Fixed up Baldwin IV as Berserker.
Fixed up Baldwin IV as Berserker.
Well, tried removing some stuff from True Cross, making it less OP. Should I add something about it granting miracles?
Okay, now I think it is done. The True Cross now also allows him to sorta-teleport, in that he can strike from somewhere which the enemy doesn't see coming, like he did with Saladin.
However, he's too cuckoo to fully understand how to use this power.
Last edited by Slick146; October 30th, 2017 at 08:18 PM.
(Actually, instead of revising one of my old sheets, I go make a new one, go me. Inspired by the Mitsuhide sheets here, but I just had a small idea today about this guy and honestly I felt like writing them down.)
Spirit: Akechi Mitsuhide
Class: Assassin
PARAMETERS
Strength: C
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: D
Luck: E
N. Phantasm: B
CLASS SKILLS
SKILL NAME: Presence Concealment (C)
DESCRIPTION: The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. In his case, Mitsuhide can go disguise as a monk named "Tenkai", referring to a popular rumor about him that he started a new life as a monk rather than get killed by a peasant warrior. With this, he has a lower chance to be detected under his "Tenkai" disguise.
PERSONAL SKILLS
SKILL NAME: Charisma (E)
DESCRIPTION: The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. In this rank, leadership skills increase, but the morale of troops decreases extremely. His low rank at this particular skill refers to his failed and short-lived reign, or "mikkatenka", of only 13 days.
SKILL NAME: Mental Pollution (D)
DESCRIPTION: A twisted mentality that offers protection from mental interference type Thaumaturgy. However as a consequence, it becomes difficult to come to an understanding with others not similarly twisted. Possibility of around 25% that mental interference spells are negated. This wasn't confirmed, but according to himself when talked to, one reason of his "new life" is guilt from killing his lord Nobunaga. This triggers much more upon seeing Nobunaga herself, feeling guilt upon seeing her, and would repeat "sorry", "please forgive me", etc. multiple times.
SKILL NAME: Mikkatenka (B)
DESCRIPTION: The ability to temporarily learn a skill one doesn't have, from an opponent. In this rank, Assassin can learn a skill up to a day from an enemy of his after defeating them. Has a cooldown of another day; meaning if the temporary skill was gone, it would take another day to use Mikkatenka again. Like as stated in "Charisma", it refers to his short-lived reign of 13 days, the skill's name from the yojijukugo-set phrase itself.
NOBLE PHANTASM
NOBLE PHANTASM NAME: Flames of Honno-ji Temple: Where My Lord Falls (B)
CLASSIFICATION: Anti-Unit
DESCRIPTION: This Noble Phantasm represents the thing he was mostly known for: his betrayal against Nobunaga which led to the death of his lord, by setting Honno-ji Temple on fire along with his army. It is somehow a reality marble making it like Honno-ji Temple, where the target is placed in. Assassin also has his army along as nameless Heroic Spirits with all their parameters at E-rank, shooting and attacking at the temple, increasing the temple's fires. There is also a possibility that the opponent won't get killed by the temple's fires, rather get them to commit suicide. This refers to a question whether Nobunaga was killed during the fighting or by her own hand, leading to this NP's effect.
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Height/Weight: 174cm · 61kg
Source: Historical Fact
Country of Origin: Japan
Alignment: Lawful · Neutral
Gender: Male
LORE (Source: X, last paragraph by me)
Lore
Creator's Notes
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No offense, but this feels really similar to 34's Mitsuhide sheet, complete with Mikkatenka letting him copy Skills for a short time.
I'm thinking to change him up a little and I actually need some help with that, seeing as I'm still not that good at making Servants. (Edit: I was thinking of Mikkatenka as somewhat similar to Charisma tbh, with the "short-lived reign" thing, but it would be redundant honestly.)
Last edited by DessertTaiga; October 30th, 2017 at 10:32 PM.
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I was wondering if anyone could help with developing a personal skill for a character sheet I am almost finished with? The skill in question would be based off of Gawain's Numeral of the Saint but instead it would be Numeral of the Gambler and is centered on 7, 21 & 777 instead of 3. To help make it a little more different than Gawain's skill I was thinking about having it take effect when something related to those three numbers occur instead of a specific time of day as well as having the potential for a penalty instead of a boost to occur when 4, 13 or 666 occurs instead. Any ideas on how to flesh out this skill and make it actually work?
After randomly skimming over old sheets, I got inspired by a particular one for it's unique representation of the figure, and then I got the idea for this.
(I'll give you a hint, the sheet I got the idea from was made by a user who's name rhymes with LloydZolgen)
Source: (X)
Name; Cain
Titles: The First Murderer, "King of Killers"
Class; Rider/Assassin/Berserker/Avenger
Armament: Dagger
Alignment: Chaotic Good (Appears as Chaotic Evil)
Source: The Bible
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Human, Evil
Stats:
Strength: A
Agility: C
Endurance: A
Mana: D
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A+
Likes: Murder, Peace and quiet
Dislikes: Murder, Himself
Talents: Farming
Natural Enemy: Himself, Abel
Wish: A world without murder
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Last edited by Saron; October 31st, 2017 at 11:26 AM.
