In this thread? I sorta kinda believe that. Franco's realization (?) might just be a "Christmas miracle".
[12:37] <I3uster> if playing overwatch would save my mother from the deathbed
[12:37] <I3uster> id probably flip a coin
[12:38] <I3uster> to see if i play or not
[18:23] <frantic> spinach is like a caffeine zombie
[18:23] <frantic> in AX he would like
[18:23] <frantic> drink 8 shots of espresso
[18:23] <frantic> then he'd turn to me an hour later
[18:23] <frantic> 'frantic', he'd say, his eyes wild and his lips smug
[18:23] <frantic> 'i need coffee'
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
That said, OP, I encourage you to write this as a Touhou crossover instead.
I think it really fits with the careful precision that your characters are crafted with.
I see you lurking in here Maple. I'll never apologize for this.
Last edited by Frostyvale; September 23rd, 2014 at 08:04 PM.
I encourage you to keep practicing writing; you can't improve without it. I've written several bad fanfics in my time, though I came to recognize the flaws in them and tried to keep improving even as I wrote for my own enjoyment. This summer I finally came up with a story that seemed decent enough to post to the internet for the recent fan fiction contest. Opinions on it seem to be mixed so far and I certainly made some mistakes, but I'll remember what I did right and wrong for the next time I attempt to write a serious story.
So try to be more self-critical of your ideas, consider your audience, and understand that some people here are sincerely trying to give you advice to help you improve as a writer.
Not Magus! Magic Emperor Magus!
Oh hey 6 pages in less than half a day.
Observe, it is the Lantz Effect in its full splendor.
And here we see a Sonichu in it's natural environment.