A very...interesting and well-crafted take on the troubled existence of Vincent Van Gogh, especially regarding his weird outlook on the world, his bleak sorrow, his NP, and his relationships.
A very...interesting and well-crafted take on the troubled existence of Vincent Van Gogh, especially regarding his weird outlook on the world, his bleak sorrow, his NP, and his relationships.
Throwing some ideas I abandoned a long time ago.
Not-WIPs:
Berserker Bai Qi: The Butcher of Qin, one of the greatest generals of the Warring States Period. Infamous for causing the deaths of around two million. An terrifying perfectionist in war, he does everything to keep his record unblemished by defeat. Funnily enough, this screwed him over on the long run (Died by forced suicide).
Berserker Davy Jones: I initially ran with the idea of "What if any attempts to summon a Berserker-Class Naval HS ends up being hijacked by Davy?" With Jones being a Dead Face of the humans that died at sea, and his NP varies on whichever HS was originally summoned. Kinda lost the spark for it.
Assassin Tanaka Shinbei: "Captain of Assassins" during the Bakamatsu and the de facto leader of the Four Hitokiris. Had the most kill out of the group, but I had trouble digging for his background and was thus dropped.
Berserker Herne the Hunter: Hunter who died in Windsor and possibly one of the Wild Hunt's many leaders. Given there's not much on him, he was abandoned quickly. Probably added "something something Human-regressed into-Nature Spirit."
Caster Hyakumonogatari Kaidenkai (Aoandon): If Nursery Rhyme if she was a collection of Japanese Wierd Tales. Based on the 100 Stories game. Never had the fire to finish the final stretch.
Saber Chiba Shusaku Narimasa: The "Last Sword Saint," supposedly equal to Musashi Miyamoto in terms of victories. Abandoned since I couldn't elaborate any more on it.
Last edited by SleepMode; November 29th, 2018 at 12:21 AM.
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Damn, that was amazing. Having written a Foreigner before, this one is proof mine was terrible. Everything flows together so well, and makes so much sense! Especially linking Starry Night to Aiueb Gnshal like that. (Oh! And hello from a fellow Spacebattler! I'd forgotten you were on here too!)
So, I'm planning to post Lucius Artorius next, and I have more or less the idea for the sheet done, but I have my doubts about one of the NPs. The idea consists in giving up to 12 people a smallthat turns them into discount Knights of the Round Table, with some of the characteristic traits of the originals, but that also gives them their weaknesses and forces them to follow at a certain degree the roles of the KoRT.Giftblessing
Example: The Gift of Tristan gives you a D-rank copy of Failnaught and Harp of Healing D, but it also makes you weak to poison, and you'll eventually have a misunderstanding with Artorius that will make you leave his side.
Would this be too wanked?
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Well, logically, it'd be too difficult to find 12 people to have the complete squad in a regular HGW. There are 12 Gifts mostly so that Artorius can choose the most fitting ones for his allies.
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"It sounds good when you say "For the People", but what you really want is the evil power to control others. Someone who uses false allegiances and conspiracies to ascend the throne is not worthy of leading the people!"True Name: Matilda
Epithet: "Holy Roman Empress" & "Lady of the English"
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: Historical
Region: Western Europe (12th Century)
Hidden Attribute: Human
Armament: Shortsword
Likes: Flowers, Roadtrips
Dislikes: Boring people, Broken Promises
Talents: Horse Riding. Mediation
Natural Enemy: Conspirators
Parameters:
STR: (C) END: (D) AGI: (B) MGI: (D) LCK: (C) NP: (B)
Appearance:
Personality:
Skills:
Noble Phantasm:
Lore:
Relationships:
Creator's Notes:
As usual, all comments and criticisms are welcome.
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Matilda: First of all, that NP is really badass. Her Personal Skills seem less inspired, being a fairly generic mix of king/leader related abilities. An original Skill might be good to add some extra flavor, though I don't know enough about Matilda's legend to say what it would be. Then again, they do all fit her legend, and maybe I'm just spoiled by GO giving practically every Servant a unique Skill or two.
