Okay but
Olympia’s got a fucking BAKERY of an ass there, holy shit-
Okay but
Olympia’s got a fucking BAKERY of an ass there, holy shit-
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Natural Enemy: Tsuruya Nanboku IV
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Fate is a cruel mistress.
Seek her and you know only despair. Run from her and you know only fear.
The future is set in stone and nothing you do can change that.
That was how it was in the Age of Gods.
Destiny guided each and every lifeform. Even those abstract beings known as Gods were no less a victim of the cruel mistress Fate.
Like mortals they tended to trying to avert fate.
Often, unlike mortals, they knew the futility of their actions.
Only one in history ever raged against fate as hard as he among the gods.
A rage so legendary as to consume a continent.
Odin
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True Name
Odin
Class
Beast V
Alignment
Chaotic-Neutral
Height/Weight
11'5/934
Region
Northern Europe
Source
Poetic Edda
Other Classes
All Classes
(Except Grand Saber, Grand Lancer, Grand Archer, Grand Rider, or Grand Assassin)
Parameters
Strength Endurance Agility A A B Mana Luck Noble Phantasm B E EX
History
Where did it all begin? My quest to stop Twilight? Did it begin when I constructed Asgard? No. It began before that… when I saw wisdom by sacrificing my right eye? No, before even that…. Yes. It truly began in the beginning.
When I slew the father of giants.
Ymir.
Not because I hated them but because I saw the potential their blood had and how Ymir wasted it. Spilt it like water and for nothing. I remember it angered me, so I killed him and made use of his corpse.
I made the world because I saw the potential for life. Well. Perhaps not the world. The other eight realms though were my creation. I sought to order the world… and for that, it fought back. I knew it would though… that is how it always is.
So I sought knowledge. I sought how the world would fight me. It was… beyond my wildest dreams. It intended to burn all my hard work to ash. It threatened to cull all life in my sphere of influence. It… threatened even the very souls under my dominion.
I could not accept it.
I could not accept that cold reality.
So I began to prepare. I prepared Asgard for the invasion. I prepared Valhalla to build an army. I secured alliances and deals to have reinforcements. I commissioned various goods and services so that my armies would be armed and supplied.
Yet it was all for naught.
Twilight came regardless.
My walls? Worthless before the giants. My armies? As ash before Surtr. My reinforcements? Never came. My supplies? Ruined before the enemy. Myself? I fell short against my greatest blunder.
Fenrir.
He who brought Twilight.
I should never have allowed it to be born. I should have slain the wolf as a pup… but my kindness, I allowed Tyr to handle it. From its chaining to its care. I allowed Tyr sole management. An utter blunder.
Never again.
I swear.
Never shall Twilight descend unto the World again
Class Skills
Independent Manifestation
B
He will always appear before Twilight. He appears in doomed timelines. Not to feast on misery or ride with despair or war with rage. He appears to save those that need saving. Regardless of who is suffering, he will accept them into his Valkyries and ensure they are everlasting. Even if he fails, he saves a few and moves on. He repeats this, again and again ceaselessly.
Only his nature as a god prevents the chipping away of his ideals in the face of endless failure.
In addition to allowing him to manifest in any timeline that is doomed and support his own existence, he also receives heavy resistances to time manipulation and attacks that inflict instant death. Not total immunity, but almost total immunity. Unlike normal Independent Manifestation, this applies not just to him but his Valkyries though at a lower level. Only enough to allow them to manifest and existence in the timeline he summons them in.
Authority of the Beast
C+
Odin does not see himself as evil.
As a result, this skill itself is only modestly ranked. However, should Odin accept his role as an Evil of Humanity, the Beast of Salvation, then it will raise in rank due to Odin no longer rejecting his beasthood. In either case though he has a direct effect on humanity while present. A profound and dangerous effect that left unchecked can lead to societies collapsing.
While manifested humans he interact with find their aggressiveness and resistance against him diminished greatly. So much so that when he 'saves' them they do not resist. A normal human requires everything to even spark a thought of opposition. Magus and higher forms of humanity might show greater resistance, but ultimately cannot stop him from 'saving' them.
Even if they would disagree with their whole being the sight of his horned helm, proof of his beasthood, their will to fight back crumbles away.
Divine Core of the Allfather
EX
Allfather.
The title of the chief god of Northern Europe for centuries.
Until Ragnarok smote him.
Despite this, his core is intact and he can access his divinity.
This access grants him, in addition to Divinity, the capacity to replicate any of the standard class skills assigned to the standard heroic spirit classes at an equivalent rank and utilize them to their full capacity. In the case of Mad Enhancement, he enters a frenzy for a full minute before he regains it temporarily to decide whether or not to continue his frenzy or relent.
Personal Skills
One-Eye
EX
Mystic Eyes.
Considered derived from the first magecraft, Sight.
Odin himself is thought to have many types of Mystic Eyes. Odin does not possess many but instead has one simple one. Mystic Eyes of Clairvoyance. However the evolved after he, under the advice from Mimir, plucked his eyes and dipped both in the pool, letting them seep in the Liquid Wisdom for three days and three nights before retrieving only one.
An act that evolved the remaining mystic eye into a Mystic Eye of Transcendence. It grants him three primary passive effects; he is capable of peering into the Kaleidoscope, he is capable of peering into the timeline of alternate possibilities, and he may connect, synchronize, and utilize versions of himself from other timelines for the purposes of data processing.
Primordial Runes
The basis of modern Rune magecraft.
Ancient spells that do not lose their strength, power from the Age of Gods, even in the modern day. Acquired from his wife Frigg or from a ritual self-sacrifice to himself Odin boasts skill, intellect, wisdom, and strength of a top-tier magus from the Age of Gods through this skill. To say he overshadows the best modern magus would not be an exaggeration in the slightest.
Despite lacking proper divinity, Odin may exercise the full might of Primordial Runes.
Additionally his runes may not grant the capability to see the future to others. Only Odin may benefit from such a power.
Nega-Fate
EX
One who fights Twilight must naturally be capable of physically interacting with fate itself.
As the foremost authority on magic, Odin has such power.
Even discounting his Mystic Eyes and magecraft ability however, his Authorities would naturally permit him to do so in several ways. As an Evil however this process becomes simpler, easier, and ultimately stronger than what he is capable of normally. Mere alterations are no longer all he is capable of; he can now cull fate itself. Destroy the future of others.
When he activates his nega skill he see's the futures of all present and may elect to destroy them. This eliminates any capability they may have to fix or invoke luck checks. However their future becomes indeterminate and future sight no longer is able to see them, unless such sight is based in calculation. Further, effects and spells that alter causality are nullified against one whose fate has been culled and they cannot use such abilities either.
Additionally he may only do so to a select number of targets each manifestation with the exception of his Valkyries. He may cull any number of their futures, but outsiders he can only do so a limited number of times.
Twilight Survivor
A skill denoting one who withstood Twilight. While how Odin, who certainly died to Fenrir, survived the fact is that somehow he did ultimately re-emerge after Ragnarok, the 'Twilight' Odin fights. Normally it grants bonuses in the face of catastrophe but Odin benefits in a very, very different way. He receives his bonuses after dying. An odd but important distinction.
Pesonality
Odin would be described by others as a meddlesome worrywart.
To an extent, this was caused by his knowledge of Ragnarok. It was also caused by his love of humanity. Yet still something more bothered him. The separation of man and god. He still refuses to believe that such a disconnect must happen and that there is a path forward where man and god can progress together. He believes that gods can see that sparkling future that he saw that made him believe in humanity's potential.
As a beast however, this has warped.
These facets still exist. He hates Ragnarok, he loves humanity and its potential, and that gods and man need not separate. However as a Beast these warp into a single belief; that Ragnarok is responsible for the tragedy that is the separation and that humanity's potential has been culled.
Thus to him the only solution is simple; He now manifests as a beast with a single purpose;
To prevent Ragnarok and failing that save as many people as he can in a timeline.
Interactions
Ritsuka Fujimaru
Bond 0
Hail. You seem lost, traveler... I shall aid you. Come. My camp is not far. I shall accept a story as payment for my aid... ah, my own name. Vithrir. A simple name, but it was given by my father nonetheless.
