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    Submitting this because I want it out before getting busy with other things and the deadline. I plan to add relationships in a fewish hours (hopefully) but will at some point.

    Enjoy.

    Darkness.

    The physical absence of light.

    All creatures require light.

    Yet darkness is not life's antithesis.

    Rather, it is its eternal aide.

    Until it grows envious.

    When it grows envious, it schemes only one thing.

    Eternal night.

    A time of minimal light and eternal darkness.

    A space that cannot support true life.

    Yet one human dared to dream of this existence.

    They even worked for its realization.

    To them it had only one name.

    Camelot.



    You've made a foolish mistake.

    Do not appear before me again.

    I shall not spare your life twice.



    ModekaiserMains

    = Gatekeeper of the Void =


    True Name
    Vortigern

    Title
    King of the Void

    Class
    Gatekeeper

    Alignment
    Chaotic-Good

    Attribute
    Earth

    Region
    Britain

    Source
    Arthurian Mythology

    Classes




    History

    Vortigern in history is remembered as a foolish tyrant who made a foolish deal that lost the medieval britons Britain. The famous blunder occurred when he invited Hengist and Horsa to his kingdom and asked them to aid him in his war against the Scots and the Picts. Mid-war the two allied together and betrayed him forcing him to retreat. This is the generally agreed-upon historical account of a king named Vortigern.

    In myth he is the grandfather of Arthur and the despotic tyrant ruling Britain and its tribes. He is secretly working with the Picts and Saxons to create an endless war to tighten his control of Britain. He is then slain by Arthur who rallies the tribes, makes Camelot, and wars with the Saxons and Picts until Mordred's rebellion ends his era.

    Neither of these however accurately capture the essence of Vortigern.

    Vortigern, to those that know, is known as the Lord of Shadows.

    This is because of his ultimate goal he strived for in his lifetime and as King of Britain. He extended the Age of Fairies artificially and sought to do so eternally by drowning in the land in darkness. An environment that is inhospitable to humans... but perfectly survivable by the Fae, the beings he sought to preserve.

    A plan his son detested and fought against as best he could but could not.

    This is because Vortigern possessed the blood and heart of the White Dragon within him. Such a thing made him much stronger than mortal men and superior to Uther. Uther fled and plotted, eventually having Artoria birthed with the blood and heart of the Red Dragon. Together with his son Kay, the three of them began a journey to gather allies and eventually war with Vortigern proclaiming him a tyrant.

    They utilized his familiarity with the Picts and Saxons as a means of rallying aid in their aim of dethroning him.

    In their final confrontation he was forced to expend a malevolent light that in the eyes of many confirmed their fears of him. Fears that cemented his legacy as a despotic tyrant. However that light was worse than mere tyranny. It was a sign that his aims of an eternally dark Britain was nearly completed and only the victory of Artoria prevented an eternal night from descending.

    This history is what is encaspulated within this saint graph.

    He is not Vortigern the Tyrant.

    Neither is he Vortigern the Dragon.

    He is Vortigern the Void.


    Parameters

    Strength Agility Endurance
    A D B

    Mana
    Noble
    Phantasm

    Luck
    A A E


    Class Skills

    Territory Defense
    C

    The class skill of Gatekeeper.

    It enhances the defenses of their territory while also boosting their own performance within it.

    Vortigern famously held an iron-fisted rule over Britain and nearly brought about an eternal age of darkness. It was his own arrogance that led to his defeat; if he had taken Uther seriously after defeating him, Vortigern may well have ended the threat Artoria posed to his rule long before she was ever born... he did not however as he looked down upon humans, including his own son, as worthless.

    This loss has degraded this skill... but his rule before this loss does grant him some use of this skill.

    At his rank while within his territory he gains a rank in all of his parameters and a plus modifier. Likewise, his territories defenses are a rank higher than they appear; often catching enemies off guard.


    Personality

    Despite his reputation, Vortigern is not the entirely despotic individual one might imagine.

    Cruel, callous, cold, despondent, arrogant.

    These hold true but he holds a specific soft spot for the Fae.

    One of the Fae, even one whose blood is diluted to uselessness, will not receive even a fraction of what humans receive of these traits. At most they can expect to see a prideful, silent, private man who can make tough decisions when it counts.

    This is simply because Vortigern never, on any level, felt a connection to humanity.

    A distance existed that he could never overcome. A distance that eventually grew from despondence to disdain. He looked upon the ugliness of man and saw none of the virtues that sometimes glimmered. Rather, he ignored it. Instead his eye turned to the Fae that dotted his lands and saw their purity and desired it as his subjects rather than the humans.

    Thus the evil plan he concocted. Even after his defeat, even as becoming a spiritual existence beyond death, he has not changed one bit. He is still the Hole in the World that desires only to bring about an Era of Darkness upon Britain. Though now it is fueled by a greivance towards humanity denying his dream than a simple gesture to creatures he was fond of and wanted to rule over.


    Personal Skills

    Gatekeeper

    A skill that represents the role of Gatekeepers.

    They exist not to aid masters but to bar them from the grail. How far the Gatekeeper goes to secure the grail from competitors and their own master depends on the individual Gatekeeper. In the case of Vortigern, they go as far as needed to be the only one at the end to claim it. This includes potentially killing their master if they dare try to claim a share of it.

    In a perversion of the class, Vortigern wishes to alone claim the grail.

    It is a blessing that this skill, regardless of the individual, bars the servant from truly claiming the grail until every other servant present is decisively defeated.

    Thirsting Charisma
    EX

    A variant of the skill Charisma.

    Those possessing this skill ruled with wickedness and fear, not nobility and respect. Often belonging to Tyrants, a servant with a title of 'King of Tyrants' would naturally possess such a skill... yet it is entirely accidental. Vortigern never intentionally instilled fear into his human subjects. He ignored them and only took from them. This inhumane treatment naturally instilled fear but allowed it to be washed away by a proper King.

    As a skill, this makes this skill a passively active skill.

    Any human he speaks to is immediately struck by a high-ranking mental interference fear effect. They become compliant to any of his demands and will not resist him. Likewise however Charisma of at least B-rank can remove this mental interference along with proper spells.

    Likewise, even low-ranking Charisma can do so if it belongs to a King.

    His charisma's weakness after all is the Charisma of a proper King.


    Interactions

    Artoria Pendragon
    Hmph. Well? What have you to say? Artoria Pendragon? Regret? Lamentation? Despair...?... Perhaps hope? Confidence? Dare I suggest pride? I wish to know. What did the King of Knights dare to think at the end? No... beyond it. What do you desire, O' King of Camelot. I already know. I just want you to say it.

    Morgan
    A sad sight to see.... and a wondrous one. You indeed are a superb heir to Britain's mysteries, even more so than the real Morgana! Though... it seems no matter what She is destined to be your bane. Unfortunate.

    Baobhan Sith
    What a fine fairy. A prime example of the beauty of the Fae. A purity humanity could never hope to achieve, wrapped in beautiful reds! WONDROUS!

    Victoria
    Love. A poison of humanity... tsk. How unforgivable for them to taint a Fairy with it!

    Black Dog
    What a fine fairy. Better than the humans deserve, anyway. Whenever he wants it desires it, my darkness is available to feed him.

    Francis I
    HOW DARE YOU! I SHALL NOT TOLERATE A HUMAN DARING TO ABUSE A FAIRY IN MY PRESENCE! DIE CRETIN!

    Hubble Space Telescope
    Pah! The toy thinks its mastered the Void? Fool! You were simply made for it! I AM THE VOID! LET US SEE WHOSE DARKNESS IS EVER DEEPER, KNAVE!




    Noble Phantasm

    Fall, void-filled sky.

    Rise, O' Lightless Capital.

    Die, works of man and Grow o' children of nature.

    Come forth!


    Void Camelot
    Gwilienn ar Goullo


    Type
    Anti-Man

    Rank
    A

    Vortigern dreamed of a dayless Britain.

    Not because he wouldn't miss the sunrises or sunsets. He would miss those plenty. He dreamed of bringing eternal night because of the results of that plan. The eternal preservation of britain's mysteries and a paradise for Fae-kind. The very reason he even considered the plan; he admired the Fae for their purity and sought to extend their age for as long as possible. Eternity was more than welcome to him.

    This noble phantasm represents the progress he made towards that dream and how near-complete it was.

    Its passive effect is acting as a shroud around him. His darkness veils him like a cloak protecting him from the attacks of humans. Any attack sourced from mankind and its products is ranked down twice. If it falls below C-rank, it is completely negated unless it is a noble phantasm in which case only it is only ranked down once and is not negated.

    Further it can act as his weapon.

    He can utilize the darkness and solidfy it into weapons temporarily. These weapons only work on humans and servants that were, in life, humans themselves. These attacks are equivalent to A-rank attacks unless the injured possessed mixed blood in life; in this case the attacks are normal and considered magecraft. However regardless whenever he deals damage a small portion of the targets mana is stolen away from them.

    However, its true power is unleashed when he invokes its True Name.

    Upon activation, a bounded field expands instantly and his darkness expands with it strengthening its boundary. The darkness then forms the vague shape of a castle that resembles Camelot. This represents his ideal to its extreme; a fortress that rejects humanity in its entirety.

    Within this bounded field all products of man cannot exist. It is, itself, toxic to humanity. Humans will find themselves exposed to mana equivalent to the Age of Fairies and if this is not lethal the levels will rise to make it so. Only servants can exist in this space.

    Further any servant that enters has their parameters automatically ranked down and their sight robbed. Light cannot travel in this space and so visual acuity is impossible. Further, similar to his darkness, servants of humanity always have their parameters ranked down once again.

    It's most prominent feature is the automatic absorption of mana from attacks not his own.

    Anytime a noble phantasm is unleashed half of its expended mana is simply absorbed from the Camelot. Only if it is a Divine Construct truly seperated from mankind does this effect not activate. On top of this, the attack will still be ranked down twice unless the above exception is present.

    However this space represents an opportunity for Fairies.

    Those of fairykind will find the exact opposite reaction occur. Their parameters will immediately double and their attacks will be boosted by a portion of the mana absorbed by the Camelot. Further they will be immune to his attacks.

    This is the ideal Vortigern spent his life on... and how close he came to seeing it to fruition.

    He is able to create a castle meant only for Fairies.

    Craft Essence

    Albion



    The beginning and the end.

    The line of Pendragons began with the first discovering Albion.

    Their ascent from its fruits was assured.

    It ended with his granddaughter, one who brimmed equally with the power of Albion.

    He raged against the end of the Age of Fairies.

    He however did hold one small comfort.

    Perhaps a bit petty.

    Perhaps barely a comfort.

    He died knowing that Albion's blood would extend the Age of Fairies.

    Not as long as he liked, but a little.

    Not enough to rest in peace.

    Enough to close his eyes one final time.

    Enough to allow the Pendragon line to end with her.
    Last edited by Baron Magnus; February 22nd, 2025 at 07:58 AM. Reason: Added relationship lines. Will add contest entries shortly
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    Gunther: I know it’s not the time but LOL this FC killed me. I love it, it went exactly the way it should with the initial trolling of expecting a Saber but getting an Assassin. Or is it truly a saber? Because there are both these classes being mentioned but you know what, I’m just rolling with it I guess. Honestly, I’m just in love with the dude’s personality, it made the sheet very enjoyable. And my homo bromance in valentine’s month? Are you pampering me, Baron? All in all, loved this.