Ah yeah, I'm pretty lazy so if there's already something that fits for a person's Skills then I'm all like "if it ain't broke don't fix it".
If I do think of anything interesting for Skills I might go back and change it, it's not often I get to do a female heroic spirit that isn't a genderbend so I'm pretty attached to this one. <3
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apropo skills there has the Ranks of God Resolution actually some meaing i know the relevance of True Name Discernment but i dont understand the ranking in Gods Resolution because all rulers are having the two per servant rule so where is the reason ?
ps:A good profile Skull the noblephantasm and her personality makes a good matching !
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; November 29th, 2018 at 05:47 PM.
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Serpent of Infinite Color
Foreigner Yurlungur
Class: Foreigner
Alternate Classes: Caster, Saver
True Name: Rainbow Serpent (Yurlungur)
Gender: Variable (Changes almost every time one asks)
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Armament: Sword, boomerangs
Appearance: With Sieg acting as Yurlungur's host, zir general appearance is very similar, but noticeably different. Their clothes have changed to match that of traditional Aboriginal clothing, including some white body paint. In addition, much of his skin has become multi-colored scales, covering most of his body, the only part not this way is his face and front of the torso, reflecting both (Spoiler warning) Sieg's draconic aspects, and Yurlungur's serpent aspects. Further exemplifying this is the multi-colored tail just above his rear end.
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Bio: Long ago, back in the Age of Gods, the Aboriginal people of Australia were separated into several tribes across the continent, each had their own gods and beliefs, and yet a single god, and a single concept, was shared among them all. They all believed in the Dreaming, the realm of dreams, as real as the earth, and they all prayed to the Rainbow Serpent, known by many names, one such name being Yurlungur.
The place known as “The Dreaming” was in fact a place as real as the earth, and the Aboriginal’s belief in it led all their prayers to funnel to this place. The result was the creation of a unique existence, something between a Divine Spirit, and an Outer God. And thus, the Yurlungur came into being, a deity of the earth, that was far beyond the reach of the earth.
Yurlungur’s unique existence prevented them from existing on earth, as Gaia would not allow it to manifest, fearful that it would bring destruction, despite zir good intentions. However, the serpent was clever, and circumvented Gaia, by “Sleeping” in the Dreaming, and creating a weaker body on the earth, or in some cases, possessing a human body.
Yurlungur lived many lives while sleeping, and through those many lives, ze began to gain a deep love for humanity, and the earth. Ze would help, and harm humanity, care for and chastise, them, to Yurlungur, humanity was zir children, and ze a loving parent. But this could not last.
Time wore on, and the Age of Gods began diminishing, and so too did Yurlungur’s connection to the earth. Each of zir sleeping’s left zir with less and less contact with humanity, and though Australia remained the last to be touched by the age of man, it was only a matter of time.
Explores from Europe came upon the land of the aboriginals, and soon the Age of Gods, finally ended. Yurlungur’s unique existence allowed zim to continue existing as they had, all be it weaker than they once were. Their sleeping’s also allowed them to continue visiting earth, in fact their weakened state made it easier, however it wasn’t the same. They could only visit in an intangible form, unable to interact with their precious children as ze once did.
In this time, the Age of Man, not content with how it would visit earth, Yurlungur began exploring and learning. Soon ze learned about different timelines, and alternate universes connected to the Akashic Record, and began exploring this places and times. In its sleeping’s it would cross into these alternate worlds, and even learned was to interact again, if only in small, indirect way.
One such occurrence, was not with a human, but a homunculus, eventually known as Sieg. Seeing him grow as a human, fight for his freedom, and that of his fellow homunculi. To see this and more from an artificial life, it intrigued Yurlungur, whom observed his life until its conclusion.
Yurlungur, as a divine spirit, could only be summoned if ze restrict their power, and take a human body as a vessel. Remembering the homunculus that had interested zim so greatly, this was the body ze chose to inhabit. And thus, Yurlungur is summoned as pseudo servant acting as both the Rainbow Serpent, and Sieg the man-made hero.