Ritsuka Fujimaru
Bond 5
Hrm. This is a conundrum. We simply must reunite you with your allies. It's important. Yet... I cannot deny I have tasks I must do... what to do...? Ah! I know. Coordinate with your fellows momentarily and give them these coordinates. That is my next destination... let us have our two parties meet there. That should be a fine compromise, no?
Ritsuka Fujimaru
Bond 10
Yes. I have been slandered as an evil. For the crime of seeking to undo Ragnarok. I fight not just against it but any ending. Why must stories end? Why can the storybook simply keep going? I seek to correct this mistaken idea. The gods need not die for humanity to prosper. We can well coexist... and I intend to prove it. Fujimaru. Do not get in my way.
Cao Cao
Interesting, for a human. Yes... if I had known you, I would not have hesitated to enter you into Valhalla. You would have been an honored guest... tell me. Do you wish to be one now?
Edward
An interesting life you led... it is pitiful how far you've fallen. History paints you such but I know the truth... and I cannot but lament at the tragedy you've become. Do not fear. I shall save you from yourself.
Tam Lin Arthur
Another story that ended tragically. I lament your ending... shall we change it? together? Accept my brand, bind yourself to my cause... I cannot promise that never shall a story end again but that is what I fight again. Won't you join me?
Sultan Baybars
It is not often I come across a human of your type. I can never... figure you lot out. I am conflicted. Do I invite you to my hall to join my cause? Do I simply cut you down and move on?... do I, perhaps, simply turn a blind eye...? hmmm. A conundrum, truly.
Lugh
Tsk. I dislike gods like you. You give the appearance of an adrenaline chaser, seeking only conflict... but your deeper than that, aren't you? Yes... I can see it now. You are the trickiest type of god. One who could well stand above others if you applied yourself to more than battle... but choose not to out of disinterest. I can never trust types like you... so stay away from Valhalla, understand?
John Henry "doc" Holiday
This, too, is humanity I suppose. You had real talent... and did nothing with it. A talent for the gun, a talent for luck, and a talent for discovery. Never once did you really apply yourself, did you?... Then again could you have?.... Join me. Become an Einjerhar. I'll save you the pain of your own legend. If you accept, that is.
Karolina
A threat that must be culled. That is what you are. Prepare yourself, girl and do not struggle. Your death will be painless if you comply. Don't... and I cannot guarantee a painless death.
Laevateinn
If I had known of you, I'd have slain you in your crib. You... you cost us so much. Because of you, the gods will never see the splendor of humanity... I refuse to let your childish tantrum do that. I will undo it. Stand aside, boy, or I'll also make you pay for what you did.
Mousseline
Poor child... truly. Humanity is cruel sometimes. So I offer this. Will you be one of my Valkyrie? I seek to end tragedies. To end endings and partings... will you join me in this quest? Naturally, of course, you can refuse and I'll move on.
Temujin
An evil of the end. Sent to destroy humanity... 'Twilight'. There shall be no talk. No diplomacy. No quarter. You shall die, evil of the end... and if I cannot best you, I shall save all I can and leave this timeline to its fate.
Yeonsangun
A sad example of humanity... nothing but malice made manifest. You must be twilight. Nothing will convince me otherwise.
Prepare yourself for death
Napoleon III
I will not fault you for your surrender. You are only human... but I will never surrender. I invite you to join my Valhalla as an Einjerhar.
Francis I
A wonderful human you are. Truly. I have no doubts you'd serve well among my Valkyrie... I invite you to join them. Will you, though?
Ronald Knox
Once more Twilight falls... and once more I alone must fight. My eye... it does not see you as 'Twilight' but you must be. I cannot accept any other answer!
Libuše
Hmph. You would fight me? Why? You would make a fine Valkyrie. Your saint graph and personality would be wasted as an Einherjar... though you made one miscalculation. You gaze into a limited possibility. I gaze upon infinity... and failing that... gaze upon my own infinite possibility to calculate the best course of action.
The Antikythera Mechanism
Oh venerated watchtower, my peer. I understand it looks horrid... but what am I to do? Let twilight consume humanity? Those wonderful peoples? Nay. I will fight the twilight. Even if I must stand alone... though I must ask. Are you among them? The twilight-bringers?
Laevatein
Of course I meddle! It's because humanity cannot fight Twilight and the world refuses to stop it! It even brings it itself! What else am I supposed to do, let twilight consume them like it did back then!? Never! You, twilight-bringer, have at thee foul fiend!!!
Lostbelt!Sigyn
... You assume I didn't see? You think only that splendorous city beyond twilight is my only motive? No... when I looked to the future I saw another city. Your city... and it's why I know. Why I ride... because its possible. Your lostbelt though is destined to fall. They will not relent.... still. You have a point. I swore to end twilight. It'd be remiss of me to ignore your city simply because of who will be its end. I come, Sigyn. I will be there, Nafri... and I will save you, Nari. With my Valkyrie, my Einjerhar, and my familiars I shall bring salvation to your paradise.
Sigyn, Narfi, Nari
Your right. You are a tragedy of twilight... yet now stands a chance to correct it. You all would make fine Valkyries.... will you join me? Surely, together, we can prevent twilight from ever coming again...
(Note: Made a mistake regarding Dracoscribes sheets. I incorrectly assumed Lostbelt Sigyn was also binder and never realized they were seperate until someone kindly pointed it out... so I've corrected my mistake.)
Noble Phantasms
Valhalla OdinHall of the Dead
Type
Anti-World
Rank
EX
The famous golden hall of Odin Allfather who enjoyed an afterlife of battle and paradise.
No different as a noble phantasm as Odin moved it to the Inner Sea of the planet before Ragnarok. This noble phantasm simply acts as a connection between it and him, allowing him to instantly shift there with but a thought. He can bring those he holds directly there too.
Most importantly he can transition souls there and it acts as a storage for his familiars.
The hall itself expands constantly to accommodate new souls with seemingly no limit while also rewinding time within itself by 24 hours after 24 hours elapse. Further, in the event the rewind fails to return to form any slain familiars, mystics automatically do so immediately.
It also provides them with arms and armor stored in rooms allotted to each inhabitant. These are reformed in the event of destruction. Valhalla also forms entertainment the individual may find appealing whenever the individual stays in the room for an extended period of time.
Odin however can shift conditions around as he desires or needs to as well as alter the functions of Valhalla.
Ochd Deug OdinOdin's Brand
Type
Anti-Fortress
Rank
A
Primordial Runes.
Their true nature is very simple. Each represent a basic aspect of reality and allow its caster to utilize that aspect to its fullest potential. Originally a secret of the Vanir, Odin attained them through a combination of rituals and gifts from his wife Frigg. Once he had them, he studied them extensively to the point of achieving mastery with them.
This noble phantasm is a perfect expression of this fact.
He can utilize Primordial Runes as he wishes to achieve a variety of phenomenon; from creating almighty explosions to indefinitely stalling death to creating a shrine of purification. While he certainly uses his runes in this manner, these are merely common uses of this noble phantasm.
He utilizes them for a different purpose, often towards the end of his time within a timeline.
Utilizing both past and future principles and rituals he takes any souls he can save and utilizes a specific spell with the primordial runes to create new life from the soul while refreshing it. Through this he creates either a Valkyrie or an Einjerhar.
After this, the new lifeform is sent directly to Valhalla until they are summoned for some purpose.
GungnirDeclaration of the Allfather
Type
Anti-Unit to Anti-Army
Rank
B
Said to be the prototype of the legendary spear Gae Bolg.
Thought to be a divine construct, the truth is far, far stranger.
It is simply a mystic code. A very well-made, well-structured mystic code. A mystic-code nonetheless. It is simply so powerful because Odin is an excellent magus but also he cheated. He utilized future knowledge and principles in its construction.
In other words he cheated to make Gungnir.
The basic spear was crafted by the dwarves known as the sons of Ivaldi under the supervision of Dvali. Then Odin enchanted it utilizing future knowledge and made what he calls a 'Perfect Staff'. This, despite also utilizing it as a spear.
It has several functionalities installed into it that make it a type of mystic code.
