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    Avenger
    Angéle de la Barthe



    Source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/15796661

    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Place of Origin: France

    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: C
    Mana: A+
    Luck: E
    NP:A++

    Lore:
    Avengers true name is Angéle de la Barthe, a woman allegedly accused and executed for witchcraft in 1275, popularly portrayed as the first person to be put to death for this reason in Europe. It was said she had sexual intercourse with the devil, giving birth to a monster that she fed babies for about 2 years before it escaped into the night. In the end however, this tale was proved to have been fabricated by a 15th century author. The woman known as Angéle de la Barthe had never truly existed, but a legend persisted long enough anyways to manifest as a servant regardless. As the real figure would be impossible to summon, a person who most closely fit the story would manifest, a wraith.

    In life, she was just a normal person, living an average life by all means, no witchcraft to be found. Despite all attempts at normalcy, there would come a day in which she would be accused, joining the thousands of dead at the hands of the witch hunts. Giving birth to a son who could not fit this normal life, with rumors of his conception out of wedlock circling, the hysteria of the witch hunts would eventually target her. No matter what was ever said, she still loved her son, even if her heart could only find ire for everyone else. When the day she would be dragged to trail arrived, she would ensure her son could escape off into the night even if she could not. Ultimately, even now, the fate that befell her son remains unknown to her.



    Personality:
    Likes: Her son, Forests, Dog Parks
    Dislikes: Everyone minus one, but especially that one author.
    Talent: Witchcraft
    Natural Enemy: Religious figures


    Angéle de la Barthe is as bitter as anyone could hope to be. Through the rage of persecution and the mistreatment of her son in the last years of her life, her personality has become extremely antisocial. Now dead and back again as a servant, there is no reason to hold back on any of her emotions, thus she is the sort of person to speak aggressively and cruelly without a filter of any kind. Fueled by resentment, hatred for the witch trails that cursed her and a complete abandonment of her faith in humanity, meddling with the fates of humans have become something of a pass time. Despite the seemingly twisted soul she expresses, if you asked her to describe herself, she could only say she possesses the self image of a doting mother.


    Though once accused of loving the devil, she had never once even met him, but as a servant making the mistake that she did would be easy to make. A mistake that would cost you your life of course. Despite her sons now demonic form, she still possesses the strong maternal love that allowed her to keep going in life. Even as a servant, despite her sons incredible capabilities, she will still insist on fighting in his place. Perhaps sometimes worrying too much, with a second chance at life she will insist on putting her sons needs above everything else to point of being seen as an overbearing helicopter parent. Still, the two possess the powerful bond of love which exists between child and parent. It’s a bond she puts above all else; even the deep rooted resentment which drives her nature as an avenger. Even if the grail could torment all who cursed her, who built this legacy all those years ago, she’d still wish to just be able to live a normal life with her son.

    During the days in which the holy grail war is not raging on, she will usually pursue various hobbies that require very few people such as gardening or solitaire. Now faced with the many great opportunities provided by the modern world, she usually spends her days trying out new things she would never have been able to before in search of a good way to spend time.






    Class Skills:
    Avenger (C++)
    A Class Skill of the Avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate hatred and resentment. The rate of mana generation becomes higher when receiving damage.Her resentment towards others is normally high but unspecified, however, a dramatic increase in power is seen when ill will is directed towards her Noble Phantasm.


    Oblivion Correction (B)
    A Class Skill of the Avenger class. People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened. That hatred shall never, ever be forgotten. Like a small, unsightly scar carved unto the history of man, it shall remain for eternity. Not a day has come in which she turned her mind away from revenge. Yet, due to the nature of her existence, the target of her ire is too ethereal, too vague, a concept without a physical form or neck which she could violently deny of breath as she always dreams. A revenge without a goal, no matter how strong the resentment, simply leads to aimless malice that continues to go unsatiated.


    Self Replenishment (Mana) (C)
    A Class Skill of the Avenger class. One's magical energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn.



    Personal Skills:
    Witchcraft (EX)
    A Skill that signifies one as a practitioner of Witchcraft. This magecraft has roots in both the eastern and western worlds. While reality might deviate from the narrative told,as a servant who bears the legend of the first victim of Europe's witch hunts, witchcraft worthy of such a title has been bestowed upon them. Having been granted some of the western magecraft of which modern stereotypes and practices originate, it possesses significant power compared to what is expected of someone at her level.
    A subject who bears such a notable name must be equipped to raise hell to the titles standards. The origin for the first, fake or not, is a worthy boon.” - ▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■


    Innocent Monster (A)
    An attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed.
    A witch whose story was entirely fabricated, yet possesses a legend strong enough to manifest. A soul who existed in simply unfortunate circumstance, she has been forced to bear the twisted legacy that comes with the tale. Despite the beliefs about her, it is her Noble Phantasm which has been forced to bear the brunt of the distortion, enough to be what has really pushed Avenger into the domain of witches.
    Do the nuances of the origin really matter? It’s all the same in the end, every story blends together. Only this time, you get an epilogue. And a new name.” - ▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■

