Can you elaborate a bit? What part of Nine Lives monologue do you mean? Shirou doesn't narrate along the lines of 'this battle will end in 3 seconds. i aim for his head, body, heart, testicles, etc etc. i surpass his speed using godspeed', but you do pretty much see most of that visually presented. you get to see eight slashes happen instantly, a ninth one to seal it and the battle ends right there, no additional swings. And well, you get to see Shirou struggling with the pain from having removed the shroud by showing him in bed in pain twice. It's not perfect but when combined with Shirou unable to remember names or form words properly after Alter's fight, I think it gets the point across well enough.