Parameter
-Strength: B
-Endurance: B
-Agility: B+
-Mana: EX
-Luck: A+
-NP: EX
Class Skills:
Existence Outside the Domain B+: As an existence born, and living in the Dreaming, Foreigner earns this skill, but it is lowered both by its connection to the earth, and its status as a pseudo servant.
Deity’s Divine Core A: While an unconventual existence, Foreigner is undeniably a deity of earth, earning zim this skill. This skill removes all impurities and imperfections from its host body, as well as keeping it in peak physical condition. Ordinarily this skill would decrease in rank to B because of the host being human, however since Foreigners host body is that of a homunculus, one further fortified by the powers of two Heroic Spirits, this skill is instead only ranked down to its current rank.
Homunculus B+: A skill denoting was existence as a homunculus, it gives one all the properties of one. Foreigners possession of this homunculus body has allowed it to purify the impurities of its design, increasing the rank of this skill.
Personal Skills:
Life in the Dreaming A++: Being born, and living, in the Dreaming, Foreigner should have this skill at EX. The only reason it is not there is its connection to earth, and status as a Pseudo Servant. This Skill allows Foreigner to alter and control Reality Marbles, while within or touching one. Additionally, any advantages provided by a Reality Marble, is automatically provided to Foreigner.
Dragon of Infinite Color B+: The homunculus that acts as host to Foreigner had the unique trait of a dragon when possessed. This in combination with Foreigners existence as the Rainbow Serpent results in this skill. This skill gives Foreigner draconic traits, such as resistance to magic, and breath attacks. This Skills unique distinction from similar skills is that Foreigner has access to all forms of Dragon Breath. From fire and thunder, to sound and light, all of them.
Fluid Gender EX: Depending on the tribe and story, Foreigner’s gender has always been different, earning zim this skill. This skill allows Foreigner to change their gender, to anything from male, female, hermaphrodite, or even no gender at all. It also gives immunity to any skills or noble phantasms that specify a gender, even if Foreigner is that gender when its used.
Man Made Hero (True) B+: The homunculus used as host to Foreigner had his body turned into a unique form of Heroic Spirit, because of events out of their control. However, in the summoning of Foreigner, ze asked the homunculus for permission to use their body. The result of his accepting both ranked up the skill and turned it from False to True. This skill allows Foreigner to incorporate new elements to its existence, allowing zim to improve their capabilities. This can only be done with elements from persons, such as other Heroic Spirit, Divine Spirits, or even humans.
Noble Phantasm:
Rainbow of Providence: May Life Be Always Abundant B+ (Anti-Army)
Foreigner is a god(dess) of fertility, water, and life, and was believed by the Aboriginal people to be the reason waterholes never dried, even during drought. This Noble Phantasm ensures no natural sources of water in Foreigner’s presence ever dry and allows them to give healing and fertile properties to any water in their presence. It also them endow their power into any source of water, including manmade, giving it all these abilities, even when not in their presence. However, this NP’s most useful ability, is that it allows Foreigner to transport them-self to any source of water within a certain radius of them, or to any water with her power in it, regardless of distance from her.
Rage of the River’s: May All Evil Be Washed Away A+ (Anti-Army)
Like the water ze command Foreigner can be calm and life giving, or wrathful and destructive, but even at zir most wrathful, there is an undertone of care. This Noble Phantasm allows Foreigner to summon a raging river to attack her enemies. The water of these rapids contains purifying properties, destroying anomalies in nature, and evil, resulting in this NP doing greater damage against Altered servants, Anti-Heroes, and Beasts.
Scattered Scales of Color: To My Children I Give This Gift EX (Anti-Heart, Summoning)
Foreigner has lived a great many lives, and has been many people over the centuries, resulting in this Noble Phantasm. This NP allows Foreigner to create scales, representing the many lives they’ve lived, and the many personalities they’ve had, and implant them into others. Under normal conditions, the implanted scales shall simply force the opponent to relive this life. However, if implanted into a compatible individual, it can instead be used to turn said individual into a Pseudo Servant of the Alter Ego class.
