Create-A-Servant 2

[RoydGolden]

Vritra: So I know his tower NP creates a draught, but I'm curious what its more specific effects are. Are only external bodies of water affected, or will it literally pull the moisture out of living beings in its area-of-effect?

Otherwise it's a cool sheet though. Also, the FC doesn't seem to be showing up properly.

[Lambda-Nu]

Thanks. And I've tried fussing with the stupid faceclaim, but I can't get it to work. Please help.

[RoydGolden]

Thanks. And I've tried fussing with the stupid faceclaim, but I can't get it to work. Please help.

Are you using Imgur?

[Lambda-Nu]

Yep.

[venomking]

can i get some criticism for the sheet id did before cupid? also should i delete cupid?

[Spartacus]

https://imgur.com/u0TGPBC Don't link a gallery like this

Open your image until it becomes an image link https://i.imgur.com/u0TGPBC.jpg

see the .jpg in the end?



voila

[Lambda-Nu]

I see. Thank you.

[Spartacus]

you can also add 'h', 'l' and 'm' in the end of the link before the dot u0TGPBC_.jpg (replace the underline with the letter) to resize your image to high res, large and medium respectively

[Lambda-Nu]

Okay. Thank you so much.

[Bird of Hermes]

Morgiana: Very nice, very well thought out and executed concept, a lot of depth and effort clearly went in.

Gareth: Very nice, very adorable. I made my own when translations of Camelot/Zero were coming out but yours is pretty dang nice too.


Asteropaeus: Good to see ya back Royd! The NP is pretty simple but actually fits the character and legend pretty well. Good job.

[RoydGolden]

Asteropaeus: Good to see ya back Royd! The NP is pretty simple but actually fits the character and legend pretty well. Good job.

I had trouble coming up with a fitting NP for her (seeing as her legend is so sparse). Glad to know you liked it.

[Bird of Hermes]

Sparseness can sometimes be a good thing, reminds me that i still have half a few WIPs and half finished remakes I haven't touched in my backlog for a while.

[Lambda-Nu]

Hey, Hermes, could please tell me what you think of my Vritra profile?

[King of Padoru]

I don't want to look annoying, but I'd appreciate a comment about my sheet too.

[Lambda-Nu]

I like it. It's pretty well developed. And a little disturbing, which makes me like it more.

[Bird of Hermes]

Hey, Hermes, could please tell me what you think of my Vritra profile?

Ah, musta missed him. I hadn't heard much of him before so there's a limit on how much i can say but the sheet seems alright. I agree with Royd as that the NP could use a little expansion on the description.

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I don't want to look annoying, but I'd appreciate a comment about my sheet too.

I have -2 to native american mythos and history so I can't say nowhere near as much as I like, though it is clearly well developed. I like the creepiness, but I can't help but you could have gone into the horror aspect even more.

[Kabalisto Koga]

A World drought hougu !?! Are you crazy with such a abbility is the existence of the magical part of the world revealed and is all live on earth in a threatening danger ! *Pfuh*

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Morgiana: Very nice, very well thought out and executed concept, a lot of depth and effort clearly went in.

Gareth: Very nice, very adorable. I made my own when translations of Camelot/Zero were coming out but yours is pretty dang nice too.


Asteropaeus: Good to see ya back Royd! The NP is pretty simple but actually fits the character and legend pretty well. Good job.

Sorry idont want to annoy you Hermes but you have until now not lost some words about my Suhrawardi profile and a statement would be more as welcome..?

[King of Padoru]

like the creepiness, but I can't help but you could have gone into the horror aspect even more.

Hm, you're right, she could be creepier. Which parts should I change to improve the horror aspect?

and is all live on earth in a threatening danger ! *Pfuh*

That's the point of Beasts.

[Kabalisto Koga]

Cutie.

Thank you !

[Der Ritter]

VritraI'm not really seeing what makes them a Beast aside from being a really dangerous monster. Beast's are supposed to be existential threats to humanity that end up destroying it because of some kind of twisted sense of love for it. Compared to Swole Demon King Salmon and Mama Tiamat, they seem kind of more like an Avenger really.

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Which for the record, I'm not saying it's a badly made sheet, but I'm just not getting the feeling they're a Beast.