    Nilakeci: Me, being the evolved mind I am, did not attached any pre-conceived ideas to the character thanks to the FC and therefore could appreciate this sheet a lot more but I guess that a Aqua FC will always be an Aqua FC. What a whiplash lmao. What I’m trying to say is that I’m quite surprised in a good way by this sheet – usually the erudite types are kinda hard to write about because you have to transform something that usually isn’t THAAAT interesting in something interesting to others, and that’s so not easy. But I think you did great, and the result (especially that NP I looooved it) is a very, very fun servant. Would summon.

    Nimue: I don’t like Arthurian adjacent topics in Fate, I’m too tired of rolling my eyes. BUT to your credit you’ve managed to keep my attention to the very end and I didn’t find it a drag, so I must commend you so much for that! She’s the quintessential lady of the lake, which means that you did great because even with something that should be so common you still made it interesting enough that it made ME engaged, of all people. Thank you for the read!

    Maridiata: I already said what I wished to say about him. Still would pinch his cheeks and mess around with his wiwwle ears.

    Borghild: I absolutely LOVE when people take really obscure characters from somewhere and just go with it. I read everything thinking she could have more spice, I don’t know, it feels like you could’ve amped the character to 11, but… All in all, I think it’s a very cool presentation, the Skills were interesting enough to make you know the character and in no moment I was left scratching my head thinking what I was reading. Very competent work!
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    One day, Nanabush’s family decided to retire in their lodge and be at peace with each other, away from the world. Now, Nanabush was surprised, because they liked walking the world and meeting all who lived there, and thought that so did their family.

    But when even their grandmother Nokomis chose to step away from the world, they joined them, for they loved their family very much. But they could never make themselves look away from the world, and so they kept an eye always on it.

    It so happened that one day, the whole world looked to be on fire, even the lakes and the ocean were burning. And so Nanabush thought to themselves "Surely with this, my family will go out to help put out the fire." But the fire didn’t reach their lodge, and they all stayed inside.

    So, quite annoyed, Nanabush decided to sneak out. But in order to not been seen by their family, in case they ever looked outside their lodge for once, they decided to disguise themselves.

    Now, Nanabush was quite used to changing their shape, to the point they didn’t remember what their original form was, if they ever had one. So they reasoned that their family would notice them even under a different shape.

    So they decided to try something new. They entered the pocket of a spirit that was gathering to herself various other spirits to try and put out the fire. From the pocket, they snuck out and replaced the spirit, taking her shape to have fun without their family knowing.

    But they took her shape so well that they came to believe that they were the spirit and forgot themselves.

    A lot of things happened and they remembered who they were. Having learned their lesson, Nanabush decided to be honest about what they wanted, and not care about the opinion of their family, or anyone else.

    And so…




    ~ ♬ ~

    Rider of the Ears
    -- Great Trickster Hare --




    "Hey! I’m yer Servant, Rider! Nanabush, that’s who I am, and I am Nanabush! Well, I’ll act more like an Archer than a Rider but bear with me, aight? I can promise ya I’ll show ya a good time!"

    Class: Rider Other Classes: Archer, Lancer, Caster
    True Name: Nanabush Region: Great Lakes
    Alignment: Chaotic Good Gender: N/A
    Place of Origin: Ojibwe Folklore Height & Weight: Varies
    Varies
    Likes: Having fun, tricking people, talking Dislikes: Selfish people, being tricked
    Talent: Getting in trouble Natural Enemy: Mikwam
    Attribute: Sky Armament: Spear, bow and arrow, various traps
    Traits: Servant, Animal Characteristic, Bunny, Humanoid, Non-Hominidae, Fairy Tale, Seven Knights Servant, Wild Beast Catalysts: A copy of the Nanabush Peterborough petroglyph, rabbit ears, wiigwaasabak

    Parameters
    Strength: C Endurance: B Agility: B
    Mana: C Luck: B Noble Phantasm: C









    Riding A

    Nanabush has taught Humanity how to ride canoe and sleighs, and uses them extensively themselves. They have also presumably taught them how to ride horses, but no records of that tale are left. Still, this Skill lets them ride any vehicule or creature aside from Phantasmals, Divine Beasts and Dragonkins. Just like they learned how to manoeuver a boat the first time, they will learn how to pilot a car or a plane this time around!

    "Yeah I had some… unusual riding experiences, ya could say. I once flew tied to a flock of gouse I was tryin’ to catch, only for them to suddenly take off and take me with them. Not my proudest moment, that. Still! I deal with normal stuff just fine!"


    Magic Resistance C

    Despite technically being a Divine Spirit, Nanabush has firmly anchored themselves to Humanity. As such, their rank in this Skill has drastically decreased from what one would expect from a creator entity. Also, many stories feature them falling for a magical trick of one kind or another, so they cannot even leverage their stories to give themselves a boost.

    "Also it’s boring to just go "Nah I’d win", ya know? Tankin’ stuff head on is just not my jazz. I prefer to go around it. And if I can’t, well, I’ll regret it. That’s how the game goes sometimes!"


    Independent Action A

    Nanabush spent days, weeks, months, travelling, alone or with their grandmother or their friends. As such, they are used to surviving on their own for some time, using the resources they have at their disposal. Mind, this does not mean they are reasonable enough to not spend all their Magical Energy in one go by firing a Noble Phantasm without a Master’s backup.

    "There were times I starved, nearly froze to death or died of thirst, but I always made it out, ya know? But… Ahahahah! I can’t say it wasn’t because I ate all my food at once or forgot to pack a blanket!"


    Item Creation D

    Nanabush is a being that taught humanity many things, among them how to fashion tools from their surroundings and the animals they hunted. Nothing went to waste so as to honour what they killed or harvested for their own needs. As such, despite not being summoned in a Caster Class container, they still possess this Class Skill, albeit at a drastically reduced rank.

    "Yeah as it is I can… maybe craft the very basic stuff? Clothes, a tent, a bow, at a stretch a lodge or a canoe. But don’t count on me to do any of that fancy stuff like charms, aight?"








    Midewiwin B

    This ability is not the bestowal upon Nanabush of many blessings by Divine Spirits. Rather, it is the reflection that they taught Humanity many things, like writing, building a lodge, building and using a canoe, hunting, and much, much more. Its closest equivalent is the Blessings unto Life Skill a certain Elemental possesses. If Nanabush feel like it, they can teach someone a Skill they need, granting it to them at rank sufficient to be considered proficient in it. They still have to go through the actual teaching process, rather than magically gifting the ability.

    "Yeah, I was awesome like that! I taught people so many things! And even besides the obvious of my, ya know, teaching them directly. All the stories about me were also lessons to teach things! And I’m absolutely taking credit for those!"


    Divinity A

    Nanabush is the child of Wiininwaa and E-bangishimog, the latter of which is a
    spirit
    manitou
    . They themselves were sent by Gitche Manitou, an aspect of the highest entity in the Great Lakes Texture, to teach and help Humanity, as one of them. This is why they can even be summoned in the first place: they are a demi-god, half human, and have spent their entire existence living among them. That said, they are still one of the most powerful entity of their Texture, and have willingly chosen to come back from the Reverse Side of the World.


    "I did create the world, ya know! But, ah… I’m not a manitou myself. I’ve dealt with some of them, and let me tell ya, they are one mighty pain in the arse! Me, I think like a human. But them? Nah, they just think sideways. It’s got its own merits, ya know, but not when ya live that much like a human."


    Disengage C

    Nanabush got into plenty of trouble. And boy do we undersell it. Wether it was due to their own pride (one would even say arrogance), their curiosity or their generosity, they would find themselves in complicated situations, caught in a trap (sometimes of their own making) and generally in a disadvantegeous situation. But all is always well that ends well, and Nanabush would come out of the experience, if not unscathed at least wiser.

    As such, they possess this Skill, as they do not avoid danger (and so do not possess a variation of Mind’s Eye), but eventually, sooner or later, they get out of danger and are hale enough that they can, once again, get into trouble.


    "Ya could say that I never learn. Ya could. But that’d be wrong! The stories of my adventures got used as teaching material. They were life lessons. Especially for me! I learned how to get out of trouble, how to not get in trouble in the first place, and how to deal with unavoidable trouble. Ya know, there’s times ya have to get involved in stuff that’ll end badly for ya, but that’d end badly for everyone if ya didn’t."


    Shapeshifting A+

    Nanabush was and is still widely known as a shape changer. Able to take on the form of a man or a woman, of any animal wether male or female, they used this ability extensively, to trick people or to grow closer to them in a form they would be comfortable with. It has been suggested that they, like a certain other Heroic Spirit, changed shape so often that they forgot their original form. What they themselves have to say on the matter is:

    "Eh who cares about stuff like that anyways! I am who I am and who I am is Nanabush!"


    Animal Communication EX

    In addition to being able to turn into any animal, Nanabush often conversed with animals while in human form. In fact, there are many, many Native American legends involving talking animals interacting with people. As such, Nanabush naturally possesses the ability to communicate with animals, and communicate while being an animal.

    "Ya wouldn’t believe the things some of those say. Don’t even get me started on birds! All they think about is sex. All the time. It’s all they talk about. Those cute chirps? Yeah, sex. Oh and beavers have a foul mouth on them. Even I’m shocked by how foul!"


    Storyteller B

    Nanabush themselves are of course the subject of many fireside tales, but they are also a gifted storyteller! Or, rather, not so much gifted than they learned how to be good at telling stories over the course of their adventures. Capturing people’s attention is a skill they mastered out of necessity, as distractions were often needed for them to achieve their goals. It adapts to the listener, their mood, where the telling is happening, and all other sorts of parameters to completely enrapture the audience’s attention.

    It is, in essence, a form of mental interference. But as it does not rely on magical energy but purely on the teller’s skills, it does not trigger Magic Resistance and bypasses most forms of defenses.


    "One day, brother Rabbit was gathering food for his family when he came upon…"








    The Great Hare who created the Earth
    Michabo Ovisaketchak


    Anti-World
    Rank C
    Range: 10~99
    Maximum Number of Targets: Up to 50 species


    Before there was land, there was only water. And on that water was a giant raft on which all the animals dwelled, having been created by Mishaabooz, the Great Hare, who shared the raft with them. They despaired, for they knew they needed land to live, but there was only water. So Mishaabooz asked various animals, one after to other, to dive and bring them even a single grain of sand for him to use and create more land. Eventually, the humble muskrat came back up, holding between his claws a single grain of sand. Gathering it, Mishaabooz picked it up and deposited it on the raft, where it started growing. They picked it up again, and again let it fall, and again it grew. They repeated it until the ball was too big for the raft, at which point they took it up once more, spun it and threw it in the water, where it kept growing until it was large enough for all the animals to disembark and spread across it. And so did Nanabush create the world!

    Ordinarily, Nanabush’s abilities are straightforward: they use their bow and spear to fight directly, but more often than not they prefer to use traps and tricks to get the better of their opponent. Indeed, despite having a high degree of Divinity and originating from the Age of Gods, they have no incredible power to call upon, no sacred sword, no dragon reactor, no divine armament. Their arrows, they have crafted themselves from the materials at hand, and the same goes for their spear. If anything, they fight more like an Assassin or an Archer would, striking fast and from afar, laying traps.

