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    Update: Added Shiki's Bête de Gévaudan and Royd's Tycho to the compilation.

    Anything else that is missing or wrong, please say it.

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    Thanks a bunch for compiling everything Padoru. Though I've noticed a bit of mistagging and missing sheets. My Rider Deianira is falsely listed as Summer when it should just be Lily, and my Archer Achelous and Assassin Deianira Alter sheets seem to be missing entirely. Aside from that, an extremely good job!

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    Thanks for pointing that out. The corrections have been done

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    Hmm, has anyone done an Ixion sheet yet? Possibly Berserker or Rider.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Thanks for pointing that out. The corrections have been done
    Like, this is super trivial to the point where I kind of feel bad complaining after all the hard work you've done, but it's still mislabelled. My Lancer Deianira is the summer one, Rider is just Lily. You have it the wrong way around.

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    Class:Saber(s)
    Other Class:Ban: Assassin, Bors: Lancer, Berserker
    True Name: King Ban & King Bors
    Titles:Brother Kings of Benwick and Benoic
    Alignment: Ban: Chaotic Good, Bors: Lawful Good
    Region of Origin:Arthurian Britain

    Ban of Benwick:

    Parameters:
    Strength:C++ (B++)
    Endurance:B- (A)
    Agility:B (A)
    Mana:B- (B)
    Luck:D (C+)
    Noble Phantasm: A
    (Both their stats are reduced due to being summoned together, the single summon stats are in brackets)

    Height:6’11”
    Weight:70kg
    Gender:Male
    Birthday:Unknown
    Likes:Adventure, Woman, His Kingdom, His brother
    Dislikes:Restrictions, The Frankish
    Talents:Combat, Disguise
    Armaments:Sword

    Appearance:

    Spoiler:
    Ban manifests as a very tall man, due to misconceptions over his origins, with muted red eyes, opposed to his brothers’ gold, and silver hair due to his age, with small parts retaining its original purple colour. He is summoned wearing a red suit of full plate armour, a black mantle hanging from his shoulders.


    Skills:

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    Class Skills:

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    Magic Resistance: B
    The skill denoting one’s protection against magical effects. While Ban doesn’t have much connection to magic in his legend, his confusion with Bran the Blessed has boosted his level of this skill. This allows Ban to ignore spells of three lines or less and increases his resistance against High-Thaumaturgy.

    Riding:B
    The skill denoting Bans’ ability with handling vehicles and mounts. As a pillar of the skills of knighthood, Ban has mastered the riding of mortal beasts and vehicles despite never having a strong connection to either in life. However, he is incapable of riding beasts of the phantasmal class. Although, with his personality, it won’t be without trying.


    Personal Skills:

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    Instinct: B+
    The ability to instantly identify the best personal course of action during combat. Because this Skill allows for the prediction of trajectory, it is possible to avoid attacks from projectiles. Ban was a master in combat in life, only being defeated three times, by the wicked knight, by Uther and by Claudas. Whilst not yet truly on the level of glancing into the future, Ban is able to recognize an attack at the same time as his opponent, moving to defend in unison.

    Affections of the Holy Grail: D
    The Skill for one who is deeply loved by a Holy Grail, in some time and place. One could call it the greatest curse in the world. Ban only possesses this skill due to the confusion of his legend with that of Bran the Blessed, and so has it at a very low level. Due to the nature of the ‘Grail’ of Bran the Blessed, this skill will rarely, under extremely specific circumstances, allow Ban to avoid or survive a situation that would have led to certain death.

    Empty Handed King: B+
    The prototype skill to both the Noble Phantasm and Skill Knight of Owner, this skill allows Ban to utilise any weapon to its best possible form and boost it to the level of an E- Noble phantasm. The pure talent in combat that Ban possessed and would pass on to Lancelot allowed him to effectively use any weapon as his own. This is only further supported by his tendency to take trophies from those he defeated, including weapons that gained his interest.


    Noble Phantasm:

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    Courechouse:
    The Copper Blade of Silence:C+ Anti-Unit
    The blade of Ban that he claimed from the wicked knight. Its name a compound of its ability in Gaelic, it is a weapon modelled after Fragrach as a weapon focusing on preventing the activation of an enemy’s trump card. The blade is able to place a seal over any activating Noble Phantasm, limiting the opponents’ ability to utilise it. The seal is not a wall that stops the activation, but a block that forces the servant to require more prana to unleash its ability.

    Courechouse Bendigeidfran:
    White Imprisonment and Blessed Justice: A Anti-Army
    The connection of Ban to Bran formed through his lack of surviving legend and the conclusions of historians. This manifests as a second ability for Courechouse, causing the blade to died white, after the White Hill were the head of Bran was buried and the tower of London was later built.

    It manifests as a dual ability, Imprisonment allowing him to absorb ambient energy and small portions of the enemy’s attacks that are energy based. Justice is the release of this energy in an attack, with its max fill qualifying it for its rank.

    (NOTE: I wrote this BEFORE reading the Bran the Blessed sheet that has the Tower of London turn into a sword. This NP was a ham-fisted attempt on my part to give Ban an ability like Snatch that the Ban in Seven Deadly Sins has! I was not trying to rip anyone off with this section!)


    Details:

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    Lore:

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    Ban was born as the eldest son of the king of Benwick, and heir to its throne. This assured destiny allowed Ban to be more relaxed with his outward actions to others, always acting with a self-assured air. Ban however, didn’t abuse his power, more so due to the fact he cared so little for his title as prince than a sense of morality.

    Becoming bored with his life in Benwick, Ban donned a suit of black armour and set out to adventure across Britain. He would constantly come across knights and challenge them to fights, easily defeating them. Due to his lax implementation of the knightly code, he would often take trinkets or other items as trophies to record his victory.

