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    Class: Striker
    Identity: Bodhidharma
    Gender: Male
    Source: Historical fact
    Origin: China
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Height: 179 cm
    Weight: 93 kg

    Parameters:
    Strength: B
    Endurance: A
    Agility: B-
    Mana: C
    Luck: D
    NP: C

    Skills
    Class skills

    Natural Weapon: A-
    Confers plus modifiers to checks related to body-to-body combat.
    An expert martial artist with a great compatibility with the class container, but meditating for too long can atrophy his limbs and make his moves slower.

    Magic Resistance: B
    Protects against spells with a chant lower than three verses.
    Due to a grudge towards his own weakness, Bodhidharma has become specially resistant against sleep-inducing effects.


    Personal skills

    Chinese Martial Arts (Shàolínquán): A+++
    Mastery on martial arts. A unique case among skills in which one can only be considered to have properly learned it if the rank is A or higher due to the high difficulty of learning.
    Bodhidharma is popularly considered to be the creator of Shaolin Kung Fu, one of the most famous martial arts, counting with a history of over 1,500 years, and has access to the oldest and purest form of it.

    Battle Continuation: EX
    Can keep fighting no matter the severity of his injuries, even at the brink of death.
    No matter what, he’ll stand up again. At this point, even if he’s considered dead, he’ll probably just get up without any ceremony and go home.

    Eyes of Accomplishment: C
    An indicator of the Master’s growth and success in their goals, it’s an effect that appears in Bodhidharma’s eyes.
    When summoned, Bodhidharma’s eyes are blank, without any iris or pupil. In the very moment the Master achieves a goal they longed for, or grow up as a person, one of his eyes will return to their original state, independently of whether the Master is aware of their accomplishment or not.
    Incidentally, this doesn’t affect Bodhidharma’s sight at all.

    Emptiness: A
    As per the teachings of the Laṅkāvatāra Sūtra, consciousness is the only reality. Everything is a phenomenon caused by the mind, and therefore, nothing.
    By meditating with that thought in mind, the world around one disappears and any threat is dispelled. Only when assuming a battle stance does the effect break.


    Noble Phantasm


    Dá Mó Hónglǜdēng
    Mister Dharma fell down


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 1
    Maximum number of targets: 1 person

    A Noble Phantasm that allows to nullify any sort of preemptive strike. With his guard apparently lowered and his back shown to the enemy, he suddenly turns and opens his eyes. The intensity and willpower contained in his stare becomes such that it sends any opponent flying away, as if pushed by an abrupt gust of wind.

    Though it seems that Bodhidharma didn’t do anything but turning his face to the enemy, the truth is that he actually delivered a counter strike at such speed that it couldn’t be seen. However, that strike can only hit its mark if the target is still moving at the moment Bodhidharma opens his eyes. Thus, the only way to avoid being hit is to stop at the exact moment, what prevents the attack he was going to receive anyways.



    Character
    Personality

    Just like in the legends, Bodhidharma is an ill-mannered old man that is reticent to socializing. Though he replies when asked, he never gives a direct answer, forcing the one who made the question to find out what he meant as if they were solving a sort of riddle.

    Even if he’s not in favor of fights, the importance he gives to physical training combined with being summoned as a martial artist makes him a bit less reticent to battling, justifying himself with needing to avoid the atrophy of his limbs again and only putting a foot on the battlefield if he is attacked first. That said, he may get excited to fight from time to time, though he rarely lets that excitement come out to the surface.


    Treatment with the Master

    Seemingly cold and distant, Bodhidharma is still a preacher of Buddhism, and therefore willing to take the Master as his disciple, though only if he really considers it’s worth doing so. His tendency to speak enigmatically makes his teachings difficult, but he’s kind of supportive in his own way, and will give credit where it’s due as peculiarly as he says many other things.


    Dialogue examples

    Bond 1: “If you wish to be my apprentice, then you should just stay quiet. That will be faster for both of us.”

    Bond 2: “Your body is in such a bad condition. Stand up, I’ll forge those muscles a bit.”

    Bond 3: “Have we reached this point already? The pacing is not that bad, you finally achieved an eye.”

