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    COME AND SEE!


    Class: Rider
    True Name: The Red Rider
    Gender: Unknown
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Strength: E+
    Endurance: E+
    Agility: -
    Mana: B
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: E+

    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance A
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
    Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. Rider is an existence untouchable by modern mages.

    Horseman of the Apocalypse EX
    A specialized version of the Riding Skill, unique to certain Heroic Spirits that are closer to manifested concepts rather than heroes, anti-heroes or monsters. The vessel that carries them is the human psyche, though each user can also employ tangible mounts in their own way.

    Rider is capable of “riding” the Master that he is contracted with, due to being a sword meant to be wielded by somebody.

    Personal Skills
    Battle Frenzy A
    A Skill that represents one’s tendencies to go into a craze in the heat of battle.

    As Rider’s wielder gives and/or takes damage, magical energy gradually builds up inside of them. As magical energy builds up inside them, Rider stokes their bloodlust in a manner similar to Mad Enhancement, with the effect increasing in correlation with the level of magical energy built up.

    Bringer of War A+
    A unique Personal Skill marking the user as the cause of a war. This Skill’s holder is capable of afflicting those around themselves with a mental interference effect. Those affected by this Skill’s mental interference effect will go into violent frenzies and start to attack anything in sight.

    This Skill comes in the form of a Bounded Field that Rider passively generates at all times. Once one leaves its area of effect, the madness causes by it will begin to wear off. However, this Bounded Field’s effectiveness increases the longer that one is in it.

    Noble Phantasms
    Come and See
    The Second Horseman

    Rank: E+
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Range: 1
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1
    The sword wielded by the Red Rider is a crystallization of the concept “he” represents; War. Initially, the sword is misshapen hunk of rusty, blood-encrusted metal that resembles a metal club more than it does a sword.

    However, this is merely the starting stage of Come and See. As the Red Rider uses this sword to draw blood, it begins to power up. After drawing a great amount of blood from the Red Rider’s enemies, it will Rank-Up by one stage and become a sword that though not of good quality, is still better than its starting stage.

    Once this Noble Phantasm has Ranked-Up, the amount of blood drawn by the sword will be reset to zero and the Red Rider will have to draw more blood in order for his sword to receive another Rank-Up. As this Noble Phantasm continues to Rank-Up, the overall quality of the sword improves and so too does its power. Ultimately, it will become a regal sword of unmatched quality capable of cleaving through any defense.

    Once a war begins, it is difficult to end and will continue to spiral out of control until it finally does end. Thus, this Noble Phantasm abides by this principle because of its nature of being a crystallization of the concept of “war”.

    Lore:
    And when He opened the second seal,
    I heard the second living creature say,
    ‘Come and see!’
    And there went out another horse,
    A fiery red one.
    Its rider was given power
    To take peace from the earth
    So that men would slaughter one another.
    To him was given a large sword.

    The Red Rider is one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse in the Book of Revelation, responsible for killing a quarter of the world’s population prior to the Final Judgment. “He” is often understood as war, specifically civil war.


    Personality:
    Like his fellow Horsemen of the Apocalypse, the Red Rider has little in terms of personality. Despite a lack of understanding of human emotions, “he” can be considered to have the slightest glimmer of a ‘self’ due to “his” close relation to the human condition. “He” still fully lacks internal thoughts and emotions, but “his” responses give the implication of a savage and barbaric mentality to them. The sounds made by “him” are like metal being scraped against metal.
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    "When we have chosen the vocation in which we can contribute most to humanity, burdens cannot bend us because they are only sacrifices for all. Then we experience no meager, limited, egotistic joy, but our happiness belongs to millions, our deeds live on quietly but eternally effective, and glowing tears of noble men will fall on our ashes."



    Class - Avenger
    Name - Karl Marx (Santa)
    Alignment - Chaotic Good
    Origin - German

    Parameters
    STR - D
    END - C
    AGI - E
    MGI - B
    LCK - C
    NP - A

    Class Skills
    Avenger - EX
    The pain and sadness of the poor and oppressed all over the world that are starving and suffering even on this holy night are collected and turned into revolutionary strength.

    Oblivion Correction - A
    The greed, oppression and all violence, direct or indirect, inflicted by the bourgeois can never be forgotten until they are fully redempted either through willing repentance or forced retribution.

    Self-Replenishment (Mana) - C
    The revolutionary spirit will continue to haunt the world until the revolutionary goal of the total abolishment of the present state of things is accomplished.

    Personal Skills
    Socialist's Gift - A+
    Helping the have-nots from their plights, the lonely from their alienation, and the rich from their own greed, the altruistic spirit continues to bring joy to the world with heartwarming presents.

    Revolutionary Carol - B
    A rousing hymn which converts the dissatisfaction, unrest, melancholy, ambition and ego of others into revolutionary action.
    Workers of the world, unite ♪
    Let's seize the means of production ♪

    Holy Wisdom of Dialectical Materialism - EX
    The philosophy which discerns the human world through its relations and contradictions with the world's material forces. Its effect ranges from minimizing the cost of spells and mana consumption, enhancing other Servant's Item Creation, into boosting the output of Noble Phantasms. Simply put, this skill allows one's "mastery over the production process".

    Noble Phantasm
    Der Gespenst des Kommunweihnacht
    A
    Spirit
    Spectre
    is
    Blessing
    Haunting
    this
    Night
    World
    - The
    Spirit
    Spectre
    of
    Chistmas
    Communism

    Rank - A+
    Type - Anti-World

    Avenger's true nature as both the "Ghosts of Christmas" and the "Spectre of Communism", sublimed into a Noble Phantasm. Avenger is a Revolutionary Spirit born from humanity's dream of a blessed, hopeful world where "everyday would be like Christmas", which itself arises from the understanding that the current state of things must be abolished. Upon activation, a designated "community" will be "possessed" by this Revolutionary Spirit, allowing them to use all of Avenger's Skills, allowing everyone to become revolutionary santas.

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    wack, might post the serious version later
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    Assassin (of Christmas)

    "Ho, ho ho...Merry Dōngzhě everyone."



    True Name: Li Shuwen (Santa)
    Epithet: "Father Dōngzhě"
    Source: Historical (?)
    Region: China (19th Century)
    Hidden Attribute: Human
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Likes: Children. Rice Wine
    Dislikes: Idiots, Scrooges
    Talents: Cooking, Martial Arts
    Natural Enemy: Summer

    Parameters:
    STR (C), END (D), AGI (A+), MGI (E), LCK (E), NP (-)

    Character:
    It's loveable ol' Li Shuwen now incarnated as the spirit of Christmas. Although he seems a bit confused about what "Christmas" actually is. Trekking through the harsh winters of Northern China, Li carries his sack full of delicious tāngyuán and jiǔniŕng which he cooks for all the hungry children he comes across to keep them from getting chilblains. Even if he comes across a villain or a wild beast, it's no problem for "Father Dōngzhě" as he's no weaker than before and he would dispatch them with ease... though he'll still leave a little bit of food behind out of festive spirit. At the end of his journey, Shuwen loves nothing more than to find a warm inn and invite everyone 'round to eat and drink a little rice wine with him as the year comes to an end.

