Hmmmm Morg technically none of them would go to hell because their souls were taken from the cycle of death and rebirth to be put on the Throne of Heroes!
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Hmmmm Morg technically none of them would go to hell because their souls were taken from the cycle of death and rebirth to be put on the Throne of Heroes!
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It's really noy about the theme, this is a sorta "interactive" prompt in the sense that it has to explain why said character is there, all according to the prompt's lore. It's definitely not a matter of "they were evil and so they qualify".
I mean... Sure it can happen, but it will not feel like it's engaging with the prompt then. At least in my opinion.
P.S: IT'S NOT A CRITIQUE OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT merely a "this aint an easy prompt at all stop caping" But it's a fun prompt, I'll try my best to participate on it.
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w h i t e f r e n z y ' s
s e r v a n t s . | . m a s t e r s. | . p r e v i e w s
It doesn't have to be in the actual text. You can just put where they qualify in the creator notes, or you could center the sheet around the feature that shows where they would qualify.
Morg's delightful Servant comp.
IN COLOR
I literally already made Dante what more do you want from meeeeeee
Fate\last call
night, dawn, and the birth of stars
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Characters┤
Dictionary┤
Recent: 6.3┘
My, is that you, Mithra Dear? I could hardly recognize you in that vessel.
Astraea. I could say the same for you. In fact, I’m getting a distinct sense of annoyance when I look at you from it.
Really? I’m actually feeling more respectful. How odd.
Indeed. I see you’ve been called to oversee the transition as well.
Yes, Hades sends his regards, though I am surprised I find you here, but not Charon or Peter.
Charon has been busy ferrying the souls between the afterlifes. Same with Thanatos and many of the other psychopomps. It is why we were called to help with arbitration.
Will we be working alongside Minos then?
Perhaps I can explain.
Due to just how many souls are coming in, the workload has exceeded what even our most experienced arbitrators can work through in a timely manner. As such, you and others have been selected in hopes that we will not spend several years guiding the souls of those long departed to the neglection of the newly so.
Certainly sounds reasonable enough.
You and the other judges will be partnered with a Psychopomp that will lead the souls to their temporary residences. You will also be expected to keep records, as to ensure that no soul goes unaccounted for during such a turbulent time.
Then this shall be a familiar partnership for us, Daena. Though, it will be odd doing this without Rashnu and Sraosha.
Though that would please me, I have actually been assigned to Astraea. However, I think yours has arrived.
Hello.
Hahaha. This is quite the turn. I don’t recognize you though. From what pantheon do you come?
Hmm~ I think... I’m my own pantheon, maybe?
…Let’s get to work then, shall we?
Of course! It would be cruel to allow them to linger any longer.
Yes, let us hurry them along to their temporary eternal punishment. Such mercy.
The modern psychopomp continues smiling blissfully, completely unaware of the sarcasm.
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Morg's delightful Servant comp.
IN COLOR
I made a Rider on the 13th of last month with this in his sheet!!!
...
Welp. There goes my plans on skipping on making a sheet for this month's contest. I cannot ignore another excuse for me to write underworld Servants!
Thank goodness I followed Royd's advice of saving sheets if written near a contest, cause a sheet I was working on recently fits the alternative of the prompt (tho nowhere near done that's for sure so I ain't pullin a royd and posting one today/tomorrow).
Author of:
Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Next Update: Chapter 64 on April 30, 2025 (+8:00 GMT)
Velvet Throne
The compendium of my Servants
Technically couldn't you just write any pre-Christian Servant and put them in the first circle where the pagans go.
But cool prompt! Time to do some thinking.
You still remembered her; the memory of your first meeting with Lucy. It was a warm day at the park when you first entered and saw Her, sitting at the bench watching the children play blissfully unaware of the darker forces at work. You were like that once too, despite belonging to one of the few magus families in the area. Your family simply…didn't care for these events…these grail wars. And you were like that too…until you met her. That Beautiful Lady.
“Ahem.”
Ah, apologies. You meant…
First Bite (Ascension)
Second Bite (Ascension)
Third Bite (Ascension)
… (Final Ascension)
That Bloofer Lady.
