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    SUNNY, NO

    GET BACK TO THE CONTEST, PLEASE

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    Backing out is bad form, Sunny
    seriously tho, please don’t back out, the sheet’s really neat.
    The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
    Coffee would be nice, though.

    [Collection of my Servant Sheets]
    Now Revamped!

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    Now here is my Version of Tugarin .

    please take a look everyone.


    .Tugarin
    (Archer)
    Without armor

    he possess scaly Skin under his cloths aswell as Claw like fingertipps and also spiked ears.
    Armor:

    Height: 232cm
    Weight: 135~ kg
    Alignment: Chaotic Good /Neutral Evil
    Attribute: Man/Earth
    Origin: East Europe
    Weapon: Long/Broadsword
    Other qualifying classes: Rider, Lancer,Saber,Berserker
    Likes: Modesty,Commoners Happiness,,Nutrient and satiating meals,Old Traditions and Honor
    Dislikes: Royal Excesses,His Glutony and Animal Instincts,New (Christian) Codices
    Talents: to slay Beasts(Dragons in particula)
    Natural enemy:Alyosha,Nefrusobek
    Nominated Seiyu:Tesho Genda
    Parameters

    Strength: B++
    Endurance: A
    Agility: B+
    Luck: C
    Mana: A+
    NP: EX

    Personality and Background

    Tugarin Zmey was Born under a Clan of Beastslayers which were particular specialiced in exterminate Dragons and Demons and originates from a namely unknown Slavic Deity though Tugarin speculated that his Ancestor were a mortal ofspring of Kostjanaja Noga ,Tugarin were Member of the Dragon Extermination branch,of which initialisations rite of Adulthood were the slaughtering of a Dragon and the bathing aswell of the consumming of its blood ,which were milenias ago invented to obtain power of which ist founders lacked through this has his tribe gained Beast qualities .

    During his life were Tugarin traveled across the East European/balcanic Region and helped the commoners without the Aspire of fame just out of his felling oof Honor and duti has he subjugated countless Beasts and through his families Damoclesian Blessing has he turned himself into a Lyudi zver'(Human Beast) and took a strain on his mind as such has he became glutonious and irascible and was was due to his appearance and his Behavior and also through his Family Name Zmey often comparade with a Dragon ,but at one time has he rescued a Young Noble Maiden which was called Apraksevna(whoose real Name Ragnhild were) and stayed in Contact with her ,later as he were under the other Bogatyrs has he gotten a personaly qarrels with Alyosha Popovich and as he insulted his old acquintance has he thrown as warning a Dagger at him .

    The time he spend with Apraksevna were Peace and joyfull through their sighting together were spread some rumors that he seduced her,due to Alyoshas Insult had he requested him to a Duel and had in mind to kill him for his resspectless demeanor ,but were due to his bilnding rage and uncautiousness,killed by his own Kulshedra Dagger.

    He is actually a modest and Tradition orientated Person and a true Warrior at his Heart,but due to the years of being marked as Beast and discredited by the fellow Dragon slaying Bogatyrs has he gotten in combination with his bestialisation hard to trust to anyone aswell as irritable and even Human hostile to a minor Degree.

    As Servant is he initially towards his Master not hostile as they have granted him a second Chance,but he will start to loath a very concious Evil minded master though h tolerate moraly questioning Actions and deeds to a certain Degree as such would he get with Kiritsugo along but upon Hearing that Childrenn are targeted for sacrificing would he only with a Reiju be Held from immediatly take took track the perpetrator immediatly and exterminate him aswell as to Rescue the Innocents that was caught ,also although he understand fully the secretive nature of the grailwar and is willing to kill Eye-witnesses would he try to spare them if somehow possible espcially if they were Childrenn or Women.


    Towards women is he quite charming and due to his enhanced primal instincts is he gotten quite temperamental towards Attractive Women but due his iron clad will is he able to restrain himself in the most cases ,so circumstances like a ill-fated Lancer become delicate.However would he due to his tribes codices prefer a Combat capable Master who he then be able to relax from his protective Duty aswell will he open comment and praise them ,should his Master be a rather unexperienced one would act like Father figure Guiding and lecturing them in the arts he learned in his life be them Combat,survival,knowledge or even Thaumaturgy aswell as be more openherarted towards them.it should be noted that to earn his trust is difficult but should he found him in someone is he very loyal and in the case of his Master would seek a open discusion and would share his in Depth Knowledge of the slavic past.



