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    Fire Emblem - Sword Edition

    Fire Emblem - Sword Edition

    CHAPTER 1 : Prelude to the Sword

    Emmeryn looked towards the horizon from her perch on the cliff, her emerald cape decorated with colours of royal gold and earth brown swayed to the whims of the warm winds , her pair of tranquil emerald green eyes reflecting the clear blue of Plegian sky, her crown gave the illusion of a divine golden halo as it reflected the sunlight. To her people she was the epitome of one selected to represent peace.

    Yet her mind and heart was anything but tranquil.

    The scene was anything but peaceful.

    Her eyes tore away from the sky to now witness the cruelty of the battlefield, her mind recalling vivid imagery of their victory and her safe retreat, clawed out of their hands by the summoning of Risen by the hands of the mysterious Dark Flier, the dead called to claim more dead.

    She could only watch as Phila, her closest friend and captain of the brave Pegasus knights being littered with arrows following the same fate of the fallen Pegasus Knight platoon.

    Her last words were asking of forgiveness, when she should be the on asking. Her inability to stop the war now had cost her friend her life among countless others.

    With the fortune of victory overturned to the Mad Kings grasp, Gangrel made the offer for her life in exchange for the Fire Emblem. Where she should have been their strength as Exalt, she was now their weakness as hostage.
    She could only watch her beloved brother, torn to make the decision, his duty to the people of Ylisse or her life.
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    Chrom was too stubborn to let her die and he would leap to his death to prevent it. The Shepherds under combination of his leadership and Robin's brilliant tactics had avoided certain death and face innumerable odds and overcome it all.

    So why could they not overcome this? Why had he failed? No one could have foreseen the summoning of Risen archers in the last stage of their plan. Under the threat of undead archers, if he took action then Emm would die, if he retreated Emm would be executed and it was certainly an option he wouldn't even consider.

    So was it fate that dictated their loss? Even after they had prevented her assassination with the help of the mysterious swordswoman Marth, it seemed fate would have her dead.

    He could no longer see a way to grasp victory, was the only way to save her to trust in the Mad Kings promise? To trust he would give Emm safety in exchange for the Fire Emblem? He was no fool, and yet this was his only hope, but he knew the Fire Emblem was too important to be handed over.

    "We can't give up! The moment we give up... no. There has to be a way!" Robin voice of determination resounded deeply with Chrom, and yet even with the confidence and never ending optimism from his tactician, Chrom doubts still prevailed.

    "If there is, I can't see it…Oh Naga!" he desperately wanted to believe there was a way without sacrificing the Fire Emblem, but after hearing his own voice confirm that such a path was non-existent. Drowning in his own pessimistic thoughts, he couldn't help but pray to Naga.

    Be damned if he won't and be damned he does.
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    Gangrel was feeling elation in his turnabout of fortune, if their tactician didn't play fair, then his own whore of a tactician certainly didn't. With Ylisseans cornered like the miserable rats that they were, ordering their deaths and simply plucking the Fire Emblem from their prince's dead body should be a simple thing to do.

    But the humiliation bought by their tactician ...Robin was it? Bah, remembering names of insignificant mongrels was something he was never good at, especially those of enemy traitors who were about to die. Why waste his memory on it?
    Nonetheless, his humiliation was not forgotten nor was it forgiven; it was merely added to the never ending list of crimes Ylisseans had to pay for.

    But no… he would give them hope, he only wanted their precious prince himself hand over the Fire Emblem. Then he would personally knight the prince himself for doing the right thing and spare the prince of humiliation by his own hands. Who said he was heartless? If anyone was heartless it would be the prince, though it may be due to knighting him by a sword through his heart.

    And after he was done knighting the prince, he would execute the Exalt but not before he forced her to watch the death of her people. After all it was only fair for him to see them off with the same courtesy of their father. Perhaps he should start a crusade to 'cleanse' Ylisse of filth, and what better to do it with fire; perhaps it would be even better to do it in Grima's name, yup burn them all.