True Name: Lucy Westenra (Bloofer Lady)
Class: Berserker
Alignment: Neutral Good ~ Chaotic Evil
Source: Dracula
Region: England
Parameters (Bloofer Lady):
Strength: E (C)
Endurance: E (C)
Agility: E (A)
Mana: E (B)
Luck: E (E)
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Bio
Author's Note: I...guess this is the first sheet? Huh, weird. The bio points where she should be going even if she, technically, doesn't deserve it. I say technically as the Shell and Bloofer are entirely separate entities but only one of them actually has a soul, tainted as it is. At least, the Shell would be spared from this so silver lining, I guess.
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What a wonderfully sad first entry. Glad we're starting off with a person who probably shouldn't be sentenced to eternal damnation, but will be anyway.
Morg's delightful Servant comp.
IN COLOR
With the expected but still somewhat hard-to-regulate renovations happening after every single pantheon, breaking down and improving the outdated and obsolete underworlds of centuries past for more efficient, superior methods of torture (and boy, isn't that a statement that makes me sound like a fucking sociopath?), the Christian Empyrean was swarmed with literal mountains of paperwork. While the four psychopomps who oversaw the transfer of the damned souls worked in tandem with the souls of the Fourth Sphere, dwelling inside the Sun as beacons and icons of humanity's Prudence, the angels flew hellward into the Circles, supervising the movement of the influc of damned souls."It is Magic alone which imparts true science."
-Éliphas Lévi's Doctrine and Ritual of Transcendental Magic
For the angels assigned to oversee the sixth circle and below, it was a bitter reminder of their brethren's divide. For the walls of Dis, which encompassed the tiers of Hell from the sixth down, were staunchly guarded by angels who had given in to temptation and fallen from perfection. Their very presence a reminder of what could happen to those angels with each passing second. Their vengeful glares a spear through the heart, dragging their morale down as is. While they dwelled in the Throne of Heroes, specters of the Furies and Medusa also roamed the walls, patrolling the ramparts for wayward souls in the City.
"Angels, with me! The less time we must spend here, the better. Keep conversations with the locals to a minimum, the last thing Father would desire is more of our brethren falling because we became too engrossed in a simple conversation." The commanding angel ordered, moving along the barracks with a stony face hiding a heart of grief. Kushiel was many things. As an angel of punishment, he was one of the seven angels to make regular visits to Hell to punish the damned, using his burning whip to punish entire nations' worth of wrathful sinners in Dis' outskirts.
That didn't exactly mean he enjoyed his job.
To be an angel of punishment was to constantly hear the wails, screams and pleas of the damned and to throw them aside to continue their eternal torment. For an angel, a being of light and justice who was meant to help those in need and ease the pain of humans, to perform the exact opposite of such a task was something that was bound to rend an angel's very soul. Kushiel wasn't an angel of punishment because he wanted to be, he was one because they were the only ones with enough mental fortitude to continue their terrible work without going mad.
"Kushiel. Long time no see. Glad to see you're still up and about." A feminine voice called, a small form trudging up to him with tired eyes. With a slender frame, a gleaming white robe and a positively cherubic face, one could not be blamed for mistaking them as an angel of God....were it not for the charred-black wings, the serpentine scales running along their torso and waist, and the armor around their limbs, like a mix of a cleric and a knight.
"Gadreel." Kushiel bit out. No more needed to be said, save for a terse nod and a slight scowl for his feminine brother, related though they may be.
After all, not many angels today held the Serpent of Eden in particularly high regard.
"My men are temporarily halting the flow of souls down by the city, but we can't take long. New souls are still coming in as we speak." The commander of the Sixth Circle's southern rampant rattled off, gesturing to the streets where fallen angels were clearing a path to a raised pavilion featuring a hall of slightly ornate tombs. Kushiel grunted brusquely and turned away, directing his angels to guide the souls towards their temporary torment as Gadreel rolled his eyes in annoyed exasperation. "Brother, it's been literal millennia since Eden. What is it humans say is in the Bible? 'Forgive and Forget', Kushiel. Forgive and forgeeeeeeet."