    Skills

    Class Skills:

    Independet Action: B+

    It is possible to take action even without a Master. He Need only in he case of excessive skill or Greater Noblephantasm usage Mana backup from his Master.
    This skill would normaly be due to his Lyudi Zveri skill be rank downed but due to his Dual core is the negative effect outbalanced aswell as is he able to gain Mana just by near Flames or heated objects in miniscule amounts should he linger in a Inferno like in forest fires does he recieve enough Mana to hypothetical stay a month or longer without a Master in the world and even three Days after the conclusion of a Grailwar

    Magic Resistence: A
    Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi.
    He is through his Living fire core aswell as his Rod Zmej almost complett resistent against fire/heat attributed/natured spells/Thaumaturgy aswell as Flame based Mana Bursts,also does he is able to cancel complett upto B+ Rank Fire/heat based Noblephantasm and also is he nearly undamageable from Magical Flames regardless of Dragon/Hell or Holy fire ,in return does he have due to his Dual-core receive a massive drop in Magic Resistence against Water Natured/Attributed Spells,Thaumaturgy or Attacks and also receives he in Water-rich Environments(like Swamps) a rank down of this skill to Rank D.

    Riding: A++

    Normaly Restricted to the Rider aswell as Saberclass but due to his legend to be primarily during Combat on a mount aswell his association with Dragons,is he in every Non Berserker Class possessing the Riding skill but he is unable outside of his summoning as Rider unable to summon a Mount on his own.

    He is capable of riding every Vehicel at Above Average Level ,even if not existed during his live period,however his true forte is riding and subjugation of every normal Animal upto phantasmal Beast aswell as Divine Beasts due to his overnatural Heritage ,through this skill is he capable of "steal" (Caster) summoned familiars aswell is capable to due to his Draconic Attributes even capable of exceptionally ride the Dragon Kind and to Sublimate their will .

    Personal Skills:
    Dual Core of the Living Fire (Schar-ptiza/Zmei) : EX
    Is the representation of his two spiritual cores namely at the on his own Dragoncore which he awoke through slaying a Dragon in his innititions rite and at the other side the which once has implanted him a Rusian-slaavic Wizard to Rescue out of Gratitude of saving his life once and paying his dept ,as he defeated a full adult Schar-ptiza the Rusian Firebird(Phönix) but he sustained several injuries and were one the brink of death but the Wizard were Jarog one of the last existing slavic deities which repaired his Body and implanted him the heart of the phoenix in Tugarin,itis normaly a almost sure kill procedure but due to his already inhuman Body and his Affinity for the fire atribute were his Body capable of accept the new parts ,then have synchronised his two magical cores and he turned into a artificial Fire Elemental .

    This skill give him the Authority of Fire and allows him to Freely create variations of Fire usage which are Could even outmatch Fire Demigods in some regards as he is able to create torrents of flame outbursts,clad every Weapon uneragrded the type in a Mana burst like Fashion (his Hand/claws,feet aswell as Wings included) but even that he as Servant be equivalent to a Fire Deity and through his Archer class given greater Quantities as perhaps in his other classes would such a power Output Need a Mana Bachup from his Master that barely can be provided in the most cases.

    The other reat abbility of this skill allows him to absorb any flame and modulate directly into Mana which he is able to frelly operate through this is he allso even able to absorb Fire/or heat natured Noblephantasm and even allows him for a limited replication of the Noblephantasm,also does this skill Shows similar effects like the Galvanism skill in that instead of Electricity he absorb Heat and the hotter his Sorounding is the more Mana he can aquire and use but this skill also Harbors a great weakpoint due to become a Elemental does he get a Major weakness against Water and of it attributed Attacks were he suffers a rank down in Endurance down to C./through it must be noted that he retains his abbility to swim and dive)

    Dragonblood-Line
    Rod Zmej
    : A+
    Is his subliated origin as Overnatural halvbeasts through this does he poses as Member of the Dragon Extermination branch ,a Dragon armor skill(which would be one of his Noblephantasm in other Classes),Natural Body A rank .aswell a Monstrous strenght equivalent B.

    Also does this skill normaly allow to Control different Elements but due to his Dual Core skill is he greatly reduced to the Fire element.

    Also does this skill Allows for the usage of his tribes style of East European Witchcraft and Instinct at atleast B+ rank.

    Humanbeast
    Lyudi zveri
    : A+
    is the Sublimation of his life as wandering Beastslayer and Bogatyr.This skill core abbility is the abbility(in his case more curse) of overtake skills and abbilities of the Opponent upon defeating them and either bath or consume their blood or by eecute a Thaumatugic ritual.In his Case also had this curse given him a sort of Madness Enhancement like Mental polution which turned him over the years into a grudge possesd Being.

    Also does this skill allows him to use in a Imperial Privilege like way every skill he had Knowledge obtained and it gives him a high resistence against influences like Angra Maiynus mud.

