Hmm, what kind of character do you need the faceclaim for?
Hmm, what kind of character do you need the faceclaim for?
Late to answer, but if you haven't noticed yet, there's the Faceclaim thread. You could always ask for help there.
But anyways....
Man these snippets are fun to write, even if they're not as "epic" as Scribe's. It's nice actually writing out not only my Servants, but everyone else's.
This took a bit longer though cuz uh... Ah, if you're a Persona fan, you'd (probably) already know. Let's go!
"Next up is...what the fuck?"
"How many times are you going to be surprised at our guest list, you stupid, hothead?"
"Shut the hell up! That's not it! Just look at this mess!" the paleontologist said to his rival, showing him the paper.
"...okay, I concede this time. Why is there so many crossed out names on this sheet?"
"Ah...that would be my fault," said the apparent culprit, the teacher sheepish. "I couldn't quite decide how to handle the categorization of them and hidden identities for a while and seems the draft slipped through nevertheless."
"So where is the—"
It was that moment a paper flew in Cope's direction and he plucked it up. If this were any other situation, one could argue the occurence was a minor form of "Deus Ex Machina"...and it would be right on some level as all three turned into the direction the paper had come from to see a sheepish death goddess waving in apology.
"Ah. That explains the mix-up. Our sponsor took the guest list and forgot to return all the papers," Fröbel said.
"Then I'll endeavor to make sure all the papers are in place," Marsh said as he grabbed a majority of the guest list, leaving about at least three to five for Cope to go through. "You can handle announcing by yourself, right?"
"The fu—of course I can, you pompous dick. Now go already!"
The man just rolled his eyes and left without a word, reading through the sheets while going towards their sponsor to check if she had more sheets misplaced to her designated area.
Meanwhile, Cope cleared his throat and began at last.
"Next up is 'Deoxyribonucleic acid', better known as simply 'DNA', manifesting through biochemist Johann Friedrich Miescher, fellow biochemist Albrecht Kossel, and molecular biologist Francis Crick as its vessels. By themselves, they do not have enough to manifest as a Servant on their own, whether it be that they only had one notable feat remembered in history, the recency of their achievment, or the fact that, well...one of them is a building block of life. But as a together, just like its own nature, these blocks were enough to form our guests today. It is thanks to them, one after the other, that their discovery can not only manifest, but advance the understanding and study of life itself and assist in human endeavors, such DNA identification in crime investigations."
With the introduction out of the way, Cope cleared his throat again, went up to the three, and said,
"We welcome you to the conference. I hope you enjoy your stay."
"Yes, thank you, Herr, uh..." the well dressed silver haired man squinted his eyes. "Who are you again...?"
The purple eyed burnett groaned. "Herr Miescher! Not again...!"
The paleontologist waved it off. "It's fine. I'm Edward Drinker Cope."
""Herr Cope. Thank you."
The rather normal looking man, with black hair and brown eyes, was staggered back. "Wait, you're Edward Cope?!"
"Yes, indeed. You've heard of me?" he said, smiling just the slight.
But then Crick laughed and said, "So you're the one who put the Elasmosaurus head on its butt! Hahaha! I didn't think you'd be here in this conference!"
To say Cope was twitching in barely restrained anger was like saying counting all the stars in sky was easy. "Oh. Really. Now."
"Hey, if you're here, does that mean Othniel Marsh is too?"
The paleontologist took a deep breath—
—then yelped as the Kindergarten founder wrapped an arm around him and said,
"Indeed, Mr. Marsh is here too. He is currently with our sponsor handling some technical issues, so you may meet him, but I cannot guarantee you will speak with him."
"I'm going then," said Miescher who just "noped" out of there, already a good distance from the barely contained firecracker.
"Aaand there he goes again," said an exasperated Kossel with a sigh. He turned to his fellow German sheepishly. "Sorry about that."
"Oh it's fine. I'm used to such behaviors. And he'll be in good hands. Our sponsor happens to be a wonderful lady."