    His Wish upon the Grail? Unfortunately it seems that even the spirit of Christmas cannot contain his bloodlust and so he would wish for his most desired enemy Wong Fei-Hung to appear alive before him so that he can settle his desire to see if he is stronger once and for all.


    Skills:
    Class Skills:

    Veteran - (A+)
    The culmination of a wise old master who has seen it all. His grandfatherly attitude has softened his killer nature in exchange for the experience to survive any situation even in his twilight years. However, it does leave him more easily impressionable and influenced by external factors...hence the sudden change into "Father Dōngzhě" after a trip to Hong Kong.

    Personal Skills:

    Chinese Hong Kong Martial Arts - (A+++)
    A value that measures one's mastery of the martial arts of China Hong Kong that made becoming one with the universe as its objective. Li Shuwen claims that he's introducing the styles of the people from Hong Kong back into mainland China... but anyone with half a brain could tell he's just trying to get more people to learn Bajiquan by making it look more exotic.

    Intersection of Yin & Yang - (B)
    An ability possessed by all humans to switch their own nature. Dōngzhě represents the Yin-Yang philosophy of balance in the cosmos, with the days growing longer thus more positive energy flowing in - granting Li Shuwen more than enough strength to combat his foes despite his advanced age.

    Sphere Boundary [Christmas] - (A-)
    A power to use one's Qi to feel and interact with their surroundings. The old Li Shuwen would have used this to turn invisible for a deadly strike, but now he's content in merely softening his aura so that children aren't frightened by his intimidating face.


    Noble Phantasm:
    Fist of the Tāngyuán
    For Father Dōngzhě, A Second Meal is Not Required

    [Type: Anti-Unit], [Noble Phantasm Rank: N/A], [Maximum Range - 1 Metre], [Maximum Number of Targets - Variable]

    The crystallisation of Christmas, a new style of Bajiquan where the aim is to pacify the opponent by stuffing their face full of delicious Tāngyuán. The dumplings are supercharged with Shuwen's Qi so that upon eating one is full for an entire day. His fists move at such speed that "you have already been fed" and in mere seconds starving children's mouths all had warm dumplings placed in them to satisfy their stomachs and stop their crying. For more rowdy adults and wild beasts it may be required to give them a little beating "massage" first before letting them have some food.

    Our prayers be upon anyone who dares attack the sack of food and causes it to go to waste, as the kindness of Father Dōngzhě melts away and Li Shuwen turns back into his old self and delivers swift death upon the villains.


    Lore:
    One day whilst travelling, Li Shuwen went to Foshan to see if anyone was as strong as his old rival, Wong Fei-hung. There he met Chan Wah-shun who put up a decent fight but was ultimately no match. Disappointed, Shuwen was about to leave when Chan mentioned his former student would be the challenge Shuwen was looking for. Intrigued, Shuwen made his way to Hong Kong to look for this "Ip Man".

    However, whilst there he got lost in the British Colony and was immersed in its culture for a while. Now having returned to mainline China he has transformed into "Father Dōngzhě" - a strange misconception of Father Christmas combined with the Winter Solstice Dōngzhě festival.

    "Wait, did any of this really happen?" says Gudao as he listens to Li Shuwen narrate the story in Chaldea.
    "Who knows." Said Li Shuwen adjusting his sunglasses, "Who knows..."


    Creator's Notes:
    I really like China. Any excuse to make another Chinese Servant even if Shuwen has several versions already... Anyways, I was researching what Festivals occur in other cultures during the Winter Solstice and I stumbled across Dōngzhě and I thought it would be funny if I mixed it with Christmas because of British Hong Kong. I also threw in the story of Zhang Zhongjing for good measure.

    I would normally credit the source of a fan-made FC but unfortunately I saved the image over a year ago and now can't find the origin of where it came from.


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    Low energy Christmas Sheet is low energy. Criticisms not required~
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamerad View Post
    literally Santa Carl Marx
    And just as I escaped my friend's ramblings about how Christmas is a commie holiday...

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    Virgin capitalist-consumerist santa

    Chad communist santa
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    Nothing fails to make me laugh harder than internet Communists.

    So, thank you for Santa.
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    “It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance, Master. May destiny bless us with a fruitful relationship where love blossoms from both sides. ――I hate to think of the alternative.” (^▽^) ~☆




    ASSASSIN


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    Alternative Classes: Berserker
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Region: Italy
    Origin: Historical fact

    Height: 163cm
    Weight: 50kg
    Traits: Female | Humanoid | Servant | Weak to Enuma Elish






    parameters


    Strength:
    E
    Endurance: D
    Agility: C
    Mana: D
    Luck: A


    Lore
    For hundreds of years, arsenic poisoning has been quite a “hit”. It’s tasteless and odorless. Arsenic was the
    discrete
    perfect
    way to off someone without raising suspicion. It was a favorite method of aspiring widows, in a time when divorce wasn’t an option.

    Enter Giulia Tofana, dubbed “Queen of Poison”. An entrepreneur, innovator, and (some might say) altruist, this business owner thought of a way to help other women escape bad marriages and abusive husbands. (In fact, many of the women Tofana sought to help with her products were forced to wed in arranged marriages.) But how did she escaped notice for so long, to the point where she collected an estimated amount of 600 deaths under her belt by the time she finally received (divine) punishment? She marketed her poison as a cosmetics line, of course. “Looks can kill”, indeed.

    She was born as the daughter of Thofania d’Adamo, who was executed on 1633, accused of having murdered her husband. (Some said she had terrible examples from her parents, as her mother killed her husband because he was an abusive man.) Tofana was described as a beautiful woman who spent a lot of time with apothecaries, until she eventually developed and perfected her own brand of poison, that would be called aqua tofana. It is said she married a good man, but became a widow herself. (Ironically, she who enjoyed her own marriage also had to see it end very soon.) Sociable and warm, she soon gained the trust of many of the local women, who felt safe to tell her about their horrible home lives. Always sympathetic to the plights of women around her who were trapped in unhappy or abusive marriages she, then, started to sell her products to these people so they could become free.

    Her marketing strategy was entirely verbal and veiled in secrecy. Women would be helped by her and, in turn, would recommend her to a friend in need. This business kept going for decades, but then one of Tofana’s customers had a change of heart after she dropped a bit of poison into her husband’s bowl of soup. Tofana was turned in to the authorities, but she was so popular amongst the locals that they protected her from apprehension. She sought sanctuary at the nearest church, but after rumors (possibly born from mass hysteria) where she had poisoned the city's water suply, the police forced their way into the church and dragged her out. Under torture, she confessed her crimes and was sentenced to death. The execution of her, her daughter and three helpers happened in July 1659.

    There are rumors where, 100 years after her death, her poison was still around and even managed to kill a certain musician loved by the Muses, according to annotations in his own diaries…



    Class Skills
    Presence Concealment: D

    It was only because of the love and respect she gathered from the local populace that her murders did not come to light until long after.



    Personal Skills
    Angelic Demoness: A

    A composite personal Skill comprised of many charismatic effects, such as the Pheromone or Graceful Princess personal Skills. As the woman known to possess a quiet beauty and a passionate disposition for killing, she is capable of lulling people around her into a false sense of security in order to increase her chances of assassination. By modeling aspects of her physical presentation, personality, way of speaking, gestures and even smaller details like her scent or the way she moves her body, she can make herself to be perceived as a “character who lacks the ability to be threatening.”

