Mm. That's a good point. I did basically imagine him as a more natural fit for Archer forcing himself into the Caster vessel - but I'll admit finding a NP that incorporated both the intended servant and the actual pilot of the Saint Graph was hard. I hope it was a creative NP, at least, eheh. But I probably did skew too hard on archer for the NP concept, even if it does incorporate the Oracle's visions.
Guilty as charged on the OOC, but it was for the sake of the silly. I imagined him shaking his head at his sister for falling so head over heels for a mortal, given what happens between them and Orion - but then if you might be attacking his kids, then someone hold his flower, daddy is coming. ^^;
Also, good job on Bell! I like the modifications to Clairvoyance and Golden Rule -- Golden Rule mods seem like they're a common trend since GO, hm -- but the NP is the neatest part, especially the malignant information psychological deathbeam. Am I a bad person if I imagine it with a dial-up modem screech?
I did some editing and updated my Sun Wukong sheet in case anyone's interested.
I was thinking on making a Servant like those of Shinjuku (HS + Phantom?), but I wanted to be sure, like what did make these servants like that? There are requisites for that to happen?
F/go magic
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I like it. It really feel more like Sun Wukong now.
Incidentally I think the best movie portrayal of the Monkey King is still the 1964 animate film Uproar in Heaven. Both it and the (I want to say definitive) 1986 TV series are both really dated stylistically at this time but retain all of their charm.
I said would do it an dammit! i am doing it! Here is a the sheet about a character that i will always love (even if i did have to search for the correct speling of her name).
Archer: hou yi(ayako mitsuzuri)
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Str:C, End:B, Agi:B
Mna:D, Lck:C, Np:A
Aligment: neutral/good
Gender: female
Height: 162cm
Weight: 50kg
Place of origin: japan
Armament: bow and arrows
Likes: video games, clear full moon nights
Deslike: board games, thiefs
Talents: marksmanship, martial arts in general
Natural enemies: wild beasts
skills:
Magic resistence(B): Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by"High-Thaumaturgy"and"Greater Rituals", it is difficult for them to be affected.
Independent action(A): the ability to remain independent even when rejecting the magical Energy supply from one's Master. However, to use Noble Phantasms of great magical energy consumption, backup from the Master is necessary. At"Rank A", it is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for about a week without a Master.
Divinity(C): Archer's level as a divine spirit, is greatly reduced not only due to archer's current state but also due to archer's banishment from heavens.
Clairvoyance(archer)(A): Archer can shoot with precision even with closed eyes, limited future sight is also possible. this skill did not ranked down because of the vessel for Archer alredy had a pré-disposition to this skill.
Mana burst(flames)(C): the power to impart weapons with flames. Ranked down because of archer's current state
Affection of the godesses(A+): the love of chang'e, a chinese deity of the moon, all stats others than luck gain a rank, another rank is gain if the moon is in the sky. This skill did not rank down on archer's current state because chang'e love's is undying.
Beast killer(A): archer is a slayer of diverse beasts, even divine ones. Gains two ranks when when against a enemy with the Beast-trait. Ranked down from EX in archer's current state
noble phantasm:
Taiyang de siwang: white arrows that slay the nine suns(anti-army: A+):
A cristalization of archer's deed of shooting the nine suns that scorched the earth at one point. It manifest itself as nine white arrows that archer can release at the same, or one at, time.
The classification of anti-army is for each of the arrows individualy, as each one has enough power to wipe several warriors at once, they also gain a bonus against magical and divine beasts.
Tao zhi: elixir of imortality(anti-damage: A):
The elixir of life that was the separation of archer and chang'e. A botle of jade with a clear liquid inside, the liquid tastes sweet and has a peach aroma.
The elixir can heal any wound, cure any disease and remedy any poison but if to much is drink in a short amount of time, the user will float away.
It cannot be used by archer, but it can be divide by everyone else.
While it can be giving away, it imposible to be stolen.
Lore: archer is Hou yi, the celestial bowman from chinese mythology. however, insted of a normal summon, he was summon in the body of the high-school student ayako mitsuzuri.
Ayako is from a family of martial arts and she is a second year student inHomurahara Academy, is a stellar athlete, and captain of the archery club thatTaiga Fujimura advises.
While she never learned of magecraft and her interaction with the grail war is limited to "have being atacked by a servant once" she does have a latent magical potential and it's miraculously perfect macth with Hou yi
Personality: Hou yi Personality is almost non-present and only affects ayako a little.
Ayako is a easy-going But ultimatetly determined person. While she acts in a tomboyish way she is still a girl, so she does have interest in girly stuffs and is not ashamed of it.
About relationships, she does not want to stay single forever, But is also not actively looking for a partner. She likes order man and may just have realize an atraction to cute, pigtailed girls.
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wow, I would never think about a "Mitsuzuri-servant"... That was great, good job.
I like her too, and that image was perfect
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Before you all read this, I just want to say ....
I'm sorry.
Source: [X]
Class: Berserker
Alternate Class: Caster, Rider (don't ask, please)
True Name: Pasiphaë Mother of the Minotaur
Alignment: Chaotic Mad
Origin: Clasical Mythology
Region: Crete
Armaments: A labrys that was granted to her due to her association with Minoan civilisation.