The man seemed almost...surprised, like he didn't expect to find something familiar. "...okay. If you're sure."
"Well I'm gonna be off talking with the others so we can get our Noble Phantasm running for the conference proper."
"Ah, then I might suggest Dr. McClintock? She's a cytogeneticist. She would be that woman over there."
"Wait, really?! Thank you, Mr. Fröbel! I'll do just that!"
With that, Cope's source of irritation had left and he was able to properly defuse.
Which Kossel noticed. "Sorry about Pr. Crick. He's...well, you've just seen how he's like."
The paleontologist waved it off. "It's fine. My apologies for such boorish behavior. Especially as I need to announce the next guest."
"I'll help Mr. Kossel, then," the teacher said.
"All right."
And so Cope moved on to do so.
Meanwhile Fröbel said, "So is there anything you want to do in particular, Herr Kossel? Or would you like to join Pr. Crick?"
""...oh, yes, I will. It's just...you reminded me of my old mentor, that I couldn't help but be startled. He was a good teacher, like you."
The teacher brightened. "Oh is that so? Ha ha, I'm honored you would compare me favorably to someone you think well of. I'm not much of biochemist though, but I do love botany."
""Oh you do? Ah, wait, you named your education system 'kindergarten', of course you are."
"Ah, that is a reasonable assumption. However, the funny thing is..."
And so the two ended up chatting in the background.
Back with Cope...
Unfortunately for him, his eye was twitching again, because he recognized the name.
"First that Potter lass, then that Crick fellow, now this man... Lady Luck is having a field day with me..."
He sighed, pinching the bridge of his nose as he silently thanked God that at least he didn't have to deal with Marsh now. He knew he wouldn't be able to deal with "two" of him, for the next guest was even more like his rival than even Dr. Potter.
"All right then..."
"Next we have none other than Sir Richard Owen! A man who is not only known in the field of biology and comparative anatomy...but also in paleontology! For he is none other than the man who had named dinosaurs, dubbing them 'dinosauria'. Unfortunately, due to various circumstances, he fell from fame during his life... But thankfully for him, his legacy still lives on as paleontology would flourish, with dinosaurs as a 'flagship' of the field."
With thag introduction done, he repeated his actions earlier and walked up to the guest themself.
"We welcome you to the conference, Sir Owen. I hope you enjoy your stay," said a gritting Cope.
Which the naturalist doesn't seem to notice as he brightens and says, "Ah! Well if it isn't Edward Cope! I should've known you would be here. Would you mind terribly if I see you research fossils? I am acquainted myself and am curious as to your methods. In fact, I can show you my Iguanadon. I promise it's genuinely the first!"
His smile strained. "Oh, I would be honored. It's always good to examine the earliest known bones of species."
He wasn't. He reminded him too much of Marsh. And yourself. But it was for that same reason he was doing his best to keep up his gentleman manners.
Before Sir Owen could do as he wished though—
"Wait you're from another world?! I must take a sample from you! When am I ever going to examine DNA from another universe entirely?!"
—Cope said, "Ah, excuse me, but it seems I need to handle the other guests before I have to announce the next one. If you would excuse me."
And left before the namer of dinosaurs could answer.
Yes, Cope knew the problem was minimal, but he wouldn't have lasted long in the Bone Wars if he couldn't make subtle getaways.
"Kossel, Meischer, Crick":no deoxys fc smh /jkProps for managing to make a Servant out of DNA! I really like the idea, and I have no complaints on the technical side with skills and the NP, or at least things of note of them (other than I guess finding the imagery for the NP release really cool). My favorite part would actually have to be the intro paragraph. But I'm gonna have to agree with doncosaco. It feels a little but on the barebones side, even ignoring the fact that meant I had to extrapolate their personality from what little lines they had (which i hope i did okay... I DID MY BEST OK???). Though I do have a penchant for longer sheets, so take this with a grain of salt, but I felt like you could've at least given a bit more of the three "components" of Binder DNA.