    Ironically, this is a Skill that better works on her on allies than in enemies she did not had prior contact with, as the more someone stays around her, the more she can entrap them in her sweet allure.



    Insight (Poison): A

    A type of discernment-like Skill which allows her to see through an opponent’s words. A supreme judge of character.

    Assassin can see through a person’s character with ease and will hardly be deceived by excuses and other deceptions. As someone who dealt her whole life with many women who needed her brand of salvation―but at the same time, many who simply were heartless demons who wanted her help to off men who were not deserving of death―she has an undisputable advantage in grasping the characteristics of a target. As always, the more she’s able to stay around them, the more they are laid bare for her to see. Although useful in many instances, she mainly deploys such analysis in order to determine whether someone is a target for murder or not.



    Aegis of the Divine (False): C

    A Skill possessed by her because of her views on being the personification of “salvation” for many women, it translates into the absoluteness of Assassin’s body and soul.

    Viewed as a saintly demoness among the local girls, who knew they could always count on her should their life became unbearable as the property of terrible husbands, she boasts a level of “divine protection” by Saint Nicholas, the saint whose face helped to disguise her poisons as either make-up or even holy water, so it would not stand out in a woman's dresser. Though, in reality this is nothing more than an absolute belief where she trusts she is doing what is right and because of that the world will provide to her for as long as it judges enough.


    Noble Phantasm
    AQUA TOFANA


    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-army
    Range: 50m
    Max. number of targets: 1~10




    “Let the grace of death be the cure for your misdeeds. Fall into Hell and repent
    Death is a Vow for Tomorrow
    Aqua Tofana



    A Noble Phantasm taking the form of a pink make-up Pact, it is the ultimate magical girl device. Just like a heroine needs a transformation sequence to become someone who fights against evil, so does Assassin. By opening her Pact and powdering herself with its contents, she becomes essentially a lump of walking poison. Aqua Tofana was known as “the silent killer,” since its contents had no taste or color and even after death could not be traceable, and the same is applicable in this case: although she is slowly killing the Servants and Masters around her, they would not notice until it’s too late.

    Poison Resistance Skills may delay the effects of this attacks―and perhaps even nullify it completely. (Although her inexperience makes her unable to tell if this is possible. She never knew anyone with resistance against poisons anyway.) Additionally, thanks to her people-pleasing skills, Assassin can stay close to a target for long enough until the effects of her poison start to kick in, giving her time to watch her victim slowly perish. It is a different experience from her life, where she did not saw the results of her well-done job.

    ―Unfortunately, because not even her Master is safe from the effects of her Noble Phantasm, she is quite hesitant about using if most of the time.



    Profile
    Likes: Divorces, Cooking for guests, Smiles
    Dislikes: Injustice, Children crying, Oppression
    Natural enemy: PATRIARCHY


    personality

    A romantic and innocent-like character. She behaves essentially like a Disney princess, in a rather naďve and bubbly way. She is hardworking and full of energy. A hopeless romantic, her strength is not physical, but rather an admirable willpower capable of inspiring those around her.

    “So, how about that for a personality? Quite heroine-like, right?”, she will ask twirling around in her puffy dress and flowy hair.

    ――In reality, she is far plainer and more muted than her over-the-top Servant persona tends to be. She is a modest girl who worked towards the happiness of the others in her own twisted way, out of a sense of injustice and a desire to see love bloom everywhere. She is still a hopeless romantic, but with far less grandiose dreams that only little girls possess. She just wants a quiet life, an uneventful marriage and smiles all around. But it is the truth that her fortitude is the real deal, as evidenced by the guilt she constantly felt about doing what she did to so many people and yet kept doing it for the sake of someone else’s happiness. While still slightly spoiled, slightly naive, slightly shallow, maybe slightly selfish at times too (“but all things slightly, of course. A heroine has no bad points except being an airhead!” said Assassin again), when it comes right down to it, she is a loyal Servant and friend who aims to please her Master and those they cherish as well.

    It seems that her appearance reflects her perceived image as a self-proclaimed hero of justice. If the male heroes in the 21th century are the cape-wearers, sentai-like heroes, then the pinnacle of a female hero is still the shoujo manga magical girl.



    wish for the Holy Grail

    Quite frankly, according to her own words, she does not have enough ambition for a wish―she doesn’t even know why the Grail would consider her an adequate candidate. Whatever happened in her life, she accepted it already; and there is nothing she wants to change on it either. It’s for the best if her Master gets the Grail and make good use of it instead.



    attitude towards the Master

    Personal preferences dictate she’d have a better compatibility with a female Master, although coexistence with a male Master is possible.

    She sees her relationship with a Master as a
    marriage
    contract
    where both parties are to grow mutually helping each other. By having a good Master―one who cherishes her, does not put her through unnecessary danger, respects her opinions―she is to act like a
    good wife
    proper Servant
    in return, doing her utmost to ensure that they get to the top (meanwhile, showering them in her good graces, which includes lots of pampering and good food). But, if her Master proves to be a bad Master, she will deal with them in the same way she dealt with the abusive husbands of her clients.





    Author notes
    OH BOY I just had this idea after watching a documentary about poisons, so it is absolutely nothing lore-heavy. I liked the idea of an idealistic woman like her becoming the sublimation of idealism: a magical girl, so I went with the idea.
    Last edited by WhiteFrenzy; December 26th, 2019 at 11:15 AM.

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    Class: Saber
    Identity: Sir Dagonet
    Gender: Male
    Source: Arthurian cycle
    Origin: Britain
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Height: 121 cm
    Weight: 23 kg


    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: E
    Mana: E
    Luck: B
    NP: C


    Skills
    Class skills

    Magic Resistance: E
    Dagonet doesn’t possess any anecdote in which he faced magecraft. Even as a Saber, his rank stays at the minimum.

    Riding: E
    He actually can’t ride anything properly, but he’ll insist in trying.


    Personal skills

    Battered Shield: C
    When nobody saw him, Dagonet often beat his own shield and claimed it was the result of having been in a battle.
    Despite being third-rate and never having been in a serious fight, he’s perceived as a seasoned fighter. This actually works against Dagonet himself, since his opponents never lower their guard when facing him. Those who actually know about him or have the ability to discern the truth can see through this skill.

    Battle Retreat: B
    Knows too well when to give up. Allows to conserve energy by not dragging the battle and leaving when things start to get bad, but as a demerit, status buffs are lost.
    In his case, even the slightest taunt is enough for him to turn tail.

    Knighted for Fun: C
    Dagonet is actually far from being an actual knight, let alone a member of the Round Table. Even so, he obtained the title of Sir and was jokingly knighted by king Arthur.
    A form of Self-Suggestion responsible for Dagonet’s high self-esteem. “I’m a brave and strong knight who fears nothing”, he repeats to himself while hugging his knees in a corner because there was a loud thunder outside.



    Noble Phantasm

    For Someone’s Amusement
    For fun at my side and fear at the front



    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 0
    Maximum number of targets: 1 person

    When Sir Dynadan left the side of king Mark of Cornwall and joined Camelot’s men, he decided to play a joke on his former liege. He claimed that Sir Lancelot was among Arthur’s soldiers, and described his shield so that he was recognized. Lancelot wasn’t actually there, but Dagonet was given Mordred’s equipment, and it was Mordred’s shield the one that was described. When king Mark saw the supposed-to-be Lancelot, he ran for his life while screaming.