"Forgive an-, Gadreel, you tricked Eve into eating the Forbidden Fruit! You are singlehandedly responsible for humans leaving the Garden!" Kushiel snapped at his insufferably smug-looking brother as they flew down to the cleared area, supervising the heretical souls to the pavilion. "That isn't exactly something anyone can go 'let's just sweep this under the rug'!"
"That right there is what I like to call 'a matter of perspective'. You see humans leaving the Garden as a terrible thing. I, however, see it as finally letting them free to explore their own potential." The former Wall of God shot back with a huff, before clasping his hands together with a dreamy look in his eyes, "Humans were practically rotting away being stuck in that glorified terrarium with nothing to strive for. Experiencing those hardships let them grow so beautifully into the strong and creative species I see today~ Even Father said that if they were truly united, they could do anything they put their minds to! Haaaah, I wish I could watch them now....~"
".....Were it not for the fact that causing conflict might kick off the end of the world, I swear I would bend you over the knee and-"
"New faces?" A voice suddenly chirped from one of the tombs they were passing, "New faces! And a whole lot of 'em too, sheesh. It's rare seeing you here, Gad. What's the occasion?"
"....What in the...?" Kushiel said softly, looking at the tomb before turning back to Gadreel, "Brother, this is supposed to be Hell, yes? I didn't think any of the sinners were capable of speech nowadays."
"Oh no, I was screaming for a good while when I first came here." The voice piped up before Gadreel could answer, "But after ten years or so, I got tired of screaming. Five years later, I got used to the heat. Five more after that, and I just got bored. The problem with unchanging, eternal torment is that sooner or later that 'eternal torment' is gonna become routine. And the problem with routine is that it gets really boring after a while. I've had almost a century and a half to get acquainted with my tomb, Monsieur Angel. Nowadays I just chat with the guards to pass the time. I think Gary's on shift today, right?"
"This is why I wasn't looking forward to today..." Gadreel grumbled, tiredly rubbing his temples while one of the demons who guarded the pavilion shot him a sympathetic and equally tired look even as he handed the tomb a bag filled with ('Ooooh, marshmallows! Yay! Thanks, Gary!') marshmallows through an open slit at face height as Kushiel gawked in open confusion, "Pain in my ass, meet Kushiel, my brother. He handles the sinners around the outskirts outside the city as the Fifth Circle's punishing angel. Like a soul-crushing office job, but the office is literally Hell. Kushiel? Meet one of the rare magi to actually fall under Inferno's jurisdiction in modern times."
"Hi there~" The voice greeted Kushiel as a hand waved at him from inside the tomb. Kushiel just numbly waved back.
"Who's inside that tomb?"He murmured, leaning in close to Gadreel.
"That's one of the driving forces behind occultism's big names in the modern era. Not only that, but she was responsible for an entire new branch of heretical magicks being created. She's like a growing legend for some of the locals here." Gadreel murmured back, "Her name's..."
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Natural Enemy: Tsuruya Nanboku IV
What if I told you that clicking this would take you to my Servant Comp?
Very well done Smoke!
wasn't expecting that ending, pulled at the heartstrings
Oh I actually really like her! Good personality, sheet has a nice voice, and I like that the Baphomet is distinctly a facsimile, which pairs well with her writings being used to inform the modern world of the picture of magecraft- all her own perspective
Do the characters need to not seek forgiveness from God specifically or do they not desire forgiveness in general?
Discord: FactorySmoke#1076
Natural Enemy: Tsuruya Nanboku IV
What if I told you that clicking this would take you to my Servant Comp?
Within Inferno, two unfortunate demons were discussing the grunt work of managing the sudden influx of souls. Of course, with so many souls, even the psychopomps could not handle all of the influx, so it was up to the demons to do their duty in moving and appropriately punishing sinners - or, in this case, those who did not reach paradise. In particular, they were discussing the soul of an Irishman. An Irishman from its mythical period. A period that was a quiet bugbear for many demons and malebranche - if only because the custodians of the Irish texture were so...fickle about how they handled their underworld and afterlife. Some guessed they didn't even have one or that they had many. Regardless, stray souls periodically found their way to the Inferno, and it caused a mountain of paperwork every time.
