Create-A-Servant 2

**kiwi** · September 22nd, 2019, 04:08 AM

wtf Magi☆Mari is my waifu now

also ixion was something i was considering but i'm glad you beat me to it, yours is way better than what i'd planned

**Anju Addams** · September 22nd, 2019, 12:34 PM

King of Padoru, some of my Sheets are missing. Dorothy Gale is one.

**Legendary Hero of the Chain** · September 22nd, 2019, 04:13 PM

Just a question to be clarified, is Solomon Kane, by Robert E. Howard, an old enough fictional character to count here or on the modern fiction thread?

**Skull** · September 22nd, 2019, 07:33 PM

Originally Posted by Legendary Hero of the Chain

Just a question to be clarified, is Solomon Kane, by Robert E. Howard, an old enough fictional character to count here or on the modern fiction thread?

If I'm not mistaken, canonical Sherlock Holmes stories were still being published after Solomon Kane made his debut, so I guess it ought to be fine here?

**kiwi** · September 23rd, 2019, 01:20 AM

I feel like the distinction would be like, if it's public domain or not, right? Or if it could have feasibly been 'real'?

**Bugs** · September 23rd, 2019, 01:22 AM

Dantes was a real person Dumas met and based the Count off of him.
Fran is a fictional creation but both she and Dr Frankenstein are real people.
I mean, we have a Conan the Barbarian and John Carter sheets here somewhere. Go wild.

**Bugs** · September 23rd, 2019, 06:02 PM

Class: Archer
Other Classes: Berserker, Ruler, Avenger
Epithet: Lady of Beasts
True Name: Xolotl
Alignment: Chaotic Evil(?)
Place of Origin: Aztec Folklore

Parameters:

STR: B
END: A
AGI: A+
MGI: EX
LCK: D
NP: EX

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A
Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.

Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer".

Independent Action: A+
Independent Action is the ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from one's Master; the ability that allows for action even in the absence of the Master. At higher ranks, it is also possible to remain for extended periods of time in this world without an established contract.

The Servant can operate without a Master. With a Rank of A+ that exceeds even A, the support of a Master is unnecessary even while unleashing a large amount of Magical Energy. It is an ability that bends the rules and allows for the continued materialization of Servants even after the conclusion of a Holy Grail War.

Goddess’ Divine Core: EX
A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.

Since she is purely a bunrei, and given that it is not a possession of a human being, she attains an EX Rank in this Skill.

Personal Skills:
Authority of Ollin: EX
Ollin is pulsating, oscillating, and centering motion-change. It is typified by bouncing balls, pulsating hearts, labor contractions, earthquakes, flapping butterfly wings, the undulating motion of weft activities in weaving, and the oscillating path of the Fifth Sun over and under the surface of the earth. Ollin is the motion-change of cyclical completion. Ollin motion-change unites agonistic inamics within an orderly, four-phased cycle. A perpetual horizontal transfer of teotl.

As god of Ollin, Archer has supreme authority over this fundamental metaphysical force. Of course, only a portion can ever be drawn out by the Servant container. Archer thus utilizes Ollin in conjunction with her position as the god of the Mesoamerican ballgame (ōllamaliztli in Nahuatl) to generate ōllamaloni (the balls of the sport) from the ether around her by causing high-speed cyclical flux in the air around her. She has thus also achieved perfect control over her projectiles, as Ollin can be likened to a ball’s topspin, as well as the internal balance of her own body. Physical strikes can also potentially carry devastating “twisting” effects.

At the Boundary: A
At The Boundary is a Skill for those who walk within the Valley, are as one with Death, and are familiar with its ways.

The psychopomp of the Atzec world. A being that walks within the Valley as a matter of duty and occupation. As the Dog of the Sun, Archer is responsible for guiding the sun through Mictlan--Land of the Dead--every night, as one with authority over the Evening Star of Venus.

However, as a god of monsters and deformities, Archer walks within the Valley as one treading upon friendly territory, free from the curses and hatred of humanity and the other gods among the demonic skeletons of the underworld.