Interactions with other servants
Authors Note
Yerlungur: Cool sheet, but I feel that you've gotten the concept of a Foreigner a bit confused.
Foreigners aren't eldritch beings, they're humans who can channel the power of eldritch beings without going insane. So making Sieg a Pseudo-Servant as well as a Foreigner is redundant since the latter already sort of includes the former. Also, technically it should be Sieg that's the Foreigner, not Yerlungur. Again, Foreigners aren't the eldritch being itself, they're the human who channels it.
I'm aware this is pretty minor quibble, but I'm mentioning it anyway just to clear up any confusions about what the Foreigner Class is and how it works.
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Alternate Classes: N/A
True Name: Jean-Baptiste Poquelin
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Origin: France (17th century)
Armament: N/A
Parameters:
STR: E
END: E
AGI: E
MANA: C
LUCK: B
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Notes
Here is my fifth part of my Loki series this time as the who fought his last match as such i made the Noblephantasm to have a weakness against Heimdall .
Loki
(Caster)
Height: 212 cm
Weight: 93~ kg
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Attribute: Earth
Origin: North Europe
Weapon: Daggers and a Sword
Other qualifying classes: Lancer,Berserker,Saber,Rider,Assassin,Avenger,Beast of Betrayal
Likes:his pathethic Childrens, Attention,pranks and praise,himself,his Kin
Dislikes: Being ignored,being betrayed ,himself
Talents: forging sinisters shemes .
Natural enemy: Heimdall
Nominated seiyu: Takaya Kuroda
Parameters
Background
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Relations
any Feedback or oppinion is appreciated
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; July 22nd, 2019 at 07:31 PM. Reason: add some points
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Caster!Loki: First off, did you copy his personality verbatim from your Lancer sheet? I can't tell for sure because your link doesn't work, but it looks pretty dang similar. Not necessarily a criticism, since he is the same guy and all, but you've done a pretty good job up until now of distinguishing Loki's personality in his different incarnations so it's a little disappointing to see you go for a straight copy+paste here.
As for Skills, I don't really get the logic behind Arcane Arts Specialization. Why does he have all this stuff, when you even noted that the various forms of Magecraft have no basis in his legend? It just seems like needless wank to me. Especially since you already gave Loki powerful rune magic (speaking of which, you should probably rename it Primordial Runes just to be consistent with canon), I'd recommend outright scrapping that one.
Saber
Identity: Lucius Artorius Castus
Also known as: The archetypal Arthur
Height: 154 cm
Weight: 52 kg
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Man
Origin: Rome
Armament: Sword
Natural enemy: Artoria Pendragon
Parameters:
Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Luck: B
Mana: D
NP: A
Background
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Relations
Well, here it is, the fake Saber. I kinda feel this sheet is quite messy, but I'm not sure. It was a lot of work to make the crests for the KoTR that haven't appeared yet, specially for Gaheris and Palamedes, but that's the part of the sheet I'm most confident about, although I may or may not have butchered the Latin names of the NPs
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Lucius Artorius Castus: Pffft. I love the fact he's so stuck up about the whole Saberface issue that it overrode his wish. Mechanically speaking, I believe it's fine; A well-rounded Servant whose Skillset should resemble Arturia's (exception being Innocent Arthur), although more People-oriented with the first NP. That said, the cherry on top is the Legend of King Arthur NP - -for it is arguably my favorite out of the False Servant set - - the in-depth effects of each badge was really impressive.
That said, I'm somewhat confused with the function of Caliburnus. So rather than a giant Sword-Beamu, the heat particles rushes towards Artorius instead, burning the targets in their path... right?
Last edited by SleepMode; November 30th, 2018 at 11:05 PM.
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[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
Now Revamped!
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
Now Revamped!