Having to deal with them again - even in an official context - was just about the last thing anyone had on their minds - some trying (and failing) to skimp work, claiming headaches of all things.
And this particular Irishman was set to make that headache much worse.
“So, where do you think he even goes?”
"I mean, Heresy is the easy one, right? He didn't know of Christ, after all. We get strays from his area even under normal circumstances, and we typically put them there."
"Yeah, but that answer's boring. Especially if we'll only have him for a little bit, we should at least try and put him somewhere more personally fitting."
“Hmm, I mean, we’ve got a few options for him. He fought his foster brother for a girl, that could get him in the circle of Lust?”
“Yeah, but he resisted her offers, and only agreed to fight his friend when he was insulted: that’s obviously pride as the primary sin-”
“He’s escaping!” A loud crash was heard, alongside the shout that carried those words.
“Oi! Don’t mischaracterize it! I’m not escaping-”
A figure crashed in front of the two demons who had been discussing his fate.
“I’m going deeper.”
Claws carved deeply into one demon, sending it flying backwards. A clawed hand wrapped around the other’s neck.
“W-what are you doing?” The demon choked out, trying to pry the man’s hand from its throat.
“Well, I overheard you talking about me fighting my old buddy earlier. And it got me thinking. I want to fight him again. But I don’t want to go at him the same as I was last time.”
The grip on the demon’s throat tightened.
“So I’m gonna use this time to get some extra work in. See how much better I can get. You guys respawn in here, right? So don't worry too much, they'll shoo me out the door eventually.”
“L-e-let…me…go-” The demon choked.
“And by the way, to answer your question?”
Crack
“I think your buddy was right about me belonging in pride.”
Lancer of the Horned Skin
Other Classes: Saber, Rider, Shielder
True Name: Ferdiad mac Daman
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: Ireland (Connacht)
Height: 187cm
Weight: 85kg
Likes: His own strength, Fighting, Earning Rewards
Dislikes: Sore Losers, Being tricked into a fight he doesn’t care for
Natural Enemy: Cu Chulainn
Parameters
STR: B
AGL: C
END: B
MAG: C
NP: A
LCK: E
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance C:
A class skill inherent to the Lancer Class. At the rank of C, it can negate any spell with a chant of two verses, but it cannot defend against Greater Magecraft. Of course, Ferdiad’s Noble Phantasm will defend against all sorts of Magecraft, so he doesn’t particularly care.
Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation C:
As someone who specializes in defense, and is considered to have an invincible defense, Ferdiad does not get the opportunity to exercise this skill often. As such, he does not have the legendary endurance and the ability to fight without stopping that other heroes possess. However, the more injured Ferdiad gets, the more excited he gets - as he is finally presented with a properly challenging battle. As such, fueled by excitement, Ferdiad will continue fighting even with severe injuries.
Clis of Dun Scaith B:
Clis
Often translated as “feats”, Clis are the martial arts techniques that defined an Irish Hero. Inhuman, dazzling, and overwhelming techniques that few could resist, and the proliferation of such skills are what led to the battles that populated the Ulster and Fenian cycles to be so violent and bloody.
Among the most valued teachers of these techniques was the Witch of Dun Scaith, Scathach - a genius of both magecraft and physical combat. Few survived her training, but those who did became some of the most renowned and unparalleled warriors the island had ever seen - such as Naoise, Cu Chulainn, and Ferdiad.
Ferdiad, although equal in skill with Cu Chulainn, did not rely on his Clis to the same degree. Much of the Clis taught by Scathach focused on agility and fast-paced combat. Ferdiad, meanwhile, preferred to fight by relying on his strength and steadfastness.
As such, Ferdiad lacks the ability to perform a Clis such as the Salmon’s Leap, which is pure mobility. However, Ferdiad can employ an adjusted version of the Toranchless. Rather than killing 100 enemies in the blink of an eye - akin the a rush move in a video game - Ferdiad’s Toranchless is a thunderous blow wherein the force of the initial strike ripples out against surrounding enemies like an explosion.
