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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    Ship of Theseus : She is would i say actually well done Two Questions Lambda :can she with her first Noblephantasm theoretically also integrate the bodyparts of other servants and can she through that also gain owner ship over Noblephantasm of other servants like Siegfrieds FAfnir Armor or Gaebolg as "Spine" example wise ?and im curious as both are the Materialisation of Ships what her oppinion is About my Titanica is?
    For God's sake, Koga, clean up your grammar.

    For your first question, that might be possible, but it wouldn't probably be hindrance unless you could somehow morph the NP you're using into a shape that matches the part you're trying to replace. And even then, how likely are you to get your hands on another Servant's Noble Phantasm to try this in the first place? The implication is that you would need to create new parts for her yourself. Not the most practical thing, I know, but I'm trying to closely follow the thought experiment that she's based around.

    I will not dignify your second question with a response because you always ask something similar to that when giving your opinion on someone's sheets.


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    The truest test is to try and combine The Ship of Theseus with the Argo to create the ultimate Greek Ship Wife™.
    TFW Thomas Edison is a lion, King Arthur is a girl, and Humanity's mom is Shin Godzilla
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    Quote Originally Posted by Der Ritter View Post
    The truest test is to try and combine The Ship of Theseus with the Argo to create the ultimate Greek Ship Wife™.
    Speaking of the Argo, I actually planned on go with the idea Royd pitched about making the Argo into a cute, intelligent shipgirl waifu. I'm working on it right now, actually.


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    Dateman
    Pious Superhero of Japan



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    edited from "Batman Ninja"



    Height: 197 cm
    Weight: 131kg
    Likes: Super-hero comics, God.
    Dislikes: Killing.
    Attribute: Man.
    Alignment: Lawful Good.
    Region: Japan.
    Catalyst: A piece of one of the sails of his boat.


    Parameters:
    STR
    ◙◙○○ D
    END ◙◙◙◙◙ A+
    AGI ◙◙◙○○ C
    MGI ◙◙○○○ D
    LUC ◙◙◙◙◙ A
    NP ◙◙○○○ D

    Rider's secret identity is Date Masamune, the One-Eyed Dragon. A great tactician from the Sengoku period, Masamune was an agressive and ambitious leader, but also a patron of cuture and development. His loss of an eye and characteristic helmet bearing a crescent moon have made him one of the most iconic daimyō of that era.
    However... As a Rider his personality seems to have changed quite a bit. Apparently due to influences from a previous summon, Rider now insists he is called Dateman, and has altered his own appearance to resemble that of a certain popular super-hero.

    Personality, Lore and Wish

    Dateman is a cheerful and charismatic man. In life, he was seen as a ruthless fighter and an aggressive strategist, and while those characteristics can come to the surface during fights, the super-hero persona seems to have completely replaced his image as a general. To be blunt, Dateman is a goody two-shoes.
    However, the mantle of Dateman has not affected his religiousness in the same way, in actuality, he seems to have become more pious than in life.
    The reason, of course, is due to how his efforts to support Christianity in Japan ended up. Despite allowing the messengers of God to act freely in his lands, he still obeyed when the Tokugawa shogunate outlawed his own faith. Having always been enamored with the west, Masamune had managed to support these ideals until then, but his protection was no more. Reports say that he still managed to save some, but it's undeniable, at least to Rider himself, that he turned his back on his fellow believers.
    Even Father Luis Sotelo, who had participated in the expedition funded by Masamune to meet the Pope, and someone who he had saved from Tokugawa in the past, ended up being executed. Despite having promoted so much prosperity and development in his lands, this was a shame that Masamune would never forget.
    Then, a summoning. Inspiration. A mask in which to hide his sorrow. A new identity without sins. A new ideal to — this time for sure — follow to the end.
    No more compromises or excuses, he would never again bow down and let his people be hunted because his enemy was someone stronger.
    Now, as Dateman, he will save everyone, no matter the cost.


    Class Skills

    Riding C.
    Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.

    Rider is a samurai and an accomplished general, trained in mounted battle.


    Magic Resistance D.
    Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

    Rider didn't live among the Mystery of the Age of Gods, and should normally be granted an even lower Rank. The current Rank is granted by the blessings of his armor.


    Personal Skills

    Instinct B.
    The ability to instantly identify “the best personal course of action” during combat. Because this Skill allows for the prediction of trajectory, it is possible to avoid attacks from firearms and halve the penalties inflicted by visual and auditory interference.

    Rider lost his eyes to sickness when he was still young, and it's only through his instinct that he was able to be so successful in battle despite that. Any enemy that thinks they are in advantage due to his disability is sure to realize how sorely mistaken they were.


    Charisma B-.
    A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles.

    Not only does Rider possess the rare talent to both lead in battle and rule territories, his image itself has been popular to this day, granting him a Rank that's usually exclusive to great Kings and Queens. However, due to his change in appearance and character, he is currently barely able to reach this level. Allies that think he is "lame" will receive lower bonuses in group battles.


    Mystic Code (Azure Armor) A.

    A skill granted to one who possesses a particularly powerful or important Mystic Code, in this case, a blessed armor.

    To thank him for his efforts and aid him in his coming battles, the Pope sent Rider an armor much like the one he became famous for wearing (as Rider was also known as the Azure Dragon). It should grant him an incredible amount of magical resistance and additional blessings, but the modifications performed by Overly-Iconic Visage have affected it somewhat. As it is, this Mystic Code grants him a Rank-up to Magical Resistance and applies a plus modifier to his Endurance when fighting against non-Christian enemies.
    Rider is aware that his tampering has affected the blessings of His Holiness, but he cannot bear to look at the original appearance of the armor. The fact that the Pope tried to help him defend his fellows Christians in Japan is a grim reminder of the fact that he did not fight for them.


