I hope it's based on Cancerigenous Cell
I hope it's based on Cancerigenous Cell
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This is my contribution to the Servant-contest.
Fenris
(Lancer)
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Identity: Fenris
Title: Rangnarok-wolf, Ancestor of all werewolves, Champion of Muspelheim/Loki
Other names: Fenrir
Height: 192
Weight: 89~
Alignment: Neutral Good/Lawful Evil
Attribute: Earth/phantasmal
Origin: North Europe
Weapon: Gleipnir. His cleverness.
Alternative classes: Berserker, Rider (Solo or with Jourmungadr and Hel), Avenger, Beast , Caster
Likes: his family, honesty and virtuous people
Dislikes: Thor, betrayal, sinister schemes, his father
Talents: Cunning extraordinary strategies, being optimistic (mostly), to encourage others
Natural enemy: Loki
Catalyst: Runes of his father, having a wolf or Lycanthrope as spiritual form, personality
Female seiyu: Satomi Akesaka
Male seiyu: Daisuke Namikawa
Parameters
Background
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Relationships
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Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; July 4th, 2019 at 06:05 AM.
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Koga, quick question, the skill Jäämestarin Viranomainen is obviously in Finnish. But Fenris is a Norse servant as I am sure you are aware. The problem with Finnish in this sheet is that not only is Finnish not of the Northern Germanic linguistic group as Old Norse would have been, it is of the Finno-Ugric languages in case you were wondering, but the Finns never followed the Norse gods. Instead, the Finnish pantheon was a unique and rather unknown one that was disconnected from Norse myth. Just a thing I needed to point out and I created this account just to do that.
I respect your commitment, Language Man.
Wow, Kabalisto Koga, you sure have improved immensely since you started out. Fenrir is pretty good in terms of spelling.
Last edited by NMR-3; October 16th, 2018 at 04:45 PM.
Holy crap, Koga! This is an immense improvement over your other sheets! Did you type this on a Word doc with spell-check on? I can actually respect this!
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That does good to hear ,thanks !
Not every Name of Noblephantasm are language exact see Gate of Babylon and to be honest im okay with that as the rest of the Noblephantasm are language conform.
About the Five Noblephantasm two of them are are just two as Noblephantasm qualified Attacks Chchulain has also two Noblephantasm-attack aplications of Gaebolg ,beside that how do you find my Spear Interpretation of Gleipnir?
and Rune Magic have ranks > http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Skill#Rune_Magic
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; October 16th, 2018 at 12:28 PM.
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Using English instead of Akkadian(?) because the latter is the oldest language and we don't know it as well as other ancient languages ≠ Using Greek and Hindi instead of Old Norse because YOLO
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Rune Magic has ranks, Primordial Rune doesn't
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You could at least try and stick to one language unless you have a specific reason not to. And picking a language at random (since, as mentioned, Finnish has zero relation to Norse mythology - Gate of Babylon is at least in English, which is a commonly used language).
Rune Magic has ranks, but Primordial Rune doesn't. Granted, there's no such Skill as Primordial Rune Magic...
Edit: Double ninja'd
I try the next time to stick at one ,Shiki . About the Rune Magic i thought there one Gandr which is a Runic Spell but not a Rune direct so has i thought must it be existed much more non direct Rune Magic and Primordial iis due to the Magnitude of his capability, and to be exact ;Therianthropia Markesh have i selected because it is the first title of the phenomenon and markesh is hebrew for cycle , that aside your contribution ;Sekien is a good workpiece, Shiki ! i have some Questions ;
First: Does he has in hos Yokai form also a weakness to Christianic or other Counterparts of Oomyodo or Shinto prayers ?
Second: Have you seen my Reference to your Servant in my Profile and what is your Evaluation towards it beside the number of Noblephantasm/Skills ?
Third:How would view your Sekien/say to your Jourmungandr ,and my Goliath and my Fenris, as for Goliath i think he will compare him with Onis? and Fenris as Inuyokai ,perhaps?
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; October 16th, 2018 at 02:48 PM.
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1: Nope.
2: Yes I have and frankly I'm not too thrilled about it. In terms of text quality, your sheet is an improvement, but in terms of content quality... Much the same as what I said about your other Fenris applies.
3: I try not to reference my own creations. The answer to each question would be 'roughly the same as with the Western monsters mentioned already'. Except Goliath. Goliath's a chump.
