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    A very...interesting and well-crafted take on the troubled existence of Vincent Van Gogh, especially regarding his weird outlook on the world, his bleak sorrow, his NP, and his relationships.

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    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
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    Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
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    Throwing some ideas I abandoned a long time ago.

    Not-WIPs:

    Berserker Bai Qi: The Butcher of Qin, one of the greatest generals of the Warring States Period. Infamous for causing the deaths of around two million. An terrifying perfectionist in war, he does everything to keep his record unblemished by defeat. Funnily enough, this screwed him over on the long run (Died by forced suicide).

    Berserker Davy Jones: I initially ran with the idea of "What if any attempts to summon a Berserker-Class Naval HS ends up being hijacked by Davy?" With Jones being a Dead Face of the humans that died at sea, and his NP varies on whichever HS was originally summoned. Kinda lost the spark for it.

    Assassin Tanaka Shinbei: "Captain of Assassins" during the Bakamatsu and the de facto leader of the Four Hitokiris. Had the most kill out of the group, but I had trouble digging for his background and was thus dropped.

    Berserker Herne the Hunter: Hunter who died in Windsor and possibly one of the Wild Hunt's many leaders. Given there's not much on him, he was abandoned quickly. Probably added "something something Human-regressed into-Nature Spirit."

    Caster Hyakumonogatari Kaidenkai (Aoandon): If Nursery Rhyme if she was a collection of Japanese Wierd Tales. Based on the 100 Stories game. Never had the fire to finish the final stretch.

    Saber Chiba Shusaku Narimasa: The "Last Sword Saint," supposedly equal to Musashi Miyamoto in terms of victories. Abandoned since I couldn't elaborate any more on it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Fabuzer View Post
    Class: Foreigner

    True Name: Vincent van Gogh

    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

    Parameters:

    Strength: D
    Endurance: E
    Agility: D
    Mana: A
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: EX

    Damn, that was amazing. Having written a Foreigner before, this one is proof mine was terrible. Everything flows together so well, and makes so much sense! Especially linking Starry Night to Aiueb Gnshal like that. (Oh! And hello from a fellow Spacebattler! I'd forgotten you were on here too!)

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    So, I'm planning to post Lucius Artorius next, and I have more or less the idea for the sheet done, but I have my doubts about one of the NPs. The idea consists in giving up to 12 people a small
    Gift
    blessing
    that turns them into discount Knights of the Round Table, with some of the characteristic traits of the originals, but that also gives them their weaknesses and forces them to follow at a certain degree the roles of the KoRT.

    Example: The Gift of Tristan gives you a D-rank copy of Failnaught and Harp of Healing D, but it also makes you weak to poison, and you'll eventually have a misunderstanding with Artorius that will make you leave his side.

    Would this be too wanked?

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    So, I'm planning to post Lucius Artorius next, and I have more or less the idea for the sheet done, but I have my doubts about one of the NPs. The idea consists in giving up to 12 people a small
    Gift
    blessing
    that turns them into discount Knights of the Round Table, with some of the characteristic traits of the originals, but that also gives them their weaknesses and forces them to follow at a certain degree the roles of the KoRT.

    Example: The Gift of Tristan gives you a D-rank copy of Failnaught and Harp of Healing D, but it also makes you weak to poison, and you'll eventually have a misunderstanding with Artorius that will make you leave his side.

    Would this be too wanked?
    12 separate effects might be too complex. With the disadvantages inherent in that idea, wank shouldn't be an issue.

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    Well, logically, it'd be too difficult to find 12 people to have the complete squad in a regular HGW. There are 12 Gifts mostly so that Artorius can choose the most fitting ones for his allies.

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    "It sounds good when you say "For the People", but what you really want is the evil power to control others. Someone who uses false allegiances and conspiracies to ascend the throne is not worthy of leading the people!"


    Source



    True Name: Matilda
    Epithet: "Holy Roman Empress" & "Lady of the English"
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Origin: Historical
    Region: Western Europe (12th Century)
    Hidden Attribute: Human
    Armament: Shortsword
    Likes: Flowers, Roadtrips
    Dislikes: Boring people, Broken Promises
    Talents: Horse Riding. Mediation
    Natural Enemy: Conspirators

    Parameters:
    STR: (C) END: (D) AGI: (B) MGI: (D) LCK: (C) NP: (B)

    Appearance:

    Matilda takes the form of a woman around her mid-twenties. Long flowing brown hair and deep blue eyes. A flower sits at the top of her right ear, originally a gift from her first husband to remind her to be a proper lady whilst in public. She wears a white dress, boots and a gauntlet on her right arm.

    She carries a ornate, ceremonial shortsword. It isn't particularly special outside of looking pretty so she has to be careful not to break it against the Holy/Demonic weapons of other heroes.


    Personality:

    A young woman who would appear to be the finest lady of class... until she opens her mouth. Notoriously prideful, she takes great stock in her title of Empress and doesn't see herself as lesser to anyone no matter who they are. Combined with her unflappable personality, it is impossible to persuade her once she has set her mind on a task. This kind of attidtude tends to polarise people who will either love her or hate her, though she's consideralby mellowed out compared to her youth. That's not to say Matilda is a fool, with her broad scope of education and calm demeanor that allows her to make logical judgements even in the heat of battle. She also possesses a strong sense of duty and honor which compells her to do her role of Ruler but at the same time she feels a sense of guilt for stomping on the dreams of the Heroic Spirits but do it she must. In terms of likes, she is very restless and prefers activities that don't involve standing still. As for dislikes, she can't stand boring men (like her second husband) but even worse is people who scheme and backstab others. By her own admission, her worst trait is her sticky fingers as she has a habit of taking things without asking permission. She has a tic where she touches the flower atop her right ear when thinking about what to do.

    Her Wish upon the Grail? None, as befitting of a Ruler Class Servant. However this is less to do with the expected selflessness of the Class and more through "contentment" that despite not necessarily having an easy life, she is proud of the choices she made and is at peace with herself. If anything, being in a Holy Grail War itself is the only thing that could tempt her into wanting to make a selfish wish.


    Skills:
    Class Skills

    God's Resolution - (C)
    A Class Skill of the Ruler class and is the privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War; the right to use Command Spells against Servants, only given to Rulers. Each Ruler is normally granted two Command Spells for each Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War.

    Magic Resistance - (C)
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Matilda demonstrates some Magic Resistance due to her unwavering piety. However, since it is just averting (evading) the magecraft, fundamentally Matilda can still be hit by more elaborate tactics such as homing shots or by simply using a wide scale magic attack.

    True Name Discernment - (B)
    A Class Skill of the Ruler class where status information such as one's identity, Skills and Parameters are automatically revealed to the owner of this Skill when directly encountering a Servant. In regards to Servants with concealment abilities, a Luck Check is required to bypass those abilities.

