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    Don't worry, I'll have the translation for the next chapter ready sometime tomorrow, now that my work with Fire Girl has subsided for the time being.
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    You are participating in the translation of Fate / Extra CCC ?

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    Yeah. I've already translated a chapter, which you can see if you scroll back through this thread.
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    All right, I have the translation for Chapter 12. (Also, if anyone has better ideas for the sound effects I translated, please go ahead, since I only did them roughly.)

    Foxtail Vol 3 Chapter 12
    Page 1:
    Chapter 12: Kingprotea 1
    Kingprotea: So this is // where you were, // Hakuno-senpai♥
    Hakuno (thought): The… The girl from—!

    Page 2-3
    Hakuno (thought): The girl from my dream——!!!
    Hakuno: Ha… // Haha…
    Student Council: !!
    Leo: The monitor…! // Was the last thing displayed on the monitor…an Alter Ego!? // Sakura, hurry and restore the connection!
    Hakuno (thought): My legs… can’t…
    Leo: Hakuno-san is in danger—!

    Page 4:
    BB: !
    Caster: Master! // Get a hold of yourself!

    Page 5:
    Hakuno: Ah… // Yeah! // You saved me there, // Caster!
    Hakuno (thought): —That’s right. // You can’t let yourself stop here, Kishinami Hakuno!
    Hakuno (Flashback): (thought) I don’t know who these people are. // (speech) The one who decides my “value” // is myself! // (thought) But I don’t want to run away from them! As if I could give up on myself so easily!
    Hakuno (thought): You said that you wouldn’t give up on yourself back in that dream, right…!? // The stairs—the mountain side is closed off now, huh?
    Caster: Master, let’s cross this bridge and head into the forest on the other side!
    Sakura: I’ve restored the monitor.
    Rin: Eh? // This point of view is…

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    BB: You’re watching, right? // Sakura.
    Sakura: I’m well aware that you noticed. // With the influence of the Alter Ego’s enormous power affecting the area, // directly viewing Kishinami-san has become difficult. // Therefore, I used something as a relay point that could easily form a connected path with me instead—
    Rin: I see… Sakura and BB are the same AI model, after all.
    BB: Fufu. // Well, I don’t really care. // —After all,

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    BB: in the face of Kingprotea, // such efforts are useless.

    Page 8:
    Caster: I won’t // let you hurt my Master! // I’m sorry, I wasn’t able to control the force of the impact.
    Hakuno: Ouch… Wah! Sorry, Caster!
    Caster: I merely adjusted our landing carefully so that you would end up in a Lucky Pervert position.
    Hakuno: What’s with your priorities, you pink fox!?

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    Caster: In any case, let’s go, Master! // She won’t be able to easily catch us in the forest!
    Hakuno: Y-Yeah.
    Rin: Can… hear me? …Kishi…kun.
    Hakuno ! // Tohsaka!?
    Rin: Your escape path…cut off…Keep…forward. // There should…check…point…in front of…stairs!
    Caster: It’s true that there’s always been a checkpoint in front of the stairs on the previous floors. // We should be able to easily log out there since the flow of energy there moves in the direction of the labyrinth’s entrance…! // It’s such a perfect and convenient piece of logic that it’s almost funny! // Look! There’s the convenient checkpoint in front of the stairs, // Master!
    Text: Checkpoint

    Page 10:
    Caster: Or so I thought!
    Hakuno: Kuh… Can’t be helped, let’s head to the next floor!
    Caster: Yes!
    Rin: You idi—! // Why the hell are you heading to the next floor!?
    Leo: However, there’s nothing else they can do. // —But now that I think about it, is running further down actually possible?
    Rani: If the following eighth floor is also ruled by that Saber, then yes… // Since he obtained two secrets from her…
    Rin: So we can already negate the second shield that might be on this floor…?
    Leo: It’s definitely possible. // By the way, why is it called Secret Garden?
    Sakura: Secret Garden is the title for it recorded in the Moon Cell’s library. It’s called SG for short.