I have a solution for your skill Jäämestarin Viranomainen though. It roughly translates to Ice Authority I assume, not Ice Hockey Authority. In that case the Old Norse equivalent would be approximately Valda Íss or "To have authority over ice". Sorry I didn't mention this before, but if that is not sufficient for you I can always try again, not like I have a life.
Jäämestarin Viranomainen means(yes its finnich) actualy Authority of the Ice-Master and was originally a placeholder because i thought of the skill Name to be either Master of the Ice or Authorithy of the Ice Deity ,(i was even unshure as to make the ice power Control into a noblephantasm) but your Translation is quite good i must say .
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Viranomainen actually translates to 'official' (as in a person - it also stands for the sort of organizations where officials work, roughly). If you're going to stick with Finnish (though I can't imagine why you would), at least do it correctly. Valta is a close-enough word for 'authority'.
Mind you, I'd go with Language Man's idea if I were you.
"Nice to meetcha', Master. Don't expect me to hide or shit like that, okay? I'm here to have fun, and that what I'm going to fucking do!"Source: [X]
Class: Assassin
Alternate Class: Berserker
True Name: Nessus
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Greek Mythology
Region: Greece
STR: C
END: C
AGI: A+
MAN: D
LUC: D
NP: A++
Gender: Male
Likes: Parties, Nice-looking Women
Dislikes: Spoilsports
Talent: Setting up a Hero's Death.
Natural Enemy: Heracles
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Monster
Catalyst: A piece of the cloth that killed Heracles
Class skills:
Presense Concealment: (D)
The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. A low ranking of Presence Concealment unbecoming for an Assassin to the level that a Servant can infer one's presence at once.
While it is true that Assassin and his fellow centaurs were first invited as guests of the Lapith before attacking and trying to abduct the woman by surprise, it is very likely that the monstrous beings didn't come with ill intentions and that they simply got really drunk. Furthermore, since they were driven off with some relative ease, one can hardly call that a succesful infiltration. For this reason, Assassin only has this skill due to being summoned in this class.
Personal skills:
Disengage: (C)
The ability to withdraw from the battlefield in the midst of combat. Has a bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match.
When he saw that the battle was going in favor of the Lapith, Assassin quickly escaped, letting the other centaurs to die. One may call him an expert at cowardly abandoning his allies.
Natural Monster: (A)
A skill endowed to those who were given birth as a monster rather than to a hero or god that has fallen down to the level of a Magical Beast.
The Thessalian Centaurs is a monstrous race resulting from the union of Centaurus, deformed son of the impious Ixion, and a group of magnesian mares. Belonging to people that were monstrous from their very birth has granted Assassin with an agility beyond the limits of humanity. As a result of being summoned in a more humanoid form to hide his true identity, this skill has somewhat degraded and he doesn't have a similarly inhuman endurance that he would normally have.
"Don't worry, I can still last all night long! Gyahaha..."
Monstrous Strength: (B)
A Skill that temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill. This Skill is borne from the holder's nature as a monster or Demonic Beast. As a member of a monstrous race known for their brutality, it only follows that Assassin possess this skill. However, the longer he uses it, the more horselike features his body gains until his lower half turn back into a horse's body, making attempts at hiding his identity rather difficult.
Silver Tongue: (A)
The ability to earn the trust of people trough falsehoods and using it to trick them into doing whatever the holder of this skill want them to do. Even those that should by all right know that they can't be trusted will still heed their advices. However, it is naturally less effective against those who know that they were previously tricked by the servant.
Assassin's main claim to fame is his manipulation of Deianira, the wife of Heracles. Despite the fact that the centaur tried to assault her just a moment ago, he still managed to manipulate her fear of losing her husband to cause his death. It is his most infamous act and indoubtly the pinacle of his legend.
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Alter Ego
Identity: Susanō no Mikoto
Also known as: Takehaya Susanō no Mikoto, Kumano Ketsumiko no Kami
Height: 174 cm
Weight: 56 kg
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Attribute: Sky
Origin: Japan
Armament: Sword, gourd
Natural enemy: Amaterasu no Ōmikami, Yamata no Orochi
Parameters:
Strength: A+
Endurance: A
Agility: A
Mana: B
Luck: D
NP: C++
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Well, I'm satisfied with the idea, but not much with the execution. I feel there's some wank here, but we're talking about Japanese Heracles who was an actual god (and an Amaterasu-tier one) and not a demigod. The collapse tags are horrible to use.
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Perhaps if there wasn't a deadline, I'd have written the Lore and Personality like I did with Juana.
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We have a lot of Alter Ego so far.
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