Golden Rule (Spoils of Connacht) B-:
During the Tain Bo Cuailnge, Queen Medb and King Ailill of Connacht offered countless rewards in order to convince champions to confront Cu Chulainn. This culminated in the spectacular offers that they offered Ferdiad Mac Daman, the only man on the island willing and able to fight Cu Chulainn.
As such, Ferdiad possesses the ability to gather wealth by defeating enemies. While this means that he will not have the convenience of instant wealth that a normal [Golden Rule] user would have, it does allow Ferdiad to potentially ramp up his wealth to the point that it will surpass those who possess an equivalently ranked [Golden Rule].
…
Or well, that would be the case, but as Ferdiad did not earn his splendid reward in his life (as Cu Chulainn defeated him) he will always receive a little less wealth than he would expect.
Noble Phantasm:
“You wanna know something about me?”
“I was Connacht’s Greatest Champion. No one could challenge me…well, except for the man who eventually killed me.”
“Even Fergus couldn’t beat me if he tried.”
“I’ll admit, I cheat a little. Well, I cheat a lot.”
“Because there’s one thing you need to understand about me, and it's that-”
“I’M FUCKING INVINCIBLE”
Edged Armor that Repels Death
Congancheness
Rank: A
Type: Defense
An “armor of spears” - the Horned Skin of Irish Mythology that made its user invincible. It is an armor that enforces cause and effect.
The purpose of armor is block attacks. When an attack is made, armor will block it.
[Congancheness] enforces this relationship of causality. Whenever an attack is made against Ferdiad, a piece of [Cogancheness] will appear wherever Ferdiad would be hit, intercepting the attack. These “smokey” pieces of [Cogancheness] reduce any damage they intercept by 80% - combined with Ferdiad’s natural durability, this means that many attacks will simply fail against Ferdiad.
However, [Congancheness]’s true power is revealed when it faces another Noble Phantasm. The moment another Noble Phantasm is launched, even if Ferdiad is not aware of its use, [Congancheness] will activate in its full form, engulfing Ferdiad fully. Fully assembled, [Congancheness] will reduce the offensive power of the next attack it receives to 0%, while also increasing its own defensive power to 100% of the target's maximum power.
In short, it is an absolutely unbeatable defense.
One would perhaps come to the conclusion that the only way to defeat such a defense would be to never deal with it in the first place.
Perhaps a weapon that beats [Cognacheness] at its own game would work.
Even the greatest armor would not be able to defend against a spear that kills before it is used, after all.
Lore
Personality
Relationships
Bond Craft Essence
Bond CE Art Source
Bibliography
Creator's Notes
Oh that's a really cool interpretation of Ferdiad! The presentation of the NP is particularly great, the shame for his last words is a very interesting part to his character, and the Penthesilea line was pretty funny lol
Nitpick for the initial section: heresy would be out of the question regardless bc he'd never been introduced to Christianity himself in the first place; if they were just going off of the religion thing and only that, they'd have to put him in limbo, lol
Knowing he wouldn’t be able to handle the impact, Kintoki instead jumps back to lessen the damage and lets the enemy hit him straight on the chest. The force is such that it still sends him rolling through the ground, but ready for it, he quickly takes advantage of the momentum to spin into a sweeping kick as he steadies himself, just in case his opponent was already in melee range again.
This is a win. He has forced her to hit him instead of engaging a grapple, and that means less danger of the fight ending right then and there. Though he’s got a preference for sumo, it’s an impossible proposition against this enemy. If she ever gets proper a hold of him, the fight will be over. Death for him… him and anyone else in a radius of dozens of kilometers, probably. She didn’t seem like someone to hold back.
Madness Enhancement D
The Class Skill of Berserkers. Sanity is lost in exchange for power.
In her case, she is not taken over by any kind of rage for extended periods of time, so the power gained is relatively small. Rather, her usual mentality is easily swayed by the promise of battle. Though it's not intrinsic to her, her ultimate role in her legend and life was to battle to the death, and as such, it's hard to fight such an instinct. For any opponents, this is a great boon, as an entertaining fight might dissuade her from using her strongest trump cards right away.