STR: C
END: B
AGI: C
MAN: A
LUC: E
NP: B
Height/Weight: 181cm/68kg
Gender: Female
Likes: Bulls, Breeding, Her Son
Dislikes: Poseidon, Butchers, Forgetting Stuff
Talent: Conception a monster.
Natural Enemy: Minos
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Human, Monster, Divine
Class skills:
Mad Enhancement: (C)
The Skill that characterises a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. At this, all parameters other than Mana and Luck are ranked-up, but most of the servant's reason has been lost.
Berserker is suffering from the Divine Curse imposed on her by Poseidon that made her felt mad lust for the Cretan Bull. As such, rather than being trapped in a state of complete rage, she's now in a state of "uncontrollable, unnatural lust".
Personal skills:
High-Speed Divine Words: (-)
A skill that allow to activate thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. It is the language of the Age of Gods, back when speech played a huge role in magic.
As the sister of Circe who followed the same teaching as her, Berserker was an highly talented mage, and thus would normally have a high rank in this rank even when not summoned in the Caster class. In fact, said class is naturally the one where she is most powerful and there is no doubt that she would have been summoned as such if not for the botched ritual of an incompetent magus. However, due to the loss of her reason as a Berserker, this skill has effectively been sealed.
Innocent Monster: (C)
An attribute possessed by those whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for their actual will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed.
Due to partaking in bestiality and birthing the bestial minotaur, Berserker was seen has having become an existence less than human by the greeks who told her legend. As a result, her appearance and ability have become closer to that of her monstrous child. Furthermore, it has distorted her personality even more than it would have been by her Mad Enhancement skill.
Divinity: (E)
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defense' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank.
The daughter of Helios, the personification of the sun, and the oceanid Perse, Berserker was even workshipped as an goddess in some regions of Grece and thus would normally be granted a A-rank in this skill. However, due to carrying the ire of Poseidon and being reduced to an existence below human, her divine nature has been severely lowered.
Clairvoyance: (B-)
A visual ability that is also called 'Eagle Eye'. This is generally a must-have ability of the Archer class. It is also frequently used during scouting. Simply looking from a high location is sufficient to fully survey a town and search for enemies. In addition, Clairvoyance will affect the accuracy of bows. It connotes superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. At higher ranks, it is possible that the bearers of this Skill have acquired abilities such as precognition ('future vision') and other forms of perception beyond standard eyesight (X-ray vision and so forth).
At this rank, a type of future sight (future prediction) is granted. As someone that was an oricular godess prayed upon by spartans for prophetic dreams, it follows that Berserker possess this ability even after her divine nature has been degraded. However, due to her loss of reason, she is unable to properly make use of her predictions. If anything, it makes her even less lucid by confusing her about what has already happened and what is going to happen.
Monstrous Breeding: (A)
A rare skill denoting one who, trough unholy copulating with a beast, gave birth to a monstrous being. If the servant were to breed with a nonhuman being, they have a possibility to be impregnated or impregnate depending on gender, without regards for the natural comptability between the two party. The resulting pregnancy would be unnaturaly fast, resulting in the birth of a monstrous being after only a few hours. The resulting monster is a mixture of the two parent's traits, with abilities related to the nonhuman one (for exemple, a man breeding with a mare would result in a quick centaur), their strength depending on the rank of this skill. Normally, even with a high rank, these unholy creature can only at best reach the level of a servant with E-rank parameters in all categories. However, breeding with fantasticals creatures such as Phantasmal Beasts, Divine Beasts or even monstrous Servants would result in stronger monsters that could even reach the level of mid-level servants if their parents are overwelmingly powerful.
Trough her mating with the Cretan Bull, Berserker gave birth to the Minotaur, one of Greek Mythology's most infamous monsters.
Noble Phantasm(s)
Personality
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Pasiphae: Mind-break Doujin heroine of the season, anyone? And they say anime is perverted... Classical mythology did all this stuff before it was cool.
Seriously though, pretty cool sheet.
In greek mythology anyone can bang anyone, or better, anyTHING.
Also, royd, you have a hou yi sheet dont? What you think of mine?
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Fair, but i wanted a more defensife NP and i dont know his legend all that well (its a little hard to findo something about him who is not 'he shoot the nine suns')
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Also, it's me, or every girl who is hinted to be atracted to shirou looks like would be okay with a threesome?
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here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
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Argh, my computer decided to stop working and break down. Well, it was pretty old anyway... :V
Dammit, now I have to recover my sheet from memory. Again.
I personally never really felt satisfied with the "Hero of the People!" Hou Yi. Or "Gigantic Explosive Arrows!" Hou Yi. Didn't make sense to me. Here's my take on the fellow. I made him mostly because I wanted to try a different approach for his Noble Phantasm. But I found that for him to have it he has to go straight past anti-hero into edgelord territory and I like that even less. However seeing several more interpretations of this guy's finally motivated me to finish. Now I can leave him behind me.
