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    Alternate Classes: Berserker
    True Name: Empedocles
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Origin: Greece (5th century BC)
    Armament: Staff

    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: D
    AGI: B
    MANA: B
    LUCK: B
    NP: C

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Territory Creation - Rank B: A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
    Creation of a 'Workshop' becomes possible.

    Item Construction - Rank B: A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.
    Caster can create a wide variety of magic tools of a superior quality. He is particularly good at making remedies and medicines.

    Personal Skills

    High-Speed Divine Words - Rank C+: A Skill that assists with magical incantations via a power to activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. The language of the Age of Gods, back when words played a heavy role in spellcasting. As such, it is a power long lost by modern magi. It is particularly useful for direct attack magic.
    The ability to speak magical incantations at an accelerated speed. By using a language from the Age of Gods, High-Thaumaturgy can be cast at the speed of One-Line spells.

    Librarian of Stored Knowledge - Rank C: An ability that makes it possible for a clear recall of knowledge from memory with a successful Luck Check, even if the information perceived in the past was not consciously acknowledged at the time.
    As one of the final custodians of the collected knowledge of the Age of the Gods, Caster possesses this Skill in relation to all kinds of magical theory. However, much of the information had been rendered useless or outdated by Caster’s era, and as such the rank of this Skill has been lowered.

    Noble Phantasms

    To the elements it came from
    Everything will return.
    Our bodies to earth,
    Our blood to water,
    Heat to fire,
    Breath to air.


    Everything Returns to Its Rightful Place
    Álma eísō Aítnē

    Anti-Unit, Rank B
    Caster’s ultimate Magecraft, only realized at the moment of his original death. According to his theory of elements as the building blocks of the universe, all things are made of the four elements. Through the experience of having his own body deconstructed, Caster has learned how to reduce a target back into its base elements.
    Álma eísō Aítnē acts as magic causing the complete disintegration of the target, coupled with the release of elemental force in proportion to the makeup of the target. However, spiritual beings such as Servants, being creatures not composed of physical matter, are not that strongly affected. In the case of a target not composed of matter, Álma eísō Aítnē will merely inflict damage. It ought to be noted, however, that those hailing from the Age of the Gods are damaged more severely due to coming from an era where the laws of Mystery rather than physics ruled.

    Description
    Likes: The Age of Gods, grandstanding
    Dislikes: Oppressive governments, ignominy
    Talents: Natural philosophy, esotericism
    Natural Enemy: Antoine Lavoisier

    Caster’s true identity is Empedocles, the Last Magus of the Age of Gods.

    As the last Magus capable of speaking Divine Words, Empedocles is a proud individual. Regarding himself as the heir to all that the Age of Gods produced, he is prone to seek attention and try to impress others with his manifold talents in magecraft. The fact that the laws of Mystery which he zealously studied no longer truly apply in the era he is summoned to is a source of considerable frustration for Empedocles.
    Despite his penchant for grandstanding, Empedocles is a philosopher, and thus possesses a deep hunger for knowledge. However, due to his opinion of the Age of Gods as superior to that of Man, he relies on the logic found in the era he yearned for. Each of his theories on the workings of the universe might well have been correct during the Age of Gods, but in the modern era, they amount to little more than nonsense. Empedocles’ reliance on his ancient wisdom, coupled with his attention-seeking ways, serves to give him an eccentric air.
    Though Empedocles comes close to worshipping those who lived during his desired era, he also carries a deep-seated jealousy towards them. When dealing with Heroic Spirits from the Age of Gods, Empedocles’ drive to interact them is liable to kick into overdrive as he strives to both outdo and impress them with his works and wisdom. Despite his ways, Empedocles would likely strike an accord with those who sought the Mysteries of the Age of Gods. He also bears a strong dislike towards scientists, as they (to him, anyway) represent all that is wrong with the world of Man.
    Empedocles respects his Master, and should they be a true Magus, views them as a comrade in his search for the Mystery of the Age of Gods. Though this is not the actual objective of most Magi, Empedocles views their striving for the Root as a (lesser) variation of his own quest.
    Surprising no one, Empedocles’ fondest wish is to witness the Age of Gods in all its glory. Rather than return Mystery to the modern world, however, he would instead desire a method to travel through time in order to reach his objective.

