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    i feel like sunny not participating on its own prompt Its like those really OP anime characters that hold back on their powers on purpose.
    Sunny is the Rock Lee of CaS

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    As for Caesarion, it's a nice faceclaim for him, and the rationale of the end of Egypt as a return to the sea of chaos is very neat and flavorful. But I think the strongest part is the background and personality you gave him with his family and in his own head. His last act is very sweet as is the holding off the invaders for 11 days. ;.;


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    Caesarion: Never seen a sheet for the guy before but it thematically suits the dude perfectly. I agree with Sunny that the characterisation of the guy is the strongest aspect. Would gladly use as my 3* Assassin in fgo.

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    changed Yuenu faceclaim

    I managed to find a green-haired saberface -- sort of

    it fits the whole knockoff chinese king arthur thing

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    Been reading a lot of Toriko and Food Wars! lately and couldn't help myself.
    I RULER I
    "The best things in life are not always free, but they're definitely edible."


    Marcus Gavius Apicius
    Alignment: True Neutral
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    Strength: D
    Endurance:
    D

    Agility:
    C

    Mana:
    B
    Luck:
    B

    Noble Phantasm:
    ???

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    Character details
    Likes: Extravagant foods, cooking
    Dislikes: Commoners foods
    Talents: Overspending, preparing large meals
    Natural Enemy: His vessel
    Class Skills\
    >Magic Resistance: [B]
    A Servant's ability to resist thaumaturgical effects. At B-rank, Ruler is capable of negating four-verse spells and greater rituals.

    >True Taste Discernment: [A]
    A unique skill that has replaced True Name Discernment. It is a Skill reserved for those who have only the haughtiest tastes and are the crme de la crme of food snobs, of which there are none more so than Ruler. Once even he heard of wonderful shrimp that was fished off the North African shores of Libya and sought it out for himself, but after tasting the shrimp once, he become immediately disillusioned and hailed for his ship's captain to sail them back to Italy without once shoring. With just the most half-hearted of bites, Ruler can judge the worth of anything. He can also discern a meal's ingredients through smell alone.

    This skill applies to more than just food. By licking the blade of a sword, Ruler can accurately determine its weight, its material, the era it was made, and it even its region of origin. If the blade is a Noble Phantasm, he will instantly uncover its rank and true name. And, it goes without saying but, if Ruler tastes a Servant, he will automatically know their True Name, skills and any Noble Phantasms they possess, just as he would with True Name Discernment.

    >God's Resolution: [D]
    This Skill is the privilege of Ruler as one who presides over the Holy Grail War, which would normally grant him two Command Seals for each participating Servant. Ruler, only obtains one per Servant, but when the Servant he is commanding is inside of his territory each of his commands becomes equivalent to two Command Seals when used.

    Personal Skills\
    >Projection Magecraft (Gourmet): [B+++]
    A Skill that stems from Ruler's vessel rather than himself. It is a method of magecraft called "Gradient Air," but more specialized. It seems that the boy Ruler has possessed has a unique attribute to him; one that makes his existence closer to that of a sword's. In a sense this makes his body the perfect forge. The skill gives Ruler the ability to project whatever arms he chooses. Though, the resulting projection is always a hollow replica. As a means to accommodate this, Ruler has managed to reconfigured the skill to better fit his skill set.

    It has been modified to such a degree that it no longer works as originally intended. Ruler cannot project 'weapons' in the traditional sense, as he claims that he "has no use for such things". He can only project things related to the world of gourmet: knives, pots, pans, spatulas, eating utensils. Though, this restriction comes with the bonus that all of his cooking utensils are of the most pristine quality.

    >Gourmand of Steel: [C]
    A sublimation of Ruler's zealotry when it comes to tracking down extravagant and exotic foods. Whenever Ruler discovers a new ingredient or amazing dish he has never heard of, he becomes obsessed with trying it out himself and making it a part of his culinary repertoire. From then on, he becomes akin to a train set on a destination and will focus on nothing else. Anything that infringes of this quest of his is seen an obstacle he must run through.

    When seeking out a new food that has caught Ruler's attention, he gains the skills Bravery, Eye of Mind (False), and Mad Enhancement all of one rank lower than Gourmand of Steel.

    >Medicinal Cuisine: [C]
    Contrary to common belief, Ruler is not the sole author of De Re Coquinaria. How much of its content is his, and how much it belongs to later cooks is forever up to debate. Enough are his for him to gain access to recipes of the antique cookbook that delve into treating food related ailments, however.

    In less than ten turns, Ruler can produce an easily digestible snack that heals minor injuries. Within thirty, he can also treat more serious ones. In within seventy, even wounds that are the result of curses and other malevolent magic can be exorcised.