    During this time, he arrived in the county known as Sorelois, later to become the seat of power for Duke Galeholt. He came upon the rumour of a wicked knight that had captured a beautiful maiden. Ban went to confront this knight, attempting to free the girl. Whilst possessing greater strength than his foe, he could not prevail against the other knight’s blade.

    Forced to retreat, Ban devises a plan to attack at midnight, catching the knight off guard. Succeeding in this plan of assassination, Ban claimed his sword, the blade Courechouse, and freed the girl who would later become his wife, Elaine.

    Ban would later come across a young Uther who, on encountering the famed roving black knight, challenged him to a dual. If he lost, he would join the young Pendragons’ army. Despite all his skill and strength, and his new blade, Uther triumphed with his draconic might and blade, Caldafwich.

    Abandoning his black armour, replacing it with the red armour he manifests with, he would go on to travel with the new king, assisting him in his adventures, including the event that turned Berry into the “Terre Deserte”, and laying the groundwork for his later conflict with Claudas.

    After the murder of Uther by Vortigern, Ban returned to Benwick, ascending to king and taking the girl he had saved as his wife. Years later, when ‘Arthur’ Pendragon pulled the sword from the stone, he and Bors would go to ‘him’ and propose an alliance, joining forces with the young king as they had ‘his’ father.

    He would later fall alongside his brother, Bors, in a final confrontation with Claudas.

    Due to corruption of his legend, as a loss of records left little detail of his existence, he has been heavily confused with the giant Bran the Blessed, a major player and possessor in the prototype grail saga.



    Personality:

    Spoiler:
    Ban is a relaxed man, rarely speaking formally and always acting casually around his master and other servants. However, this doesn’t mean he cannot be serious, as extreme events will cause him to take up his ‘King’ persona, he just prefers not to be. Due to his lax implementation of the knightly code, he will often taunt enemies, or flirt if it’s a female.

    He is also very passionate and will at times go off without his master’s command if something catches his interest, causing situations that could otherwise be easily avoided. He is also a lover of battle, seeking out conflict regularly when he becomes board.


    Bors:

    Parameters:
    Strength:B- (A)
    Endurance:B (B+)
    Agility:B- (A+)
    Mana:D (C)
    Luck:E (D)
    Noble Phantasm: B+

    Height:6’
    Weight:65kg
    Gender:Male
    Birthday:Unknown
    Likes:The Knightly Code, His brother(He won’t admit it)
    Dislikes:Dishonourable fights and actions, The Frankish
    Talents:Ruling
    Armaments:Sword(Spear)

    Appearance:

    Spoiler:
    Bors manifests wearing a set of white, light gambison armour, with chainmail beneath and metal plating on his chest, waist and thigs, hands and boots. His appearance is much younger than his brother, only accentuating his status as the younger brother. His hair still has its lustrous brown colour, with the fringe curling over to cover his left eye, which has been lost and is covered by a patch, a scar running horizontally from his nose to ear. His other eye is fully functional, with a piercing golden colour instead of his brothers red.

    Due to being forced into a Saber class, Bors appears wearing a abnormally long longsword, almost as tall as he is. The blade has a golden guard and jewelled hilt, with ornate dragons wrapping around it, their maws coming up to rest either side of the blade.


    Skills:

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    Class Skills:

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    Magic Resistance:B+
    The skill denoting one’s protection against magical effects. Due to Bors interactions with the High priestess of the Lady of the Lake, who would later save his sons, he gained a slight amount of mystery, boosting the level at which he possesses this skill. However, due to being summoned as Saber, this boost is not as great as his Lancer form

    Riding:C+
    The skill denoting Bors’ ability with handling vehicles and mounts. Whilst he is a pillar of the character of knighthood, Bors has a slight deficiency in his ability to utilise the mortal beasts and vehicles of man. Furthermore, he is incapable of riding beasts of the phantasmal class.

    Mad Enhancement: E
    The skill denoting a Berserker who has traded sanity for strength. At the rank he possesses, Bors doesn’t receive any boost to his stats except when he truly loses his composure. Conversely, he benefits from its low rank by retaining his sanity completely outside when he is truly angry.


    Personal Skills:

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    Charisma:B
    The Skill representing one’s natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Bors was noted as an amazing commander, inspirational enough to persuade all the men who ever served under him to join him in his new kingdom upon his ascension to king of Benoic. Increases the ability of allies during group battles.

    Knight of the Lake: D
    Bors was able to foster a friendship with Seraide in life, giving him a week version of this skill. He is able to add a + to Strength, or Agility for a brief period. Due to not having Seraides’ gift in its true form as a Saber, this skill is ranked down. Furthermore, it acts as a variant of Blessings of the Lady of the Lake ability possessed by Arthuria, allowing Bors to walk on, and survive underwater.

    Pillar of Knighthood(Character): A
    One of the greatest knights of the Arthurian age prior to the court of Camelot, Bors was considered a pinnacle of how a knight should carry himself in conduct. Due to this, confrontations that follow the code of knighthood give a boost to Bors parameters. However, if a battle is initiated by Bors on terms that do not follow the code, all his parameters are lowered.


    Noble Phantasm:

    Spoiler:
    Cadwrclaidheamh:
    Cursed Sword of Fire(False): C Anti-Unit
    A false version of the cursed sword wielded by Cadwr in life, which Bors took and added to his kingdoms’ armoury, but never wielded. Much larger than the actual sword, and weaker as well, the flames it produces do not burn through heat, but severe cold. Its’ true nature is the great lance wielded by Bors forced into the shell of a sword that Bors is confirmed to possess.

