Bruh.....
Bruh.....
This might be more appropriate in the magus thread tbh
Moreso, at least. There really isn't much to comment on.
What's your opinion on Glazy's "Q" sheet?
While going for the first inheritor of the First instead of making JC is admirable, it's still basically OC for all intents and purposes.
I should also mention that I'm by no means knowledgeable about Christianity, esoteric or otherwise, and while a secret disciple of Jesus is an interesting concept by itself, it opens itself up to being just another "Nameless X" sheet that I personally can't stand.
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"Nice to meet, master. Till the end of my days, i swear to live by the light of your eyes."
Class: Saber
Alignment: Chaotic/good
Region: France
Height: 158cm
Weight: 60kg
Likes: adventure, romance, beauty
Dislikes: boredom, puritans, preconceptions
Talent: Swordsmanship, singing
Armaments: flauret
Natural Enemy: Françoise 'Fanchon' Moreau
stats
Str: C
End: C
Agi: B
Mna: D
Lck: EX
NP: B
Skills
Noble phantasm
Background
personality
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I hate to sound like I'm begging, but anyone have any opinions on my White Rider?
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I'm not really too much of a fan of all the Horsemen being object-bound, bodiless little abominations. The Pale Rider set the precedent for that and I guess my Black Rider would be the least physical of them, but Conquest and War are pretty physical in terms of what they do. Unfortunately the sheet also lacks substance on the Conquest part, since his Skills and NPs seem to be fairly direct for a metaphysical type of Servant. Some more focus on, say, crushing one's enemies (and seeing them driven before you and hearing the lamentations of their women) and the overall results of conquest might be fitting. A random suggestion might be that conquerors build up power, only to have it collapse from under them, causing chaos and ruin. Or something.
It should also be noted that a bow implies a long reach for the conceptual 'Conquest', which this Servant is also kinda lacking in (other than the Demonic Defender of the State thing). I'm leaning here towards the responses of those have not yet been conquered, but see themselves as next in line... Sorry for being vague, I'm just coming up with things off the top of my head.
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Good Julie, although her Region is still listed as Japan.
Is? Oh sorry. I have been in a very japanese wave lately. I'l fix.
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Anymore opinions?
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I thought of finishing this for Christmas, or even making it an Archer for the monthly contest, but kinda got lazy and left it alone. I thought might've waited too long when another White Rider sheet was posted, but after reading that I feel like this is different enough to post?
Gender: Male
Big
Rider
White Rider of the Apocalypse
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Sky
STR: C
CON: A
AGI: B
MAG: EX
LUK: EX
NP: EX
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Lore
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Speaking of the recently passed Contest, I usually don't bother posting my entries again here as they tend to be somewhat lacking, but this one I'm pretty proud of and feel worthy of being added to the compendium on the front page.
As an aside, since I posted it right before the entry deadline I had honourably declined from editing it (aside from typos) so if anyone does have criticisms to raise now would be the time or forever hold your peace.
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Archer
"The final moments of "his" life was inevitably greeted by decapitation, immolation or just plain ol' hanging. But when the people need him, when they cry out in the face of injustice... "Robin Hood" will always appear once again from the depths of the forest to save them. Always."
True Name:Robin HoodRobert Deyville
Epithet: "The Prince of Thieves"
Source: Historical
Region: England (Circa 13th Century)
Hidden Attribute: Human
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Likes: Alcohol, Rebelliousness
Dislikes: Betrayal, Classism
Talents: Marksmanship, Wood carving
Natural Enemy: Aristocrats
Parameters
STR: (C) END: (D) AGI: (B) MGI: (D) LCK: (E) NP: (B)
Appearance:
Character:
Skills:
Noble Phantasm:
Lore:
Relationships:
Creator's Notes:
Rider of the New Years:
Appearance:
Source
Identity: Rider embodies the first sign of the Eastern Zodiac, the Rat. However for unknown reasons she prefers calling herself by the Japanese name Nezumi instead. Maybe she thinks it sounds cuter?
Alignment: True Neutral
Armament: A pair of curved daggers styled to resemble rat's teeth. They have no special abilities, but are durable enough to withstand clashes against Noble Phantasms.
Strength- D
Agility- C+
Endurance- E
Mana- D
Luck- B
NP- C+
Personality
Class Skills:
Riding- A++
The ability to ride animals and handle vehicles. Due to the nature of her Noble Phantasm Nezumi can "ride" almost any living creature, including Phantasmal and Divine Beasts. However she has no special skill in handling inanimate vehicles like cars and chariots, which is the only thing that prevents this Skill from reaching EX-rank.
Magic Resistance- E-
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank it doesn't negate magic at all, but merely reduces the damage a little.
As a mere rat with no anecdotes of resisting Magecraft in life, Rider only qualifies for the lowest rank in this Skill by virtue of her Class Container.
