Create-A-Servant 2

[Bird of Hermes]

As for how I'd implement these, I can't really say other than what I have up there.

Regarding the Armour then, just go back and add that when worn, the wearer has Charisma at C rank and/or masochistic constitution.

All this extra stuff you just said is good but it would help the sheet further if it was in it.

[Historia]

Regarding the Armour then, just go back and add that when worn, the wearer has Charisma at C rank and/or masochistic constitution.

All this extra stuff you just said is good but it would help the sheet further if it was in it.

I already gave her Inspiration, which is Charisma on a lesser scale. I dunno what masochistic constitution is supposed to be. As for what I have added: the full version of that dialogue with Fontaine in the lore.

Spoiler:

Fontaine: Tell me about this ring; what is the significance behind the words 'Jhesus Maria'? Was it made of gold?
Jeanne: I have no idea.
Fontaine: Is it true you held and stared at it fondly before carrying out some war-deed?
That you whispered to it?
Jeanne: No? It was a gift from my parents. I looked at it because it reminded me of them;
that they're always right there with me. When I had it, I touched St. Catherine.
Fontaine: Where's your ring now?
Jeanne: You took it, jackass.
Fontaine: Where did you touch St. Catherine?
Jeanne: That's for me to know and you never to find out.
Fontaine: You ever exchange hugs and kisses with her? What about St. Margaret?
Jeanne: Yes. Hugs, with both of them.
Fontaine: Did they smell nice?
Jeanne: No, they smelt like horse-shit. Of course they smelt nice.
Fontaine: Did you feel anything when you did? Were they warm?
Jeanne: I couldn't have known I hugged them if I didn't feel them.
Fontaine: How did you hug them?
Jeanne: Normally?
Fontaine: How do I know you're telling the truth about all this?
Jeanne: Because I swore it?
Fontaine: What about your armor. Did you give it to the Church for them to worship?
Jeanne: No.
Fontaine: What happened to it?
Jeanne: The English destroyed it. You did.
Fontaine: Then, the sword. Tell me about your sword.
Jeanne: Go fuck yourself.

[4score7years]

According to the wiki, it's a skill that increases one's chances to be targeted by the enemy. I'd quote it directly but I'm on mobile so just look it up here yourself: http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Skill

of course the wiki isn't an excellent source but I'm pretty sure it is right about that.

[Historia]

of course the wiki isn't an excellent source but I'm pretty sure it is right about that.

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I'll brainstorm something, then link back when I do.

On a related note, why does everything have to be interesting? Can't we just go back to simpler times when swords could shoot laser beams?

[WhatShouldNotBe]

I don't know, the last time he met a warrior woman with a magical garnment didn't go very well for said woman.

Meh, that's because all of that women's girlfriends felt like Herc was a bad match for her, and threw a fit and tried to kill him.

that wouldn't happen here.

I already gave her Inspiration, which is Charisma on a lesser scale. I dunno what masochistic constitution is supposed to be. As for what I have added: the full version of that dialogue with Fontaine in the lore.

Spoiler:

Fontaine: Tell me about this ring; what is the significance behind the words 'Jhesus Maria'? Was it made of gold?
Jeanne: I have no idea.
Fontaine: Is it true you held and stared at it fondly before carrying out some war-deed?
That you whispered to it?
Jeanne: No? It was a gift from my parents. I looked at it because it reminded me of them;
that they're always right there with me. When I had it, I touched St. Catherine.
Fontaine: Where's your ring now?
Jeanne: You took it, jackass.
Fontaine: Where did you touch St. Catherine?
Jeanne: That's for me to know and you never to find out.
Fontaine: You ever exchange hugs and kisses with her? What about St. Margaret?
Jeanne: Yes. Hugs, with both of them.
Fontaine: Did they smell nice?
Jeanne: No, they smelt like horse-shit. Of course they smelt nice.
Fontaine: Did you feel anything when you did? Were they warm?
Jeanne: I couldn't have known I hugged them if I didn't feel them.
Fontaine: How did you hug them?
Jeanne: Normally?
Fontaine: How do I know you're telling the truth about all this?
Jeanne: Because I swore it?
Fontaine: What about your armor. Did you give it to the Church for them to worship?
Jeanne: No.
Fontaine: What happened to it?
Jeanne: The English destroyed it. You did.
Fontaine: Then, the sword. Tell me about your sword.
Jeanne: Go fuck yourself.

Wow, Fontaine is a special kind of asshole.

[Master of Chaos]

Spoiler:

Drifters Jeanne is better than any Fate version tbh

universal truth...

Any Jeanne is better than Fate Jeanne

[Historia]

universal truth...

Any Jeanne is better than Fate Jeanne

#fuckblondehairedJeannes

The majority are still trash.