    Lore
    Empedocles was a Greek philosopher, best known for originating the cosmogonic theory of the four classical elements. He also proposed forces he called Love and Strife which would mix and separate the elements, respectively. These physical speculations were part of a history of the universe which also dealt with the origin and development of life.
    As he is the last user of magic in Classical era to whom many and varied acts of magic are attributed to, it is likely that Empedocles was one of the last humans capable of speaking the language of the Age of Gods, the Divine Words. After Empedocles, the scale of magical gifts in exceptional individuals shrunk, becoming specialized. Individuals might have possessed the gift of healing, or the gift of prophecy, but were not usually credited with a wide range of supernatural powers as are magi like Orpheus, Pythagoras and Empedocles.
    Besides his various philosophical works, Empedocles is particularly famous for how he died. Legends record that Empedocles died by throwing himself into Mount Etna in Sicily, so that the people would believe his body had vanished and he had turned into an immortal god; the volcano, however, threw back one of his bronze sandals, revealing the deceit. Another legend maintains that he threw himself into the volcano to prove to his disciples that he was immortal; he believed he would come back as a god after being consumed by the fire.
    In truth, however, Empedocles’ death was a premeditated act. Though he did desire to become an immortal god, he wished to harness the volcano’s power to disassemble his body, and at the moment of his death, propel himself to immortality and godhood. Having become a Heroic Spirit, he is convinced that he succeeded.

    Notes
    NP turned out a bit boring. Maybe I should've gone with a Berserker version with delusions of immortality and an NP based on some of his esoteric philosophy...

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    It's fun seeing another Empedocles Servant after my own take on the guy a while back. His NP is a quite clever way to entwine his elemental theory with the legend of his death.

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    Due to Lambdas shortages on the cooperation of the Rider Version of Loki does i post now my Loki(Rider)

    As such here is my sixth part of my Loki series.

    Loki
    (Rider)

    Frohe Kunde *, you have invited the Rider of Ragnarök so would you like to shape this world new ?*bows*

    *means : somerthing like Happy Embassy in german.

    Height: 212 cm
    Weight: 93~ kg
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Attribute: Earth
    Origin: North Europe
    Weapon: Daggers and a Sword
    Other qualifying classes: Lancer,Berserker,Saber,Caster,Assassin,Avenger,Beast of Betrayal
    Likes:his pathethic Childrem, Attention,pranks and praise.himself.his Kin
    Dislikes: Being ignored,being betrayed Talents: forging sinisters shemes and organize Wild Brutes.
    Natural enemy: Heimdall (?)
    Parameters

    Strength: B+
    Endurance: B
    Agility: A
    Luck: C-
    Mana: A
    NP: Ex



    Background

    .You all know him .
    The Nordic deity of chaos ,in this Class does he is incarnated as the who lead the Giants and Draugr into the Ragnarök.
    His reasons for the assault of Balder and the Ragnarök :
    His reasons were that he wasnt enough appreciated and loved after he has done so many for the Aesirs and then has appeared Balder who was loved by everyone although he hasdone absolutly Nothing to gain it so it was a act out of jealousy and after he was punished and banished has he found increasingly thingss and occurances he hated about them partially through his Trauma from losing his Family and the torture has invoked his hatred as such has he sired/"created" the three "Monsterchildren" ;Fenris as now Champion of Asgard /to usurp Thor and become the Deity of Ice.(Valda Iss is basically Fenrirs sort of Ice God authority),Hel as new High Goddness who should govern over Skadi and dispose her (her part of release Balder was for Loki a lucky coincidense) and jourmunngandr as sort of fail safe , then after the three were either transformed into monsters or imprisoned has reopened the psychic wound of losing Narfi and Vali so has he created Naglfar in cooperation with Hymir who was his sort of Right-Hand in the creation of the ship and recruitment of the Giants .


    Personality

    In this class does he is more direct in his spech as he and does come more direct to the Point as in his Lancer Version.As such does he no more hide his intentions of shape the world new.
    Instead does he try to actively tries to bait and manipulate/bait others to follow him by evoke their longings and inner greedy beasts.

    However towards his Master is he temperate and want to know first the intentions and Goals of them aswll as their personality,then he would Chose if he makes them his pawn or treat them as equal Partners.