    A Noble Phantasm that allows Dagonet to take the form of others. Though even his armor and weapons change, his ability is still practically useless. Also, he remains in a chibi style for some reason.


    Knight of Derision
    A knight captured by a fool shall be mocked by other knights


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: D
    Range: 1
    Maximum number of targets: 1 person

    The episode of his life that Dagonet feels most proud about. One day, while Lancelot was so drunk he almost drowned himself, Dagonet took his horse and declared him his prisoner. When he returned to the court with Lancelot, everyone was greatly amused, since a witless fool like him had captured the king’s greatest knight. Even queen Guinevere was shocked to know about this. From then on, Lancelot was occasionally called “Dagonet’s prisoner” as a joke.

    By shamelessly stealing a possession of the opponent, he announces that they are his prisoner now. This doesn’t mean that he can use the Noble Phantasm of others or anything, but it severely degrades their reputation and stains their honor forever.



    Character
    Personality

    Despite being completely incompetent and below third-rate as a warrior, Dagonet has an incredibly high self-esteem and considers himself a top-notch knight. The reason behind this is that he refuses to accept the truth, or rather, that he’s too stupid to realize it. He enthusiastically boasts about his ‘feats’ in his past life and is willing to take on any kind of enemy, but actually he is a coward beyond belief that will run away in fear of his enemy right after taunting them.


    Treatment with the Master


    He serves his new lord loyally, but it’s unavoidable that he is more annoying than helpful. He insistently tries to prove his worth as a great knight, only to meet an exasperated face. That usually makes him want to cry.


    Dialogue examples

    Bond 1: “GYAAAH!! Step back, you giant, or you’ll have a taste of my sword! Ah, if it’s you, Master. My bad, the difference of heights made me mistake you by a huge monster. Now that I think about it, why am I so small now…?”

    Bond 2: “Hey hey, I told you I’m a great knight, didn’t I? Don’t look at me with that face, I’m serious here! No, for real. Please stop putting that face of hopelessness. It makes me feel like I should even give up on life…”

    Bond 3: “We sure stick around each other a lot. Are you starting to recognize my worth as a knight? I’ll remind you, even the strongest Knight of the Round Table is nothing compared to me! …Ah, there it is. The face of looking at a mosquito that has been pestering you the whole night. Am I so annoying…?”

    Bond 4: “Okay, Master! Let me tell you the story of how I made Lancelot my prisoner! …You’re tired of hearing that? Then, how about that time I scared the king of Cornwall away? Or my epic duel against Sir Breunor?”

    Bond 5: “Hey, we’ve been together for a long time by now, haven’t we? That means you must like me so much! I’ve taken a liking to you as well! Let’s keep it like this forever, Master! ……Hey hey, I know it’s exciting, but you don’t need to cry so much about it… What do you mean those aren’t tears of happiness…?”

    Likes: “What could a guy like me like? Oh well, I sure love how people always has fun with me! Eh? What do you mean they’re laughing AT me, and not WITH me…?”

    Dislikes: “LALALALALALALALALALALALALA!! I CAN’T HEAR YOU CALLING ME WORTHLESS!! I CAN’T HEAR YOU SAYING THAT EVERYONE FINDS ME IRRITATING!! Sniff… YOU’RE NOT MAKING ME CRY AT ALL!! Sniff sniff…”

    Wish for the Grail: “The Holy Grail is that awesome cup my king wanted, wasn’t it? Then I’ll get it before anyone else, and I’ll make sure that Galahad and Percival suck it! …What do you mean Galahad already obtained the Grail…?”



    Personal data
    Historical depiction

    The jester at king Arthur’s court, sometimes depicted as an actually decent knight that went mad when his wife was killed, but more usually described as a fool that the Knights of the Round Table used for their amusement. He was knighted just because everyone insisted it would be funny, and Arthur most likely accepted due to the pressure of his peers.

    Although he gave the people of Camelot more than one headache by playfully capturing Sir Lancelot or leading the kingdom to bankrupt, he was said to be extremely loyal to Arthur, and his loyalty saved the king at times.

    Dagonet not only entertained the king and his men in palace, but also was used to play jokes on their enemies. The most notable examples are when king Mark was led to believe he was Lancelot and ran away, and when Sir Kay sent him to joust with Sir Breunor just for depriving him of the honor of fighting with a true knight.


    Related characters

    Saberfaces
    My edgy king, my Roman king, my space king, my samurai king, my busty king… Which is the real one?!

    Artoria Pendragon
    Ah, my king! Of course I could recognize it was you, even among this unsettling amount of lookalikes!

    Lancelot
    Hey hey, look here! Yes, I’m talking with you! I made you my prisoner once, remember? You have to do what I tell you! Do you want me to slap you in the face with a stack of money, huh?
    HIIIIIH!! IT WAS A JOKE, PLEASE DON’T UNSHEATHE ARONDIGHT!!

    Gawain
    Hey, I heard that gorilla used my name once for a mission! Of course, he did it so they could take him seriously! I mean, if he went by his real name they would think he’s a nobody claiming to be a knight!

    Gareth
    Waaaah, little Gareth is so kind and cute! She always lets me cry in her lap and pats me in the head with her beautiful hands! I wish she fell in love with me instead of with that bastard womanizer of Lancelot… *sob sob*…

    Tristan
    Hey hey, want to hear something funny about that sleepyhead of Tristan? It may not look like it but while his dear Iseult wept his death he was actually running naked in a forest! Isn’t that ridiculous?!

    Mordred
    What the…? No no, seriously. What the…?


    Have some useless knight before Santa.

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    Dagonet and Tofana are both stellar.

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    Class: Saber

    Other Classes: Assassin
    True Name: Macbeth
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: Scotland

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: B
    AGI: A+
    MGI: D
    LCK: E
    NP: C

    Natural Enemy: Lady Macbeth, Foreigners
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Humanoid, King, Saberface


    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance (C)

    Riding (C)


    Personal Skills:

    Bravery (A)
    The ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion and fascination. It also has the bonus effect of increasing melee damage.

    Encouragement of Elementals (A)
    A skill wherein one’s abilities are reinforced by magecraft. In this case, it is a blessing from nature spirits for the purpose of eliminating a certain kind of enemy. In practice, Saber is able to draw magical energy from the planet itself, as he was blessed by spiritual bodies on behalf of Gaia. Functions similarly to the Mana Burst skill.

    Kingslayer (B++)
    Denotes a Heroic Spirit whose legend revolves around the murder of a king. In such cases, the skill translates to bonus damage modifiers against equivalent rulers, including the likes of emperors and regents. However, the trait of “King” is somewhat modified in Saber’s case to include a certain other category of enemy, and in the extremely rare scenario of fighting such an enemy, his power will be amplified exponentially…


    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Ordugh Hecate
    Mystic Eye of the Immortal King

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 0
    Max Targets: 1

    A blessing of “invincibility” given to Saber by witches. It is a Noble Phantasm originating from the planet, imposed on him by elementals in an attempt to root out and destroy a hidden external threat. A variation of Mystic Eyes artificially crafted by nature spirits, it was a “law” that claimed, with certain exceptions, none could overcome Saber in single combat.