Richard Owen: Oh hey! Someone I do know! Well not a lot, comparitively to others in the paleontology field...but still. Hey! I'll admit, I couldn't help but think of my own Cope and Marsh sheet reading this one, not just because of well...them being the hosts and paleontologists. But because, like them, they were prominent in their field...but their own actions led to their downfall. And because of a "rivalry" too. Though in Owen's case it miiight be more one-sided than Cope and Marsh and didn't have the Bone Wars' "tragedy" (if you can even call it that) of former friends turning into bitter rivals. Overall, I really liked the sheet. The technical side complimented the personality and story and such that the I liked the whole than if I had considered them separately. I will say though, for the NP, since it was called "Dinosauria", I had expected that maybe you'd somehow incorporate the "a person or thing that is outdated or has become obsolete because of failure to adapt to changing circumstances" meaning of dinosaur because of a combination of Owen being opposed to Darwin's Natural Selection and that the meaning is kind of a "slander" version of dinosaurs, which is something he did. Though saying that, and seeing his NP, I just realized I'm not sure how that would work, and the actual NP is still really neat.
Only one "complaint' though.
And by that I mean it isn't really a complaint so much as well...
Awwww, no Crystal Palace interaction? I was kinda expecting one with the mentions of Crystal Palace. Oh well...
(Note: hopefully i can do more with him in later parts because ironically the sheet that was minimalistic it ended up having more screentime than the servant sheet that was longer)
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Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Chapter 50 on: September 27, 2023 (GMT +8:00)
Velvet Throne
My list of my Servants! Still small for now.
Thank you for your kind words. I didn't do much with the crystal palace simply because I think it would be more appropriate for Caster Owen rather than Avenger Owen. I definitely am motivated to make a caster variant... so I think I will and put it in CaS3. For my second entry... well dunno if I'll make it in time but I've been thinking of just doing Darwin. We'll see. I do have a secondary idea if someone else posts him before me XD
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
"Through the halls of the Throne of Heroes and the deepest recesses of the afterlife, I have answered your call.""Your basic practice shall be thus: condense the spirit, and regulate the breath."
-Zhang Sanfeng
"I am not as well-versed in the art of tai chi as my other Classes, but this Saint Graph is still capable of combat in and of itself."
"...Oh dear. I seem to have forgotten to introduce myself. My apologies, Master."
"I am Servant Caster. My True Name is Zhang Sanfeng. May this meeting be auspicious, and your wishes be granted through virtue."
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Class: Caster
Other Eligible Classes: Assassin, Boxer, Ruler
True Name: Zhang Sanfeng
Aliases: Father of Tai Chi, Tong Junbao, The Immortal Sage, Sanfengzi
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Man
Origin: Historical Fact
Region: China (Yuan Dynasty)
Height: 173 cm / 5'8''
Weight: 74.8 kg / 165 lbs
Traits: Male, Humanoid, Hominidae, Servant, Divine, Weak to Enuma Elish
Catalyst: A copy of the Da Dao Lun, a book written by Sanfeng on ruminations of the universe and the primal nature of the world
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Talents: Tai Chi, Meditation, Teaching, Martial Arts, Swordplay
Natural Enemies: Qin Shi Huang, Confucius
Likes: High places, cereal, observing nature, travelling, Taoism
Dislikes: Fame, wealth, squandered potential, Confucianism, cinnabar
Personality: A wise and learned scholar, and a cool-headed yet fierce warrior on the field, Zhang Sanfeng is the embodiment of the Taoist endgoal. Rumored to have achieved immortality and lived throughout the centuries as a Zhenren, Zhang is said to be knowledgeable in all manner of topics related to nature, spending his days in the Wudang Mountains. Reliable and willing to educate anyone who asks him about any topic, he feels like the reliable teacher you'd see in extracurricular classes after school tutoring other people.