    Bors has the ability to, at risk of complete destruction of the weapon, breaking this Phantasm and releasing the seal on his spear, allowing him to utilise his lance, switching his parameters to that of his Lancer class. This can only be done 100% successfully with use of command seal. Otherwise, it will have a 30% chance of success.

    Luar Leipter:
    Frosted Moonlight Lance of the Lake: B+ Anti-Army
    The great lance given to Bors by Seraide, twice as long as he is tall. The lance is the mythological aspect of the moon and its connection to ice given form through Fae magic. It allows Bors to creates huge sweeping range of ice, freeze the ground beneath him, crate pulses of ice and other such feats of ice manipulation. It even allows for manipulations that simulate the ability of Prana Burst with an ice element. This ice, however, is completely normal, can it can easily be melted.

    Unleashing the true name of this Noble Phantasm causes the lance to gain a layer of frost, an icy aura emitting from the great lance. This causes ice to instantly appear on any surface close to Bors, quickly creating a blizzard in the area they are fighting in. This blizzard is extremely cold, causing anyone hit by it to start to freeze solid, reducing their speed to zero.

    However, due to the nature of the ice, a high enough heat can cause it to melt. Unfortunately, it is nearly impossible to heat up the area inside the blizzards’ limits, due to the spear constantly pulsing magical energy to keep the temperature consistent. The active form of this Phantasm is a constant drain of massive proportions, so it is usually unleashed in short bursts to try flash freeze the enemy, leaving them open to a mortal blow.


    Details:

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    Lore:

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    Bors is the younger son of the King of Benwick, and so was born without any inheritance set in stone. This caused him to take a serious standpoint on the code of the knight, believing that fame and glory as an honourable knight was the best way to ensure his future. This led him to become a charismatic commander at a young age, if stiff on his ideals.

    Whilst his brother was off adventuring, he steadily worked up his way through the army of Benwick, his honour and actions causing him to become well respected throughout the ranks. He eventually became a trusted commander to his father, until a single mistake led to the destruction of all his hard work.

    During a routine patrol of the borders, something that Bors still participated in despite his high rank, they were attacked by the ruler of the neighbouring land, Cadwr. Because Bors was such a stiff practitioner of the code, he was only trained in direct combat, and so his forces were completely annihilated.

    This was not the event that led to his loss of prestige, but his following actions. Enraged not only by the attack, and death of the men under his command, but Cadwrs’ dismissal of the code and unknightly tactics. Bors petitioned his father to allow him to take a force to raze Cadwrs’ lands.

    Bors father knew of his skill but feared his son would not be able to overcome an opponent like Cadwr, who did not fight directly, like Bors, but through trickery, his sons’ greatest weakness, and so denied him.

    Bors persisted, his constant baying for the blood of Cadwr causing rumours to spread through the ranks that the prince had lost his mind. His reputation destroyed by his own actions, Bors retreated to a place he and his brother had found as children. Standing upon the banks of a lake, Bors proceeded to roar in rage, beating his fist upon the earth.

    A voice called out to him, halting him in his frenzy. He turned to see a woman wearing robes of pure white, standing upon the water. At first wary of the woman whose attention he had gained, he was coaxed into speaking with her. As they spoke, she asked him why he had wanted to kill Cadwr. Bors responded that it was because he wanted to punish him for his dismissal of the Code of knighthood.

    Bors found he enjoyed the conversation, feeling calm for the first time in months since the attack, and asked if he could talk to her again. The woman agreed and told him to return here next week, turned around and disappeared into the lake. As he left, Bors realized he hadn’t gotten the woman’s’ name, and promised himself he would get it next time. T

    his continued, Bors arriving at the lake to talk with the woman, her leaving, and him realizing he still had not received her name.

    Finally, he came back one day and found her standing there, a tall, wrapped object held in her hand. She asked him why he had wanted to kill Cadwr, and he responded with the same response he had given when asked the first time. She smiled, and passed him the object, telling him to only open it when he was back in his quarters. As she left, she told him her name, Seraide.

    The next day, Bors again went to his father with a great lance twice as tall as he, requesting to take a force to kill Cadwr for his actions. Upon seeing the spear, recognising it as a work of the Fae, he readily agreed. Bors led the men to Cadwrs’ keep, easily destroying the defending forces.

    Alone, Bors went to confront Cadwr, meeting him in the throne room of the fortress. Cadwr attempted trickery again, much like he had the first time they had met, but it was unsuccessful as the great lance produced ice walls and spikes, preventing his approach. Drawing his sword, a cursed blade of flame, Cadwr attempted a frontal assault, but was easily beat back, finally killed in a wave of ice.

    On his return, Bors offered this new land to his father, but was instead rewarded it to do with as he wished. Bors did as such, taking the men that would come with him and establishing the kingdom of Benoic. He would later ally with Uther to prevent the invasion of his and his fathers’ kingdoms.

    He would later fall alongside his brother, Ban, in a final confrontation with Claudas.


    Personality:

    Spoiler:
    Bors is conservative due to his ideals, always talking respectfully and will only distribute praise of his opponent during battle. His honour prevents him from utilising underhanded tactics, and orders against this will be carried out only due to his duty to serve his lord.

    However, Bors is not an impassive or emotionless person, as he will oft berate others for unknightly actions, even if they themselves are not knights. Furthermore, actions that can be considered disgusting or a true defilement of one’s honour or the knightly code will cause Bors to explode with rage, letting his true feelings fly and attempting to raze the offending party, and everything in a 100m radius of them.

    Due to his double summoning with his brother, he slips up far more often and loses his composure. This is mostly due to Bans’ own relaxed personality.