Instant death immunity, charm immunity and the addition of instant death effect to normal attacks.

Lightning Striker: A
A Skill signifying the position of forward-striker in Archer’s favorite sport, futbol, combining with her dominion over lightning. What might as well be called Mana Burst (Lightning).

As the Black Dog of the Aztecs, Archer is associated in numerous ways as the incarnation of lightning strikes. Lightning was seen as the Heavenly Dog bringing the firebrand to mankind, a gift from the divine version of humanity’s greatest friend. Comparable to the Black Dogs of the British Isles, but on a much larger scale.
A further connection is found in Archer’s capacity as god of twins, as Aztecs believed the reflection of the lightning’s flash proved that lightning was a “double” phenomenon. As her previous incarnation as the storm-god Cocijo, Archer is considered the central figure of the Zapotec pantheon.

The soccer position of striker is a role taken by center-forwards, but differs greatly from what other center-forwards provide for a team. In short, strikers can be considered the “stars” of a given team, as they operate further ahead from other players and are responsible for shooting the ball more often. Strikers must be fast, and opportunistically take advantage of openings and blind spots. The philosophy of the striker is combined with lightning-impregnated attacks with great results.

Soul of a Martyr: A
Martyr's Soul is a mental protection that negates mental interference.

A Skill belonging to an aspect of Archer: Nanahuatzin. Two gods were chosen as candidates for a certain sacrifice, Nanahuatzin--ugly, disfigured, and poor--and Tecciztecatl--beautiful, rich, and prideful. The gods had determined that Tecciztecatl, being rich and handsome, should be the principal sacrifice. But Tecciztecatl was afraid, and succumbed to his cowardice, only taking his own life after seeing Nanahuatzin do it first.

Nanahuatzin stepped forward after Tecciztecatl fled in fear of his life, and with quiet humility ended his own life as his duty dictated, though he was detested and ignored.

Divine Protection from Wind: EX
Not the Protection from Wind in which one offers prayers to God in order to ward off evil spirits, but a gift personally bestowed on the user by a god themselves.

The single gift that Archer’s elder sister ever gave her: the

Spiral Jewel of the Wind God

Ehecailacozcatl

. The jewel appeared on Archer’s reincarnated form to protect Archer--as the new sun--from the harmful effects of solar winds. Though both Archer and Quetzalcoatl have been shown in art to wear their own versions of the Ehecailacozactl, it’s been attributed generally--perhaps due to popularity--to be solely Quetzalcoatl’s possession. Needless to say, after the sacrifice of the gods, it became Archer’s possession alone.

Gives absolute protection against winds. Also responsible for Archer’s high Magic Resistance stat.

Noble Phantasm(s):

O Lonesome Me, Go Forth Shining

Tōnatiuh

Type: Anti-Army~Anti-Fortress
Rank: EX
Range: 40-99
Max Targets: 1000

In the Aztec creation myth of the Five Suns, four successive suns and the Earth’s inhabitants had been created and destroyed before the world in which we live was finally settled upon. Each time, a god would become the sun, and a different manner of dominant creature came to dominate the world. However, the bickering of the gods made sure that these primordial worlds never lasted too long, disatassifcation arising with each successive instance of “humans.” Finally, Quetzalcoatl with the assistance of Xolotl voyage to Mictlan in order to retrieve the bones of the previous generation of humans, however Quetzalcoatl ends up dropping the bones before they can return to the others. Quetzalcoatl provided maize, and Xolotl provided his own blood, which were then infused with the shattered bones to create modern humans. All that was left was to create the newest sun.

But none of the other gods wanted the job.

It finally came that Nanahuatzin cast himself into the holy fire, becoming the Fifth Sun. But the Fifth Sun was weak, only able to operate at full capacity once Xolotl sacrificed himself as well--only after crying so much his eyes fell out. The transfigured being became Tōnatiuh, incarnation of the Fifth Sun.

It can be understood then, that Xolotl sacrificed himself to another version of himself, to become himself. A cycle of sacrifices, the golden typification of Ollin.