    In practice, it functions as a form of Magecraft that enables the “perception of outcomes.” In the case of any incoming attack, Saber is able to perceive and “experience” the outcome numerous times in a single instant, until he understands how to block, evade or counter said attack. Essentially, it is the ability to replay an instance over and over, several thousands if times if need be, until one is perfectly equipped to respond. Even in the case of an attack which is initially faster than Saber is capable of reacting to, hundreds of thousands of instances of practice contained within a single breath acclimate the body to responding on reflex. The result is an immediate increase in muscle memory and reaction time that makes Saber perfect at avoiding any attack he perceives, because he has practiced doing so an impossible number of times the moment before the attack lands. In modern terms, this Noble Phantasm is comparable to an ultra-high-end computer capable of running simulations and super-high speeds.

    In a sense, Saber’s Noble Phantasm is designed to manipulate fate. It is a minor authority of the planet itself that enables Saber to overcome Noble Phantasms which rely on “certainties”; that is to say, those whose effect is to ensure a strike by manipulating causality, or inflicting guaranteed death. The true strength of Saber’s Noble Phantasm is to, in most cases, transform 0% into 1%, and then ensure that, so long as there is a 1% chance of success, the most optimal outcome will be achieved on each occasion. It is a process of “selecting the most optimal of all existing destinies,” but there are some instances wherein this power is ineffective. Primarily, while it defends against attacks that are conceptually “guaranteed”, it does not allow Saber to avoid that which is physically inescapable. Because it doesn’t actually increase his body’s speed, only the level of muscle memory and reaction time, it won’t allow Saber to escape an attack of extraordinarily large scale, such as an explosion designed to wipe out whole armies in an instant, nor can it protect him from omni-directional attacks. In practice, it is functions similarly to a hyper-enhanced version of Protection from Arrows or Eye of the Mind.


    Lore: Saber’s True Identity is Macbeth, most recognisable as the titular character of one of the most famous tragedies written by William Shakespeare. In actuality, he is the true Macbeth, a king of the Scots who lived during the 11th century, from which the literary character drew inspiration. His life was described in Holinshed’s Chronicles.

    A valorous and loyal general who was promised a life of fulfillment. Manipulated by both supernatural forces and his own wife, he was led down a spiralling path of corruption that ultimately resulted in madness and tyranny. Eventually, he became a villain that ruled over Scotland, and was slain by the heroic Macduff, who sought to avenge his family. That is how the story is remembered.

    In truth, Macbeth was originally selected to save the world. In order to destroy a foreign threat that had burrowed into the world, he was selected by Elementals and empowered with the strength of the planet itself. For this purpose, he was made invincible, but in the end, he wasn’t able to fulfill his original duty. His mind had by that point already been corrupted by the schemes of Lady Macbeth, who used him as a pawn to ascend to power. Unbeknownst to Macbeth, the alien threat he had been intended to destroy had sought refuge within her vessel, transforming her into something less than human by her own volition.

    A woman that invoked demons to erase her heart, yet ultimately killed herself to prevent her “ego” from being overtaken. As she died, the alien threat was eliminated, and Macbeth no longer served any purpose.

    Still empowered by magecraft, he became a tyrant that needed to be slain. Ultimately, he was defeated by a single warrior, as a result of a geis placed on his Mystic Eye. The evil, immortal king was vanquished, and none knew of his mission.
    As an aside, Saber is summoned in a body which is not his own. It is a result of an “inversion of the spirit”, a curse placed on him by his wife to manipulate his heart. As she sought to turn herself into “less of a woman,” she likewise turned her husband into “less of a man.” His appearance seems to have defaulted to matching that of another “king slayer” of a similar nature.

    Personality: In short, an egotistical optimist. Because he was promised that he would eventually find happiness, he is fundamentally someone that decides to trust fate. Simply put, Saber believes that the world is on his side, even following the events of his legend; rather, the fact that he’s given a “second chance” as a Servant following his death has only bolstered the perspective that, ultimately, he is destined to find fulfillment. Still, he is someone who lacks an image of his “end goal.” He moves forward, confident he’ll reach a place of satisfaction, but has no idea what he really wants.

    Saber’s own faith in his destiny is his greatest flaw. Far from just being arrogant, he has complete confidence that, even in spite of all his mistakes and decisions, he will still find some sort of happiness. That is to say, he isn’t at all concerned with pushing other people away, because he’s been assured that a life of prosperity is waiting for him either way. This will result only in isolation, but Saber currently fails to understand the importance of fighting for your own future, rather than waiting for fate to hand it to you.

    It is this same mentality that allows Saber to bury his own guilt. It is only when he is eventually forced to accept that it was all for nothing that he’ll truly be made to face the weight of his sins.

    Still, Saber doesn’t allow himself to be fazed by hardship. A headstrong Servant that believes himself invincible, so long as “that man” isn’t around, he views the Holy Grail War as hardly anything to be concerned with; the Grail is practically as good as his already, after all. This naturally means he is prone to rushing in head-first, but it also results in someone who takes setbacks in stride, and ultimately makes him a decently co-operative Servant. Far from retaining his previous melancholy, Saber is revitalized by the opportunity to return to life, claiming that he just needed a chance to “clear his head” following the events that led to his death. That being said, he remains boisterously arrogant, and eagerly violent when matters of battle are concerned.

    He hadn’t at all considered what he’d wish for on the grail, simply claiming he’ll cross that bridge when he reaches it.

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    Macbeth: Pretty creative take on "him" all around. His NP is a much more interesting take on his blessing than just an obvious invincibility like God Hand or Armor Of Fafnir. Him being a Mordredface is kind of weird but you did justify it, and I have to admit it seems like the kind of nonsense Nasu/Takeuchi would pull in canon. Though Macbeth's invincibility in the play itself had the caveat that "no man of woman born" could kill him. Does that factor into a weakness to his NP in some way? Like could a homunculus bypass the ability to some degree, because they're not technically born from a womb? Just curious.

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    Starless Twilight of the Fifth Sun
    1520? AD – Tamoanchan
    The Obsidian Butterfly Empress




    Class: Assassin
    True Name: Ītzpāpālōtl
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Mexico (Aztec Mythology), Mexican Lostbelt

    Strength: A++
    Endurance: A++
    Agility: A
    Mana: EX
    Luck: B
    Noble Phantasm: A+

    Class Skills
    Presence Concealment D+
    The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class.

    Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. A low ranking of Presence Concealment unbecoming for an Assassin to the level that a Servant can infer one's presence at once. This Skill normally functions at the D-Rank level but receives Rank-Up at night.

    Personal Skills
    Enemy of the Sun A
    A Skill that denotes one’s hatred for beings aligned with the Sun. Grants a “plus” modifier to the power of attacks targeting enemies that are associated with the Sun, especially those with Divinity.

    Ītzpāpālōtl is infamous for being the queen of the Tzitzimimeh after Coyolxāuhqui was slain in the initial assault on Huitzilopochtli, the Fifth Sun. Therefore, she has a very high Rank in this Skill.