    >Territory Creation: [B+]
    This Skill represents the ability to create a territory advantageous to oneself as a magus. The workshops of common magi are also included in as territories, but at rank A, it is possible to create a temple class territory exceeding that of a workshop. Ruler cannot produce a 'traditional' workshop. Rather, he creates a kitchen. This is the chef's workshop - the true church. A domain (in Ruler's opinion) more sacred than any monastery. Also, while inside of of his Kitchen, Ruler's Projection Magecraft (Gourmet), Gourmand of Steel, and Medicinal Cuisine skills all increase by one rank.

    Noble Phantasms
    Unlimited Courseworks --Infinite Eden of Food--
    [Anti-Unit] A(Range: 1-10 Target: 1 Person)

    The Reality Marble of Shirou Emiya influenced by the venerable gourmand of antiquity, Marcus Gavius Apicius. Inside of what was previously a wasteland of swords now exists a physical manifestation of the enitre contents of De Re Coquinaria, better known as Apicius.

    While Apicius himself wrote barely 3/5 of the cookbook, it as a whole being ascribed to his creation, has not only given him access to all of its recipes, it has influenced Shirou Emiya's Reality Marble to the extent that his inner world is literally a world of food. Fresh orchards that regrow their fruit the moment they are plucked, endless rivers full of both fresh and saltwater fish, swine and cows forever grazing until they beckoned. It is a manifestation of everything Apicius ever wanted in life: a place where he can eat every extravagant food he dreamed of and cook to his whim.

    Saber --Gluttonous Defender of the Kitchen--
    [Anti-Unit] A(Range: 1-10 Target: 1 Person)

    A cutlery blade that was projected in the kitchen inside Apicius' Reality Marble. It is the only blade Apicius is capable of projecting that could be considered a Noble Phantasm. And it is another thing born primarily from his vessel's history rather than his own. Too big for a kitchen knife, Apicius dubbed the knife 'Saber' instead.

    Only capable of being manifesting while inside Apicius' kitchen, it takes the form a tiny humanoid, smaller even than a child, but surprisingly powerful. Likely modeled after what Apicius believes to the be the guardian of whatever place his vessel formerly honed his own culinary craft in, it continues to perform its duties here. It possesses impressive parameters and is capable of fighting average Servant on relatively even footing so long as they do not use their Noble Phantasms. However, do not be confused by miniature the weapon it wields in combat - it is most certainly not a Holy Sword. It's still rather sharp though, and the Saber is capable of creating a potent destructive force by calling out the false sword's name (Glutcalibur) and detonating it like a Broken Phantasm. It will not be able to produce the sword again until it recovers mana via a healthy and hardy meal.

    After every battle, this blade must be nourished to a rather insane degree considering its size. It eats as much as a grown men on average, and a bonus two when it has to recover its Glutcalibur. Keeping it well fed is a harsh labor in and of itself...

    Also, take note that while inside of Apicius' Reality Marble, the Saber will become human sized, her Glutcalibur will become equivalent to an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm, and it will be able to recover up to three times after being used as Broken Phantasm without her having to eat.


    Lore
    Ruler's True Name is Marcus Gavius Apicius, a Roman epicur of antiquity, known for his extravagant tastes as well as being the original author of one of the oldest cookbooks in recorded history. He spared no expense throughout his life on his passion for food, for he believe that life was a waste if one could not indulge in the venerable tastes it had to offer. The vast majority of his money went into his kitchen and the foods he amassed throughout his time. He even risked a large sum still trying to outbid someone for some red mullet that Emperor Tiberius had put up for auction. He was also a much favored figure in the higher echelons of Rome. His obsession with quality foods and collecting recipes from across the empire led to him being made into a imperial host who held dinners for foreign dignitaries. He was a model gourmand, described by Tertullian as "the Patron Saint of Cooks". And while he will never be canonized, like many actual saints that were, Apicius' life concluded with tragedy.

    Apicius' daughter Apicata was divorced by her husband Sejanus for Livilla, a woman of higher rank whom he had been having an affair with, and also he had co-conspired with to assassinate her late husband and Emperor Tiberius' son, Drusus. When Apicata discovered the truth of Drusus' death she delivered the news to the emperor in a letter. Tiberius quickly and violently lashed out at the revelation, having both Sejanus and Livilla executed, as well Apicata and Sejanus' children, so that the traitor he would have no heirs. While this sent Apicata in a permanent state of distraught, what caused Apicius' infamous suicide would have little to do with any of this chaos.