    Overly-Iconic Visage A+.
    A skill granted as a degree of apology to those that have been remembered due to their appearances. Those whose looks were so iconic they overshadow even their deeds as Heroic Spirits, making their identity obvious to any enemy they encounter. It can either grant bonuses similar to the fame boost of being summoned in one's own homeland, or allow them to alter their appearance slightly.

    Rider has chosen to alter his appearance. The crescent moon that adorns his helmet is now a chest emblem, he has acquired a cape that allows him to glide, an utility belt to attach his swords to, etc.


    Noble Phantasm(s)


    Dateman and Ryūbin
    The Azure Dragon Calls for His Followers
    .
    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: A


    "Every hero needs a sidekick, and I've got plenty! Dateman and
    Ryūbin!"

    Originally
    The Golden Headed Wyrmilings
    The Azure Dragon Calls for His Followers
    . This Noble Phantasm is the crystallization of the legend of Date Masamune as a military commander, allowing him to summon his troops as shadow warriors that obey his every order. Each of them is quite weak when compared to Servants, but when acting as an army they can prove to be quite the challenge to any Heroic Spirit that lacks powerful area-of-effect attacks.

    However, it seems like since their black armor and golden helmets are part of "the iconic look of Date Masamune", he was able to utilize Overly-Iconic Visage to modify them as well. Now they appear bearing the same golden helmets, but with armor that is much more colorful.

    Despite that, these shadow troops are still a very versatile Noble Phantasm that can be utilized in a variety of ways to gain advantage during a Holy Grail Way. Blending in the shadows for stealth, information gathering, overwhelming enemies etc. It's the perfect Noble Phantasm for Dateman to display his leadership.




    Date-Maru Tavelling
    San Juan Bautista, I pray to you
    .
    Type: Anti-Fortress
    Rank: B



    "Date-Maru Tavelling! By His grace, we will succeed.
    "

    Date-Maru Travelling. While
    The Golden Headed Wyrmilings
    The Azure Dragon Calls for His Followers
    is the crystallization of Date Masamune as a military leader, this Noble Phantasm embodies both his faith and his appreciation for foreign culture. It materializes the ship that carried an expedition with the objective of establishing relationships with the Pope and securing trade deals in a time those things were not only rare, but frowned upon in Japan.

    The expedition was a success. After being well received in many countries along the way, they did meet the Pope and secured his support.
    When its true name is released, Masamune can send the ship to retrieve anything he wants from "the western world", and the ship will bring it to him as long as he is still materialized, no matter what. The only issue is travel time, which varies depending on what Masamune requested.

    The rarer, more abstract or more absurd something is, the longer it will take for San Juan Bautista to come back.

    For example, if rider asks for the Holy Grail of Jesus, the ship will never come back in time. After all, that is a unique item, lost to the ages, whose sole possessor is said to have ascended to Heaven with it.

    If Rider asks for the latest issue of Batman, then the ship is probably going to return only a few hours later.
    If he asked for a regular katana though, San Juan Bautista is still going to take a few hours, but it will come back empty. A Japanese sword is not something that can be acquired on "the western world".
    Last edited by pinetree; January 8th, 2020 at 02:36 PM. Reason: grammar

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    This is amazing in many different ways.

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    Pinetree, you are a genius.


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post
    This is amazing in many different ways.
    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
    Pinetree, you are a genius.
    Thank you, thank you.

    I have a bunch more from my tabletop game, so I'll be posting them soon, as I find or make appropriate faceclaims.

    Don't expect anything as out there as Dateman though lol

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    Here is my second olympic god .


    Poseidon
    (Rider)


    "Yar be greeted Sorccerer ! i hope that you have some Drinks as warming up,in any case Servant Rider Poseidon has answered your summoning !"


    When in an Fighting Situation does he Change into an Blue Armor ornated with red orbs and a scaly coat
    Height:235 cm
    Weight:193~ kg
    Alignment:Chaotic Good/Chaotic Evil
    Attributes:Earth/Heaven ,Brynhildr beloved
    Other Qualifying Classses:Lancer,Caster,Archer,Ruler,Berserker,Assa ssin,Avenger,Ancient Giant,Beast
    Likes:his Childrenn,Beautifull Women,being superior ,being praised and worshipped,to gossip with Hades,to Conduct the mosaic of the Ocean Waves
    Dislikes:being Inferior,prudent Women,The other Olympic Gods(except Hades) especially Zeus and Athena
    Talents: to Rule an World(?),to Seduce Women,the Play of the Waves
    Natural Enemy:Zeus,Hades

    Parameter:
    Strenght:B+
    Endurance:A
    Agility:B
    Luck:B+
    Mana:A+
    NP:EX

    Personality



    Poseidon is a very moody person who can be either calm ,analytical one one moment and one an other wild and impulsive .

    He was as child rather impulsiveand terrified by his Father Kronos ,unlike Hades did he displayed his fears openly and cried and was shaken with terror but his Sisters and Hades cared and comforted him .

    One particular sentence of Hades in that phase took root in him "Never become like our Father"

    During the years in his Fathers stomach shifted his fear of his Father into resentment for him and he started to develope his irascible Personality and moodiness.

    He was also slowly angered by the commanding words of his Sisters and after their liberation especially from Zeus his unknowing little Brother who didnt endured the same pain like himself and his older siblings .

    Their were only one person he couldnt despise namely his Brother Hades as he recognised what his sisters didnt namely that Hades were als tortured by their experience and smiled only to comfort his siblings and be there for them ,but Poseidon knew that he cant speak about that to his Sisters nor question Hades about that as that were Hades only string that let Hades keep his composure and mind.

    During the Titanomachia were he the most aggressive fighter of the siblings and a great rivalry developed with his little Brother Zeus .

    He accepted the domain of the Waters and Seas as his first memory before his swallowing by Kronos were to see and hear the primordial Ocean.
    But his Rivalry and jealousy towards Zeus started to grow ,aswell developed he a strong lust towards women.