    With now added fire to call his plan to fruition, he began his countdown "I will count to three! Throw down your weapons, or your exalt becomes the world's largest quiver. One! Two! Thr—"

    "Gangrel, hold! ...You win. "Only to be interrupted by a frustrated and desperate shout from the prince. Oh well he had found it was certainly amusing to see his confidence gone to be replaced with guilt, and thus he allowed himself to form a big shit-eating grin of his face… how he couldn't wait to see the face they make when hope was gone too. "Everyone lay down yo—"

    "No wait!"

    It seems that interruptions run deep in the blood of exalts, because now it seems peace preaching hypocrite wants to get in the way.

    "SILENCE!" he would have none of it!

    It seems she didn't get the message, "KingGangrel, is there no hope you will listen to reason?"

    Reason…. REASON!?

    She dare ask of reason! The hypocrisy and irony of it all! Where was reason when the previous exalt burnt down Phelgia and its people? Where was reason when her father drowned them in Naga's flames!? All he remembers, reason was the sound of crackling flames.

    As it so happens reason would have him, as king, unify Phelgia for the coming wars. What way better than to have the hated exalt's head on a pike with Phelgia's banner? Revenge is the answer, and it certainly made for good stress relief.

    "You mean listen to more of your sanctimonious babble?! I think not. No, all I want is to hear a THUNK of arrows, and a SPLAT as you hit the ground. Take one, long, last look from your perch. You do so enjoy looking down on people... Then prepare to meet the ground, and your maker! "He reminded them of their situation and put the dastards in their place, all the while dismissing the notion of possible peace.

    He wanted nothing more to get his plan started and his damn point across through their thick incompetent skulls as well as a few arrows.

    "That is, unless if someone were to give me the Emblem... NOW!" he shouted, finally having lost patience and mirroring his frustration the prince too shouted, although he suspected that it wasn't because he didn't have the damn Fire Emblem already!
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    She had failed.

    Gangrel's response of further death threats and insults only confirmed that he is blinded by hatred and disdain toward those of Ylisse and the line of the Exalt, and he was drowning in his ocean of insanity from his lust for War.

    She knew he would use the actions of her father, the previous Exalt, to justify his actions. As ruler the Mad King only sought to make flames of hatred burn brighter and spread further like a wildfire among the people of Pelgia.

    His action will only fuel the cycle of hatred and will wage wars to further drive the wedge between Ylisse and Pelgia.

    Was there nothing she could do to end the war peacefully without losing the Fire Emblem?

    " ALL RIGHT! All right.." Her little brother yelled to the King. There was clear frustration in his voice along with a tone of resignation.

    "Emm, I know you won't approve, but this is my final decision. MAYBE someday we'll face a crisis where MAYBE the Emblem would've helped. But I know for a fact that Ylisse needs you, today!"

    Yet when he turned to face her, she saw from what little she could see from the cliff, determination in his posture
    "The people need their Exalt... And we need our sister. If those dark days should come, we'll face them together." Upon hearing her little brother's words, she closed her eyes.

    She hadn't failed yet.

    She found strength in his words, not because he was pleading for her safety but in his word he confirmed his belief, the strength of peoples bonds together. By giving the Fire Emblem away he truly believed the people Ylisse could face their foretold future darkness with the strength of their bond alone.

    He believed that their bonds held more power over their predetermined fates.

    Her little brother had grown into a splendid person and with charisma to spare he would make for a fine leader, and with his friends or the Shepherds she had no doubt under their influence he would be an exceptional Exalt.

    After all she was elated when he had chosen Robin, someone of Phelgia background as his closest friend and trusted him enough to make him the Shepherd's tactician.

    It proved his heart was stronger than his sword.

    Lissa, her little sister, her endless supply of energy, her pranks, her desire to prove herself as princess and her refreshing openness towards others. She was no doubt her ball of healing sunshine. She was proud to have a sister like her.

    She loved her people, they were full of love, for they found strength and forgiveness to overcome hatred and they strove with her to produce an era of prosperity and peace. If one would visit Ylisse, they would see the wonders her kingdom holds that were its people.

    So with new found clarity and strength, she knew what she had to do regardless it be the right choice or not.
    She knew what she had to protect.