    That is, until they use this Noble Phantasm, their trump card. Upon releasing its True Name, they effectively release theirs as well. Although that is a bit of a misnomer: Nanabush is known by many, many, many names: Wenaboozho, Mishaabooz, Manabozo, Amenapush, Kwi-wi-sens Nenaw-bo-zhoo… Michabo (or Mishaabooz) is the name they wore when they rode the great raft and created the world. It is effectively one of many Divine Cores they possessed and discarded at one point. By calling upon their Noble Phantasm, they "load" this specific Core and supercharge their Spirit Origin to the level of a full-fledged Divine Spirit, at the same time covering their surroundings in water until all has disappeared. Riding the great raft, they take a single grain of sand, and turn it into a massive sphere of rock that they drop on their opponent.

    And then they are gone, their Spirit Origin collapsing under the strain of forcing a Divine Core to appear and taking it in.


    "Yeah, that’s also something I did a long, looooooong time ago. Honestly, I like this world so I’d rather not drown it to start again, ya know? I much prefer just runnin' around, messin' with people, occasionally shootin' them or something. Though I guess it’s the reason I’m a Rider and not a Caster or an Archer or something. So if ya really really need it, I’ll do it. I’m the Great Hare, after all!"








    Nanabush is the foremost trickster figure in their Texture. As such, they are easy-going, free-spirited, and always curious. Their tales depict them with an endless amount of curiosity, about all sorts of things. After all, that is how they passed on their knowledge to Humanity: by learning it themselves to begin with!

    As a Servant, they retain that same curiosity and are extremely eager to go out there and experience the modern world for themselves, especially after so long seeing it from the outside. They will drag their Master around as they go out, eat in many places, prawl the streets, enjoy movies and theater and concerts and all sorts of activities. While they will do their best to not outpace their Master, they will also not allow them to sit idle in their workshop, reasoning that the reason they were summoned was so they could teach them about the world. They will abuse their shapeshifting abilities to experience new things, and to skip on the bill as often as possible.

    While they are saddened by how much Humanity has disconnected from Nature, they accept it as their natural progression as a species, recognising the role they themselves played in that. They will not try and talk to every animal they come across, but if one of them happens to address them, they will answer as a matter of fact, to the confusion of everyone else. They will also often take on the shape of an animal to play a prank on their Master, or really anyone who catches their curiosity.

    However, when comes the time to fight, their mood switches. They will hunt down their opponent mercilessly, and prefer shooting them or making them fall into a deadly trap over facing them head-on. This is where their shapeshifting abilities come into play, as they will turn into animals or innocuous individuals to reconnoiter their target and get close to them. Once they have been exposed, a favourite strategy of them is to taunt and insult their opponent to push them into making a mistake out of aggravation. Finally, they are not above cutting and running if things do not work out. They play the fool, but they have learned every single one of the lessons contained in the tales passed down about them.

    They do not hide how much they value this world. As such, faced with a Servant or any other threat that would present a danger to its continued existence, they will finally reveal the Noble Phantasm they had consistently hidden until then, brushing off questions about it and pretending their shapeshifting was their Noble Phantasm, or that they rode the winds of change, or something. They do not want to replace the ccurrent Texture with another, and so it is absolutely possible they will spend an entire Holy Grail War without once invoking their Noble Phantasm. But if something else or someone else threatens this Texture, they will crush them absolutely and without mercy, apologising to their Master for selfishly leaving them behind.








    Geronimo

    "Hey ya’re there too! Man it’s good to see a familiar face! How ya doing? All good? I’ll be sure ta let Coyote know ya’re doing well, he’ll be thrilled. He worries about ya a lot, ya know?"


    Nursery Rhyme

    "The little miss? Yeah she’s a riot. She looks all nice and proper but really she’s a menace. Just like me! I been learning all sorts of different tales with her, it’s great!"


    Scheherazade

    "We got off the wrong foot, it’s entirely my bad. I approached her as a bear and that scared the shit outta her. I was scolded by that coyote eared gal and apologised to her, and we been comparing storytelling technique since. She’s nice, she is."


    Edison

    "Wait no, ya can’t do that, ya can’t! I’ll sue ya! Ya can’t be a North American figure with animal characteristics! I did it first!"

    While Edison took the threat of a lawsuit absolutely seriously, outside observers could only marvel at how quickly and expertly Nanabush pressed his buttons.


    Noah

    "Woah so there’s stories about giant rafts and creating the world from water in other Textures as well? Niiiiice! I love this shit! Wait his transforms? And fires beams? What the fuck man!"


    Bunny Servants

    "Pyon pyon pyon! Hahahaha it sure is fun, bein' a rabbit!"


    Paul Bunyan

    "I like her, ya know. Another folk tale from around there, that got up to ridiculous shit. There’s even a story about how we got into a fight, me an’ her! I tots won, of course!"


    Super Bunyan

    "I’m not talking about it, aight?"


    Jack the Ripper (Berserker)

    "Oh man this guy’s good! I could never pull off items but he does it like it’s nothing! I’m tots jelly!"


    Hessian Lobo

    "It carries no weight coming from me, but I’m sorry for what happened to ya… Wanna run around a bit later? Sure, ya can come too, Hessy!"







    Beloved brothers

    Nanabush was the eldest of four children, Chipiapoos, Wabosso and Mikwam being his brothers. While he loved Chipiapoos the most, he also got along well with Wabosso, who left to live in the North, anchoring the Texture as a white hare.

    However, Mikwam brought misfortune with him, just by being born, as his birth killed their mother. Furious, Nanabush hunted him down to take revenge, eventually overcoming him and casting him in pieces, scattering him all across the world, making of him the mountains and the stones and even the flint used by the people.

    Nanabush lost his last brother, Chipiapoos, in an ambush by evil manitous, who killed him. While Nanabush avenged him, his brother could not fully be brought back, and so become the one who would oversee the dead with kindness.


    "I miss them all, you know. Even Mikwam. I… tots overreacted, I know. It wasn’t his fault Mum died. But… I was so mad I took it out on him. I know better now, ‘course. But that doesn’t make it better. That’s why I’m telling ya about it: so ya don’t make the same mistakes I did. Learn from others, their mistakes and their successes. Ya ain’t alone."

    NotesTime was a hated enemy. I suppose ideally every section would have had a story-type text to introduce it but eh.

    Walking on eggs here because I am absolutely foreign to that culture and had to rely on googlefu, although I was familiar with some stuff.

    Hi, I’m the epic purist. So the first idea was “Okay The Song of Hiawatha is an epic, by design, so let’s go off that but without all the highly problematic stuff.” I kind of wanted to make a Hiawatha, but the two that already exist here are what I’d have done so that was a no. But how about using Nanabozho, that figure that Longfellow based his Hiawatha on?

    Here’s the result.

    I guess I’m helping make this contest the “Furry or not furry contest”.

    I tried not having a lore section, or even section names, to keep up my formatting attempts. No idea if it worked.

    I went for "they” over "he" even though Nanabush is very much a male character. But the shapeshifting throws things off.

    Sorry, no dialogue for the other entries, I’ve not had the time to read them all yet. Mebbe later, while judging happens.

    Base faceclaim
    Second faceclaim
    Third faceclaim I am very happy I found that one because having a character with rabbit ears holding a weapon that wasn’t a fucking gun was pain
    Fourth faceclaim because that one tickled the World Egg fancy
    Fourth faceclaim that described the personality so well I had to
    Fifth faceclaim which source doesn’t work but I’m trying alright. Also it’s not their face for most of those lines but it sells the “reaction” part well I think
    Final faceclaim I’m not entirely pleased with it, ideally that would have been a group shot but for obvious reasons I couldn’t easily find one
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    Nanabush: Region = North America struck again. Anyways, I have thoughts, but that might be because I've been exposed to Indigenous Canadian mythology, and knowing the differences there makes me feel iffy about "North America having a generic Texture," although that is a Nasu play, admittedly. Onto the more serious thoughts.

    1. Making the Gitche Manitou into what amounts to the Chief Deity of the North American Texture is a uh, weird play so to speak. Especially when in the 'Northern' (Nunavut, Alaska, Greenland, Yukon really) area, Sedna (the name variant I'm used to) is much more of a prominent player.


    2. "Nanabush is the foremost trickster figure in their Texture." Raven and Coyote are sobbing right now. Absolute tears.

    Anyways, I just don't like the idea of a singular North American Texture, because it's more varied.

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    I was determined to write "Ojibwe folklore" and actually make a point of how it's just that part of the subcontinent but time.and brainfarts happened.

    I did say I was walking on eggshells with that and trying to tie Native American myths into the Nasuverse framework seems to be a self-defeating exercise, I can only agree.

    I did play with conflating Nanabush, Raven and Coyote for... half a second. And then saw it was dumb. So really, that Texture only extends to the Great Lakes region which is still bigger than Greece or Mesopotamia. But I could have made that clear if I didn't have to rush that sheet. You'll have to settle for the Geronimo line unless I can somehow find the time to edit it from a phone before the deadline (non-zero possibility).

    Edit: I did go back and try and hastily fix the most obvious conflations at least.
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    S A B E R
    of the Holy Reconquest

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    Rejoice, summoner of mine, for you have, from the withered grasps of time, called for me! El Çid Ruy Diaz de Bivar, el Campeador! As my summoner, I shall consider you as noble as any royal I served, my lord. Together, I hope we acquire the Holy Grail and partake of the blessing of our Lord above.






    ≪❈ ⳮ ◈Basic Information◈ ⳮ ❈≫

    Class
    Saber
    Alternative Classes
    Rider
    Attribute
    Earth
    True Name
    El Çid
    Day of Decisive Battle
    A Final Charge for the Life of Others
    Alignment
    Lawful Good
    Natural Enemy
    His Rider Self, ???


    STR END AGI MAN LCK NP
    B B+ C D A B+





    ≪❈ ⳮ ◈Class Skills◈ ⳮ ❈≫≪❈ ⳮ ◈Class Skills◈ ⳮ ❈≫

    Magic Resistance: C+

    Cancels spells with a chant below two verses. Despite living in the Age of Fairies, Saber did not fight many mages in his life, resulting in only an average rank. Due to his faith, he has remarkable resistance against Holy Sacraments.


    Riding: B+

    Any non-magical animals and vehicles can be ridden. Additionally, due to their strong connection, Saber is summoned with his horse, Babieca. Although he doesn’t reach the level of a Noble Phantasm, the knight and mount move as one, blinding speed and breathtaking synchronicity making Saber a fearsome foe in horseback.

    Babieca! I am glad you are here, my faithful steed. Had I had any other horse, I would have fallen much sooner. ‘Why do I have him as a Saber?’? What a weird question, my lord. I do not believe I qualify for any other classes, so I couldn’t have him as anything else.





    ≪❈ ⳮ ◈Personal Skills◈ ⳮ ❈≫≪❈ ⳮ ◈Personal Skills◈ ⳮ ❈≫

    Protection of the Faith: B

    Remembered as a pious, virtuous knight who fought for the dominance of Christianity within Spain, Saber gains this skill at a decently high rank. It manifests as an absoluteness of mind and body, complete confidence in one's own actions and beliefs.


    Do not misunderstand me, my lord. For as much as Christianity is the one true faith, all are welcome within my lands; Christians, Moors, and Jews, I shan’t discriminate! Why, anything else would be barbaric!