    Personal Skills

    Charisma - (C)
    A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. For Matilda it is a mixed bag as she is remembered on the continent as a wise and noble Empress who acted in her subject's best interests, but to her country of birth she was known as a wanabe tyrant who upended their lives just so she could gain another crown and so she Rank ends up neither high nor low.

    Imperial Privilege - (B)
    An ability that, due to the insistence of the owner, abilities that did not manifest as Skills can be obtained for a short period of time. For Matilda, the corresponding Skills include Riding, Fencing and Eye for Art - abilities she claims to have possessed in life but are not tied to her legend.

    Military Tactics - (C)
    The tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm. Leading her troops into battle and seizing many a victory when hope was slim, Matilda has a vast array of experience in leading others and her allies gain a moderate morale boost.


    Noble Phantasm:
    O' Child of Divine Thunder
    The Hand of Saint James


    [Type - Anti Unit Weapon], [Noble Phantasm Rank - B], [Maximum Range - 1 Metre], [Maximum Number of Targets - 1]

    A Holy Relic retrieved from Germany, which once belonged to Saint James - one of the Twelve Apostles of Jesus Christ. Matilda's unwavering piety has earned her the favour of the Saint and now it takes the form of a gauntlet upon her right arm. The blessings of the Saints grants her a boost to her Parameters by one Rank, though its main ability is to impart the power of the "Boanerges" to slay "heretics" as was the Saint's role in life and so whatever weapon Matilda holds in her right hand deals Critical Damage to Demons, Vampires and other beings that are aberrations of nature.

    The ultimate ability of this Noble Phantasm is "Saint Finger: Thunder End" which is to gather all of Matilda's power into the gauntlet and slam it into the chest of the enemy, discharging all of the energy into the opponent which explodes outwards, ripping their body to shreds. However this technique drains the power of the gauntlet and so can only be used once per day.


    Lore:
    Born to the King of England, little was expected of young Matilda and she was quickly given away to Heinrich V the King of Germany as a child bride in a political marriage. The eight year old girl was whisked away to Germany where she was crowned Queen, yet what no one had realised was that Matilda had inherited the indomitable will of her grandfather - William the Conqueror and so when she was sent to the Archbishop of Trier as a live-in student, she gave it her all to learn as much as possible: languages, culture and even how to rule. Eventually she came of age as was ready to be married to Heinrich, though he hardly recognised the timid girl who had become a confident and outgoing woman. However the Church refused to accept Heinrich's claim to the throne as Holy Roman Emperor and so the young couple traversed over the Alps and advanced on Rome. The Pope fled the Vatican and the Papal Envoy who were left gave into intimidation and crowned Heinrich the new Emperor. Despite the fact that she was merely the wife of the Emperor, Matilda insisted that she was the Empress and no one dared object to her usage of it in her Royal Seal. Afterwards, Heinrich travelled back to Germany to supress fresh rebellions and left Matilda in Italy, confident that she could rule over the country in his absence, and Matilda gained valuable first-hand experience in government and diplomacy. The couple spent a relatively peaceful seven years living happily until Heinrich incurred a terminal case of cancer and died leaving the 23 year old Matilda's future in doubt. Being both a widow and childless she could no longer claim any of her previous titles and so longing for the land of her birth, she sold her estates back to the Empire but decided to take two things, Heinrich's personal crown and a Holy Relic - The Hand of Saint James with her on her travels.

    Meanwhile, the King of England was facing a crisis. His only son had died in an accident at sea and he could not produce another heir with his wife so his political rivals were gaining power. Hearing of Heinrich's death, he declared Matilda his immediate successor and any future children she might have to be the true heir. He immediately sought out to supress any plans of French invasion by giving Matilda away to the Count of Anjou's son which would shore up the King's territory of Normandy. Matilda was unimpressed by the idea of another political marriage - let alone to a 13 year old boy, but decided to go along with it for the sake of the kingdom's stability, however she absolutely refused to be called "Countess" and continued to use her old title of Empress as it was something that she and Heinrich had achieved together through grit and hard work whereas to be called Countess would be stating that she was nothing more than her new husband's dowry. Years passed and Matilda eventually bore two sons despite a stormy marriage until the King unexpectedly died of a fever and the gears of fate started to turn as the clouds of civil war called to Matilda...

    Matilda's cousin Stephen made a break for London as soon as he heard the news of his uncle's death. Matilda herself was heavily pregnant with her third child and so couldn't leave Normandy whilst Stephen convinced the Royal Court to go against their oath to the late King to make Matilda Queen and they crowned him instead. Enraged by the betrayal of their oath, Matilda's half-brother Robert lead a revolt against the new King Stephen which was backed by their uncle King David of Scotland. Thus began the civil war known as The Anarchy between Stephen's forces and Matilda's as she invaded England with her men. Through tactics and some good luck, Matilda managed to capture the King after the Battle of Lincoln and advanced to London to be crowned Queen. The Archbishop refused to accept her rule and so the clergy supportive to Matilda could only give her the proto-title "Lady of the English" in preparation for her eventual coronation. But tragedy struck when the people of London revolted against this "foreign Empress" and Robert was captured. Retreating back to her stronghold in the west of England, she negotiated the exchange of hostages which ended in a bitter stalemate not dissimilar to the Cold War of the modern era. Seeing the devastating effects the war had on both the citizens and her allies, Matilda started to relent in her pursuit of the throne - especially when her husband had died once again leaving her a widow.

    Her son Henry on the other hand had been groomed from an early age under the expectation he would be the future King and despite being only nineteen he followed in his mother's footsteps and invaded England using all of the advice he had gained from Matilda, he had several swift victories which forced Stephen to acknowledge a Treaty where the King would remain on the throne but swear Henry as the true successor. The tired King died the following year and at her son's coronation Matilda gave her son the Imperial Crown that belonged to Heinrich and a permeant peace ensued. Despite largely retiring from public life, Matilda was called upon multiple times for her wisdom in diplomatic affairs - usually acting as her son's representative in Europe but also other foreign affairs such as helping the King of France handle his funds during the Crusades.

    Eventually she passed away at the ripe old age of 65 and was buried under the high altar at the abbey of Bec-Hellouin. As per her will, all of her funds were given as patronage to the Church.


    Relationships:
    Arthur/Artoria - Muses on how civil war is an ugly thing in which no one truly wins.

    Charlemange - Since he is a presceding ruler to the Holy Roman Empire, Matilda treats him with the awkward respect one typically shows their in-law parents at Christmas.

    Iskander - Cannot get along with his boorish behaviour as a conqueror.

    Napoleon - Takes personal offence that the church where she was buried was destroyed by him during his campaign in Normandy.

    Nero - Bemused by the fact that such a buffoon could become Emperor.

    Saint George/Martha - Hopes they aren't made about using the Holy Relic of a Saint so brazenly for combat purposes.