    Demon of Mutation EX
    A Skill that denotes how a hero or god was transformed into a demon in life. A Skill that considerably strengthens one's abilities as a Servant by emphasizing a fact from the past.

    Ītzpāpālōtl has achieved a Rank of Strength and Endurance that is absolutely impossible for a human body. This version of Ītzpāpālōtl has fallen farther than her Pan-Human History counterpart due to her increased efforts to destroy the Fifth Sun by killing Huitzilopochtli.

    Self-Sealing D
    In Ītzpāpālōtl’s case, it is a self-inflicted curse that keeps herself locked into her current form, which takes less magical energy to maintain than her current form. This was done because of her desire to conserve as much power as possible in preparation for her assault on
    Huitzilopochtli
    the Sun
    .

    Notably, Ītzpāpālōtl can undo this curse whenever she wishes to, though doing so does consume a good amount of magical energy, further encouraging her to only use it as a last resort.

    Noble Phantasms
    Xineci Notzitzimimeh
    Go Forth and Conquer The Enemy, My Tzitzimimeh

    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Army
    Range: 1~99
    Maximum Number of Targets: 400
    A recreation of the method originally used by the Tzitzimimeh to cross the Atlantic to attack Europe.

    First, an altar must be set up to conduct a ritual in which humans are grievously wounded and their blood is offered to Ītzpāpālōtl. Then, Ītzpāpālōtl will use the altar as a conduit for her power to launch
    the
    victims
    sacrifices
    into the air. The
    victims
    sacrifices
    will fly towards those who have been designated as Ītzpāpālōtl’s enemies. Once the barely alive
    victim
    sacrifice
    hits the ground, a Tzitzimiml will step in and possess the body.

    A Tzitzimiml is a low-ranking Divine Spirits and thus much more power than normal humans. While a Servant is capable of killing them, normal humans would be hard pressed to kill even one Tzitzimiml.
    This Noble Phantasm drains a not insignificant level of magical energy from Ītzpāpālōtl but she can compensate for this by using the blood of the
    victims
    sacrifices
    to increase her reserves of Mana before using it to launch the
    victims
    sacrifices
    into the air towards her enemies.

    Nimochihua Ītzpāpālōtl
    Clawed Obsidian Butterfly

    Rank: EX
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    The true form of Ītzpāpālōtl; a horrific, skeletal goddess with a human skull, jaguar claws, and butterfly wings equipped with stone blades.

    This Noble Phantasm is typically rendered unusable by Ītzpāpālōtl’s Self-Sealing Skill due to her desire to conserve power in preparation for her final assault on
    Huitzilopochtli
    the Sun
    . In order to use Nimochihua Ītzpāpālōtl, she will have to remove the curse that forbids her from unleashing her true form.

    When Ītzpāpālōtl takes her true form, all parameters are Rank-Up and her power increases tremendously. As a trade-off, transforming into and maintain her true form drains a massive amount of magical power, hence why Ītzpāpālōtl avoids doing so unless absolutely necessary.

    Lore:
    A striking skeletal warrior goddess from Aztec Mythology and the mother of Mixcoatl. Ītzpāpālōtl ruled over the paradise world of Tamoanchan, the paradise for victims of infant immortality and the place identified as where humans were created. However, she also became the leader of the Tzitzimimeh after Coyolxāuhqui was slain during their disastrous first attempt on Huitzilopochtli.

    The divergence point for the Lostbelt that Ītzpāpālōtl originates from is the when the Spanish army, under Hernán Cortes, marched on Tenochtitlán. In this timeline, the slumbering Ītzpāpālōtl awoke and proceeded to do her best in order to smite the still asleep Huitzilopochtli (or rather the Sun, believing them both to be one and the same), calling out to her Tzimitzimeh subordinates to assist her.
    When the Spanish arrived at Tenochtitlán, they and the Aztecs bore witness to the sight of the Sun turning black and the stars falling from the sky. The Tzimitzimeh proceeded to begin to possess many of the citizens of Tenochtitlán, exploiting their fear of change brought on by the arrival of the Spanish, and slaughtered most of the remaining humans, including Cortes and Moctezuma. Eventually, the Aztecs were able to temporarily appease Ītzpāpālōtl and the Tzimitzimeh using human sacrifices.

    When Ītzpāpālōtl and the Tzimitzimeh began to grow discontent, the Aztecs directed them to the Spanish colonies in the Caribbean. The Tzimitzimeh took the Aztecs with them as servitors and went to slaughter the entire populace of the Caribbean. Again, the Tzimitzimeh began to grow discontent and prepared to slaughter the Aztecs, who in turn suggested that the Tzitzimimeh attack Europe. The problem with this was that they currently had no means of transport across the Atlantic, as the Aztecs had never developed the means to facilitate such and the few Spanish who managed to escape did so using ships. Thus, Ītzpāpālōtl and the Tzitzimimeh were temporarily stuck having to figure out how to solve this issue.

    While they went about trying to resolve this issue, the Tzitzimimeh started to attack the Mayans and the Incas in order to gather food and sacrifices to bolster Ītzpāpālōtl’s power.

    Eventually, a rather crude method of transport across the Atlantic was devised. Ītzpāpālōtl had the last remaining Spanish soldiers sacrificed to her, though they were not killed immediately. Then, she used her power to launch the barely alive soldiers into the air and they flew across the Atlantic. When they landed in Europe, the Tzitzimimeh would possess their bodies and go on a rampage. The Tzitzimimeh where ordered by Ītzpāpālōtl to seize a naval vessel and return to Mexico, where the Aztecs would be made to reverse engineer the captured naval vessel.

    Although the war against humanity would largely be in the Tzimitzimeh’s favor, the Tzimitzimeh are limited by the fact that they had to possess human bodies in order to manifest in the mortal world. This limits their powers to some degree and if they go overboard in using them, they risk burning their vessel out (and several did while facilitating transport across the Atlantic). Additionally, Ītzpāpālōtl herself acts as a conduit for the summoning of Tzitzimiml, which drains a good portion of her power. Thus, the Tzimitzimeh are forced to rely on the Aztecs as muscle to avoid this.

    This was the reason why Ītzpāpālōtl sent an Tzitzimiml strike force to seize a naval vessel. She knew that only using Tzitzimiml to attack Europe would ultimately fail, so it would be necessary to be able to transport an army of her Aztec servants across the Atlantic to avoid completely burning out her resources.

    Regardless, during the time spent reverse engineering ships, Ītzpāpālōtl would occasionally send small Tzitzimiml strike forces to attack Europe while also sending her forces to conquer the rest of the Americas.

    When Ītzpāpālōtl and the Tzitzimimeh launched a full-scale invasion of Europe, the Europeans were already terrified of the Tzitzimimeh and immediately scrambled a desperate defense against the invading Aztec-Tzitzimiml army. Although Europe managed to last for quite a while, their defense started to crumble when they had proven to be so great an obstacle that Ītzpāpālōtl herself had to directly intervene.

    Slowly but surely, the Tzitzimimeh began to overrun humanity and pushed the surviving humans back to Asia. Now, Asia stands as the last bastion of humanity but both sides are aware that the humans are ultimately doomed no matter what.