    Bond 4: “Zzzzz…… Ah! You fool, don’t you interrupt me during my meditation! Sleeping? Clean those ears, can’t you hear I was reciting a sutra?!”

    Bond 5: “Now, we’ve been together for enough time. Allow me to ask, what have you learned from me? No response? Excellent. Your silence and my eyes prove that I have nothing else to do for you.”

    Likes: “A combination of meditation and physical exercise. If that is present in your lifestyle, you will eventually reach a peak condition, and will be able to have a relaxed and pacific life. Doesn’t that sound good?”

    Dislikes: “There is nothing more humiliating than falling asleep during meditation. Even if it’s for years, from the first Oṃ to the last Hūṃ, your mind must never cease reciting sutras. Any pause in between is unforgivable and deserving of having your eyelids cut.”

    Wish for the Grail: “A golden begging bowl is only one of the biggest feats of hypocrisy.”


    Personal data
    Historical depiction

    A Buddhist monk coming from the West that was active for most of his life in China, where he receives the title of Bìyǎnhú (The Blue-Eyed Barbarian). It’s debatable whether he was a historical figure or a fictional character, since almost everything regarding his biography is heavily inspired on legends, but he’s nevertheless an important figure in the Far East. He is the founder of Chán Buddhism, coming from a lineage of Buddhist patriarchs said to extend directly back to the very same Buddha.

    Despite being a monk and therefore a pacifist, this time he has been summoned in the extra class of the Body-to-Body Hero, Striker, with one of his many legends as a basis. Said legend explains how, having arrived to the Shàolín Temple, Bodhidharma found out that the monks were in a really poor shape. Considering the training of the body as important as the training of the mind, he taught the 18 Arhat Hands to the monks, a series of basic postures based on the stances of Arhat statues found on temples. From this form of exercise came one of the most known martial arts in the world, the Shàolínquán, commonly known as Shaolin Kung Fu. In other words, Striker Bodhidharma is summoned as the founder of Kung Fu, and therefore an expert martial artist.


    Related characters

    Shakyamuni
    The World-Honored One. Besides being blasphemous, attempting to fight him would be futile, for we both won't attack first.

    Xuanzang Sanzang
    It’s clearly obvious that she has been summoned in a mental state far from enlightenment. Some training is in order. Furthermore, I should cut her eyelids to ensure she doesn’t take a nap instead of meditating.

    Musashi Miyamoto
    So the emptiness of Buddhism can be applied to the sword as well… Interesting.

    Hōzōin Inshūn
    A combination of spearmanship and Buddhism… That’s in a sense similar to the Shàolínquán. Your predecessor was stupid to abandon this lifestyle.

    Lǐ Shūwén
    Age doesn’t matter. If his fists seek to clash against mine, then so be it.

    Yàn Qīng
    The skillful star whose fists cast no shadow. I'd like to test the speed of those punches at least once. Would you allow me to spar with you?


    Creator's notes
    Wish the FC had a red mantle to make it more like the actual Bodhidharma, but well. I'm the first one to admit that the NP section may be lackluster. I wanted to include the Eighteen Arhat Hands as a NP, but it would overlap with Chinese Martial Arts, so I discarded it.

    Regarding his skills, the reasons why he doesn't get Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig are: poor compatibility with the Striker class, being too OP combined with Nothingnes, and Bodhidharma not having fully reached enlightenment yet in this form. His Battle Continuation has a better reason to be EX than Musashi's, so don't call BS on it.

    There's a couple of references to Darumas as well. I considered it necessary, since they're based on him.

    PS: It seems I can't make a Striker if it isn't a buff old man.
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    Alternate Classes: Caster, Assassin, Berserker
    True Name: Loki
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Norse Mythology
    Armament: Sword

    Parameters:
    STR: D
    END: C+
    AGI: A
    MANA: B
    LUCK: E
    NP: A

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Avenger - Rank A+: A Class Skill of the Avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate hatred and resentment. The rate of mana generation becomes higher when receiving damage.
    Though Avenger has manifested from an era preceding his punishment, he has always been a natural at attracting the hatred and grudges of others.