    After a while as all deities assummed their position and the Heroic age of where the progeny of the deities are roam and ruling the mortal world started ,begann he to dislike the other deities with exception of Hades and some female ones,as albeit he were he from many city the patron deity and worshipped due to his power was he envious that the other deities were more genuine loved and worshipped (out of honest and voluntary choice) by the mortals aswell that he feeled himself as lonely deity similar like Hades.

    His relation to the other deities is rather difficult as that he dislikes his younger Brother and see him as Rival,he disdain Athena for her arrrogance and for what she has done to some of his Childrenn,he has also a tensed relation to Ares and Apollo as they supported Troy,but not an hostile.

    He is foremost a person who detest to be infferior to someone and he is quite remorseless as he dont forgive any insult,but at the same time does he know mercy after he has "punished enough" so as he accepted the pleading of Oddysseus even after he injuried his son heavily.

    He is a quite moody and stubborn person which can also be seen towards his subjects on one side a just and geniun kind King who rules just and fair almost familiar but on some moments later a ruthless tyrann who has no hesitations to kill a only three minutes late butler who serve him cold dish .

    He is also an avowed hedonist as he loves to indulge in fine dishes ,drinks and especially beautifull women and is skillfully to seduce them with either direct means or trickery in which point he is not much different as Zeus in that point.

    He is albeit he has no objections or restraints to scheme and he openly enjoy the thrill of the fight is he also a man of honor like as he accepted Apollos reason to refuse the fight as Apollo stated that he dont fight against his Family which as Poseidon is (even if its contradicting) also a family person who values his family like that he is very loving and affectionate to his Childrenn and also towards his many Spouses and lovers is he very affectionate and charming especially if they are reciprocate his feelings,which were also described in some erotic tales but those were rather be hidden by the higher society as it were to lewd for the populace (perhaps due to that he were envied by some Males and the watery dreams of young maidens....)
    but he were also if they didnt answered his advances rather direct if he were to captivated by them/their beauty (and his hormones),albeit after he regaines himself may be guilty over his deeds so feeled he guilt over what Athena made with Medusa which earned her a place on his Hate-list forever.


    An special Relationship has he towards Hades his Big and older Brother as both are having experienced the Terror from their Father Kronos and as both after their assumption of their Realms both were rather feared then loved deities which main Worshipper were certain Priest classess and later certain Mage-clans,rather lonesome Deities and unknown by the mortals have both quite often visited each other in their Realm as Poseidon here and there visited Hades in the underworld to whenever he could afford the time to keep him atleast some company and also Hades did visiting him in return(he saw it as sort of familiar duty to return the favor) and to gossip about what the two had in mind which were mostly love stories from Poseidon where he boasted to his brother during Hades on the other side talked about hiss duties and some accidents like incidents with some Titans that broke free example wise .


    As Servant:

    As Rider is summoned in the class where he is the most ..bipolar disposition or rather in the most possible various fluctuation as he is on one moment jovial and carefree and mere seconds after that non nonsense and solemn ... it can be described that the ebb and flow .


    He is very intersted in the actual state of the ocean and would despite he know anything (really anything) about the Ocean would he buy or atleast want to look at every Ocean infobook and look what the humen have found out ,he definetely appreciate it that Men have started to film his domain like the Ocean photographer pioneer Jacques-Yves Cousteau and Hans Hass that have started the fascination for the oceans and fought for the health of them.So does he respect any Ocean and wildlife protector,he also is delighted that Humens that are care and breed Fishs and other Sea Animels as their hobby and praise their noble passion in his eyes.


    He also likes to ask the Humen he happen to meet about their oppinion about the lifeforms of the Water especially about the Sea,and he respect those that respect or love genuinly the Sealife respectively the Oceans as he equals the respect and admiration of/for the Ocean as respect for himself and keep that in mind.In return is disrespect for the waters also equals disrespect towards him which will atoned accordingly.

    beside that rather sophisticated aspect where he holds the aura of a wise and sincere Man does he will indulge himself in delicasies and seduce beautifull Women of his liking ,that he encounter.

    He is willing to use dishonorable tactics if they are necesary but at the start will he try to settle the thing honorfully.

    He has however a fondness for Childrenn as they are ignite his fatherly instincts so does he act with childrenn quite gentle and likes to teach them something like if they should ask him something ,also is he enraged when he witness violence then will he use his whole arsenal if neccesary to rescue them and give the offender a painfull death.
     
    This behavior is one result of his experiences he himself had as child and cant tolerate that childrenn are experience the same.

    Towards his Master and other Servants:

    As he is very mody servant and aswell that he doesnt accept to be seen as inferrior and is in general a difficult Servant in handling as he is his position quite concious ,however he will in the first days out of ccuriousity be willing to listen and cooperate his Master and see how they are and for which goals they srive then will he decide if their goals are interesting enough to help them reach it,it goes without saying that he find the idea of the persuation of the root as ridiculous.
     
    In the most cases in which his Master is an acomplished Mage is he curious about their Family Magecraft. Regardless does he demands and expects Respect and only if he receive that is he willing to continue to fight for them seriously,should his Master be though a descendant of on priestclass/family-clan of his Worshipper is he more lenient towards them.
     
    It also understand itself that if his Master should be a beautifull and young woman is it just a matter of time that he likes to etablish a intimate relationship withem should she be though prudent and at the same time arogant is he outright angered(as such women remind him on Athena) and is even not averse if any other Master should be a beautifull woman and seek to forge with them a new contract if she react "in an adequate way" be it either to then really sever his old pact or make them try to beg to remain on their side.However should his female Master be to young for his preference (everything under 16 years age) will he instead act like an dutifull father (who would intimidate any man that approach her to much).
     