    Rather, when he learned that his poor management of his funds would eventually lead to him dying impoverished and incapable of enjoying his high-quality cuisine, he chose to poison himself after one last meal.

    There is one problem with Ruler manifesting as cook - he is not one.

    In Roman society, cooks were slaves and former slaves. In order to be conjured, Apicius required the proper vessel with whom he was incompatible. Unfortunately, the boy he ended up with was compatible in all but philosophy when it came to gourmet. As a fan of foods of excessive quality, Apicius constantly finds himself at odds with his vessel. It has gotten to the point where can cannot even throw commoners food away with his body seizing up, and some voice screaming "Why are you throwing perfectly good food away, you idiot!"

    To Apicius' dismay, this has led to his opinion on cooking changing, and him finding a low-class meal... acceptable... Apicius fears that, at this rate, he may wind up cooking red mullet without first bathing it a wine made from red mullet.
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    A shame there's no God's Tongue references. Still, it's a fun and amazing sheet! Good job.

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    This is the only acceptable Demi-Servant Emiya, imo

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    true name: Tiresias
    class: caster.
    Alternate classes: ruler.
    alignment: lawful good.

    parameters:
    strength: D
    agility: C
    mana: B
    endurance: D
    luck: E

    appearance: a pretty girl in her teens with a modest frame, black hair, and eyes that are completely white that shine with the golden light of divinity usully they are covered with modest white bandage, her complexion is pale and her hair is worn down to her shoulders. she wears a dirty ratty gown and no shoes, and a rose is placed in her hair.

    background: Tiresias originally an arrogant man who slayed two snakes matting and was cursed by the gods being turned into a women for seven years, he played a major role in the tragic events befalling Thebes, later after an argument between Zuez and Hera over which sex enjoyed the most pleasure Tiresias said he believed females enjoyed the most pleasure and was thus blinded by Hera as a punishment for arguing her, however Zuez grateful for taking his side blessed Tiresias with the gift of prophesy and longnativivty later he he become an oracle for Apollo and told many heroes there futures in Thebes this led to the tragedy that befell Thebes, after his death unable to pass he went into the greek underworld and helped Jason during the events of the odyssey by telling him of the future. after the end of the age of gods he simply wondered the earth eventually she passed on and become part of the throne of heroes.

    personality: she is a kind girl who gives her advice to any buddy she can, she does not hate nor discriminate but she will do everything in her power to help others even if the best thing for them is to die, in this way she is cold but kind she is the type who will always shed at least one tear for the dead thou that does not mean that she will not kill or is pacifistic thou she will not kill or harm more then is nesscarry, she does not a possess a wish for the grail but simply wishes to give advice and keep those who use the grail to do harm from ever reaching the grail.

    class skills:
    item construction:
    D: Capable of creating magical items, tools, and potions of up to an D rank.

    Territory Creation, A:
    The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. This can be done in a multitude of ways, including erecting barriers, altering the surrounding environment. caster possess this skill at the rank of A were the creation of a temple becomes possible, allowing caster to fully alter the terrain the temple will appear with paintings depicting casters life, as well as statues praying homage to apollo.

    clairvoyance, B
    Clairvoyance connotes superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. At higher ranks, it is possible that the bearers of this skill have acquired such abilities as precognition ("future vision") and other forms of perception beyond standard eyesight (X-ray vision and so forth). at casters rank she is able to gain the full gift of prophecy, altho unlike with chiron this gift is not as helpful in battle and does not count roll when she sees the future, in a way caster sees the destiny of all those she sees she knows how they will end but not the events that lead up to that end.

    Discernment of the Poor
    Discernment of the Poor is insight to see through the opponent's character and attribute.
    A: Will not be deceived by excuses and deceptions from words. (It expresses the power to grasp the true nature of the opponent) a skill developed through simply being on all sides past, present future, god and man, women and male thus she possesses this at a high rank, arrogant and not, etc.


    Divinity, B.
    Divinity is the measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster, Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due one's dislike for the gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. due to her representing being on all halts male female, future, past etc humans began to perceive her as a sort of a demigod and she a fully accepted that idea and has gained a high rank in this skill.

