That was my first thought, you could just rip off charisma and empower allies critical damage or something.
That was my first thought, you could just rip off charisma and empower allies critical damage or something.
Quest of Fate
Apocrypha Universe Fate Quest Project
---
Beast's Lair Discord Server For Fate Quests
Hermes Servant Collection Master Post
you could do something with scent
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
I was thinking about this sheet for a while, but did not fell like writing...
Curupira(Picture removed, because it was setting off malware alarms. Try hosting it on imgur and edit it back in.) - mAc
Also known as Caipora, Caapora, kaa'pora
Source: Brazilian Folklore
Class: Archer
Other Classes: Rider, Assassin
Alignment: Chaotic-Good
Place of Origin: Brazil
Parameters:
STR: D-
END: E
AGI: B
MGI: D-
LCK: B++
NP: C~A
Height: 1,30 m
Weight: 43kg
Likes: Tobacco, pinga, mischievous lies
Dislikes: Hunters, human greed
Talent: Fool people
Natural Enemy: Hunters, lumberjacks
Attribute: Star
Armament: Bow and poisoned arrows (archer); Zarabatana (assassin); Tacape (rider)
Catalyst: A bottle of brazilian pinga and a tuff of tobacco.
Class Skills:
Riding skill C (when rider)
Presence Concealment E-~A+ (when assassin)
Independent Action B
Personal Skills:
Spoiler:
Lore:
Spoiler:
Personality:
A mischievous kid, as expected from a demon.
Curupira is hyperactive and irritant. Always running and talking or singing, it likes to fool people, even his own master, without thinking what will happen next. Any master who summon him will have a dificult war...
Noble Phantasm(s):
Spoiler:
Creator Notes:
My first servant...I still prefer create a magi
I planned to write this before new year, but my hands simply didnt move.
Yea, that last NP remind me of Nrvnsqr too
Faceclaim
Class: Berserker
Alternate Classes: Avenger
Identity: Kousa, Leader of Ikko-Ikki, also known as Honganji Kennyo
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Origin: Japan
Armament: A Naginata
H/W: 186cm/70kg
Likes: His Sect, His Fortress.
Dislikes, people trying to destroy his sect
Natural Enemy: Oda Nobunaga
Stats:
STR: B
END: A
AGI: B
MANA: C
LUCK: C
Class Skills
Persona Skills
Noble Phantasms
CE/Personality/Reactions
Notes: no matter how much i look at the sheet i feel there is something missing, perhaps i didnt focus on his fanatical buddhism side enough?
Last edited by massive_jojo_reference; January 4th, 2018 at 05:07 PM.
I mean
It's not like Japan Servant's haven't beenbeforewankedranked
Last edited by WhatShouldNotBe; January 4th, 2018 at 04:28 PM.
What do you mean by ''Ranked''
well It does not have any EX-es
and this guy stood up to nobunaga, who is pretty powerful lore wise
Last edited by massive_jojo_reference; January 4th, 2018 at 04:45 PM.
i did NOT notice that.
it was supposed to be A+, fixed it.
Those were two servants i had plan on making in the future
Curupira: I like this servant. I like the addition of Tupinamba language. I feel like the Noble Phantasms could with a little more humph however. I like the fluff behind the first Noble Phantasm, but i think straight up summoning a forest. The second NP feels already included in the first one, i dont think it warrants a separate instance of it. I like this sheet overall, its just that my Curupira would go in another completely different direction and that is probably clouding my vision
Kennyo: I agree that Kennyo warrants a sheet. He is the greatest leader of the Ikko-Ikki movement in Japan that terrorized the mighty powers. He and his army were the ones that taught Nobunaga first hand the importance of the matchlock when they almost killed him in Nagashina. He led a 10 year old siege against Nobunaga being the bedrock for Nobunaga's opposition. As long as Kennyo, and the fortress of Ishiyama Hoganji, the single place in Japan not led by a Daimyo, held, the opponents of Nobunaga had a chance. He certainly is someone very important in the sengoku period, However when it comes to this sheet i gotta be honest with you.
Kennyo is pretty boring. Outside of Zealotry, there is nothing particularly interesting in the skills and you picked the most cut and dry possible Noble Phantasms he could have.
You summon an army and you summon a fortress. I'm personally not a fan. There is no extra fluff to add more originality to the sheet.
I like the personality tab.
Also the faceclaim is not showing at the time of this post
Oh, thanks for the feedback!
Well, I admit that the NPs lack creativity, but it was the best I could do at the moment...
And the second NP allows him to summon the animals (and others) without all the trouble to deploy the reality marble, so I though it would fit as a different NP.
And what you think about the mystic feet of illusion? It was a cool idea but I think it become a bit... Dry. It could have more information...
In my mind i would just justify the 2nd NP as an extension of his Reality Marble. Let's say he has the dead Atlantic Jungle imprinted in his mind and his Reality Marble is bringing the maimed almost dead jungle back to live in its peak days where it used to match the legendary Amazon Rainforest. The maximum output of the Noble Phantasm would be deploying the forest as a Reality Marble just like your first NP, but he could also, bring smaller portions of it much like Emiya does his projections and Iskandar once pulled that one soldier to talk with people outside of the RM.
I also got stuck into Mystic Feet of whatever. I wasn't able to really find a good answer or imagery, in my mind, for the feet. Yours is good enough. If i were to complete mine sheet i would probably just copy that description tbh.
Just for comparison sake my Curupira would be one member of the Curupira Tribe, which are essentially the brazilian hassans. He would have Boitata as its Noble Phantasm and its wish would be to revive the Atlantic Forest essentially killing everyone where the forest used to live. You can see, it's pretty different from yours, much more wacky and OC-like, but its an idea that i hold dear to my heart, so it might have clouded my judgement with your sheet
Last edited by JetKinen; January 4th, 2018 at 08:35 PM.
I really have no suggestions when it comes to that group.
I guess in this day & age you're better making them complete assholes, but it's not like that really matters when we have dudes going through a tour of worst ww2 warcriminals as servants around here.
Wow, it's a pretty good idea! I would like to see that war one day...
You have such a history with this sheet, and I just came with it out of nowhere... Sorry for steal your lights.
Well, I will concentrate on my Zumbi dos Palmares's sheet for now.
Name; Adolf Hitler
Class; Rider/Berserker/Caster/Archer
Armament: None
Alignment: Chaotic Mad
Source: Historical Fact, Germany
Attribute: Man
Traits: Führer, Swimsuit, Male
Stats:
Strength: E
Agility: E
Endurance: E
Mana: C
Luck: A+
Noble Phantasm: B
Likes:A pure summer beautyAryan control of the beach
Dislikes: People of color, gays, cripples, etc.
Talents: Creatingbeach riotswar,Being an overall massive cunt
Natural Enemy: Joseph Stalin
Skills
Noble Phantasm
<I>I am so sorry for this.
Last edited by Saron; January 5th, 2018 at 07:36 PM.