    "Thank you Chrom" She thanked Chrom with smile. Her emerald eyes now open and filled with purpose.

    She took a step forward.
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    Chrom was now alarmed and even more on edge with Emm's action. Why did she smile like that? Why had she thanked him?

    Was she not ashamed of his weakness?

    In the short moment, his mind was filled with questions and confusion.

    Emm was acting weird, his instincts made his stomach uneasy, almost like a child in anticipating of misfortune befalling their parents from not arriving home.

    Unease filled his entire being when she took a step closer to the edge.
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    Robin during the entire exchange between Chrom, Emmeryn and the dastard king, had been desperately trying to formulate a plan for a way out of their predicament. Yet the odds of now rescuing Emmeryn without sacrificing Feroxi soldiers and the Shepherds were infinitely close to zero.

    His mind couldn't come up with a solution, not without buying more time and solutions using sacrifices were no solution at all to this tactician. He felt even queasier when he saw Emmeryn take a step forward to the edge of the cliff.
    Yet with Pelgian enemy reinforcement beginning to appear, their chances of retreat were sliming by the seconds. So now Robin was faced with the choice of forced retreat.

    The imaginary scale weighing the one life versus the many, showed itself in the tactician's mind, and yet he couldn't find himself to issue the order, for on the other side of the scale a promise weighed in favour to the life of one. To protect what was dear to Lissa and Chrom, to bring their sister back home safely.

    To him the imaginary scale strained under pressure of the weight of lives and promises.

    He had to distract Gangrel and his dark flier tactician. In their moment of distraction he needed to move all his archers and mages into range so they can keep the Risen archers distracted.

    Yet even with this high risk and terrible tactic, there was a beginning presumption of having a distraction. One they didn't have and he couldn't even think of one that kept the enemies occupied long enough. Hell, he even realised he didn't even have a follow up plan! No, not yet he couldn't give up yet!

    There had to be a way… just… he couldn't see it yet!

    And then she spoke to the world "Plegians! I ask that you hear the truth of my words! War will win you nothing but sadness and pain, both inside your borders and out."

    Yes! Help from where you least expect it! God, this was perfect for a distraction. In his short memories, Emmeryn always had the penchant of captivating her audience, now he hoped the unending charisma flowed through her speech would distract the enemy long enough.

    He would improvise the holes in the plan and backup plans would be made on the fly too. He was to waste no time. Taking the opportunity, he began shouting orders to Miriel, Tharja, Virion and Ricken.

    "Free yourselves from this hatred! From this cycle of pain and vengeance." He began to make formations to bolster their defence for attacks from behind and their flanks before they were to move…

    "Do what you must... As I will do. See now that one selfless act has the power to change the world!" And with that statement Robins thought process grinded to a stop.

    "Oh Gods" Robin exclaimed quietly to himself on having the horrifying realisation on what the selfless act was.

    His eyes widened and he paled as his skin began to match his snow white hair.

    He barely noticed Chrom already running past the enemies to the cliff already having come to the same conclusion that he had.


    Emmeryn's own imaginary scaled had tipped towards the lives of many.

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    "Emm, no! No!" Chrom screamed in despair while sprinting toward the cliff in full realisation.

    The Shepherds now desperately fought to prevent enemies from following Chrom that were not already watching Emmeryn action with morbid interest and confusion.

    Even Gangrel was deathly still, watching in anticipation for the inevitable that were to follow. His tactician too was under the same spell.

    His legs muscles burning and tearing under the strain of sudden movement, yet adrenaline fuelled by fear allowed him to continue up the steps.

    His breath short and frantic as he desperately sought to avert what will come to pass as he leaped towards the bottom cliff.

    His right arm stretched outwards to try and grasp what he wanted to save.

    They all watched as she finally approached the very edge of the cliff.

    Chrom ran faster.
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    Having arrived at the very edge, she steeled her resolve. She would die here along with Pelgia's rage and with this final act of hers they would be able to retreat while keeping the Fire Emblem.

    This was the only way she could free them from hatred and give hope both to Pelgia and Ylisse citizens.