    NP:
    name: do mis
    rank: A+.
    incantation: I have walked the path of every half, I have stood on light and i have stood on dark, a i am neither a man nor a women, i am not of the past, nor am i future yet I have, let my life be seemed by you, do mis.
    description:
    when the incantation is spoke caster summons a reality marble that take the appearance and approximate size of the city of Thebes, one of the city is appears to be made whole of shadows but all the buildings appear newly built while one half is made appears to be crumbled run Thebes with a constant sun rise. all servants within a mile radius, cater may choose to switch roles by switching to the other half, for example she can coulee make the strongest servant the weakest servant but would up making the weakest servant the strongest servant. this ability does not affect castor her self and allows caster to create consent confusion in her enemies, and she can sue it to attack and block for example if an opponent gets to close enough to attack her should could close and replace it with its other half distance making it hard for opponents to fight her. it allows her to reverse things by replacing them with there other half she could make all the male servants female but all the female servants would become male, should could make far away close, make up down, and etc. when combined with her sue of divine words it would become very difficult to beat her while one remains in her reality marble, however each reversal cost and exceptional amount of mana so she can only do about 10 reversals before her reality marble would collapse to due to her having a lack of mana.










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    the fairie of the lake

    i dont know how good is this sheet, or if what i im trying to do actualy works, but i resolve to post anyway. like most of what i've been writing, this is the first of two releated sheets, with the second coming sometime betwen tomorow and the next 300 years.


    Saber: Vivianne

    Str:C, End:C, Agi:C
    Mna:A, Lck:B, Np:A
    Gender: female
    Height: 160cm
    Weight: 43kg
    Place of origin: britain
    Armament: sword
    Likes: beautiful views, flowers, cool knights
    Deslike: polution, perverts, yandere-type people
    Talents: gift giving
    Natural enemies: merlin, morgan le fay

    Skills

    Magic resistence(A): Cancel spells of "A-Rank" or below. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi.

    Riding(B): One can ride animals and most vehicles with above average expertise. Saber is the one who teached the famous Lancelot how ride.

    Hero creation(A): this skill represents one's ability to raise a Hero. Saber raised Lancelot, one of the most famous knight of the round table.

    Child of Nature(A): a Skill that represents one as a children born in the Reverse Side of the World that will eventually become the same. Due to the circustances of Ruler's conception, she has receive great blessings from the World.

    Mana burst(water)(A): A version of Mana Burst that infuses weapons with Magical Energy with the water element. saber was know as the lady of the lake, she has mastery over the element of water.

    Noble phantasm

    Excalibur Artorious: to my king, the sword of promised victory (anti-unit: A):
    the crystalization of the legend when Saber presented the holy sword Excalibur to the king of knights.
    saber is invoked with her own Excalibur, however the true power of the sword is severely limited.
    to activate this Noble phantasm, Saber chooses a person to recive the sword, doing this turns then into a "wielder of the holy sword", and in exchange, all of sabers stats and her mana burst(water) recive a rank down.
    even a human, if affected by this Noble phantasm, becomes strong enough to fight on the level of a servant of the three knight classes. They gain the skills "Magic resistence(C)", "Mana burst(B)" and "Protection of the fairies(A)", but most important, they gain access to the noble phantasm "Excalibur: sword of promised victory". all costs for the use of this skills comes from the target himself.

    Excalibur Nimueh: fair wanton maiden, sword of ultimate victory (anti-Evil: EX):
    Sabers most powerful attack, the ultimate trump card that end's all battles by reveling Excalibur's true nature as a tool to save the world.
    Saber can only use this noble phantasm once "Excalibur Artorious" is alredy in effect. by calling its name, the "wielder of the holy sword" returns the blade to saber, since this act signifies the blade "end of the battle", Saber can release a last attack that cannot be blocked, resisted, evaded or survived.
    once this is used, all effects of "Excalibur Artorious" are lost, and both noble phantasms are sealed permanently.

    Lore: Saber's true name is Vivianne, or rather, one of the two souls that made up the being know as Vivianne.
    Throughout the matter of britain, Vivianne (sometimes called Nimueh or Niniann) is one of the most important characters. however, this accouts of her true personality vary drasticly from one story to another. this is because Vivianne, being a Elemental born from the world, had two personalities.
    Saber is the soul who came to be know a the "Lady of the lake", the one who presents Arthur with the holy sword Excalibur and who eventualy recives the sword back.

    personality: Saber is very gracious by nature. when around her allies, she exhales an air of tranquility that made can calm even the most harden warriors. this is not say that she is innofensive, as her enemies will meet a woman that rages like a flood.
    she has a very righteous mind set, acting with honor and expecting others to do the same, this further emphasizes her strong maternal instinct, giving her an aura kinda like a strict but caring mother.


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Class: Rider
    Alternate Classes: Caster
    Master:
    True Name: Medea, Witch of Vengeance
    Sex: Female
    Height/Weight: 163cm/51kg
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Likes: Men of few words and sincerity, girls in cute clothes
    Dislikes: Muscles
    Talents: Plotting, crafting
    Natural Enemy: The Argonauts (particularly Jason, Heracles)

    Appearance
    As a Rider, Medea looks pretty much the same as she does when summoned as a Caster. In theory she might have a different outfit - or at least she might have some minor differences in her outfit - but since I can’t find any good images that I like, I’ll just say that her appearance doesn’t really change in any ways worth talking about.

