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Matou household murder case
Sakura: I wish he wouldn't exist.
Eleven years. She thinks something she has never thought during that time.
[squelching noise]
The air makes a sound. The man on top of her falls down. Fresh blood splatters onto her. The girl raises her body and looks at her silent brother.
Sakura: Oh
It was an instant death. He must have been hit with a very sharp string. A line is visible on the back of his head, as if it was drawn in with a pencil. The line reaches his brain, but the line is too thin to make his brain spill out, and his blood is the only thing flowing out.
Sakura: Oh
She looks down at it without emotion. The shadow that killed her brother wavers. It wavers in the gray sunlight. Her own shadow…Her own shadow is standing up and wavering. [Rather than the whole swarm of mini-Shadows at the start there]
Sakura: Ah
So she's the one that killed. It was she who killed her brother. She understands, but does not feel anything. She feels nothing. Nothing. Nothing. Nothing. No disgust, no fear, no guilt, no regret. The only thought in her vacant mind is that it was easy. [Sakura still appearing to regret her actions here probably a Sudo thing]
Sakura: Ah...ah
She's used to it. This isn't her first time. Because she saw plenty in her dreams. She saw it in her dream, so did she copy what she saw?
Sakura: Ah, ha
She doesn't know. But she thinks she should've done it sooner. If she'd known she wouldn't feel anything, she would've done it a long time ago. She thinks, and…
Sakura: FuFufu.
Her empty emotion murmurs that it was fun. It was fun. It was fun. It was fun...? It was fun...? Where? When? What? Dream. Dream. That's right. She wasn't dreaming. Those dreams were [flashback to her eating the bear candy with audio of her still slightly chuckling] ...not dreams [This is where we should have gotten her eating a random person's finger instead of in the death of Gilgamesh scene, maybe by a frizzle/static thing immediately after the bear candy thing + escalating laughter]. The one that wandered through the night and killed the men was herself. Yes, she killed many people. She killed many, many people. KILLED those that ran away KILLED without leaving a drop KILLED everyone KILLED with pleasure KILLED laughing KILLED laughing KILLED laughing…!![Probably skip this unless we go for some weird Rei-like death scenes with that main Shadow gorging]
Sakura: Aha, Ahaha. Ahahaha
It's so funny, she laughs. Because she'll break down unless she laughs. She can't bear it unless she's laughing. But more tears flow out the more she laughs, and everything becomes meaningless for her.
Sakura: Haha! Ahaha, hahahahahahahaha!
It's so funny that her stomach hurts. It's as if she's regressing mentally every time she laughs. But it's so comforting and natural. Oh, how stupid, how stupid, how foolish…!
Sakura: Fu....fufu, ah
Her face is contorted in a manic grin. In place of her silent brother, the girl sweetly spills out a voice like glass. And like that, after tinkering with her brother's body like she's playing house, she gets up. She stands in front of the mirror, still covered in blood. Behind her stands the shadow that killed so many. Her own shadow. The black shadow that has eaten countless people. Someone was there, trying hard not to turn her into it. Someone was there by her side. She laughs. There was never any hope for her. [Have the room going dark red here with the swarm of mini-Shadows moving stuff around for Sakura to more easily see the mirror and do the following]
Sakura: I see. I was slowly going crazy.
She twirls in front of the mirror. The girl makes a proud smile.
Sakura: Look, Senpai. I was crazy from the beginning.
And speaks as if asking for a dance. The girl's consciousness ends there. No, to be more accurate, it changes. It's merely that her repressed subconscious has risen to the surface. [Represent this with the Shadow enveloping her like it did in the movie]
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