Crystallizing the event, Archer forces the anecdote upon one of her rubber balls, the conceptual Ollin transforming it into a pocket version of the very Sun itself. The nuclear rage of the cosmos itself made manifest, surely it shall burn everything to ash. Because the Ollin that shapes the sun is hypothetically perpetual, the attack can quickly grow out of hand until Archer dispels it manually.

However, as the Sun was created to nourish humanity through Archer’s multiple self-sacrifices, its effectiveness is lessened on those enemies with Man and/or Good attributes.

Lore:
The crybaby, tomboy-ish younger twin sister of Quetzalcoatl, Xolotl.

Far less famous than her older sister, Xolotl was the god with associations to both lightning and death in Aztec mythology. He was associated with the sunset and would guard the Sun as it traveled through the underworld every night. Dogs were associated with Xolotl. This deity and a dog were believed to lead the soul on its journey to the underworld. He was commonly depicted as a monstrous dog. Xolotl was the god of fire and lightning. He was also god of twins, monsters, misfortune, sickness, and deformities. Xolotl is the canine brother and twin of Quetzalcoatl, the pair being sons of the virgin Coatlicue. He is the dark personification of Venus, the evening star, and was associated with heavenly fire.

Xolotl has appeared as a “very doglike” sporty younger sister-type due possibly to her association with Venus, as with Quetzalcoatl, or the anecdote that in some cases Xolotl mixed the blood from his severed penis with the bones of humanity after she and Quetzalcoatl’s journey to Mictlan.

Her favorite sport is soccer, which she will insist to the point of tears that its proper name is futbol. Her favorite player is Ronaldo.

As with Quetzalcoatl, Xolotl has many different aspects that manifest as separate beings, but can be considered to be the same as herself. Nanahuatzin is one of them.

Creator Notes:
I realize it’s a little too easy to basically tweak what was done to Quetz--perhaps one of the bigger victims of FGO’s memeification--and call it a new character, but I attempted to include as much “proper lore” as I could while still making her cute. This feels a lot weaker than the last couple of sheets I was able to base more on firsthand sources...so here’s a cool picture of a potential alt-class Xolotl to make up for it.

Spoiler:

**RoydGolden** · September 23rd, 2019, 06:41 PM

Xolotl: That's a really fun sheet. I can imagine her getting into silly arguments with Quetz over whether soccer or Lucha Libre is the greatest sport (and then bursting into tears when she doesn't get her way). Her Authority Of Ollin Skill kind of reminds me of the Spin from Jojo's Bizarre Adventure. Was that a coincidence or deliberate inspiration? Also, I noticed a slight contradiction in Soul Of A Martyr's description. It seems to say both that Nanahuatzin sacrificed his life first and that Tecciztecatl did. Not sure if I'm misreading something but I think that could stand to be clarified.

**Bugs** · September 23rd, 2019, 06:45 PM

The Spin reference was definitely deliberate, but I couldn't take it too far since the Aztec's also have a literal "spiral" version of teotl conversion akin to ollin, but one that Xolotl isn't associated with.

Nanahuatzin sacrified himself first, with Tecciztecatl only doing it after. The gods were so embarrassed with him they threw a rabbit at Tecciztecatl so hard he became the moon.

**RoydGolden** · September 23rd, 2019, 06:49 PM

Originally Posted by Bugs

The Spin reference was definitely deliberate, but I couldn't take it too far since the Aztec's also have a literal "spiral" version of teotl conversion akin to ollin, but one that Xolotl isn't associated with.

Nanahuatzin sacrified himself first, with Tecciztecatl only doing it after. The gods were so embarrassed with him they threw a rabbit at Tecciztecatl so hard he became the moon.

If Nanahuatzin sacrificed himself first then you should change the last line that says he "then stepped forward", since that definitely implies he did so afterwards.

**Bugs** · September 23rd, 2019, 06:55 PM

Fixed, I hope. Thanks for the help!

**RoydGolden** · September 23rd, 2019, 07:08 PM

Originally Posted by Bugs

Fixed, I hope. Thanks for the help!

