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    Posting stuff before it's finished affects me negatively but, I'm an ass who wants to necro her own thread so, a sneak of a recent thing I'm working on.
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    闇色の六王権 The Dark Six Polly's Avatar
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    Pwetty....
    My attempts at being a (fanfic) writer:

    Eclipse - a Saber Alter oneshot
    Requiem for a Race - Altrouge and Ortenrosse hunt the TAs ( 1/3 chapters, discontinued )
    Memories of a King - a 'Saber Origins' story ( 8/? chapters, discontiuned )
    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
    Boundary of Loneliness - Ryougi Shiki/Alphard Al-Shua oneshot. Lemon-flavoured

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    Good neck job

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    Those are some promising lines, there. Good luck on the rest!
    <NEW FIC!> Revolution #9: Somewhere out there, there's a universe in which your mistakes and failures never happened, and all you wished for is true. How hard would you fight to make that real?

    [11:20:46 AM] GlowStiks: lucina is supes attractive
    [12:40] Lace: lucina is amazing
    [12:40] Neir: lucina is pretty much flawless

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    STILL TRYINGGGG!

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    That is a good Nines right there.

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    Thank you! Only the best of attempts for my boy.

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    Neither of these are TM I'm aware, but I want to minimally update this thread/archive them anyway.

    Reposting my 9S directly since the twitter link got bungled

    9S, NieR:Automata


    and something (somewhat) more recent, a portrait of the lovely lady in my avatar

    Maid, The House in Fata Morgana

    I'm quite happy with both all things considered, but they're far from perfect and I still have a lot to learn. Plus I'm really unproductive and slow but that's being low energy and old for you

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    Both are very pretty! :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    Neither of these are TM I'm aware, but I want to minimally update this thread/archive them anyway.

    Reposting my 9S directly since the twitter link got bungled

    9S, NieR:Automata


    and something (somewhat) more recent, a portrait of the lovely lady in my avatar

    Maid, The House in Fata Morgana

    I'm quite happy with both all things considered, but they're far from perfect and I still have a lot to learn. Plus I'm really unproductive and slow but that's being low energy and old for you
    Those are pretty good, I like the monochromatic coloring.

    The second character seems to have a bit of a long face and/or nose (a pretty common issue). What I would recommend is to measure out the faces of some people in photos using the height/width of their eyes then do the same with gour art, you should find that most noses are around 2 eye-heights long from the bottom of the eye (it has been a while since I last performed this exercise so I might be off).

    This sort of relative measurement helps everything stay within realistic proportions. Of course if you want something less realistic you could apply the same metric to an exaggerated style with some number adjustments.
    I think it goes: "I don't trust people like me." — no, that's not it…

    Quote Originally Posted by Namelesss
    Quote me on this, 10 years from now TM will not release a global VN work.

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    Thanks!

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