    In the case his Master will be a child or unexperienced Shounen/Shoujo is he in general more protective as otherwise and would like to teach them everything the may later may need to know ,but also here can someone perhaps expected that ome rather non child friendly contents may be included however he will only raise them in their best interest so that they become confident,strong and perhaps flirty lewd but in any case good natured.
     
    In either case will he also ask his Master about their oppinion and respect towards the Sea and if they are respecting it or are fascinated by the oceans are they having a mark in his good books and is more benevolant to them.

    As he is quite moody and sometimes even have he frenzied moments were he loses his composed self and dwell in the heat of the fight ,in that he even loses temporaly the reason to dicern friend and foe.Should his Master be cautious and have beforehand made an good impression .
     
    As he is the Water Kingdeity of the Greek is he curous if he may encounter some of his "otherworldly" counterparts and is if that should happen inspired and heated up to see which one is the true number ONE.
     
    As he is the Master of the Oceans is he demanding absolute subordination and respect of Sailor respectively Pirate type Heroic Spirits as they gained their fame on his territorry and by his mercy ,it goes without saying disobedience in that matter =execution.
     
    He is as he is one that likes the beauty of Women would he like to settle the grailwar without bloodsheed and instead try to seduce them ,also will he glady play along some beautifull seductress servants and help them in their schemes but he is not a easy prey as it may seem...
     
    Should he encounter in an Grailwar an other Greek divine spirit is it depending on which it is like should he encounter Zeus is it virtually guranted that the Grailwar become a disaster where he would use all his equipment and powers to force his Brother on his knees and defeat him.should he encounter either Hera or Demeter will he at first offer an truce and would rather change the type and place of fighting at first but if they refuse would he face them honorfull.

    Their are few people he is completely unwilling to fight even if they happen to be other servants: they are :Medusa out of his guilt and would he encounter her would he sincerely bow and apologise what is lost control has caused her consequences and would be even fight for her wellbeing against other servants and even let her have the Grail,Hades as he is the only person he never could dislikes and he rather care genuinly for and if really a fight is unavoidable would that be a mutual fight of Honor ,Persephone out of respect as that she saved his Brother before himself which also is showing by that she is the only Woman he himself has prohibited to seduce her (which means much) and Amphitrite as he doesnt fight against his wife .

    Would he encounter some of his childrenn as other participating servants would he genuinly want to have a heartly parent-child talk where he would love to hear their lifestories he didnt happen to hear in their lifes,but albeit he is unwilling to fight his Childrenn in an serious death and life battle, would he like to show them what their father has in his quiver and give them a lesson.

    It goes without saying that if he should encounter Athena would he be determined to humiliate her and punish her for what she did to Medusa and his Childrenn out of her arrogance.


    Skills


    Classkills:

    Magic Resistence:A+(EX)

    As Poseidon is a Complete Divine Ruler is he possessing peerless resistence against Magecraft and even limited resistence against True Magic aswell does he is able to cancel and dispell Sorcerious feats that are placed in the Elemental Domain of Water or Earth(the Mystic Eyes of Cibele example wise)

    Riding:A+++
    He can use all vehicles and all creatures up to the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast beast as Mounts.
    Further is this skill enhanced by Riders Potis Okeanis are also Dragonkinds included and even other Oceanic/Water deities can be subjugeted.
    Personal-skills:

    Potis-Okeanis:EX

    Is a Skill that gives the user the Divine Autority of a Father of the Waters which is of the same scale of mystery like Potnia Theron and possess similar properties like it namely that it provide the power off creation and governship of the Waters of the World aswell its beings and lesser personifications which in Poseidons case are all Beasts of Sea ranging from the ordinary Fish and Crustacean upto the Highest Divine Beast class Seadragon and lesser Sea/Water Deity does he is able to exercise Authority and Command upto the Magnitude of a Command Seal over them one feral Waterbeasts respectively impose on Water deities or those Descendants an tormenting pressure which decrease their abbillities if they are displaying disobedience against Rider.


    With this Authority is Rider also capable of Controling Water in all its form as be it a part of his own Body respectively create vast amounts of Water which donate the wielder a Elementar Blast and enables Poseidon to take Control over the Climate on Country size magnitudic and either curse/bless the Land with drought or deluge .

    As skills does this bost his Riding skill is the origin of his Mana Blast skill.Aswell does it donate him a effect on similar to Mana Replenisshment which let him through the Waterbodies collect Mana and use it to replenish himself or infuse it on an other selected Person also is he able in conjunction with his Water Powers created Rain to absorb Mana aswell directly from the Land and even the Energy of Electricity of Mankind .

    As Water bodies are essential part of Rider beings is he able to use a form of omniscience over the Waters in his vicinity like is he able to by simply enter a Body of Water (this can also mean to just dive his Hand in an Pond )is he able to Access the Memory of the Water or by being simply underwater can he obtain Information around the Waterbody and its connected rivers,canals etc like Mana radiations Sounds,and by sing and manipulate he waves and the caused reflections can he use it as telescope .It goes without saying that he can walk on Water resectively can he bestow others with certain Blessings like :He can bestow Water manipulations abbillities ,can give a protection of Water skill . Or donate an other Person with the abbillity to breath under the Water.

    Contradictory Mind:A
    As Ruler of he Waters of the World has he established the Rain Seasons of the world aswell the "Mosaic of the Sea Waves" ,while he were a just Ruler for his subjects and benevolent giver for the Humen were he also capable of to be a ruthless tyrant and devoid of mercy for those who wronged him.
    At the Morning is he a loving devote Husband and Lover but only Moments after can he be a frenzied raper .He can be a benevolent Guardian over the mankind which delights in the happy laughter of the Men and Women in the Harbors but one the same Moment elsewhere satisfy him the despaired creams of the victims of his deluges or Beasts .

    Shape-shifting:A+
    Does denote he abbillity to transform the users shape into other beings or persons.