    Emmeryn closed her eyes.


    She dared not opened her again, lest her resolve waver.


    It wasn't the fear of death.


    She couldn't bear to see the desperation and hurt she was causing to her siblings and her people.


    She reminded herself that her death has purpose, to protect.


    And she would do it with a smile.


    She took the final step.


    She fell.


    Time seemed to slowdown as she began her descent, for her and for everyone watching.

    She could feel her body tell her she was falling headfirst; her heart was strangely calm as the winds began to whisper in her ears. Images of Chrom and Lissa smiling in her memory flashed through her mind.
    In what she believed to be her final moments she found herself thinking 'Chrom, Lissa and everyone….know that I love you'

    Then she heard a deafening roar that resembled the sound of glass breaking behind her.

    To everyone watching, it looked like a piece of the Pelgia sky seemed to shatter above the cliff, forming a crack that revealed a kaleidoscope of colours and from its infinite swirls of colour, a red and black figure blurred as it shot out.

    Her eyes snapped opened instinctively.


    As sudden as the unexpected noise and the primal fear she was forced to acknowledge in falling, she felt an arm wrapped around her waist.


    She heard the two words that were spoken to defy fate.


    "TRACE ON!"
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    Well you sure know how to make a good first impression, but I am afraid I am missing some context. Hopefully, the next entry gets better.

    I am guessing, from what I have seen, the story consists of "Shirou saves Emmerlyn from her untimely death" and goes from there. Not a bad premise, but what will you do with it?

    Other than some grammatical errors, I think the story is told rather compellingly. You especially had Gangrel's POV down pat. It makes it clear to the reader that he is an utter dastard while, showing his emotions in a way that makes him sympathetic. The errors do not make the story unreadable, but you might consider getting a beta.

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    CHAPTER 2 : The Sword's arrival

    It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single human, cannot defeat a monster.


    It's a truth Shirou Emiya deliberately ignores.


    He faces, Venkalth Grim, a Dead Apostle. A being that glide in oceans of human blood to sustain their existence and quell their boredom. Thus, Venkalth could be described nothing short of being a monster. But he knows, if he allows this monster to live then, more lives would be lost, lives he would save.

    Thus monster and human dance under the ominous moonlight, as spark continue to fly like pieces of exploding shrapnel, creating fireworks celebrating grandeur of battle.

    He parries the attack to his head. He blocks the blow to gouge his heart. He ducks under the claws aimed to slice his eyes. His twin blades dance against the viscous arcs drawn to sever his limbs.

    His eyes, bloodshot and wide, strain to keep up with the after images of slashes made by the monster. His body moves faster than his thoughts. He throws the twin swords, spinning disks of black and white curved towards the Dead Apostles neck.

    They were batted away with pathetic ease.

    The monster closes the gap. Shirou feels an impact like a sledgehammer. His floating body is knocked out of the hallway into the grand hall.

    He should have died from receiving a kick that breaks the sound barrier, but his magic and mind's eye allowed him to jump back at the very last moment reducing the damage.

    Picking himself off the cold marble floor as quickly as possible, his blurry vision was focused on the monster casually walking down the stairs.

    Venkalth didn't even have a scratch on him.

    "I grow tired of this. I do admit you have greatly amused me, which is quite a commendable feat for such a weak human."Venkalth praised.

    "And your projections are most peculiar. They do not break when they should indeed be quite fragile. I must say its waste to kill you…or rather you would make a fascinating familiar."Venkalth mused as the tomes floating around him sparked to life, crackling with lightning belonging to the barely restrained rage of a thunder god.

    Shirou spared him no response, he couldn't afford to. His enemy was moments away from unleashing arcs of devastating lightning. Projecting the twin swords in an instant, Kanshou and Bakuya were held at the ready.

    "Negare Procul" Venkalth instantly closed the gap. Electricity condensed into his palm aimed at Shirou's face.

    "Exsolvo, mei Iracundia!" Words shake the air and fill the castle hall with blinding light.