    Creator's Notes:
    One of the rare times where a FC has been the source of inspiration for the sheet rather than something added on at the end. That's not to say that Matilda isn't the core of the sheet, everything listed is part of her history - just that if I didn't encounter Sarah from Terra Battle then I wouldn't have been inspired to look up female European heroes. I was originally going to have the Hand of St.James be fused into her arm a la Araya but then I couldn't resist making a G Gundam reference with the God FINGAAAAH! HEATTO ENDO!!!

    I deliberately tried to keep the Lore section as short as possible this time...I don't think I succeeded. Also annoying was the number of similar or same names in the lore section, you've got Matilda herself whose mother was called Matilda and Stephen's wife was also called Matilda, also (Empress) Matilda's father was called Henry , her first husband was called Henry (to the English) and her first son was called Henry. It all got very confusing trying to read the Wikipedia article and so I tried to avoid saying people's name as much as possible.


    As usual, all comments and criticisms are welcome.
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    Matilda: First of all, that NP is really badass. Her Personal Skills seem less inspired, being a fairly generic mix of king/leader related abilities. An original Skill might be good to add some extra flavor, though I don't know enough about Matilda's legend to say what it would be. Then again, they do all fit her legend, and maybe I'm just spoiled by GO giving practically every Servant a unique Skill or two.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Matilda: First of all, that NP is really badass. Her Personal Skills seem less inspired, being a fairly generic mix of king/leader related abilities. An original Skill might be good to add some extra flavor, though I don't know enough about Matilda's legend to say what it would be. Then again, they do all fit her legend, and maybe I'm just spoiled by GO giving practically every Servant a unique Skill or two.
    Ah yeah, I'm pretty lazy so if there's already something that fits for a person's Skills then I'm all like "if it ain't broke don't fix it".

    If I do think of anything interesting for Skills I might go back and change it, it's not often I get to do a female heroic spirit that isn't a genderbend so I'm pretty attached to this one. <3
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    apropo skills there has the Ranks of God Resolution actually some meaing i know the relevance of True Name Discernment but i dont understand the ranking in Gods Resolution because all rulers are having the two per servant rule so where is the reason ?
    ps:A good profile Skull the noblephantasm and her personality makes a good matching !
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    Serpent of Infinite Color Yurlungur

    Serpent of Infinite Color
    Foreigner Yurlungur


    Class: Foreigner

    Alternate Classes: Caster, Saver

    True Name: Rainbow Serpent (Yurlungur)

    Gender: Variable (Changes almost every time one asks)

    Alignment: Chaotic Good

    Armament: Sword, boomerangs

    Appearance: With Sieg acting as Yurlungur's host, zir general appearance is very similar, but noticeably different. Their clothes have changed to match that of traditional Aboriginal clothing, including some white body paint. In addition, much of his skin has become multi-colored scales, covering most of his body, the only part not this way is his face and front of the torso, reflecting both (Spoiler warning) Sieg's draconic aspects, and Yurlungur's serpent aspects. Further exemplifying this is the multi-colored tail just above his rear end.

    Spoiler warning

    Bio: Long ago, back in the Age of Gods, the Aboriginal people of Australia were separated into several tribes across the continent, each had their own gods and beliefs, and yet a single god, and a single concept, was shared among them all. They all believed in the Dreaming, the realm of dreams, as real as the earth, and they all prayed to the Rainbow Serpent, known by many names, one such name being Yurlungur.

    The place known as “The Dreaming” was in fact a place as real as the earth, and the Aboriginal’s belief in it led all their prayers to funnel to this place. The result was the creation of a unique existence, something between a Divine Spirit, and an Outer God. And thus, the Yurlungur came into being, a deity of the earth, that was far beyond the reach of the earth.

    Yurlungur’s unique existence prevented them from existing on earth, as Gaia would not allow it to manifest, fearful that it would bring destruction, despite zir good intentions. However, the serpent was clever, and circumvented Gaia, by “Sleeping” in the Dreaming, and creating a weaker body on the earth, or in some cases, possessing a human body.

    Yurlungur lived many lives while sleeping, and through those many lives, ze began to gain a deep love for humanity, and the earth. Ze would help, and harm humanity, care for and chastise, them, to Yurlungur, humanity was zir children, and ze a loving parent. But this could not last.

    Time wore on, and the Age of Gods began diminishing, and so too did Yurlungur’s connection to the earth. Each of zir sleeping’s left zir with less and less contact with humanity, and though Australia remained the last to be touched by the age of man, it was only a matter of time.

    Explores from Europe came upon the land of the aboriginals, and soon the Age of Gods, finally ended. Yurlungur’s unique existence allowed zim to continue existing as they had, all be it weaker than they once were. Their sleeping’s also allowed them to continue visiting earth, in fact their weakened state made it easier, however it wasn’t the same. They could only visit in an intangible form, unable to interact with their precious children as ze once did.

    In this time, the Age of Man, not content with how it would visit earth, Yurlungur began exploring and learning. Soon ze learned about different timelines, and alternate universes connected to the Akashic Record, and began exploring this places and times. In its sleeping’s it would cross into these alternate worlds, and even learned was to interact again, if only in small, indirect way.

    One such occurrence, was not with a human, but a homunculus, eventually known as Sieg. Seeing him grow as a human, fight for his freedom, and that of his fellow homunculi. To see this and more from an artificial life, it intrigued Yurlungur, whom observed his life until its conclusion.

    Yurlungur, as a divine spirit, could only be summoned if ze restrict their power, and take a human body as a vessel. Remembering the homunculus that had interested zim so greatly, this was the body ze chose to inhabit. And thus, Yurlungur is summoned as pseudo servant acting as both the Rainbow Serpent, and Sieg the man-made hero.

    Parameter


    -Strength: B

    -Endurance: B

    -Agility: B+

    -Mana: EX

    -Luck: A+

    -NP: EX

    Class Skills:


    Existence Outside the Domain B+: As an existence born, and living in the Dreaming, Foreigner earns this skill, but it is lowered both by its connection to the earth, and its status as a pseudo servant.

    Deity’s Divine Core A: While an unconventual existence, Foreigner is undeniably a deity of earth, earning zim this skill. This skill removes all impurities and imperfections from its host body, as well as keeping it in peak physical condition. Ordinarily this skill would decrease in rank to B because of the host being human, however since Foreigners host body is that of a homunculus, one further fortified by the powers of two Heroic Spirits, this skill is instead only ranked down to its current rank.

    Homunculus B+: A skill denoting was existence as a homunculus, it gives one all the properties of one. Foreigners possession of this homunculus body has allowed it to purify the impurities of its design, increasing the rank of this skill.