...However, there is something off about him. He seems to gather information with a manic fervor to match his ability to teach others, soaking in knowledge like a sponge. Rather than a 'reliable teacher' like he initially presents himself to be, this is more of a greedy info broker who would exchange knowledge and rumors for monetary gain. A far cry from the enlightened man that is Zhang Sanfeng.
Wish for the Grail: "I have attained immortality and come to understand the world and existence. Even if I were to grow bored of my old bearings, I can simply mingle with the current humanity and enjoy some time learning new trends and entertainments. What could I possibly have to wish for?"
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"Hm? Ah, shit."
A man lifts his hand, placidly staring at the bug that appeared seemingly put of nowhere. With a flick of his wrist, he watches it sail off and disperse into magical energy.
"Tsk, still appearing out of nowhere, how funny. I really hope no one notices. Ahh, I really need a drink."
The man scratches the back of his head as he walks off to where he felt a call. A gathering of fellow scientist seems like it would be a grand occasion.
True Name: Francesco Redi
Class: Caster
Alignment: True Neutral
Region: Italy
Source: Historical Fact
Armament: Insects
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: E
Mana: B
Luck: A
Class Skills:
Territory Creation B
A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. At this rank, the creation of a workshop is possible.
"Eh, I was always pretty okay with anywhere that lets me do my experiments. A decent size is very preferable though."
Item Construction B+
A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. A graduate from the University of Pisa, Caster had gained a doctorate in medicine and served as head physician in the Medici Court apothecary.
"Ah, that was a time in my life. I can try to work up some medicine in case people get sick though I've gotten better at handling poisons. Then again, medicine and poison are linked, right?"
Personal Skills:
Pioneer of the Stars EX
The unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized". In Redi's case, not just being the origin of several fields of science but also as one who advanced the scientific method of experimentation to a new level.
"...I was just a rationalist who wanted to pursue the truth and unmask the untruths I found in the world. If people want to congratulate me for my findings then props to them."
Infested Body E~A+
A skill developed by the presence of Caster's noble phantasm. Gained and exacerbated through the continual cultivation of parasitic organisms in one's body. The rank denotes not the strength of the skill but the measure of contamination within the body. Through his noble phantasm, Caster himself is unaffected by the presence of the parasites or any parasite he may be host to as he can be likened to a container than a true host.
"Eh, try not to get too close to me. Hm, does it hurt? Well no, but the idea of having so many…things crawling around inside is…something that takes a while to get used to."
Observation of Vipers B
A skill representative of an undertaking to debunk the myths surrounding venomous snakes. In his study, Caster had dismissed multiple myths of his time concerning snakes such as being able to break glass, have their venom in the gallbladder, poison with a single bite, and drink wine. A rather niche skill that affects the capabilities of those with connections to snakes.
"I was sorely disappointed when I found out snakes can't drink wine. Would've found a worthwhile drinking buddy."
Noble Phantasm
Bio
Creator's Note: I swear I had nothing to do with the previous sheet. This is literally coincidence and nothing more. Seriously. Though it is funny that a servant named Parasitism is followed by the Father of Modern Parasitology.
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I cannot believe I have been ripped off already (this is a joke)
I also cannot believe you used the funny bugman Gregor himself from Limbus Company for the faceclaim (this is not a joke)
The bug man has manifested. We gotta hide any Samsabucks in the vicinity.
Interesting.
...
Let me have a go. After all... Dendrology is too part of Biology.
Servant List The Wyvern's Managerie Lostbelt Information South America of the Nasuverse Fanfics The Voice of Thunder
ooh, a botany-based Servant does sound well fitting for this contest.
"Reading it is like entering a garden with all kinds of colors. It is also like entering a palace with all types of treasures. Like a crystal flask and a jade mirror, it clearly shows each detail. The contents are extensive, but not overabundant. They sum up the result of careful studies. It is more than just a medical book. It is a comprehensive work on the investigation of nature. It should be a work valued by both the Emperor and the people."