It features the capability to instantly change the trajectory of its wielders attack to ensure a successful and meaningful blow, often invoking shapeshifting to do so. It also sports an auto-reinforcement function that improves the structure, material, and history of Gungnir as needed to bypass or overcome any defenses an opponent may have.
Perhaps its strongest feature is its capacity to channel mana.
While it can be utilized akin to Mana Burst and to lethal degrees, it is better utilized when thrown and supercharged. The resulting explosion is equivalent to Ochd Deug Odin when utilized by Cu Chulainn in terms of raw destructive power with the usage of Gungnir's auto-hit and auto-reinforcement functions.
This is because Odin utilized future knowledge and principles to form the spearhead out of replica Primordial Runes.
Haer OdinArmy of the Allfather
Type
Anti-Army
Rank
A
Odin had a great many familiars.
Geri and Freki. Huginn and Muninn. Sleipnir. Valkyries and Einherjar.
This noble phantasm encompasses his possession and control of all these fantastical familiars he either created or acquired and allows him to summon one, pairs, or multiple, or even all of them in the most extreme cases. He would normally have restrictions, yet as a Beast these restrictions do not exist.
This isn't to say he has none.
He cannot resummon a familiar if it is killed.
This is because when a familiar 'dies' its saint graph and core reconstitute in an afterlife only accessible by himself, his familiars, those he brings, or those Sleipnir brings. A valkyrie or einjerhar only take an hour to reform. Geri and Frenki take multiple hours. Huginn and Muninn each take a half day, while Sleipnir requires a full day before total reconstitution.
Aside from these limitations, he has full access to his familiars.
Geri and Frenki are each individual wolves with the explicit power to interact with spiritrons and parse them, often damaging souls (though not the record it represents). They also can devour souls for the purposes of Record Storage, granting odin information to utilize later.
Huginn and Muninn are his famous ravens that allowed him to remain informed of events. They also however held special capabilities; Huginn could read the souls of others while Muninn could read the minds of others. It is an invaluable tool for Odin, granting him another means of combat-reading his opponents and also gathering information while manifested.
Sleipnir, perhaps his most famous familiar, is his steed. It is mostly horse but possesses giant genes and as such is exceedingly strong and willful. In addition to possessing great speed, equaling the speed of lightning bolts, it also can walk or run upon any surface it desires. Further it can traverse anywhere, other factors unable to stop it. Even the Imaginary Numbers Sea, the Inner Sea, and the Afterlife are accessible to it.
Finally Odin can summon Valkyries and Einjerhars though there is a difference between them and the other familiars he can summon. Unlike prior kinds, who existed prior to Odin and are simply manifested as part of his legend, his first manifestation will always lack Valkyries and Einjerhars. This is because he must make new Valkyries and Einjerhars utilizing his noble phantasm Ochd Deug Odin.
Valkyries are equivalent in strength to slightly above Shadow Servants and lack a proper noble phantasm. Einjerhars utilize the servant summon formula to simply create a mana body for human souls to inhabit, granting them parameters based on their activities in life though no single parameter would ever exceed C-rank.
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There it is! Beast V Odin Beast of Salvation!
Yeah this was actually conceptualized before Laevateinn but came last because I wanted to get him right... specifically, I wanted to figure out how to get him to work and I think I did a decent enough job. It definitely wasn't easy because there's so much with him I'm sure I missed some things... I also intentionally left some things out because they're tools for a more heroic odin than this form of him.
I honestly had fun writing him.
If I had to say the hardest part was nailing his personality down. Not going too far in any one direction and nailing that he is, in fact, rather toxic to humanity. I think i've crystalized why he is overall.... and also if a reaction is missing its either because I'm not aware and/or Odin simply wouldn't have anything to say about that particular servant.
Now imma update Laevateinn reactions.
Last edited by Baron Magnus; February 25th, 2024 at 02:02 PM. Reason: Making one interaction more clear. Correcting an interaction.
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
Squont.
John Henry…? The link leads to Doc Holliday though. Typo, I’m guessing?
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What if I told you that clicking this would take you to my Servant Comp?
His full name is John Henry "Doc" Holliday.
"Then I saw when the broke one of the seven seals, and I heard one of the four living creatures saying as with a voice of thunder, “Come.” I looked, and behold, a white horse, and he who sat on it had a bow; and a crown was given to him, and he went out conquering and to conquer.”JesusLamb
Class Rider True Name Temujin 「CONQUEST」 Alternate Class Archer, Berserker Titles Genghis Khan, The White Rider, The First Horseman of Apocalypse Origin Mongolia (Historical Fact), Book of Revelations Alignment Chaotic Good Attribute Human (Heaven) Armament Bow(Main), Horse(Main), Short Sword, Dagger Gender Male (???) Age 25 (???) Parameters Strength: C Mana: B Endurance: B Luck: A Agility: B (A+) Noble Phantasm: EX Class Skills Magic Resistance: A It grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what greater magecraft it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi.
While Temujin has not encountered much Mystery in his life, his fusion with the White Rider has drastically increased his resistance to magecraft. The White Rider, as a creature that is divine in origin, cannot be affected by modern magecraft.Riding: A (EX) It is a Skill that denotes a Servants ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. While riding the creature that is summoned by his second Noble Phantasm, this skill’s rank is increased to EX.
Temujin was a child born to a nomadic Mongolian tribe. To the tribe, the horses where the central pillar of their lifestyle, as they were their source of food, their source of transportation and a source of companion. From a young age, Temujin was raised to ride and care for these horses. His skill at riding was so great that he can accurately hit a target from 500 yards away while moving on horseback.
Normally, Temujin would not be able to ride Divine Beasts, but due to being fused with the White Rider, he is able to control one specific Divine Beast.Personal Skills For I Am Crowned Pestilence: A This skill was originally called Corpse Catapult, a skill that Temujin gained due to his tactics in war, where he would utilize corpses to destroy the morale of his enemies. This skill is evolved after his fusion with the White Rider. The White Rider is often said to embody conquest, but some beliefs express that the White Rider embodies pestilence. Regardless of whether this fact is true, the belief of the people has changed him to embody it as well.
This skill acts as a conceptual weapon. All of Temujin’s attacks are imbued with disease. Even the tiniest of scratches caused by Temujin will result in the wound to fester and rot. The victim will be hit with a debilitating illness, ranking down their physical parameters. This disease will slowly kill the Servant, and while high Magic Resistance can slow it down it cannot completely halt it. Due to Temujin’s Nega-Civilization, normal methods of healing cannot treat this disease, and only divine Mysteries can remove it.Imperial Privilege: EX It is an ability that, due to the insistence of the owner, Skills that are essentially impossible to possess can be obtained for a short period of time. In cases when the Rank is А or above, even the "burden to the body" can be acquired (such as Divinity). Temujin prefers to take skills that are related to combat and military prowess. Destroyer of Civilization: A+ A skill that represents Conquest’s role as the end of humanity. When the breaks the first seal, he will be the one to ride out into the world. And he shall be given the divine mandate to conquer. This skill reflects this purpose. It is denial of human civilization and achievement, for he, as a Horseman of the Apocalypse, is the one who destroys them. This skill is also empowered by Temujin’s achievements in war. In life, he had slaughtered 10% of the earth’s population at that time, and had eradicated many empires. As such, he and his Mongol hoard became known as the bane of the civilization world.JesusLamb
This skill negates any defense that originates from human civilization. As walls and shields are made from human ingenuity and civilization, they are useless against him. Even magecraft cannot defend against him, as magecraft is derived from civilization. Furthermore, he is immune to the effects of human magecraft.
However, shields and barriers that are created by non-humans can block his attacks, and magecraft that are non-human in origin can affect him.
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Rain of the Hateful HoardComposite Recurve: 240,000 Shots
Rank: D
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 50
Maximum No. of Targets: 50
A Noble Phantasm that originates from Temujin. With it Temujin is able to summon a composite bow. It is an exact replica of the bow that Temujin and his soldiers would have used in life. He is also able to summon an inexhaustible amount of arrows.