    Personal Skills:


    Life in the Dreaming A++: Being born, and living, in the Dreaming, Foreigner should have this skill at EX. The only reason it is not there is its connection to earth, and status as a Pseudo Servant. This Skill allows Foreigner to alter and control Reality Marbles, while within or touching one. Additionally, any advantages provided by a Reality Marble, is automatically provided to Foreigner.

    Dragon of Infinite Color B+: The homunculus that acts as host to Foreigner had the unique trait of a dragon when possessed. This in combination with Foreigners existence as the Rainbow Serpent results in this skill. This skill gives Foreigner draconic traits, such as resistance to magic, and breath attacks. This Skills unique distinction from similar skills is that Foreigner has access to all forms of Dragon Breath. From fire and thunder, to sound and light, all of them.

    Fluid Gender EX: Depending on the tribe and story, Foreigner’s gender has always been different, earning zim this skill. This skill allows Foreigner to change their gender, to anything from male, female, hermaphrodite, or even no gender at all. It also gives immunity to any skills or noble phantasms that specify a gender, even if Foreigner is that gender when its used.

    Man Made Hero (True) B+: The homunculus used as host to Foreigner had his body turned into a unique form of Heroic Spirit, because of events out of their control. However, in the summoning of Foreigner, ze asked the homunculus for permission to use their body. The result of his accepting both ranked up the skill and turned it from False to True. This skill allows Foreigner to incorporate new elements to its existence, allowing zim to improve their capabilities. This can only be done with elements from persons, such as other Heroic Spirit, Divine Spirits, or even humans.

    Noble Phantasm:

    Rainbow of Providence: May Life Be Always Abundant B+ (Anti-Army)

    Foreigner is a god(dess) of fertility, water, and life, and was believed by the Aboriginal people to be the reason waterholes never dried, even during drought. This Noble Phantasm ensures no natural sources of water in Foreigner’s presence ever dry and allows them to give healing and fertile properties to any water in their presence. It also them endow their power into any source of water, including manmade, giving it all these abilities, even when not in their presence. However, this NP’s most useful ability, is that it allows Foreigner to transport them-self to any source of water within a certain radius of them, or to any water with her power in it, regardless of distance from her.

    Rage of the River’s: May All Evil Be Washed Away A+ (Anti-Army)

    Like the water ze command Foreigner can be calm and life giving, or wrathful and destructive, but even at zir most wrathful, there is an undertone of care. This Noble Phantasm allows Foreigner to summon a raging river to attack her enemies. The water of these rapids contains purifying properties, destroying anomalies in nature, and evil, resulting in this NP doing greater damage against Altered servants, Anti-Heroes, and Beasts.

    Scattered Scales of Color: To My Children I Give This Gift EX (Anti-Heart, Summoning)

    Foreigner has lived a great many lives, and has been many people over the centuries, resulting in this Noble Phantasm. This NP allows Foreigner to create scales, representing the many lives they’ve lived, and the many personalities they’ve had, and implant them into others. Under normal conditions, the implanted scales shall simply force the opponent to relive this life. However, if implanted into a compatible individual, it can instead be used to turn said individual into a Pseudo Servant of the Alter Ego class.

    Interactions with other servantsJeanne D’Arc: “I see, so my feelings towards are love, it’s nice to know.”

    Siegfried: “You have my deepest admiration and thanks for saving my life. I hope I may live up to that sacrifice.”

    Ishtar: “I do hope your enjoying yourself as you are. It is a unique experience isn’t it, being yourself and someone else at the same time.”

    Quetzalcoatl: “Oh a fellow serpent, and you have WINGS?!?! …where are they?”

    Ned Kelly: “Hello fellow Aussie.”


    Authors NoteSo, lots to talk about, first that Bio. What’s with all the Dreaming talk, and all that, your likely wondering. Well the Dreaming is this thing in Aboriginal culture, it’s an interesting concept, a sort of place without time, look it up yourself. The way I see the Dreaming working in Fat is that it is basically a place created by the collective unconscious of life (all of it).

    Next, why Sieg? Long story short, watched a video on fates Ishtar on YouTube, thought “It’d be kind of cool if the rainbow serpent was a Pseudo Servant.” And I guess I thought Sieg would be a good fit. Probably cause he turns into dragon, and dragons are lizards (majestic lizards).

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    Yerlungur: Cool sheet, but I feel that you've gotten the concept of a Foreigner a bit confused.

    Foreigners aren't eldritch beings, they're humans who can channel the power of eldritch beings without going insane. So making Sieg a Pseudo-Servant as well as a Foreigner is redundant since the latter already sort of includes the former. Also, technically it should be Sieg that's the Foreigner, not Yerlungur. Again, Foreigners aren't the eldritch being itself, they're the human who channels it.

    I'm aware this is pretty minor quibble, but I'm mentioning it anyway just to clear up any confusions about what the Foreigner Class is and how it works.

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    FC Link
    Alternate Classes: N/A
    True Name: Jean-Baptiste Poquelin
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Origin: France (17th century)
    Armament: N/A

    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: E
    AGI: E
    MANA: C
    LUCK: B
    NP: B

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Territory Creation - Rank C+: A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
    Rather than a ‘Workshop’, Caster can create a ‘Stage’ for the purposes of capturing the mana of the atmosphere as well as the attention of others.

    Personal Skills

    Improvisation - Rank C: The ability to spontaneously produce results that would normally require prior preparation or planning. Skills that carry a ‘burden of the body’ such as Divinity cannot be exhibited. The use of Improvisation carries a chance of failure, forcing a Luck check each time it is used. On failure, the use fails and Improvisation is sealed for a short period of time.
    Many Skills can be obtained for short periods of time at a proficiency of E~D rank.

    Golden Rule (False) - Rank D: A fake version of the normal Golden Rule, signifying wealth that is not one’s own. Usually taking the form of a loan, it otherwise functions as the parent Skill, but there are certain restrictions to the use of the provided wealth. Should this restriction be broken, Golden Rule (False) would be disabled.
    Acts as equivalent to a low-ranking Golden Rule. Caster retains the benefits for as long as he uses most of his wealth in the production of his works.

    Clown’s Laughter - Rank D++: A Skill normally derived from Innocent Monster as a (designated) demon, allowing the Servant to cast intense pressure over the human species. In this case the Skill holder is a human, but has attained this Skill through their own nature and circumstance.
    Though not possessing Innocent Monster, Caster’s mutual antipathy with religious leaders has granted him a status close enough to that of a demon to possess this Skill. A stronger reason might be Caster’s proficiency with writing farces, as this Skill more or less forces the target into the focus of one. Targets will fall into a situation like they have been abandoned by luck, where if there is any chance of failing a Luck Check, they will fail as long as Caster is focusing on them. The effect is heightened if the attention of others is on the target.

