LunarFate: The World's Wrath / LunarFate Zero

[Christopher H2]

I don't think he'd want to, since he already has his backers, and he apparently thinks we're trash that can't comprehend the true beauty of his prose.

You actually think I wanted that from either of you? I decided to close the envelope on your insensitive attitude, that's all.

[Nuclear]

You guys make it sound like impressing BL is hard. I crossed Fate over with Red vs Blue and received no negative comments. Its honestly easier than FFN.

I do a Pokemon crossover, and I haven't received any hate. I had an idea to cross Kara no Kyoukai with Matilda of all things, and I acutally got a few positive comments. So you see, I (I can't claim to represent BL here) don't hate on originality. It's just at what you tried to write (too many OCs, virtually no respect for canon) has been done too many times, all by lesser authors.

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Enlighten me.

Oh, you know, unlucky grill? A rather decent person, but snaps hard​ when placed under extreme pressure? Takes demoted to extra to new depths? You can figure out the rest.

[Christopher H2]

But why putting so many original characters in one fanfic?
Don't you think people won't recognise this as a TM related work?

I consider this to be. It just that I'm seeing things in two dimensions rather than three.

[Dallas]

I do a Pokemon crossover, and I haven't received any hate. I had an idea to cross Kara no Kyoukai with Matilda of all things, and I acutally got a few positive comments. So you see, I (I can't claim to represent BL here) don't hate on originality. It's just at what you tried to write (too many OCs, virtually no respect for canon) has been done too many times, all by lesser authors.

I was gonna have a crossover of Fate with Aliens but for the reason Buster stated the fanbases need to be the same so likely wont bother (though Umbra seems persistent that I go with it).

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I consider this to be. It just that I'm seeing things in two dimensions rather than three.

please do a crossover with Lantz you guys would be great.

[Ayr]

If you have any issues or critiques then how about you present it in a more civil and concrete way other than the juvenile "I don't like it!", it doesn't reflect well upon the community.

Well, I did try to be as inoffensive as I could while still telling the truth. But I suppose I could have gone into more depth as to why ​the idea was poor, though I'll admit I don't think I could go into it much due to my own lack in knowledge of Nasu Canon.

Look, pal. From this board came the story "Tomb of the Sun God", that does exactly what you claim you are trying to do, without using any established setting (in other words, grail war, tsukihime, mahoyo or Kara no kyoukai) neither the characters of said settings (Shirou, Rin, Shiki, etc). So don't tell us that we can't accept unconventional jobs. What we don't accept is bad jobs. Write something decent and most of us wouldn't even pay attention if you break canon (as long as you don't demolish it completely, of course). But do a bad job and we will point it, even if you are respectful with the setting, something you are clearly not.

This basically sums up all else I could reasonably think to say here, so I suppose I'm done.

[francobull3]

Mhh, I see.
Still, you should at the very least grasp the mechanics of the nasuverse a bit more, since you do have many inaccuracies present in your story that DO ruin it's possible connection to canon.

[Techlet]

You actually think I wanted that from you? I decided to close the envelope on your insensitive attitude, that's all.

Then what did you want from BL when you pimped out your script here?

[francobull3]

He probably wanted approval or some form of praise.
That's the only thing I could think of.

[Christopher H2]

I doubt if I were to post "The Night of Warakia", you will turn me in to grilled chicken.

[Techlet]

Then post it?

[Christopher H2]

see you tomorrow.

[francobull3]

I wish you luck.
It may not sound like it, but I do admire your sheer dedication, even it it is somewhat flawed.

[Siriel]

I'm sticking to my troll theory by the way, I was just thrown off by the unexpected effort involved.

[francobull3]

I doubt it.
He sounds too genuine to me.

[Nuclear]

It's too early (or too late) to say, methinks.

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It's too early (or too late) to say, methinks. But I lean towards Franco's school of thought. If I'd posted my earlier fanfics here, I'd probably go berserk about what people say about it, too.

[Leftovers]

I'm sticking to my troll theory by the way, I was just thrown off by the unexpected effort involved.

I can confidently say that OP has been developing his works quite a long time before Beast's Lair entered the equation.

[francobull3]

Indirectly, Christopher was responsible for my bad joke rehab.
He is the true hero of this tale.
But even if this turn out to be bad, I am confident he will eventually learn from his mistakes.
We all do eventually

[Siriel]

It's too early (or too late) to say, methinks.

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It's too early (or too late) to say, methinks. But I lean towards Franco's school of thought. If I'd posted my earlier fanfics here, I'd probably go berserk about what people say about it, too.

This is just too perfect, it's basically a checklist of trolling:

-Script format
-Tons of OC
-Ignores mechanics
-Creates multiple threads
-Breakdown about criticisms
-Misspelled names
-Threatens to shutdown thread and create more
-....

[Ayr]

I doubt if I were to post "The Night of Warakia", you will turn me in to grilled chicken.

Well, if you wrote it and it was any good, then I would give a review that reflects that. But since have never seen it (either link, or post here?), how would I know whether I would "turn [you] into grilled chicken"?

Edit: Is it me or is this sentence a bit wonky? "if I were to post"/"you will turn" should be "If I were to post"/"you would turn" or "when I post"/"you will turn"? It just reads weird when I look at it.

Yeah, I think I should go to sleep, my reading comprehension skills are becoming impaired.

[Nuclear]

Well, if you wrote it and it was any good, then I would give a review that reflects that. But since have never seen it (either link, or post here?), how would I know whether I would "turn [you] into grilled chicken"?

Doesn't "Warakia" translate to "Wallachia" in English? Why bother using the romanized version when there's already a viable English counterpart?

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This is just too perfect, it's basically a checklist of trolling:

-Script format
-Tons of OC
-Ignores mechanics
-Creates multiple threads
-Breakdown about criticisms
-Misspelled names
-Threatens to shutdown thread and create more
-....

I'm just giving him the MANY benefits of doubting.