    High level thunder magic smashes into the twin swords, the sheer force of impact pushing Shirou backwards as his heels grind defiantly against the stone floor. His bones creak under the strain.

    Spinning on his heels, he deflects the pillar of lightning. For every vaporizing blast he blocked several more were conjured. Windows shattered, stone floors bore craters and pillars broke, lightning falling like rain brought the castle hall closer to ruin.

    His only chance at beating his enemy meant facing this storm of lighting head on. He had to wait for his enemy to let his guard down, only then did he have the smallest chance at victory. Having engaged his enemy in close combat, the monster had no clue on his ability to fire swords like projectiles. That would be his trump card.
    Gritting his teeth, he continued his dance of desperation.

    Like a predator that cornered and toyed with a helpless rat, Venkalth watched in amusement as his prey rolled and twisted desperately in the dirt and debris to avoid his attacks.

    It was one his favourite past time, he would engage prey in combat and show them how outclass they were in strength and then further cement despair when he unleashes his magic. It was an appropriate punishment for those foolish enough to challenge someone who transcends humanity.

    He supposed it was enough now, it was time to end the fool's life and make him his servant. Huge amount of power accumulated into his hand.

    "Percutio-!" Venkalth's cruel smirk and amusement were replaced with shock and pain, while abruptly stopping his Aria midway.

    His right shoulder and arm were pierced with black keys, however what should have been slender long throwing rapiers were instead broad unwieldy claymores. The sacraments of the church then exploded and Venkalth at that moment only knew of agony.


    "GAAAARH!" Venkalth screamed while gripping his still blistering stump, his face was contorted with disdain and pain.


    His crimson eyes, filled with bloodlust, snapped towards the focus of his impending wrath only to panic at what he saw next.


    Shirou was jumping backwards while readying an huge sleek jet black bow toward his enemy.


    His target Venkalth


    His 'arrow', the holy sword of assured victory.


    "May her light forever shine"


    Pouring every ounce of energy in to the Nobel Phantasm he called its true name.


    "Caliburn!"


    The 'arrow' soars through the air, leaving a golden scorching light in its trail.


    An instant later it reaches a desperate Venkalth rushing a spell.


    An instant later all sound is lost.


    Innumerable explosions go off at once and the grand hall is lost in white light. All Shirou could feel was the scorching heat on his skin and the tremor of the earth, before the shockwave blast him out the window joining the debris in mid air.

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    When Shirou came to consciousness, he found he was laid spread out castle garden floor. He was short of breath, his flesh was torn, his limbs felt numb, his wrist possibly broken, and yet despite all that there was a feeling of satisfaction.

    His work as freelancer/Hero of Justice lead him to investigate reports of human trafficking. After months of chasing leads and traveling the world lead him to Venkalth. He suspected he was using human lives a catalyst for a ritual or as blood bags.

    Finding a Dead Apostle lair was extremely difficult. If it wasn't for the information he got from the church, he might have never found it in the first place.


    It seems that Venkalth was getting stronger by attempting to create tomes that acted similar to magic crests. The thought, that a being with huge amount of mana capacity being supplied with a huge amount of A ranks spells that can be casted in seconds would raise alarms for anybody. The fact he was trying to build a library of them was terrifying.

    How many lives had been consumed as catalyst for creating something that powerful?


    Well Venkalth was dead now, honestly it was extremely lucky that Venkalth had severely under estimated him and blinded by his own ego. If he hadn't the battle would have taken a very different route. Well he had experience fighting powerful foes that had that inhibition.


    He probably hadn't expected him to use black keys overloaded with prana let alone a broken phantasm. The exploding black key was enough to momentarily stop his relentless barrage of lighting by causing him extreme pain. It gave him enough time to materialise the black bow and charge Caliburn.


    Venkalth couldn't revive even with the curse of resurrection, not after being incinerated completely if the smouldering remains of the castle hall was anything to go by.


    Thus he completed his mission.


    He supposed it was time to get back with the others and see how they fared in getting the survivors out of the dungeon in the castle.


    A small sigh escaped is mouth as he gazed upon on the new moon.


    Why did the castle have to be in Yakutsk of all places?