    Memory Correction - Rank B++: A Class Skill of the Avenger class. People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened.
    Avenger remembers the source of his own grudge well, though he has incarnated from a time prior to his punishment. As such, he is determined to cause enough trouble to ‘deserve’ his eventual comeuppance.

    Self-Replenishment (Mana) - Rank E: A Class Skill of the Avenger class. One's magical energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn.
    The amount of energy Avenger receives is tiny. Due to Independent Action, however, he can be a cause of mischief even with such an amount.

    Personal Skills

    Silver Tongue - Rank A+++: A Skill representing a tendency to be persuasive and eloquent with speaking. Persuasion and goading of others becomes possible, even if the target knows not to listen to the user or thinks that doing something would be a bad idea. The user’s lies are indistinguishable from whatever truths they may speak. In addition, targets cannot benefit from prior information on the user’s untrustworthiness.
    Avenger’s use of Silver Tongue borders on True Magic. Despite it being a well-known fact that one should trust nothing of what he says or does, he merrily went on manipulating everyone in his legend. Even mental interference effects and illusions can be crafted simply through Avenger’s words.

    Jötunn Kind - Rank C+: A mixed Skill representing the Jötunn of Norse Mythology, as well as their myriad shapes and abilities. Due to there being many different types of Jötunn, the specific effects vary wildly between users. Common effects include Shapeshift, Galdr, Monstrous Strength, Nature of a Rebellious Spirit, Mana Burst and others. Mana Burst is usually restricted to Fire Jötunn, taking the form of Flames.
    Due to his association with the Aesir, his kind’s greatest enemy, Avenger’s status as a Jötunn has been somewhat lowered. He possesses the benefits of Shapeshift, Nature of a Rebellious Spirit and Mana Burst (Flames).

    Independent Action - Rank A: The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from one's Master; the ability that allows for action even in the absence of the Master.
    It is possible to take action even without a Master. However, to use Noble Phantasms of great magical energy consumption, backup from the Master is necessary. At Rank A, it is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for about a week without a Master. Being a notable free spirit, Avenger can survive easily enough even without assistance from a Master.

    Noble Phantasms

    The Quarrel with the Aesir
    Lokasenna

    Anti-Unit~Anti-Team, Rank B
    Avenger’s lone Noble Phantasm in his current incarnation. Rather than his usual fare of lies and mischief, Lokasenna turns the truth into Avenger’s weapon. By unveiling the basest truth of a target’s feelings and actions, Avenger paints an image of the target with his words. There is no denial or argument to be found against the truth revealed by Lokasenna, and it is capable of turning others against themselves and their closest allies.
    In order to use Lokasenna, Avenger needs but speak with intent. He does not require knowledge on what he is speaking, as Lokasenna’s effect is to provide him with facts that serve to ‘hurt a person the most’. Though Avenger’s words causes no physical damage, they can damage the target’s mental state severely. A heroic soul may even lash against themselves in anguish, or a villain strike at their allies for having their secret acts revealed. In some cases, full acceptance of the darker sides of oneself revealed by Lokasenna can even cause a Servant to undergo ‘blackening’.
    Of course, Lokasenna’s effect can be entirely nullified by stopping Avenger from speaking. However, such is the Noble Phantasm’s power that it can even affect those that suffer from the effects of Mad Enhancement or Mental Pollution. The truth of Avenger’s words resonates so strongly with the core of the target’s being that they are affected even in the grip of madness.

    Description

    Likes: Causing mischief, taking away the treasures of others
    Dislikes: Facing consequences, those that have overcome their base nature
    Talents: Having a way with words, gluttony
    Natural Enemy: Heimdall

    Avenger’s true identity is Loki, the Blood-Brother of Odin.