    Skills


    Class skills:

    Magic Resistence: C

    Through his Giant Body and his relicts of Divinity does he is quite resilient against Magecraft.

    Riding (A+)EX:
    He is capable to ride the most Vehicle with superb skill and mount every Creature upto the league of the phantasmal kind .T
    hrough Commander of the Hordes receive it even a Dragon mounting application.
    Personal skills:


    Divinity D :
    He was robbed of great parts of his Divinity by Odin but he slowly aquire it by his own .

    Silver tongue A+:At this state of live has reached Lokis skill of the deceive and manipulate his best form.

    Child of the Giants(Jotunn ) B:

    Does represent the Giant Heritage of Giants in this Case the jotunn the ice Giants ,as such does it donates Loki Ice Mana Blast A which allows hiim to create Ice streams , Walls and Missiles .Monstrous strenght A which grants him upon usage the vast increasing of Strenght and Endurance but the longer the usage goes on the more bulkier and greater he will become ,and Child of Nature B which donates him the abbility to absorb Mana out of the Environment the undisturbed the more Mana can he absorb can the lesser he put a strain on his Master and a presence concealment D when in de-materialised state.

    Rune-System Futhark :
    As a Co-founder of this Thaumaturgic System is he capable of make fully use of the Runes as with this is he capable of Enchant himself ,others or Weapons and enables a normal Person to hold his own against Servants or equalize mundane weapon at the Rank of a B+ Noblephantasm .
    Has acces to the Elements in a similar mechanic like Jewel Magecraft but on a entire different scale.Heal with particulary the Berkana at the Level of a Master healer.
    Also is he able to set Runic traps like stasis Cages or Mine like ones aswell as create Portals by set two identic sets on different Locations aswell as to craft Runestones and Territorry Creation (C equivalent) even as Rider.

    Commander of the Hordes Ex :
    Which is the abbility to manage and coordinate Wild beast,Giants or phantasmal through either Knowledge ,mental interferences or Charisma .
    It allows the user at this rank to tame beasts and command them with the Magnitude of a command seal, dirigate Demons ,Giants or other Bestial Sapient beings ,but it doesnt have a efect at normal humans.
    However it have a effect on skill holder like animalistic logic or similar ones. In combination with Lokis silver tongue skill is he able to evoke bestial instinct in Humans (like Lust,Anger,Grudge or jealousy).Basically invoke the Beasts in them to be able to Control them.

    Other Abillities:


    Noble Phantasm
    Naglfar
    Dys kjöl
    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: EX
    Range: 1~2
    Maximum number of targets: 100
    Description:
    The ship that Loki and Muspel has possesd it is composed complete out of finger /toenails aswell as claws of beast . The ship is as bigger as the greatest modern ship .

    The ship posess two form his Normal Ship form on one side and on the other a Dust like fog in both forms is Loki able to create keratinous Spears,claw like Hands and out of the Dust form is Loki able to form the dust to humanoid ceratinous creatures which are approximately as strong as Dragonfang soldiers.

    Loki can Change both forms at will but in the Mistform is Naglfar unable to manifest any creatures upon the Change to the shipform are crumbling the soldiers back into dust and forms into the ship.
    In its ship form it can fire spaers and on board form snake like tendrils,stakes and claws.Also does the ship produce a Reality Marble whichs range is a half rast (=4.5km) inside are the Giants, beast and Draugr able to exist but in the attempt to leave the spehre are their existences vanished ,inside the spehre are Servants of the age of Gods are empowered (aswell as gain a portion of their mainbody )and all North european Servant get the maximal fame bost.

    Also is Loki capable by summoning of it in its shipform ,to dispell and break Reality Marbles.

    On The ship is Loki capable of manifest the Giants (amongs them are his Right handman Hrymir,other jotun and Thurs) ,Draugr and Beasts every one of them posses his own personal skils and under circumstances also Noblephantasm.