    Through this skill has he obtained amongst others : poisen resistence A,medicinic Treatment D,Eye for Folklore B,Druidism B++,Disengage C,Self Field Defense.C

    Uncrowned Martial Arts: C-

    Due to that despite called a Monster ,his prowess as Warrior was never aknowledged and it didnt exist unitary Explanation of his Weapon usage capability like Sword- or Spearmanship.But due to that his Archer and Cavalry prowess found mentioned does this skill receive a minus modifier.
    Due to this does appears his Parameters and his Noblephantasm as one rank below their actual state until his true Name is revealed,to the respective Opponent.
    Other Abillities:
    Also does he is in possesion and ofthe slavic Karuna Rune System and has the capability to use them through which skill he is able to utilize them is he though Unwilling to reveal except one that holds his whole trust..

    Noble Phantasm


    Struny zmey
    Bessmertnoye dykhaniye

    Rank: A+
    Anti-Unit
    Description:
    Is the the modified Bow of Tugarin,it is a heavy metalic Bow whoose Bow-arms are made of a complicated metal structure which Needs immense Strenght to make full use of ist Range and force ,the Bow strings are made out of two different tisues,one the one out of Dragon vocal Cords that are able to even now produce upon playing on them a roaring Growl,The other are bite muscles of the same Dragon.And ist Shell are sharing build characteristics with a old Roman balista.
    The Bow can be used like any other due to Tugarin strenght also can be used it in a rapid fire way and he is able to add his Fire to the Arrows to increase their destructive potencial.The arrows he use are upto 76~ centimeters Long ,the Bow does posses a crosbow Modus which is useale upon the true Name release then are the Arrows thensed by the Muscle Cords and through his Mana that are now flow through the muscles are ist formerly Dragon breath re-envoked and used upon the loaded Arrow which are then turned into broken phantasm like catalys for the Dragons breath which are then pon Impact are explode like Rocket Missiles also as side are with every Arrow firing are produce a roar shockwave which alone can be Damage a Servant and the shochwave is additionally accelerate the Arrow.
    Besides it main purposes is the Shell of the Bow a capable Shield and the tipps of the Arrow-arms aswell as the edges are sharp and formed like Swordblades aswell are useable like a double spear .

    Svarogu Xor s zubchataya peredacha
    Rank: A
    Anti-Fortress
    Description:
    Is Archers Enhanced Halvgolemic Body which saved his life and enhance his Fighting cappabilities .
    Aslong as it is noot invked is ist reduced to his Armor ,but opon calling the true Name does the Armor fuse with Tugarin and Tugarin grow to a 3,45 meter tall Android like Halve-golem.
    Then are Opening some Holes and tubes growing out of his Armor/Body and his true Artilery is appearing like that he becomes able to shoot Flammespehre coated Rockbullets aswell as Torch like blazing spears ,aswell is he able to shoot hose like bite chains which he can shot towards the Opponent and draws the opponents towards himself aswell is able to emniit exlosive sparks out of their tipps aswell is able to emit suffocating smoke .Aswell is he capable of growing blades and drill like spears out of his Armor.
    Also does h now absorb a on the temperature depending amount of Mana out of the soroundings aswell is capable of producing some potion which are having either healing factors ,explosive ,or poisen aspects.
    Also is he able by using his Rod Zmey skill during the Activation of this Nobelphantasm is he able to transform himself into a Golem like Dragon for a short amount of time.And this Noblephantasm does belongs to the Domain of the Divine constructs.
    Golem-Dragon

    Also i he everytime capable of cancel and deactivate this Noblephantasm.


    Prizyv predkov Vechnogo ognya:Kersnik
    Rank: EX
    Anti-Army
    Description:
    Is Tugarin last and strongest Noblephantasm which he can only use where he after the recitation of a hiden pasage is he able to evoke the power of his Draconic core and synchronisation with his russian phoenix(Schar-ptiza) core and he unleash the full power of his Dual-core which then set hime self on fire and melt his Golem parts into a Armor of molten Lava and the est of transform into a Draconoid Creature ,as he grows from his Back Wing and a Tail,his Claws becoming moree pronounced aswell does his mout he grow into a full fangs bearing maw his head becomes Dragon like and he grows Forward curved Horns.
    He become extreme reslient as he is ow covered into a Armor of Moltenmetal aswell that is covered by a cloak of fire and additionally through the underneath sprouting scales and also also dos any unprotected attack on himslef now cause great Damage on the Opponent through the sheer heat like that a Fistpunch of a Berserker could burn his entire Arm.

    On the offensive side are his strenght and agility greatly enhanced and all off his Firepowers are grreatly strenghtened he is able to spit a Hellish Flame stream which destruction potencial alone can rival with a Anti Fortres Noblephantas aswell is he able to shoot parts of his Armor as Moltenmeteor like projectils which are then able out of the destructions crater to form Lizardman like Golems which he can control (but he doesnt use tis aspect due to Honor reasons)

    This Noblephantasm has does are transform him withhin 40 minutes increasingly into a Full Rusian Zmej type Dragon whichs scaled skinn is overlayed by a layer of Metall and severe his Servant contract to his Master aswell as obtain beast like confirmation .