- Wang Shizhen, Ming-dynasty poet, historian, literary analyst, preface to the first edition of the Compendium of Materia Medica (1596)
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Super interestin Voyager, his np being more about passing on medical info to others is great.
Ughh, i wont make it in time due to more work.
Binder Gregor Mendel is up for grabs
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold the vault of Heroes.
The King made the community prosper. Enjoy for free. Paid by your taxes.
University of Formatting | Museum of Legends | Memorandum of Kings
Theme here, listen if you like!
MoonCancer of the Foreign Depths
Charles Frederick Holder
Other Classes: Caster
True Name: Charles Frederick Holder
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Massachusetts, USA
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: A
Height: 158 cm
Weight: 55.8 kg
Likes: Fishing, Hunting, Sailing, Illicit substances
Dislikes: Heavy Traffic
Talent: Fishing, finding strange phenomena
Natural Enemy: Tristan
Attribute: Man
Traits: Hominidae Servant, Humanoid, Immune to Pigify, Mechanical, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Fishing Line, fish hooks, fishing knife
Catalyst: Pages describing her discovery of the Esperanza Stone, ripped from a copy of Charles Hoy Fort's The Book of the Damned
Lore:
Born in 1851 in Massachusetts to wealthy Zoologist Joseph Bassett Holder, Charlie grew up in a happy upper-class life, heading off to the US naval academy upon reaching adulthood. Instead of pursuing a career in the armed forces, he instead left upon graduation, becoming a curator for the Museum of Natural History, before moving to California in 1885. There, he would spend the rest of the years of his life becoming an accomplished writer, conservationist and marine zoologist, becoming widely recognized as the founder and driving force behind Sport-Fishing. An accomplished businessman as well, he would live largely, gaining a reputation as a philanthropist, and founded the Tuna Club of Avalon, a gentleman's club, and an international organization that called for proper management of all game fish.
His work as a naturalist and writer marked him as a "finder and recorder of things"- thoroughly documenting marine life, and collecting data on bizarre oddities from around the world. Notably, he recognized and documented the sealife of the Mesopelagic zone, otherwise known as the Twilight zone in the ocean, which was not formally recognized scientifically until the 1940's. There was always an attraction to the strange with him- culminating on his discovery of the Esperanza Stone. A massive boulder, fallen from the sky in the middle of the Mexican countryside, covered in symbols. No locals had touched it, and when Charlie got to it, it was covered by not only Mayan symbols, but also Greek and Hindu ones. While he couldn't manage to get the Smithsonian to come get it, it was nonetheless a strange find notable in the beginnings of popular occultism.
Two years later, he would die from being hit by a car while being on various substances after coming out of his Club.
Personality:
An absolute party girl. Naturally as a Caster, her male equivalent is already a quintessential Californian Surfer-Stoner type, goofy, easily excitable and emotional, but well-meaning. She as a MoonCancer however, has received a slightly altered nature, introducing an impulsive sense of mischief and inclination towards thrill seeking. Already one for excess, born to money and without true responsibility, she's now become the worst kind of person to get involved with at the back of a club: an instigator. Appearing reasonable, if rather rowdy at first, give her an inch, and she'll take a mile- a round of drink at the bar turns into a drinking contest, shot for shot. That turns into taking a tab of acid before turning to the dance floor, a haze of light and sound followed by awakening from your trance hours later, with no shirt or shoes in a mansion foreign to you, only for her to appear from down the hall with naught but a ski mask and a bath robe carrying duffel bags. Upon confessing that you have no recollection of the past hours, you find out that you and her started a club brawl, robbed a bank, eloped, broke into a billionaire's mansion after a police chase (where you are now), and your only choice is to sneak aboard a plane and move to a tropical island or South America to lie low for a few years. You know, that type of person.
