Originally Posted by
Drangle
Well, still didn't place, but got a few points, a nice handful of honorable mentions, and a shiny First Pretender crown. Movin' on up in the world! Just you all watch, I'll snatch a proper win before you know it!
And yeah, Eni, to echo some sentiments, S.G. felt a little... unsplashy? It was a fine sheet, but it wasn't remarkable. His abilities, parameters, and personality lined up with what one might expect, slightly elevated by the Servant container. He felt like, and I don't mean this derisively I swear, a 3-star Servant in F/GO. He's neat, he makes sense, his NP is a clever application of his lore in a direction that serves the prompt. But simply, other entries had some pizzaz on 'em. Look at the winning entry, it was like a whole screenplay instead of a standard sheet!
So yeah I know it's really vauge advice but next time try and put alittle more mustard on that bad boy, as it were.