    Poseidon has countless times transformed himself like to have unnoticed his ways with women or his most Famous display of this abbillity as Demeter shapeshifted into a Mare to get away from him did he shapeshift into a Stallion…
    As skilll allows him this skill at his rank to asume any appearance aswell with the Appearance associated form(like as Bird to fly) or into an other Human and use his abbillities ,but the most favored usage of him is to shift into Divine Beasts if it whould be neccesary (Which is not often) but he himself has in mind to copy an idea of his Brother Zeus...


    Mana-Blast(Storm):EX
    Is the crystalisation of his Stom creating abbillities aswell one product of Potni Okeani .
    This Mana burst possess the strenght of an Noblephantasm one its own aswell be in an other class an on its own .
    This Version of Mana Blast takes one either the form of a regular Water type Mana blast which is the more "cost-effiencient" usage aplication like the can he produce Water jets to rocket him in the sky or to enhance his jumps respectively his Kicks and punches ,creating Waterblades like sharp high presure concentrated Streams that are like an penetrating and cutting "Laser" ,shoot Balls of Water that are having the power of a Cannonball.or the more Mana draining aplication to create Whole Storm like now is he able to create Storm Clouds that are even produce their own Thunders(a aspect he is more then happy to have) ,Storm bullets ,Blades of Storm like an stronger Invisible Air Version ,creating Monsoon Rain or even small deluges respective much stronger caled Version of is first aplications.


    Noblephantasm


    Groundbreaker
    A+
    Anti-Unit(Anti-Army)

    Is Poseidon famous Trident aswell an Symbol of his Divine Authority ,it is like Zeus Thunderbolts and Hades Helmet/Cape and Bident a Divine Construct of the Three Elder Cyclops which is possesing the Abbillity to Conduct and concentrade .The Trident three blades form a Rhombus </u/\u\> With the two outer blades a Half Rhombus </ shape .And ornated with its blades form underlining line patterns and at the two sides of the blade holder is decorated with an Blood saphire that turns his shape into Red when Poseidon canalyze great amount of Mana .then is the stav of it ornated with a modest decoration of line pattern and at the end strenghtened with a Knob .
    This Weapon would normaly be a Anti-Army type Noblephantasm in other classess but due to that his actuall Class is Rider are the true powers of this Noblephanntasm sealed and only useale at a weaker scale .

    This Weapon were famous for that it were used to create the earthquakes which is due to that this Noblephantsm possess the abbillity to create Tremor causing shockwaves on the Obect it is striked which strenghten the Impact force at three times by also weaken the resistence of the object, as example wise if struck against an Wall does it send on Tremor waves which will weaken the Resistence of the Matter aswell enhance the Impact for so that the area of Damage is alteast tripled .

    But due to being summoned in the Rider-class is he only able to use it one an single object/enemy.

    Atlantic-Wheel
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    Is Poseidons from four Hippokampoi drawn Chariot,the Chariot has an quite massive built casing made out of divine Weapon nobleephantasm equaling metal ,ist coloring is pitchblack ornated with silver line Patterns and red orbs ,streamlined contructed ,it possess Four Wheels with the two first are quite small and two big rear Wheel the wheels are equiped with extendable blades which are build like a paddle Wheel when extended ,the blades of the backwheel are in the fully Extended mode protrude one and half meter at the side in an Sabre like form ,the Drawbar has a Spear like battering ram installed aswell are the harnnesses of the two left respectively Right two Hippokampoi are flexibly connected by hinge like Connections and the reins of the two Right respectively the two left Hippokampoi are connectted on the halve-lenght of the complete rein and at th both connected reins are uniting on the Position at the Plattform so that Poseidon can coordinate the four drafts with simple minimal movements which result in instant Course changes.the yoke possess on the Ends of the box construction a sabre like thorn row for further Damage ppotencial.The Hippokampoi self are massive built and slightly bigger then the Gordius bulls of Alexander ,the possess a dark blue scaled Body three splitted sharp hooves at their forelimbs,possess Flying fish fin like blade formed Wings,their rear legs are contrary to depictions also hooved in an spiked form and are otherwise finned with sharp finnes.and also possess a with sharp finns equipped tails.Their Manes are also consisting out of fine structured red hair but are if provoked able to sprout fine like Spikes out of it.

    The Chariot is able like every Servant Chariot to cruise on solid Ground on land at the Speed of a plane and the blades are moved in by default but are moved out if one muddy Ground or move on or like the speciality of this chariot to move underwater respectively also is able to hover in the Air like any other Chariot .The Chariot is albeit it is even bigger then Gordius Wheel thanks to its streamlined form ,the contrsuction of the Harnnesses ,joke and rein structure highly maneuverable and much more agile as expected and can be similar like described above in his Mana burst be charged in two types of shroud either the rather Mana intense Variation with engulf it in Storm Clouds that are eextende the Blades ,edges and Rough scales of it and charge on them with thunders or the more "Master-friendly" default Version in to let the Chariot and his draft Animels be engulfed in Streams of Water that are creating a suction to the sharp edges and enhance the cutting Attributes of it.

    The Chariot gives of with the stoomps of the Hippokampoi a resounding rattling that remembers on an driving Train by the ears of ordinary Humen, and the Water torrent shroud around the Wheels annd drafts are causing reflections which are function as optical Camouflage which make the chariot invisible but arent concealing the detection of the collosal Magical Energy it radiates.

    The Chariot is able through the charge by the Hippokampoi to reach five hundred kilemetres per hour on solid terrain and in the case of entering muddy terrain,ground with dfficult conditions or if driving on the water respectively in an charge attack case can th Wheel blades be moved out which then dig into the ground and enhance the stability of the course.
    The chariot is able to roam at the Sky freely and the unique Specialty of this Chariot is that it can dive underwater and travel submerged,in the case of the Rider would take other people with him is he able to erect a Force field that build an Air filled sphere in which Oxygen is continuously brought in from the surrounding water and the carbon dioxide is derived into the water,this function can also be used in the case of that a toxic Cloud is entered in which case the protective Sphere also protect the Hippokampoi and underwater is the chariot even faster as outside by Riders might which defy the ordinary physics as the Vehicle now can reach 750 kilometers per hour .