    The Devil's Eye (B)
    A curse for those who have garnered the affection of the devil, whether they truly met them or not. It’s a karmic bond with the devil manifested as an ability whose capabilities are mostly unknown to the user.
    Always trailing behind like a second shadow, subtle in it’s ways but unsettling when noticed, no matter where Avenger travels the world becomes unearthly in her wake. An uncanny presence which manifests in every dark ritual and eerie place yet is never seen, reality ever so slightly seems to warp, and as if pulled by the gravity of a dense evil, misfortune gathers. At this rank, the closeness of their karmic bond can only manifest evil through a slow and indirect matter. Not powerful enough to pull the truly eldritch into the world, it can at first only bring about bouts of misfortune and terror upon those who catch the devil's eye. Given enough time spent in one place, it can become possible for demons of the uncanny valley to manifest. Ultimately, this ability and its various benefits and attacks sit outside of Avengers hands, for everything is at the devil's discretion.
    “The devil can only meddle in another’s affairs. Direct intervention has never been as effective as a web. Action is more suited for you, and this new adopted son of mine.” -▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■



    Noble Phantasms:
    “Ye wander into forbidden realms, unbeknownst of what lies beyond the taboo. The universe has some place man mustn’t go, yet to see someone travel there anyways, it’s the most amusing beauty. How far will this child of mine go?”

    “Your child!? That’s just a story they always told! I won’t let you get away with slander like that!”

    “You should be fully aware by now, all that is evil belongs to me.”

    “Then I’ll prove my sons innocence to be true.”

    “We’ll find out if that’s the case when the curtains close, it’s almost here. The gates of hell now lie open! Come! Pay the consequences for meddling so deeply with the Devil! Hell Hou-.”

    “Rise to the occasion my son! Hell Hound of Toulouse!"


    Hell Hound of Toulouse
    Devils Prodigy

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: A++

    The monster supposedly born from the union of Angéle de la Barthe and Satan, it is a demonic beast of the highest order, exceptional more for its potential than its inherent capabilities. Originally just a boy, by becoming a wraith alongside Angéle the legend has transformed him into the baby eating monster once said to torment Toulouse with his mother's assistance. Despite the devils current endorsement and patronage, he can only be called a crude imitation of a demon due to lacking the proper origins of one. In essence, a fake with big shoes to fill. When first manifested, he appears in the monstrous form of a beast with wolfs head and snake tail as described in legend, but outside the great strength inherent to such a beast, this is as far as he can go. The true power of this Noble Phantasm comes from its ability to evolve. By making use of it’s supposed incubus heritage as some legends describe, it is capable of learning what a true demon is supposed to be by consuming the nightmares of mortals. Under the guidance of the voice of the ultimate demonic influence, it can use these nightmares to influence its own body and capabilities in an attempt to become one of the most horrific demons to ever prey upon mankind.
    Despite it’s incredible potential, for strong emotional reasons Avenger will attempt to use this Noble Phantasm as little as possible.


    Relationships:
    Abigail Williams:
    “The center of Salem's madness has returned to life once more, it seems you couldn’t help but undo your one good deed.”
    A figure directly involved in the accusation of witches, these two figures are especially incompatible.

    Saints:
    “If you’re gonna glare, look me in the eyes not behind me.”
    Whenever she encounters a saint, there's always a strong feeling of animosity in the air. She can never identify if it’s actually being directed towards her or elsewhere.

    Raikou:
    As she radiates a motherly energy, she is spared Angéle’s poor attitude. Perhaps they could connect over their own cherished maternal bonds but Angéle has become a bit too socially inept to do so, thus she mostly avoids her.

    Asterios:
    “...... Do you wish to play with my son?”

    Mephistopheles:
    Do to being rejected by other witches, and most servants in general because of her cruel nature, the demon who shares a few notable traits with her is one of the few people she is seen hanging out with, often caught up in various forms of mischief.

    ▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■▂▂▃▃▅▅■■■■:
    There have been numerous complaints of a loud domestic dispute over what seems to be a nasty child custody case, despite the fact that it appears to be happening with no one is particular.


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    Authors Note:
    I felt this one might be a bit of stretch due to the vague source material and all, but I think it's ok and if it's not I understand. I found this to be a more basic sheet then what I normally make but I still like it enough to post. Thanks for reading.
    Last edited by GilgameshKingOfMemes; February 8th, 2020 at 03:12 PM.

  2. #1762
    Archer of Valentine's Day

    "Hello, Master! I am Psyche! Are you ready to find love?"



    True Name: Psyche
    Epithets: Goddess of the Soul
    Class: Archer
    Alternate Classes: Caster
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Attribute: Sky
    Origin: Greek Mythology
    Likes: Eros, the gods, People who are in love
    Dislikes: Jealous people, Being alone, Tragic love
    Talent: Loving love itself
    Natural Enemy: Her sisters, Aphrodite
    Armament: Bow of Eros, dagger
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Catalyst: An ancient oil lamp

    Parameters:

    STR: E
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: A
    LUK: EX
    NP: A++

    Personality
    Psyche was a perfect idol from birth, in both appearance and in soul. With a perfect body and lovely smile, she can earn the adoration of the masses as easily as breathing. Brave, adventurous, insatiably curious, honest, and modest; Psyche can be said to be the archetypical fairytale princess in her demeanor. She is a figure who is easily beloved, but her seeming perfection can make it difficult to approach her as anything other than an object of worship. Such adoration can make her lonely and would prefer that others approach her as a person.