Personal Skills:
Twelve Earthly Branches (Rat)- A
Denotes the Servant's immortalization as one of the twelve Eastern Zodiac signs. Rider is the Rat, the "first" of the Zodiac signs, and such stands conceptually "ahead" of all others. Thus Rider's Agility gains a + modifier while facing enemies associated with any of the other eleven signs, so that she retains the advantage specified in her legend.
Powerless Shell- C
A Skill that makes the user difficult to perceive as a Servant, declining one's parameters and suppressing one's Skills. Like her namesake Rider appears to be a mere nuisance, a weak pest that can be easily stepped on. However this is just an act to get her foes to lower their guard around her. Rider excels at getting her enemies to underestimate her and then stabbing them in the back when they least expect it. In the Zodiac race, no one expected that a lowly rat could claim victory against all the bigger and more fierce animals. Yet Rider did, thanks to her cunning tactics and exploiting how others perceived her as weak and helpless.
Eye Of The Mind (True)- B++
A heightened capacity for observation, refined through training, discipline and experience. A danger-avoidance ability that uses information accumulated over the course of battle to predict the enemy's actions and discern the best strategy for achieving victory. This Skill is the sublimation of Rider's crafty and resourceful mindset. No matter how low the odds of winning, as long as there's a chance Rider can devise a strategy to exploit it.
Truly someone whose wits are her most dangerous weapon.
Noble Phantasm
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So here's a sheet just in time to commemorate the new year! I've had this idea In my head for a while now, but it was only now I got the inspiration to write it up. I'm pretty proud of it as a whole, especially the NP, which I did my best to make a fitting conceptualization of her legend. I actually didn't plan on the genderbend, but couldn't find any FCs of mouse/rat-eared anime boys that weren't ridiculously cutesy/saccharine, which didn't fit my take on "him" at all, so I ended up going for a female pic instead. As usual, any commentary and critiques would be much appreciated. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; January 2nd, 2020 at 03:25 PM.
My first Servant of the New Year, let's go!
BERSERKER OF THE NAMMU HEAVEN
Faceclaim
"I am the Servant of the class, Berserker. I swear myself to you my lord, Master. Let us route and destroy those who stand before me."
Class: Berserker
Alignment: Lawful Insane
Source: Sumerian History
Region: Mesopotamia
Trait: Man, King, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Parameters
STR: A
EDR: B+
AGI: D
MGI: E
LCK: B
NP: A
Class Skills
Madness Enhancement: EX
Normally indomitable, Berserker would never willingly accept another person as their superior. The very act of accepting another as their "master" is a sign that they have lost their own reasoning. Surrendering sovereignty is treated the same as surrendering their sanity.
Conversation is possible with them, but they follow their orders in the most roundabout way, causing them to act independently even while in service. The oxymoron known as a "Loyal Rebel."
Mutual understanding is believed to be fundamentally impossible.
Personal Skills
Prana Burst (Flame) : B
A skill that was attached to Berserker's Noble Phantasm.
A Prana Burst skill where weapons are empowered by coating them in flames, increasing their damage potential. Jet like propulsion released not by the body, but from the magical energy coursing through the weapon.
Protection of Goddess Zababa: C (A)
Berserker is one who received the favor of the warrior goddess Zababa. A composite Skill that originally possessed traits combining Divine Protection and Affection of the Goddess, increasing fighting power and tactical ability. However Berserker is incapable of using it properly, and so it has received a rank down in their current state.
At rank C, a plus modifier is applied to Endurance .
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Key Words
Nezumi: Okay, I dig it. The NP is very creative. Just to know, are you planning on making the ox?
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On that note, are you planning on doing all 12 (maybe 13 depending on how you look at it?) Zodiac representatives?
Hmmm, interesting take on the White Rider, Zork. It's certainly unique, but I feel it lacks any decent references to the Rider that appears in the part relevant to the Four riders themselves. The lack of a bow is an especially conspicuous thing.
“Good day, my Master. I am Servant, Berserker. ――Huh? What possibly could make me be summoned under the Berserker Class? Girl, did you just throw shade at me!?”
b e r s e r k e r
Faceclaim
Class: Berserker
Alternative Classes: Caster
Alignment: True Neutral
Region: Japan
Origin: Historical fact
Height: 170cm
Weight: 61kg
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male | Humanoid | Servant | Weak to Enuma Elish
Parameters
Lore
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Personal
Dialogues with other Servants
(Small) Creator's notes
Not really. Most of them don't have enough lore to flesh out a full Servant sheet even if I really stretched things. I considered making an Avenger Cat who has a grudge against Rat for getting him excluded from the Zodiac, but even then I doubt there's enough there to come up with interesting Skills and NPs. I appreciate the curiosity though.
Hey man, if people can make a Servant out of character who only gets brought up in two lines in a massive epic, anything is possible.