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    So I looked at ProtoformX's google drive and... Volume 1 is a mess. The sentences, paragraphs, spaces, and dialogues are not properly formatted.

    For example, look at page 12 of the pdf:

    It wasn't limited to magecraft. It wasn't limited to monsters
    those beyond humans
    .Inaworldof
    the obvious
    common sense
    , it was something everyone understood.


    And page 19:

    "What kind of demon are you?"
    "Oh, just your beloved, beloved step-sister
    little sister
    ."


    This is probably abundant throughout Volume 1, so please edit again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Twisted Rabbid View Post
    So I looked at ProtoformX's google drive and... Volume 1 is a mess. The sentences, paragraphs, spaces, and dialogues are not properly formatted.

    For example, look at page 12 of the pdf:

    It wasn't limited to magecraft. It wasn't limited to monsters
    those beyond humans
    .Inaworldof
    the obvious
    common sense
    , it was something everyone understood.


    And page 19:

    "What kind of demon are you?"
    "Oh, just your beloved, beloved step-sister
    little sister
    ."


    This is probably abundant throughout Volume 1, so please edit again.
    It seems this always happens with every usage of ruby text. In this case we have "those beyond humans (monsters)", "common sense (the obvious)", "little sister (step-sister)".
    Last edited by Spheromancer; July 24th, 2023 at 06:23 PM.
    >How is the Counterforce so useless?
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    Because, as the embodiment of humanity's self-preservation instinct, it procrastinates until problems are too big to ignore but also too big to deal with easily and safely.

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    thanks for the amazing translations!
    are there any epub/pdf for volume 5? thanks!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Twisted Rabbid View Post
    So I looked at ProtoformX's google drive and... Volume 1 is a mess. The sentences, paragraphs, spaces, and dialogues are not properly formatted.

    For example, look at page 12 of the pdf:

    It wasn't limited to magecraft. It wasn't limited to monsters
    those beyond humans
    .Inaworldof
    the obvious
    common sense
    , it was something everyone understood.


    And page 19:

    "What kind of demon are you?"
    "Oh, just your beloved, beloved step-sister
    little sister
    ."


    This is probably abundant throughout Volume 1, so please edit again.
    thank you for pointing this out, im working on fixing it right now

    - - - Updated - - -

    Quote Originally Posted by nakamurahkkn View Post
    thanks for the amazing translations!
    are there any epub/pdf for volume 5? thanks!
    The folder should be updated with volume 5 right now! I have also posted the PDF and EPUBs for volume 5 in the thread dedicated to finishing the translation of that volume

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    the formatting for volume 1 has now been fixed

    I remember going through all the other volumes beforehand to fix this issue in particular, so there shouldn't be anymore problems of the sort
    but if anyone does fine anymore formatting errors please let me know so I can fix them

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    The original links for epub/printable versions seem to be defunct. Can anyone reshare? Thanks!

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    no problem, here ya go

    drive dot google dot com /drive/folders/1QcTIGgWxHHjry_oueM23YEA0xTSmyK2l?usp=drive_link

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    Quote Originally Posted by TwilightsCall View Post
    Interlude

    Interlude



    -let us turn the clock back slightly.



    The day before.

    The second day Gray and her companions spent on the Rail Zeppelin.

    In the lobby of Norwich's main building on Slur Street, a furious voice rang out.

    "Whatever, just get out of my way! The only one I need to speak to is Reines El-Melloi Archisorte-"

    (Whew, that's a lot of blood) Reines thought with a scowl as the guest began to vomit.

    That was someone who would vomit blood from only a little exertion. Stand? Vomit. Walk? Vomit. Run? They'd look like a bloodstained zombie. While it looked fine enough from the outside, without hematopoietics, he'd be dead within a day.

    To be honest, at this point she just wanted to pretend she wasn't around, but it seemed that wouldn't work.

    After a while, the young man burst through her door, violin case in hand.

    "Miss! What is going on here-" he tried to say, before being interrupted by more vomiting.

    "First of all, sir, please clean that up."

    Offering only a cold reception, Reines tidied up the documents she had been looking over.

    About a third of the work of the Lord came to her like this. When her brother wasn't around, that number jumped to basically one hundred percent, so it typically left her in a desperate situation. And even though she technically had the time for this, this was someone she didn't want to give even a second to.

    "I'm afraid my brother is absent. If you would like to leave a message, I would be happy to take it for you."

    "No, not that! Why did my good friend Waver not tell me he was going to the Rail Zeppelin?!"

    "Because it's none of your business, probably."

    "No! As the person responsible for your Source Crest, and since you're using his body as collateral - no, just because I'm his friend, you have an obligation to tell me that much! That's why I told you that Waver was acting strange!"

    Puffing himself up, he struck his chest with a fist...apparently too hard, as it sent him into a coughing fit.

    So you're the one who gave him the money to make it to Japan for the Fourth Holy Grail War, she thought, though she didn't say anything. For someone as inexperienced and friendless as her brother had been at that time, it was impressive how much that decision had changed the course of the entire Clock Tower's history. To think that the history of magecraft was completely changed over the decision of whether to buy a ticket or not was enough to make one laugh, but the rest of history was like that too, wasn't it?

    That's right.

    At this point, this was the only person who called him Waver. The reason he hadn't been completely crushed when he took over the El-Melloi Classroom back then was this man alone.

    His name was Melvin Weins. He was the same age as her brother at around thirty. His colourless white hair and eyelashes gave the impression of an albino. With his pale blue eyes and frustratingly well put together features, he likely would have stood out even as a movie star. And on top of all of that, he belonged to a branch family of one of the Three Great Aristocratic families. If it hadn't been for his naturally weak body, who knows how far above his current position of a Fes ranked Tuner he would have reached?