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    Caster: …She’s not chasing us anymore…?
    Hakuno: …By the way, Caster, I’m asking this while knowing the answer full well, // but in that dream, you said,
    Caster (Flashback): Honestly, I have no chance of winning against both of them at once.
    Hakuno: …but honestly, even against just one of them…
    Caster: If you already understand full well, why are you giving me that cold look? // …You should sense it as well, Master. // That thing is completely abnormal—something on the level of a natural disaster. // Normally, we’d need several Servants working together just to have a chance at beating her— // For now, we should escape and collect information—
    Kingprotea: … // Why?
    Caster&Hakuno: ?

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    Kingprotea: Why do you run? // Why won’t you die? // Why won’t you love me?
    Caster&Hakuno: Gyaaaaaaah! She’s coming!
    Kingprotea: Why? // Why? // Hakuno-senpai! // Even though you said you’d give me your love!
    Rin: You said that?
    Rani: Did you?
    Leo: You did!?
    Caster: When did you say that, Master!?
    Hakuno: This is the first time I’ve heard of it!!
    Kingprotea: No! Please love me! Please die! Please stay with me!
    Hakuno: She’s talking really incoherently! Caster, please translate!
    Caster: Mikon! I’d understand if she was trying to kill you out of love—! But this one’s a bit too twisted to comprehend even for me!

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    Hakuno: The eighth floor… it’s not much different from the seventh.
    Text (sound effect): Hop
    Hakuno: What about the shield?
    Sakura: Using BB as a relay, I’m analyzing the eighth floor… // Shield found! // The SG we have—is a match. // Destroying shield!
    Text (sound effect): Boom
    Text (sound effect): Hop

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    Hakuno: The next floor is just ahead.
    Text (sound effect): Wince
    Hakuno: …!
    Caster: …So, can I ask about what you’re doing there, Master?
    Caster (small text): The hopping, I mean
    Hakuno: Ah… it seems hopping has turned into a habit for me.
    Caster: A habit!? // Muu. // Enemies at a time like this? // Of course,
    Caster (thought): we run away!!
    Caster : As if we’d waste our time with small fries— // !!

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    Kingprotea: Won’t you… // die for me…?
    Caster (thought) : This is bad! // We managed to escape her grasp because she was running on all fours for some reason, // but if she stands up, she’ll catch—
    Kingprotea: Ah, // sorry…!

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    Kingprotea: Ah… // I didn’t mean to… // Kyah… // Sorry.
    Caster: Uoooh, this is our chance! // Let’s get away while she’s occupied with the Enemies!
    Hakuno: What’s with the hierarchy in this world?
    Hakuno: !! // The eighth floor’s checkpoint! // We made it!
    Caster: We can log out from there—
    BB: —Did you think you could escape? // Little insects.

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    Hakuno: Wha… // It disap…
    BB: I’ve advanced to the point where I can change the rules of SE.RA.PH.
    Hakuno: !
    BB: That’s right, I’m the queen of the moon…! // And all of you are pitiful insects locked inside the queen’s cage. // Carve into your minds the fact that I could crush any of you at any time on a whim.
    Caster (thought): Like I thought, BB—that THING’s very existence is malignant, // Master…!
    ~The sage cries out. "Open, Gates of Heaven. Bless us and bestow miracles upon us!"~

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    Might need to sample the color in those two word-bubbles. Its not pure black.

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    Looks pretty good, nothing to really correct except a small error on page nine where the ... is missing between "keep" and "forward" in the bottom middle bubble.
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    Alright, that should be fixed too. Now to upload it.

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    Thanks, team.

    All these gameplay references are good. 8 out of 20 floors already. They really did skip a bunch.

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    All of you are good people.