    Way of the Knight: B

    A skill similar to that of a certain Germanic Emperor, it represents Saber’s desire to keep his role as an honorable knight. In effect, it makes him stronger when he plays into the knightly identity and weaker when he does not, but instead of reflecting his actions, this skill is based on “how Saber is perceived”. Even if said perception is unjust, if others see him as a graceless monster or a disrespectful fool, his strength will wane, and as long as any monstrous actions aren’t known, his power will rise. A skill born out of Saber’s worry with just process, even when unfairly punished.


    Of course, my lord, this skill is, in truth, nothing more than a parameter boost. No man nor woman alive or dead would be capable of gainsaying my honor, or criticizing my actions. Eh? Alfonso? Oh, please, sir, he was… Well, not to speak ill of the dead, but he was at times overly emotional.


    El Campeador: A

    A skill that acts as a sort of “reverse Innocent Monster”, it is a composite of Military Tactics, Mind’s Eye (True), Valor, and Charisma, all at decently high ranks, and Battle Continuation at a low one.The word “Campeador” has many possible meanings, including “Expert in Field Battles”, “Fighter”, and, if hailing from “Campidoctor”, “Commander in Chief”. This skill symbolizes not “Saber’s actions in life”, but “how he is remembered” — the knight of possibilities, who, despite all setbacks, fell innumerable Moorish kings and established a Christian haven at the heart of Moorish Spain, a symbol of the Reconquista for the ages. In a way, it would be no exaggeration to call him the embodiment of all that is good and righteous, the very ideal of a Christian.




    ≪❈ ⳮ ◈Noble Phantasms◈ ⳮ ❈≫≪❈ ⳮ ◈Noble Phantasms◈ ⳮ ❈≫


    Brillante Espada de el Caballero
    Shining Sword of Knighthood
    Colada
    : D


    Anti-Unit (Self), Anti-Army

    A simple, unadorned, cast-iron sword, Colada symbolizes not a particular aspect of Saber’s legend, and instead is simply “A knight’s ideal sword”. Upon a true name release, it will flash for a moment, blinding all enemies within range, but that is merely its secondary ability. Uniquely among Noble Phantasms, Colada can be shared with any other human being, as long as they fit into Saber’s idea of “how a knight should behave” — honest, pious, and courageous to a fault. In effect, the wielder will gain Way of the Knight at B rank, a constantly active Scream of Fear at D rank, and Golden Rule at C rank, due to its high value of more than a thousand marcs of silver. Since, in his legend, Colada was given away as a present, if it belongs to another upon Saber’s death, the sword will not necessarily disappear, as long as the owner can provide enough mana for it.

    Colada, my second favorite sword, how do I love thee. It comes, Master of mine, from the Fratricide himself, Berenguer Ramón the Second. A horrible man, my lord, who betrayed all of Humanity for his foolish desires. Yes, Colada is much better with one such as I.



    Tizón Espada de la Reconquista
    Firebrand Sword of the Reconquest
    Tizona
    : B++


    Anti-Army

    Tizona, Saber’s main Noble Phantasm, is a sharp sword, with a completely black hilt and a blade of damascus steel, in one side the inscription “IO SOI TISONA FUE FECHA EN LA ERA DE MILE QUARENTA” and in the other “AVE MARIA GRATIA PLENA DOMINUS MECUM”, making it impossible to hide his identity when brought into battle. Saber cares not for that, saying “No man may face God’s light and survive, Master, so I needn’t worry about anything”. It is a sword with centuries of story by itself, beginning in the year 1002 C.E., when it was reforged from Alexander of Pherae’s spear, given to the Counts of Barcelona, before Saber’s acquiral of it, and ended up with the House of Aragon, before King Fernando el Católico gave it to his most trusted of men. It is, in the end, the sword that symbolizes not only the Reconquest, but the history of Spain as a whole, wielded both by the man who started the dream and one who made it into a reality. In a sense, both Tizona and Saber are the same figure, the same Saint Graph, “The Legend of the Reconquest” given a physical shape. Upon a true name release, it discharges a torrent of magical energy and fire, hot enough to melt almost any metal, and at the same time will “Judge the target’s sins”. Those who have committed actions Saber would consider dishonorable will be hit for additional damage, and the likes of Los Infantes de Carrión and A Certain Someone being almost guaranteed to die, the judgment caring not for motivations or excuses, only actions. Weirdly enough, if Saber were to somehow be hit by his own Noble Phantasm, it is unlikely he would survive. Additionally, as the House of Aragon’s sword, Tizona gives the wielder a small measure of Authority over any and all Spanish figures, the loyalty that a king deserves being enforced by the World. As Saber is not a monarch, this Authority is almost vestigial.

    I do not understand your meaning, Master, I am El Çid himself, no alterations. I wielded Tizona. I am the one who started the Reconquest, the symbol of it for generations. Any other perspective is false.


    The Fallen Knight’s Selfless Last Stand
    Mio Çid Ruy Díaz el Campeador
    : A+


    Anti-Army



    Legends say that when Valencia was once again attacked by the Moors, and Saber was about to breathe his last, Saint Peter appeared, promising him one final victory. Afterwards, Saber, mounted atop his horse, a flaming sword in hand and wearing a pale vest, rode against the Muslim army, and by himself fell twenty two of the thirty six enemy kings. The truth of this moment, however, is that, despite it all, before the battle even started, he had been dead, his body embalmed and his wife Ximena giving orders in Saber’s place, a clever ruse to fool all. This Noble Phantasm is a recreation of that legend, a stand beyond the grasp of death and inexistence, the very concept of “Winning a battle for others”. Upon Saber’s death, the name of this Noble Phantasm will be susurrated to his Master, and they will be able to use it at any time, once, as long as none of the enemies present are aware Saber has already died. While the rank of this Noble Phantasm might initially appear weirdly high, the truth is that it not only is the crystallization of Saber’s legend, but a pseudo-grafting and invocation of Santiago Matamoros, he who saved the Battle of Clavijo even centuries after his death, sent by God Himself to help the Spaniards, onto Saber’s Saint Graph, leading to a dramatic rise in all of his Parameters and Skills.

    Why, why can’t I remember this? Why, Master, what is going on? What is happening to me that I can’t remember my last battle? What is going on with me?





    ≪❈ ⳮ ◈Character and Relationships◈ ⳮ ❈≫≪❈ ⳮ ◈Character and Relationships◈ ⳮ ❈≫

    Likes: I believe I tell you no secret, my lord, when I say I value faith above all else, and honor as a distant second place. To break your word is disgraceful, and to turn your back on the Lord even worse. On the lighter side, I can appreciate many of the conveniences of the modern day. Transportation, agriculture, and communication are anything beyond what we could imagine, and I must say, these war simulators you call “video games” are among the most fun things I’ve experienced.


    Dislikes: Beyond faithlessness and dishonor, needless violence. Most of my enemies and many of my peers in life practiced massacres and extortions, killing not only soldiers in battle but the common man. Such a thing disgusts me.


    Wish for the Grail: Valencia, my dearest city. I understand the Reconquest came true, and my beloved Ximena certainly lasted as long as anyone but me could, but its eventual fall still fills me with sorrow. If I had my wish, it would be to save my city. On a lighter note, my lord, what kind of knight would I be if I did not seek for the blood of Christ?

    Attitude Towards Master: You are my lord, and I shall offer you my loyalty to the bitter end, sir. If we are together, it is God’s Will, and I shall have faith in all of His decisions. No matter what, give me your orders, and I shall do my best to accomplish them.

    Richard the Lionheart: Honorless cur, I loathe how you conducted your "Crusade". Your massacres are a thing of legend, and yet you are remembered for your bravery. It is even worse when one considers how much lip-service you pay to knighthood and one's duty. Your usage of God's word is sinful at best and heretical at worst.

    Saladin: You are better than Ricardo, but not by much. If one were to compare you to other Moors, I have nothing but praise, and I recognize many of our time — including those who call themselves Christian — were even worse, but that is no excuse. I hope one day you repent, and perceive the one true faith.

    Jeanne d'Arc: The Maiden of Orleans, in the flesh. I wish we had one such as you during the Reconquest. Many of my fellow men had no true direction nor purpose, and if you'd been there, I feel we would have succeeded centuries earlier. But 'tis of no use to cry over spilled milk. Just like you became a saint after your unfair execution, so too did we eventually win. I hope we have a good relationship, my fair lady.

    ???: What are you, who looks like myself and yet clearly is not? Are you one of the "Changelings" I hear about? Reveal yourself, demon! No, no matter what you say I shan't believe. You are a lie, a test given to me by the Lord. You shall not fool me, wretch!

    Idunn: Idunn, my lady, I feel bless'd by knowing thee. Rarely before have I met one so selfless as thee, and I regret such a thing. Why, you even remind me of my beloved Ximena! Say, would you like to convert? 'Tis no problem at all you believe yourself a goddess, I assure you!

    Lucretius: You degenerate, sinful, sad, sad person. I pity you. To have your nature so fundamentally altered by the perception of others is a special kind of punishment, and I am beffudled for what you did to deserve it. I pray that, one day, you see God's light and repent.

    Siyâvash: I have nothing but praise to offer you, my good sir. You are virtuous and valorous, brave and selfless. Had you been born in a different era and place, we could have been fellow knights. 'Tis just a shame you confuse who the one true God is.

    Vortigern: I am unsure if this... thing deserves to be referred to as a human, my lord. He turned his back on all that was fair and just, on the very concepts that Humanity hinges on, and for what? A petty desire? It saddens me to see a being such as him, but, while I doubt that that will ever happen, I will pray for his soul to be redeemed. Otherwise, I shall have him struck down.

    Branwen: 'Tis a great injustice the suffering you experienced, my lady. All men who striked and abused you fell in dishonor, and shan't see the light of heaven. I apologize for not having been present, lest I could have helped.

    Francisco Romero: Hah! It pleasures me so to know that Spain came to be pacific enough as to allow such a thing! Yes, yes, Francisco, despite not being a knight, is certainly worthy of respect!

    “Ziryab": Your plight is as unfortunate as they come, my lady, and I empathize with it. Both the Moors, and unfortunately us Christians practiced slavery in my lifetime, and at times even I was complicit in it. I am glad that humanity, as a group, have recognized its injustice.




    ≪❈ ⳮ ◈Craft Essence◈ ⳮ ❈≫≪❈ ⳮ ◈Craft Essence◈ ⳮ ❈≫




    Epitafio épico del Çid

    El Çid Ruy Diaz I am, and here I lay forevermore
    and I defeated king Bucar with thirty six pagan kings.
    Of the thirty six kings, twenty two died in the field;
    I defeated them in Valencia after death atop my horse.
    With that, were seventy two battles I won in the field.
    I gained Colada and Tizona; for that God be praised.
    Amen.

    That is who I am. That is what I did, is it not? Is it not? I am El Çid Ruy Diaz de Bivar, el Campeador, and in that I cannot be gainsaid!


    By the power of my Command Seal, I order you: See the truth!

    No! No no no no!


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    .





    I am Rodrigo Diaz de Vivar, and never again shall I rise
    and I pillaged Christians and Muslims alike.
    Of those, for the Christians I became a symbol,
    and of the Muslims an enemy;
    I razed villages and destroyed cities atop my horse.
    With that, I shall be remembered forevermore.
    Neither Colada nor Tizona exist, and out of God’s Grace I am.
    Amen.