    If he hadn't projected the shroud of martin then the months of camping would having been insufferable. Well at least the castle garden was warm; it had some sort of bounded field that replicated the effects of a green house.


    He picked himself of the ground, numb limbs obeying reluctantly. The garden was testament to the luxury Vankelth possessed, probably from the mining business Vankelth was dabbling in, having exotic flowers and pillars of marble and statues, complete with a strange stone gate in the middle, surrounded by pulsating formalcraft circles…


    …wait what?


    Is this an artefact Venkalth collected? He knew according to the information gathered, Venkalth was a collector of sorts, but this is not what he was expecting. Taking cautious steps toward the strange stone gate like artefact, he noticed it had a strange yet distinctly familiar gem stone embedded at the top of it. This gem stone looked like a rainbow coloured eye with a slit for pupil… eerily serpentine.


    He walked cautiously towards the strange stone gate construct. Was it a portal of some sort?


    He was bought out of his musing when the ethereal blue lights of the formal craft circles intensified; the gem on the gate began glowing with the colours of the kaleidoscope. Ancient unreadable runes began to appear all over its stone structure before the gate itself started glowing revealing a portal stained with a myriad of colours.


    Faced with an unexplainable situation, his instinct was to jump back as far away as possible while throwing an Anti-Thaumaturgy Noble Phantasm at it.


    Before he could even act on his instincts he was engulfed in light by the mystery before him.

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    Somewhere in another dimension:

    Naga felt a change in the flow of fate. A being had entered this timeline much like the children of future past. Her instincts was to guide this person to the Shepherds and thus she focused her energy on bringing him to place where they would need this disturbance in fate the most.

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    The next second he opened his eyes, he was falling from an incredible height, and not without company.

    His mind was on autopilot from the shock, 'survive and save' was his only instinct. He somehow caught up to the falling woman and grabbed her by the waist.



    "TRACE ON!"


    Magic Circuits flare to life upon his aria being spoken. A few more seconds and they would die.


    They would hit the ground and become like tofu thrown against a speeding truck.


    His heart beats faster, thought process speeds up, and perceived time slows down almost to a halt.


    The world loses its colour as his mind races to filter against the countless weapons to be brought into existence.

    Fragments of light gather in his outstretched right hand as he pulls the sword from his inner world.


    His hands now grasp the familiar weight of a nameless chained nail dagger.


    He whipped his arm. The dagger thrust forward with a speed of a coiled snake. Chains wrapped around the cliff's edge.

    The dagger's fang embedded itself in the rocks. Loose chains in his grasp suddenly become taut.

    "Gah-!"A strained grunt escapes from his throat as his body strains under the pressure of sudden deceleration. His palm suffers under the abuse of friction as the momentum still tried to drag them to their deaths.

    Time resumes itself as he felt himself finally come to a stop.

    They were dangling a few meters above ground. He finally lets go of the chains.


    Steel boots stood on earthen floor.


    He had made it, albeit with his right arm and shoulder being further damaged and almost all of his internal reserve of Od spent.


    The nameless chain dagger faded into moults of lights having performed its purpose.


    A well-deserved sigh of relief escaped his lips as he rearranged his hold on the woman into a 'princess carry' hold.


    This is the first time he managed to get a good look at the woman who thought it was a good idea to bungee jump of a cliff without a rope. She looked to be in her mid-twenties. She had golden locks of hair fashioned in to drills, peachy white skin, and was that a tattoo on her forehead?…


    …Wait!


    Where was he? Why was this happening?


    …This...was way too much for Shirou to handle all at once!


    He went from enduring a fight against a dead apostle in one of the coldest places in the world, to finding a strange artefact and then somehow activating it and then being teleported well over 100 feet off the ground to find another woman in free fall and then to land in the middle of desert while being surrounded by an army in possibly another world!?


    Just which deity did he piss off so much to be cursed with this kind of luck?


    "Emm!" He was bought of his inner monologue, when he heard a mop of blue hair with a cape running towards him at full speed.