    So yeah, Bors and Ban double summon! Two guys with almost no legend turned into this... I need to go to sleep. The double is from the fact the little legend we have basically always mentioned the other in every event, to the point their wives are even sisters, so I think its warranted. Next up: Mithridates

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    Ban & Bors: Pretty cool dual Servant sheet. The moment I read Ban's appearance section and saw his red eyes and silver hair I was immediately reminded of his namesake from Seven Deadly Sins, so I felt vindicated when you mentioned him explicitly under his second NP. That aside it's a pretty good sheet. You did a good job fleshing out his abilities for someone with such a sparse legend.

    For Bors, Knight Of The Lake just giving him a stat buff is kind of boring. I'd suggest giving it a little something more directly water-related, like letting Bors breath underwater or whatnot. Also, somehow a lot of the spoiler tags got messed up, being doubled and in one case (around Bors' appearance section) absent altogether. Might want to fix that up.

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    Hey guys need some advice. For a Dietrich von Bern sheet would you put his place of origin as Germany where his stories were told or Italy where he was exiled from?


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    I tend to follow the Lancelot model for questions like that. His Place of Origin is listed as France, instead of Britain where he spent most of his time.

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    Really grateful for the kind words/list update, Padoru! Only potential complaint is that El Santo isn't American, he's Mexican.

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    Ban & Bors: Pretty cool dual Servant sheet. The moment I read Ban's appearance section and saw his red eyes and silver hair I was immediately reminded of his namesake from Seven Deadly Sins, so I felt vindicated when you mentioned him explicitly under his second NP. That aside it's a pretty good sheet. You did a good job fleshing out his abilities for someone with such a sparse legend.

    For Bors, Knight Of The Lake just giving him a stat buff is kind of boring. I'd suggest giving it a little something more directly water-related, like letting Bors breath underwater or whatnot. Also, somehow a lot of the spoiler tags got messed up, being doubled and in one case (around Bors' appearance section) absent altogether. Might want to fix that up.
    Finally awake, thanks Roy for the advice, you'll see I added your suggestion to the Knight of the Lake. Honestly, I'm surprised that's the skill that you found not to be good, I thought I was kinda reaching with Empty Handed King on what I could get away with. Also, the Spoiler tags should be fixed now.

    Thanks for the compliment on working with the sparse legends, as honestly, I just took what existed and ran with it to create a Fate legend. Ban: Elaine being his wife, Courechouse being his sword, allying with Arthur, death(Used the SDS version to fill a lot of the gaps) Bors: Death, bans brother, Seraide saving his children(Always seems to come from nowhere in legend when she saves Bors and his brother, so I thought it would be cool if the reason was they were friends.)

    Also, Padoru. ----ing well done on that compendium, you have the patience of a saint to be able to sit down and compile that, so again well done.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Like, this is super trivial to the point where I kind of feel bad complaining after all the hard work you've done, but it's still mislabelled. My Lancer Deianira is the summer one, Rider is just Lily. You have it the wrong way around.
    No no, it's okay. Point out any mistake, trivial as it may be.

    Quote Originally Posted by kiwi View Post
    Really grateful for the kind words/list update, Padoru! Only potential complaint is that El Santo isn't American, he's Mexican.
    Well, the America section covers the whole continent, not only the USA. That's why you can find Mexican and Brazilian Servants as well

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    Class: IdolCaster
    Identity: Magi☆MariMerlin
    Gender: Female (2D)Male
    Source: ???Arthurian cycle
    Origin: ???Britain
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Height: 160 cm178 cm
    Weight: Secret~❤68 kg


    Parameters:
    Strength: B
    Endurance: E
    Agility: D
    Mana: A
    Luck: C
    NP: C


    Skills
    Class skills

    Performance Continuation: A
    Can return as the main character on stage.
    Indispensable for an idol that is always asked for an encore.

    Alluring Nightingale: B
    Can charm the opposite gender with her lovely voice. Avoidable through Magic Resistance or willpower.

    Charisma: B
    The ability to lead others summed to one’s natural charm.
    For an idol, this skill is born from talent not as a leader of a group, but as someone who inspires to be worshiped and followed by others.

    Independent Manifestation (Net): C
    For some reason, this net idol kept existing and streaming even though all the servers were down during Mankind’s Incineration.
    Independent Manifestation: A
    Just a mage who’s a Servant for fun.

    High-Speed Incantation: C
    Despite being a mage and a Caster, he is bad at magecraft and will probably bite his tongue if he tries chanting a spell too fast.

    Item Construction: C
    He can give you a makeshift sacred sword for cosplay or a makeshift flesh sword for mating.

    Territory Creation: C
    He got bored again and left a huge mess before finishing.

    Hybrid: EX
    Honestly, knowing he’s half an incubus explains many things about his character.



    Personal skills

    Golden Rule (Patron): B
    Can obtain any sort of currency from the patronage of her fans. Though they just give her money without any suspicion due to her charisma, sometimes her smile becomes darker when asking them to keep supporting her, specially with newer fans.
    “Say, do you think I can get your credit card information?”

    Ephemeral Dream: A
    Represents that one was only born from illusions due to an individual’s desire.
    At the end of the day, Magi☆Mari is no more than a net idol, a product of VR that shouldn’t exist. One would think she was born from the dreams of men wanting an idol, but the truth probably has more to do with a shady Caster with too much free time in his hands.

    Oopsie Glitch: EX
    Everyone is enjoying Magi☆Mari’s direct streaming without any suspicions, when suddenly something strange happens, and her true and darkest side appears.
    A lethal attack for those whose heart belongs to her, the abrupt and brief exposure of her real nature shatters their soul.
    Dreamlike Charisma: A
    Everything is a dream. You were charmed by the promises of the banner and invested all your money for nothing. You only see him in your screen because he’s a support.