    Noble Phantasms

    One’s Death on the Stage
    Le Acte de Mort

    Anti-Unit (Self), Rank C+
    The crystallization of Caster’s death and the events that led up to it, combined with his talent for comedy. Driven to perform until his last moments, Caster possesses a type of pseudo-immortality as long as others are paying attention to him. Caster’s death becomes a sort of farce, as he stands up again and again, his injuries seeming to vanish.
    Le Acte de Mort activates in the instant that Caster’s life is lost. So as to allow him to continue performing, the lethal injuries that he has suffered are temporarily suspended and Caster’s body returns to its normal, uninjured state. The Noble Phantasm has no further effects, but Caster’s death can be repeated for as long as he holds the attention of others. Naturally, as the number of suspended injuries mounts, so does the cost in magical energy required to sustain Caster.
    Once Caster ceases to be the center of attention, the suspended injuries will return, and he will die without fail.

    Description
    Likes: Attention, performing
    Dislikes: Doctors, priests
    Talents: Improvisation, comedy
    Natural Enemy: William Shakespeare

    Caster’s true identity is Jean-Baptiste Poquelin, better known as Molière, the Devilish Playwright.

    Driven by a desire to entertain and hold the attention of others, Molière is a bombastic man. Molière views his role as a Servant as that of an actor on the stage, and seeks to bring amusement to those around him while poking fun at those he finds insufferable due to their inflated opinion of themselves.
    Molière is a Servant that thrives on attention and seeks to secure a steady source of it whenever possible. Unlike most other Servants that hide from the spotlight of the modern world, Molière is bound to actively seek it out, though he would likely still keep the truth of his nature a secret. With his talents he could easily garner popularity as well as integrate into society, or at least the artistic side of it.
    As an artist, legends such as Servants are a veritable goldmine to him in terms of inspirations. No matter the kind of person a Servant is, Molière would take interest in them and seek to know more. Molière only considers those that he sees as overtly pompous, especially those of a scientific, medical or spiritual bent, as his enemies. Though he is not someone who is driven to destroy, he is more than willing to force humiliation after humiliation upon his enemies, ensuring that his enemies will come to share Molière’s enmity. He enjoys a sort of friendship with fellow writers and playwrights but makes an exception with William Shakespeare, who he feels he must oppose both for the sake of his country and his style (secretly, Molière is fan).
    As Molière is not a Servant that is adept at fighting, winning a Holy Grail War would prove difficult for him. However, with improvisation and a bit of luck anything is possible.
    Molière sees his Master as a patron of sorts. Though quite headstrong when it comes to what he wants to do, Molière will do his best to keep his Master pleased. Despite seeming to have no preference for what kind of person his Master is, Molière secretly wishes for someone stuck-up enough to warrant taking down a peg or two.
    Molière’s wish is simply to relaunch his career and have another shot at life.

    Lore
    Molière was born as one of the many children of the French royal tapestry-maker. He tried to follow his father's footsteps and later, to become a lawyer, but his heart wasn't in it, and he ended up as one of the greatest French playwrights, and a protégé of King Louis XIV.
    Molière had a lifelong, mutual feud with doctors and churchmen, mocking them in his plays just as they vehemently opposed him in public.
    Though a prolific playwright, Molière eventually collapsed on stage in a fit of pulmonary tuberculosis. Insisting that he continue the play, he died in his home later that day. Befitting the treatment of actors in those times, he was to be buried in unhallowed ground, strengthening his reputation as an enemy of the church.

    Notes
    The Lore section ended up being a little thin here, sorry for that.
    The faceclaim also ended up being rather mundane (not to mention blond), but I guess that’s him in his civilian clothes (integration into society and all that). His appearance upon summoning would most likely more in the style of his times, though a scarf of some sort appears to be a permanent fixture.

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    Here is my fifth part of my Loki series this time as the who fought his last match as such i made the Noblephantasm to have a weakness against Heimdall .


    Loki
    (Caster)



    Height: 212 cm
    Weight: 93~ kg
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Attribute: Earth
    Origin: North Europe
    Weapon: Daggers and a Sword
    Other qualifying classes: Lancer,Berserker,Saber,Rider,Assassin,Avenger,Beast of Betrayal
    Likes:his pathethic Childrens, Attention,pranks and praise,himself,his Kin
    Dislikes: Being ignored,being betrayed ,himself
    Talents: forging sinisters shemes .
    Natural enemy: Heimdall

    Nominated seiyu: Takaya Kuroda
    Parameters

    Strength: B
    Endurance: B
    Agility: B++
    Luck: C-
    Mana: A
    NP: Ex


    Background

    .You all know him .
    The Nordic deity of chaos ,in this Class does he is incarnated as the who lead the Giants and Draugr into the Ragnarök.
    His reasons for the assault of Balder and the Ragnarök :

    His reasons were that he wasnt enough appreciated and loved after he has done so many for the Aesirs and then has appeared Balder who was loved by everyone although he hasdone absolutly Nothing to gain it so it was a act out of jealousy and after he was punished and banished has he found increasingly thingss and occurances he hated about them partially through his Trauma from losing his Family and the torture has invoked his hatred as such has he sired/"created" the three "Monsterchildren" ;Fenris as now Champion of Asgard /to usurp Thor and become the Deity of Ice.Hel as new High Goddness who should govern over Skadi and dispose her (her part of release Balder was for Loki a lucky coincidense) and jourmunngandr as sort of fail safe , then after the three were either transformed into monsters or imprisoned has reopened the psychic wound of losing Narfi and Vali so has he created Naglfar in cooperation with Hymir who was his sort of Right-Hand in the creation of the ship and recruitment of the Giants .

    Personality

    In this incarnation is Loki at his most detailed experience of his Life and Death ,as such is he in this form at his most sheming Nature but also at his most melancholic state aswell does he hold a particular hatred against the Deities due to their ingratitude of them (his old Family) out of this reason does he appreciate thankfull People .

    He posses as Caster the full capability of his trickery and Acts a Little bit like a jester.

    He laments the loss of his family and regrets that he used his second childs entirely as his pawns and Tools of his Revenge of his first Childs and his love.As such does his wish on the grail be the resurrection of his 7 Children and two wifes aswell a second life for himself to start new at the begining.


    Skills

    Class skills:

    Territory Creation : A

    At this rank does becoming the creation of a Temple possible .However he is Content enough with a Workshop which is Looking like the cross between a dwarvic forgery and witch hut.
    In the case of a Temple whould he create a Stonehenge like Stone pillar cicle which is inscribed with Runes and "paganic Diagrams "and ilustrations which holds potency of a Noblephantasm.

    With the Circle is he capable of alter and Control Leylines ,Terraforming and the reaching of Mysteries of the Gods Age possible.

    Item Creation EX:
    He is capable of creating plant and fungi based portions which are containing specimens from the Age of Gods ,so are his potions capable of curing even Dragonvenom like jourmungandr or even Hydra one,Wound Gel which are force a rejuvenation of ones Health and allows the Implantation or regrow of limbs or Organs.