    Stats
    Strength: E
    Endurance: D
    Agility: B
    Magical Energy: A
    Luck: B
    Noble Phantasm: A

    Skills
    Class Skills:
    Riding: A++
    A Skill denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding. Rider is able to ride almost every beast and every vehicle. While still incapable of ‘riding’ Dragon-kind, she is capable of ‘steering’ them if they consent.

    Magic Resistance: D++
    A Skill that grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. This Rank cancels Single-Action spells; Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy. However, through the use of certain drugs and potions, Rider can temporarily increase her proficiency with this skill so that it can cancel spells with a chant below two verses and resist magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

    Personal Skills:
    High-Speed Divine Words: B
    A Skill that assists with magical incantations via a power to activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. The language of the Age of Gods, back when words played a heavy role in spellcasting. As such, it is a power long lost by modern magi. It is particularly useful for direct attack magic. At this Rank, High-Thaumaturgy can be cast at the speed of Single-Action spells. Her aptitude at this Skill has been reduced due to her being summoned as a Rider, in truth she has an A-Rank ability.

    Item Construction: B+
    The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. Rider mostly uses this Skill to create poisons but she is capable of creating many potions and medicines - under the right circumstances, she can even create a concoction capable of granting limited immortality. Her original Rank in this Skill was A, however it has been reduced due to being summoned as a Rider.

    Poison Resistance: A--
    Rider, an excellent treatment magus, naturally invalidates all poisons, making her poisonproof. At the same time she is healing someone of poison, she is also able to restore their physical strength. However, her personality is no longer suited towards such supportive acts and, as such, the Skill has been reduced in effectiveness; she can simply no longer find it within herself to be that girl, who loved and cared for everyone, anymore.

    Divinity: C+
    A Skill that is the measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. Those who have A-Rank Divinity or above has reached the Throne of Gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defense' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. Rider is ‘only’ the granddaughter of the Sun God, Helios, but she received many favours from him in life while also learning magic from another Divine Spirit, Hecate.

    Noble Phantasms
    Elios Drakones Arma, Dragon-Chariot of the Sun God: A++ (Escape)
    A golden chariot, glowing with the light of the sun, gifted to Medea by her grandfather, Helios, in order to make her escape from Corinth following her act of vengeance against Jason there. Capable of flight and driven by two lesser dragons with a significant divine aspect to them, Elios Drakones Arma has quite a bit of combat potential despite being imbued with the concept of ‘escape’. Elios Drakones Arma could arguably be called a Noble Phantasm that belongs to Helios which is merely being loaned to Medea out of affection, rather than something that actually belongs to her. Other than indestructibility and flight, the power of the actual chariot is that of containing - and releasing - the light of Helios, which makes it both hard for others to look at and slowly regenerates Medea’s supply of magical energy while she rides it. The drakones pulling the chariot are both high middle-rank Phantasmal Beasts of Dragon-kind who obey Medea’s commands because their true master, Helios, told them to do so - while not invincible, the presence of the two drakones makes Medea summoned under the Rider class an actual contender in most Grail Wars.

    Elios Drakones Arma’s true power lies not in combat, but in the very concept that imbues it when used as Medea’s Noble Phantasm; escape. As Medea lacks true ownership of the Dragon-Chariot of the Sun God as well as not having the skill or knowledge to summon dragons, in order to call upon the Noble Phantasm Medea needs to recite a prayer to Helios that equates to a 12-line aria and expend a considerable amount of magical energy to make sure that the prayer is actually heard. If those requirements are fulfilled then Elios Drakones Arma will rocket down from the heavens and stop in front of Medea - an event which is at least theoretically capable of being used as an attack if the enemy were to not dodge the very noticeable Noble Phantasm for some reason. However, if Medea is in a life-and-death situation where she is in true danger of death Elios Drakones Arma will materialize automatically around her and let her spirit herself away for a quick exit. This secondary ‘Deus ex Machina’ effect of the Noble Phantasm has a very steep mana cost, but doesn’t apply it until Medea is safely away from her enemies. It has a ‘recharge rate’ of roughly seven days, however the fact that most Holy Grail Wars usually last less than a week means that it is a one-time event in most cases of her summoning as a Rider.