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    Here's the translation for chapter 13. (It's really jarring, though, how the chapter length can vary so drastically. Last time it was around the length of a weekly manga chapter, while this one is a full ten pages longer.)

    Foxtail Vol 2 Chapter 13
    Page 1:
    Chapter 13: Kingprotea 2
    Rin: The queen… // of the moon!? // …Is she serious!? // The idea of an AI rivaling the Moon Cell isn’t even funny as a joke…!
    Leo: However, she did erase the checkpoint…
    Hakuno: —You said your objective was the Holy Grail. // In that case, it doesn’t make sense. // Why are you targeting me?
    Caster: Master, their murderous intent is real. // I suggest postponing investigating their reasons for another—
    Hakuno: Please wait a little longer, Caster.

    Page 2:
    BB: My reason for targeting senpai? // That’s a separate matter from the Holy Grail…but in the end, it’s tied together with it. // —However, senpai? // The reason for why I would want to kill you // should be pretty obvious, don’t you think?
    Text (sound effect): Shudder
    Hakuno (thought): —Hatred!?
    Hakuno: I have no memory of anything like that…! // In the first place, isn’t this the first time we’ve met…?

    Page 3:
    Kingprotea: Ah♥ // So you’re finally going to die for me.
    Caster: We can’t loiter here any further, Master!
    Hakuno: Kuh! // We have no choice but to continue on to the ninth floor…!
    Sakura: !! // Ah, wait, // Kishinami-san!

    Page 4:
    Hakuno (thought): My body
    Hakuno: Ah
    Hakuno (thought): feels heavy.
    Hakuno: Bwah! // C-Caster! // It’s true that this way is faster, but I can’t last like this…!
    Caster: Master, please just enjoy what you’re touching for now!
    Hakuno (thought): —This is bad. // The farther down we go— // the harder it becomes to run away from that girl, like what’s happening now! // This is…

    Page 5:
    Sakura: As Kishinami-san goes further down the floors, his memory usage increases… // and his image density deepens. // Since the support from the three of you is currently disorganized and uncoordinated, // Kishinami-san can’t keep moving properly— // At this rate, Kishinami-san will—!
    Leo: Miss Tohsaka! // Rani!
    Rani: —As the situation currently is, Mister Hakuno’s chances of survival are extremely low—
    Text (sound effect): Grit
    Text (sound effect): …Sigh
    Rin: One has to choose the proper time and place to be stubborn… // This isn’t a situation where we can fuss over pride and the like.

    Page 6:
    Rani: Please wait a moment. We should come to an agreement on who is a superior supporter here.
    Rin: Rani!
    Rani: —If all of us weren’t here, // we wouldn’t have been able to progress this far. // Everyone here is an excellent and irreplaceable specialist. There’s no room for doubt about that. // I request joining together for our common cause!
    Rin: Okay, I’m in! // Now that that’s been decided, let’s escape from this labyrinth with a bang!
    Leo: —You two are exactly the kinds of people I had hoped! // Joining together hand in hand…So this is what the “springtime of youth” is!

    Page 7:
    Rin: Leo! For now, we’ll let you take charge here!
    Leo: Then I shall declare this. // This is the true start of our united front. // Until we return to the Holy Grail War—No, // until we escape from the far side of the moon, we are fellow comrades. // I hereby establish the Tsukumihara Student Council!
    Rani: Student Council…!?
    Rin: …Well, whatever… // —Then, shall we start, // President Leo?

    Page 8:
    Kingprotea: Senpai♥ // Senpai♥ // Sen-♥
    Text (sound effect): Haa (Note to typesetter: apply to all four, but if the bubbles too small for the text to fit, just skip it entirely.)
    Hakuno: I…can move!
    Kingprotea: -pai♥
    Hakuno: I’m all right by myself now, Caster. // See, // look!
    Caster: I think it’s about time you restrain your hopping! // Though you’re wonderful even when you act like that, Master!!