    Loki presents himself as an unrepentant villain, a liar and a cheat who lives to frustrate others. He feels no guilt, no matter what he does, and only possesses qualms at all due to the possibility of comeuppance for his mischief. Though generally intelligent enough to know better, Loki loves nothing more than to annoy and humiliate those more powerful than himself.
    As an Avenger, Loki has full knowledge of his end, punished by the gods for his actions and suffering until Ragnarök. However, rather than seeking to ‘avenge himself on the gods’, he embraces evil in order to ‘qualify for the punishment’ in the first place. Knowing full well his fate is inescapable, he has thus resolved to be a villain worthy of the punishment the Aesir would impose upon him.
    “As a villain, it is natural that I should hate heroes!” So claims Loki. However, rather than malice, his opposition in general towards Heroic Spirits seems instead to spring from jealousy. Most of all he hates those that have risen above their base natures in order to rise to heroism. Such individuals possess something he himself feels he can never have. As even those who do not know his identity generally feel that Loki is untrustworthy, he finds few friends among the ranks of Servants. He is immensely fond of rules and formal alliances, as he can then dance merrily on the very edge of what is appropriate, all the while escaping proper punishment for his trickery.
    For Loki’s Master, there is but one rule to the Holy Grail War: Never once place trust in Loki. He does not care about his Master one bit, being fully capable of subverting their wishes through trickery and even surviving well enough without their support. For his own amusement, Loki misleads his Master when it comes to his abilities and what he is actually capable of. He is also fond of using his words to manipulate his Master, especially for the purpose of wasting Command Spells. Though such power might be an asset should his Master be manipulated properly, Loki finds more joy in the humiliation of his Master wasting their precious Command Spells on frivolous orders, rather than using them for anything useful.
    Though Loki cannot help but act according to his nature, his fondest wish is simple: He wishes to be a hero, genuinely praised by those around him.

    Lore
    Loki is a nominal member of the Aesir in Norse Mythology, chiefly through his association with Odin, his blood-brother. His true alignment is ambiguous, as he sometimes assists and sometimes antagonizes the Aesir. His most famous outings are his many adventures alongside Thor, though his mischief and trickery is also told of in other stories, such as his hand in building Asgard’s great wall, his theft of the gods’ various treasures, as well as the stories of his many competitions and rows with Heimdall.
    Through some artifice, Loki came to know his eventual fate, bound by the gods with the entrails of his own son and left in a cave to suffer from the venom of a serpent. As he knew that fate could not be evaded, he resolved then to ‘earn’ such a punishment, devoting himself to causing mischief and chaos. Though he enjoyed most of what he caused, he was never truly happy with his role. Oddly, his fondest memory is that of the adventure described in Loka Táttur. There, for once in his life, Loki played the role of a hero, saving a peasant child from a giant, even when the rest of the gods could not aid the boy.
    Loki had a hand in the death of Baldr, and eventually flaunted his hand in the god’s death to the Aesir in the tale of Lokasenna. Barging into a feast hall where the Aesir celebrated, Loki took the time to viciously insult each god in turn, gloating of his past mischief. Though eventually threatened by Thor to leave the hall, the anger of the gods had been fully roused. Despite his attempts to hide, Loki was caught and subjected to the punishment he had always known would find him.
    To his twisted mind, this last tale was his greatest victory. Loki would eventually be released during Ragnarök, and would meet his end slaying Heimdall.

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    Loki: Let me get this straight. His NP is basically talking shit about you so hard you can even end up Altered? That's OP but truly a Loki-ey NP. I feel his Strength and Endurance could be higher, even if it's just for being a Divine Spirit and a Jötunn, but well, it's not as if he was one to battle.

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    Having written up an Avenger Loki myself a while ago, it's interesting to compare our takes. I quite like his NP. It definitely fits how Loki used words to tear down his fellow gods in the myths. Personality is also quite well fleshed out. He's his usual unrepentant and traitorous self, but you managed to make him a sympathetic and even tragic figure despite that. His desire to be a 'hero' even though it goes against his own nature adds an interesting nuance to his character. Though, wasn't Loki descended from ice giants in the myths? I think Mana Burst (Frost) might fit better for his Jotunn Kind Skill than the (Flames) version.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Loki: Let me get this straight. His NP is basically talking shit about you so hard you can even end up Altered? That's OP but truly a Loki-ey NP. I feel his Strength and Endurance could be higher, even if it's just for being a Divine Spirit and a Jötunn, but well, it's not as if he was one to battle.
    The parameters are as they are due to the fact that Loki was never quite a combatant and isn't really a Divine Spirit as such and being a Jötunn doesn't really guarantee super strength either. I'd imagine his regular statline to be somewhere between Caster and Assassin in the physical sense, as he strongly falls between those two archetypes (as a sneaky, tricky trickster kind of person with some murders to his name). His endurance is higher due to the fact that he gets plenty of comeuppance for his actions but soldiers on regardless.
    And yeah, talking shit about people in order to corrupt them, (while being kind of OP) is very Loki, though it took a few drafts to get the wording right.