    Combat-wise is the chariot also excedingly well equipped for offensively aswell defensive purposes ,defensive as that the iot is heavyly build primarily out of metalic components does it possess great durability so that to Damage it directly a divine construct type weaon is necesary ,and the Vehicle is resistent enough to withstand Anti-unit noblephantasm strikes to an Degree , like is the bodywork lets normal Archer class Arrows bounce of without to taking Damage,the Hippokampoi are durable equal to B rank Endurance servants.

    Offensively is the chariot constructed highly aggresive as the yoke bracket construction is covered in sharp blade like thorns,the sharp massive battering ram can be Extended to be on the top of the chariot as Phalanx to increase the Impact effect of the whole chariot like if a Boundary Noblephantasm should be pierced.Due to that the four wheels are in an W like Formation is ensured that the Opponent is unable to avoid the wheels,also is the underside of the Plattform construction equipped with an repelling bounded field that prevent that one can cling to it and secondly does it enhance the Jet like Water torrents,each Hippokampoi is possessing sharp and hard three splitted hooves that are acting as chisel that crush and pierce at the same time and the finned tail cause damage during the raam chase similar to a chainsaw.also can the protruded blades form together into a scythe like blades aswell can additionally can be the thorn row connected to a great scythe like blades and /or at the area between the fore and back wheels can be moved out additionall sycthe blade and the rear Wheel blades can clap together and form a chariot pile,aswell can the fore wheels be moved in for certain maneuvers.

    Rider has some particular techniques he can utilize with the chariot like one Noblephantasm equal one:At first does he lead the chariot in an round and depending on if he is underwater is build a swirl or if outside water does Poseidon create a Water Vortex but regardless is the Purpose of both the same that after one of the mentioned is etablished is he pulling the chariot in ever closer circles until he then dispell the Hippokampoi and the yoke construction ,move in the fore Wheels ,and move ou the rear Wheel blades and let the chariot spin aroun itself durring this is the Plattform standing still and the opponents are drawn to the centre of the wheels and after they reach it are the blades infused with Mana and snapp together and pierce lethal the foe ,he refers this technique as Kharybdis Abbys.

    The true name release of the Chariot evoke that the around the chariot water torents of riping force are Building up and upon chargin does behind the Vehicle build up in an Tail like form a ever growing Flood is forming until it is a crushing force exercising deluge Wall which even if dodge the cutting currents around the Chariot is he engulfed by the delugic wave.

    However it should be noted that tghe Mana-consumption rate is quite harsh as the true name release of Atlantic Wheel is draining a Mana rate that equal to two daily rates of a in combat materialised second servant would cost in mana back-up.

    Drómos tou Aigaíou

    Is the True Trump-Card of Atlantic Wheel ,which can only be activated by Poseidon by that he plug in his Trident with the tip ahead in an Slot on the Plattform Floor which then let revoke the true power of Poseidons Trident which is equal to evoking Riders true power as the Trident is the symbolised might of Poseidon ,after that and the release of the true Name does the Chariot start to glow ,the silver lines are glowing strong whitish,the red orbs dark red and the bodywork en shroud in dark mist ,and the Hippokampoi are glowing in dark blue and around the whole Vehicle is wrapped in an thunderstorm and Rider is chase ahead and now is Building up a like mentioned before a now through Storms empowered Waterr currents are now shacking storms created that torrtur the Whole Horrizon from the Sky down to the very earth as now the Chariot is now shrouded in water soaked Stormblade Gusts and accompanied by Zeus mockering Thunder which are shacking the earth and Air alike as the Chariot is chasing ahead is he now ahead now equal to the Storm wave whichs centre the Chariot now is and as the Storm is now causing earthquake Tremors ,unleash the wrath of all nearby Waters ,the Gusts slice nearly everything it Encounter and the longer the Chase is ocuring the more grows the Storm so that after a chase of 10 kilometres it reach the destructtions potencial of an Anti-Country Noblephantasm.

    Though should be noted that this trump Card is tremendously Mana consuming to the Point that an normal Master is unable tp provide so that if it should be used will it empty almost all internal Mana Storages of Poseidon so that in the worst case he for three days is unable to materialise and would for that Duration left his Master defacto defenseless.

    Cretera Minoi Tauri
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    Is the legendary Bull of Crete which actual owner Poseidon is .
    It is the Bull that King Minos once obtained through his trickery,which later then was shrouded in enchantments to let his wife the Queen of Crete loose her dignity and mind as she fell in love with it and sirred the Beast Minotaur aswell later let it cause havoc through out Greek until Thesseus defeated him and sacrificed him to Apollo.

    As Noblephantasm is the rather then a minion type then a mount Noblephantasm albeit Poseidon is able to proficient ride the Bull.

    The Bull is a spectacular Bull which is in contrast to he Gordian Bulls has it White Furr ,sharp Horns and possess crest like dark mane,dark Saphir colored hooves that Display his origin as beasts Poseidons and has a shoulder height of 3 meter.

    The Bull possess B+~A Parameter and is an phantasmal of Divine beast Milenia rank as he were and is through his Connections with Herakless and Minotaur one of the most famous Greek Mythical Beasts beside Hydra and Pegasus.

    The Bull were enchanted by Aphrodite and Poseidon which as noblephantasm sublimated in that Minoi Tauri does inflict a increased Damage Output on female opponents aswell is the amount of damge he take from female opponents reduced at one rank.Also does the Bull impose a fascination effect on all female beings regardless ,if human or beast and servants are no exception and the "victims" of this charm a must have mental interference protection skills of atleast rank A to completely negate the attraction -inducement effect otherwise can they be also through willpower resist against this effect but the longer they are afflicted by his presence alone and even Rank A or above mental protection possecing Targets are with prolonged exposure becoming more susceptile for that effect.