    Meanwhile, a small faction of Aztecs seeks to find a way to overthrow the Tzitzimimeh. Unfortunately, they have thus far had no success in discovering a method to accomplish this and are very small in number. After several centuries have passed by, only those descended from the ruling class and priest class of Aztec society remember their true mission; to sacrifice to strengthen the gods and prevent the end of the world. But after five centuries of serving the Tzitzimimeh, the lower class people have long forgotten this mission and full-heartedly serve the Tzitzimimeh, since that is all they have ever known.

    For the rest of the World’s peoples, an encounter with one of the Tzimitzimeh is certain death. The Tzimitzimeh are stand on a higher level of existence than humans and their high levels of Mystery greatly reduces the effectiveness of firearms against them. The one thing preventing the war from becoming a one-sided massacre is the fact that the Tzimitzimeh are limited by their mortal shells.
    All the while, Ītzpāpālōtl routinely demands that human sacrifices be carried out in order to increase and maintain the power of herself and the Tzimitzimeh. As the war rages on, Ītzpāpālōtl waits in Tenochtitlán, commanding her Tzimitzimeh forces and preparing for an all-out attack on the Sun, seeking her eternal victory over Huitzilopochtli.


    Personality:
    Likes: Children
    Dislikes:
    The Sun
    Huitzilopochtli

    Talents: Commanding the Tzitzimimeh, attacking the
    Huitzilopochtli
    the Sun

    Natural Enemy:
    The Sun
    Huitzilopochtli

    Ītzpāpālōtl is driven by a burning hatred for Huitzilopochtli. Like all of the Tzitzimimeh, this is because of jealousy over how Huitzilopochtli is much more powerful and seen as being more important than they are. However, in Ītzpāpālōtl’s case, this is only one of her reasons for her quest to kill Huitzilopochtli. Her other reason for this is a desire to avenge the death of Coyolxāuhqui, who was a close friend of hers before her death during the Tzitzimimeh’s first attempt on Huitzilopochtli’s life. She appears to be completely clueless to the fact that Huitzilopochtli is not the actual sun.

    Her feelings towards the Aztec people are rather mixed. On one hand, she loathes the way that they worship her hatred enemy Huitzilopochtli. But on the other, she does seem to not hate the Aztecs themselves and even seems to appreciate them a little. As time went on in her native Lostbelt, her fondness for them slowly began to grow and she became quite reluctant to use them as vessels for the Tzitzimimeh, instead preferring to use non-Aztec people for this.

    Like all Tzitzimimeh, Ītzpāpālōtl has a natural instinct to destroy and kill everything in sight, but she has higher rational capabilities than the average Tzitzimiml. To this end, she finds it more desirable to bide her time gathering and conserving power in preparation for her eventual assault on
    the Sun
    Huitzilopochtli
    .

    Due to her being the ruler of Tamoanchan, the paradise for the victims of infant mortality and death by childbirth, Ītzpāpālōtl has a certain fondness for children, particularly infants, and pregnant women and absolutely refuses to harm them. In fact, harming a child/pregnant woman will send her into an intense fury that is only seconded by her rage against Huitzilopochtli.

    When around children, Ītzpāpālōtl’s personality seemingly does a 180-degree turn and she begins to behave like a doting mother to them. This can be rather unnerving for those who have become used to her usual behaviors. But despite acting like a doting parent, Ītzpāpālōtl has no problem whatsoever with children learning to kill people. Though when one takes her status as the queen of star demons into consideration, this is quite unsurprising.


    Relationships:
    Ritsuka Fujimaru: Doesn’t seem to particular care for them. She thinks of them as more of a servitor than a Master. She would demand that they make sacrifices to her, but she begrudgingly admits that the crisis of humanity’s extinction would make this impractical.

    Holy Grail: “The Holy Grail is a device containing tremendous power, yes? Interesting. Perhaps I could put that to good use against Huitzilopochtli.”

    Solar-Attribute Servants: “This presence is similar to Huitzilopochtli… How disgusting… Remove them from my sight before I remove their heads from their shoulders.”
    Moon Cancer-class Servants: “I sense that these ones have some sort of connection to the Moon… Coyolxāuhqui…”

    Jack the Ripper: “Little Jackie is like the daughter I’ve always wanted. She’s adorable, sweet, and would kill people without hesitation.”

    Hernan Cortes: “…Oh, it’s you. I barely even remember you. But I suppose that I should give you some degree of thanks; without you, none of my plans would have become a possibility. Your death will be relatively painless.”


    Creator’s Notes:
    Finally got around to posting this. Hope it turned out as well as I think it did. I’m currently fine-tuning the information for the Mexican Lostbelt itself and will post the finished product in the CaS/L forum in a few days. Trying to figure out which Servants would best fit in. At the moment, I’ve currently got a few Aztec Servants and a few Spaniard Servants implemented in the storyline.

    So, in the material collections, Quetzalcoatl has a scripted interaction with somebody where she’s threatening them with a fate worse than death. The name is censored, but I think that person might be Cortes. I originally had Ītzpāpālōtl’s interaction with Cortes follow this format, but then I decided to include Cortes in the storyline for a hypothetical Mexican Lostbelt. So, I went back and uncensored it. I will not be making a Cortes sheet, however, because I fear that it would be too similar to what others have already created.

    So, I’ve got White Rider, Kagutsuchi & Mizuhame, Mechi, Robert Rogers, Skanderbeg, Nezahualcoyotl, Qing Ming, Mrs. Prodgers, and Lostbelt Xerxes sheets in the works. I’ve got concepts for Lostbelt Napoleon, Mordred Alter, Philip II of Macedon, Craterus, Antipater, and Eumenes, but not much, unfortunately.

    Also, does anybody have any ideas for an Egyptian Lostbelt? I considered the idea of one where Ozymandias remained steadfast in his refusal to let the Israelites leave, but that would probably result in YHVH destroying Egypt in a last-ditch effort to free the Israelites. But I felt that wouldn’t really be an Egyptian Lostbelt, so I scrapped it. But other than that, I’ve got nothing.


    Edit: A big thank you to Shiki-pon for helping me out with creating this sheet.
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    haha whatya mean christmas was yesterday



    "Thy had better watch out."


    True Name: "The Old Man of the Mountain", "Hassan-i Sabbah", "King Hassan", "the First Hassan", "Santa Claus"
    Class: Assassin
    Origin: The Middle East The North Pole
    Alignment: Lawful Christmas

    Parameters
    STR: B
    END: A
    AGI: A
    MGI: E
    LCK: E
    NP: A+

    "No heads tonight-- instead, thy retribution is coal. Ho ho ho."

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    Some crisis. A Christmas, ruined... no! Though the later Hassans are fools, even they deserve a joyous holiday. And so, it fell upon their beloved Senpai to make the Holidays proceed properly. Unfortunately, he isn't 100% certain of the particulars of this celebration... oh well, I'm sure he'll figure it out.

    He's completely vanished into the persona of 'Santa Claus', trying his best to alter his behavior to match. However, his stern demeanor an old-fashioned manner of speech persist even through the change in attire, meaning most people are likely to feel intimidated by him even as he wishes them a merry Christmas. Through unknown means, he's acquired a 'Sack of Presents' filled to bursting with equal parts gift and coal. He refused to let anybody peek inside it, lest they spoil the surprise waiting for them Christmas morning. To attempt to sneak a glimpse anyway will surely result in a swift reckoning.