    Psyche absolutely adores the concept of love in all its aspects, eagerly talking about how wonderful it is. Summoned as a Servant, she is more than happy to spread love in her husband’s name. If she is summoned by a Master who has yet to find love, she’ll make it a personal mission in order to find them their perfect match.


    Lore
    Psyche was the goddess of the human soul and was the wife of Eros, the god of love.

    Once she was a beautiful mortal princess, whose beauty brought reverence and worship from those around her. This earned the ire of Aphrodite as Psyche was unintentionally stealing worship from her when men started worshiping Psyche as the goddess of beauty. Aphrodite commanded Eros to make Psyche fall in love with a hideous man, but when the god came upon her, he was so startled by her beauty he accidentally pricked himself on his own arrow and fell in love with her.

    Psyche was carried off by Zephyrus, the west wind, to Eros' palace. Eros hid his true identity and told Psyche she must never gaze upon his face or he would leave forever. Her jealous sisters, however, tricked her into disobeying and the angry god forsook her.

    Psyche searched the world for her lost lost, eventually coming into the service of Aphrodite. Aphrodite commanded the princess to complete a series of impossible tasks; organizing a heap of seeds by type, collecting the wool from a flock of golden, carnivorous sheep, retrieving the black waters from a cleft near the River Styx and the River Cocytus, and eventually culminating in a journey to the underworld to acquire some of Persephone’s beauty.

    Psyche was rewarded afterwards by being reunited with Eros and they were married in a ceremony that was attended by all the gods.


    Skills
    Class Skills:

    Independent Action: B
    The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from one's Master; the ability that allows for action even in the absence of the Master. It is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for two days without a Master. However, this is the ideal value achieved by maximally conserving mana and avoiding battle and Noble Phantasm usage.

    Magic Resistance: A
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer".

    Personal Skills:

    Affection of The God: EX
    A Skill that denotes one being loved by a male god. Psyche is the beloved wife of the god Eros, and as a form of protection he gave Psyche immunity to being charmed, as well as quelling any feelings of lust towards her.

    Golden Rule (Body): A+
    A Skill that denotes the possession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Unlike the Natural Body Skill whose body shape does not change despite how much caloric intake was taken, there is no effect on the Skill owner's Strength parameter.

    Princess of Loveliness: A+++
    A charismatic nature not for leadership, but to bring and attract to her the people in her surroundings. Psyche is revered and protected as a princess by nearly everyone just by existing.


    Noble Phantasm(s)
    Bow of Eros
    The Love God's Regalia

    Rank: A+
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Range: 1 - 60
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1

    The bow of Psyche’s husband Eros, the god of love. It is through her union with Eros that Psyche could even be summoned under the Archer-class to begin with. The bow is functionally a normal bow, but the true utility of the bow is revealed when its True Name is called as it will imbue arrows loosed from it with a powerful love curse. Those struck by these arrows will not be harmed physically, but they will be forcibly charmed into falling in love with the first thing they see, be it a person, a creature, or even an object. It is nearly impossible to resist this curse as it could even affect gods, so resisting it requires one to possess Magic Resistance of the highest possible caliber.


    Love Trials
    The Four Redemptions

    Rank: E ~ A++
    Type:
    Range:
    Maximum Number of Targets:

    The Noble Phantasm that represents the impossible trials Psyche had to face in order to redeem herself for violating Eros’ trust and win back his love. Psyche was tasked by the goddess Aphrodite to Sorting huge piles of grains and lentils in a single night, retrieving some golden wool from vicious sheep, retrieving water flowing from an elevated cleft that is impossible to achieve on foot and is also guarded by great serpents, and retrieving a Box of Beauty from the Queen of the Underworld. Psyche managed to accomplish each of these tasks (with some help). It is a crystallization of her legend and proof that she accomplished each of the four tasks, which allows her to summon specific aspects of her legend as independent Noble Phantasms: the ants who helped her sort the grains, the golden sheep, the eagle of Zeus, and the box that was used to contain Persephone’s beauty.

    Ants of Psyche
    A Princess' Little Army

    For Psyche’s first trial, she was taken to a granary and tasked with sorting piles of grains and lentils by type in a single night before Aphrodite returned. It was a task that she had no chance of accomplishing on her own, but fortunately a nearby ant colony took pity upon her and amassed to sort the seeds for her. Psyche can summon up an unlimited army of ants to do her bidding, such as swarming over a designated target. She summons them by throwing some grains upon the ground. They are rather weak despite their numbers and Psyche is unlikely to deploy them in actual combat and will use them for other non-combative tasks.