    Barn Hringr Faðir
    Type: Anti-mundane/World
    Rank:
    A
    Range:
    1~2
    Maximum number of targets:
    100
    Description:
    Is the sublimated bond he hold to his Childrenn it enable him to summon them unrelated to Naglfar .
    it posses three different versions of medhodics:

    1:In the case on class Servant is not already summoned by a Master is Loki capable of stealing this summo and use it himself although he dont receivve their Command seals neither they are ableto Control Lokis summoned Child if possible Loki is capable of Choosing(and forcing) which Child he summons in Which class but he know their most effective(and most comfortable) class for them namely Fenris as either Lancer or Caster,Hel as Caster,Archer or Rider and Jourmungandr as either Saber or Rider.(He wouldnt like to force his Childs into the Berserker class not only due to the Mana strain he would suffer) As Heroic Spirits which Need only Mana backup for greater Noblephantasm usage or high consumptive skills. .Alternatively is he able to do it when he has collected three Commandseals (with the restriction that he cant use the Command seals of his own Master with which he was summoned)

    2:In the case all Servats are summoned is he able to summon them in a degraded state similar like blackened servants (with downgraded Parameters ,skills or Noble phantasm )or he can implant them(similar like the Card install in fate kaleid) in compatible Humans or even in on the brink of death lying servants ,in the case of Humans is he able to determine the Degree of transferred conciousness/Soul which ,from a sheer power up for as example his Master to a full Possession like state.In the Case of Servants are the Servants are transformed into the Chosen Child(summoned Servant) which then gain acces of personal skills and Noblephantasm of the host but the conditions must be exact meet to be able to do this.

    3:He is able to summon his Childrenn in their "Ragnarök" Form in this Case would put Loki on a great strain of Mana drain depending which Child so is the lowest drain by Hel which is able to use her Necromancy at Ex Rank and Her Noblephantasm Welcome in my World~ Hel is perma activated and its effect is that the 30 meters around her is treated as Helheim and she is able to summon and empower Naglfars Draugr and use her own Minion to a Degree . the Middle greatest strain is Fenrir which is equipped with the skillset Breath of the Tundra Wolf ,Ice Mirror aswell as Beast of Einherjar but is only able to crystalize a instabile Beastcore. The greatest strain put Jourmungandr which Need the amount of a Anti-World Noblephantasm usage necesary.Jourmungandrs skillset is Monstrous strenght Ex,Breath of the End Dragon and Worlds Body .But after incarnation are the three able by stealing life - or Elemental force of the Environment to stabiliyze themselv and aquire full Materialisation s Independet beings with their whole might but before this can happen would it provoke the appearance of Counterguardian.

    and under circumstances does this Noblephantasm hinder Loki at using it alongside Naglfar or entirely the whole usage of his ship.

    Sleipnir
    It is the same Sleipnir as in his Saber form although he despise to use it even as last Resort would he only use it by the flesh of his teeth by himself.However he is able to bestow a other Servant or Person with it.



    Relations

    His Childrenn: (Wait my Childrenn soon i can give you a second life)
    Fenris:Forgive your folish Father ,you have fulfilled in the End my expectations,if you have crvings of Revenge....then i will grant you your Triuumpf ! Then ..
    Hel:My proud Daughter ,empress of Hellheim , am as your Father proud!
    Jourmungandr: Jourmun my dear Kücken i am Feeling guilty for have let you endure this great pain ….
    Heimdall: Dont think i will make the same mistake as before !
    Seth:Zaa ! My dear Colleague ,would you want to join Forces ?With my Giants and your Alien Magecraft would we able to shape the World after our dreams !!
    Beowulf:Even Thor had more wisdom as this Woodhead .Einfältiger Narr( Simple fool) then lets see if you can hold a fight against a real giant !!
    Goliath:Ah Mein Bruder you are indeed a proud Warrior who fought for his Kin ! if i would had you by my side during Ragnarök....
    Hepheastus:He !?I didnt know that elsewhere also exist some Dwarves.


    every Comment and feedback is welcome
    Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; December 10th, 2018 at 09:44 AM. Reason: some corrections
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    Loki: That faceclaim is the ugliest damn thing I've seen in this thread. That's the most positive thing I can say about the sheet itself. Hiding it inside a spoiler would be an improvement.

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    Should use the official card artwork instead of a screenshot my dude.

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    The only positive thing that can be said from me is that the text doesn't make me want to gouge out my eyes as much as before

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Loki: That faceclaim is the ugliest damn thing I've seen in this thread. That's the most positive thing I can say about the sheet itself. Hiding it inside a spoiler would be an improvement.
    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post
    Should use the official card artwork instead of a screenshot my dude.
    i have used the same Picture as his Caster profile just besides and that is Loki how i imagine him as after punishment one drained by his old divine powers as a lean figurre, but okay i have now borrowd Shikis collapse Setting.
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    I mean this is literally the same character with better art


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    Thanks Spartacus i have chaged it now !
    Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; December 9th, 2018 at 06:01 PM.
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    Should just link Tom Hiddleton from Kong Skull Island...

