The son was named Loholt. However that tale was 'Perlesvaus' which is a vague french tale which was an unofficial continuation of Percival's tale.Originally Posted by 4score7years
Funnily enough, that tale is considered the least canon of all the tales.
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Among the Scottish most certainly.
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Sorry for the ignorance, really actualy never heard of him
Thats fine, William Wallace is more famous outside Britain due to a certain movie. However in Scotland he's still a particularly big deal, like how Boudicca is in Norfolk.
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As for the sheet itself it's a good job as usual asterism.
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Btw just making sure here
As opposed to Isk's charisma that stems from his worldwide popularity, Rob's charisma here is due to strong focused popularity in Scotland?
If anyone knows/have knowledge of Zenobia's history, here's the Servant Profile I've posted earlier on. So if you want, feel free to point out errors!
Link: http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...=1#post2612013
Didn't JetKinen already comment on her? I know I obnoxiously beg for feedback at times, but usually not after I've already gotten it.
Instead of quality, I'm making sure I'm actually doing the character justice, since even I struggled in making her profile.Didn't JetKinen already comment on her? I know I obnoxiously beg for feedback at times, but usually not after I've already gotten it.
Although you're right; I really shouldn't beg for feedback within barely half a day, Sorry!
Heh, don't sweat it. I'm the last person here with any right to criticize on that.
On your first point, I know pretty much nothing about her historical self so I don't have much to offer in that regard. Sorry.
I see, I've really picked an obscure individual, huh?Heh, don't sweat it. I'm the last person here with any right to criticize on that.
On your first point, I know pretty much nothing about her historical self so I don't have much to offer in that regard. Sorry.
I'd say so. I think I actually did read about her a while back while looking for historical figures to make Servants out of, but none of it really left any mark on me.
I was going to say she's not that obscure, but then I remembered I only know about her from The Blithedale Romance, so I have no idea.
There are a lot of interesting historical figures that are tough to make into Servant - Octavian's one I've been struggling with for a while - and Zenobia definitely fits that category. Honestly, your interpretation didn't do much for me. I didn't see much point in making her a Caster to just have her as a fairly standard melee combatant, and a Noble Phantasm that is based on something she wanted to happen but didn't actually just seems like an odd choice. I liked the personality and stuff, but mechanically she's underwhelming, to me at least.
Yeah... the Caster Class probably wasn't the best idea, I guess I failed to put her "Wise" trait into focus. Perhaps making her a Rider would've been a better choice. Maybe I should also have included the second NP I've planned for her too.
Thanks for the review!
What was the second NP idea? You could always add it in after the fact.
It was to summon her best general, Zabdas, who led Zenobia's army to conquer Egypt and the surrounding lands. The poor guy was hopeless against Aurelian, though; he was pushed back constantly until his final defeat at the capital.
The NP summon is just him alone, and act as more of a bodyguard/emissary for Zenobia.
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Hmm. Summoning your best general as an NP still seems awfully generic concept-wise. Not sure how to improve it though.
Overall it just sounds like you picked a really hard figure to come up with NPs for...
... Sorry to inconvenience you, and yeah, I kind of unintentionally made this harder for myself... There's really not much to build a good NP, really.
if you become president or prime minister, make sure to do memorable flashy stuff that is easily conceptualized into anime format. It'll make our jobs easier.
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Make sure all of your policy names sound cool when shouted
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...Like building a giant 50-foot high border wall?
Sorry, couldn't resist.
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