    Mêloi Khryseoi
    The Golden Flock

    For Psyche’s second trial, Aphrodite commanded Psyche to fetch the wool from a flock of vicious, golden-fleeced sheep with venomous bites. Psyche accomplished the task after heeding the advice from a talking reed and waited for the violent sheep to tire themselves out fighting with one another then walked over and plucked the wool off the brambles. As a Noble Phantasm, Psyche can summon this flock of carnivorous Phantasmal Beasts by throwing parts of their golden fleece onto the ground. The sheep will manifest where the fleece lands and will charge the opponent, driven by bloodlust to attack Psyche’s enemies.

    Aetos Dios
    Eagle of Zeus

    A giant, golden eagle that served as Zeus' personal messenger and animal companion. This Divine Beast was sent by Zeus himself to aid Psyche in her third task in which she had to retrieve the black waters from an elevated cleft near the River Styx and the River Cocytus to battle dragons that had made their home within the cliffs near the rivers. Psyche can summon the eagle to her side by offering the cup that she needed to fill with the black water up to the sky. The eagle will descend from the sky as a bolt of lightning, seeking to strike at Psyche’s enemies. As the Divine Beast of Zeus, the eagle has control over the sky and is capable of large-scale manipulation of lightning, winds and rains.

    The Box of Beauty
    Vanity's Ruination

    For Psyche’s final trial, Aphrodite tasked her to go to the underworld to fill a box with Persephone’ beauty, claiming that her own beauty had been diminished while trying to heal Eros. This was a trick, however, as the box had a curse placed inside of it that would make whoever looked inside fall into a death-like slumber. When Psyche was returning to Aphrodite with the box, Psyche wanted to take this beauty to herself but, when she opened the box, the curse was unleashed upon her and causing her to fall to sleep.

    Psyche can use the box as a Noble Phantasm, which by opening the box towards a target, she can inflict its curse onto an enemy. If the target doesn’t possess a sufficiently high enough rank in Magic Resistance, they must pass a mental resistance check or be forcibly fall asleep. Once the curse has been inflicted, it is difficult to dispel without divine assistance. Those who possess Divinity are naturally immune to the curse as it was originally meant for Psyche, who possessed no divine ancestry.


    Voice Lines
    Ascensions:

    1st Ascension:
    "How do you like my new look, Master? Do you think Eros would like it?"

    2nd Ascension: "Ah! This feels great! It is all because of you, Master!"

    3rd Ascension: "Oh hey, I've got wings again! I was missing these!"

    4th Ascension: "Ehehehe! This is amazing~! Thank you, Master! Is there any way I could repay you for your efforts?"

    Bonds:

    Bond Lv. 1: "So Master, is there anyone you have your eye set on? I can help you win their heart!"

    Bond Lv. 2: "I appreciate you coming to talk to me rather than just watch from a distance. That would have made me sad."

    Bond Lv. 3: "Sorry that I don't have any real divine power, Master. I was born with no divine blood in me. As a Servant I'm just a regular human rather than the goddess I became."

    Bond Lv. 4: "I enjoy these talks. I hope you don't think anything more will come of them though! I'm a married woman and I would hate to break your heart!"

    Bond Lv. 5: "You are so kind to me, Master. It makes me so glad to have met someone who has taken the time to get to know me. You are one of the best friends I've ever had!"

    Other:

    Dialogue 1: "Is there a feel greater than love? I don't think so!"

    Dialogue 2: "I've notice that you have quite a few admirers among your Servants. I'm afraid there isn't much I can do to help you there without causing problems. Haha..."

    Dialogue 3: "Curious that a holiday dedicated to a Saint uses my husband as a symbol. But I'm sure he wouldn't mind!"

    On the Holy Grail: "Everyone should be able to find someone they love! That is my wish!"

    Something You Like: "Eros, of course! He is my beloved husband!"

    Something You Hate: "Hmm... I'm not too fond of jealous people. You shouldn't live a life with envy in your heart."

    Birthday: "Happy birthday, Master! I couldn't think of what to give you as a gift, so just this once I will give you a kiss on the cheek. I hope Eros won't mind. Haha!"


    Relationships
    Euryale: "Hey! That love arrow thing is my husband's gimmick! You can't just steal another god's gimmick!"

    Europa: "You are loved by Lord Zeus himself? That's amazing! ...Hmm? You want me to call you grandmother? Okay!"

    Rama: "You poor thing... To be cursed to never see your love again..."

    Orion: "To be loved by one of the divine is a wondrous thing isn't it! ...Eh, what's with the look?"

    Paris: "That's Apollo? He is so... cute! Much more cute than the gold sheep."

    Yu Miaoyi: "You waited so long to be reunited with your love. Ah... I hope you'll find each other again."

    Orpheus: "Oh... Oh you poor thing..."


    Creator Notes
    He be my entry for the Create-A-Servant prompt. It seemed like such an obvious choice of a Servant to make given Psyche's whole thing is that she is in love with an actual love god. She was kind of hard to work with though given she doesn't have a crazy amount of feats like some other possible heroic spirits. She is quite literally a normal person. No magic, no skill in combat; just very pretty.