    Through that he has stolen very often from Dwarfes has he gained the Knowledge of forging Noblephantasm rivaling Weapons but he is better of the Manipulation of already existing weapons o objects like to enhance a Simple Knife with Flame bursts , Hailstorm triggering Arrows/Bullets.

    His true forte however lies in the manufacturing of plants with which he is able to create even B Rank Noblephantasm by using the Right plant can he determine the corresponding effect like out of a parasitic plant a Mana and Body devouring Spear or out of yews Bows that gives the Arrows a poisenous effect.. He is capable in combination with his Territorry creation the regrowing of nowadays extinct plants also is he capable of recreate every plant with just a Body part like even fossilised Wood or leave.Should he can take his grasp on Legendary plants would he even capable of crafting A Rank Noblephantasm.

    Personal skills:
    Divinity D :
    He was robbed of great parts of his Divinity by Odin but he slowly aquire it by his own .


    Silver tongue A+:
    At this state of live has reached Lokis skill of the deceive and manipulate his best form.


    Child of the Giants(Jotunn ) C:


    Does represent the Giant Heritage of Giants in this Case the jotunn the ice Giants ,as such does it donates Loki Ice Mana Blast C which allows hiim to create Ice streams , Walls and Missiles .Monstrous strenght A which grants him upon usage the vast increasing of Strenght and Endurance but the longer the usage goes on the more bulkier and greater he will become ,and Child of Nature B+ which donates him the abbility to absorb Mana out of the Environment the undisturbed the more Mana can he absorb can the lesser he put a strain on his Master and a presence concealment D when in de-materialised state.

    Arcane Arts Specialisation C:
    Is the skilll that denotes the familiarity and capability of varying Magecrafts and Magics over the use of which the user is knowledgeable. In Lokis case are they Necromancy,Witchcraft,,Shamanism,Ilusionism, Fire and Water Magecraft aswell as Druidic arts and High Speed Divine words equivalent B.
    At this Rank is he capable of the Level of Todays best Magus,but out of the Age of Gods view is he roughly Little bit over average .

    Rune-System Futhark :
    As a Co-founder of this Thaumaturgic System is he capable of make fully use of the Runes as with this is he capable of Enchant himself ,others or Weapons and enables a normal Person to hold his own against Servants or equalize mundane weapon at the Rank of a B+ Noblephantasm .

    Has acces to the Elements in a similar mechanic like Jewel Magecraft but on a entire different scale.Heal with particulary the Berkana at the Level of a Master healer.
    Also is he able to set Runic traps like stasis Cages or Mine like ones aswell as create Portals by set two identic sets on different Locations aswell as to craft Runestones .


    Shapeshifter :A
    At this Rank is the user capable of changing ist shape gender unregarded and is able to transform from normal Animals upto phantasmals aswell as Humans and other Servant ,additionally is the User able to gain/mimic abbilities upto personal skills but the replication of Noblephantasm is only as halv strenghted mimicry posible.

    Other Abillities: Although he is a not in a martial Combat class,and is more a trick and sheme fighter as a direct warrior is he even in this Class a quite capable fighter who is proficient user of his Sword and is a capable Dagger fighter as that he is able to pary Swordclashes with them in a Fan like Position aswell is a able to throw them ,efficient in conjunction with his Runes to add several effects.

    Noble Phantasm


    Relict of Authority
    Leavetein kyn Sitja
    Rank:Ex
    Anti-Reality
    Description:
    Although he doesnt can summon the weapon itself as Caster is he able to use this disadvantage to reactivate Laeveteins Authority over the Worlddspace to reforge to Environment and trap a Opponent in a Marble Phantasm

    After the activation of this Noblephantasm does appeaering Laeveteinn as Shining Crest either in the Air or on Loki Body then is Loki capable through this to turn Illusions into reality ,turn his Silver tongue suggestions into Mental Attacks or to turn his shapeshifter skill into a perfect copy skill.

    Also is Loki capable of Spatial replacements (like the Flash air of the Ainsworth)like to Change places with other persons and middle distant Teleportation unrelated to his Rune prowess.


    He is by using this Noblephantasm capable of elevate for a short amount of time one selected skill at Ex Rank . Also is he through using this Crest on his Eyes able to gain capable of review All Memories of his pasts incarnation(servant summonings) by Breaking the Limiting function of the throne of Heros and the Grail also is he capable of using this on other Servant or undo Memory altering Magecraft and reconstruct their original Memories.






    Relations

    Heimdall: Dont think i will make the same mistake as before !
    Seth:Zaa ! My dear Colleague ,would you want to join Forces ?With my Requisiten and your Alien Magecraft would we able to shape the World after our dreams !!
    Herakless:Tssse…! Already Thor was a heavy Brocken* so i wouldnt like to fight against them.
    (Tzzeee !!!! Dieser Narr* !! Harhar !!)
    Hepheastus:He !?I didnt know that elsewhere also exist some Dwarves
    *He uses regardles with which Person he speak Germanwords because ist resembles his childhood speech quiet much.


    any Feedback or oppinion is appreciated
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    Caster!Loki: First off, did you copy his personality verbatim from your Lancer sheet? I can't tell for sure because your link doesn't work, but it looks pretty dang similar. Not necessarily a criticism, since he is the same guy and all, but you've done a pretty good job up until now of distinguishing Loki's personality in his different incarnations so it's a little disappointing to see you go for a straight copy+paste here.

    As for Skills, I don't really get the logic behind Arcane Arts Specialization. Why does he have all this stuff, when you even noted that the various forms of Magecraft have no basis in his legend? It just seems like needless wank to me. Especially since you already gave Loki powerful rune magic (speaking of which, you should probably rename it Primordial Runes just to be consistent with canon), I'd recommend outright scrapping that one.

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    Fake Saber



    Saber
    Identity: Lucius Artorius Castus
    Also known as: The archetypal Arthur
    Height: 154 cm
    Weight: 52 kg
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Attribute: Man
    Origin: Rome
    Armament: Sword
    Natural enemy: Artoria Pendragon

    Parameters:
    Strength: B
    Endurance: B
    Agility: A
    Luck: B
    Mana: D
    NP: A

    Background
    Lucius Artorius Castus, or Artorius for short, was a great Roman centurion who, despite having an unquestionably brilliant military career, isn’t famous in the modern era. That doesn’t mean, however, that he wasn’t known in the past. His exploits in Britain were such that they have persisted in the regional folklore until nowadays, although with so many modifications and additions that only a sliver of his name remains…

    Indeed, as one could guess from the similitude of the names and the geographical region he was established in, Artorius is considered one of the archetypes of king Arthur. Since the only data about his life consist on weathered inscriptions enumerating his ranks, the certainty of this theory is still debated nowadays, but he’s still at the top of the list of possible origins for the King of Knights. Some historians even debate whether he truly stayed in Britain, instead locating him in the province of Pannonnia, at the north of Dalmatia, where it is known that he passed away.