    However he does through his sheer will power to halt the process in a stasis like state through which are his Mana absorbation ability is greatly limited aswell does he through this also intentionally take Saint Graph Damage and also his Mana consumption is greatly increased so that a normal Master can Sustain it for barely Five minutes before take selfdamage. after that is either Tugarins full willpower and/or a commandseal is necesary to deactivate this Noblephantasm and after thatt are his Endurance reduced to D RAnk aswell are his Strenght and Agility Reduced to B,and he Needs atleast on whole day to Regenerate completely.


    Relations

    Goliath: They are fundamentally Soulmates as they are amongst the last Tribesmen of a Milenia old kins that are had fundamentaly incomparable capabilities , however Tugarin has not holded hatred against the Christian faith ,but still has he not found particular interest nor taste/benefitt in it.

    Artoria Pendragon: Hmm interesting ..,despite your fine build can i discern a Dragon like scent ?Curious Despite your Draconic aspects has you lead a succesfull and glorious life ...but you have also had also to fight external aswell as internal Fighting ..? Hm..What would it be if we test out that all you can eat Restaurant ?

    They are get surprisingly well along due to their similarities and in their freetime are they like to talk and often sparing together (and ruin financially All you can eat Restaurants actual Count :3)Also does Arthoria occasionally see Lancelot in Tugarin which she shocks sometimes but also put her at ease.
    Siegfried/Sigurd: Omoshiroi that also other Dragonslayer had bathed in the Blood of a Dragon ,even if it was only Fake ones,and that atleast one of them had obtained wisdom that goes over the experience of the fight.

    Atalante: She has fought against a Demon boar that should be a Dragon equal Beast !!? when i see you i can tell that the fight has left some uncomfortable memories and consequences,right ? I would wished to have been at that time instead of your Person …. if i see you remind me on her....

    Saint Martha:Although you have fought a Dragon can i with one glimpse say that you are a have more befriended it as feed off ,hm to bad that i cant summon my loyal Partner ,but should we Encounter each other Both as Rider then i want witth a a Duel Dragon-Tamer against Dragon-Tamer .

    Thor:you are the famous Dragonslayer of which Apraksevna has told me the on that slew a Continental sized Dragon,you are truly possesing the physique of Primordial Beast Slayer even if i only just look at you can i tell your skills you must possess ...that urges me on,Kui let us fight at our whole pride !!!


    I am earnestly thankfull for every Feedback !

    ps :
    nobody has commented on my Dante until now also here would i be please to hear a Feedback.
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    Servant Archer:

    Appearance:

    (Official art of Chinon from Fire Emblem: Path Of Radiance)

    True Name
    : Scythes

    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

    Alternate Classes: Lancer, Rider

    Strength- B
    Agility- B
    Endurance- B
    Mana- C
    Luck- C
    NP- B

    Personality
    An energetic and hot-blooded man. He can be rather arrogant, often looking down at his opponents, especially if they lack noble blood. However, Archer will come to respect his opponent if they can prove their worth to him in combat. He is a honorable man who dislikes using underhanded strategies to win, but is pragmatic enough to resort to them when necessary against a foe who otherwise outclasses him.

    As his tribe were wanderers, Archer has a deeply restless soul and dislikes resting in one place for very long. He values freedom highly and believes that everyone should have the right to choose the path they walk in life. Those who'd seek to control or stifle the freedom of others disgust Archer.

    Archer doesn't have any particular wish on the Holy Grail. He only chose to be summoned out of a yearning to wander the modern world and battle new and stronger foes.

    Likes: fighting strong opponents, wandering
    Dislikes: staying in one place, cowards
    Natural Enemy: Darius, Iskandar, the Cyclopes


    Class Skills
    :

    Independent Action- B

    The ability to remain in existence without a supply of magical energy from one's Master. At this rank, Archer can linger in the world for roughly two days in the absense of an active contract. He can also survive for a short time after suffering extensive damage to his spiritual core. Archer's tribe, the Scythians, were a nomadic people who wandered the land freely and rarely settled in one place for very long.

    This trait is shared by Archer as their founder, granting him a high rank in this Skill.

    Magic Resistance- C

    Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank, spells with a chant below two verses are affected. Cannot cope with the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals. Although born from the Age of Gods, Archer rarely encountered Magecraft in life and hence only sports a modest level of resistance.

    Riding- A
    The ability to ride animals and handle vehicles. At this rank, all mundane mounts can be ridden at a high degree of skill, but not Phantasmal or Divine Beasts. Normally Archers wouldn't have Riding as a Class Skill, but Scythes obtains it due to his tribe being famed for their horseback archery.


    Personal Skills:

    Charisma- B

    The ability to inspire others, and lead armies into battle. As the founder and first king of Scythia, Archer's level of charisma is suitable for the ruler of a country.

