I don't know what you guys are talking about this story is a true masterpiece.
@Solo
A: many users understand my method, although I'm not a genius, well maybe a little bit in the field of rpg's, not writing wise though. Anyway, the users who chose to choose to mock me really fail to get it. For the record, I'm not angry at them, I'm disappointed they couldn't come to enjoy the story presented.
again
Q: what harm does having the consciousness of a person in the Nasuverse go to their heaven or hell? Let me be clear, I'm not asking what canon says, I'm asking what is wrong with this as a difference from canon. What harm does it do?
Q. Real talk, why are you so opposed to making this an original fiction again? I'm genuinely curious.
Something kept bugging me about the part I bolded when I read it a few hours ago, and, well I guess I should point out that...
Q: If people can't enjoy your story, doesn't that mean that there's something wrong with your story? If so,
Q: From your circumstances and limitations, why not find a friendly beta-reader to help you better your story?
Q: On the other hand, if it's not your story that's wrong, then does that mean the people you're trying to present it to (basically this forum) is the wrong audience for your story? If so,
Q: Wouldn't it be more beneficial to find an audience more fitting to your works?
It's mostly (morbid) curiosity since, really, it's a bit admirable/strange/neat that you've been here for so long, taking shit from pretty much everyone in this thread, and you haven't left for good yet despite all that.
Originally Posted by Emiya ShirouCurrent Support Nov. 5, 2016
In the case when he won't answer (from what I recall):
A2. He had one before. They fell apart.
A3. I agree. Though I think this is a good audience to get critical reviews on stories - they (typically... for other authors) wouldn't shit on/instant-fave <3 a story for no good reason :/
A4. He has it archived on another forum, I think.
Q. Do you even comprehend the questions posed here?
@Epiren
A: I already write completely original work. Turning this into an "original work" is both disingenuous and structurally faulty.
A: no, it means they can't enjoy it, plenty of people I know can't deal with certain kinds of works or characters in fiction. Too bad for them, I have a seriously different view on fiction from the rest of people which is probably why most people butt heads with my concepts and methods. I believe a story should account for itself, not be strung up by rules unnecessarily.
A: I have had four betas. Eddy left due to time constraints for collage, Mike is currently betaing for me and Bdoom and Leo gave up. Of the four only Bdoom has a grudge because of things he misunderstood and as you can see has refused to stop harassing me over it.
A: Nope, plenty of awesome guys here to read the story and enjoy it, like Tobias, Altima and DP said the vocal majority is not equal to the majority itself.
A: you guys fit the bill, you just have to relax and go on the adventure.
@Kura
I believe just the opposite, I believe the current mechanics weaken characters and make them less special. Thanks for the quick answer though.
Q. Also, aren't the current mechanics what created the FSN characters?
Q. If you feel that the mechanics make the characters less special, then why write a Type Moon fic?
Q. If Tobias, Altima and DP did say that they like your fic, could you provide quotes? Its easy for people to say certain people like something without evidence.
Dear god, this fucking bastard...... Taunts my fucking childhood.
He never said that they said that.
He said that they were being politically correct mods, and referenced an apparent instance in which they said that "People who dislike this story aren't everybody."
That doesn't mean that they like it, per-se, but that they refuse to jump on the train of disliking it and are trying to call attention elsewhere.
must have gotten the wording wrong. Thanks.
Honestly, Satoshi isn't the worst character out there, but he does need a lot of reworking imho. A little less powers would be easier to swallow for the majority of readers.
Dear god, this fucking bastard...... Taunts my fucking childhood.
Ha ha ha, I'm not getting on that train again.