Though this was also something he needed to maintain. As long as her Madness Enhancement was active — in other words, as long as she was entertained — they would be safe. He had discarded his weapon near the beginning of the fight, because upon hearing the clicking of her tongue in annoyance at seeing his axe, he realized that reaction was more dangerous than any hit she could dish out.
His preemptive sweeping kick met empty air — as he expected — and he steadied himself. No matter which way he looked, she was gone. This wasn’t the first time this happened in the fight. Though he knew monsters capable of going invisible, and was even more familiar with her brand of bloodthirsty snake-woman, she didn’t seem like those he knew, and he was pretty sure she wasn’t even from Japan anyway.
And if this isn’t invisibility, then… There! He swung his upper body to the left and her open hand met nothing as she rose from below to grab his throat.
She smiled, another win for him. Though of course, he wasn’t safe yet. Her arm bent towards his shoulder and grabbed it, using the man as leverage to pivot herself around him and towards his back— BAM, his red elbow hit her side, but even as she was about to be flung by the sheer force of his strike, her leg tried to wrap itself around his. She’d stop herself, break his knee and that’d be it for Golden.
She was already in motion; everything happening in an instant. He just needed to prevent this and he’d get a chance to catch his breath.
Arms! Can’t reach down fast enough. Legs! A kick wouldn’t be fast enough! In that case—
Up! Kintoki jumped, sparks flying around him and from his feet. Legs singed by the sparks, coat tearing as she rolled across the ground, her massive braid flowing behind her—an azure streak that stopped at the rockside. The impact of her body against it cracked the stone and debris fell towards her. A sound like the cutting of air by a whip alerted Kintoki as her whole body slid—slithered—under the ground.
Golden, he finally saw it. It wasn’t invisibility at all, it was…
Age-long Benthic Biding A
The ability to swim through the sea that surrounds the world on all its sides, in other words, to slip around and under the world's texture and resurface wherever she pleases. Though one can speculate on what exactly is the nature of the "sea" she swims through, none know exactly, as the Servant herself doesn't seem interested.
His face whips around as he slowly spins and surveys the area, trying to find from where her next surprise attack is going to come from, but the strike doesn’t arrive. Instead, he finds her standing over the stones that almost crushed her. She was smiling, looking down on him with expectation.
“What now golden boy?”
He had spent most of the fight baiting her, trying to keep her head in the game. Well, seems like she’s ready to fish too. The initiative was his and he knew he couldn’t back out, the poison that coursed through his veins was an uncomfortable reminder.
Nine-step Retreat Prevention C
Something that could've been a Noble Phantasm in a different Class, so intrinsic it is to her legend. As a skill, it is slightly warped to match her nature as a being meant to fight to the death. If injected with her venom, the opponent cannot retreat from battle. Even taking just nine steps away from her, with the intention of putting the conflict aside, will result in death.
Though he wishes he could regroup with his Master and leave this fight to another day, the venom compels him to finish this here. So be it then. A battle of attrition would not be in his favor, so it was time to end it.
His arms swelled and a bright red color climbed from his fingers, to his shoulder, to his whole body. Divine power burned away most of the venom inside him as he brought his fists together in the air—then slammed the ground with all his force.
An ear-splitting roar accompanied his earth-shattering strike. Lightning-filled fissures ran through the ground towards his enemy but, instead of dodging the incoming attack, she decided to dive into the ground and under it, like she had done many times before.
It was the wrong choice.
Kintoki was already there when she jumped from the rock, running over and ahead of the lightning, he had reached her in a single instant, already weapon in hand. Though he had thrown it aside before to appease her preferences, he had since realized he didn’t have the luxury to indulge her whims if he wanted to win. One, two, three, four… fifteen of his cartridges had already been loaded onto the axe: his most devastating strike, backed by Madness Enhancement-fueled Monstrous Strength.
“GOOOLDEN EATEEEEEEEEEER!!!!”