    Argon Coin, the Golden Fleece: D (Anti-Unit)
    A coat of golden wool, shorn from the winged ram Chrysomallos and given to King Aetes of Colchis by Phrixus as a token of his gratitude. It was retrieved by Jason to defeat King Aetes with much assistance from Medea, who had been enchanted by the goddess Aphrodite to love Jason. It is very valuable as the hidden treasure of Colchis, and while there is nothing special about the fleece itself, there is an anecdote that a dragon will appear if it is thrown on the ground. The exact reason isn't known, but it seems people have mixed up the Golden Fleece with the dragon that used to guard it, making the story feel like some kind of satire.

    Medea doesn’t possess the knowledge or skill to use it to summon a Phantasmal Beast, but unlike when she is summoned as a Caster, as a Rider she is capable of making some use of it. The Golden Fleece itself possesses healing properties which allows someone who is in contact with it to passively heal wounds and diseases. The most practical usage of this ability would be to wrap it around oneself or drape it over their shoulders, but Medea personally prefers to hug it tightly to her chest - not that she would ever reveal this information to anybody.

    Lore/Personality
    Pretty sure we all know Medea’s lore in the Nasuverse at this point, so I won’t bother including it here. I will go into her Personality a bit in here, though.

    When summoned as a Rider it is the ‘granddaughter of Helios’ aspect of Medea that is emphasized over her ‘witch of betrayal’ aspect, as opposed to her Caster incarnation where it is simply dropped. While this ultimately doesn’t have a huge effect on her Skills (apart from giving her Divinity and Poison Resistance like her younger form) it does have a noticeable effect on her personality. If Caster Medea could be considered ‘Medea, the bitter old witch who despises the world for its treatment of her’ then Rider Medea could be considered ‘Medea, the furious young woman who seeks vengeance on the world that wronged her’. Perhaps this is due to her ‘granddaughter of Helios’ aspect being so closely tied to her escape from Corinth? In practice the effect that this has on Medea is making her more passionate, although she could not be considered hot blooded by any means.

    Her rage and hatred are more ‘hot’ than in her Caster incarnation and she is more willing to engage in dangerous, dramatic acts with a high risk-reward ratio. She is more likely to perceive actions as being slights or betrayals and is quicker to act on her desires for retribution. Conversely, she is also more susceptible to acts of affection and genuine altruism or selflessness, although she is just as wary and skeptical of them and the “heroes” that often perform them as her 'other self' - perhaps even moreso. While just as capable of ‘girly behaviour’ such as squeeing over the idea of being able to dress cute girls up in cute clothing, as a Rider she generally has a more rough and domineering personality - this especially shows around those that she genuinely cares about with her bossily telling them to let her plot out the most ‘risk free path to winning the Grail War’ so that she doesn’t risk them dying - and, by extension, her losing them. If she were to fall in love with someone, she could be considered something of an ‘affectionate dominatrix’ at times.


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    Alright, so, I tried something a bit different for formatting this time since I wanted to see if it helped things stand out and make the sheet less like a giant wall of text. Tell me what you think of it, please. As for the sheet itself... I'm kind of suspecting that I'm going to get yelled at for not doing Medea properly, but I tried to make something good. So thats something, r-right?

    Oh, and Elios Drakones Arma is a shitty google translate name that I kind of hate. I couldn't come up with a better name for it, though, so if someone could suggest something better I'd really appreciate it.
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    This just reminded how bad my original Rider!Medea was in comparison and how I really need to remake that.

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    Saber: Vivianne
    Not a Saberface. Immediate dislike.

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    But for real, I get what you’re going for here and there’s some good ideas but need a bit of brushing up in my opinion.

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    if she and saber looked the same, a bunch of people would be very confused, Lancelot the most.

    any specifics mistakes that i should keep in mind in the next sheet?


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    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
    if she and saber looked the same, a bunch of people would be very confused, Lancelot the most.

    any specifics mistakes that i should keep in mind in the next sheet?
    The Saberface thing was a joke. For me, it was the NP’s as they seemed to clash a bit in nature. In my books she should either be a non-combatant Saber or focus on how possessing Excalibur gives her the strength to fight as ya seemed to almost go in both directions.

    Just my point of view though.

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    ”The Supreme Poet? Father of the Italian Language? Honestly you all flatter me, I’m just a simple poet."


    Name; Dante Alighieri
    Class; Caster
    Armament: None
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Source: Italy, historical fact
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Human, Male, Weak to Enuma Elish

    Stats:
    Strength: E
    Agility: C
    Endurance: D
    Mana: A
    Luck: A+
    Noble Phantasm: EX

    Likes: Long adventures, Beatrice
    Dislikes: Nothing really
    Talents: Raising Hell
    Natural Enemy: ?