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    Chrom had never known feelings of this intensity before. His earlier despair had caved way for the sheer relief he felt in that his sister death was averted.


    He would thank Naga later for answering his silent pleas and the strange looking warrior for rescuing his sister. Everyone
    else might have been still in a state of shock from the events that had just transpired but he had to get the two of them out of the range of the Risen archers.


    All this time he had never stopped running towards Emm. He hadn't allowed himself to. He was only a few feet away from them.


    "Emm!" His voice had caused Emm and Emm's saviour heads to snap towards him.


    "Hurry!" Chrom had no time to even pull his sister into a hug nor even to give unending thanks to the red headed saviour who held her, let alone ask his name.


    It seems Robin and the Shepherds was capitalising on the momentary shock by blasting the Risen archers with a combination of magic, arrows and throwing lances in a desperate bid to help them escape.


    "We have to run back to the others while they are distracted!"

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    On one hand, this intrigues me.
    On the other, you really need a beta. There were several rather noticeable errors in the second chapter.
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    I am the bone of my bullet
    Severing is my body and binding is my blood
    I have created bullets from my ashes
    Unknown to mercy
    nor known to hope
    I have stopped even time to win my battles
    yet, these hands will never save anyone
    And so, as I pray
    Innate Time Control


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    Cool, some Fire Emblem! Sadly I haven't played Awakening. I'm aware of the major spoilers, but should I play to fully appreciate, or will you be able to spin this story so that anyone reading can understand it upon entry?
    I'm not famous. My conscience is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Archetype EMIYA View Post
    Cool, some Fire Emblem! Sadly I haven't played Awakening. I'm aware of the major spoilers, but should I play to fully appreciate, or will you be able to spin this story so that anyone reading can understand it upon entry?
    You should play anyways because Awakening is awesome.
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    I am the bone of my bullet
    Severing is my body and binding is my blood
    I have created bullets from my ashes
    Unknown to mercy
    nor known to hope
    I have stopped even time to win my battles
    yet, these hands will never save anyone
    And so, as I pray
    Innate Time Control


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    Quote Originally Posted by Carpe_Noctem View Post
    You should play anyways because Awakening is awesome.
    So Awesome that it literally Saved The Franchise.

    To those that don't know, I am being totally serious here.

    The reason they crammed so many ideas into it is because they were told by Nintendo Higher Ups that if sales were not good this was going to be the last game in the Franchise for the Foreseeable Future.

    Thankfully it preformed well beyond expectations.

    Honestly I am worried as to whether or not the new game, in all of it's versions, can measure up to Awakening.

    ...........And now this story makes me want to revisit one of my many ideas that has been sadly put on hold because I am a procrastinator. Ocarina of Time/Majora's Mask Link and his unknown adventures that led him to end up loosing an eye. Since he is a Dimension Traveler the idea was he ended up in a Fire Emblem Setting for a time.

    I considered several of them put never decided on which setting to use.

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    Now back on topic I can't wait to see Shirou's reactions to how widespread the use of magic is in this new world, as well as how he he adjusts to being in a full scale war.

    Shirou in most post Grail War stories is generally portrayed as a "Loner" in his activities. Everyone has a different way of writing how he interacts with people during this period of his life, and being involved in a war between nations is not something that has been done all that often.

    Given all of the interesting and eccentric characters in Fire Emblem Awakening I look forward to seeing Shirou's interaction with the cast.
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    Don't have a 3DS for it, and most emulators for it are crap. Yes I know it was almost the final entry in the series and I'm glad it continues, but I'd have preferred more political intrigue a la Genealogy of the Holy War, though the classic battle casualty is really the defining feature. In any case I'll wait for an answer to my question.
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    Thanks Guys for the response

    @ArchtypeEMIYA : Well I think its best to play Fire Emblem Awakening. I mean not only did you enjoy the fire emblem tactics etc, you could now ship pairs and get future children out of them etc.

    Which means Shirou is getting a future child , its a shepherd thing.

    As for the character interactions between shirou and many casts in Fire emblem is one planing out right now. The fact that he is bang in the middle of a war after an excruciating fight is something I have to think about.

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