It reads awkwardly in many places. They don't understand how to properly translate using suggestion magic on the crowd, and mess it up three times. They're clearly just a very poor English speaker, and it's scary if this end result is after receiving help. From that, it's hard to trust that even proper sentences are correctly translated. People are free to practice as they see fit, but they shouldn't be uploading them as an official release. They aren't doing anyone a favor by releasing subpar work. The amount of times I've been halfway through a great series only to be cockblocked by some random ESL translator messing up twenty chapters is just staggering.