko showed up.
...
Well. Manaka is still crazy, I see. And may actually develop a Social Link bond with Ayaka. After killing her a couple dozen times. Maybe. I can't tell with crazy people.

[YeOfLittleFaith]

Oh Manaka.
Just... Oh, Manaka, you. xD

To be fair, I'd be pretty angry at cars in general too if I were in her place.

This continues to be hilarious.

[Olive]

Huh. Reliable source confirms Gil's dickishness. Silly Manaka...

[Santo]

Archer showing up? Great moment.

The other Archer showing up? Still great moment.

I'm still wondering what this 'Beast' is and how it comes into play and where it came from. And the thing about cars came from nowhere and made me laugh.

Overall, I'm loving it, and I want to see more of it. ^__^

[YeOfLittleFaith]

I love that the only difference she finds between the two Archers is that the golden one is more dickish than the red one.

[Aiden]

The Beast is the Servant of the Beast class, which is apparently the thing replacing Angra Mainyu in Fate/Prototype.

[Santo]

The Beast is the Servant of the Beast class, which is apparently the thing replacing Angra Mainyu in Fate/Prototype.

...You know. All things considered. That is probably a graver threat than angry mayo.

Though this may be because I am remembering Vampire WoD and my experiences dealing with enraged vampires with gleeful delight.

[ItsaRandomUsername]

Can you say "serial escalation?" Because that effectively describes what's going on with Manaka's sit. these days.

[Aiden]

Can you say "serial escalation?" Because that effectively describes what's going on with Manaka's sit. these days.

Is that good or bad? XD

[ItsaRandomUsername]

"Amusing" is how I'd put it.

[RadiantBeam]

So when are you putting this up on Tumblr so I can like and reblog it?

[Aiden]

As soon as I can figure out how to do red text on tumblr.

[RadiantBeam]

... Yeah, I have not idea, good luck with that!

[Aiden]

Replaced red text with bold for this, though it doesn't quite get the 'she wrote it in blood' thing across as well.

[Flere821]

Brilliant update Aiden Though what's with that bit about the cars? Did she get hit by them while crossing the road or something?

[Ergast]

She is going to pull a Rin one of this days and mix every time line in just one, so we can have Zero, Prototype and Stay Night with everything happening at once, isn't she? Well, at least she knows two of the main characters of those timelines.

I love that the only difference she finds between the two Archers is that the golden one is more dickish than the red one.

Well, EMIYA at least takes the effort of overcharging his projections, targeting and exploding you. Gil just kills you with a fuckton of weapons. Or just one. Or just unmakes you to the atomic level. Well, that last may be him actually putting some effort, so I'm not sure if it counts as more or less dickish.

[Aiden]

Brilliant update Aiden Though what's with that bit about the cars? Did she get hit by them while crossing the road or something?

Sooomething along those lines.

[Polly]

Sooomething along those lines.

Let me guess: it was a silver Mercedes, and the driver was an albino supermodel?