    Monstrous Strength- C+

    A Skill that permits a temporary augmentation of the Strength parameter through emphasizing one's existence as a monster or demonic beast. At this rank, Archer can grant himself a rank-up to Strength lasting for 20 turns. As a son of the primordial monster Echidna, Archer naturally possesses some monstrous affinity.

    When Archer uses this Skill, his appearance alters to reflect his latent serpentine nature. His pupils turn slitted, his teeth sharpen into fangs and his skin assumes a rough texture like scales. Archer also can regenerate from wounds at a much faster rate, analogous to a serpent regrowing its own tail.

    Divinity- B

    Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. Son of demigod Heracles and monstrous Echidna, Archer boasts a high level of divinity.


    Noble Phantasms
    Chrysó Tóxo Ton Ouranón
    Heaven Shall Anoint The Rightful King


    Rank: C

    Type: Anti-Unit

    The great bow given to Archer from the heavens to signify his kingship. It is a tall, heavy recurve composite bow that can loose arrows with incredible precision and power. As a symbol of Archer's kingship, it is impossible for anyone who lacks "the worth of a true ruler" to wield the bow. In the Grail War, this is asserted by having the Charisma Skill at rank B or higher. Those who so much as lay a hand on the bow without an at least B-rank in Charisma will be rebuked by golden flames, a tangible manifestation of Archer's kingship. Archer can weaponize this trait by swinging the bow as a club in close combat, emitting a burning gold conflagration with every strike.


    Dilitírio Tou Isinna
    Oh Primordial Serpent, Lend Me Your Fangs


    Rank
    : B

    Type
    : Anti-Unit

    Archer's tribe, the Scythians, used a tactic of dipping their arrows in poison before battle to make them more deadly to their enemies. By synthesizing this anecdote with his own monstrous ancestry from Echidna, Archer can coat his arrows in an incredibly potent phantasmal venom. In its sealed state, this Noble Phantasm manifests as a small tattoo in the shape of a viper on Archer's right shoulder. When Archer invokes its true name and nocks an arrow in his bow, the tattoo begins to glow with baleful green light. The light seeps through Archer's arm in the form of sickly veins before imbuing itself into his arrow.

    Archer then looses the newly envenomed arrow from his bow. As it hurtles towards the opponent, the noxious aura surrounding the arrow takes the form of a snarling semi-transparent viper with bared fangs. Upon striking the enemy, the "serpent" sinks its spectral fangs into them at the same moment as the arrow pierces their body.

    As well as physical damage from the arrow itself, this Noble Phantasm also inflicts the 'poison' status ailment on the enemy. The poisoning progresses through three stages that each elapse roughly a day. In the first day, the target feels incredible burning pain all over their body as the poison seeps through their bloodstream. Then, once the poison has fully infested their body, the second stage can begin. The target's senses begin numbing as they experience symptoms of drowsiness and fatigue. This is reflective of the poison slowly shutting down their body. In the third and final stage, the target's heart stops, killing them instantly.

    The progression of the venom can be delayed based on the victim's Endurance stat. This Noble Phantasm can be fully nullified by a Poison Resistance Skill ranked B or higher. Otherwise, the only way to stop the poison is to kill Archer, upon which all effects of this Noble Phantasm will immediately dissipate.



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    Decided to write up a bit of a simpler sheet this time. I came across a mention of this guy in a list of the various kids Heracles sired. The idea seemed promising, so I did a bit more research to find out just who he was. His legend was still fairly sparse, so I stretched a few things to make it more interesting.

    The Echidna Herc banged probably wasn't the same one as "primordial mother of monsters" Echidna, for one thing. I also conflated Scythes (the Greek version) with Targitaus, a somewhat similar figure in Scythian legend, mainly with his bow NP. (Because a bow that bursts into flame when someone unworthy touches it is cooler than one that's just too stiff and heavy for normies to lift).

    As always, feel free to drop by with comments and critiques. Especially since this thread seems a little dead as of late...

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    Alternate Classes: N/A
    True Name: Bai Suzhen
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Origin: Chinese Folklore
    Armament: Various

    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: C
    AGI: A
    MANA: A
    LUCK: C
    NP: B

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Territory Creation - Rank -: A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
    Ordinarily, Caster’s rank in this Skill would be A. However, due to her poor experiences with temples, she has been rendered unable to use Territory Creation.

    Item Construction - Rank B+: A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.
    Caster is capable of crafting an assortment of elixirs, mostly medicinal in nature. However, due to her expertise in Chinese alchemy, it is possible to transform liquids into solid materials. Through this, creation of other kinds of items is also possible.

    Personal Skills

    Shapeshift - Rank A: A Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change. It is a method used by the millenary spirits of foxes and badgers of China that are put on par with Tamamo-no-Mae.
    Caster is capable of freely switching between the forms of human and snake. She is also capable of varying the sizes of her transformations to a great extent, with her size as a serpent ranging from that of an ordinary hatchling to the size of a building.