    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Having written up an Avenger Loki myself a while ago, it's interesting to compare our takes. I quite like his NP. It definitely fits how Loki used words to tear down his fellow gods in the myths. Personality is also quite well fleshed out. He's his usual unrepentant and traitorous self, but you managed to make him a sympathetic and even tragic figure despite that. His desire to be a 'hero' even though it goes against his own nature adds an interesting nuance to his character. Though, wasn't Loki descended from ice giants in the myths? I think Mana Burst (Frost) might fit better for his Jotunn Kind Skill than the (Flames) version.
    Jötunn doesn't really mean 'frost giant', it's just commonly translated as such, apparently just because (if I had to guess, Ymir being born from the primordial ice is to blame, though all Jötnar, even the ones related to fire, are descended from him). Whereas words like Aesir and Vanir (describing kinds of creatures) are, confusingly enough, mostly left untranslated. He gets Mana Burst (Flames) due to the conflation with Logi, the god of fire.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Jötunn doesn't really mean 'frost giant', it's just commonly translated as such, apparently just because (if I had to guess, Ymir being born from the primordial ice is to blame, though all Jötnar, even the ones related to fire, are descended from him). Whereas words like Aesir and Vanir (describing kinds of creatures) are, confusingly enough, mostly left untranslated. He gets Mana Burst (Flames) due to the conflation with Logi, the god of fire.
    Oh, okay. I was just curious since it was the opposite approach I went with for my own Loki sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    The parameters are as they are due to the fact that Loki was never quite a combatant and isn't really a Divine Spirit as such and being a Jötunn doesn't really guarantee super strength either. I'd imagine his regular statline to be somewhere between Caster and Assassin in the physical sense, as he strongly falls between those two archetypes (as a sneaky, tricky trickster kind of person with some murders to his name). His endurance is higher due to the fact that he gets plenty of comeuppance for his actions but soldiers on regardless.
    And yeah, talking shit about people in order to corrupt them, (while being kind of OP) is very Loki, though it took a few drafts to get the wording right.
    Fair enough. I just considered his species should come with naturally high physical parameters, though that was a mistake from my part as well for considering all Jötunn would be super-strong. On another note, having a look at Scáthach-Skaði's profile, I noticed that she has Divine Core of the Goddess despite being a Jötunn, while Loki doesn't have any skill like that. Am I missing something regarding how Jötunns work, or was it a deliberate choice?

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Fair enough. I just considered his species should come with naturally high physical parameters, though that was a mistake from my part as well for considering all Jötunn would be super-strong. On another note, having a look at Scáthach-Skaði's profile, I noticed that she has Divine Core of the Goddess despite being a Jötunn, while Loki doesn't have any skill like that. Am I missing something regarding how Jötunns work, or was it a deliberate choice?
    I guess the difference between Skaði and Loki is that Skaði fully embraced her role as a goddess and is related to the Aesir by her (eventually failed) marriage to Njörðr.
    Whereas Loki is "just" Odin's blood-brother and drinking buddy, being merely loosely affiliated with the Aesir rather than being a part of them (the most telling part of this is that Loki is never, not even in kennings, described as the god of something, if he's described as a god in the first place).