"Everyone has a buddy like that, right master?" she may ask with rhetorical intent, actually thinking such a statement to be true- which it is absolutely not, thank the gods. A master should be good for her, being able to reign her in- she gets that basic dynamic, and will go along with it, but there is simply an integral, inborne tendency to flirt with the odd and extreme. She's got a sailor's soul, in the sense that she can't quite ever feel settled at one port for too long- it is a necessity that she keeps moving, literally and figuratively. Despite the overwhelming devil-may-care attitude, if you can actually get her to ponder something for more than thirty seconds, she proves to be a solid storyteller and conversationalist. It's just an issue getting there, unless you indulge her wild tendencies and can keep up with them somewhat in order to get her to level with you. She's the type of person to go, "Damn bro, that's crazy, you should do cocaine about it." and be completely genuine in her saying as such.
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: C
Cancels spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of greater magecraft and Greater Rituals.
Charlie's been afforded the skill thanks to her connection to the Moon Cell, and due to her class.
Item Creation: D+
A caster-Class Skill used to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use.
MoonCancer can only use it to create fishing supplies, though due to her extensive history as an angler in life, the quality of her fishing line allows her a positive modifier
Angler: A
A Skill denoting talent and knowledge of fishing gear and fishing skills. It is too niche to serve as a proper class container (currently), and thus it manifests as a class skill, replacing Territory Creation.
"Y'know, this shit's kinda funny- I asked my bro Charles why he had it at A+, and he said its entirely because of the pun with him being in the Caster class- like a fishing rod, yeah? I can't even be mad-"
Riding: C-
One can flawlessly manage beasts and vehicles if they have received the proper training and adjustments. Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, however, one cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.
Receiving it from a long history of hunting on horseback and fishing on boats, her own Familiars can be ridden at this rank, should she desire. MoonCancer can't seem to handle cars and trucks for some reason, despite being perfectly capable of doing so in life. Motorcycles and boats are fine though.
Personal Skills:
Marine Zoologist: A
A skill denoting Charlie as being particularly knowledgeable about marine life. An avid fisherman and conservationist in life, she wrote many books on the biology, history, transportation, and lives of fish, as well as various animals on land commonly hunted. This allows her to passively create familiars of greater quality, quantity, intelligence, and staying power, through thorough knowledge of their workings.
"I know I'm not like, a doctor or a professor or whatever like most of the people here, but like, when it comes to stuff in the sea, I gotchu, easy. I think it's the mystery of it, the stuff that's down there in trhe deep, that draws me to it all."
Mystic Eyes of Disequilibration: D
A set of low-grade mystic eyes possessed from birth, Holder's life was influenced by the subconscious ability presented by her eyes, being able to view and inherently identify 'states of stasis' and buildups of potential force. This lead to her collection, "A Frozen Dragon And Other Tales" regarding strange things discovered preserved in ice, her documentation of fish from the Mesopelagic zone, despite the false bottom created via plankton density, and her eventual discovery of The Esperanza stone. She utilizes them to better judge the movement of her lines during combat.
Familiar (Phantom): C
Through magecraft acquired via the Moon Cell Junk Data incorporated into her Saint Graph, Charlie is able to summon familiars consisting of spectral versions of sea creatures, able to swim through the air as if water. While she can hypothetically summon any variety of sea fauna, she seems to favor Tuna and Sunfish.
"I just like 'em- tuna's great sport fishing, and the sunfish... huh, I don't really know where that comes from, I guess they're just on the brain."
Noble Phantasm:
Moon Cell Meteor
Esperanza Stone
Data Override-type Noble Phantasm
Rank: D
Range: Touch
Max Targets: 1
A chunk of mysterious rock found fallen from the heavens by Charlie and an accomplice down in Mexico. While it was already an odd find, being covered in Mayan symbols alongside Greek and Hindu ones, its effect became apparent once she became a servant- or rather, when he became a servant, as the stone is the reason for her current manifestation.