    Golden Elixir - Rank A+: Chinese internal alchemy, wherein one’s essence, spirit and breath are used as ingredients in the pursuit of enlightenment and immortality. Rather than using ingredients such as plants and chemicals, the composition of one’s own body is turned into ingredients for alchemy.
    Due to Caster’s enlightened state and her body possessing traits of both human and serpent physiologies, her use of internal alchemy can be used to create a wide variety of effects. In addition, she can produce rare components for the purpose of Item Construction through the use of her body.

    Chinese Martial Arts - Rank C+: A Chinese rationality. A value that measures one's mastery of the martial arts that made becoming one with the universe as its objective. Its learning difficulty is of the highest level and, unlike other Skills, it is at A Rank that one is at a level where one is said to have finally "learned it".
    Caster’s style is known as Tai Ji Quan. Rather than being something she dedicated herself to, it was something she studied out of curiosity. The style utilizes both one’s bare hands as well as a multitude of weapons.

    Noble Phantasms

    Assault on the Turtle’s Tower
    Qiángxí Léi Fēng Ta

    Anti-Army, Rank C+
    A Noble Phantasm that summons the tower that once served as Caster’s prison. Due to the negative memories associated with it, Caster usually refrains from using it. Though the tower itself can act as a defense, its true worth is to manifest around Caster and her foes to limit the mobility of Caster’s enemies.
    The seals placed on Qiángxí Léi Fēng Tǎ reduce the parameters of all those inside by a single rank, including Caster. However, due to the great fame of the tower and Caster’s status as the source of that fame, the rank-down is essentially negated in Caster’s case.
    Qiángxí Léi Fēng Tǎ’s true usage, however, is for Caster to flood the temple’s interior. The intent of the attack, to drown Caster’s enemies, is manifested in the water as a draining effect on the life and magical energies of those inside, excluding aquatic and amphibious targets. Belonging to the latter category herself, Caster is immune to the water’s negative effects.

    Description
    Likes: Her husband, bathing
    Dislikes: Turtles, social norms
    Talents: Internal alchemy, inventing koans
    Natural Enemy: Fahai

    Caster’s true identity is Bai Suzhen, also known as Madame White Snake.

    Suzhen acts as though she is a woman of high class, striving for elegance and composure. She is fond of sharing wisdom with others, and refers to herself as a Xian, an enlightened being. However, Suzhen is not truly enlightened, as she gained only the power that comes with achieving such a state in her legend. As such, her esteemed wisdom is but a sham, not a fact. Still, as it is the duty of the enlightened to guide others, she freely passes on her dubious lessons. If confronted, she is easily flustered.
    Though wearing the shape of one, it is clear from her behaviour that Suzhen is not a human being. In fact, even with the knowledge of the modern world and its workings that the Holy Grail grants her upon summoning, her understanding of human society is severely lacking, and she demonstrates several holes in her knowledge.
    Suzhen views other Heroic Spirits with a strange mix of curiosity and indifference. Though she is intrigued by humanity in general, she feels a strong sense of disconnection even with others who have been recorded on the Throne of Heroes. As such, though she is interested in information on them, she views others and their actions as something distant, rather like an interesting view. Naturally, there is also an exception: due to her poor experiences, she views Buddhists with distaste, bordering on outright hatred.
    Having been summoned into the world by a Master, Suzhen feels a debt of gratitude towards them. She does not have true loyalty, but wishes to act as their Servant in repayment for her summoning and the chance to fulfill her wish. Suzhen is likely to remain dispassionate towards her Master, not wishing to fully bind her fate to anyone other than her beloved.
    Suzhen’s wish is simply to be allowed to live her life with her family. She would welcome rebirth as a human if it would mean being reunited with those she loves.