    Illusionism: A
    He’ll trick your wallet and bank account into thinking they still have some money so you spend even more, only because you saw the words “Rate Up”.

    Hero Creation: EX
    As someone who broke the meta, Merlin is considered the most prominent support unit, specially for Buster teams.



    Noble Phantasm

    Concert of Avalon
    Forever sold-out recital
    Garden of Avalon
    Forever sealed utopia


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 1~5
    Maximum number of targets: 7 people

    It reproduces onto the surrounding area the “stage” where Mari is, even now, singing. Glowing sticks bloom in profusion above the seats, and no matter what sort of darkness or hell that might be, the spotlights shall shine upon it. Even if the space that she has been permitted with is nothing but a club’s room of a mere 10 meters in all directions, or the scenery that was given to her is only an isolated screen lost in time, it continues to eternally exist as a utopia.A pretty Noble Phantasm that gives nice buffs, but even if you were to summon him, you won’t get the 4,000HP healing it gave in Babylon.



    Character
    Personality

    Cute and cheerful, the basic nature of any idol. A young girl that is always smiling on stage and claims to love all of her fans, even if they’re ugly bastards that lewd her constantly, or single men on their 30s that should be taking care of much more important issues than their waifu.

    When asked about her aspirations in life, Magi☆Mari naturally responds with her loveliest smile “Of course, money!”. She doesn’t even bother hiding her greed to those she trusts, and cheekily admits that she just wants to swim in a pool of cash. Now, what is the reason behind that greed? Perhaps her having just recently become part of the 3D world makes her want to enjoy all sorts of material things, or perhaps she’s just used to receive donations from the fans and wants to keep receiving them.
    A happy and wise man that isn’t human and therefore can’t really associate with humans yet doesn’t hate them. Despite being a grown adult, he can only think on playing around and love affairs. Clumsy and immature, he won’t change even if he’s just making things worse.



    Treatment with the Master

    Since the Master is the one that takes care of her and decides what will be done in the future, Magi☆Mari, as an idol, finds it easier to associate their figure with that of a producer. However, since a net idol doesn’t exactly need a producer, she doesn’t really understand their job. She understands that they support idols in a different way than fans, but nothing else. For that reason, at the beginning she deals with them like she’d treat any other fan, asking about donations included.Master? Do you really think you can summon a limited 5-star so easily?
    "Humans have to struggle with their own power!", he mockingly says from afar.



    Dialogue examples

    Bond 1: “Producer, would you support Mari’s work? If so, then please buy my merchandise! That will make me really happy! Eh? That’s not what a producer does? Then how will you support me?”

    Bond 2: “Mari loves flowers! It would be nice to see them bloom as I walk!”

    Bond 3: “Mari is an idol, so she must be a good girl. But if Producer wants it, I won’t say no to turning into a goth idol.”

    Bond 4:“Thanks to Producer’s work, Mari has obtained even more fans. That makes me happy, but if things were to go to worse, you should assume the responsibility and pay the losses with your own wallet. Just kidding! It’s only a joke, I’m not that stingy!”

    Bond 5: “You’re such a good producer! Mari is so happy to have met you! Producer, let’s be together for the remainder of this tour, and for the next ones as well!”

    Likes: “Mari loves receiving patronage from her fans! Now Master, are you going to invest a bit on me? C’mon, a bit won’t hurt! You’ll get so hooked to it you’ll soon forget about your money!”

    Dislikes: “Secretly speaking, Mari hates small and fluffy animals. I mean, why do you need a cute animal when you have your cute idol here? Your attention should only be focused on me, hmph!”

    Wish for the Grail: “A trophy for Mari? So suddenly?! Wowowow, I’m not mentally prepared! Should I prepare any sort of speech?!”



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    Depiction

    A cute and flowery idol from a mysterious website. She is a net idol whose creator remains in the shadows, but given the current circumstances of humanity, she has somehow been summoned as a Servant. Now, worshiped as may she be, what could happen for a 2D singer to become a Heroic Spirit? One can only think her existence has something to do with another Servant, but she won’t talk about it.The Mage of Flowers that raised Arthur Pendragon as his mentor. For some reason or other, he needed to appear somewhere but couldn’t afford to be seen by someone, so he used the waifu he created as a sort of disguise.


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    Solomon
    Mari lost her #1 fan… How sad… sob sob…
    This is your chance to purchase Magi☆Mari’s new “Futas Out For Romani” merchandise! First 100 buyers will also receive an original copy of her latest album, “I’ll Crit-Buster Your Old Man”, signed by yours truly!

    Elizabeth Báthory
    Mari’s rival? Not even close! A worthless lizard that can’t even be summoned in the Idol class can’t call herself… well, an idol. And besides, what’s with those slutty looks? Is she so horny she actually went and grew horns?

    BB
    She’s always talking about coming from a digital world and saying “BB Channel!” and things like that, so I assume she’s a famous influencer or something? Mari would love to have an interview with her! If she sings, we could even make a collab!
    ………… What do you mean we’re already dangerous enough in our own way when we’re alone?

    Knights of the Round Table
    I look nervous, as if I just saw someone I know but don’t want to see? M-Mari doesn’t know what you’re talking about…! I’m not a bad girl that has nasty relationships with womanizers and cheaters…!


    I'm not satisfied with how the character is done, and I guess I should flesh out her story a bit more, but I think this was a fun idea to do. Comments and feedback are as welcome as usual.
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    Magi Mari: This broke me. Reading the words “Futas out for Roman” just broke me and I will never be the same. Joking aside though(which I don’t think is actually possible for this sheet) I loved it. Probably one of the more fleshed out joke servants I’ve seen. The closest thing I have to a complaint is not knowing how exactly Merlin did this. Like is she just Merlin in disguise or an independent existence Merlin somehow created because he’s Merlin and hates things not being weird?