When its True Name is called out, Temujin calls out to all of his soldiers and orders them to fire with him. A single shot leaves his bow, but the enemy is bombarded with 240,000 arrows. The activation of this Noble Phantasm is very cost-efficient as the arrows by themselves are not very powerful. But in conjunction with Destroyer of Civilization and For I Am Crowned Pestilence, this can be fatal to those classified as humans.
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Морины туурайн доорWandering Warmonger
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 99
Maximum No. of Targets: 99
A Noble Phantasm that summons Temujin’s steed. Rather than being something that is exclusive to Temujin or the White Rider, this Noble Phantasm exists due to the combination of Temujin and the White Rider’s Saint Graphs.
This Noble Phantasm summons the White Rider’s horse. It is a divine beast rank phantasmal beast. It is a pure white horse, with flowing white mane and is covered with eyes. It is immune to weapons that are created by humans, and cannot be hampered by them. It is able to completely bypass human barriers, both mundane and magical. While riding this creature, Temujin's Agility is raised to A+ rank.
With it’s True Name Release, it’s Anti-Army properties are revealed. To active it, Temujin must be dismounted. He holds up his hand and gets into a throwing pose. As he charges up the Noble Phantasm, a hoard of giant ethereal white horses appear behind him. He then designates a target in a straight line and lets loose the horses. Although these horses are nowhere near the level of divine beast, but are still powerful phantasmal beasts. However, after using it, he will not be able to summon the White Rider’s steed for some time.
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One Quarter of the Earth to SlaughterFor I Am Crowned Conquest
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Unit
Range: 1
Maximum No. of Targets: 1
He is Conquest. He is the First Horseman. He is the one who will break humanity. Such is the will of God.
A Noble Phantasm that originates from Conquest. It is the crystallization of the concept of conquering. It is born from the human fear of being subjugated, of having one’s free will be stripped away.
This Noble Phantasm is constantly active. It allows Temujin to ‘conquer’ the abilities of enemies that he has slain. After killing a Servant, he can choose to gain one of their skills or Noble Phantasms. The Noble Phantasm that he gains will be his in its entirety, as rather than stealing it, he is usurping ownership of it.
As the White Rider’s role is to conquer humans, this Noble Phantasm cannot work on those who are not human. As such, Skills and Noble Phantasms that are given by gods cannot be conquered.
History
This is not Genghis Khan. Not truly. It wears the face of the Mongol emperor, it’s voice sounds similar, even some of its mannerisms match, but this is not him. Those are only the little bits of paint that are still left after being scrapped off. Only Temujin’s extraordinary willpower stopped all of his self from being erased.
What wears his Saint Graph is a creature of the end. A creature that appears during the Apocalypse. Conquest, the White Rider, the First Horseman. One of the beings sent by God to wipe the earth of humans.
Due to this, many of the Skills and Noble Phantasms that Genghis Khan would have are not available to him, and he gains qualities that are not attributed to him.
Personality
Genghis Khan is a complex character. Despite causing untold amounts of death, he was also the one who created the foundation of the Mongol Empire, an empire that would flourish under the rule of his grandchild Kublai Khan. He had a hatred for traitors, even if those traitors defected to him. He is incredibly charismatic, and his administrative and political acumen is extraordinary.
However, after being combined with the White Rider, his personality is changed. His traits as a general and a ruler are suppressed and his tendencies as a destroyer of civilization and a conqueror is accentuated. Thus, he is much crueler and more bloodthirsty than he was in life.
However, his is not completely taken over. Through sheer willpower, he has managed to retain some of his his self. As such, instead of being completely Genghis Khan or the White Rider, this Servant is a combination of both.
Likes Bloodshed, Domination, Riding on his horse through an open field Dislikes Traitors, Peace, Closed in places Talents Warmongering, Slaughtering, Leading armies Natural Enemy Saints, Peacemakers Wish To regain all of his original personality/ TO CONQUER A/N
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Still would.
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Ah yes, the Joseon King that managed to not only have two purges but also have a harem (of dubious consent) to be his entertainers.
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Excellently done Sutaa! liked how you portrayed him
A ruler is but a tool of his people.
"The emperor has no right to dishonour himself, he can only leave the army victorious or die there; the Napoleonic legend would be reborn even if he lost the throne; it would not recover from dishonour."
-Victor de Persigny
A ruler should be greater, braver and more glorious than anyone else.
"In Paris you abdicated your government; in Metz you have just abdicated your command. Unless you go to Belgium, you must take back one or the other. Command is impossible. For the government, it is difficult and perilous, for you must return to Paris; but, hell! if we must fall, let us fall at least like men!"
-Napoleon-Jérôme Bonaparte
A ruler must carry out his duty to the very end.
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The once serene town of Sedan had been transformed into a scene of utter devastation. The air was thick with the acrid stench of smoke and the metallic smell of blood. The sky, darkened by billowing clouds of ash and debris, seemed to reflect the despair that weighed heavily on the hearts of those caught in the throes of war. They all knew that the battle was lost. In the midst of the chaos, a man walked aimlessly, his eyes lost and weary. While all around him were young soldiers, he was an old man, his steps were slow and his posture crooked.
Bullets whizzed past him, their deadly embrace coming dangerously close to claiming him as their own. And yet they all failed to kill him. The sound was unbearable. Gunshots, explosions, screams of agony and rage. Each cry was a dagger to the heart, a reminder of the human cost of war that could never be forgotten or forgiven. It grew louder and louder.
The pain.
It hurted, it hurted so much. The despair was unbearable, and yet the cacophony of death and chaos didn't stop. It went on, louder, louder, louder.
Until...
The man got tired.
Tired of thinking.
And a shell fell beside him.
He saw a bright, dazzling star that freed him from everything.
And then he was on the muddy ground. The sounds of war were still there, and he had failed to fall honourably. He had survived hell.
"Your Highness!"
Another man soon came to help him get up, and as the sovereign turned his head to the left, he saw the lifeless body of Captain d'Hendecourt, who had accompanied him on his quest for death, and who had paid the price in his place.
The man let out a sigh.
How foolish of him, there was no place for his pride.
Enough of this self-deprecation, he'll do as he always does.
"Alright."
He'll take responsibility.
…
The Emperor turned his head to his subordinate and gave him a gentle smile.
"Let's surrender."
This was the day the Emperor of France gave up his crown.
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"Ah… How sad. It died before it was even born."
In the azure dark, air bubbles drifted lazily towards the far-off surface.
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"Against this Caster, Grand, the lass’ Command:
'With this Command Spell: Frankenstein, defend!'
Madness restrained, Master realized her aim:
Protect her first, only friend, at all costs.
No Holy Grail could grant her wish, for now
The Bride of Bride of Frankenstein had hers."
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Excellent work from Frigix and Gears
Liked the way you structured the sheet Frigix
Was surprised by your choice and found the character niice.
#FRANCESWEEP
Rider of the Renaissance
Class: Rider
True Name: Francis I of France
Also known as: Father and Restorer of Letters (le Pčre et Restaurateur des Lettres), Francis of the Large Nose (François au Grand Nez), the Grand Colas, the Knight-King (le Roi-Chevalier)
Alignment: Neutral Good
Qualified Servant classes: Saber, Rider, Caster, Gatekeeper
Attribute: Human
Source: Historical facts (16th century)
Armaments: Flames, sword
Parameters
Strength: B Endurance: B+ Agility: C Mana: A Luck: C Noble Phantasm: A
Likes: Art, women, the Italian Renaissance, France
Dislikes: Decadence, protestants, losing in contests and races
Natural Allies: Suleiman I, Leonardo da Vinci
Natural Enemies: Charles V, Henri VIII, Yeonsangun
Identity
François Ier, or Francis I of France, born on September 12th in 1494 and died on March 31st in 1547, was the King of France for 32 years after his coronation in 1515. A well-educated king, Francis became a major patron of the arts who promoted the French Renaissance by attracting artists and scholars from Italy, including the universal genius Leonardo da Vinci. His policies in matters of ruling strengthened the royal power, raising some of the foundations upon which the Sun-King Louis XIV would shine as the perfect example of an absolute monarch a century and a half later, and made of French the official language of France in place of Latin, settling the French culture as its own. Even to this day, his appreciation for the arts left visible marks around the Loire river in the form of several castles built or renovated, as well as in the general art style of the manors built by the nobility during that period.
