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Thread: Lorelei and The Snow Queen (Frozen X Type-Moon)

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    It just means Lorelei's going to Aylesbury after this to screw with White Wing and she's happy about that so she's singing an Aylesbury folk song to really stick to that human leech.
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    Urf, this last chapter.

    It might have been the switch to present tense, but this chapter felt awkward and dragged. Even the fight scene feels ridiculously slow, despite the words saying otherwise. Most of the sentences either needed more commas, less commas, or punctuation in different places.

    Unfortunately, I can't appreciate how this fits into Frozen because I never saw the movie. At any rate, the fic was entertaining.
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    The Japanese version is called arinomamade which means "as I am."
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    Dumas flashed a fearless grin at Flat and Jack as he rattled off odd turns of phrase.
    "And most importantly, it's me who'll be doing the cooking."
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