    Skills
    Class Skills:
    Territory Creation: EX
    The ability to create a workshop or terrain beneficial to one as a magus. Caster only holds it impossibly high rank due to a technicality with his Noble Phantasm, allowing him the creation of “workshops”. The territories he can create are something higher than temples, reaching that of Reality Marbles.

    Item Construction (False): A
    The ability to create items with magical energy and the proper resources. Any item Caster “makes” are pulled directly from one of his workshops, ranging from Divine weaponry wielded by angels to demon familiars.

    Personal Skills:
    Familiar (Vergil): B+
    The ability to posses the Roman poet Pubilus Vergilius Maro, more commonly known as Vergil, as a familiar. A Heroic Spirit in his own right, his appearance has been reduced to that of small bird, its feathers coated in the ashes of Inferno. The spirit serves as a medium for some of Caster’s magecraft, but alone it is comparable to a first rate magus in magical power. Vergil summons itself alongside Caster, stating that ”I watched over him once, I’ll gladly do it again.”

    Pure Eyes: A++
    A unique type of Mystic Eye that allows the user to see what is normally impossible to see by humans, such as colors outside the visible spectrum or even emotions. Caster can see through any trick or disguise up to A rank, skills surpassing this requiring a Luck Check to bypass, and can see the flow of magical energy from any distance. Obtained when he saw God.

    Magics from Beyond the Pale: EX
    A skill given to those who returned from Heaven, Purgatory, Hell, learning both the black magic of demons and the holy magic of angels. A composite skill of Baptismal Sacrament and Black Magic. With his left hand, he can cast curses, hexes, and summon powerful demons, while his right brings divine wrath upon all who stand before him. Spells created after the 14th century cannot be accessed.

    Noble Phantasm
    Divina Commedia
    Inferno, Purgatorio, Paradiso

    Reality Marble
    EX
    Targets: 1~99
    Range: 1~300

    In 1308, Caster began writing the book Divina Commedia, a view of his personal belief on what Heaven, Hell, and everything in between is like. From Hell's nine rings of torment and Heaven’s nine spheres of joy, this book stands as arguably the greatest novel ever written in Italian and one of the greatest in the entire world.

    Formatted in 94 cantos, the book contains countless detailed descriptions of all three planes. From rivers of boiling blood to the celestial bodies, it is all forever imprinted in the minds of its readers, and in the author himself.

    By reciting one of the cantos, he can pull the creatures, from demons to angels, into the physical plane to assist him. And if he is allowed to recite an entire act of Divina Commedia, he can impart that entire dimension as powerful conceptual weapons.

    Act 1: Inferno
    Inferno is, for lack of a better word, a place only equivalent to Hell. Any who’s soul Caster deems “Evil”, completely negating the alignment system and judging purely by whether they fall under one of the seven sins. Is normally a Reality Marble, but it has been altered into weaponized judgement.

    When manifested, the nine rings will appear in a backwards drill like shape, each ring representing one of the seven sins that Caster can effortlessly control. As you step through the gradually smaller and smaller rings, those who let their hearts be consumed by Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Wrath, Heresy, Violence, Fraud, or Treachery shall be punished by their own vices. Those who committed violence against their neighbors must be forced to stew in boiling blood for the rest of time, those who were greedy must push large bags of their own money up a neverending hill without rest, and so on. Those who used foresight must walk in circles with their heads turned completely around, as they attempted to see ahead of what they should, they are now forced to go forward while looking behind them. They aren’t truly “punishments” by Hell, they are what they brought upon themselves. If Caster wills it, he can use Vergil to allow them safe passage through his tests.

    Act 2: Purgatorio
    Purgatorio is Caster’s central workshop, using the souls trapped inside as his minions to produce magical items and regents to aid him. It differs from being a weapon to a territory, by reciting the cantos over a pre-established workshop, it warps the reality and space to create a seemingly infinite plane of gray stone and an equally infinitely tall mountain, reaching Heaven itself. There are countless amounts of souls inside, mining away at stones and at their workstations, creating hundreds of weapons, alchemical masterpieces, to simple furniture or growing tea leaves. It is extremely efficient, even high tier magical hexes or spells that Caster does not know can be “manufactured” here.

    Act 3: Paradiso
    Possibly the strongest of the three acts of his Noble Phantasm, Paradiso is not only a Reality Marble, but seven separate planes of existence all linked together, requiring a guide to navigate between them. Those who passed Inferno’s test can enter Paradiso at any time with Dante’s consent.