    Bibliography


    - El Cantar de Mio Çid, version in the medieval castellano
    - Most articles on the Spanish Wikipedia for El Çid
    - https://www.larazon.es/cultura/20200...aluxeb27m.html for the legend about El Çid's death and his connection to Santiago Matamoros
    - https://anotherbagmoretravel.wordpre...d-saint-james/ also for the connection to Santiago Matamoros and this time in a language I understand fully
    - El Cid - The Life and Afterlife of a Medieval Mercenary, by Nóra Berend, while I haven't read it fully yet, was the thing that gave me the idea on how to tackle Çid
    - The English page for Tizona specifically, because it mentions the Tesoro de la Lengua Castellana o Española as talking about Tizona. It also says that the book refers to Severus Alexander, the Roman Emperor, which I'm 95% sure is a mistake
    - On that topic, the Tesoro de la Lengua Castellana o Española , for saying that Alexander Fereo's spear was called something similar to Tizona (which I'm not sure what it is, because the book looks half-Latin and I could only find scans of it). Also. Alexander Fereo is Alexander of Pherae.
    - Thanks go to You, for the "Way of the Knight" name, Mura and Serra for the images, Serra for finding who Alexander Fereo was in a way I can only describe as magic, and probably more people I'm forgetting. I'll try to update this post before the deadline tomorrow to add more relationship lines
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    Obligatory QoL post now that the deadline's passed, and kinn hasn't been bullied into binging all the entries yet. Kinn, read the entries. Read theeeeeeeeem.
    Not that many entries this time around, given the harder prompt, but we traded quantity for quality again!

    The QoL post is a bit early given that tomorrow's the deadline, I'll edit any new entries into it tomorrow!





    Legacy Eternal, Presence Undying
    Contestants of the Epic Poetry Contest


    Idunn
    Golden Delicious, Youthful Goddess
    Class: Caster
    Inscribed By: Anju Addams

    Lucretius
    Tomcat Yowling At The World
    Class: Berserker
    Inscribed By: Morg van Destro

    Siyavash
    Prince of Destiny, Yet Imperfect All The Same
    Class: Ruler
    Inscribed By: DracoScribe

    King Gunther
    Gay? Demi? I Legitimately Don't Know.
    Class: Assassin
    Inscribed By: Baron Magnus

    NīlakēciNili
    The Blue-Haired WomanGirlfailure Supreme
    Class: RulerPretender
    Inscribed By: Scotcheroos (Meeeeeeeeeee!~)

    Nimue
    Lady of the Lake
    Class: Caster
    Inscribed By: Anju Addams

    Maridiata
    The Lion Prince (NANTS INGONYAMA BAGITHI BABA-)
    Class: Lancer
    Inscribed By: sutaa

    Borghild
    Horn-Bearing Maiden of Venom
    Class: Assassin
    Inscribed By: Voikirium

    Asi
    Ea of the Hindu Faith
    Class: Grand Saber
    Inscribed By: Gray

    Sawerigading
    Towards The Love Over The Horizon
    Class: Rider
    Inscribed By: Ismail2002

    Abhimanyu
    Illusory Bowman
    Class: Archer
    Inscribed By: OddEyedDuelist

    Hyacinthus=Cyparissus
    Wilted Flower, Maggot-Ridden Love
    Class: MoonCancer
    Inscribed By: WhiteFrenzy

    Branwen
    Half-Hearted Queen
    Class: Caster
    Inscribed By: Vance

    Sundiata Keita
    The Lion King (NANTS INGONYAMA BAGITHI BABA-)
    Class: Archer
    Inscribed By: sutaa

    Gun
    Fallen Gun Stops The Waters
    Class: Shielder
    Inscribed By: Scotcheroos (Meeeeeeeeeee!~)

    Vortigern
    Dayless Void Tyrant
    Class: Gatekeeper
    Inscribed By: Baron Magnus

    Nanabush
    Earthen Great Rabbit
    Class: Rider
    Inscribed By: Dark Squirrel

    El Çid Ruy Diaz de Bivar
    Sins of Conquest, Sword of Evil
    Class: Saber
    Inscribed By: Stillinneverland

    Nikita
    Everyman Savior
    Class: Berserker
    Inscribed By: Vididii

    Titus Lucretius Carus
    Tomcat Pretending To Be Paul Atreides
    Class: Watcher
    Inscribed By: Morg van Destro

    Gaíne mac Lugach
    Bullybait Knight of Fianna
    Class: Saber
    Inscribed By: Serra


    Make more Pretenders in the future so I can bully asterism with prompts he can't distinguish >.

    (Lemme know if I made any mistakes!)
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    “Nikita! Nikita my friend, how are you today?”

    A gust of cold air would cascade through the well-heated workshop as the man- The Prince, strolled in. A ruddy-faced, jolly fellow with a beard like blackest night, he was well-liked by his people, and expected to rule magnificently after his father passed. His shouts however, were met with a slight scuffing noise of boots on floor- the man he was there to see, evidently one Nikita, was attempting (and failing) to crouch behind his work table to hide. Realizing the futility, the man would stand, and greet the freshly-arrived royal through a tired smile and gritted teeth.

    “Aloysha…. Your highness, I am fine, but it is not even noon- it is always good to see you, but what…”

    The taller man would attempt to be cordial, but he was sorely punished by his own visage. A poker face was the last thing he could have ever dreamt to possess- the combination of a broad father and a slender mother had left him high-cheeked, broad-shouldered with a lanky frame, and a thin face which stretched the skin to render any emotions apparent. His brow would furrow as The Prince rushed to him, reaching up to clasp his shoulders with a hearty shake.

    “Nikita! I have news most grand!”

    “...Is it really?”

    “You are to be a HERO, Nikita!!!”

    A miserable grimace would befall the craftsman.

    Goddamnit.




    Berserker



    Nikita, The Tanner

    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Place of Origin: Ukraine, Russian Bylinas
    Height: 6'10”
    Weight: 321 lbs
    Likes: Warm mornings with breeze afternoons, chopping wood
    Dislikes: People disturbing him more than necessary
    Talent: Pattern Consistency
    Attribute: Man
    Armament: Baseball Bat


    Parameters:

    STR: B+
    END: A+
    AGI: C
    MGI: D
    LCK: A





    A legendary Bogatyr of Russian oral epics, Nikita was a seemingly ordinary Tanner. The Dragon Zmei Gorynch had resurrected itself after being slain by Dobrynya Nikitich a century earlier, and had begun to kidnap women as prisoners across the land, consuming houses and livestock, tearing the land to shreds. One of the captives though was a princess of Kiev, who sent word to her brother by way of a dove- she had overheard that Zmei feared a single man: Nikita. The Prince would rush to Nikita and try to get him to fight the dragon.

    He offered wealth- Nikita refused.

    He offered power- Nikita refused.

    He offered the hand of his sister in marriage- Nikita refused.

    It was only when Nikita was greeted with The Prince bringing hundreds of children to sing for his aid, that his heart gave in, and he agreed to undertake the quest. Armed with nothing but a club, he would accost the dragon.

    The fight would go on for two whole days. Nikita, with no magic, tools, armor or implements which were designed to take on dragons, would instead sidestep this issue by beating Zmei to death.

    However, the dragon would revive himself once more, bargaining with the man as he clawed to life against his club-wielding assailant. He offered to rule the world alongside Nikita, splitting it in half… And the tanner accepted.

    This was not truly his plan however- wrathful that the dragon was going to make him kill him all over again, Nikita insisted that if they were to split the world, they should divide it properly. Agreeing Nikita would carve a gash across the Slavic texture. With their combined might, it was short work- but while Gorynch was satisfied, Nikita pointed out that they must also divide the sea.

    He would then drown the dragon.

    Afterwards, Nikita would return to being a Tanner, despite being hailed as a hero. He still had to go back and pull the earth back together- some even say that he missed a portion, it becoming Lake Baikal. Regardless, he would live a long and happy life afterwards, a rarity among heroes.




    Personality:

    A reserved everyman who approaches the fantastic with a sense of displeasure- a stereotypical hard-nosed slav through and through. He has no desire for glory or adventure, instead treating being a servant like a nine to five that he can't wait to quit. It is not as if he is antagonistic towards heroism… he just wants peace and quiet. An introspective man, Nikita is completely content with providing for himself. To help others? Sure, basic human empathy most certainly calls for it, but grand gestures, fierce battles, and violent, glorious legend? Count him out.

    In all honesty, and should he be confronted over it, he'd admit it himself- he's a bit of an ass about it. Gruff, overly curt, and without an ounce of talkativity, Nikita would consider a fellow servant who he's fought with for years and doesn't even known the name of a very close friend, as opposed to someone who makes a grand entrance, or God forbid makes him introduce himself. While the attitude is antisocial, it is out of passivity- he would never go out of his way to antagonize someone without being substantially prodded first. Being a shoulder to cry on is something he never quite minds, as long as he doesn't have to say anything.

    When in combat though, he attacks like a man possessed- not with screaming and howling, but like that of a devil from a hell frozen-over. A chilling heat enters his frame as he smoothly, deftly, and steadily smashes away at opponents. His technique is like that of a dam letting loose a river- it's raw release. There's still no revelry, but it's clear from body language that for once outside of his workshop, he stops being rigid. It seems almost therapeutic- he's likely to take advantage of pauses between moments to light himself a cigarette to smoke as he fights. The Dragon wasn't wrong, as much as he hates to admit- he WAS built for this, violence was his destiny.

    Doesn't mean he won't bitch about it though.




    Class Skills:

    Madness Enhancement: E-

    A skill of the berserker class, it trades sanity for power and mental protection.

    Due to the fact that he never went mad in life, Nikita’s rank in this skill is exceedingly low- the only madness he exhibits is the creation of crazy ideas when panicked.

    “Do I regret agreeing to Gorynch's proposal? Yes, absolutely- but, I was fighting for two days straight- that is 48 hours, Master. Do you think I would not be a bit exasperated? I was fighting the most notorious dragon of russian history with a wooden stick- I don't want to hear it.”

    Riding: D (A+)

    A skill of various classes, denoting skill in controlling various mounts. Berserker is only able to manage horses and carts with a respectable amount of skill. The exception is in regard to draconic creatures, to which the skill rises to the equivalent of A+, having hooked the most legendary dragon of Eastern Europe to a plow and driven him into the sea.

    "To be clear, Master, i do not actually know how to ride a dragon- I just physically force them to move as I wish. not fond of them, you see."


    Personal Skills:


    Tanner: B
    A skill which refers to those of the Tanner profession, whose job is to skin and tan animal hide for the purpose of making leather.

    In addition to giving positive checks when identifying individuals or items with special skin, this skill bestows the nasty effect of fleshing to the holder’s blows- the process in tanning when flesh is separated from skin. This creates a resonating effect of massive internal damage being done when forced to take blows from a servant with this skill.

    Nikita's prowess as a Tanner is largely unspoken of in the Bylinas, but in a substantial portion of retellings the prince already knows him despite his reserved personality, implying that his skill is enough to be relied upon by a noble. Thus, he possesses the skill at a solid B rank.

    "Yes, I have a mask with me- in this more modernized form, it is akin to a Luchador's, I believe they are called- I made it. The Prince forced me out with the cries of children, and even I am not so heartless as to let them see me leering their ways. They aren't of any fault."


    Monstrous Strength: A+

    A skill which violently raises one's strength parameter by several ranks when activated. Due to Nikita’s Indomitable, it can be left on for so long that it appears to not turn off.