    Page 9:
    Saber: I can’t believe this!! // BB-chan, could you, like, not destroy my Sakura Labyrinth?
    Caster: Oh, didn’t you vanish already?
    Saber: You worthless fox! As if you actually thought I’d be terminated that easily! // Both the me that was on the floor above and my current self here are Egos. // Eh? // Hey, wait. // Listen to what I’m—

    Page 10:
    Text (sound effect): Whoosh
    BB: Sorry, Saber. // I don’t have the time to deal with you right now.
    Caster: Just what did she come here for, // that girl? // Hey, Master…
    Hakuno: I hopped too much and got tired like normal…
    Caster: I told you so!
    Hakuno: Ah! // Hey! // Sto-!

    Page 11:
    Hakuno: Uwaaaaaaaaaaah!
    Caster: Release my Master!
    Kingprotea: I got // you♥
    Hakuno (thought): This… // This is bad!

    Page 12:
    Rani: Saber… // Ego… // I know, how about using the Five Thought-Stopping Meditations program on her?
    Rin: !! // I don’t know the reason why, but Saber immediately disappeared after having her SG taken— // Can you hear me, Hakuno-kun!? // Converse…Alter…Ego…Kingprotea…take…SG…
    Hakuno: Y-You say converse with her, but… // Is that even… // possible?
    BB: Fufufu, it’s useless. // You say you “don’t know the reason why”? // I’ll tell you.

    Page 13:
    BB: That Saber-san is an Ego…in other words, a copy of her consciousness extracted from the original. // One Ego is set to each shield as a Sentinel.
    Kingprotea: Ehehe // Hakuno-senpai, // I’m going to eat you.
    Text (sound effect): Slurp
    BB: It’s precisely because the Ego was just a portion of her original consciousness that she vanished when her SG was taken. // However, Protea is the real thing…Neither a sentinel nor an Ego—Do you understand?
    Text (sound effect): Haa // Haa
    Hakuno (thought): Talk…! Something…to talk about!
    Leo: …Unbelievable. Then there’s no way to break out of // this situation…?
    Text (sound effect): Aah // Aah
    Kingprotea: With this, you’ll love me, right?♥
    Hakuno (thought): Talk—

    Page 14:
    Hakuno: You’ll never obtain love // by doing something like that…!
    Kingprotea: … // ?
    Caster: Uu- // oooooh! // Make it in time, me—!!

    Page 15:
    BB: The interior of Kingprotea’s body is a sea of imaginary numbers that not even I can grasp— // Now, // devour Hakuno-senpai.

    Page 16:
    (pure black, no text)

    Page 17:
    Text (sound effect): Gulp

    Page 18:
    BB: Kingprotea… // You… // That’s the wrong place. // Why, instead of the Imaginary Numbers Space,

    Page 19:
    BB: did you draw them into your heart?
    Caster: Master…!!
    Hakuno: Caster, thank goodness you’re also okay.
    Sakura: …! // From Kingprotea’s interior…! // It’s slight, but I can detect Kishinami-san’s life signs—
    Kingprotea: S-Sorry. // But I have to properly…hear what… // he has to say…right…?
    BB: —!

    Page 20:
    Leo: !! // That last thing he said saved his life…!?
    Rin: If that’s true, he really does have good instincts when it comes to choices in the face of death…!
    Rani: Mister Hakuno is confirmed alive! // However, we can’t monitor him…!
    Caster: It seems I managed to accompany you by grabbing your hand, Master. // It doesn’t seem to be the road to the underworld, but still, will it be a demon or a snake that comes out…? // Let’s begin the Issun-Boshi* Attack Plan, Master. // They say if you stumble into a fox hole, you’ll be blessed with children, you know!
    Hakuno: Yeah, let’s……You really twisted the train of logic there! // !
    Kingprotea (thought): Is it fun? // Is it tasty? Is it warm?