The stone's origin was of course the moon cell- the equivalent of a flash drive filled with junk data. It was expunged from the surface of the lunar body, containing an outdated version of the selection program used for choosing candidates in the creation of Advanced AI. While it would not find the suitable candidate during her lifetime, upon being judged to enter the throne of heroes, a space outside the confines of time, it's finding would be considered one of her accomplishments in life, and thus part of her saint graph. Due to this, and the dead junk-program re-linking, it would result in the creation of a MoonCancer manifestation, and her alteration to fit the form.
As her Noble Phantasm, the Stone has the singular ability to override data- specifically, the capability to add "traits that simply do not belong", much as the greek and hindu symbols were on the stone itself. Upon another servant, or anything with magical circuits for the reaction to take place, the stone will forcibly alter them, adding on traits and/or skills, the number of which being correspondent to their Mana Parameter. E is one addition, D is two, et cetera. It is a completely random process, though Charlie is able to skew the results to either be positive, negative, or neutral for the one who makes contact. Single use per-person.
Relationships:
BB: "Ooooohhh, hey, you're like, the actual one! Yeah yeah yeah, nah, I'm cool with the new form dude, it's more funny than anything."
Sir Tristan: "He gets to have unbreakable string? That's sick! Oh, I could catch sooo much stuff with that dude-"
Jing Ke: "Yaaaaasssss girl, pass the tequila- I'm telling you, you're like, a sister from another mister, you just GET getting sloshed-"
Sei Shoganon: "OMG, lingo bestie! Yah, she's like, got the same sorta deal I do- little more online, but it's a similar thing. Having a different lexicon than you did in life, that shit's pretty wild. It's good to have someone in a similar boat, that way you can sink together, ya feel?"
Abigail Williams (Summer): "Th' hell's that? Is- d'you got like, a giant squid? In your head? Whatever I'm seeing sorta contained in there, that's craaaaaazy lil dude."
Scatach-Skadi (Summer): "Yo, you got the same sorta swimmers with you I do, hell yeah!- Woah woah woah Mamasita, I don't like, really know anything about the whole summoning process, you're kinda losing me there- I just sorta do it."
Sherlock Holmes: "Heyyyy Homu, you got the void dust, ri- no I didn't farm for it, it was your turn!"
Watcher (Strange/Fake): "...Chaplin?????? The actual Hell bro, what are- hold on, you're not him, but you got something... are you making him?"
Charles Frederick Holder (Caster): "Yo, that's my big bro right there! I mean, we're technically the same person, but like, I'm a version of him made after historical me was uploaded, sooooooo yeah. Big bro."
Cope & Marsh: “Oh shiiiit man, y’all got summoned together? That’s mad wild, sorry to hear it- though, if you’re both gonna be hopping around before ceremonies, mind if I pick your brain on plesiosaurs? I know they’re probably all dead, but I always wanted to catch one, y’know?”
Friederich Fröbel: “Shiiiit, you- you look like a teacher. I- man, I had tutors for a reason growing up, I’m gonna schmove on over to the buffet before I start driving you crazy. I- no, c’mon, don’t look at me so disappointed like that, you make me think of the naval academy-“
Barbara McClintock: “Oh damn, you did all that based off of corn? That’s craaaazy bro, I thought it was just for good eating.”
Ibn Wahshiyya: After hearing his tale, the MoonCancer would check the cache of opium pills in the case from her back pocket, as if to make sure she was not in a fugue.
Helen Beatrix Potter: “Oh my god, these drawings are adorable! I know you’re here for the shroom stuff, which I uh, WILL be asking about in a bit for recreational reasons, but did you ever do any fish characters? I’m way too into those things not to ask.”
DNA: “Aight, sorry Crick, but I’ve thought long and hard about this- Fuck Kossel, Marry Miescher, Kill you. It’s not personal, I’m just really into that ponytail Miesher’s got going, and- oh c’mon, you’re three guys in one graph, don’t tell me you haven’t had these conversations with people!”