    Despite not seeming to be part of any monstrous lineage, Nikita still possesses this skill.

    Indomitable: A

    The heightened form of Battle Continuation, it is a skill which allows the holder to push past and heal from injury and fatigue that would normally kill them, while granting immense physical and mental toughness. Nikita's version is a bit off, in that it is task-dependent instead of combat-dependent: in being given orders to fulfill or setting his mind to a task, Berserker is granted the effects of the skill until he fulfills it.




    Noble Phantasm

    “Don't have one”

    “No, I'm serious- it doesn't count. It's just a function of the Counter Force.”

    “A name? God, you are insufferable… Call it this, if you must.”



    Everyman’s Eventuality
    Essence of Zmei Gorynch

    Calling-Type Noble Phantasm
    Rank: -
    Range: Self

    Nikita, should he be granted exposure to one, will eventually find himself facing an, “insurmountable challenge”. A situation that is hopeless, a foe that is unbeatable, a single occurrence to which there seems no solution- Nikita, in that moment, will be granted the ability to serve as a counterbalance and overcome the obstacle.

    Activates once per manifestation.

    “Knowing what I know now in The Throne, as a servant… I have to wonder if it was a Watcher or something. Hard times beget hard men they say, but I still don't completely believe in that idea. I think of the greek, that Achilles- his mother chose a brief life that would shine like no other, as opposed to one which would be long and uneventful. I think of the dane, Beowulf- a warrior who was but one of many, yet rose above and killed things far greater than himself, all with his natural might… Am I like them? Destined to slay a great foe, with tenacity greater than anything a man who just wishes for solitude should have? I don't delve deep like the dane, I lived a life many decades longer than the greek… was I wrong to? It is strange of me, but tell me what you think.”
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    TITUS LUCRETIUS CARUS
    who cast beneath his feet all fears



    "Another lost in this world comes before me seeking answers. Have no fear, friend. Fear is the mind killer, and it is that very mind I wish to nurture as I have been. So long as you ask of me. I would never be so severe as to force this upon you."

    ALIGNMENT
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    IMAGE VA
    Kageyama Shien
    IMAGE SONG
    Q/Powapowa-P (English Cover)
    NATURAL ENEMY
    Ashiya Douman

    STR E
    END E
    AGI E
    MAG A
    LUK B
    NP A


    « Class Skills »Class Skills
    Magic Resistance B
    He stands at the end of the Age of Gods, looking back in hopes of shaping the future. He looks, and sees the confusion and fear. Sees souls calling out into the void for comfort. Can they not see that there is nothing for them? Those beings, if they were to reside within the expanse, would look upon them little more than the insect one finds walking through the world. These things beyond imagination and senses, they remain delusions of the mind. Were they not, they would remain oblivious to all around them, uncaring for the plight or reverence of those that call to them.

    A denial, struggled to maintain yet unable to be loosened from his grip. Even now, he clings tightly to these beliefs and virtues that so strongly gird him. Protecting his mind and soul, they remain firm and unyielding. A denial of the suffering that could befall such acknowledgement. Though, what of the cracks that form around it? The wounds of time before they were so fortified, or the deft blow that was delivered after their foundation? Unyielding, yes, but that which refuses to bend breaks all the easier should the right force be applied.

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    "Do I still reject the Divine and supernatural? If I am to be honest, the struggle is much harder than it once was, yet I find myself maintaining as I always have. Even if they do come down and bend the elements, it is not by their leave that they move. Only that they may call upon them as they wish. Would the ones responsible for their inception allow such a thing or share their authority willingly? Yes, even now, they remain but figments of the mind, if perhaps more grounded than first conceived.
    Hm? My clothes? They are for relaxation. One's appearance sets one's mind to certain paths. Were I teaching at the moment, you may be more familiar with my dress."


    Territory Infringement B
    When one looks through a pane of glass, are they seeing the world as it is or as the glass portrays it? When one remembers an event, how greatly does it change in or memory from how it is? Neither of these things have changed, but how they are seen has. The barrier that is erected when our mind alters what the senses have provided. Removing that barrier, taking what has been given in its purest form, is accepting that the mind is imperfect. Ignore the pane. It doesn’t matter.

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    "I've been told both the sun and moon truly are larger than they appear. Such a thing seems ridiculous, but I have seen the images. I think I would like see it with my own eyes. Feel the dirt and dust with my own hands and breathe in the new fragrances it brings. ...No air? How is that possible? Do the clouds not shade the moon as they do the Earth?"


    « Personal Skills »Personal Skills
    Watcher C
    Pleasant it is, when over the great sea the winds shake the waters,
    To gaze down from shore on the trials of others;
    Not because seeing other people struggle is sweet to us,
    But because the fact that we ourselves are free from such ills strikes us as pleasant.
    Pleasant it is also to behold great armies battling on a plain,
    When we ourselves have no part in their peril.
    But nothing is sweeter than to occupy a lofty sanctuary of the mind,
    Well fortified with the teachings of the wise,
    Where we may look down on others as they stumble along,
    Vainly searching for the true path of life


    Universal Bird's-Eye C
    He listens to the bubbling creek washing gracelessly over the rocks. Watches the flowers gently bloom in the sunlight. Feels the insects scuttling across the ground. He feels the struggling man weighed down by his own ambitions. Hears the child crying over a broken toy. Watches the woman with the tired eyes.

    It all unfolds before him. A quiet observer, content in his role. Content and proud. Content that he need not suffer as the man and the woman and the child. Proud that he moves and feels and sees as the insect, the flower, the creek. For so long, he was like them, but now he has found the path. The way beyond their troubles and agonies. All within his gaze is recorded, yet it is only within his gaze, fixed upon his newest convert, that it shall be.

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    "Do you hear me, pupil? No, it is just as it should be that you do not see me. Rest assured that I am watching all that is unfolding. It is at this moment I believe is ideal for your first trial. Though I may not be there physically, know that I will be guiding you through this. I believe in you, my student. Now, let us begin."


    Atomic Constitution A
    Of the universe, broken down to the finest components and sieved through the finest sieve, there would remain but two: primordia and void. Void, within which all that lacks resides, and the voidless, outward which fills all that lacks. Neither shall void be induced to form as voidless shall be reduced to space. Primordia, forming all things, connects all things as disparate may they be. That even the void between them, no matter how wide, may not break their connection. Even the soul, formed of these first bodies, may separate and never be destroyed. They swerve and shift but remain as they always are. Amidst the cessation of the mind, the dispersion of the body and soul, so will these primordia remain. True Death, a return to void, is immaterial. They know it not. Only once the swerve has been stilled or Death has been unified with the voidless will both mind and body cease.

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    ”You understand now, as I had hoped you would. You have done very well, my pupil. It has been quite some time since I have had the pleasure of imparting such things to another in person. It fills me with warmth knowing you take to it so easily. ...No, it is by your own merits, not those of mine, that you have come this far. I am only following in the footsteps of another. It is my hope that you will forge your own."


    Ataraxia A-
    The release of the material. Once the agonies of this world have been removed, the mind has been cleared. Within the past, the present, and the future, there lies pleasure for which none else can measure. When the pain and pressure of the world is removed, when the soul has been removed from the suffering, when the body dictates vice no longer, only you shall remain. Remain, blissful and full. It is this state, this being, that Watcher has dedicated his life to achieving. The goal of all who follow the path revealed by his teacher. Ataraxia.

    Of Epicurus, aponia is sought, but it is merely another step towards the ideal mind of ataraxia. The truest expression of his philosophy. The removal of mental anguish to obtain peace regardless of what one encounters. An inherent distance created to engender equanimity, though falling short of removal from all in apatheia. It is this state that allows him to greet any notion with a tranquil smile. Yet, it is this state that runs counter to his own self, for such a way of being denies his own passions. One who attains true ataraxia removes themselves from their strong emotions, for these things as well, good or ill, may just as easily break this state, threatening the pleasure they cultivate. It is this mind Watcher struggled with all his life, and from which his own contradiction has formed.

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    "It is this perfected mental state we all strive for. Within which nothing but the pleasures that flow through our minds and the acceptance of the world brings us peace. Freed from the little pains that seek to drag us away from our own happiness, and the rampant passion that threatens to introduce agony no matter how enticing the offering it brings. It was my greatest challenge in my time of revelation. Mine and... Needless to say, we draw close to the peak of what Humanity can achieve. I will be there with you until the end."


    Contradictory Mind C
    In another world, or perhaps another possibility, this would speak solely to his madness, driven by the lustful desires he restrained, reborn from slanderous rumors. They are not alone, however. Even before the world introduced carnal burning to his soul, his mind was already one of duality. So long had spent lost and pitiful, turned around by the words of a visionary, transformed into his strongest disciple. So impassioned he was by this. So fulfilled he became once he embraced the teachings.
    So pitiful the man before was.

    He made his life the purpose of spreading the word, following and expanding on the path carved by his master, devoting himself to emulating the ideal he spoke of. However, such a thing is naturally contradictory. To reject the desires and ambitions all men have is natural rejection of certain parts of the self. More than that, to reach the ideal state, ataraxia, means to further mute the passion and joy not only expressed but gained from the pleasures they seek, exchanging bursts for a slow, consistent flame. The man was passionate beyond measure for this way that saved him, but that very passion restrained him from reaching its zenith.

    Then there was the woman who only drew him further from that peak. One of many who had learned from their master. One who brought things to him he had not desired. Was meant to reject in favor of true pleasures. She too knew of them, and they realized that all this brought them both was agony, though they fell even farther from that beautiful peak.

    There was only one solution. They would fall no further.

    Yet here he returns, and she remains lost to the void as all eventually will. The marks both she and he made on himself remain, and while he will never surrender to them, they slide out unbidden as unpredictably as the swerve of an atom. Perhaps this is simply how high he can climb.

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    "I'm so very proud of you, my friend. I see you standing upon the mountain soon. I only wish I could stand there with you. Always by your side, we would learn all that this world has to offer, never a worry or care to be. Would that not be wonderous? To have another, so thoroughly known of and by you, sharing in that glorious summit? To share such a gift with others is nothing less than true divine providence! To stand there with you and my teacher and Lucilia is a dream you cannot resist! Don't you agree? Yes, you understand it perfectly. I see it in your eyes. We will make it a reality, I assure you. One day, they will all see the truth as it is, and we will be there to guide them."


    « Noble Phantasm »de rerum natura
    all but naught in a random series

    Rank A
    Of his teacher, many works were written and shared, crossing the great divide that separated them. These wonderous workings by the prophet have all but been lost to time. He would not know this, but what he knew was that he wished nothing more than to spread these teachings, bestowing them on wavering souls and fearful fellows. Those much like he once was. Thus, his sole work began, making palatable and clear the word of his teacher, surviving long past most of the latter’s. It is no great exaggeration that this epic was the water that allowed his teacher’s philosophy to sprout.

    These poems, converted into six books, are more than his legacy. They are his life. They are all that remains of him, his only mark upon the world. Within them lies his beliefs, his self, and his sole reason for existing. Etched into every line and word is the story of a man and the truth that freed him, and he wished nothing more than to share with others. More than anything, the essence of Lucretius is to be as he admires so, though he would never raise himself so high as to compare to his teacher. Having fallen short of the ideal self, he devotes himself to elevating others to the peak he could not reach.