    With a sigh, Reines shook her head.

    "Unfortunately, even I was only informed he was attending the Rail Zeppelin a few days ago. At any rate, a single invitation to that train only permits two attendants. Apparently he selected two of his students this time, so as you can see I've been quite busy with paperwork."

    "In that case, it can't be helped. I'll just have to go alone," the man said.

    In response, Reines tilted her head.

    "You? Alone? ...oh, you are-"

    "Yes! While I couldn't go for the Holy Grail War or those other recent incidents due to my condition, I've been feeling better recently. I should have no problem going out for a few days!"

    He flashed his brilliant white teeth.

    At the same time, he showed off a white envelope proudly.

    "Of course, my family went to all extremes to acquire an invitation to the Rail Zeppelin! Even by myself, I must go see Waver's sobbing face for myself!"

    That's right.

    This man was certainly Waver's "friend." But that didn't necessarily mean he was Waver's "ally." If that were the case, he never would have sent her brother off to participate in something as dangerous as the Holy Grail War. In a way, he was a greater intellectual criminal than even Reines, and a greater prankster than even Flat.

    "So, let's hurry! The sooner the better! The starting bell has already rung!

    With a bright voice, the young man - Melvin made his grand declaration.

    Outside the window, a helicopter he must have called, whipping up a powerful wind, floated into view.




    Afterword

    Afterword

    Makoto Sanda



    -a single look was like a poisoned arrow.

    That circulating poison was the essence of night.

    The love of heroes, the death of a great god, all as those eyes wished.

    Mystic Eyes.

    That alluring gadget starred in the opening work of the world of Type Moon.

    'As long as it lives, even if its God Himself, I can kill it.' Those Mystic Eyes of Death Perception, born by the main characters of Tsukihime and Kara no Kyoukai, fascinated many a reader.

    That was the rebirth of a myth, wasn't it?

    It would be no exaggeration to say the Evil Eye was the oldest magic humanity, and in that moment it gained new life. Even after ten years with my own work "Rental Magica," the lure of Mystic Eyes still pulls me strongly.

    That's why the setting of the
    Rail Zeppelin
    Mystic Eye Collecting Train
    was always one I quietly hoped would make it into the "Lord El-Melloi II's Case Files." Fortunately, since I had no plans to write it in another work should it fail to make it into this one, I was able to make it happen. ...huh? In Volume 1, I had said no one else planned on writing anything about Lord El-Melloi II, but didn't he show up as the main character in some FGO event? Adults don't lie. They are just, ever so rarely, wrong. After that, all I can say is that there are no plans.

    From here on out, there will be a few spoilers.


    --------------------Spoilers---------------------------


    From the beginning, I had hoped these Case Files would serve as a way to connect the old Type Moon with the new, but I feel like that came across stronger in this work.

    The Rail Zeppelin itself was also the same, but the "woman" that showed up in the latter half was someone modelled after the Fourth Holy Grail War Kinoko Nasu had vaguely drawn up even before giving the task of writing it to Gen Urobuchi. Beyond her gender, the idea of her chariot being drawn by a species of dragon was also part of the original idea. Of course, there are some necessary changes that will have to happen...from now on, I will have to do that myself.

    With Caules and Olgamarie, and even Waver's close friend that Reines alluded to a few times coming in at the end, with how much weight has been built up behind the scenes with the setting of the Clock Tower, I feel like I've barely been able to put a tenth of it on the page.


    -------------------End of Spoilers---------------------


    Keeping pace with a unique character like Lord El-Melloi II feels like carefully examining a terribly old, terrifyingly thick magic tome page by page. No man is an island, but especially in his case, he is wrapped up in so much thanks to the position of Lord being forced on him.

    If we just lined up the things he should know, and the people he should recognize by virtue of him being a Lord, I wonder how far that spider web would stretch? My wish is that this novel will help unravel that mystery, while maintaining an enchanting tale.

    The series has sort of reached a turning point here.

    With this, the second half of "Lord El-Melloi II's Case Files" will begin. Please look forward to watching as Lord El-Melloi II, along with Gray, Flat, and the rest of the El-Melloi Classroom, come to terms with the new incidents they will be facing.

    Finally, I would like to share my appreciation for Mineji Sakamoto, for coming up with so many new character designs for me, Kiyomune Miwa for courteously investigating and explaining the complicated matters of magecraft for me, Yuuichiro Higashide and Hikaru Sakurai for working with me on the minor adjustments to the characters of Caules and Olgamarie that appeared in their many works, Ryogo Narita, and finally Kinoko Nasu, OK SG, and the rest of the staff at Type Moon.

    I hope to see you again this winter.


    June, 2016

    While playing "Witch on the Holy Night."


    PS: Some particularly avid fans of Type Moon may have noticed a 'typo' in the Kanji for the name Mystic Eye Collecting Train. This change was an intentional, stylistic choice. Please think of it as just a weird Japanese translation.


    And with that we are done Volume 4.

    Volume 5 will start whenever I feel like it, which means I probably won't even look at it until next week at the earliest.
    Who is OK SG?

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    A writer at TM. His biggest contributions are the Mohutsukai no Hako series and making Sei Shonagon for FGO.

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    It's worth noting that OKSG's primary role at TM was always handling the website. Also does a lot of other miscellaneous work as well, such as often doing the designs and layouts for the material books. Writing is OKSG's most minor contribution, in that sense.

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