Richard Owen: “Damn, that’s crazy bro- here, have some more wine, you uhh, really need to take some weight off your shoulders.”
‘Zheng Sanfeng’: “…. Hey man, uh… why isn’t your heart beating? You got something going on there- I mean half of you is still… something I wanna know about? I know it ain’t the booze talking, I can see it clear as day.”
Francesco Redi: “EEEEEEEWWWW, you can make a cockroach crawl outta your mouth? At will? Dude, that’s SOOOO gross, so it again!”
Li Shizhen: “This writing room of yours… y’know, this is actually really nice man- I had to build summer homes and hunting shacks just to get this kind of peace for when I wanted to write stuff… like, it’s just got a really nice vibe to it… also, what’s your little snake buddy’s name? He’s gotta have one, right? You can’t just NOT name him something cute.”
Holder: So you actually wrote a sheet for that "so coked up he got run over by a car" biologist guy. Wasn't sure if you were joking about that. Pretty good profile all-around. When you mentioned the meteor my first thought was he caught some space bacteria and became an avatar for one of the Mesoamerican gods, so the Moon Cell angle you went with took me by surprise. Those Mystic Eyes are a creative extrapolation of her legend without being OP, and I can see a lot of fun utilizations for that ghostly fish summoning. Am I take the reason for the genderbend is he's become a Sakura-type?
Eyy, thanks man- and yeah, pretty much! I've wanted to make a MoonCancer for a while now, and I figured that this was a fun way to do so with the weird shit on the rock. I think it was Skull maybe (probably wrong), a little while ago, that said something along the lines of, "A noble phantasm should sort of wrap around and encompass the rest of the sheet"- and with the Esparanza stone being made extra weird by the presence of Volutes and Swastikas in addition to the Mayan singles, I decided ultimately that, since it was the NP, that the servant herself should also have the presence of something foreign, this time of course being the swapped gender.
Reminder to everyone that deadline's 23, about a week from now.
Nooooo I am not saying that because I saw the date on my sig and then my calendar and went "WAIT IT'S ALMOST 21 ALREADY???". Noooooooo.Part 5 of Conference (aka "oh hey it actually got long enough i feel like i had to put it in a spoiler")
...cliff notes version of thoughts on servants because i spent half the day on the above and am poofed but if i delay any longer i know i'm never gonna get it done soon (if im lucky i'll be inspired/in the mood for more detailed thoughts later...key words: "if im lucky") so apologies for any and all errors and being too impatient to not just wait before posting. i just really wanted to get this up before i end up procrastinating
"Zhang Senfang"/Three Corpses: i already guessed it was gonna be a pretender or a faker the moment i began reading the sheet. Cuz like "no way does this qualify...and i know he proly knows that". Really cool to see a "parasite" like this servant. Rumormonger angle was especially interesting for me.
Francesco Redi: note to self: reminder to get started on this series on my to-play list. Besides that...neat figure. Wine enjoyer and "half charistmatic and half awkard" aspects of personality stuck out the most. Hopefully I captured that. Favorite part of technical side is NPs, particularly the second one.
Li Shizhen: Well I can't notice whatever might be that "missing thing" about this sheet. I love it. My gosh his compedium is impressive sounding and awe inspiring to me and I love his personality. Kinda for the same reason I wanted to make Fröbel: more cool reps of a field not many of its figures are made sheets of. No this love has nothing to do with how much of field day Fröbel is having with him noooo.
Charles Fredrick Holder: confused at first at genderbend until NP and then go "oooohhhh that makes SENSE and is SO clever". Also fav part technical wise. Personality is an effin riot (that video link certainly helps"), lol. Nice design and little hint to genderbend cause with the hair, which I wouldn't have made the connection with.
and also my shipping sense is being curious right now and going "hmmmmmmmmmm i wonder how she'd be like with fröbel in a relationship..."
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Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Chapter 50 on: September 27, 2023 (GMT +8:00)
Velvet Throne
My list of my Servants! Still small for now.