    Lore
    Bai Suzhen’s story is told in the Legend of the White Snake, a piece of folklore made into a famous Chinese Opera.
    At the beginning of the story, Lü Dongbin, one of the Eight Immortals, disguises himself as a man selling tangyuan at the Broken Bridge near the West Lake in Hangzhou. A boy called Xu Xian buys some tangyuan from Lü Dongbin without knowing that they are actually immortality pills. He does not feel hungry for the next three days after eating them, so he goes back to ask why. Lü Dongbin laughs and carries Xu Xian to the bridge, where he flips him upside down and causes him to vomit the tangyuan into the lake.
    In the lake, there is a white snake spirit who has been practicing Taoist magical arts in the hope of becoming an immortal after centuries of training and cultivation. She eats the pills and gains 500 years' worth of magical powers. She, therefore, feels grateful to Xu Xian and their fates become intertwined. There is another terrapin spirit also training in the lake who did not manage to consume any of the pills; he is very jealous of the white snake. One day, the white snake sees a beggar on the bridge who has caught a green snake and wants to dig out the snake's gall and sell it. The white snake transforms into a woman and buys the green snake from the beggar, thus saving the green snake's life. The green snake is grateful to the white snake and she regards the white snake as an elder sister.
    Eighteen years later, during the Qingming Festival, the white and green snakes transform themselves into two young women called Bai Suzhen and Xiaoqing, respectively. They meet Xu Xian at the Broken Bridge in Hangzhou. Xu lends them his umbrella because it is raining. Xu Xian and Bai Suzhen gradually fall in love and are eventually married. They move to Zhenjiang, where they open a medicine shop.
    In the meantime, the terrapin spirit has accumulated enough powers to take human form, so he transforms into a Buddhist monk called Fahai. Still angry with Bai Suzhen, Fahai plots to break up her relationship with Xu Xian. He approaches Xu Xian and tells him that during the Duanwu Festival his wife should drink realgar wine, a wine associated with that festival. Bai Suzhen unsuspectingly drinks the wine and reveals her true form as a large white snake. Xu Xian dies of shock after seeing that his wife is not human. Bai Suzhen and Xiaoqing travel to Mount Emei, where they brave danger to steal a magical herb that restores Xu Xian to life.
    After coming back to life, Xu Xian still maintains his love for Bai Suzhen despite knowing her true nature. Fahai tries to separate them again by capturing Xu Xian and imprisoning him in Jinshan Temple. Bai Suzhen and Xiaoqing fight with Fahai to rescue Xu Xian. Bai uses her powers to flood the temple and drowns many innocent people. However, her powers are limited because she is already pregnant with Xu Xian's child, so she fails to save her husband. Xu Xian later manages to escape from Jinshan Temple and reunite with his wife in Hangzhou, where Bai Suzhen gives birth to their son, Xu Mengjiao. Fahai tracks them down, defeats Bai Suzhen and imprisons her in Leifeng Pagoda. Xiaoqing flees, vowing vengeance.
    Twenty years later, Xu Mengjiao earns the zhuangyuan (top scholar) degree in the imperial examination and returns home in glory to visit his parents. At the same time, Xiaoqing, who had spent the intervening years refining her powers, goes to Jinshan Temple to confront Fahai and defeats him. Bai Suzhen is freed from Leifeng Pagoda and reunited with her husband and son, while Fahai flees and hides inside the stomach of a crab. There is a saying that a crab's internal fat is orange because it resembles the color of Fahai's robe.

    Notes
    It ought to be noted that the temple Bai Suzhen flooded and the Leifeng Pagoda where she was imprisoned are two separate locations. But since both are temples where she fought (even though she was defeated in the latter), I felt there was enough of a connection to combine them into a single NP.
    And yes, I know that koans are a Zen Buddhist thing, but she probably uses them to hide her lack of actual wisdom to pass on.


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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    As always, feel free to drop by with comments and critiques. Especially since this thread seems a little dead as of late...
    I can't be around all the time to spam the thread with new sheets.

    Scythes: I seem to remember reading about him around the time I was making my Myrina sheet, though I barely skimmed the Scythes himself. The bow bit you mention is a pretty cool way of turning an otherwise 'meh' NP into something interesting (as well as giving it an offensive use).
    One does wonder, however, given his trait of looking down on "commoners", are there some that impress him just with who they are? I'm wondering about his reaction to Heracles, for example. I would also imagine that his reaction to Karna might be interesting, given his Uncrowned Martial Arts' effect.

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    Bai Suzhen: Pretty cool snake-lady. It's funny we both posted up serpentine Servants in such close succession. Her personality sounds amusing, with how she tries to put on the airs of a Buddhist saint despite not being one at all. I can imagine her trying to spout some fancy Chinese proverb only to mangle the meaning hilariously (like Otacon in Metal Gear Solid).

    Chinese Martial Arts makes for a cool "flavor" Skill, but isn't it supposed to be impossible to have that Skill below A-rank? I wonder if that would fit better in a separate section outlining her (non-Skill or NP) combat abilities...

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Chinese Martial Arts makes for a cool "flavor" Skill, but isn't it supposed to be impossible to have that Skill below A-rank? I wonder if that would fit better in a separate section outlining her (non-Skill or NP) combat abilities...
    The wording of the Skill makes it sound as though it can be had under A-Rank, but it's considerably weaker in comparison to a Master of martial arts. Like how Shirou knows archery, but when comparing him to someone like Arash it's a completely different ball game.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Skull View Post
    The wording of the Skill makes it sound as though it can be had under A-Rank, but it's considerably weaker in comparison to a Master of martial arts. Like how Shirou knows archery, but when comparing him to someone like Arash it's a completely different ball game.
    Pretty much this.
    She's a scrub in comparison to any actual martial artist, but she knows a bit.