    As his Charm inducement especially affect female Beasts (respectively female servants with Beast aspects like Innocent Monster)regardless the species does they dont perceive him as Enemy and their Fighting instincts are numbed instead does they perceive Minoi insteat as mating Partner and aslong as their Master does nt order directly their attack. According to the myth of the creation of the Minotaur is Minoi Tauri able to Bypass the normal boundary beetween species and impregnating also non bovines,like in the case of an women will they result be presumably equal to the Minotaur ,in the ase of other Beasts are Chimeric beasts the product,also is the pregnancy respectively the egg development Duration shortened to upto one full day.

    However Poseidon is himself uncomfortable About the last mentioned as that he doesnt want to humiliate Women normaly but their are certain exceptions were he might make a exception.

    On the other Hand does the Bulls enchanting aura also affect Male allies ,perhaps due to that the Bull is the Symbol of masculinity ,in that it bost the Moral of all Male allies like if Poseidons Master should be male and all of their Masculine Attributes are strenghtened in a similar way like he affects females ,permanentely .



    The Bull himself is as depicted in the legends a ragin Beast that attack every potencial enemy especially male beings as he perceive initially female beasts as ...lets say atleast interesting .

    He is as Poseidon is his true Master and creator is he fundamentall loyal and obeydient towards Rider and is also surprisingly protective towards anything he regards as Allies like Riders Master as example.

    Tropiká teíchi
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    Are the Walls of Troy he build with his own Hands as he were punished by Zeus for his atempt to overthrow Zeus so were he tasked to serve Troy and Laomedon told him to build up the walls of Troy .

    After seven years as he finished the Fortress Walls was he denied is payment o did he before the WAr of Troy send an Sea Beast to attack the City but Herakless defeated it ,but unknown by the King of Troy had he cursed the Walls of Troy with an curse that one Beast will let the Walls and City fall ,unknowing did Oddyseus made use of Poseidons curse as the curse made the guards of Troy gullible for his Horse and let thepull the Horse in their City …

    As Poseidon were its builder has he Access to this Noblephantasm ,albeit originally the alls were build material of the mortal world werer due to the fact that they were build by the Hands of a God which make the walls a low grade divine construct(equal to divinity rank D) .

    to utilize Tropika teichi Rider has to pick up a stone on the Ground with the intention to activate it,then will the stone turn into a brick and upon placing the brick on the ground can he activate it with the true name release,then are the protective Walls of Troy rise out of the Ground alongside the watchtowers on it.

    However Tropika Teichi can only be utilized if in an radius of 50~ metres no active building are like inhabited Houses(building like Temple Ruins or abandoned factories
    are "inactive buildings"),upon activation will be all as enemy treated beings Riders that are standing in the fifty metre radius through spartial displacement moved outside the Walls (but dont damaged).

    The Watchtowers in the Walls are maned by the emanations of Trojan Arrcher that are able to shot at Enemies Arrows and throwing Spear with an servant attack force of Rank C,however the true power of this Walls is that they are able to withstand any Anti-unit type Noblephantasm and to damage it by a Anti-Army Noblephantasm it must be atleast Rank A,however the Walls are susceptile by Anti-Country/Anti-Fortress and Anti-World Noblephantasm.

    Further is Poseidon able to open the City-gate and let Allies retreat into the Walls one effect of this Walls are that every Allies Bad status ailments are removed and their wounds are treatened and their Stamina and health is recovered aslong as they are staying withhin and during the activation of the Walls of Troy is Rider and all allies that are outside its walls gain the skill equivalent of Disengage at Rank B.

    Alsso in the special condition that Rider is opposed of an Army like a summoned Army of an King is he able to summon the Walls instantan without the act of the setting of the starting stone .

    Also given that the Walls were the symbol of Troys resistence against the Greek Army are the Walls possessing additionally a pus modifier if opposed by Greek servants and all Troy originating servant are gaining for the duration of its acivation Max fame bost.




    Tromokratía ton ydáton
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    Is Sublimation of his Status as King of all Sea Beasts and the physical cystalisation of his Potni Okeani skill.

    In the Rider class allows this Noblephantasm Rider to summon any him subordinate creature ,with the Condition that this Noblephantasm can only be used with the presence of Wster and any Being can only be materialised in an its size according Water Storage which thank his Mana Blast is a rather trivial and rather easy fullfilled condition.

    An other burden for the usage of this Noblephantasm is that in accordance to the to summoning atempted beings strenght is the mana draining so example wise:a familiar shark or pelican that an be arger as their modern counterparts are cost rather negligible quantities of Mana,also the callng of Amphibian Humanoid footsoldiers are rather "cheap",to summon one true middle tier phantasmal are draining 2/9 of Riders internal Mana-stores,the summoning of Divine Beasts of Millenia/Superweapon class are costing the equal amount of an Anti-World noblephantasm .

    Albeit does this noblephhantasm contain the capability to bring forth Heroic and Divine Spirits like which are related with him(like his Childrenn or minor water deities) is Rider must offer certain conditions as at first would that require either to having a Master that can supply him tremendously much Mana or that he is reliant to having acces to either a gant Sea or the Ocean directly to collect enough Mana to do so .So is this aspect of Tromokratia ton ydaton in an normal Grailwar situation not realizeable.




    Author notes :Yes he is very powerfull but Keep in mind he is one of the Major Deities of the Greek Pantheon and that Homer stated that he was during the War of Troy the only one that could challenge and take on Zeus in Terms of power,and also should i mention that a First rate or rather S Class Master or the right Environment is necesary to make use of his whole Arsenal.

    as Always Feedback are obviously welcomed
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    and just like that, Koga is back to his roots. A step forward and two back, i guess.
    Your Poseidon is too op, even for a god. Remember that Drake cannonicaly beat him twice, if he is a powerful as you made him, that cannot happen.