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    It's more of the latter. I had this idea for a British Lostbelt in which Merlin had to intervene but didn't want to be found out by Morgan, so he disguised himself

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    Padoru I just realized you didn’t put in my man on the grassy knoll sheet in your compilation of the sheets.


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    Alternate Classes: Saber, Caster, Berserker
    True Name: Timur Beg Gurkani
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Origin: Middle-East (14th century)
    Armament: Scimitar, cane

    Parameters:
    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: E-
    MANA: C
    LUCK: B
    NP: B

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance - Rank D: Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
    Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

    Riding - Rank A+: A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
    All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. This rank is high enough to have an aptitude for the Rider Class.

    Personal Skills

    Civilization Erosion (False) - Rank C+: Originally, a subconsciously active Skill of a certain Hunnic Heroic Spirit. This Skill is an emulation of it, allowing for the transformation of an object into a form “currently best suited for oneself”. However, this transformation is forcible, eroding the basis of the object in question.
    Due to his efforts of breaking the symbols of other civilizations in order to strengthen his own creation, Rider has been granted this Skill. Objects in his hands take the shape that best suits him in a given situation. Due to the forceful nature of this ability, however, the durability of the transformed items suffers. The use of Civilization Erosion (False) is so ingrained in Rider’s way of fighting that he can even use the breaking of his own weapons for a momentary advantage.

    Revolutionary’s Instinct - Rank A+: A variation of the Skill Instinct, being the ability to identify ‘the best personal course of action’ not in combat, but in warfare and affairs of state. The user can sense opportunities in advance, and as such can instantly capitalize on them as they are presented.
    Though not a revolutionary as such, Rider certainly overturned the order of his world, supplanting it with his own. He was renowned for his brilliance in warfare and never neglected an opportunity when one presented itself.

    Noble Phantasms

    A Foe More Terrible Than I
    Zakhvatchik Strashneye Menya

    Anti-Unit~Anti-Army, Rank C
    A Noble Phantasm based on the legend of Rider’s exhumation. It is said that his tomb carried a dreadful curse, unleashing a terror greater even than Rider himself on those who would desecrate his grave. It was the Soviet Union that eventually broke open his tomb to examine his remains. The following day, the country was invaded by Nazi Germany in the greatest military invasion of all time. Coincidentally, the war turned in the Soviet Union’s favor shortly after Rider’s remains were returned to his tomb and given a full burial ceremony.
    Upon Rider’s death, rather than fading away, he lingers on as an unquiet spirit. His spirit then latches onto another Servant in the war, granting them the power of another Servant on top of what they already possess. Though asserting no overt influence, Rider’s lingering will drives his target into a frenzied state when seeing his killer or killers, granting the Servant he has latched onto the effects of Mad Enhancement at rank B and driving them to attack Rider’s killer. Once they are dead, Rider’s existence and the power Zakhvatchik Strashneye Menya grants disappear.
    It is possible for a Servant to resist the beneficial effects of Zakhvatchik Strashneye Menya. In such a case, Rider would have no way to influence them and would simply fade away.

    War Elephant Conquest
    Fath Fil-hâ Jang-hâ

    Anti-Army, Rank B+
    Rider’s second Noble Phantasm, manifesting a stampede of war elephants to trample his foes. However, the elephants do not serve as his mounts, nor are they a tool he is particularly renowned for using. Rather, they serve as a reminder of a foe’s strength turned to his own, as well as one of his major victories, namely that of the Battle of Ankara.
    When invoking Jang-hâ Fil-hâ Fath, a battle line of war elephants appears behind him, charging forward at his signal. The earthshaking stampede tramples the enemy lines, causing a great amount of damage and scattering formations. However, the true worth of the Noble Phantasm comes from the aftereffects of the charge, with the shockwaves destabilizing the magical energy of the surrounding area. Creatures that consume magical energy for the purpose of manifesting find themselves bereft of energy as the lines of transmission are cut, vanishing to whence they came. Even Servants, though possessing more robust sources of magical energy in the form of their contracts and their connection to the Holy Grail, are not immune, and suffer a breakdown in their performance for some time. In addition to the loss of combat performance, Servants have a chance of their Skills and Noble Phantasms being sealed for a short period of time.

    Description
    Likes: Deference in others, artists and scholars
    Dislikes: Being talked down to, lying
    Talents: Sensing and exploiting opportunities, brutal subjugation
    Natural Enemy: Attila the Hun

    Rider’s true identity is Timur Beg Gurkani, better known as Tamerlane, the Crippled Conqueror.

    Timur is a man driven by ambition. From his beginnings as a humble nomad and occasional bandit, he eventually rose to become the ruler of an empire that rivaled many of history’s greatest in size. As a person, he is proud and cold, appearing almost heartless. The incredible brutality that he partook in in life is something that he makes no apologies for, nor would repeating the massacres move him any more than they did then. Due to his pride, he despises those that deign to talk to him as superiors, moving to plot their downfall at the first display of such perceived arrogance.
    As his body was crippled early in his career, Timur came to favor more intellectual pursuits. He possesses a natural insight into matters, being fully capable of adapting to constantly changing circumstances and even thriving in them. Though he prefers scholarly, meticulous activities, he can turn his brilliance into an advantage even in the chaos of combat with contemptuous ease.
    Despite his coldness and almost natural arrogance, Timur understands that among Heroic Spirits, he does not stand among inferiors. Just as he respected valiant foes in life, he sees most other Servants as great enemies. Though defeating them would bring him great glory, he understands the distinct possibility of his own defeat, even (to his surprise) welcoming such an end. Over everyone else, however, he has a soft spot for artists, especially those that possess audacity. In fact, facing a truly presumptuous artist is one of the few things that can bring a smile to Timur’s face.
    Though he is in conduct loyal to his Master, Timur makes sure that his Master is under no illusions about their relationship. Theirs is an alliance of convenience, and for as long as his Master treats with proper deference, this state of affairs will continue. Eventually, however, one of them must emerge as a true superior and either dispatch or subjugate the other fully. Should his Master try to force him under their will with Command Spells, Timur will do his utmost to secure their downfall. Despite all this, however, his pride prevents him from lying outright, and he will speak the truth when confronted about his plans. This, of course, does not preclude other forms of deception.
    Despite having departed from worldly matters centuries ago, Timur’s ambition drives him to seek more. Even were he to become the singular ruler of the entire planet, it would not satisfy him. Though a cruel, even evil, man, the earnestness of his ambition and his determination to succeed are admirable qualities. His wish to the Holy Grail is a natural continuation of this, wishing for the chance to fulfill his ambitions during another lifespan.