    (TL Note: Issun-Boshi is the story of a boy the size of a finger, similar to the English fairy tale of Tom Thumb)

    Page 21:
    Caster: I see. // This is a Poem Road that leads straight to the depths of the heart with no going back. // Master, // that woman’s inner thoughts are automatically being transmitted to us directly, but make sure not to get overwhelmed by it.
    Hakuno: Ah… // Yeah, I got it.
    Kingprotea (thought): I was always drifting through a dark, dark sea empty of anything. // No, // I was just endlessly falling within it. // Why? // Why was I thrown away? // Am I a bad girl? // My stomach is so empty and hungry. // My heart keeps breaking further and further.

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    Kingprotea (thought): That’s why I, // in order to get rid of all those feelings, // I always, always, always, always kept thinking of just that one thing. // Because that is the very last, very precious fragment // that was left to me.
    Hakuno: …
    Kingprotea (thought): Hey, do you know? // The sea is // very desolate, lonely and cold. // Is love fun? // Is it tasty? // Is it warm? // Someone will give me love, right? // Lots and lots of love. // Because it’s all just a lie if I’m not compensated for everything. // I kept waiting in vain for so, so long. // So I’ll eat lots and lots of it.
    Caster: …Her inner thoughts and feelings are merely leaking out here, // but it seems her disposition to brag of her own misfortune and drag others down with her is truly incorrigible.

    Page 24:
    BB: Kingprotea…this love you speak of, // are you referring to Hakuno-senpai?
    Kingprotea (thought): Ah… Aah… // That’s right… // Hakuno // Senpai♥ // Senpai♥ // Hakuno- senpai♥
    Hakuno: Hey… // wha…!
    Kingprotea (thought): Senpai♥ // Hakuno- senpai♥

    Page 25:
    BB: I see… it’s not just his name you forgot.
    Kingprotea (thought): Senpai♥
    BB: After wandering for practically an eternity, // you’ve even forgotten who and what he is.
    Kingprotea (thought): Senpai♥ // Senpai♥
    BB: The only thing that remains carved into your soul is the fact that he exists.
    Kingprotea (thought): Senpai♥
    BB: So Hakuno-senpai is merely a symbol of love to you now, huh? // This is beyond funny to the point of being
    Kingprotea (thought): Senpai♥ // Senpai♥
    Caster: In the first place, she’s speaking of love when she has none of the resolve to shoulder the responsibility that comes with it. // Well, I do think there is room for sympathy for her, though. // But that’s exactly why we should end her already.
    Hakuno: C-Caster!?
    Caster: Master, it’s impossible for anything except conflict to exist between you and this girl.

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    Caster: I don’t know whether she // was like this from the start or not. // But she’s become twisted to the point of no return now.
    Kingprotea (thought): If… // If Hakuno-senpai // gives me love, // that would // be very…very…
    Hakuno (thought): …This is // the deepest depths of her heart…! // It’s different from how I thought it’d be…
    Hakuno: That center part is probably Kingprotea’s—
    Kingprotea: …Hakuno-senpai.

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    Kingprotea: You’ll // talk to me lots // …right?
    ~The sage cries out. "Open, Gates of Heaven. Bless us and bestow miracles upon us!"~

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    Good chapter

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    Do you guys plan on redoing the first six chapters at some point after you have caught up? While not 100% illegible, the person who translated them was quite horrible in terms of grammering thems English. Who knows how bad the actual translation ended up.

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    Catching up before redoing old chapters.

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    canon finish apo vol 3

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    Quote Originally Posted by dilettante View Post
    All right, the typesetting and the edits look good. Only thing to correct is a small error on page 9, where Saber should be saying "As if you actually thought" instead of "As if you actually though".
    ~The sage cries out. "Open, Gates of Heaven. Bless us and bestow miracles upon us!"~

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    With that fixed, I'll be uploading to batoto if there's no objections.

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    Thanks for your team efforts, I am a fan that accompanies their work from the first volume. I say again thank you.

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