Yet, while those actions marked him as a great Heroic Spirit in his own land, what makes Francis a notable figure in the history of Europe as a whole is not his local reforms, but his external politics.
Wars waged in Italy against the Holy Roman Empire.
Expeditions sent across the Atlantic to affirm France's influence in the Americas.
Formal diplomatic relations with the Ottoman Empire and the Sultan Suleiman the Magnificent.
All of that, for a single purpose.
In an age where Europe was divided as England took its independence from Rome and Italy suffered from many succession wars, where the Ottoman Empire reached its peak and the western powers were claiming lands in the New World, it was common for monarchs to butt heads.
And yet, the rivalry between Francis I and Charles V is one that would last for most of the length of their reigns. The two prime candidates to the crown of the Holy Roman Empire, bound to clash as soon as the Imperial election of 1519. As the Heir to the Crowns emerged victorious, the King of France swore to never allow his rival's victory to be complete.
Class Skills
Magic Resistance: B+ Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by greater magecraft and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected. By all means, Rider should only ever attain this Skill at D+ rank, even as a Saber, but it is raised to a top-grade rank due to her new draconic nature. Either way, she possesses an increased resistance to spells and rituals from the Renaissance era thanks to her many ties to knowledge, magi and Mysteries of that era, signalled by the + modifier.Riding: A Riding is a Skill that denotes a Servants ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Dragon-type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. This rank is high enough to have an aptitude for the Rider Class. However, an exception is made for the Salamanders of Rider's Noble Phantasm, although she remains unable to ride other draconic Phantasmal Species from an era long gone before her age.
Personal Skills
Pčre et Restaurateur des Lettres: A+ A unique Skill of Francis I, a composite of Appreciation for Arts and Patronage, born from his passion for arts and his active support for artists and writers. A Skill representing an intelligent and enlightened monarch, whose support allowed for the Renaissance to be brought from Italy to France.
Reaching the maximum rank due to Francis I's major influence upon the Italian Renaissance's arrival in France, namely by persuading the genius Leonardo da Vinci to come to France - whom he installed in the Clos-Lucé château, barely 500 meters away from the royal castle in Amboise - Rider can use this Skill to form contracts with all sorts of intellectuals and artists, and later freely use their skills and knowledge as long as they remain alive, in return for what she can offer them a financial and magical support. In particular, if their dispositions are compatible enough, it is likely that Rider will seek alliance with Caster-class Servants to receive their support in return for her protection and magical energy, in addition to offering them a place in her castles to set up their workshops.Roi-Chevalier: B Another unique Skill of Francis I, the affirmation of chivalry of the Knight-King who leads his armies on the battlefield in an age where most leaders safely stay nice and cosy where they can't be reached by the battle. It is akin to a low-ranked version of Valor : while Rider certainly cannot hope to match the bravery of legendary heroes of ancient tales, his presence on the battlefield as a king in his era by comparison to his peers allows Rider to somewhat qualify.
When she is on the battlefield, Rider benefits from an increase to her melee attacks, and can somewhat fight off mental interference effects. In addition, when paired with her Dragon-kind Modification, she can offer a morale boost to any army or followers she would have, although she won't be able to provide any boost to their abilities, nor receive any improvement to her military leadership skills.Trčs Chrétien: B A Skill exclusive to the Kings of France, born from the title bestowed by the catholic Church upon France and its monarch. It is a composite Skill of Protection of the Crown and Holy Sacraments. The mark of a king of the Ancien Régime receiving his authority from God.
Originally a relatively minor Skill that most kings of France do not possess in their Servant manifestations in favor of more specific Skills derived from their personal legends and history. However, Rider forced it to resurface when she modified her Saint Graph to reaffirm her status as a Christian king, and reduce by this fact the weaknesses he would have gained by merging with a Phantasmal Beast and thus becoming a heretic existence.
Thanks to this Skill, Rider possesses an increased resistance to Church Sacraments, and can herself freely make use of them, as the king of France holds an ecclesiastic status on par with a bishop's. Because her draconic transformation is unique to this manifestation and doesn't directly from her legend, the rank of this Skill remains high despite her heretic nature thanks to anecdotes of the opposition she posed to the budding Protestant Reform during her life.Dragon-kind Modification: C An particular variation of Self-Modification, denoting the user's transformation into a member of Dragon-kind, the pinnacle of Phantasmal Species. Grants benefits akin to Dragon-Kind, including the effects of Demonic Mutation - without the demonic attribute, Monstrous Strength, Charisma, Mana Burst, etc.
A Skill that reflects Rider's new nature as a draconic subspecies : the Salamander, a Magical Beast tied to the fire element who bears characteristics of both Dragon-kind and Nature Spirits, although in most cases of a scale too low to become Elementals despite possessing physical forms. Because of that, Rider only receives part of the Skill's benefits, namely, her Mana Burst is replaced by Breath of the Dragon due to the Salamanders' characteristics, creating flames with a unique blue coloration. Although her Charisma can be used in conjunction with Roi-Chevalier, it provides no tactical or military boost, its true value is shown when it comes to raising others' morale and charming people to his advantage.
Noble Phantasms
Nourish My Soul And Extinguish My Enemies
Nutrisco et Extinguo
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: ANutrisco et Extinguo is Francis I's first Noble Phantasm, born from Francis' symbol, omnipresent in his castles : the Salamander. A mythical creature associated with the element of fire, symbol of immortality, who can feed on fire and extinguish it.
Originally, this Noble Phantasm allowed him to manifest that very same beast and use it as his mount, the very reason for his eligibility in the Rider class. But the king is capricious, and tinkered with his own Saint Graph through this Noble Phantasm to become an existence comparable to a Dragon-kind Mixed-Blood. By doing so, she acquired might she never held in her life by surpassing her own humanity, allowing her to go up against Knight-class Servants by herself, where her human counterpart - the original Rider before the change - would only hold a chance through military tactics with an army he wouldn't even have by default.
In addition to receiving Dragon-kind Modification from the extensive change brought by that remodelling of her Saint Graph through this Noble Phantasm, Rider not only benefits from the general abilities of the Dragon-kind, but also the characteristics unique to the Salamanders. Namely, her skin becomes entirely impervious to fire, and her touch becomes highly poisonous, although its efficiency on Servants isn't high enough to threaten their lives, merely weakening them slightly. As a matter of fact, out of combat she keeps that property of her body at bay using a combination of Sacraments. Although she cannot summon any mount-sized Salamander anymore due to the fusion, she keeps the ability to create and use lizard-sized ones as Familiars.
Behold, My Magnificent Castles Over The Loire
Roy Bâtisseur
Type: Territory
Rank: B++Roy Bâtisseur is Francis I's second Noble Phantasm. The crystallisation of Francis I's castles built over the Loire river and renovation of medieval fortresses into the many châteaux of the French Renaissance, and the embodiment of "the way of life of the King's court" within them. As Rider doesn't quite reach the scale of the old warrior kings, she wouldn't even consider risking comparison with their flying fortresses, especially since her castles were built with splendour in mind rather than military purposes, soft power over hard power as modern terms would put it.
Rather than manifesting Bounded Fields of her castles, this Noble Phantasm allows Rider to "build a Territory of wealth and luxury upon the land" or to transform a pre-existing Territory into her own. Each Territory links itself to the Leylines of the land and will attempt to connect with the others, forming a self-sustaining network. Once enough Territories are set up, Rider becomes able to make use of the Noble Phantasm's second function :. A function born from the lifestyle of the royal court, a cortege of nobles and their servants living a life of luxury as they went and came from one château to another, rarely spending more than two weeks in the same one at a time. Once the conditions are met, Rider and designated allies are able to move near instantly from one Territory to another at will, through a process related to Flash Air that isn't unlike the spatial transportation usable through Command Spells. This function doesn't require any Magical Energy from those who travel through it, however that doesn't mean it's free, as the cost is supplied by the Territory itself, meaning it cannot be used in quick succession without exhausting their resources - the more people move through this ability, the greater the cost.The Court of the King Follows His LeadLa Cour de France
If she were to be summoned in her homeland in France, the remaining châteaux still standing today would be designated as Territories from this Noble Phantasm by default.