    Still, no matter which is the truth, with Artorius being right now the most plausible basis for Arthur, he exists in the Throne of Heroes as an archetypal Arthur. Nevertheless, given the enormous level of fame possessed by the legendary king and the lack of knowledge about his life, Artorius has had his whole image reshaped until it became fitting of the man who inspired the most known ruler in history.


    Personality
    A charismatic unifier, capable of making two polar opposites forget their differences and fight together, Artorius is firmly convinced that there is no reason for people to be divided. Humans are social creatures by nature. Conflict means opposing the basis of our existence. That’s what he believes. Even so, he’s aware that it’s impossible to content everyone. Therefore, he strives not to satisfy a 100%, but an 80% or a 90%. It’s disappointing and saddening that his ideal doesn’t become true, but that’s precisely why it’s called an ideal.

    Artorius greatly despises the idea of being summoned in the body of a young girl, and even more that he’s treated as such. While he praises the mobility of his reduced frame, he finds humiliating to be a great man inside a small woman. It’s not like he’s sexist, he just misses the broad build he possessed in life.

    Treatment with the Master: Since he wants people to coexist in harmony, Artorius looks forwards to have a good relationship with his Master. Being unquestionably the more experienced of the two, he is more than willing to give advice of any kind, related to battle or not. Despite that, he still holds a righteous heart doesn’t allow him to tolerate an evil Master, and while not as fond of chivalry and honor as the real Arthur, he won't allow dirty tricks coming from his contractor.

    Likes: “The sight of the unified peoples gives me joy. Seeing Servants from all epochs and places fighting together in these times of hardship couldn’t be a better scene for me.”

    Dislikes: “Aaah, I’m hungry… Why does this body need so much food if it’s so small…?”

    Wish for the Grail: “I don’t wish for fame and for immortality, nor I wish for a second life. I only wish to be myself and to be freed from this curse.”


    Skills
    Class skills
    Magic Resistance B
    Cancels spells with a chant of up to three verses. Unlike Arthur, Artorius doesn’t possess a Dragon Magic Core that would provide him an elevated rank of protection.

    Riding B
    Can ride any vehicle or animal with great ability, but can’t ride Phantasmal Species. Originally suited for the Rider class, Artorius has acquired knowledge about handling vehicles from his military training and from having witnessed the abilities of British charioteers.

    Class skills
    Innocent Arthur EX
    A variation of Innocent Monster in which the historical depiction of Artorius has modified his appearance to match that of the Heroic Spirit Arthur Pendragon. Even though he was originally a man, his gender is affected as well, in order to become the spitting image of this world’s Arthur.

    Charisma B
    A skill of the Saver class. A rare talent consisting on the capacity to lead others and a charming personality. Rises abilities of allies in battle. At this rank, it’s possible to unify a whole country as a Commander rather than as a king.

    Radiant Road A+
    The path to glory that Artorius trod. Having traveled all around Britain and unified it under his command, it was almost as if he was a hopeful beam of light piercing through the darkness of conflict.
    Having dealt with warriors of all kinds, the accumulated experience in every single of Artorius’ cells allows him to determine the best course of action no matter the situation and to acquire an advantage over his enemies. At least, that's how he claims that this skill works.

    Noble Phantasm

    Legend of Arthur: Round Table
    Lore of the omnitemporal king and his knights

    Type:
    Anti-Unit
    Rank: ???
    Description:

    “You have been chosen to be one of my peers. This crest symbolizes that your fate and mine are now intertwined.”

    Artorius himself is the original, the archetype for king Arthur. However, his level of fame is considerably lower than Arthur’s. Such is the difference of fame that Arthur’s legend has overtaken Artorius’, to the point of affecting his recording in the Throne of Heroes. Similar to how the novel Dracula has altered the depiction of the king Vlad Țepeș, the Arthurian cycle has modified Artorius’ image in all senses.

    The skill Innocent Arthur is in charge of reshaping the appearance of Artorius. Legend of Arthur goes even further beyond by altering his own actions, characteristics and fate. Wielding a Holy Sword, unifying the nation, and being followed by a group of elite soldiers, he truly is like the King of Past and Future that leaded and will lead Britain.

    Under the Saber class, Legend of Arthur manifests the aspect of Arthur as the leader of the Knights of the Round Table. It takes the form of twelve metallic crests hanging from a collar on Artorius’ neck. Each of the crests represents one of the Knights of the Round Table of Arthur, and contain a Gift. By bestowing a crest to one of his allies, they obtain a fragment of the abilities of the knight. However, this is a double-edged sword, as their weaknesses and fate will be imposed as well.

    List of the Crests

    • Crest of
      Bedivere
      the Perfect Sinews
      :

      • Military Tactics D: Provides bonus for actions dealing with Anti-Army Noble Phantasms.
      • Since Bedivere only had one arm, the one that obtains this crest will lose one arm as well.
      • This is the only crest that doesn't provide the owner with a Noble Phantasm.
      • Their combat proficiency will be relatively reduced, but they’ll act as Artorius’ right hand.

    • Crest of
      Gawain
      the Sunlit Saint
      :

      • Numeral of the Saint D: Increases attack power under the sun.
      • Caliburnus Exsilium: A D-rank version of the Sword of the Sun. Can release burning flames by making it spin.
      • The owner of the crest will serve Artorius loyally no matter what, but will die in battle after being struck in an injury.

    • Crest of
      Lancelot
      the Moonlit Lake
      :

      • Eternal Arms Mastery D: Dexterity with any kind of weapons, even if they have never been used before.
      • Sequencia: A D-rank version of the Sword of the Lake. Emits blue light when swung.
      • A desire to flirt with married women will arise in the owner's heart.
      • No matter how loyal the owner of the crest is, their destiny is to betray Artorius and succumb to madness.

    • Crest of
      Tristan
      the Sorrowful Harp
      :

      • Harp of Healing D: Weakens the fighting spirit of opponents while suppressing mental interference from allies.
      • Indeficiens: A D-rank harp-bow. Can release vacuum slashes by playing it.
      • Weakness (Poison) D: Lowers resistance against poison.
      • The owner will be stricken by a great sadness and have problems with love.
      • In the end, the owner of the crest will end up insulting Artorius and abandoning him.

    • Crest of
      Mordred
      the Rampant Rebel
      :

      • Charisma D: Raises abilities of allies in battle, specially during a rebellion.
      • Claritas: A D-rank silver sword. Amplifies and releases the magical energy of the user in the form of a red beam.
      • Failing to be truly acknowledged by Artorius, betrayal is the only possible end for the owner of the crest.