    As a Rider, the mount he calls upon is a black charger. Due to his poor mobility on foot, he mainly fights on horseback.

    Lore
    Timur’s was a fractious part of the world, in a fractious era. Less than a century previously, Genghis Khan and the Mongol Empire had swept Central Asia and subdivided the region into successor kingdoms. Timur was born into the Chagatai Khanate, descended from a Mongol group that had settled in the area that is Uzbekistan today. Timur started as a leader of a small nomadic group, and by employing the same mix of unconventional mounted warfare, political intrigue, diplomatic negotiation, and terrifying reputation as Genghis Khan, ascended to rule all of Transoxania before he was 40. He spent the rest of his life at war.
    Timur claimed to be the restorer of the Mongol Empire, and his list of conquests and successful campaigns is impressive. He began against Persia, then went on to conquests in Northern India, Russia, Georgia, Mesopotamia, Syria, and Egypt, before dying at the start of his campaign against China in 1405. But he was no magnanimous conqueror; Timur's campaigns are famous for brutality and bloodshed. He enslaved all the artisans of the city of Aleppo and hauled them in chains back to his capital of Samarkand. He left the cities of Delhi and Baghdad as ruins. In places of resistance, he is said to have piled the heads of men, women, and children in great towers after his conquest was complete.
    He had lavished his capital of Samarkand during his lifetime, despite spending very little time there. After his death the city became a center of arts and culture, infused with contributions by the Seljuk Turks (such as architecture) and Persia (such as arts and letters) as well as its long tradition of trade and commerce.
    He fell ill on the frosty banks of the Syr Darya River in Uzbekistan and died on route to campaign in China in February 1405. With no leader to inspire a victory, Timur’s army decided to turn around and head back home. The fearsome conqueror was embalmed in fragrant oils and placed in an elaborate ivory coffin for the journey to his final resting place, the beautiful Gur-e-Amir in Samarkand, his treasured city. His descendants held the territory he conquered for most of a century, before the Timurid empire collapsed in fratricide and internal strife.
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    Quote Originally Posted by cooldownnow View Post
    Magi Mari: This broke me. Reading the words “Futas out for Roman” just broke me and I will never be the same. Joking aside though(which I don’t think is actually possible for this sheet) I loved it. Probably one of the more fleshed out joke servants I’ve seen. The closest thing I have to a complaint is not knowing how exactly Merlin did this. Like is she just Merlin in disguise or an independent existence Merlin somehow created because he’s Merlin and hates things not being weird?
    really i interesting servant and i think i have seen this mini series but i think given that he had his Hands on Mordred creation…. somewhat so should that be Merlins easier Task ?

    nevertheless a good servant that shouldbe appearing on Grand order !

    sidenote Cooldonnow.your Menes were quite good i must say ! ist Always good to see mor eegyptian servants appropo could you be please so nice and say me your oppinion Cooldownnow About my Nefrosobek Alter and just out of curiousness what is your reason for your username and have you watched yugioh 5ds as whole or just found the Picture of the Crimson Dragon cool as Profil Picture ?
    Your verified Chikara-production Studios !

    Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !

    When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...





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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    really i interesting servant and i think i have seen this mini series but i think given that he had his Hands on Mordred creation…. somewhat so should that be Merlins easier Task ?

    nevertheless a good servant that shouldbe appearing on Grand order !

    sidenote Cooldonnow.your Menes were quite good i must say ! ist Always good to see mor eegyptian servants appropo could you be please so nice and say me your oppinion Cooldownnow About my Nefrosobek Alter and just out of curiousness what is your reason for your username and have you watched yugioh 5ds as whole or just found the Picture of the Crimson Dragon cool as Profil Picture ?
    My username is just something random I came up with when I had to create a username when I was like 13 years old and just stick with it. As for the crimson dragon yeah I love yugioh and it seemed like a fun little connection with the crimson dragon being an interpretation of quetz.

    I'm afraid I don't think your Nefrosobek Alter was that good. While the concept of a pharaoh being consumed by Set and becoming the queen of dragons is interesting the sheet is so filled with grammatical errors that I could not follow along almost at all during the lore section. I really wanted to like it but just couldn't.


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    Servant Berserker:

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    Source

    True Name: Ixion

    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    Alternate Class: Rider

    Strength- B+
    Agility- D
    Endurance- A+
    Mana- C
    Luck- E-
    NP- A+

    Personality
    A crass and selfish man. Berserker's definition of "freedom" is to be able to indulge in all his desires careless of who gets hurt along the way.