You're welcome! It's definitely clearer now.

**Criarino** · September 23rd, 2019, 07:54 PM

Originally Posted by King of Padoru

Yay, I finally acquired a stable connection and be more active! Now that we've finally surpassed Page 800, you know what's coming:

Spoiler:

I also want to say: kiwi, you beautiful bastard, keep posting those magnificent sheets.

First, thank you for the compilation.
But two things: after my KMS Bismarck, it's "Criarino" not "Crying", and I can't find my IJN Yamato

**BnEl15** · September 24th, 2019, 01:14 AM

Caster of the Human Subconscious
"This form... It is regrettable that I am not summoned as a busty woman in her thirties... Er, I mean- Ahem! Apologies, let's take it from the top, shall we? Caster, Sigmund Freud, at your service."

Source

Class: Caster
True Name: Sigmund Freud
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: Austria

Parameters:

STR: E
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: D
NP: B

Likes: His research, his "research", human nature
Dislikes: Pretentious people
Talent: Psychoanalysis, observation
Natural Enemy:
Catalyst: His ashes, his works, the master's repressed thoughts

Class Skills

Personal Skills

Noble Phantasm(s)

Description

Caster's True Name is Sigmund Freud, father of psychotherapy and psychodynamics.

At first glance, Caster is a charming individual. Similar to what he did in life, he tries to maintain an aura of a professional therapist, readily available to hear the woes of any "client" he comes across. Once in a while, however, he may slip up and reveal a more perverted side to himself. His calm and professional aura would disappear and he would be unable to hold back his laughter at the mention of childish jokes involving the genitalia.

As a researcher, Caster believes that his manifestation as a Servant is another chance for him to do more research. He is naturally curious and eager to find opportunities to further his own theories. That said, this motive seems dubious once one notices his obsession towards older female Servants, asking them personal questions without any regard for personal space. Should anyone confront him about it, he would claim that it is "for the sake of his research", whatever that means.

In more serious situations, Caster displays a more observant, manipulative side to himself. Accepting the fact that he would stand no chance in direct combat, he prefers to manipulate the other participants to fighting each other, occasionally using his Noble Phantasm to influence the outcome of these fights. He takes great delight in increasing the fighters' id to the maximum, reveling in the opportunity to witness humanity in its "purest form" according to himself, as mindless beasts who drown in lust and aggression. It is for the same reason that Caster shows distaste towards people who he believes to be "trying too hard" to be something they're not.

Caster is normally reluctant to mention his wish to the grail, believing it to be shameful and easily misunderstood by others. Said wish is to incarnate himself as a busty woman in her thirties. He claims that this is needed so that he may correct and further develop his theories regarding women, which was considered highly inaccurate and sexist by the general public. He believes that the best way to change his false beliefs would be by experiencing life as a woman himself. That said, knowing his character, it is unknown if that is truly the motivation behind his wish...

Lore

Sigmund Freud was an Austrian neurologist and the founder of psychoanalysis, a clinical method for treating psychopathology through dialogue between a patient and a psychoanalyst.

Freud was born to Galician Jewish parents in the Moravian town of Freiberg, in the Austrian Empire. He qualified as a doctor of medicine in 1881 at the University of Vienna. Upon completing his habilitation in 1885, he was appointed a docent in neuropathology and became an affiliated professor in 1902. Freud lived and worked in Vienna, having set up his clinical practice there in 1886. In 1938 Freud left Austria to escape the Nazis. He died in exile in the United Kingdom in 1939.

In founding psychoanalysis, Freud developed therapeutic techniques such as the use of free association and discovered transference, establishing its central role in the analytic process. Freud's redefinition of sexuality to include its infantile forms led him to formulate the Oedipus complex as the central tenet of psychoanalytical theory. His analysis of dreams as wish-fulfillments provided him with models for the clinical analysis of symptom formation and the underlying mechanisms of repression. On this basis Freud elaborated his theory of the unconscious and went on to develop a model of psychic structure comprising id, ego and super-ego. Freud postulated the existence of libido, a sexualised energy with which mental processes and structures are invested and which generates erotic attachments, and a death drive, the source of compulsive repetition, hate, aggression and neurotic guilt. In his later works, Freud developed a wide-ranging interpretation and critique of religion and culture.