    Giving her Eros' bow was a no-brainer, but for her other NP I will freely admit it is pretty much a carbon copy of King's Orders. However, I feel it makes for a good NP for her to have as it ties in with her legend and gives her some additional versatility.
    Last edited by TheLordOfAwesome; February 10th, 2020 at 04:18 PM.

  3. #1763
    Thousand-Million-Fold Repetition Kamerad's Avatar
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    Look, the Casket of Happiness lies quietly before you. I wonder what is inside, aren’t you curious?
    Surely this box contains none other than contents of your heart's desire, don’t you hope so?
    Now, don’t be afraid, let’s open it.



    ADVENT BEAST
    AN EVIL OF HUMANITY MANIFESTS


    BEAST III

    “Come, my children.
    Your wishes, your desire, I shall fulfill them all.
    Put your faith in me. Give all your love to me. Everything…
    There is no need to struggle. I am the only one that can save you.
    For I am your only Hope…”




    Pandora brought the box of ills and opened it. It was the gift of the gods to men, outwardly a beautiful and seductive gift, and called the Casket of Happiness.

    Out of it flew all the evils, living winged creatures, thence they now circulate and do men injury day and night. One single evil had not yet escaped from the box, and by the will of Zeus Pandora closed the lid and it remained within.

    Now for ever man has the casket of happiness in his house and thinks he holds a great treasure; it is at his disposal, he stretches out his hand for it whenever he desires; for he does not know the box which Pandora brought was the casket of evil, and he believes the ill which remains within to be the greatest blessing, — it is hope.

    Zeus did not wish man, however much he might be tormented by the other evils, to fling away his life, but to go on letting himself be tormented again and again. Therefore he gives man hope, — in reality it is the worst of all evils, because it prolongs the torments of man.



    The torment of despair is precisely this — not to be able to die; as though there were hope of life. So it has much in common with the situation of the moribund when he lies and struggles with death, and cannot die. The hopelessness in this case is that even the last hope, death, is not available.

    When death is the greatest danger, one hopes for life; but when one becomes acquainted with an even more dreadful danger, one hopes for death. So when the danger is so great that death has become one’s hope, despair is the disconsolateness of not being able to die.



    Hope cannot be eluded forever. It can beset even those who wanted to be free of it. One recognizes one’s course by discovering the paths that stray from it. At the very conclusion of the absurd reasoning, in one of the attitudes dictated by its logic, it is not a matter of indifference to find hope coming back in under one of its most touching guises.

    From Pandora’s Box, where all the ills of humanity swarmed, the Greeks drew out hope after all the others, as the most dreadful of all. There's no more stirring symbol; for, contrary to the general belief, hope equals resignation. And to live is not to resign oneself.



    Hope, in its stronger forms, is a great deal more powerful stimulants to life than any sort of realized joy can ever be.

    Man must be sustained in suffering by a hope so high that no conflict with actuality can dash it—so high, indeed, that no fulfillment can satisfy it: a hope reaching out beyond this world.

    Precisely because of this power that hope has of making the suffering hold out, the Greeks regarded it as the evil of evils, as the most malign of evils; it remained behind at the source of all the world’s evil.



    Class: Beast III
    True Name: Elpis
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Greek Mythology
    Attribute: Earth

    Prometheus stole the heavenly fire and gave it to mankind, bestowing upon humanity “the gift of wisdom and reason”. To compensate for this, Zeus sent another gift to mankind, a woman named Pandora who carried with her a container filled with “the source of all evil”—desire.

    Curiosity begets desires, and so one day Pandora's curiosity conquered everything, and she opened the forbidden box. Happiness, plague, sorrow, friendship, disaster, love, greed, envy, hatred, mistrust, anger, revenge, lust — all flew out. Pandora frantically closed the box, and only “hope” was left. Should Pandora did not close the box, should “hope” was allowed to be released from the box — it is said that it would mean the annihilation of humanity.

    Without greed, why should humans work hard?
    Without jealousy, why would human beings be motivated?
    Without exclusivity, what will love look like?
    What is the difference between the so-called hope and desire?

    Desire begets hope, but hope also begets something far more sinister…

    All the World’s Evils

    Beast III is a composite of the evil spirits that personifies human desire and sins that was once contained inside Pandora’s Box, of which Elpis (Hope) being its core.

    Beast III is none other than the curse of evil that is inflicted upon humanity as Pandora opened the jar that the gods sent. She is a theodicy, an attempt to explain why God let the existence of evil in this world. There once exist a sacrificial human that was chosen to embody this curse as the God of Evil, Beast III’s existence is similar to that. But unlike that sacrificial human who was merely a representation of All the World’s Evil, Beast III is none other than its root cause and full manifestation of it.

    The curse inflicted upon each and every human being that has and will exist, the root of all suffering, and thus, of evil — desire, that is, hope. She is the impulse that steers sentient beings towards despair and self-annihilation, the blind hope that prolongs man’s torment, the delusion that keeps human from dying even as they are tormented to endless suffering — such is the Evil of Man carrying the principle of Expectation.