    He will bring them there. Six books. Three trials. Though they may swerve as the individual demands, the core of what they impart remains the same. Each dictate both a spiritual and mental obstacle to be overcome, the answer lying within the teachings he imparts. Perhaps these struggles originate from his design, or perhaps he subverts the intentions of another to bolster his pupil. However the trials come to pass, they need not always necessitate danger, nor be passed immediately. The climb is not an easy process, and for others, the weight they grasp is heavier.

    Of the first, an understanding of the structure of all things and their movements therein. The essence of not only the primordia, but the nature of time, fate, and our interactions with them. The overcoming of these grant them greater knowledge not only how they come together, but how all things within the void do so.

    Of the second, an understanding of the self beyond the material. The mind that must be managed and the senses that must be embraced rather than overridden. The fragility and finite existence that all flourish in and the dangers and agony to avoid. Of the meaning in connection and love, but the rebuke of passion and ambition. From this, a fulfillment of the self and calming in both mind and body is achieved, signaling their place near the zenith.

    Of the third, an understanding of the world around and beyond them. The nature and origin of the universe, the beauty and randomness that is formed and found within the natural world. Of Humanity’s rise and acclimation in the world by pure chance and the removal of divine intervention as crutch for explanation. Intelligent design does not exist, but intelligent adaptation does, born from seeing the world as it truly is, no longer letting the mind form fanciful or convenient illusions to deter the senses.

    There is, however, a final trial, though it is not one he imparts. It is the one that embraces his pupil, having achieved all others. The harsh truth is that all Watcher’s works are incomplete. His death came at the cost of both his own journey and the knowledge he had left to share. He knows not what the final trial is, nor what it will ask of his student. As his teacher before him, all he can hope is that he has suitably prepared them with all he may offer.

    "And you have arrived. I know not what awaits you. it is something I never was able to see. All that is left for me to say is how proud I am that you have come this far. However, though I was meant to leave such things behind, it also pains me to know that you no longer have need for me. Soon, I will return once more to the void, and you, my friend, will flee my memory should I return. I should be nothing but pleased for your own achievement, but I remain plagued with such unbecoming feelings.
    ...Yes. You are right. The parting should be no more fitful than the meeting. Though it comes soon, I will remain to watch you till the time has come and share in the pleasure of that parting. It is as it should be."


    « Relationships »Relationships
    Epicurus
    "My teacher, I have imagined this day, yet I still stand unprepared before you. Please, from your own mouth, let me hear the words I have so yearned for."

    Epicurus Alter
    "What is this? What has become of you, teacher? Why would you abandon everything you have spoken of for this? Why would you abandon me when it was you who took me by the hand and guided me to the truth? Tell me!"

    Niccolò Machiavelli
    "You say you admire my work, yet your own work speaks to one who does not understand it. Such a thing, guiding others away from the true path they should aspire. It disappoints me that you would so twist my teacher's work towards your own ends."

    Kiara Sessyion
    "Such indulgence is... is nothing but a foolish diversion from the path we are meant to follow. It is natural that you would seek comfort and affection, but to elevate it such a sickening-do not touch me. I have absolutely no interest in what you... offer. We are on separate paths with no chance of meeting."

    Sundiata Keita
    "So beautiful a dream, so forthright and magnanimous a ruler. I can never condone all that you have done, nor every word that passes your lips. Yet, I see you and know that, in many ways, you follow a path similar to my own, distinct in its own right, charting a course towards the same. If I were to see you at the end of mine, it would not be so ill a thing."

    Nanabush
    https://static.zerochan.net/Kageyama.Shien.1024.3883475.webp
    "Hello there, little one. This isn't the place ones like you are meant to be, so why is it I find you here? Hm... Shall we go see where you sprung from?"

    Lucretius
    "You are my greatest regret manifest. Everything that I strive to rise above, yet you continue to pull me down. Even now, you plague me, barring me from what my teacher has bestowed, and you tell me to remain with you? You have nothing I would ever desire to gain."


    « Craft Essence »My Teacher
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    Forgive me, my teacher. I have failed you.

    When you came to me, I was listless. Lost in a world filled with ego and righteous foolishness.

    It was not until I first read your words that I truly began to see things as they were.

    As I ingested, the pains that so scarred and ached faded away. The world that once filled my eyes with visions of the unthinkable and unacceptable became clear and complete.

    From within that tortured mind, you called forth the man I never thought existed. You took my hand, leading me with arms wide open into the world I never knew.

    You saved this soul that would have extinguished in fear and despair.

    Now, I ask your forgiveness. I ended my path for love of it. From desire to never stray nor fall. From fear that I might betray the man who gave me everything.

    Though my words have become as yours, I shall never be more than a student at his master's feet. Even so...

    Allow me to continue guiding others as you guided me, even if I may never reach you.


    « Sources »Sources
    Opening art byクロ.

    FaceClaim art: もみあげ

    Skill art by:
    もみあげ.
    渡綱.
    もみあげ.
    ろづ希.
    もみあげ
    もみあげ.

    Relationship art by:
    Kurogareki.

    Craft Essence art: 内臓バグ


    « Notes »Notes
    Surprise. It's all Lucretius.
    This one was definitely a struggle, which may be obvious from how long it took compared to the first. I really tried to get inside his head for it, which was why I opted for Sutaa's style, since I already covered the more technical details in Berserker. I thought about trying to imitate his style of prose and metaphor, and I thought up a couple decent ones, but I didn't end up using them because I didn't want to get lost in the sauce and potentially introduce things that would muddle what I was going for. It's also somewhat hard to portray how Contradictory Mind effects him in this kind of sheet, and really is something you have to infer from the dialog under the Skill and somewhat from how he acts as Berserker, somewhat like a muted version of it that isn't directed solely towards sex. Also tricky is the fact that I'm not one for verbose paragraphs, so finding ways to expand and describe with flourishing detail always leaves me feeling a little drained, and drained is really the way to describe me after getting through all this. That all said, I'm proud of where he ended up, and that both can work well on their own as well as a contrasting package deal.

    And for those wondering how the song fits in with his whole thing, It goes with the vibe that brought me to portraying him as I have. It's written like someone starting to give up on life at the start, but then they meet this person who guided them to the answers they were longing for, how they pulled them back together, but they eventually part ways, with them saying they'll keep what they were taught by that person in their heart.
    Of course he'd be passionate. Of course he'd want to share this message. But the ultimate state his philosophy seeks is somewhat an enemy to such strong emotions. So, this quiet, occasionally contradictory and flirtatious Watcher, has a pretty bombastic song like this, which is itself a contradiction yet fits perfectly. That was my mindset going into it at least. Trying to accurately convey that is more challenging though.

    Very fun that Sutaa also did a same person pair this contest. Great minds and all that.
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    Many, many thanks to Castellan for help with the research material! I haven't actually had the time to consult him on the sheet itself, though, which is part of why it's, well, like this lol. You can probably consider it more of a preview than anything. Anyway, this is based almost entirely on the Acallam na Senorach in the translation by Ann Dooley and Harry Roe. This is is certainly not one of the most prominent characters in there at all, though. I will elaborate later oh help me why do I have to cut it so close aaaaaaaaa

    SABER
    "Your clear summons have been heard and answered, Master, by this Saber of the Knights of Fianna."

    Source: The Fenian Cycle
    Region: Ireland and Scotland
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Attribute: Earth
    Armament: Sword
    Natural Enemy: Mál mac Ahel

    Parameters
    STR: B+ | END: B | AGI: B+ | MGI: D | LCK: C | NP: A

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    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance | A

    Fionn mac Cumhail, with Saber and four other knights of Fianna, spent a year, a month and a day in an otherwordly shelter within Mount of Aige mac Iugaine. Their hosts were the children of Midir
    of the Yellow Hair
    Mongbuide
    , Nature Spirits of the
    godlike people
    Tuatha Dé
    . As thanks for their hospitality, on each of those days, Finn and his knights fought side by side with their hosts against the main faction of the Tuatha Dé, who wished to imprison the sons of Midir after a shift in rulership. It's evident, then, even from just one of many adventures, how the strongest combatants among the Knights of Fianna could repeatedly be met with the world of Mystery and rise up to face many of its heights head on. Had he been summoned in a different Class, this Servant's Magic Resistance might still only top out at B, but as a Saber, his mastery over the nullification of spells is at its most complete.

    Riding | B

    Saber's animal handling may have been somewhat lacking early on in his life compared to that of some of his peers, but since he managed to rein in his impetuousness, he's very rarely been put to shame by any of the other Knights of Fianna whenever it came to matters of mounts and hounds. Such expertise, of course, is now translated by this Saint Graph into expertise on handling vehicles of all kinds as well. Nonetheless, he doubts he possesses sufficient qualifications to become proper Rider-Class Servant, and thinks that, at least, if such an incarnation of him existed, it would be considerably weaker than his Saber self in a fight. Curiously, although they are neither aids in battle or to the hunt, nor prestigious big game, it seems that limber weasels are among his favourite animals.

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    "My name? Of course. Not a hard ask from you. I am called—"

    True Name: Mac Lugach

    "...seriously? Here, too!? Like I haven't been dealing with this for long enough!? Why do I have to get stuck like this even now!? What's wrong with my first name, huh!? It's not even weird! And Fionn mac Cumhail himself named me! If not for me, get it right for him, damn it! How'd the formatting of my own sheet even cut me off!? No, in the first place, how hard is it to just use my name!?"

    True Name: Gaíne mac Lugach

    "Thank you. Ahem. My sincerest apologies for that uncharacteristic outburst. Now, please, let's get right back on track, Master."

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    Personal Skills

    Blessing of the Chieftain of the Fianna | A

    A boon that Saber's grandfather Fionn mac Cumhail bestowed upon Saber at a young age and which Saber, in fact, thoroughly embodies himself. It also encompasses the dregs of Divinity that remained within Saber and signify his distant descent from the god Nuada. Due to being so closely tied to Saber's very soul, the nature of the blessing itself and of the benefits it provides often shifts according to the situations he undergoes. In some manners, this Skill is tied to Spiritual Evocation magecraft concerning the soul of Fionn mac Cumhail, as well as the strenghtening of Saber's own, which can, for instance, manifest as Saber's wounds clamping shut.

    Once, the wise and valorous Fionn mac Cumhail was the leader of all of the Knights of Fianna spread throughout Ireland and Scotland. His progeny was numerous, and among them were the knight called Dáire
    the Red
    Derg
    and the young woman called Áine nic Fionn. These two once showed up to him with a bundle and were all like 'Hey, da, we got extraordinarily drunk, soz' and he was like 'You really screwed up big time. But hey, if I can't have any faith left in you, I can at least have some hope for the kid'. Fionn thus named the kid
    Blessing
    Gaíne
    , for he could certainly turn into a great man and a great warrior yet, further emboldening the ranks of the Knights of Fianna. Likewise, 'mac Lugach' didn't refer to his true parentage; it was instead an allusion to the many varied talents of the god Lugh, which the child would surely come to possess in time. Yes, it definitely didn't literally translate to 'son of the earthworm' at the time, nuh-uh. And so, Gaíne mac Lugach was brought up by one of Fionn's wives, Mongfinn nic Dubán, until the age of twelve, when the time came for his training to begin in earnest.

