So it's basically the Wincest of Disney?
So it's basically the Wincest of Disney?
It's actually Failcest, because it directly contradicts the original movie's Aesop about love not just being romantic.
I was making a Supernatural joke. Winchester brothers+Incest= Wincest.
I'm horrible at fandom jokes, sorry.
The sad part is, that is the actual ship's name.
Interesting - I know just enough Type-Moon lore to follow the gist of this, thankfully, though I still have a bit of a headache.
One repeated error that I didn't notice in the first chapter, though, and need to point out: the kingdom's name is properly rendered as "Arendelle."
“Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”
— Carmilla Theme
"Evil isn't the real threat to the world. Stupid is just as destructive as Evil, maybe more so, and it's a hell of a lot more common. What we really need is a crusade against Stupid. That might actually make a difference."
―Jim Butcher, Vignette
And yet the yuri never ends with Frozen fans.Originally Posted by Nuclear Consensus
Fuck the English language and it only having one word for love. Fuck. It.
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If Disney would make a lesbian princess already this could have been avoided.
The incest still won't go away though.
Everyone needs to speak Classical Greek. Then we'll be sorted.
But Greece doesn't exist.
Yo. You also munch some commas where there should be pauses, but who sweats the small stuff?Aylesburg
Yeah, looking at commas all day does that do you. Lol, awkward, with the Aylesbury thing. All the other times I use it has the right spelling.
Yessir. That's embarassing.
But yeah if there are ever any lore questions or mechanics question anyone can ask.
If it's pacing issues, or like plot problems that just means I really screwed up.
Something not Fate-related I hope.
Really? I thought I did pretty well on spelling. Can you show me?
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This is either Frozen fanfiction as written by Kinoko Nasu, or Type-Moon fanfiction as written by Walt Disney.
Not enough singing and racism.
No, that'd be a Type-Moon/Disney crossover as written by Nyarlathotep.
There were more the first time I read it.
Also, tense issues.
Tense issues? Like the prologue being in present while the latter is in past?
Or about tense consistency in a specific block because I thought I was pretty good on that.
Entirely agreed. Based Dullahan.
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Well, there is ethnocentrism from what I'm seeing. Does that count?
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What Fate/Stay Night character are you?
Kotomine Kirei
You are Kirei. You've always been a little different from the rest. You probably have low social skills. Whatever, it's not like what they think matters anyway. Ever searching for something missing within you, you probably don't experience the same happiness as everyone else. Good and evil are just labels, you are who you are.
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