The Never-Surrendered Crown of France
Tout Est Mien, Fors L'Honneur
Type: Anti-Regalia
Rank: EXTout Est Mien, Fors L'Honneur is Francis I's third Noble Phantasm. One that normally wouldn't manifest as a Noble Phantasm outside of the Gatekeeper class, yet also the very reason Francis is eligible to that class in the first place. Nevertheless, Rider wields it too, due to the origins of her manifestation and the events of the Renaissance Singularity.
If Nutrisco et Extinguo is her burning passion as a warrior-king and Roy Bâtisseur is her artistic legacy as a king of the Renaissance, then this Noble Phantasm is the mark of her rivalry with the Holy Roman Emperor Charles V, the mark of the Italian Wars waged to stop him in his tracks, of the expeditions to the New World to catch up with Spain's and Portugal's conquistadors, of the failed alliance with Charles VIII and the successful one with Suleiman. The mark of a ruler who refuses to stay in second place and will unquestionably put herself in the way of the winner.
"The sun shines for me as it does for others.
I would very much like to see the clause of Adam’s will by which I should be denied my share of the world."
The function of this Noble Phantasm is to deny the authority of the crown of Francis's enemies, turning her into an obstacle against the expansion on their power and undermining the foundation of their power for as long as this Noble Phantasm remains active. In practice, it weakens or outright blocks the effect of Skills and Noble Phantasms derived from one's "crown", although it won't hold any effect against those which bestow the crown right upon its wielder like the Swords of Selections derived from Merodach. Furthermore, if Francis were to face against her great rival Charles V himself, she would receive a rank-up to all her physical statistics,
However, because it is the denial of the crowns of Francis' enemies, its effect is inverted against the Crown of France, instead strengthening those who bore it and their authority.
Personality
Rider is a woman who can first and foremost be defined by her passion. Passionate for the arts, a patron who supported artists extensively to bolster the French Renaissance. Passionate in battle, one of the last European monarchs to consistently lead her armies in person on the battlefield, brave and impetuous far beyond her peers. Passionate about the life of the court, a wealthy life of luxury and entertainment, including that of courtly love, as "a court without women is like a garden without flowers". And as one could expect from the king, turning into a Dragon-kind subspecies only exacerbated that burning passion. However, that burning passion also comes at a cost, as Rider is more easily distracted from the logical choice when following her instincts, and won't always hesitate to attack head-on.
Under that fiery passion of hers, Rider presents a high degree of pride and egoism. Possessing that characteristic of monarchs and dragons alike, it's no surprise to see that she remains as impulsive as she was, if not even more, and her confidence in her new might reduces even more any qualms she could have had about doing things as she liked and risking battles with bad maneuvers.
Nevertheless, she retains her curiosity and open-mindedness about all sorts of new things she didn't get to experience during her lifetime, swallowing back her pride without complaining to enjoy new forms of entertainment and art.
Surprisingly for a monarch, she easily takes liberties from etiquette and conventions judged too strict for her own taste, making her a rather relaxed Servant to be around compared to her peers, although she doesn't shy away from her royal duties when the time comes for her to play a role.
Relationships
Leonardo da Vinci “Leo ! So you're in charge of Chaldea's systems ? I envy them, but I can't disapprove their choices. If you ever need more patronage than what they can offer you, let me know !”
As soon as Rider meets Da Vinci, she can be seen smiling from ear to ear, like someone seeing a dear friend for the first time in forever. Wait, isn't that basically true of any Heroic Spirits meeting with their old friends ? Unlike other Servants of the same period who knew well of the genius, Rider isn't even remotely phased by Leonardo looking like the Mona Lisa. Then again, perhaps this is because Da Vinci herself is the one who modified Rider's Saint Graph in a similar way in the first place ?Charles V (Frigix) “Charles ! So you want that duel now ? Alright, come on ! Let's fight once and for all ! I've never been more ready for this in my life !”
Francis' lifelong rival. While they did maintain somewhat cordial relations during their lives for the sake of diplomacy, there is no such need now that they became Servants. As a matter of fact, Francis tinkered her Saint Graph with the help of Leonardo da Vinci for the express purpose of fighting Charles, even picking the Rider class just to raise the chances of being summoned in the same War.
That being said, both are still rulers with a sense of responsibility and the same faith, and will (reluctantly) ask for the other's help if a major threat arose.Cesare Borgia (Frigix) “Erm ... No, nothing. You're the original Prince, right ? I can't personally say I'm pleased to meet you, but I do look forwards to working with you. Any friend of Leonardo is an ally of mine, after all.”
Rider seems perplexed for a second, as if something felt familiar yet she couldn't quite put her finger on it. Not so foolish as to shake hands with the Italian Assassin, she instead nods her head as a way to show her agreement.Cao Cao (OddEyedDuelist) “So that's the Hero of Chaos who united such a massive army in China, hmm ? Very interesting ... While I must by principle decline the invitation of serving another lord than God, what would you say of building an alliance instead ? I could provide some help with the logistics, and your army would be precious against Charles' crowns ...”
As one could expect from "the very christian king who formed an alliance with the Sultan", Rider does consider siding with Cao Cao, even if it's purely to bolster her own rivalry against Charles.Edward the Black Prince (Voikirium) “The Black Prince ... Well, war is war, isn't it ? On that note, don't expect me to go easy on you.”
Edward and Francis are enemies as surely as the hound is an enemy of the lion, and so she doesn't shy away from unleashing torrents of flames upon the black knight who sacked France for the crown she once bore herself.Laevateinn (Baron Magnus) “So this is the power of a Grand Servant ... My flames are but measly sparks compared to your, but let me at least provide you with the support of my court !”
Of course, a Servant with a Saint Graph of regular scale like Rider cannot hope to match a Grand Servant and provide a significant increase in firepower in battle, so her only choice is to play the role of a support to help him against the Evils of Mankind.Louis-Auguste (MuramasaMachII) “The last king of France ... Yeah, you should never have been king. And yet you bore the weight of the crown and the hatred of the people ... Louis sei- non, Louis-Auguste. I've only ever had to fight against foreign threats to the kingdom, besides the Reform, but you, you had to not fight, for your enemies were your own kingdom. My dear, you're far stronger than I will ever be.” "Mousseline"/Marie-Thérčse Charlotte (BnEl15) “Oh ... C'mere, you. You've done more than well enough, you don't deserve to suffer from their hatred too.”
A tear drops from her eyes, as she hugs the last queen.
To bear that weight, that hatred and resentment, even for a mere twenty minutes ... No one should have to endure this.Temujin 「Conquest」 (fleshprism) “The Great Khan of the East ? Hm ! If your empire truly reached a quarter of the land, I'm sure you can make him shut up about "inheriting the crowns'" and all that ! But ... you aren't truly the Khan, are you ? Hmm. As I thought. Even with my burning passion, I cannot hope to win against the White Rider alone. *sighs* I really hate it, but just this once, let's fight side-by-side, Charles.”
While Francis would have considered forming an alliance with the actual Genghis Khan, this Servant is a whole other matter. In fact, against such a destroyer of civilisations, she can only grit her teeth and call her forever rival to fight as allies for once, when faced with an evil of eschatological proportions. Indeed, who else but the Last Roman Emperor would side with a lifelong rival to take on a Horseman of the Apocalypse ?Yeonsangun (sutaa) “You... you ! Knowledge and progress are what allows any nation to prosper, how dare you attack your people's right to literacy ! I shall rid you of your head, you heinous tyrant !”