    One could also make the argument that Loki's divine nature is substantially reduced by all the stuff he does, as he more or less embraces his Jötunn nature as an agent of chaos (rather than order - neither is good or bad, but that's the distinction). Scáthach-Skaði could also be argued to be more divine than Skaði herself, as she took on Odin's role as the chief of gods in the Götterdamerung Lostbelt.
    I'd also argue that Divine Core of the Goddess, carrying with it the idea of eternal youth, is supremely unfitting for one of the Aesir, as they required the Apples of Iðunn in order to stay young (or in Odin's case, young-ish). Then again the Jötunn are kind of a mixed bag in regards to ageing in general, as in they don't really seem to. Loki, for example, was entirely unaffected by the Iðunn incident.

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    If I had to guess, Loki’s lack of Skill denoting Divinity is most likely due to his many crimes against the gods diminishing his rank of Divinity.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    I guess the difference between Skaði and Loki is that Skaði fully embraced her role as a goddess and is related to the Aesir by her (eventually failed) marriage to Njörðr.
    Whereas Loki is "just" Odin's blood-brother and drinking buddy, being merely loosely affiliated with the Aesir rather than being a part of them (the most telling part of this is that Loki is never, not even in kennings, described as the god of something, if he's described as a god in the first place).

    One could also make the argument that Loki's divine nature is substantially reduced by all the stuff he does, as he more or less embraces his Jötunn nature as an agent of chaos (rather than order - neither is good or bad, but that's the distinction). Scáthach-Skaði could also be argued to be more divine than Skaði herself, as she took on Odin's role as the chief of gods in the Götterdamerung Lostbelt.
    I'd also argue that Divine Core of the Goddess, carrying with it the idea of eternal youth, is supremely unfitting for one of the Aesir, as they required the Apples of Iðunn in order to stay young (or in Odin's case, young-ish). Then again the Jötunn are kind of a mixed bag in regards to ageing in general, as in they don't really seem to. Loki, for example, was entirely unaffected by the Iðunn incident.
    Ah, I see. That makes it everything much clearer. I didn't consider his actions as a factor that would reduce/eliminate his Divinity. Thank you.

    PS: Is there anything worth mentioning about my Bodhidharma? I'd personally like to give him another NP, since the one he has isn't exactly worthy of being his only one.

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    So, would anyone have any ideas for some Macedonian Servants, particularly those with some connection to Alexander the Great? I’m planning out a fanon Macedonian Singularity.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    So, would anyone have any ideas for some Macedonian Servants, particularly those with some connection to Alexander the Great? I’m planning out a fanon Macedonian Singularity.
    His parents are easily the strongest contenders, with his father you can play the military aspect and his mother you can focus more on the divine/magecraft/cult focus.

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    Bodhidharma: Eyes of Accomplishment seems to be a little weird, though that's probably due to my lack of familiarity with the figure in question. Emptiness is stranger, as it seems to be a mental effort that somehow affects the physical world around him...?
    I'm also not a huge fan of the Striker class in general, but I can see what you were going for here (Bodhidharma in his combative aspect also seems to be one of those Servants that doesn't neatly fall into any single class).

    I do suppose he might need another Noble Phantasm, just having the one he has now kinda sells him short. Oh wait, I just realized what his Eyes of Accomplishment stand for after reading on Daruma dolls a bit.
    In that case, I'll revise my opinion and note that in his Striker aspect, he would probably have more ties to Chinese culture rather than Japanese, owing to his status as the patron saint of the Shaolin monastery and all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    His parents are easily the strongest contenders, with his father you can play the military aspect and his mother you can focus more on the divine/magecraft/cult focus.
    Some of his generals could also work. Like Eumenes, who even has a pretty well known manga dedicated to him. Not sure what NPs he'd qualify for though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    So, would anyone have any ideas for some Macedonian Servants, particularly those with some connection to Alexander the Great? I’m planning out a fanon Macedonian Singularity.
    How about some members of his army like Hephaestion or some of either Iskander or his father's Somatophylakes?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Bodhidharma: Eyes of Accomplishment seems to be a little weird, though that's probably due to my lack of familiarity with the figure in question. Emptiness is stranger, as it seems to be a mental effort that somehow affects the physical world around him...?
    I'm also not a huge fan of the Striker class in general, but I can see what you were going for here (Bodhidharma in his combative aspect also seems to be one of those Servants that doesn't neatly fall into any single class).