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    SoT-chan is best ship and deserves love and protection. Dateman is awesome, funny, and tragic at the same time and I love that. I'm not even going to bother reading all of Poseidon, but just seeing he has 6 NPs and all those alternative classes is enough.

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    ...I'm guessing the word, "limitation", doesn't exist in Koga's vocabulary. Look Koga, you have to realize you can't keep making sheets that are too OP even by Type-Moon standards, especially when the subjects of them can't qualify for the stuff you think they can do normally.

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    I think you should give up, Drago. It's been almost 2 years since Koga joined in and he doesn't pay attention to whatever you tell him (or at least, it isn't reflected in his sheets).

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    It's been that long already?

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    Holy Nasu! It been almost four years since i joined!


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    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    SoT-chan is best ship and deserves love and protection.
    Aw, thanks! The overall goal was to make an adorable shipgirl waifu while also making a well-balanced Servant.

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    I think you should give up, Drago. It's been almost 2 years since Koga joined in and he doesn't pay attention to whatever you tell him (or at least, it isn't reflected in his sheets).
    See, Koga has the dreaded Thick Skull EX Skill, which is even more feared than the notorious Eroge Protagonist EX Skill.


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    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
    and just like that, Koga is back to his roots. A step forward and two back, i guess.
    Your Poseidon is too op, even for a god. Remember that Drake cannonicaly beat him twice, if he is a powerful as you made him, that cannot happen.
    To be honest i didnt knew and took into acount that ,Maybe was he plotarrmored by Drake .and i though also on that he is justified strong as he is one of the Highest Deities of the Greek mythology .
    Quote Originally Posted by Dragolord09 View Post
    ...I'm guessing the word, "limitation", doesn't exist in Koga's vocabulary. Look Koga, you have to realize you can't keep making sheets that are too OP even by Type-Moon standards, especially when the subjects of them can't qualify for the stuff you think they can do normally.
    please tell me Drago on Poseidon as example for which doesnt he qualify for ? if its for Tromokration ton ydaton is it strongly depending on his acces to water and in General is the amount of Mana supply he receives from his Master ,also he has five not six Noblephantasm.

    and as for his many other alternative classes:
    Archer due to the legend where he threw Kos on Polybotes sublimated as Archer class projectile ,
    Caster due to partially his Potis Okeanis and other feats like that as he granted Caenis wish,
    Berserker due to his temper,
    Avenger is due to symbolise the wrath of the Oceans rspectively that he is infuriated by the polution of the Oceans b the modern mankind,Lancer self-explanatory,
    Ruler simply as he was king of an divine Realm.
    as Ancient Giant will he manifest as humanoid Leviathan in his King of all Sea-beasts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    I think you should give up, Drago. It's been almost 2 years since Koga joined in and he doesn't pay attention to whatever you tell him (or at least, it isn't reflected in his sheets).
    just for the protocoll i pay Attention and i would say that i make slow improvements.
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    Well it's only fair to give commentary to the other's that have dropped by recently.

    Palamedes - Reworked:
    It all flows and fits heck of a lot better now, nice work.

    Karl Marx: Not much I can say that hasn't already been said other than the passion for the sheet really shows. You clearly poured a lot into that piece right there.

    Ship of Theseus: Good shipgirl/thought-experiment hybid. Deserves good headpats, I gave my thoughts on the PM and it's a very interesting concept that works quite nicely.

    Dateman: To quote Keanu Reeves, "Breathtaking". Equal part amusing joke and genuinely good Date Masamune sheet. Funny, tragic and deep is excellent work.

    Poseidon: Oh boy, where to start... I get you just want to make an overpowered sheet with nothing but A's and EX's but that was just ridiculous. Parameters are all over the shop (again, just A's and EX's) For some actual moderation, compare to canon god servants of a similar calibur (Quetz, Ishtar Eresh etc) and acknowledge even they aren't that high & the Olympians aren't even the strongest deities. Ishtar and Eresh are older, have more mystery and not that strong so a great rework will be needed badly. 6 personal skills and 6 Noble Phantasms are far too many, half that number. Remember that he's a Rider (though it's hard to tell, you're clearly thrown anything you can with any connection you can) so they wouldn't be at full operation - a canon example is Achilles spear which doesn't have all it's powers while he's around as a rider. I recommend keeping the bull, chariot and trident but nerf the trident and bull. He might "be a god" but that doesn't mean crap, Drake's kicked his teeth in twice in canon now. You say feedback is welcomed but nearly every time you go out of your way to ignore it so this will probably be the last time i comment on yours for the time being.

    Also, grammar still needs work as ever is the case with you.

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    Oi! You skip mine.

    I mean you do what you want, but you even give comprehensive analysis of Koga's Poseidon, so i kinda feel insulted. Like having your hardwork painted over by a mess.


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    Quote Originally Posted by the god of world-0 View Post
    Oi! You skip mine.

    I mean you do what you want, but you even give comprehensive analysis of Koga's Poseidon, so i kinda feel insulted. Like having your hardwork painted over by a mess.
    Ah crap, I thought I forgot one!

    Izanami's pretty solid and comparable to the other two copies of her floating around on here, she's got some pretty good "underworld goddess" vibes similar to eresh going on without being a carbon copy which is always good. I can't help but feel she's missing a little something though so I did a little digging (as i am not knowledgeable on japanese deities) and saw she was a creator goddess who created land with her husband using the Amenonuhoko.

    I was originally going to say maybe rework as a lancer originally but that could partially undermine your concept you've got going on, so i'd say give her a "Crown" skill like Ishtar and Eresh representing their authorities. Giving her corruption and the like you could call it "Hideous Despoiled Crown" or something that weakens enemies or something like that.

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