    Recipient of a Legendary Scolding | B++

    There are similarities between this Skill and the one known as Calm and Collected. Both are highly advantageous against mental attacks and interference, foregoing the chaotic reaches of an impetuous mind in exchange for presenting a calm exterior and achieving a perfect evaluation of one's surroundings. In Saber's case, this Skill becomes more and more powerful the more his mind is put to the test by mental assaults. Moreover, this Skill multiplies positive benefits applied to Saber. He can tell when things are genuinely going well, be it thanks to spiritual and material boons, or thanks to the likes of good advice and sincere praise: the feelings that can arise from any of these can greatly galvanise him. This Skill also draws on a collection of rigorously trained and deeply internalised kind manners such that Saber is allowed to reap its benefits even when he's completely seething on the inside. To put it in another way, Saber can harness the powers of forced politeness to a level very few others can.

    The young Gaíne met with Fionn and the Knights of Fianna at the Rock of Dog-Droppings. There, he was warmly welcomed by his grandfather, and, in turn, swore fealty to him, joining the ranks of his knights at last. Thus, his training began. And, at first, it went disastrously. Horribly bad. Just the absolute worst. He wasn't just awful, he was so terrible that he was actively interfering with everyone else's performance, haughtily mistreating everyone's hounds and entourage without a smidge of restraint or self-awareness. They immediately stopped calling him Gaíne because it was absurdly unfitting and Mac Lugach only stuck because, well, they had to call him something, and he was the grandson of their leader, so, yeah. Eventually, it got to the point where the bulk of the other knights left him behind and went as a group to tell Finn that it was either Mac Lugach or them, and that they should've left the brat at Dogshit Rock to begin with. And so, Fionn soon pulled his grandson aside, and asked him what he'd even done to get all of the Fianna to hate him. Young Mac Lugach boasted that the only way he could make sense of it was that they all clearly hated how much faster and how much of a better fighter he was.

    Fionn took a deep breath.

    Despite the volume, the exact contents of what Fionn told Mac Lugach never became known to another soul. In most tellings of the tale, it often gets glossed as all sorts of wise advice on humility, generosity, and kindness. Either way, from that day on, Mac Lugach, who left the meeting with eyes nearly bulging out of his eye sockets and limbs shaking from head to toe, abruptly turned to a new leaf. He became famed far and wide as one of the most valorous of the knights, one of the most beloved by his comrades in arms: simply one of he was one of the best to ever do it. Even now, he hasn't forgotten any of those teachings, not even for a moment.

    Strong and Keenly Destructive | A

    One of Saber's many epithets, very representative of his fighting style as a Saber, often based on overwhelming his opponents at close range through extremely precise bursts of explosive power. The active component of this Skill enables him to raise his Strength and Agility by temporarily drawing on more mana and, let's be honest, channeling all of his suppressed anger, whether petty or profound, in a masterfully controlled way. Passively, this Skill heavily reduces the damage Saber takes from projectiles and completely nullifies the stopping power of all projectiles below A-Rank, enabling him to rapidly close the distance with his opponents of any Class. Lastly, as long as Saber is engaged in melee with an opponent, this Skill leaves no avenues of to disengage, cancelling out all means below A-Rank with which the foe may try to nullify bonuses on Saber or maluses on themselves.

    Unfortunately, even after Mac Lugach amply redeemed himself, the usage of calling him by name only in the rarest of occasions stuck, especially among the poets spreading tales of adventure, who tended to agree it often worked out better for the metre anyway. Well, one day, by a hill by the sea, Fionn mac Cumhail and his entourage found ten women carrying heaps of treasure. Their leader introduced herself as Áife nic Alb mac Scoa, and the rest were her serfs. She had fled from her husband, the prince Mál mac Ahel, and come from Scotland to Ireland with the hopes of putting herself under the protection of the Knights of Fianna, whose tales she'd learnt to admire. Brave, bright Mac Lugach, she confided, was the one she most wished to meet in person, to finally discover what kind of person this knight, the only one whose deeds were more famous than his full name, could really be.

    Mac Lugach was out hunting elsewhere and missed all this, but Fionn, whose generosity had yet to start waning, filled him back on the details as soon as he came back, assured him that his battles would be the battles of all the knights as well, told him not to mess this up, and left him and Áife nic Alb to each other, which was honestly really awkward for him at first. He put up a mask of conventional polite courtesy at first, unsure on what to do about this strange woman from another land that got so interested in him specifically in part on the basis of something he disliked about the way others treated him. However, as the evening went on and they continued to converse, his admiration towards her grew more and more, and a feeling of genuing anger towards the violence of Mál mac Ahel swelled within him, burning far more bitterly than any of the grudges he'd experienced before. When the Scottish prince came with his batallions to demand Áife nic Alb back, Mac Lugach didn't hesitate for a moment to meet him in the field of battle. Their fight went on and on, almost covering each completely in the other's blood, but Mac Lugach, closing the distance for one last time, finally cut off Mál mac Ahel's head.

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    Noble Phantasm(s)

    Weapon-Rack of Valour of All Fían-Life
    AIDLENN GAISCID NA FIANNAIGECHTA UILE


    Type: Unknown | Rank: A | Range: Variable | Target(s): Variable


    Perhaps the most meaningful epithet of Saber. Given the name of this Noble Phantasm, you might expect Saber to have access to the weapons of all other Knights of Fianna, or to be able to perfectly imitate their fighting styles. This isn't a wholly wrong assumption. However, that is not the case. He's much more than a blind imitator. He can be considered a repository of the virtues of the Knights of Fianna, because, learning to follow with convinction in time the path they had laid out for him, he came to share that valour organically, and they all came to trust him when it counted to the point that they would even go as far as letting their most prized weapons in their care. Or, at the very least, that was the situation during the prime of Saber's life, when his life with Áife nic Alb flourished and the Knights of Fianna were fighting as one rather than slaughtering each other. Saber's recreations of his comrades' many weapons, as they seemingly appear from thin air, are actually simply similar projections uniquely suited to his own needs and fighting style. Saber's recreations of his comrades' feats, at a closer glance, are actually completely new inventions, taking inspiration from the singular deeds they'd performed to create techniques belonging only to himself. Contrary to those that hold the opinion that the new must always be inferior to the original, Saber wouldn't have it any other way. And, in his mind, the other Knights of Fianna would feel the same.

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    Interactions

    Lancer - Fionn mac Cumhail
    "I never thought meeting you in the prime of your youth would be possible, let alone that it would be so inspiring. (Seriously!? I knew grandfather used to be different when he was younger, but this is too much!! I've been supposed to take lessons in humilty from this pompous fop all this time!? Will he quit bragging already and shut up about how popular he is for a moment!? Hey!! Are you messing with me, old man!? Damn you, damn you, damn you, damn you, damn you!)"

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    Smoke screw you for not changing the first sentence of the post despite the second paragraph and giving me a scare lol ICANSTILLMAKEITIN DARNIT!
    You fool! That was my plan all along! To scare you into rushing the sheet so we would get more entries, muahahahahahahhahahahaha!
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    I Point: El Çid Ruy Diaz de Bivar


    II Points: Hyacinthus=Cyparissus



    III Points: Sundiata Keita

    Thirst hit me. I'm not sorry. Also, cool epic that I got to learn about.

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    1 Point: King Gunther by Baron Magnus
    2 Points: Abhimanyu by OddEyedDuelist
    3 Points:
    Branwen by Vance


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    'Winner' of the Legendary Jack-Off

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    3 POINTS
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    It was between shota him or bishounen him, really.


    2 POINTS
    Titus Lucretius Carus
    I would.


    1 POINT
    Siyavash
    You know what, I stand by his questionable decisions.
    w h i t e f r e n z y ' s
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    BronzeI - Nīlakēci
    "And then everyone stood up and clapped," the Servant. Gets a point immediately for being a bold, interesting take on a piece I knew relatively little about, and it's a fun ride all the way through. Congrats on committing to the bit and sincerely portraying her idealised self from the epic itself before letting the penny drop. I love this girlfailure. You write that spitefic queen!


    SilverII - Titus Lucretius Carus
    Am I just a touched biased since you used my style for this? Maybe. But leaving that aside, this is a great sheet, even without the additional context of his Berserker self. I adore the language you use here all the way through, and how you go the extra mile in trying to capture the tone of his writings in your skill descriptions. That's not even touching on the characterisation here; he really does come across as just the perfect Watcher, guiding the reader along, and then that undercurrent of pure yearning for his teacher that finally just bursts out in the CE? You're hitting all my buttons here Morg-sensei. I hope sensei gives him headpats.


    GoldIII - Hyacinthus = Cyparissus

    ORPHEUS AUCTOR

    "You're... Right, you're Father's love. His most beloved. Beloveds. I can tell.
    You're the flower even the sun fell for.

    It's funny, isn't it? Gods, or humans, or constructs... We're all so similar.
    We're all so weak in all the same places, deep in our hearts.

    Love works its wicked way inside like a vine, binds us until we don't know who we are anymore, until where you end and he begins doesn't even matter, but no matter how tight it tangles or how much it hurts we don't want it to let us go, we don't want to let go. Father, me, you. Everyone.

    I don't know if I can free you from this. Even as Apollo's son, I don't have the authority... No, I don't have the right.
    You don't really want to let him go, do you? And...
    Truth be told, even now? I don't think Father wants to let you go, either.

    But as someone who's walked this same path, please. Lend me some of your time.
    Don't we already have too much of that? Aion is no mystery to me. I spent them pondering just as you did. Would I have made something like you of my love? If I had become as you are now, would I rejoice to be so cherished? Adored the point it destroys me?

    For me at least... I think I want to learn to love again.
    Will you listen with me?

    Just this once, let me play for you, this funerary dirge.


    What can I say? It's peak, it's perfect, I love it it made my heart hurt in all the right places.
    Please never stop cooking White.

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    Lucretius drained me. I'm too tired to do full reviews. Have some pithy comments.


    Honorable Mentions
    Siyavash: I've wondered how I would make him as Servant before, and you went in a bit of a direction I hadn't thought of. Daddy issues abound. A couple things that didn't vibe, but I lack the energy to expound. Overall decent showing and addition to the family.

    Maridiata: No Yoda fighting style. Worst sheet ever. 0/10. Needed more goofy acrobatics.

    Gun: Isn't a real gun smh

    Nanabush
    :
    I kinda wish he was a Watcher, given the theme of guiding humanity, but it's still not a bad sheet. The NP is a little just there though.

    Gaíne mac Lugach: Wish we had a FC, but I did enjoy this one. The worst way to describe him would be nepo-baby, but that's just part of his character, and I'm curious how you'll expand later.

    Nīlakēci: Gaslight, gatekeep, girlboss. 1/3 is pretty shameful, but appropriate for Aqua. She's a treat. Nearly made it into the votes.

    1 Point
    Nikita: I just love the simplicity and attitude of this man. Also can't help but think about him and Garshasp hanging out silently in the same room but as friends. Fun guy.



    2 Points
    Hyacinthus=Cyparissus: Suffering, thy name is a flower. Every Skill is just about emphasizing "I am in eternal pain, please kill me" and the NP inflicts Made in Heaven on a person's soul. Now, is it better than Bn's Hyacinthus?



    3 Points
    Sundiata Keita: The lion sleeps, but the pride lives on. A good follow up to Lancer, expanding and standing on its own. Was a bit of a struggle before deciding to place him here, but he's worth it.




    Hopefully, I'll take a break to recover. That said, my brain has been itching on a couple others, so time will tell.
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