    • Crest of
      Galahad
      the Chosen by Heavens
      :

      • Mana Defense D: Transforms magical energy into defense.
      • Dominus Calx Castrum: A D-rank version of the shield made from the Round Table.
      • The owner of the crest will have great fortune and luck, as if he was blessed by God, but will die in battle.

    • Crest of
      Agravain
      the Unscathed Iron
      :

      • Disengage D: Chance to reset battle conditions.
      • Catena Mandatum: A D-rank black chain that can bind Servants for a short time.
      • The owner will acquire great administrative capabilities at the risk of becoming a workaholic.
      • From among the crests, this is one of the few that doesn’t lead to a fatal destiny. Its owner won’t receive many injuries in battle, although that’s mostly due to the low chances of them fighting in the front lines.

    • Crest of
      Gareth
      the Lily Hands
      :

      • Proof of Friendship D: Makes negotiations with enemies easier and facilitates the formation of alliances.
      • Triumphus Iridis: A D-rank multicolored weapon formed by the union of several swords. Releases thin beams of rainbow-colored light.
      • The owner of this crest will be killed while protecting someone cherished by Artorius.

    • Crest of
      Kay
      the King's Retainer
      :

      • Supernatural Power D: The unexplained phenomenon of Spontaneous Combustion. Can set objects on fire indirectly.
      • Caius Contrucidatus: A D-rank sword with the curse of a witch. Weakens the stamina of those who are wounded by it and reduces their healing capabilities.
      • The heart of the owner will become cold as ice.
      • The owner of the crest will run away in the last moment, but will help Artorius in some way or another before the decisive battle.

    • Crest of
      Percival
      the Celibate Seeker
      :

      • ​Celibate D: Grants an additional bonus to checks when resisting fascination and charm.
      • Crudus Lancea: A D-rank version of the Bleeding Lance. Provokes excessive hemorrhage when causing a wound.
      • Finding love will become impossible for the owner of the crest, let alone having sex.
      • The owner of this crest will have their weapons fail him in the most critical moment and die soon after their greatest accomplishment.

    • Crest of
      Palamedes
      the Questing Hunter
      :

      • ​Beast Slayer D: Wild animals and Demonic Beasts receive more damage.
      • Qinquaginta Latratus: A D-rank sonic boom coming from the stomach that resembles the sound of a herd of hounds.
      • The owner of this badge will achieve glory if they are released from their worldly desires, but their entire family will be killed in one way or another.

    • Crest of
      Gaheris
      the Raging Squire
      :

      • Mad Enhancement D: Rises combat abilities but hinders thought.
      • One of the arms of the owner will be replaced by the Noble Phantasm.
      • Morgana Brachium: A D-rank grafted arm that originally belonged to a witch. Can cast dark flames and infuse weapons with them.
      • Same as the owner of the Crest of Lily Hands, this crest ensures that its owner will die protecting someone important for Artorius.



    The crests can be bestowed to anyone, Master or Servant, or even to someone that is none of them, as long as they have a sort of compatibility with them. In the case of them being given to a human, their strength would undoubtedly increase greatly, although it’d be still not enough to match a Servant. As a last resort, it’s possible for Artorius himself to use one of the crests, but at the cost of sacrificing it, basically the same as using a Broken Phantasm.


    Caliburnus
    Fake · Golden sword of assured victory

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Description:

    “O sword, glow. The light of unification, namely Victory, is at my hand. End this dispute, Caliburnus!”


    A secondary Noble Phantasm derived from a modification of Artorius’ sword by Legend of Arthur. Copying the Sword of Selection that Arthur pulled from the stone, this makeshift Noble Phantasm is able to transform the user’s mana into heat values that are released in the form of light particles.

    Although the attack’s range is proper of an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm, Caliburnus is classified as Anti-Unit. The reason for this atypical classification is that it aims towards Artorius rather than to his enemies. Indeed, although his primary Noble Phantasm has altered his whole Spirit Origin to become that of the king Arthur, it’s only by his sword that he can rightfully be considered the king’s reflection.


    Relations
    Artoria Pendragon: “This woman is the cause of my actual state. I don't wish for her to disappear from the World, but I can't help but think that if it she hadn't become so famous, I wouldn't be like this.”

    Arthur Pendragon: “This man is Arthur as well? Hm, his figure reminds me a bit of mine when I was young. Aaah, if only I had been cursed to look like him…”

    Merlin: “Magus, I was told that your magecraft can turn women into men. If it’s true, please cast your spell over me. Hm? I will only change ‘there’? Then I’m not interested.”

    Nero Claudius: “I’ve heard that the emperor Nero inspired part of Arthur’s legend too. Is he suffering the same kind of curse as me? If so, I wonder why the figure is different in some aspects…”

    Mysterious Heroine X: “Wait, wait, wait! I’m supposed to be a Rider! Stop charging your Noble Phantasm!”

    EMIYA: “You’ve only asked for seconds twice today, Saber. Is there something troubling y-? No, sorry. I forgot you weren’t her.”
    – EMIYA

    Vlad III: “It seems that we share the same kind of curse, king of Wallachia. Although I don’t approve of your methods, I understand your feelings about your fate.”

    Gilgameš: *crying internal and externally*

    Knights of the Round Table: “These are the strongest knights to have ever existed, the ones that Arthur commanded… My Sarmatian warriors made quite the army as well, but I don’t think they could probably compare to this elite.”


    Well, here it is, the fake Saber. I kinda feel this sheet is quite messy, but I'm not sure. It was a lot of work to make the crests for the KoTR that haven't appeared yet, specially for Gaheris and Palamedes, but that's the part of the sheet I'm most confident about, although I may or may not have butchered the Latin names of the NPs

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    Lucius Artorius Castus: Pffft. I love the fact he's so stuck up about the whole Saberface issue that it overrode his wish. Mechanically speaking, I believe it's fine; A well-rounded Servant whose Skillset should resemble Arturia's (exception being Innocent Arthur), although more People-oriented with the first NP. That said, the cherry on top is the Legend of King Arthur NP - -for it is arguably my favorite out of the False Servant set - - the in-depth effects of each badge was really impressive.

    That said, I'm somewhat confused with the function of Caliburnus. So rather than a giant Sword-Beamu, the heat particles rushes towards Artorius instead, burning the targets in their path... right?
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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    That said, I'm somewhat confused with the function of Caliburnus. So rather than a giant Sword-Beamu, the heat particles rushes towards Artorius instead, burning the targets in their path... right?
    I assumed it was Anti-Unit for the same reason regular Caliburn is, because it designates the user as a proper king. But maybe I misread something.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    I assumed it was Anti-Unit for the same reason regular Caliburn is, because it designates the user as a proper king. But maybe I misread something.
    Ahh, forgot about that tidbit. Thanks man.
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