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    Alternate Classes: Ruler
    True Name: Saint Helena
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Origin: Turkey (4th century)
    Armament: Cross

    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: E
    AGI: B
    MANA: A+
    LUCK: A+
    NP: A+

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Territory Creation - Rank A: A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
    Creation of a 'Temple', which is superior to a 'Workshop', becomes possible. Having founded several churches and had even more built in her honor, constructing a ‘Temple’ comes as something close to second nature for her.

    Item Construction (False) - Rank A+: A Skill that acts as an equivalent of Item Construction due to the user's lack of magus aptitude.
    Though Caster was not a magus, she is credited with the discovery, storage and use of a vast number of Christianity’s important relics. Having memorized each of their exact specifications, she can “recall” simulacrums of them through the expenditure of time and resources. Though these relics are powerful, they are not the genuine articles and thus fall short of reaching the power of Noble Phantasms.

    Personal Skills

    Imperial Privilege - Rank B+: An ability that, due to the insistence of the owner, Skills that are essentially impossible to possess can be obtained for a short period of time. In cases when the Rank is А or above, even the "burden to the body" can be acquired (such as Divinity).
    For Caster, the relevant Skills are Magic Resistance, Charisma, Baptism Rite, Golden Rule, fine arts, Riding and others.

    Saint - Rank A: A Skill that indicates being acknowledged as a saint. When summoned as a Servant, the ability of Saint is selected from among "raising the effectiveness of sacraments", "automatic HP recovery", "1 Rank-Up to Charisma" and "production of a holy shroud is possible".

    Revelation - Rank D: A Skill to "hear the voice of heavens" and take optimum action; a Skill equivalent to Instinct, a sixth sense regarding battles. However, 'Revelation' accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal (for instance, choosing the most suitable path while traveling). Because there is no basis to it, it cannot be explained to others clearly. It is a Skill held by the soul of the user.
    Though otherwise vague, Caster’s revelations are particularly accurate in terms of location.

    Noble Phantasms

    The True Symbol of Faith
    Verum Crucis

    Anti-Populace (Self), Rank A+
    Caster’s primary Noble Phantasm and her solitary one as a Caster, though she hesitates to refer to the item as truly ‘hers’. Verum Crucis is the True Cross of Christianity which Caster excavated and identified on a pilgrimage of Christianity’s holy sites. Its simple presence vastly augments the power of faith, thus amplifying all Noble Phantasms, Skills and items that function on the basis of Christian faith.
    However, Verum Crucis’ full activation is both a function of the cross’ reputed ability to heal as well as a reminder to the World of the Savior’s sacrifice. With all of ‘humanity’ as its target, Verum Crucis’ activation amplifies the ‘redemption’ the Savior’s sacrifice afforded humanity, though the effect is strongest only in the cross’ immediate vicinity. At its most powerful, Verum Crucis removes all debuffs and harmful over-time effects such as curses and diseases as well as bestowing a powerful recovery effect. The further away from the activation a target is, the lesser the effect will be. For most of humanity, Verum Crucis’ activation functions only as a small boost in morale.
    Though Verum Crucis would normally target all of humanity, Caster’s use of it centers most of the physical effects on Christian targets. The magical energy cost of activating the Noble Phantasm is also far less than something of its rank would normally expend, as rather than manifesting an effect, it ‘reminds’ the World of the effect’s existence. In addition to these details, it is also possible for Caster to pass on Verum Crucis to another, and for the receiver to activate it themselves. It is at its core a Noble Phantasm belonging to all of humanity, after all.

    Description
    Likes: Relics, her son
    Dislikes: Vandalism, stagnation
    Talents: Archaeology, adaptation
    Natural Enemy: Napoleon Bonaparte

    Caster’s true identity is Saint Helena of Constantinople, the Saint of New Discoveries.