As one could expect from the Restorer of Letters, the idea of a ruler who assaults knowledge itself is a personal offence for which no mercy shall be found. Despite her best efforts at diplomacy when meeting other Heroic Spirits, Rider shows no qualms about ridding the world of Archer as soon as she learns of his deeds.Napoléon III (Frigix) “To be the very last in such a long line must have weighted a lot on your shoulders, and still you guided them. I mean, look at what you've achieved ! La France Moderne, was it ? The Renaissance I took part in is nothing in comparison, I'm really proud of how much you did for our country ! Oh, and don't feel too bad about Sedan. To be captured on the battlefield isn't something good for a ruler - let alone an emperor - but it happens, even to the best of us. I mean, even I ended up in a similar situation back in my age ! So ... keep your head high, and never give up on your dreams.” Antikythera (gears) “A ... a computing machine that predicts the movements of the stars and the Moon ? ... WOW. I'm- I'm sorry, Master, let me just, erm, breath for a second. Phew ... Sorry, I genuinely didn't expect a Servant with that kind of background. I can only imagine how much the discovery of such advanced technology could have helped the Renaissance go even further, although the Church would have probably been an obstacle ... Let me know if Da Vinci becomes too relentless, by the way. Leonardo can get quite worked up when something truly arise her attention, and mechanics have always been a passion of hers.”
Author's notes
I wanted to do a different thing and then this took an unreasonable amount of time to finish. I should've stick with the classics. ;-;
“A man once said that 「reality」 is merely an 「illusion,」 albeit a very persistent one. Another man said there are no 「facts,」 only 「interpretations.」 The truth is like a kaleidoscope, with ever-changing shapes. However, in this long existence of mine, I’ve seen enough to know better. Facts simply do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
「Ritsuka Fujimaru is dead.」
This is no lie, no embellishment, no exaggeration and no make-believe. This is simply a 「fact.」
The world has recognized such—the world has decided such.
Humans are fragile beings. Whenever they’re overwhelmed, they retreat into the depths of their own minds, into a sweet dream of denial... Know that you’re allowed to despair, however try as you might run away from this notion, it won’t change a thing.
Reality is never an illusion. It’s simply a 「fact.」
But humans are afraid of reality. And that is, too, a 「fact.」
They are afraid of the world and, above all, of themselves. After all, feelings are disturbing. People are taught that pain is evil and dangerous. How can they deal with their own reality, with their own emotions, if they’re afraid to feel? For humans, pain is meant to wake them up, but people try to hide their pain. An understandable paradox.
They are wrong, of course. Pain is something to carry. One will only feel their strength in the experience of pain, and it is scary for humans because it’s entirely up to each and every one of them how they will carry it. But that’s what matters—that pain is a feeling. A feeling that is a part of humans.
It’s their own reality. That is to say, it’s their 「fact.」
There are things in this world that defy explanation. But no matter how strange or bizarre the incident, if there were no humans, if no human could see it, if it didn’t concern them, then it would be a mere phenomenon. It would be just some thing quickly gone.
Humans, in this world, are things of profound mystery.
After all—humankind can change reality. They can rewrite the world and create their own 「facts.」
「Ritsuka Fujimaru is dead.」
The world has decided such. I have decided such.
Prove me different, then—with the power only allowed to you, representatives of humankind, prove to the world and to me that this isn’t right. Prove to me that the culprit lies somewhere else, hidden behind a secret door.
Yes, relieve me from this boredom. Prove me wrong if you can.
And allow me to fight back with all my might.”
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w h i t e f r e n z y ' s
s e r v a n t s . | . m a s t e r s. | . p r e v i e w s
oh my gosh guys STAHP im writing my thoughts and you keep putting up sheets! /jk
Okay but seriously I have been busy writing thoughts and when I check back to read on sheets again, new ones have popped up! I can't help but exasperated yet amused.
...and also expect more sheets to pop up because it's (almost?) deadline time and thus take even more time for me to finish my thoughts.
Or I guess I could just post what I've written right now...yeah, you know what. Sure. These are the thoughts I've written so far. More to come.
Before anything else, because I forgot to do them:
Laevateinn:
Bergelmir: "Hmm? Well hello there, young man. Huh? Laevateinn? But I don't...ah, you're a different one. Okay, okay. I get it. No wonder I didn't recognize you. I defintely would've remembered if you traveled around my kingdom. You seem to have a pretty good head on your shoulders, just like the little princess though, what with making the most of your lot. Ah, whatever, I'm rambling. I'll be off napping if you don't mind. I'm sure you can tell that I'm not really the best candidate to wield you, yes?"
Nari: "Woah! Another Laev?!"
Narfi: "Why are you so surprised? It's very obvious it's not the Laev we know."
"Yeah yeah, smart ass, I know. But it's still a Laev! And he's Grand Saber! A Grand! I say we try a weapon-off with him!"
"No! Bad Sis! We're gonna nearly blow up the place again!"
"Exactly! I wanna see how much bigger it can be!"
"Uuuuugggghhh...!"
(In the back, Sigyn giggles in amusement at her children's antics yet again)
Now for actual thoughts I've written so far.
Loius-Auguste: Okay, I'll admit, I was a little lost in the beginning. I think it's mainly because of the whole "how are we summoning" part and me wondering why summoning him was so important for this Singularity within the story. Thankfully, that more or less gets answered by the end, at least answered enough for me, so that rough start didn't diminish the journey to the end and...oh boy. So far this is my favorite of the sheets I remember of yours. Which isn't a lot, admittedly, but still, this is my (new?) fav. Just... Just ouch. Innocent Monster because he was bad at ruling and so people hated him? Ouch. Imperial Privelege with a painful side effect? Ouch. Multi talented but not a master notable enough to have been noticed over his brother? Ouch. Contradictory Mindthat makes me think of zeref? Ouchand even more ouch. And then his last skill, making him "always fail" and his Noble Phantasm, making him always break the crown? ...yeah you get the idea now. And it's capped off nicely with what I assume is a "final battle" within the Singularity and Bond CE that resulted from it. Just pain all around from me feeling for the man...
Mousseline: ...AND THEN THIS COMES ALONG AND ACTS LIKE A SEQUEL AND MAKING THE PREVIOUS SHEEY EVEN MORE SAD AND THIS SHEET IN TURN IN AN ENDLESS FEEDBACK LOOP OF ANGST. I WAS FUCKING CRYING BNEL. CRYING. Let me hug these failures of a family pleeeeeeease. They all need it. ;-; Ugh. But seriously, from beginning to end, I just feel for this girl. Yes it's because her life was tragic, being so kind despite her upbringing but hell broke loose because her parents, unfortunately, weren't exactly the best at their jobs. Yes, it's because she got imprisoned as a kid and was tortured and isolated and just general had to deal with horrible shit. Yes, it's because she was queen for only a little while...and by the end of her life, she was one of the last of her family to survive, and she wishes desperately to see them again, because she misses them. And yes, all the wonderful prose for the skills and backstory conveyed it all. But in the end, I guess what broke me is how too, effin', close this hits for me. The problems she has? I have them to an extent too. So it's like looking at the magic mirror on the wall, showing me what it is and what it can become. So yeah. THE FULL ON WATERWORKS EVERYONE.
...on a lighter note, her trying to act like an ojou-sama but failing is funny. I like it. Also:
Well, I mean, from what little I know of Genshin, Fontaine is heavily inspired by France, and Furina comes from Fontaine, so I guess it's even more fitting she's the FC?
Nader Shah Afshar: You know, I don't know why, but a part of me finds it funny that, when I got to the end, with a Bond CE that just recontextualizes what he did even more, and then the notes afterwards having you say "yes. I made him a psychopath", I immediately went "Oooohhh...that's why he can't feel. It all makes sense!" before clarifying that when you say that, you mean "a REAL psychpath, not the Hollywood one or the joking insult kind", because I actually don't know that much about psychopaths. Tldr "it's funny how i went aha! and completely understood what you meant despite how little knowledge on psychopathy i actually have. you'd think i was an expert or something with how i felt when i got it". But seriously, that clarification kinda flipped this sheet on its head, after the Bond CE jostled it out of its position. Because like, he seems at first like your "average" warmongering but very skilled villain. Ruthless in his choices, cunning in his strategies, and more than willing to get things done with his own hands, including fucking going after an eldritch fortress to take its power for himself. But then the Bond CE comes in, how he is very self aware of himself, despite all his cruelty. And then the last piece, "he is a psychopath", makes me just...stare at it. The throne. The sheet. The man who lived his life feeling nothing despite seemingly still being able to desire things. And though I, to put it ligtly, really don't like what he has done and how he acts...I can't help but stare at him and wonder... "How can you live like that?", even though I know the answer will likely never satisfy me.