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    Also, in another attempt to boost the activity here, I guess I'll offer up some sheet ideas. These are actually one's that I've been reserving for myself, but at the moment I can't seem to find the time to make all of them myself. I've got material on most of them, so feel free to ask for it if you happen to be interested.

    Mictlāntēcutli: The god of the Aztec underworld. Started off from a pretty cool faceclaim. I was thinking he might be a pseudo-Servant (and if we're sticking to canon characters as hosts, Kairi Sisigou might be pretty close in terms of a fitting vessel). Would probably have a 'true form' NP in addition to his other ones, and one he uses constantly out of vanity.
    Zoroaster: A Saver class Servant and the founder of Zoroastrianism. Besides that stuff, he's also heralded as the first Magus and would probably have fire stuff owing to Zoroastrianism's connection to the element.
    Thiess of Kaltenbrun: A crazy old man that had himself tried by the church, claiming to have been a werewolf in his youth. Granted, his version of werewolves went down to hell and fight demons in the name of God, so one supposes there's a bit of difference there. Would probably be mad as a hatter.
    Berthold Schwartz: A figure of German folklore, being the alchemist who came up with a mass-production formula for blackpowder (and as such is responsible for the developments after). Would probably be something closer to a phantom, possibly acting as a fusion of the Cistercian order of monks, who were essentially monk-alchemist-scientists.
    Pa'ao: Something I've offered up before, but I've managed to refine the concept into something. A foreign priest that came to Ancient Hawaii from parts unknown, toppled the current king and produced a more suitable candidate from somewhere. Also introduced the later cult of the war god Ku to Hawaii, as well as human sacrifice.
    King Herla: OG leader of the Wild Hunt, or something to that effect. Cursed into the role by fairies, probably became a quasi-nature spirit after some time. NP would most likely be the classic Wild Hunt. Also has some connections to the figure of the Erlking, an ominous fairy king from Germanic folklore.
    Mechi: Son of the Morrigan from Irish mythology. He was killed as a child due to some prophecy of doom. He apparently had three hearts, each containing a doom-bringing serpent. Most likely an Avenger or Berserker of some sort.
    Geirröthr: A combined figure of two people sharing the name - a Jötunn and a human king. The human king captured a disguised Odin once and tried to torture him. The giant part brings in his Jötunn daughters, Gjálp and Greip, who gave Thor some trouble. Would probably be a Caster, though a very physical one given the presence of his daughters.

    Also, faceclaims up for grabs in case anyone gets inspired by them:

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    Scythes: I see you with your Shinon faceclaim, Royd. I see you. In any case, interesting sheet and yeah, an interaction between him and Heracles or Alkeides would be interesting.
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    Here's a curveball idea of a servant.

    Someone make one based upon all three of the Fake Dmitry's that appeared in Russian History.
    Whats the use of putting anything here if no one will read this?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Zoroaster: A Saver class Servant and the founder of Zoroastrianism. Besides that stuff, he's also heralded as the first Magus and would probably have fire stuff owing to Zoroastrianism's connection to the element.
    Thiess of Kaltenbrun: A crazy old man that had himself tried by the church, claiming to have been a werewolf in his youth. Granted, his version of werewolves went down to hell and fight demons in the name of God, so one supposes there's a bit of difference there. Would probably be mad as a hatter.
    Zoroastrianism was also arguably the world's first Monotheistic religion, which would probably manifest as some kind of conceptual bonus against Servants with Divinity deriving from pantheistic pantheons.

    Also, badass old man/demon-fighting werewolf Thiess sounds awesome. I'm totally imagining this as his FC (even though it's probably way too classy for him).


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    That... Is a good faceclaim. As it happens, that's also pretty close to the suit fashion of the times, given that he hails from the end of the 17th century.
    I suppose he might be more dignified a couple decades before his trial, when he was in his fifties to sixties.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    That... Is a good faceclaim. As it happens, that's also pretty close to the suit fashion of the times, given that he hails from the end of the 17th century.
    I suppose he might be more dignified a couple decades before his trial, when he was in his fifties to sixties.
    Hmm. I might try writing him up then. His NP would probably have something to do with the Harrowing of Hell, what with the whole "going to Hell and fighting demons" idea.

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    Is it fine to ask if someone has a FC of a girl hugging the Earth or something similar? I need it for my next sheet

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Is it fine to ask if someone has a FC of a girl hugging the Earth or something similar? I need it for my next sheet
    Would something like this fit what have you in mind?


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    Hm, I don't really want to use Earth-chan, but if there's no other option I'll use her

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Pretty much this.
    She's a scrub in comparison to any actual martial artist, but she knows a bit.
    Mhm a niece Serpent Caster Shiki !
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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Hm, I don't really want to use Earth-chan, but if there's no other option I'll use her
    Would be one of them fitt your inner Picture ?




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    Wow, those are... Surprisingly good. Well, with the exception of the first one, because that's a dude.

    Thanks, Koga!

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