    Helena is a woman defined by change. During her life, she reinvented herself many times, flawlessly adapting to the new situations she was presented with them. This habit of hers has not changed with her manifestation as a Heroic Spirit, and she would likely seek to tune herself so as to fit with the times.
    She has always been affable, as is common with Christian saints, and carries a mixture of humility and pride, stemming from both her humble origins and her eventual rise to the emperor’s consort. Though recognized as an influential Christian, she came to the faith later in life through her son’s influence, rather than coming to a revelation of her own. Due to her past and her relationship with Christianity, she is not particularly provincial in her views, accepting others regardless of their status, birth or religion. This is not to say that she is not devout in her faith, as she reputedly took to her new way of life as though it came to her naturally.
    As the patron saint of discovery, Helena is fond of archaeology, science and exploration, delighting in progress and learning. Conversely, she cannot stand those who would stagnate themselves or others, much less those that destroy relics of the ancient past. Indeed, preventing learning is one of the few surefire ways to get on Helena’s bad side.
    Helena has a motherly relationship towards all Heroic Spirits with roots in discovery, loving them deeply. She must admit, however, that some of those she views as her ‘children’ are in dire need of disciplining and education. Though she is otherwise fond of other Saints and great people of Christianity, her personal stance on them is close to neutral. Helena recognizes no particular enemies in the ranks of the Servants, though she is wary of certain shady characters, who she feels ought to be re-educated on proper conduct.
    Towards a Master, Helena acts as a steadfast friend, having faith in their good conduct. Rather than anger, underhanded methods are met with disappointment. Helena’s goal towards her Master is to gently guide them to a righteous path.
    Helena possesses no real wish to the Holy Grail, thus also qualifying as a Ruler. When pressed to do so, she might wish for an opportunity to see her son again or to recover certain lost relics.

    Lore
    St. Helena, also called Helen, was Roman empress who reputedly discovered Christ’s cross.
    Born the lowest of commoners, Helena’s early life was spent as a stable-maid. Helena eventually married the Roman emperor Constantius I, who later renounced her for political reasons. Though how they met is not known, could have met her while stationed in Asia Minor for the campaign against Zenobia. It is said that upon meeting they were wearing identical silver bracelets; Constantius saw her as his soulmate sent by God.
    When her son Constantine the Great became emperor in 306, he made her empress dowager, and under his influence she later became a Christian. She was devoted to her eldest grandson, Crispus Caesar, whom Constantine made titular ruler of Gaul, but a mysterious embroilment in the imperial family culminated with the execution of Crispus and Fausta, Constantine’s second wife and Crispus’s stepmother. Thereafter, the story became current that Fausta had accused Crispus of attempting to seduce her—hence Crispus’s execution in 326. Fausta, in turn, was denounced by the grief-stricken Helena and was executed shortly afterward. The historicity of that explanation remains questionable. Immediately after the double tragedy, Helena made a pilgrimage to the Holy Land. She caused churches to be built on the reputed sites of Christ’s Nativity (in Bethlehem) and Ascension (near Jerusalem).
    Before 337 it was claimed in Jerusalem that Christ’s cross had been found during the building of Constantine’s church on Golgotha, under a temple of Venus that had been demolished at the site. Later in the century Helena was credited with the discovery. Many subsequent legends developed, and the story of the “invention,” or the finding of the cross, enhanced by romances and confusions with other Helens, became a favourite throughout Christendom.

    Notes
    Had the idea of giving her the island of St. Helena as another Noble Phantasm, but couldn’t figure out a neat functionality besides “island prison”, so I scrapped it. Mind you, that’s still the reason (in addition to the man’s Anti-Mystery properties) of Napoleon being her Natural Enemy.

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    Putting this up slightly ahead of schedule since I'm tired...


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    Alternate Classes: Caster
    True Name: Otto Von Bismarck
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Origin: Germany (19th century)
    Armament: Sabre, cane, pistol

    Parameters:
    STR: D
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MANA: E
    LUCK: A+
    NP: A

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance - Rank -: Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
    As a modern Heroic Spirit with little to no Mystery, Rider has no resistance to magic.

    Riding - Rank C: A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
    Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. Despite possessing only a low rank in Riding, Rider still qualifies fully for the class due to the ‘Voyage’ Skill.