Author of:
Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Next Update: Chapter 64 on April 30, 2025 (+8:00 GMT)
Velvet Throne
The compendium of my Servants
Marethyu77: The explanation for the genderbend and Dragonkin makes sense to me, makes me curious about the Singularity she's from
WhiteFrenzy: The line [Fujimaru Ritsuka is dead] immediately caught my attention. Both at the beginning and end of the sheet, a nice contrast when fully experienced!
Who am I to deny the people what they desire?
Music is the language of the soul, speaking what words cannot express.
A violin without soul is like a body without a heart.
The violin is my voice, and the stage is my cathedral.
I am a servant of music, bound to its power and glory.
There is to no other I could give my entire being.
And nothing I would not give for it.
Last edited by Morg van Destro; December 16th, 2024 at 06:34 AM.
Morg's delightful Servant comp.
IN COLOR
Lady of the Star-Scraping City
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Caster?
True Name: Duchess Libuše of Bohemia
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Czechia
Parameters:
STR: C
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: A
LCK: D
Height: 5’11”
Weight: 186 lbs
Likes: Sitcoms, red wine, a good pec-bounce
Dislikes: Back Pain
Talent: Architecture
Natural Enemy: Odysseus, Fergus
Attribute:Earth
Traits: Hominidae Servant, Humanoid, King, Loved One, Riding, Servant, Seven Knights Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament:Warhammer
Catalyst: A stone from the ruins of castle Děvín
Lore:
One of three daughters to the fabled duke Krok, she was blessed from her birth with both great wisdom, and the gift of prophecy. Chosen by her father as the succeeding queen of the people, it would be her gift that would prophesize the creation of the grand city of Prague. However, even as her lands prospered, her subjects, particularly the male ones, protested about being led by a woman. While a woman of her position should have logically chosen a statesman, someone to help her rule, perhaps someone from a neighboring territory, she had fallen in love with a plowman, Přemysl. Certain choice visions of him haunting her, she correctly identified that he would be eating at an iron table when her servants found him. Her horse leading her court to find him, his field would bloom into a bountiful harvest as he put down his tools to accept her proposal, leading them to be wed shortly after.
They would go on to have three sons together, Radobyl, Lidomir, and Nezamysl, and founded the Přemyslid dynasty of Bohemia, which would continue long past the country’s fall. During her reign as queen, Libuše’s ruling period was notable for the equal rights and liberties of women to men- such liberties would be afforded that when she died and her husband repealed her policies on the matter, many of the women of the kingdom would revolt and wage war against the men. While they would eventually fall, it is notable for a pre-enlightened age.
Personality:
A wise servant with information from beyond her age, with ample logical capabilities to apply it. Appearing in her mid-late twenties, she possesses a dry sort of sageness, and great skill in casual conversation… all juxtaposed by a notably poor impulse control. Libuše, personally, is lonely- she’s tired, and craves praise and attention- while the future she had foreseen came to be, the actions she took in life had no lasting impact thanks to her husband. While, EXPLICITLY, against her better judgment, she can’t stay mad at him, they’re effectively split over the matter. She has no desire to get back together, but… for someone who sees the future, the past weighs on her.
"Listen, what you saw- me, on the couch in pajamas, eating ice cream out of the container- nobody needs to know about that, alright?"
Class Skills:
Riding: B
Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above-average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, they cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.
Magic Resistance: C
Cancels spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of greater magecraft and Greater Rituals.
Personal Skills:
Clairvoyance: A- (A+)
A skill denoting the ability to view the world remotely- at higher levels, it allows the possessor to even obtain future sight.
Libuše has achieved such a rank, notably being born with the gift to see into the future in life. However, it gains a negative modifier, as she purposely dampens her gift, having been plagued with unfortunate visions of her and Prague’s future. Her precise level of control is unknown, but she seems to be able to chase certain information.
“The ability to gaze upon the future as if they were the stars… I could not call it anything but complicated. One second, I see a city which scrapes the sky, the next, I see my land of equality dashed back to the age before my father. And after that? Seinfeld.”
The Walls Which Touch the Stars: A
While its name may suggest a territory creation style skill, but instead it is more reflective of a mana burst skill. Instead of designating an area as a workshop, it reflects the ability to rapidly create stone building-based structures, such as walls and towers- an entire castle could be created within an hour, and rising parapets strike like a boxer’s jab in an instance.
Trouble With Men: B
A skill similar to Trouble with Women- Rider, by her own admission, has a terrible taste in men- she’ll be drawn to powerful ones, though her specific type is the Gaston sort.
“Master. I know. Just- just let me have this- look at the size of his tits. Let me ogle.”
Familiar: D+
The ability to designate and summon magical Familiars- in Libuše’s case, she specifically seems to favor horses, as seen when she summoned one to track down her future husband Přemysl.
Noble Phantasm
Starbound Future Revelation
Shining Prophecy Decree
Type: Anti-Causality
Rank: A
Range:-
Max Targets: 1
A Noble Phantasm which interacts with the Causality in a similar manner to a sure-hit noble phantasm. Born of the same dream that prophesied the construction of Prague. As she did not see anywhere close to the full breadth of the beloved star-reaching city, she herself cannot experience the effects of the noble phantasm- it can only be used on others.
SFR is an enchantment which can be applied on an ally when they express a goal or desire- allowing the creation of a fixed completion condition. While there are very specific limits (seizing the grail will be overwritten by the cup and the throne, wasting the mana), it is possible to even rewrite the world state in fulfilling the goal. The PATH to the goal however, is completely unwritten, and the completion of said goal can often be fulfilled via monkey’s paw scenarios.
"Forever forward. As I decree, the dream shall become a vision, and the vision, truth."
Relationships:
Cao Cao: "Gods... he's charming as all hell, but there's not enough beef... gwuh, regardless, terrible policy. I've no need for warmongers to create peace."
Edward the Black Prince: "Tall, dark, handsome... ooh, I really shouldn't, but..."
"Tam Lin King Arthur": "Oh come off with the disguise, I can see right through it- if anything, I'm envious of you, hiding in there. Having someone fated to be with would have made things so much easier...."
Sultan Baybars: "I need you."
Lugh Samildanach: "-You too, now close the door."
John Henry “Doc” Holliday: "Oh that is a beautiful revolver- you know, I saw them in visions of the far future when I was alive, but I never... may I try firing it?"
Karolina Olsson: "We'll all wake up eventually darling- whether it be in the throne, or by your hand."
Laevateinn: "It's not- your fate, to become the blade- with my gift of shifting sight, I may be able to do something with that."
Louis-Auguste: "I... oh come here dear- you remind me of my first two, I can't look at a boy in your condition and not worry-"
"Mousseline": "The crown... when it isn't something you yourself choose the circumstance of donning, I can't call it anything but a Curse. The severity of the situation lingers, but it lingers all the same."
Nader Shah Afshar: "You know, I... are you available? Like, this weekend?"
"Olympia": "...No, you can't see my lat spread- yes my back is ripped look at what I have to carry- gods, do I sound like this? Is this how I sound?... fine, I'll take the coat off, it's a backless shirt. I'm no hypocrite."
Odin: "We have the same sort of... well, it appears they cancel. This'll be my first time fighting blindness while blind."
Temujin: "... I'd have thought you'd have a beard, at least a moustache, some decent stubble... Pass."
Yeonsangun: "I'd crush you- in fact, I think I will- face the hammer."
Napoleon III: "It's a horrible business, letting others fight for you- I'm my most warlike in this class, I never quite did much myself... yet plenty still died on behalf of my rule. It... well, I suppose it's much better that I'm here as a servant myself."
The Antikythera Mechanism: "I've got to know, since you monitor them- the stars: they always shine so brightly, piercing through my visions- is there some magical quirk that makes them do so? I can't stop thinking of them..."
Francis I of France: "So, the inherit- oh, different Francis, my pardon."
Ronald Knox: "I am blessed with the gift of knowing, don't try it."
Creator Notes: We’re so back. Song in title link.
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Vidi
Vidi you can't do this to me
You can't just hit me with the 'muscle-loving mommy figure' right when I'm sleep deprived and my impulse control is at a competitive number of negative 45.
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