    I do suppose he might need another Noble Phantasm, just having the one he has now kinda sells him short. Oh wait, I just realized what his Eyes of Accomplishment stand for after reading on Daruma dolls a bit.
    In that case, I'll revise my opinion and note that in his Striker aspect, he would probably have more ties to Chinese culture rather than Japanese, owing to his status as the patron saint of the Shaolin monastery and all.
    The description of Emptiness refers more to how he'd feel it than to how it actually works. Think of it as him raising a barrier that protects him from most attacks while he's meditating (now that I think about it, that's kinda what Jiren from DBS did). And yes, the Eyes of Accomplishment was a reference to painting the eyes of Daruma dolls, though they're not that important. His NP is based and named after the Japanese game "Daruma-san ga koronda", in which you're sent back to the beginning if you move when "it" turns around (I think it's called "statues" in English?). I'll change it to something with an actual relationship to Shàolínquán.

    Thanks for your feedback!

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    Alternate Classes: Lancer, Rider
    True Name: Geryon
    Alignment: Neutral Mad
    Origin: Classical Mythology
    Armament: N/A

    Parameters:
    STR: A
    END: C
    AGI: C+
    MANA: C
    LUCK: D
    NP: C

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Mad Enhancement - Rank C+: The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange for hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms.
    Rank up for all parameters except Luck and Mana. Berserker’s mental abilities have regressed, and language ability is almost nonexistent. However, the capacity for thought in regards to his mission remains at the usual level. Berserker’s appearance is vastly different to how he appeared in life, changing from a warrior into a true monster.

    Personal Skills

    Weakness (Poison) - Rank E: A pronounced weakness to poison effects. Rather than something beneficial, it merely increases the effectiveness of poisons on the user and lowers their resistance.
    Though he met his death by poison, Berserker died from the venom of the Hydra. As such, the level of his weakness has been adjusted to correspond to the strength of the poison.

    Cattle Watchdog - Rank A+: A Skill denoting the possession of a canine companion. As a guardian of cattle, the dog’s perceptive abilities are high.
    Berserker’s hound is Orthrus, kin to Cerberus. Being a Phantasmal Beast of superior breeding, descended from Typhon himself, Orthrus far exceeds the usual Familiars Servants can rely on, being capable of standing up to most combat-worthy Servants on his own. Though weakened in Berserker’s current class, Orthrus, too, receives the benefits of his master’s Mad Enhancement.

    Noble Phantasms

    The Rampaging Crimson Cattle
    Gēruónou Bóes

    Anti-Army, Rank B
    A Noble Phantasm bound to the horn Berserker carries with him. In legend, he was the owner and guardian of a massive herd of red-coated cattle. He died protecting them from a cattle thief whose identity he never learned, but still possesses a strange affinity to the beasts. Such is Berserker’s bond with them that they still answer the call of his horn.
    When sounding the horn, Gēruónou Bóes carries the sound beyond the material plane of existence. From all directions, hundreds of oxen will suddenly stampede to Berserker’s location. Though the beasts do not precisely fight Berserker’s targets, they can trample those in their path in their rush to get to their guardian. Though their appearance is short-lived, Berserker derives a measure of peace from seeing his wards in the flesh once more.
    Of course, as he is fiercely protective of his herd, Berserker receives a permanent damage bonus against those that have harmed his cattle.

    Description
    Likes: Cattle, areas with even, flat terrain
    Dislikes: Thieves, sailors
    Talents: Guarding, animal handling
    Natural Enemy: Asterios

    Berserker’s true identity is Geryon, the Guardian of the Crimson Cattle.