Though in overall decline as a diagnostic and clinical practice, psychoanalysis remains influential within psychology, psychiatry, and psychotherapy, and across the humanities. It thus continues to generate extensive and highly contested debate with regard to its therapeutic efficacy, its scientific status, and whether it advances or is detrimental to the feminist cause. Nonetheless, Freud's work has suffused contemporary Western thought and popular culture. In the words of W. H. Auden's 1940 poetic tribute to Freud, he had created "a whole climate of opinion / under whom we conduct our different lives."

Relationships

Creator's Notes

**King of Padoru** · September 24th, 2019, 11:55 AM

Originally Posted by Reaper of Remnant

King of Padoru, some of my Sheets are missing. Dorothy Gale is one.

Originally Posted by Criarino

First, thank you for the compilation.
But two things: after my KMS Bismarck, it's "Criarino" not "Crying", and I can't find my IJN Yamato

I apologize beforehand for all the inconvenience, this seems to be the compilation with the most mistakes from those I've done. I'm going to go through all the corresponding pages again and make sure to include every sheet

**Legendary Hero of the Chain** · September 24th, 2019, 05:24 PM

---- it, you beat me to it BnEl15. Either way, it's an interesting sheet you have here with Freud, and you are right, it's quite difficult to think up sheets for psychologists.

Just a few points, Future of an Illusion, whilst a good concept, I feel is a little unclear, as while I understand its effects, I don't understand why you made it an area of effect skill.

this skill causes Servants with high divinity and/or mystery to deal less damage and take more damage while in Caster's vicinity

If you based it off of his belief of Deities being an illusion created by man, why does it effect any servant with the required stats in general and not only when fighting him.

Also,

das Es, das Ich, das Über-Ich

Beyond the Pleasure Principle

An amazing idea for a noble phantasm for sure, but I only ask to clarify that after leaving the bounded fieldif the effects are permanent, which probably would justify at the least a + modifier, and also a question if it would require constant mana output, timed, in which case does it take less time for stronger effects to fader or the same amount of time all around, or only active while inside?

All and all, these are just nitpicks, I know, and I think you did a really good job on the guy, I really enjoyed what you did in the personality and relationship section, especially fate Blackbeared(As much as I don't like their take on him as it feel a bit to 'Grand Order Only', and wouldn't fit if he was really summoned in a grail war)

**BnEl15** · September 24th, 2019, 08:44 PM

For Future of an Illusion, I made it that way because it was a belief that he published or "spread" to others. It's also an aoe skill because he himself does not fight in most combat situations, instead manipulating other Servants to beat up this divine enemy. This skill "indoctrinates" them with Freud's belief, allowing them to defeat divine Servants more easily.

For the Noble Phantasm, yeah, I guess I do lack some clarification. The effects only apply within the bounded field itself. Activating the bounded field itself does not cost much mana, but the cost increases the more Servants and/or humans he manipulates within the bounded field at the same time, naturally with Servants costing more mana.

**Legendary Hero of the Chain** · September 25th, 2019, 03:08 AM

Thanks for clarifying on that. Your logic for making it an AOE feels more sound now you explained it. Overall an amazing sheet dude, keep it up.

**King of Padoru** · September 26th, 2019, 03:22 PM

Originally Posted by King of Padoru

Yay, I finally acquired a stable connection and be more active! Now that we've finally surpassed Page 800, you know what's coming:

Spoiler:

I also want to say: kiwi, you beautiful bastard, keep posting those magnificent sheets.

Okay, this time I'm pretty sure that all the missing sheets have been included. Also, @Reaper, you might want to take a look for your Dorothy at Royd's compilation

**cooldownnow** · September 26th, 2019, 07:38 PM

Two quick things about the list. You misspelled Naimes as Maimes in the French section and yumidzuka instead of Yumizuka in the tsukihime section.

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