    Personal Skills

    Voyage - Rank D: A Skill denoting one's steering techniques for a ship. Because it is specialized for ships only, it is impossible for one to ride horses or chariots.
    Despite not possessing aptitude for steering ships in life, Rider has been granted this Skill due to his particular manifestation as a Rider.

    Peacemaker - Rank A: A composite Skill combining Proof of Friendship and Diplomacy. The combined effect allows the establishment of grounds for dialogue between combatants. The effect can be used on a great number of people at the same time, but the effect’s strength weakens as the amount of targets rises.
    As an accomplished diplomat, Rider promoted peace in Europe with his skills of statesmanship.

    Charisma - Rank A: A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class.
    Can be said to have achieved the greatest level of popularity as a human being.

    Human Observation - Rank C++: A technique to observe and understand people.
    In Rider’s case, this Skill functions as something closer to ‘Population Observation’. He can arrive to accurate conclusions about the activities of the masses, even to the point of predicting the near future. When it comes to individuals, Rider gains enough insight through observation to predict how a person would act in certain situations.

    Noble Phantasms

    For a Strong, Unified Country
    Blut und Eisen

    Anti-Unit (Self), Rank C
    A Noble Phantasm based on the style of politics advocated by the most famous of Rider’s speeches and existing as the source of his title. Ordinarily taking the form of a speech in support of power politics, his current class simply brings about the end results of its normal effects.
    Through Blut und Eisen, Rider can selectively reinforce his parameters and Skills in order to augment his power in combat. Without additional reinforcement, this is limited to assigning a plus modifier to a single parameter or Skill. In addition, Rider’s combat prowess is slightly boosted.
    As a secondary effect, Rider can also conceal his true parameters from others, replacing the originals with altered versions so as to appear more imposing. Though this is not Blut und Eisen’s intended use, apparent power as a means of deterrent falls under the purview of Rider’s politics.

    The Pride of Germany
    Bismarck

    Anti-Army, Rank B+
    Though named after Rider, the Noble Phantasm Bismarck is not originally something he owned or even knew of. Built as the mightiest battleship of its era half a century after Rider’s own death, Bismarck is a powerful offensive Noble Phantasm despite its relative youth, its reputation giving it additional power. Festooned with cannons and equipped with powerful armor, the ship can unleash destruction in almost any direction and is able to take a great amount of punishment before it risks destruction.
    As a Noble Phantasm, each of Bismarck’s guns are fully capable of harming Servants, with the shots from its main cannons being capable of outright killing weaker Servants. However, none of the guns are particularly accurate against human-sized targets, though the sheer amount of firepower makes up for this. Bismarck’s armor plating is capable of outright stopping non-Noble Phantasm attacks of up to C-rank. Due to these capabilities, the Noble Phantasm functions both as mighty offensive and defensive tool.
    Unlike similar seaborne Noble Phantasms, however, Bismarck cannot travel through air. It is capable of traveling on land as well as sea, but the former method incurs an additional cost in magical energy.

    Description
    Likes: Self-reliance, Germany
    Dislikes: Pointless warfare, young fools
    Talents: Politics, pragmatism
    Natural Enemy: Wilhelm II, himself

    Rider’s true identity is Otto von Bismarck, the Iron Chancellor.

    Appearing as a rather grumpy, though dignified, old man, Bismarck is not overtly pleased by his summoning into a Holy Grail War. In life, he was a man who thrived in the field of politics, and he retains his desire for the political arena as a Heroic Spirit. As a Grail War is a battle to the death between Masters and Servants, there is little room for or interest in the arts of diplomacy. Still, Bismarck sees himself as a representative of Germany’s might and thus soldiers on with a stolid determination.
    Bismarck is more than a little nonplussed by his second Noble Phantasm, but though he strongly disapproves of those who built it, he wholeheartedly embraces the power it represents. As they are not among his primary tools, strength and reliance on fighting are means he uses with some reluctance, although Bismarck does not resist their use should it prove necessary.
    Due to dealing with them for most of his entire life, not to mention having grown out of being one, Bismarck has little regard for those he terms as “young fools”. Those without appreciation for the wisdom of their elders or sufficient life experience automatically fall into this category. Despite these views, Bismarck does not judge others simply by their appearance and actions, but rather the potential and judgment he sees in them. Getting along almost solely with those who reach his standards, Bismarck also holds respect for those who ruled through power during their lifetimes. However, this respect does not extend to hedonistic, thoughtless tyrants, power or not.
    Bismarck serves his Master grudgingly, as he prefers to be the one in control. Thus the life of a Servant, a being intended to act as a familiar, is anathema to him. Should his Master trust him with determining the proper course of action in the Holy Grail War, Bismarck might treat them slightly better, as they at least understand their proper place.
    Bismarck’s wish to the Holy Grail is for a strong Germany, preferably in the tradition of his home, Prussia.