[Alexcoene]

#fuckblondehairedJeannes

The majority are still trash.

I would make a comment about your fc, but I can't even tell what color her hair is supposed to be.

[4score7years]

On a related note, why does everything have to be interesting? Can't we just go back to simpler times when swords could shoot laser beams?

We already have GO for that /s

In seriousness, it's just a way to help your sheets stand out. It doesn't have to be much, but even just a beam attack that "does a thing" or "has a side-effect" or whatever is more memorable to read than a regular beam sword. It's sort of like adding "personality." A character with an interesting personality has quirks or flaws or whatever, and those characters are more interesting to read about and stand out more than characters lacking in those things. In the same way, adding flavor to your sheets makes them seem more memorable and interesting.

[Bird of Hermes]

#fuckblondehairedJeannes

The majority are still trash.

Blame Takeuchi

[Alexcoene]

Blame Takeuchi

Pretty sure he's not the first one to draw a Jeanne with blonde hair.

Also, about Drifters

Fate Joan is thousand times better than the generic crazy girl that look like she came out of a bad edgy fanfiction.

[Adlet]

universal truth...

Any Jeanne is better than Fate Jeanne

Must be a different universe than the one I'm in then

Pretty sure he's not the first one to draw a Jeanne with blonde hair.

Also, about Drifters

Fate Joan is thousand times better than the generic crazy girl that look like she came out of a bad edgy fanfiction.

I mean, I don't watch Drifters because I'm not really interested in it, but isn't that exactly what Jeanne Alter is...

[Historia]

I would make a comment about your fc, but I can't even tell what color her hair is supposed to be.

Hah? It's brown/dark drown. Her hair was dark brown/black in real life. I don't know what you'd comment on.

[Alexcoene]

I mean, I don't watch Drifters because I'm not really interested in it, but isn't that exactly what Jeanne Alter is...

Yeah, but she's not the real Jeanne. While in Drifters, we're supposed to buy that she become a crazy pyromaniac because she was burned, while ignoring pretty much every other part of her life. Because in these kind of series, peoples apparently can't go trough awful stuff without becoming bastards themselves.

[Bird of Hermes]

Yeah, but she's not the real Jeanne. While in Drifters, we're supposed to buy that she become a crazy pyromaniac because she was burned, while ignoring pretty much every other part of her life. Because in these kind of series, peoples apparently can't go trough awful stuff without becoming bastards themselves.

It's made by Hirano, same guy who made Helsing if that's any help. Things like that are kind of his a s t h e t i c

[Desuclocker]

Yeah, but she's not the real Jeanne. While in Drifters, we're supposed to buy that she become a crazy pyromaniac because she was burned, while ignoring pretty much every other part of her life. Because in these kind of series, peoples apparently can't go trough awful stuff without becoming bastards themselves.

It's not that far-fetched to imagine a fanatical Catholic girl being more than a bit unhappy at being burned alive and remembered as a heretic (she was only cleared of the charges some 20 years after).

[Historia]

Yeah, but she's not the real Jeanne. While in Drifters, we're supposed to buy that she become a crazy pyromaniac because she was burned, while ignoring pretty much every other part of her life. Because in these kind of series, peoples apparently can't go trough awful stuff without becoming bastards themselves.

Just to ask, have you actually read/watched Drifters?

[Alexcoene]

It's not that far-fetched to imagine a fanatical Catholic girl being more than a bit unhappy at being burned alive and remembered as a heretic (she was only cleared of the charges some 20 years after).

Except she's not just pissed, the flames apparently magically made her a sadist with pyromaniacal tendency. One would think that someone who was burned to death would avoid fire like hell instead of deciding to spread it everywhere in the world.

[Desuclocker]

It's more like "the enigmatic evil entity that is the true antagonist of Drifters locked her mind in her most agonized moment, gave her flame powers and brought her over to another world", actually. And as Toyohisa points out, she's not exactly gone full pyromaniac, rather, she enjoys using her newfound power to kill.

[Alexcoene]

It's more like "the enigmatic evil entity that is the true antagonist of Drifters locked her mind in her most agonized moment, gave her flame powers and brought her over to another world", actually. And as Toyohisa points out, she's not exactly gone full pyromaniac, rather, she enjoys using her newfound power to kill.

Even if you say that, a villain that is primarily motivated by their rage against those who unjustly betrayed them shouldn't be constantly grinning, laughing and obviously taking their time enjoying killing each person they slay. But since she does exactly that, her "tragic flashbacks" and "sympathetic moments" honestly feel taked on. Also, if someone were truly to have their mind locked in the most agonized moment their life, they would be less "badass murder machine" and more "screaming wreck lying about uselessly on the ground".

Also, yes, I read the manga. Wasn't impressed, if you couldn't tell.