    There have been reports of people hearing the ominous ringing of sleigh bells, only to find no source. The only evidence of any disturbance at all is a single present, left out with their name on it... or a lump of coal, ominously shaped something like a skull...

    Class Skills
    Presence Concealment: EX
    His 'curse' has been counteracted by the drive within him to spread Christmas cheer. So long as his goal is to deliver presents, he can remain completely undetected, bypassing stealth checks entirely. In fact, he's so imperceptible that even the 'World' itself can't keep track of him, allowing him to deliver presents faster than should be allowed by physics, almost as if he's in hundreds of places at once...

    Should he shift to attack, however, his Presence Concealment Skill completely vanishes, and his existence becomes known to those around him.

    Independent Action: A
    As Santa, he exists only to bring joy to the 'Good Boys and Girls' of the world, not to serve any Master, or even himself.

    Magic Resistance: C
    Having focused entirely on the doling out of gifts, he's neglected to upkeep his Magic Resistance skill, meaning it's lower than usual for him.

    Personal Skills
    Saint's Gift: B
    Due to his inescapable origins as a stealthy killer, he doesn't stick around after a successful delivery. It's this, and his practicality-mindedness, that make his presents not the sort to excite the recipient, even though they're often useful. Though, maybe he doesn't stick around because he's no good at accepting somebody's thanks...

    Jingle Bell: EX
    Replacing his usual Evening Bell Skill is the newly acquired Jingle Bell. Jingle Bells signal the announcement of the Holiday Season and the visitation of Santa Claus. This unique Skill manifests as a result of having become one with the rites of Yule. This swordsman does not pick those he delivers presents to of his own free will; he brings cheer to those who "lost sight of the true meaning of Christmas". It's something of a 'list' that he follows, delivering
    presents
    rewards
    to the nice and
    coal
    punishment
    to the naughty.

    Additionally, he is able to instantly discern upon sight if one is naughty or nice. He will always make sure to check twice, however, just to be sure.

    Protection of the Faith: B
    His 'faith' has been supplanted by his dedication to the cause of Christmas, and so his Protection of the Faith skill has weakened.

    Battle Continuation: EX
    Assassin's 'Battle Continuation' skill has been altered to its core by his assumption of the 'Santa' identity. Instead of the continuation of 'Battles', it has become the continuation of 'Christmas', allowing Assassin to work through even the most horrific injuries until his deliveries are finished.

    Natural Body: B
    His body has become perfect for the delivery of presents to those who need them, ranking this skill up from its usual C. His body is perfectly insulated against the cold, and is built to flawlessly infiltrate any households in need of Christmas cheer.

    That is to say, he's perfectly able to fit down a chimney.

    Noble Phantasm
    "Thou art truly a naughty soul... no more coal. Now, it is time for Santa to slay."

    Kiraman Katibin
    The Angels of Right and Wrong

    Rank: A+
    Type: Anti-Unit
    It is said that the 'Kiraman Katibin', named Raqib and Atid, follow around every person and record their deeds, good and bad, for use in their judgement upon death. They keep track of all things; they watch you when you're sleeping, they watch you when awake, they know if you've been bad or good, so be good for goodness sake.

    Assassin invokes their names in his new Noble Phantasm, a pair of swords stored in his 'Sack of Presents', beneath the gifts and coal. When used on a truly 'naughty' soul, this attack will be an instant kill. Against any others, it is simply a particularly strong two-sword strike.

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    Hmm, lambda, have you considered the idea of an Egypt where Cleopatra wasn't assassinated? That might work for a Lostbelt. Also, how interesting that we're both working on sheets for the First Horseman. Although, given that I'm designing mine to be a final boss-style Rider that, while not strictly evil, has an extremely problematic wish that makes it so that, for the sake of the planet itself, he absolutely cannot be allowed to win a Grail War.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Valfodr View Post
    Hmm, lambda, have you considered the idea of an Egypt where Cleopatra wasn't assassinated? That might work for a Lostbelt. Also, how interesting that we're both working on sheets for the First Horseman. Although, given that I'm designing mine to be a final boss-style Rider that, while not strictly evil, has an extremely problematic wish that makes it so that, for the sake of the planet itself, he absolutely cannot be allowed to win a Grail War.
    Now that seems like it would be pretty interesting. Though, mine will be similar in nature to the Pale Rider from strange fake, which I also attempted to imitate with my Red Rider sheet. By the way, what did you think of that one?

    And I did not think of that idea for the Egyptian Lostbelt. I'll have to try to figure out how to make that idea work, though. Perhaps something to do with Isis, since Cleopatra is said to be her incarnation...
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    Danke very much, Royd! Honestly, as far as the "no man of woman born" asterisk, I was considering adding it in, but it felt like such an oddly specific weakness for the "witches" to actually apply to him. Personally, I've ended up interpreting the apparitions as three different ways of just saying "Macduff specifically will mess you up," since all three applied to him in one way or another. It's arguably less necessary for this version, since Macbeth doesn't have complete invulnerability anyways.
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    Macbeth: I loved the NP. I loved the lore. At first I was like "uhh... Why is this Servant a Mordralter?" but I got it in the end. (And yes, I liked it very much. We need more Mordred-faces.) I was engrossed on the reading and didn't even noticed that I was at the end of the sheet when I read the last line-- and if this isn't the mark of a great writing, I don't know what else could be.

    Ītzpāpālōtl: I absolutely loved the idea of a Mexican Lostbelt, first of all. Would love to know more about it. Would pay money for it but alas. Then, loved the flavor text of The Sun (and my curiosity led me to do some research about those two figures. Needless to say, it took me some time to finish reading the sheet hahaha.) Her skills are also very creative, in special the Self-Sealing one. What can I say.... I love when an author is brave enough to put demerits on a Servant hahah. Anyway, this was an amazing sheet, thanks a lot for the experience!

    King Hassan(ta): BRB BUSTING A GUT. But also, an unexpectedly amusing sheet to read. I loved this idea of a Hassan(ta) and frankly, I could see this working on FGO hahaha. I'm kinda sad this isn't a thing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by WhiteFrenzy View Post
    Ītzpāpālōtl: I absolutely loved the idea of a Mexican Lostbelt, first of all. Would love to know more about it. Would pay money for it but alas. Then, loved the flavor text of The Sun (and my curiosity led me to do some research about those two figures. Needless to say, it took me some time to finish reading the sheet hahaha.) Her skills are also very creative, in special the Self-Sealing one. What can I say.... I love when an author is brave enough to put demerits on a Servant hahah. Anyway, this was an amazing sheet, thanks a lot for the experience!
    Thank you very much! I worked really hard on this sheet trying to flesh it out. I've actually finished and posted the rest of the information for the Mexican Lostbelt. Since you would like to know more about the ideas I had for the Mexican Lostbelt, I'll give you a link to it.
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    Relating to the Egyptian Lostbelt, the divergence point could also be something to do with the Sea Peoples that attacked Egypt over a few centuries in 1200-900 BCE. The costly wars against them led to Egypt's eventual decline, so that either not happening or if the Egyptians (or someone else) managed to get rid of them during their first invasions, history might've gone a different way.
    All of this also happened during the Age of Gods, which opens up more extraordinary possibilities.

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