    Parameters:
    STR: A
    END: A+
    AGI: D
    MGI: EX
    LCK: D
    NP: A+++

    Class Skills:
    Independent Manifestation: A
    A special Skill that permits unsupported manifestation into reality without necessity of energy cost or of summoning by a Master; it signifies the skill holder as a “fixed existence”. It grants the bearer resistance towards instant-death and time manipulation effect attacks.

    Beast III manifests when Hope, her final and true nature, is finally released from the casket of evil which served to seal her away, meaning that her existence as “All the World’s Evils” is now complete. The hope of life that humanity had always clings to like a spoiled child now became the pillar that sustains her existence, and corrupted into the hope of death – despair.

    Authority of the Beast: A
    A Skill that signifies the holder as an evil of man, in other words, it is an Anti-Humanity skill.

    Being an existence that can be said to be the root of all evils, Beast III is the antithesis of the “good-will” of humanity, the principle and beliefs that drives human beings to do good actions. In essence, it grants advantage against “Good” aligned foes.

    Personal Skills:
    Logos Inversion: EX
    The very nature of Beast III as a pollution that brought evil to the world and causes suffering to humanity, it is the curse of evil, a corruption that taints the world with the concept of “evil” itself.

    Contact with Beast III through all five senses, be it touching, sighting, smelling or hearing has high chance to inflict the malign curse known as “All the World’s Evils” that causes every kind of pain and suffering to human, which reverses their alignment to “Evil”, turning them into mindless killing machines through the process known as the “blackening” that can also effects spiritual bodies such as Servants, turning them into Alters, much like the grail mud phenomena, but with larger scale and power.

    Nega-Wisdom: A
    The purpose of a Beast that was sent to counter the Gift of Wisdom that the Wise Titan gave to mankind, it is none other than the curse of desire that is the source of all suffering which pollutes human minds. As a Skill, it is the ability to negate Skills and Noble Phantasm of Heroic Spirits that is conceived through human Wisdom and Ingenuity, including all types of Clairvoyance.

    All the World’s Gift: E-
    The disposition to generate all kinds of human emotion and also to induce it to any sentient beings, the ultimate pandering ability that grants Beast III full control over her own and others emotional state. The gift from all the gods, it is the source of Desire, the force to manipulate the heart of man, it is sometimes called the root of all suffering, but it unmistakably also is the origin of all happiness.

    – at least that's how it's supposed to be.

    In reality it is not a skill that originally belongs to Beast III, but something she inherits from the woman who is the key to the pythos that once imprisoned her, Pandora. As such, Beast III can barely use this skill at all, at most it only give her a two alternative personality trait, that of subtle motherly instinct, and that a of curious maiden. She herself sometimes wonders why she has this skill at all.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Hollow Ataraxia
    Ray of Hope, Fuel of Suffering

    Type: Anti-World
    Rank: EX
    The Authority of the embodiment of Hope, it is the taking of desire from all and the giving of hope to all. A subspecies of Third Magic, it is the result of Beast III, acting as a pseudo-Holy Grail which fulfills the wishes and desires of all sentient beings with Blind Hope.

    As a Noble Phantasm, Beast III corrupts the sun, the Form of the Good that illuminates the truth, into the Form of the Evil that conceals the truth behind the blinding ray of Hope. Beast III fulfills the wishes of every sentient being by giving them Blind Hope that strips them away from all bodily and mental pain. In other words, by granting them the highest state of pleasure, Beast III melts away their soul and consciousness, liberating them from Eros, the species propagation instinct, and replacing it with Thanatos, the premonition of humanity’s annihilation, a death drive towards extinction, a hope for self-destruction, in other words, it is “evil” in its crudest sense.

    Taking Logos Inversion to the extreme, just as Beast III turns hope into despair, not as true opposites, but as “reversal of logic”, that is, by turning the “hope for life” into the “hope for death”, this Noble Phantasm operates as a calamity that inverses the “common sense of the species” itself.

    It seems that those with high enough self-control, ego or sheer good-will can maintain their consciousness from being completely erased, rather than disappearing, it seems that they are absorbed somewhere…

    Pandora Kakodaimonia
    She is the Curse of Calamity Who Releases All the World’s Evils

    Type: Anti-World
    Rank: EX
    Pandora’s Box, the container of All the World’s Evils that Pandora opened out of curiosity in the past, inflicting pain and suffering into the world.

    Recently, it has been opened once again, unleashing the final and most terrible evil into the world—Elpis, the Beast of Hope.

    Anesidora Eudaimonia
    She is the Blessed Goddess Who Contains All the World’s Goods

    Type: Anti-Evil
    Rank: EX
    Pandora’s Box, it is an empty pythos that once contained All the World’s Evils, the container that was the source of all desire, the prison that sealed Beast III. It is a Noble Phantasm that is an independent existence from Beast III, yet it is ultimately inseparable from her.

