It was a Hilariously Bad Thing, until it wasn't.Originally Posted by Bdoom
It was a Hilariously Bad Thing, until it wasn't.
I agree, any more thoughts?
It made me feel hot
or maybe that was the porn I watched after closing the tab and using the internet for its intended purpose
[That is true. The internet is for porn. Personally, I think we should rename the internet something more descriptive. I vote Unlimited Porn Works.]
The only redeemable thing about this is that I can honestly see you put effort into writing this. Sadly, effort is not talent.
1/10; and the only TM fic I've read that is honestly worse than lantz's. Enjoy being the best of the worst Chris. If there were Razzies for fanfiction, this would be a very strong contender.
And you wonder why you get banned.
Is there any point in repeating what has already been stated Magos?
One true OTP...
He hasn't said it yet, and he must post.
Other people did already.
What he says is nothing new at all!
One true OTP...
Yeah, it's Magos.
Huh.
Learning what, may I ask?
Yes, I can be slow at times >_<
One true OTP...
The order of things in BL?
It'll only be this way if you make it so.
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
Okay, I have skimmed the fic a bit, and with that and what other readers had already pointed, I must join to their opinion. Christopher H2, you need to re-think from the beggining your story. As a fan of TM, I don't find interesting at all reading about a bunch of people that seems to be fixing the mistakes of the main characters of the nasuverse, while having all the powers. ALL OF THEM. All the cool toys. Again, ALL OF THEM. And being witty with the known characters.
Also, if you really need to give that Utan guy a Reality Marble, please, give him his own RM. Unlimited Blade Works is unique to Shirou not because he is the only one who can access to that power, but because it is literally the proyection of his own soul. Each person has its own RM, and noone can have access to it unless he or she had inherited somehow, like that gal in the fundisk of Tsukihime that inherited Lair of the Beast.
And they told you this already. Angra Manyu is a single entity, not a race of beings, and it doesn't have a will.
That fic has the excuse of being blatantly a crack fic, and at least it's central characters where the main characters of the parodied works. What's the excuse in this work?
It's a doujinshi that Naru found funny enough to put the TM seal. It's, at best, an spin-off. Personally, I think of it as a fic.
Soul Calibur, I'd say.
We have experience with this kind of authors. This is actually less poisonous that the other option. On the completely unrelated note, not bad, taking into accoun that I should have gone to sleep 4 hours ago.
Last edited by Ergast; September 24th, 2014 at 10:59 PM.
Spoiler:
I post what is already known, just to chime in.
Such is the circle of posting.
We already knew that.
He never sleeps. He never dies.
Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.
The cycle of posting at it's finest.
Picture a forum where Magos is stamping on lantz's face. FOREVER.
It's more like he's stomping on his own face.
His foot is like a Gae Bolg that only hits his own head again and again.
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