    Though he acts cheerful and boisterous, it doesn't take much prodding to expose the lie in Berserker's jovial front. He's quick to react with violence when denied anything, lashing out in a brutal rage. It can be said that Berserker's true nature is just like that of a kid who'd spitefully smash a playmate's toys for not letting him play with them. Even after enduring divine punishment for his actions Berserker still clings stubbornly to his old behavior. He's the kind of person who could gladly take up an offer of forgiveness while scheming to stab the forgiver in the back the first chance he got.

    Berserker hates the gods, being jealous for how they can get away with doing whatever they want while mortals are punished for the same things. He might actually have a decent point there, but unfortunately his reasoning is merely the excuse of a bully out to justify his own actions rather than a true sense of justice.

    Berserker is also a very lustful man. In the Grail War he'll often try to flirt with any pretty girl who catches his eye, whether civilians or even enemy Servants and Masters. However, Berserker isn't a rapist (one of his few positive traits) and won't try to force his affections on a woman who doesn't reciprocate them. It's unclear if this is a true principle or just Berserker being so confident in his own "manliness" he doesn't feel the need to resort to force.

    Berserker's wish on the Holy Grail would be to ascend to become a true god. Then, he would be free to indulge all his appetites with impunity.

    Likes: freedom to do whatever he wants, beautiful women
    Dislikes: the gods, consequences for his actions
    Talent: being incorrigible
    Natural Enemy: Zeus


    Class Skills:

    Mad Enhancement- C
    A Skill that characterizes the Berserker Class. Raises parameters in return for a loss of sanity and/or hindering mental capacities. At this rank, all parameters save Luck and Mana are ranked up, but most of one's reason is lost.

    Normally that would be so, but Berserker's reasoning is relatively unaffected by this Skill. Berserker himself boasts that it's because he could endure even the greatest torments Zeus could bestow on him without going mad. But in truth, as a man driven only by his brutish desires to start with, there simply wasn't much higher thinking to be robbed away.


    Personal Skills:

    Kinslayer- B+

    A Skill held by those infamous for shedding kindred blood. Berserker murdered his father in law over a dispute regarding bridal gifts. It was the first act of kinslaying recorded in Greek Mythology, granting him a high rank in this Skill.

    Raises damage while striking against those closely related to Berserker, either by blood or other affiliation. The closer the bond, the greater damage is dealt. Berserker gains a moderate damage boost when attacking any fellow Greek Heroic Spirit, as they all share a common heritage. But the effect is greatest against Berserker's own tribe the Lapiths and his children the centaurs, granting him a full rank-up to Strength.

    Additionally, the act of committing such an appalling crime lingers on Berserker like a stench. Those who see Berserker will instinctively feel fear and unease around him even if they can't explain why. This effect is stronger towards Lawful and Good-aligned individuals, and can be nullified entirely by a Skill like Mental Pollution.

    Bearer Of Empyrean Agony- EX
    As part of his punishment Berserker was never allowed to die. No matter how much the flames burnt him or the winds lashed his body, Berserker still lived.

    Reflecting this Berserker rapidly regenerates damage from fire and wind-based attacks. This regeneration is great enough that Berserker heals his wounds almost as fast as they're inflicted. Even if his whole body is consumed in flame or lashed with wind until an unrecognizable bloody pulp Berserker would still emerge without any permanent harm.

    However, the catch of this Skill is that it does nothing to mitigate any of the overwhelming pain Berserker might experience.

    Monstrous Strength- C
    A Skill inherent to monsters and beasts, denoting the power to boost one's Strength parameter by one ranking for a given duration. At this rank, Berserker can grant himself a rank-up to Strength lasting for roughly half of battle.

    The product of Berserker's impious copulation with Nephele, a living cloud sculpted in the likeness of the goddess Hera, was Centauros, who himself beget the line of monstrous horse-human hybrids known as the Centaurs. Though Berserker himself had no inhuman blood in life, this association allows him to channel his ill-begotten children's savage might.

    Using this Skill causes Berserker's body to ascribe traits similar to those of a centaur, like hooves, elongated ears and a bushy tail.



    Noble Phantasm
    Ixionidae Astrikos Trochos
    Burning Solar Wheel Of Torment


    Rank: A+

    Type: Anti-Army

    As punishment for lustfully trying to claim Zeus's wife Hera for himself, Berserker was bound to a burning celestial wheel and sent spinning through the heavens for all eternity. Though originally a tool used to punish him, the wheel becomes Berserker's Noble Phantasm as a Servant. Bound to his body by unbreakable iron chains, he can lash it about like a gigantic flail. As the wheel's edge is laiden with solar fire it can cleave through enemies like a molten buzzsaw. Every swing of this Noble Phantasm is further accompanied by great lashing winds that can sear flesh from bone and devastate infrastructure.

    When Berserker invokes this Noble Phantasm's true name, the chains connecting him to the wheel pull taut, stretching him around it as he was in the past. The burning wheel then careens wildly over the battlefield, mowing down all in its path. Berserker can loosely control his trajectory while bound to the wheel by tilting his body this way or that, though it's less like driving a car and more desperately trying to control a raging beast of destruction. The wheel's flames blaze hotter and brighter as it streaks across the terrain, growing to rival a second sun until merely being nearby inflicts heavy physical and magical damage from the immense heat.

    Berserker himself, chained around this spinning wheel of death, takes no physical damage due to his Bearer Of Empyrean Agony Skill but does feel intense pain from having his body constantly burnt alive. Berserker is also unable to halt this Noble Phantasm after invoking it, requiring a Command Seal from his Master to release him. For these reasons, Berserker is terrified of his Noble Phantasm and refuses to invoke it except as a last resort.



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    So since someone floated the idea of an Ixion sheet I thought I'd take a shot at writing one up myself. His NP came out a bit similar to Ashwatthama's but I tried to set it apart.

    As usual, comments and critiques would be much appreciated. Thanks for reading!

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