    In actuality, this Noble Phantasm is none other than Beast III’s Saint Graph itself. It is the ancient earth goddess, Anesidora, from whose body the container of all the world’s gifts, Pandora’s Box, as well as the woman who served as its key, Pandora was both made of.

    Previously the gods of Olympus had put the curse of All the World’s Evils into the earthen pythos, causing all the good spirits (eudaimons) that is released from the closed world within it when Pandora opened the pythos to turn into evil spirits (kakodaimons) that would causes suffering and torment humanity ever since. However, because Zeus do not wish for humanity’s total annihilation, he made it so that Pandora closed the lid before Elpis, hope, could escape.

    However, as Elpis now has been also released from the pythos, and all the kakodaimons combined with Elpis became Beast III, the purpose of the pythos has been returned to its previous function—to contain all the world’s goods.

    It is a Noble Phantasm that even Beast III is not aware of, and could potentially become her own bane…
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    I'm curious as to why you chose Beast III instead of one of the ones we haven't seen yet. It's true that Beast III is all about love, but yours seems to forgo that in favor of Hope and doesn't really have any connection to Kiara or Kama.

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    Glad someone realized this contest is like the perfect chance for posting Beast-Class Servants, since they all embody "love" (for humanity) in a sense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pinetree View Post
    I'm curious as to why you chose Beast III instead of one of the ones we haven't seen yet. It's true that Beast III is all about love, but yours seems to forgo that in favor of Hope and doesn't really have any connection to Kiara or Kama.
    Not really

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    Kiara and Kama, Beast III/R and L, both represent the sin of Lust, that is, desire. Kiara is the one who takes desire from all, while Kama is the one who gives desire to all.

    Hope here is both, she takes all desire from all, and un return gives hope to all, etc. Pretty sure I included that in the sheet, including various references to Kiara.

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    All the World's Desire = All the World's Hope = All the World's Evils, etc etc

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamerad View Post
    Not really

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    Kiara and Kama, Beast III/R and L, both represent the sin of Lust, that is, desire. Kiara is the one who takes desire from all, while Kama is the one who gives desire to all.

    Hope here is both, she takes all desire from all, and un return gives hope to all, etc. Pretty sure I included that in the sheet, including various references to Kiara.

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    All the World's Desire = All the World's Hope = All the World's Evils, etc etc
    Hm, okay. I can kinda see where you're coming from.

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    Beast III's sin is Pleasure, not lust
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    I know, Lust as in one of the 7 OG Deadly Sin

    Goetia being Pride
    Tiamat being Sloth
    Cath Palug being Envy, etc etc

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    I do like the twist on the Seven Deadly Sins that the Beasts kinda have going on. Beast III is the one that's a little more classical, but the rest are good at representing the sins with their Evils without it being on the nose. Super curious to see how they handle Gluttony, Greed, and Wrath. Especially how the one that represents Regret will tie in to one of them.

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    Regret is probably Greed

    As in, the greediness of those who regrets that they can't get the thing they want when they had the chance in the past. Or something along those lines

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamerad View Post
    I know, Lust as in one of the 7 OG Deadly Sin

    Goetia being Pride
    Tiamat being Sloth
    Cath Palug being Envy, etc etc
    Yeah I used to think that too but it doesn't work that way.
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    海が人々にとって死と隣り合わせだった中世以前、その凶暴性から悪魔とみなされるようになり、
    ついには『七つの大罪』のうち『嫉妬』を象徴する大いなる悪魔として流布された。
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    If Seven deadly sins = seven human evils. It'd put Leviathan as a Beast IV by your reckoning.

    However, the Seven Deadly Sins seem to be their own thing and can be linked to Rome's 7 Hills as well as the 7 dragons inhabiting those hills.
    Avaritia and Invidia being the names of two dragons also known as the
    Septum Montes
    Crowns of the Seven Hills
    who follow Nero.
    Spoiler:

    Furthermore in the Prison Tower Event Caligula said that his Roman sin was gluttony.
    Spoiler:

    I'd translate it as
    @カリギュラ
    暴食の罪。[r]即ち我がローマの悪性。
    The sin of Gluttony.
    That is, the evil of my Rome.
    From this we can see that the Seven Deadly Sins in the Nasuverse lore seem to be heading for a Roman flavor. Each deadly sin represents a hill, contains a dragon, and is called a crown. With that we see the beginnings of the Whore of Babylon and the monster she rides. At the same time, this means that the Seven Human Evils and the Seven Deadly Sins aren't the same. In the japanese the Seven Deadly sins are always called 七つの大罪 and the human evils 人類悪.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamerad View Post

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    Kiara and Kama, Beast III/R and L, both represent the sin of Lust, that is, desire. Kiara is the one who takes desire from all, while Kama is the one who gives desire to all.
    Kiara is Beast III/Lust
    Kama is Beast III/Rapture
    Beast III = Pleasure
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    I know that Jinrui Aku is defferent from Nanatsu no Taizai, but the point is that both has subtle equivalent to each other

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    Pleasure comes from carnal desire which corresponds Lust, etc

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    Yeah I used to think that too but it doesn't work that way.