His father's godly thunder filled the blade with energy as it met her neck. With enough force to split the heavens, this final move should be enough to not only end the fight, but to scar this entire area permanently as well.
And yet, her arm wraps around his own.
His strongest strike was not enough, digging deep into her chest, almost bisecting her torso, but it was still not enough to cut into her incredibly dense spiritual core.
Divinity D
The measure of how close to a Divine Spirit a Servant is. Though logically it should be much higher, her nature as a monster affects it severily. Even still, her spiritual core carries a similar constitution to high-divinity beings. Density beyond measure, it's incredibly difficult to harm her core.
And terrifyingly, her arm wraps itself around his own. Like a snake onto itself, it slides around both of his arms and tightens. Not being long enough to immobilize him by itself, even the entire right half of her torso, almost completely torn away from her body by his own attack, contorts to wrap him alongside her arm.
And terrifyingly — most terrifyingly — she still smiles.
It's as if this bizarre display of body-horror requires no effort at all.
Human-shaped Serpentine Vessel A+
Her nature as a sea-serpent is present, regardless of what her form is. Though her altered form shoud limit her in some ways, her association with the biggest snake symbologies in existence force her to never lose those properties. In practice, it means every part of her body, regardless of its form, can act in a snake-like manner. Beware of her limbs, her braids, her tongue, even her entire body—regardless of its appearance, all of it is capable to encircling, constricting and slithering.
Putting aside his axe to appease her at the beginning of the fight was his first mistake, meeting her on her own terms immediately put him at a disadvantage. Using the axe at full-power was his second mistake. Now that she had seen his best, and learned that it was not enough, she was emboldened to end this fight rather than simply continue the back and forth. By using his greatest move, he invited her to user her own.
A great shadow covers not only her enemy, but the entire area. A shadow so massive it can only belong to a creature big enough to cover the sky and circle the Earth.
But as Kintoki looks up, nothing so massive covers him.
All he sees is her braid, swung over them with a movement of her head. Just hair—but threatening to split the earth asunder.
In her original form, she was already a scary creature, large enough to encircle the entirety of Miðgarð—the world. A body possessing such mass that even it’s threshing under the waves signaled the end of the world.
As a Servant, her form has been changed to fit into a human vessel, this should lower her Lifescale and render her unable to utilize the full power of her absurd size. Even this Noble Phantasm, which releases her true form and increase her mass many times over, should not allow her to reach the worldwide length she once possessed.
This should be the case, but Human-shaped Serpentine Vessel changes everything. This Noble Phantasm’s function of turning her into the Jörmungandr—the vast snake—is rendered useless as she is already recognized as a snake through the skill, and as such, all that’s left is to increase her mass.
One’s Lifescale can change simply due to their form. Large and heavy things may be powerful, but that cannot even compare them to things that are small and heavy. Increasing her mass to values worthy of a world-encircling serpent, but maintaining the human-sized vessel, provides her with a density way beyond what could be achieved as a giant monster—is other words, her Lifescale increases exponentially. Crushing everything in her path, turning her already powerful blows into world-shattering attacks.
False-Cat Waterfall: Hero-Defying Scale. An A-rank, Anti-Unit (Self) Noble Phantasm. Especially tailored to fight against heroes, the overwhelming presence of a monster they could never defeat.
Crushed by her final attack, the enemy Servant still stands. Almost unrecognizable as the Golden Berserker, Kintoki’s drive keeps him alive. His Master wants to change the world, and he wants to help them do so.
Miðgarðsormr recognizes his drive, measures his wounds, and finds herself terribly bored. She raises her hand and struggles to close it, as if she was crushing something in her palm.
The horizon closes in, constricting and squashing Kintoki completely. Leaving no trace behind.
The Sea-Thread Knot: The Vast Snake’s Worldwide Constriction. An EX-rank, Anti-World Noble Phantasm. As the snake that encircles reality, she is always just over the horizon, and anyone who can see the horizon is already encircled by her. As such, it’s trivial to crush them.
A follow up to her Falsköttr Fors that uses her incredible Lifescale to crush another. This should, of course, mean that she is crushing the world alongside them, but this is not how this power manifests itself, and despite being an age-ending disaster, she doesn’t seem to have any interest in doing so either.