Class: Archer
Alternate Class: Berserker
True Name: Hou Yi
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Origin: Chinese Mythology
Region: Greater Yellow River Watershed
Armament: Asymmetrical Composite Bow
Str: B
End: B
Agi: B
Mag: A
Luc: E
Height/Weight: 5’11”/175 lb
Gender: Male
Like: Retributive “Justice”, Vigilantism
Dislike: Mercy, Moral Relativism, Rehabilitation, Restorative Justice,
Talent: Archery, Divorce, Retribution, Tunnel Vision
Natural Enemy: Guanyin, Moderation, Sanity
Attribute: Sky
Trait: Divine, Human, Origin
Class Skills:
Independent Action A
For recklessly endangering the World Hou Yi was stripped of his divine status and incarnated as a mortal man. This did not slow him down much. The years he spent amongst the forests, mountains, and rivers were filled with adventures, great hunts, and battles against numerous dangerous foes. To be honest it was during this time alone that Hou Yi was at his happiest, far away from official censure and moderating pressure of any authority figure or body, where he can pursue his stark vision of “justice” to his heart’s content. Even after marrying the woman he believed he loved, he spent so much time away that ultimately the trust and love between him and his wife eroded to nothing. Hou Yi can remain manifest in the world for a week without input or even a contract. However, using Noble Phantasms decreases this time.
Magic Resistance B
In his wanderings across the river valleys that birthed the first Dynasty of China, Hou Yi fought and slew numerous monstrous beasts, demons, evil dragons, restless dead, and rogue gods. Many of these opponents employed various deadly spells and illusions against him. However Hou Yi was always able to overcome such trickery and take down his quarry. He can cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even High Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals have difficulty affecting him. It’s actually surprising that his Magic Resistance isn’t even higher. Perhaps he was just a little too efficient in his methods, ending all his fights before his foes can bring their truly powerful magic to bear, or perhaps there’s just something a little less than wholesome about Hou Yi.
Personal Skills:
Clairvoyance B
Hou Yi lost much of his perceptive powers when he was stripped of his Divine status. Even so, few could match the acuity of his vision. His ability to detect and track even very small objects at great distances and supersonic speeds synergizes remarkably well with his archery skill. At his level reflexive long range interception of another Archer’s arrows with his own shots becomes easy as he demonstrated much later in his life against his pupil Feng Meng’s “lackluster” initial attempts to murder him and usurp his station. With his rank in Clairvoyance, Hou Yi also has some minor ability to visualize spiritual bodies and large concentrations of mana. It was this ability that helped him track down some of his more elusive quarries during his many hunts.
Divinity C
As a true god who was incarnated as a mortal, Hou Yi should have the highest natural Rank in Divinity of A+. However the nature of that loss as punitive measure and the antipathy he feels for the other gods for what he truly sees as an unjust treatment lowers Hou Yi’s Divinity to a much more modest Rank. Through his Divinity Hou Yi gains only some minor resistances against certain harmful effects on his body and some minor ability to pierce a few special protective abilities his foes might possess. However one of his Noble Phantasms makes the 2nd effect basically a moot point and he’s a long range specialist anyways so he’s not really bothered by the weakness of his Divine gifts. Long after his death Mortals deified Hou Yi again as a Sun God. However the situation is rather complex and that Hou Yi and Hou Yi the Archer are really different people.
Eternal Bow Mastery A+
Even at the end of Hou Yi’s life, dragged down by the frailty of old age and burdened by a consuming bitterness at the unfair hand he believe he was dealt, He remained the best Archer of his era. His skill was so unassailable that his jealous student had to resort to beating the elderly Hou Yi to death with a wooden club in order to inherit his title. At this level, Hou Yi’s archery is much less a sequence of practiced physical motions and much more a simple exercise of will. He sights his target and his arrow flies true. Such is his expertise that even as a Berserker he will still have full access to his Archery capability, including his Noble Phantasms.
Mental Pollution A
As long as he has existed, Hou Yi has possessed an absolutely stark vision of “justice” that can only be described as madness by more rational minds, a black and white insanity. All wrongdoing must be punished, regardless of circumstances surrounding the act and regardless of any consequences. Punishments are uniformly severe with no provisions given for the wrongdoer to learn from their mistakes, redemption, or even simple mercy. In other words, he inflicts pure spiteful retribution rather than any sort of “true” justice. It is this twisted mindset that caused Hou Yi to shoot down and kill nine out of ten sun gods in his defining moment. It was this twisted mindset that would have seen him slay the last sun as well and doom the entire World to a frozen death had he not been restrained by the other gods.
Noble Phantasms:
Marquis Pacifier ~ Mortal Archery at its Very Finest B+
Tenth Arrow ~ Rushing Heedless into Catastrophe A++
Personality
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This is certainly a... different take on Hou Yi. I never would've imagined him as a "monster of justice" knight Templar-type character. Compared to the Hou Yi sheets the rest of us have done, this is almost like an Alter version.
Still a good sheet though. Very creative interpretation of his second NP. Incidentally, I wonder how he'd get along with someone like EMIYA as fellow 'heroes of justice'...