    If Seven deadly sins = seven human evils. It'd put Leviathan as a Beast IV by your reckoning.

    However, the Seven Deadly Sins seem to be their own thing and can be linked to Rome's 7 Hills as well as the 7 dragons inhabiting those hills.
    Avaritia and Invidia being the names of two dragons also known as the
    Septum Montes
    Crowns of the Seven Hills
    who follow Nero.
    Spoiler:



    Furthermore in the Prison Tower Event Caligula said that his Roman sin was gluttony.
    Spoiler:

    I'd translate it as


    From this we can see that the Seven Deadly Sins in the Nasuverse lore seem to be heading for a Roman flavor. Each deadly sin represents a hill, contains a dragon, and is called a crown. With that we see the beginnings of the Whore of Babylon and the monster she rides. At the same time, this means that the Seven Human Evils and the Seven Deadly Sins aren't the same. In the japanese the Seven Deadly sins are always called 七つの大罪 and the human evils 人類悪.

    Also King Hassan in Babylonia says Shame is one of the Evils and that's doesn't correspond to a deadly sin.
    While it is true that the Beasts don't represent the Christian Seven Deadly Sins, each of the Evils, in one way or another, has an equivalent in the traditional seven sins. They aren't 1-to-1 similarities, but in effect the Seven Evils are close enough in nature to the Deadly Sins.

    Goatia is Pride because he represents Pity, but a kind of pity that is more condescending in nature.
    Tiamat is Sloth because Regression is wanting things to stay like the past and resenting change.
    Beast III is Lust and, let's be real, Pleasure and its dual nature in how it is represented is pretty much the closest to Lust (hell, Kiara represents the Lust aspect of the Evil). So this one is the most straight forward.
    Cath Palug is Envy because Comparison covers part of human nature to in which humans compare themselves and other things and resent their own shortcomings.
    Beast VI seems to be representing Greed due to its desire to grow and consume everything, corrupting all life into Altered corpses.

    Now, yes, Regret isn't one of the Seven Deadly Sins, but as I have just pointed out, the Evils don't have to be literally representations of the Seven Deadly Sins. So I wouldn't be surprised that when that Beast comes around we may be able to find a way to see how it could represent one of the Seven Deadly Sins (personal theory is that it will be the Gluttony equivalent).
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    Quote Originally Posted by You View Post
    From this we can see that the Seven Deadly Sins in the Nasuverse lore seem to be heading for a Roman flavor. Each deadly sin represents a hill, contains a dragon, and is called a crown. With that we see the beginnings of the Whore of Babylon and the monster she rides. At the same time, this means that the Seven Human Evils and the Seven Deadly Sins aren't the same. In the japanese the Seven Deadly sins are always called 七つの大罪 and the human evils 人類悪.
    But we know it's Ten Crowns, not seven...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zork Knight View Post
    But we know it's Ten Crowns, not seven...
    Ten Crowns: D (EX)
    An Authority-class transcedental skill.
    It has been said that the ten crowns indicate the ten evil kings, and the seven hills indicate the abominable city of evil.
    If you look at it in simple terms, this is a skill that turns all received injuries, occurred events, any and every result into “something nonexistent”.
    As a matter of fact, BB is invincible so long she has this.
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    You see, an invincible cheat is disgraceful when you look up close, right?
    So this is an unnecessary skill for the beautiful and cute BB-chan that we have now.☆ Oh, but it should be alright to use it just a little, right? Look, just like this!”
    The Ten Crowns refers to the each of the emperors. I'm talking about the Dragons/Crowns of the seven hills which is also part of the skill. But the Ten here refers to the emperors.
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    Quote Originally Posted by You View Post
    Kiara is Beast III/Lust
    Kama is Beast III/Rapture
    Beast III = Pleasure
    Nitpicking but iirc it is Kiara who is Rapture (III-R) while Kama is Lapse (III-L)? But you're right that in kanji thingies Kiara is designed as "Lust" while Kama I have seen as both "Joy" and "Depravity" (not a moon reader so I could be wrong, but I'm pretty confident in the L/R thing)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Half-Blood Master View Post
    Nitpicking but iirc it is Kiara who is Rapture (III-R) while Kama is Lapse (III-L)? But you're right that in kanji thingies Kiara is designed as "Lust" while Kama I have seen as both "Joy" and "Depravity" (not a moon reader so I could be wrong, but I'm pretty confident in the L/R thing)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Half-Blood Master View Post
    Nitpicking but iirc it is Kiara who is Rapture (III-R) while Kama is Lapse (III-L)? But you're right that in kanji thingies Kiara is designed as "Lust" while Kama I have seen as both "Joy" and "Depravity" (not a moon reader so I could be wrong, but I'm pretty confident in the L/R thing)
    Kama/Mara is typically designated as the Beast of Depravity. Never heard of her being designated as "Joy" though, but you are correct about the L/R thing.


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    Ohhh, I wonder if we can deduce who'll be L and who'll be R for Beast VI.

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