    Lore
    Otto Eduard Leopold von Bismarck was born into an aristocratic family at Schönhausen, northwest of Berlin, on 1 April 1815. He attended a prestigious school in Berlin followed by the University of Göttingen. He then entered the Prussian civil service but was bored by his job and in 1838 resigned. For nearly a decade, he helped his father manage the family estates.
    In 1847, Bismarck married Johanna von Puttkamer, who provided him with stability. It was a year of significant change in his life, when he also embraced the Christian tradition of Lutheranism, and began his political career in the Prussian legislature, where he gained a reputation as an ultra-conservative royalist. In 1851, King Frederick Wilhelm IV appointed Bismarck as Prussian representative to the German Confederation. He then served as ambassador to Russia and France. In 1862, he returned to Prussia and was appointed prime minister by the new king, Wilhelm I.
    Bismarck was now determined to unite the German states into a single empire, with Prussia at its core. With Austrian support, he used the expanded Prussian army to capture the provinces of Schleswig and Holstein from Denmark. He then escalated a quarrel with Austria and its German allies over the administration of these provinces into a war, in which Prussia was the victor. Prussia then annexed further territory in Germany.
    Unable to persuade the southern German states to join with his North German Confederation, he provoked hostilities with France as a way of uniting the German states together. The German victory in the Franco-Prussian War won over the southern German states, and in 1871 they agreed to join a German empire. Wilhelm I of Prussia became emperor.
    As 'chancellor' of the new Germany, Bismarck concentrated on building a powerful state with a unified national identity. One of his targets was the Catholic Church, which he believed had too much influence, particularly in southern Germany. He also worked to prevent the spread of socialism, partly by introducing health insurance and pensions.
    Abroad, Bismarck aimed to make the German empire the most powerful in Europe. In 1879, he negotiated an alliance with Austria-Hungary to counteract France and Russia. Italy later joined the alliance. To avoid alienating Britain, Bismarck arranged the two Mediterranean Agreements of 1887, designed to preserve the status quo against a Russian threat.
    In 1890, Bismarck resigned after disagreeing with the new emperor, Wilhelm II. He retired to his estate near Hamburg and died there on 30 July 1898.

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    Oh boy, I was hoping to see a Bismarck sheet someday! You most likely wanted to give him a more unique skillset, but wouldn't Incitement have been fitting for him?

    Also, about Empedocles, Mental Pollution and Elemental seem to be very necessary skills for him.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Oh boy, I was hoping to see a Bismarck sheet someday! You most likely wanted to give him a more unique skillset, but wouldn't Incitement have been fitting for him?

    Also, about Empedocles, Mental Pollution and Elemental seem to be very necessary skills for him.
    I did consider Incitement for Bismarck, but I felt that the addition of it would've bloated the sheet a little too much. He also didn't seem to interact with the public all that much (not to mention not caring about their opinions for the most part), so something to influence the masses wouldn't have quite fit my idea.

    As for Empedocles, Mental Pollution was considered, but the rank would not have been all that high. All he's got going for him on that front is the obsession that 'the Age of Gods was superior'. Not quite as bad as the rest of the people with that Skill (as it doesn't really distort his morality to any extent and so on). And Elemental, despite its name, refers to the ability to create artificial Elemental constructs, which isn't Empedocles' hat. Too Magecraft-y in my opinion.

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    I never expect Atlantes buckler to be Gundam beam shield...

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    ah, the Sword Art Online crossover character looks great

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    just don't insult Alice design and you all are good

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    Alice actually got one of the best character design, for an Isekai LN character, anyway.

    Bradamante here looks like that loli whatshername from SAO first season. Then again, her whole story is basically a classic japanese fantasy LN plot.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post


    I never expect Atlantes buckler to be Gundam beam shield...
    who is that and what is Atlantes buckler ,please?
    When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...





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