Immediately mind-numbingly bored by the end of the fight, she seeks to go into town to seek a bar, an amusement park, a video game store, or anything else this place offers. To sink into this age’s monotony and enjoy it as long as it lasts.
Aliases: Jörmungandr, World Serpent, Miðgarð Serpent, Sea-Thread.
Class: Berserker.
Height: 158cm
Likes: Today.
Dislikes: Tomorrow.
Attribute: Earth.
Alignment: Neutral Evil.
Origin: Völuspá, Gylfaginning, Hymiskviða.
Sources: りせっとぼたん.
Ideal Master: Thetiana Dontor.
STR A END A+ AGI B MGI C+ LCK C NP A
Miðgarðsormr is Loki’s middle child. The sea serpent who grew so great that it encircled the entirety of Midgard and grasped its own tail. The day it finally lets go of it was prophesized to be the end of the Norse Age of Gods, Ragnarök, in which the serpent fought Thor until their mutual death. One could imagine such a creature to have a mechanical personality, set on destroying the world and accomplishing its role, but they could not be farther from the truth. One must understand that releasing its tail, trashing under the sea, and then finally facing the gods in mortal combat is a minuscule portion of this thing’s life, and more than that, it’s what led to its death.
No, that is not who she is. Before then, she simply rested at the bottom of the sea, a snake eating its own tail, set to inhabit that lightless, unchanging place forever. For Miðgarðsormr, the ideal age is one that never changes, and the ideal day is one that goes on forever. Others might interpret the ouroboros as a symbol of cycles, of rebirth or reinvention, but those are not the meanings she embodies. A serpent eating its own tail is also refusing all outside interference, unchanging, it only consumes itself and only grows from what it knows most intimately.
The fact is that she hates change. With her own era forever gone, Miðgarðsormr instead acclimates herself to whatever age she is summoned into, acting to spend as much time there as possible and to maintain the status quo for just as long. Laziness in the truest sense of the word, though her Madness Enhancement might drag her out of that mindset for a moment, she is still that serpent wasting days away at the unchanging bottom of the sea, angry and fearful of those who would seek to take it away from her.
Like those wrathful, sullen, slothful souls condemned to the Styx river of Hell’s Fifth Circle, either fighting forever on its surface or sinking beneath its waters. She embodies both punishments and embraces such an existence in a Hel of her own making that to her eyes is much more alike to paradise.
A mindset completely opposed to that of humanity, one might think she would hate them, but that is not the case. Despite their intention to change and better themselves, humans the best there is at running in circles and maintaining the status quo while speaking of change.
And even to those truly set on changing—progressing—beware to not do so in her sights, for the threshing of the Midgard serpent spells the end of the world, and the distant horizon they seek might be closer than they imagine.
Last edited by pinetree; October 12th, 2024 at 09:09 PM.
I should probably save this for one of the bulk reviews I've started doing, but this is a crazy strong sheet. The formatting is really nice - it guides the eye well and really makes the information hit. The decision to build the sheet entirely around the narrative was also a really cool choice, and it was done well.
The characterization itself is also super unique. It's really easy to fall into the trap of making all of Loki's kids fall into very similar "vengeful" characterizations, and instead choosing to base Midgardsomr around the time it spent in the ocean not only helped it align with the prompt but was also very refreshing.
Super fun entry!
Are there not several degrees of death?
Can death follow life, or is it not life that follows death?
How do we see death? As an enemy or as a friend?
Death, is it not you who are the ultimate advisor?
Death, is it not you who are the real master?
It is only death that can grant us a reprieve.
We must die in ourselves.
We must die alive if we are to go through the doors of sound to find the pwen, the point of power, the formula, the essence of True Ginen.
The point that is beyond good and evil.
Brave Gede, Gedelavi, without you, without your order, who can close the doors of the magic rite?
Who will go to the crossroads for us if it is not you,
Brave Gede, Gede Simitye, Gedelavi?
Last edited by sutaa; October 24th, 2024 at 08:57 AM.