    Though originally someone that could be described as a warrior, wielding armor and weaponry with great skill, Geryon’s Mad Enhancement has made him a veritable monster. Rather than pure chance, this is a result of his heritage as the “grandson” of the Gorgon through Chrysaor as well as his desire to better guard his wards, the Crimson Cattle of Geryon. The crux of his madness is the lack of strength he felt when a thief came to steal his cattle.
    Geryon is a hulking, fuming monstrosity, and generally acts as a Berserker should. However, instead of being a warrior driven by madness, he is surprisingly watchful of his surroundings, and fiercely attacks any enemies he sees. With the help of his trusted hound, Orthrus, he can even locate invisible or otherwise hard to detect targets. In battle, Geryon and Orthrus work together to unleash a relentless flurry of attacks on their foes, slaying all without mercy.
    Due to his Mad Enhancement, Geryon cannot communicate with other Servants. He approaches Heroic Spirits warily, and he finds the presence of great heroes unpleasant, as they remind him of a certain cattle thief. However, he has some aptitude with dealing with Servants that are manifested animals, and generally does not consider them as enemies if left unprovoked.
    Geryon views his Master as one of the cattle herders he employed. As he cannot be everywhere, he trusts in them to call for his assistance, at which point he will come running. He generally obeys simple instructions, but becomes easily distracted and confused in situations that cannot be imagined from the perspective of someone that guards a herd of beasts.
    As his failure in life was to protect his beloved cattle herd, he wishes for it to be returned to him. As long as Geryon is reunited with his beasts, he could not be happier.

    Lore
    Geryon was the son of Chrysaor and Callirrhoe. Chrysaor had sprung from the body of the Gorgon Medusa after Perseus beheaded her, and Callirrhoe was the daughter of two Titans, Oceanus and Tethys. With such a lineage, it is no surprise that Geryon himself was quite unique. He is described varyingly in myth as possessing several bodies, six eyes and six arms, and is sometimes even described as winged.
    Geryon lived on an island called Erythia, which was near the boundary of Europe and Libya. On this island, Geryon kept a herd of red cattle guarded by Cerberus's brother, Orthus, a two-headed hound, and the herdsman Eurytion.
    To accomplish his tenth labor, Hercules had to journey to the end of the world. Eurystheus ordered the hero to bring him the cattle of Geryon. Hercules set off on for Erythia, encountering and promptly killing many wild beasts along the way, and he came to the place where Libya met Europe.
    Not long after Heracles arrived, Orthus, the two-headed dog, attacked Hercules, so Hercules bashed him with his club. Eurytion followed, with the same result. Another herdsman in the area reported these events to Geryon. Just as Hercules was escaping with the cattle, Geryon attacked him. Hercules fought with him and shot him dead with his poisoned arrows. Geryon died in agony, having rushed to the aid of his hound and his herdsman, never learning the identity of his killer.
    His cattle, through several misadventures, was finally brought to Eurystheus, who sacrificed the herd to Hera.

    Notes
    I tried to keep to the stereotypical Berserker while still having Geryon have some remaining personality traits.
    Though the sheet feels a little empty, I figured adding some sort of multi-arm fighting Skill would be superfluous (especially on a Berserker). Natural Monster also isn’t quite the right fit, as his physical abilities aren’t really measured.
    It can be interpreted that Heracles was wary of engaging Geryon in melee, but he might just as well have been feeling lazy that day. As such, his physical parameters aren’t anything to write home about.

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    Geryon: Wasn't there something about how he could only be killed by destroying all three of his heads/bodies at a time? I feel like something like that would make a fitting second NP for him.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    His parents are easily the strongest contenders, with his father you can play the military aspect and his mother you can focus more on the divine/magecraft/cult focus.
    I could do a Philip II sheet, but I'm afraid that if I do an Olympias sheet, it'll come out looking too much like the one Royd made.

    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Some of his generals could also work. Like Eumenes, who even has a pretty well known manga dedicated to him. Not sure what NPs he'd qualify for though.
    That could work pretty well, actually. Once I figure out the Noble Phantasm, of course.

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragolord09 View Post
    How about some members of his army like Hephaestion or some of either Iskander or his father's Somatophylakes?
    Okay.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Geryon: Wasn't there something about how he could only be killed by destroying all three of his heads/bodies at a time? I feel like something like that would make a fitting second NP for him.
    Given that most of the myths depict him dying from a single arrow (hydra-poisoned, though) to his forehead, I'd assume there wasn't a clause of that sort. I think that's from some more modern adaptation.

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