Last I remembered, Christmas was three months away.Originally Posted by francobull3
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Please don't. Not while you're in remission.
Last I remembered, Christmas was three months away.
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Please don't. Not while you're in remission.
Christmas is always here.
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That was terrible and I'm sorry.
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
In this thread? I sorta kinda believe that. Franco's realization (?) might just be a "Christmas miracle".
No one blames you. This thread is like crack cocaine.
Franco, please stop posting.
Please
[12:37] <I3uster> if playing overwatch would save my mother from the deathbed
[12:37] <I3uster> id probably flip a coin
[12:38] <I3uster> to see if i play or not
[18:23] <frantic> spinach is like a caffeine zombie
[18:23] <frantic> in AX he would like
[18:23] <frantic> drink 8 shots of espresso
[18:23] <frantic> then he'd turn to me an hour later
[18:23] <frantic> 'frantic', he'd say, his eyes wild and his lips smug
[18:23] <frantic> 'i need coffee'
Reinforced crack cocaine, I might add.
I don't know who this Jack of Spades is, what he wants or even what he looks like, but he's already my favourite character.Jack of Spades was carrying axes and had bandages on his abdomen.
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
That said, OP, I encourage you to write this as a Touhou crossover instead.
I think it really fits with the careful precision that your characters are crafted with.
I see you lurking in here Maple. I'll never apologize for this.
Last edited by Frostyvale; September 23rd, 2014 at 08:04 PM.
I personally like Ivan Duhamis, he looks absolutely stunning.
I encourage you to keep practicing writing; you can't improve without it. I've written several bad fanfics in my time, though I came to recognize the flaws in them and tried to keep improving even as I wrote for my own enjoyment. This summer I finally came up with a story that seemed decent enough to post to the internet for the recent fan fiction contest. Opinions on it seem to be mixed so far and I certainly made some mistakes, but I'll remember what I did right and wrong for the next time I attempt to write a serious story.
So try to be more self-critical of your ideas, consider your audience, and understand that some people here are sincerely trying to give you advice to help you improve as a writer.
Not Magus! Magic Emperor Magus!
It was a terrible joke because my avatar is Noel Vermillion.
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
Does BB ever make jokes about this?
She was born December 25th, but aside from that I don't think they ever acknowledge that she's literally called Christmas Red.
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
oh shit that's cute as fuck
Literally moe.
Welp.
Oh hey 6 pages in less than half a day.
Observe, it is the Lantz Effect in its full splendor.
And here we see a Sonichu in it's natural environment.
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