You dumb idiot! It's not the God of Jewish, Christian and Catholic religions! It's Judaism, Christianity and Islam!
How may versions have we seen in this thread alone, 10?
That said at least a Rider of the Wild Hunt is a different mechanical function to all the Assassins, Berserkers and Avengers we've seen. Admittedly I made one myself but it was before the 'fad' (for lack of better words) started.
Quest of Fate
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Last edited by MehKitteh; October 31st, 2017 at 04:54 AM.
Execute C:\local\lib\toh.exe?
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Dreams of swallow cuts.
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summs up a lot of my ironic weeaboo circles
true name: victor Frankenstein.
class: caster
alignment: true chaotic.
enemy: Franken steins monster.
allies: none.
catalyst: the schematics for his monster.
area of greatest fame: London.
parameters:
strength: D-
mana: A
agility: E
endurance: E
luck: D
background: a scientist/ mage who existed during the Victorian era of London, a practiced doctor and excellent mage who cared not for the root, rather he wished to experiment in creating eve, during his experiments he was able to resurrect a corpse made from multiple bodies , at first he was joyous but after a short while he began to relies his creation did possess normal human emotions or morels, and grew to fear her, he did make an attempt to kill her but even though he had torn her to pieces she was able to re attach her severed limbs and body back to whole. , and after she brought him a severed heart he ran fearing her, he lived the rest his life hiding from the mage society as he been given a designation seal, after many years two mages found him and attempted to kill him along with multiple individuals from the catholic church, on the brink of dying his creation came to save him hoping that he would make her a husband to marry , however he ruff used to create another "abomination" instead he killed himself so that his creation could not me made again and burned all of his research except for the original schematics.
he was recorded into the throne of heroes as purely do to the book written by Mary shelly.
personality : his demeanor his cold and calculating, but do to corruption by world view of him, he has tendency to go off on mad tangents, and can be extremely impatient as well a put off aragonite airs towards other people, he also noted by his master to die a great sorrow, and acts in sad way on the mention of creation, if he meant her its likely he would see it as his duty alone to kill her, and for him to be the only one she can hate, killing any buddy else who take that hate form him as he sees it as his only atonement. he is effected deeply by a vision he had when he died, a vision of him and his creation living happily were he taught her morales, and emotions and at his end released he had robed her of that do to his own selfishness, and therefore he simply wishes to atone.
class skills:
territory creation, C.
he can claim about the size of a victorian mansions, creating a replica of his mansion. it comes complete with a lab and a study, as well as some, comfy rooms?
item creation N/A.
personal skills:
gavainisng: utilizing a special device hidden in his watch he can use gavinsing which takes sourounding mana and gives to him making him an extremely mana efficient servant.
mad scientist, B.
simler to mad enchantment it increases certain parameters at cost of sanity, thou it does take intelligence away only sanity, it does increase physical parameters either but increases luck and mana, his skill given to any who are recorded in history or literature as mad scientists. at his rank at the cost of his sanity he gets plus parameters to his luck and mana(remember intelligence remains only sanity is lost.).
medical knowledge.
a skill given to those who famous doctors AND achieved a medical miracle of some level or form, which victor excels at both. it gives one instantaneous modern knowledge of how the body works, allowing the individual to more effectively heal, as well as to target specific parts of the body to do more damage to enemy servants.
NPs:
creation of life, A++.
it the recreation of his most famous moment, the creation of frankenstine(berserker) this allows him to recreate that moment, this NP allows him to essentailly build his own servants, and by using specific martial he could create into them a sort of biological NP. all his creations possess perpetual motion machines and therefore can use gavainising.
The quest for fitting Cain into every possible Servant class is getting closer and closer to completion...
I like this Cain sheet quite a bit, though. I actually thought of doing a Wild Hunt Cain myself, but I'd already pretty much exhausted every possible take I have on the character (might go back and rewrite some parts of Caster Cain sometime, not quite satisfied with him). Personality wise he's basically a combination of my Assassin and Caster sheets, which works out pretty well.
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Frankenstein: Honestly, the personality is probably the most interesting part of this, being actually pretty well fleshed out and interesting (well, I am a sucker for "tragic villain" type characters). Unfortunately the sheet is still riddled with typos that make it kind of annoying to read when not actively incomprehensible. You seriously need to either find someone to correct your works or get some kind of spell-check...
If you want some "real" critique, his Mana stat seems too high and none of his Personal Skills except Mad Scientist have a rank.
Honestly, what with you guys (mainly Royd)'s obsession with the guy that bludgeoning people with stone anyway?
not like I the one to talk, I literally waifu'ed my own creation myself
Being the first murderer he's a pretty important character to Judeo-Christian myth, but his actual nature and motives are very sparsely characterized in the Bible itself. That leaves a lot of room to flesh him out in interesting and unusual ways (as an unrepentant psychotic killer, an angsty wandering anti-hero, etc). I can't speak for other people's reasoning, but that's mine.