    Those who showed Temperance, Faith, and any other of the seven virtues will find a holy place, catering to every whim or desire they posses. But, despite being fully capable of letting those who enter commit any sin they want, anyone inside Paradiso will feel a strong compulsion to reign in their sinful desires and rest in peaceful bliss. Truly a Heaven on Earth.

    Lore
    Caster is Dante Alighieri, one of Italy’s most celebrated people and one of the greatest author’s in the entire world, the author of Divina Commedia, a story about himself traveling through Hell, Purgatory, and Heaven.

    Born sometime in May or June 1265 in Florence into the Guelphs, a political order dedicated to the papacy, he lived a fairly boring life. He was a minor politician and had a childhood crush that never went away, but his life was really nothing truly impressive.

    Save his masterpiece, Divina Commedia, or as it’s more commonly known as Dante’s Inferno, a book involving himself being through Hell, Purgatory, and Heaven by the poet Vergil and his childhood sweetheart, Beatrice Portinari. The lush storytelling and vivid descriptions of the three planes, being written in the common language Tuscan instead of the noble language, Latin letting it be accessed by nearly anyone in Florence, and the books massive popularity have lead to Caster being regarded as one of Italy’s most important historical figures and the reason Italian is the official language of Italy.

    The book is extremely long, taking up three separate parts of thirty three cantos each, save Inferno having one extra canto. From the lowest bowel of Hell to the highest point of Heaven, the book covers it all. Caster used the book as an opportunity to deliver some commentary on both philosophers he liked and his enemies, placing them where he deemed appropriate, even going as far as saying that he would be in Limbo and not in Heaven, an impressive display of humility.

    Towards the end of Purgatory and nearing Heaven, Vergil revealed that since he belonged in Limbo, he could not enter Heaven, and when Dante reached the top of the mountain, he discovered Eden and a woman named Matilda who brought him to the object of his one sided affection, Beatrice who had died several years prior to the story's setting. With her help, Dante not only traversed Heaven, but witnessed God himself.

    The book was finished only a year before his death at 56 years old. In his home country, he is revered as one of the greatest poets of all time and as one of Italy’s most important historical figures.

    Personality
    Caster can be best described as a hopeless romantic who knows he’s hopeless. He could probably write a bestselling tragic romance or love story, but he’s not really a fan of mushy stuff that doesn’t involve him.

    He loves inserting himself into stories, imagining what he would do in these crazy situations from beyond his imagination. Perhaps he would be a powerful warlock in the land of the Hobbit, a fearsome swordsman in the world of Dungeons & Dragons, or a priest, or a sniper, who knows? He sure as hell doesn’t, but that’s what makes it fun.

    He absolutely loves reading books, of all kinds and in any language imaginable. This can lead him into risky situations where he reads a book he’s not supposed to, either for moral or supernatural reasons, but he’ll figure it out or Vergil will drag him out by his claws.

    Relationships
    Vergil
    ”It is nice to see you my friend, but you’re a lot…smaller than I remember. And more feathery. It suits you.”

    Vlad III
    ”A vampire? Well, I can’t say it isn’t fitting. Hope he enjoys his blood very, very warm.”

    Jeanne D’Arc
    ”Burned alive after leading France to victory, and then saved the world again while fighting a priest from the East? Please, kick your feet up and rest, you deserve it and more.”

    Medb
    ”Be gone from my sight foul temptress! I’d send you to Hell, but I’m afraid you’d actually be into it!”

    Semiramis
    ”I don’t feel bad, you know? Your lust for power consumed you whole. Perhaps if you let goodness into your heart you can find yourself in Limbo one day, but for now the winds of the second circle howl your name.

    Cleopatra, Achilles
    ”I really should hate you both, but damn it all if you aren’t some genuinely nice people.

    Scthach
    ”You really should have thought about neutering that dog of yours. I mean, he slept with your sister and gave you a nephew, then killed said nephew after some terrible advice.

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    Originally going to be a submission for the contest, but don’t think it matches the prompt well enough.
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    wow! ok that's soo good I had to wear sunglasses.

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    So i've been running out of ideas latealy so i decided on a Pseudo servant which ive been thinking of doing for a few days.
    Basscialy, Izanami Pseudo servant, in the body of Asagami Fujino. i think it will fit perfectly because they are both yanderes.
    she is probably gonna drop tomorrow, or maybe monday
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    kinda funny because i am working on a servant with connections to izanami myself


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    Quote Originally Posted by massive_jojo_reference View Post
    Basscialy, Izanami Pseudo servant, in the body of Asagami Fujino. i think it will fit perfectly because they are both yanderes.
    I feel like Azaka woukd make way more sense.
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    azaka would probably be better with a fire deity


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