If i'll do it, mine will be a gag only select people will get.
I saw the prompt and immediately thought of a pretty obscure German/Swiss/Austrian Holiday that most people outside (And even some inside) those countries have probably never heard of, so I'll definitely try to get a sheet done in time to compete.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
I'm gonna need to do some research before deciding on any one thing but I love this. It gives me a chance to try my hand at festival servants
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
This time, I will be doing two entries, I think. I have an idea, but I also want to have a second idea.
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Wait. A thought occurs. Are we specifically looking at yearly commemorated days?
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Or does it has to a single day celebration.
I'm under the impression that it could be any sort of celebration, festivals included or not. Timeframes might be fluid with a single day like the Fourth of July or a span of eight days like Hanukkah. Ooo, a sheet on Antiochus IV Epiphanes being the grinch to the Maccabee's rebellion might be neat.
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Source: Savegreywolf
Class: Rider
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Frau Gauden
Alignment: True Neutral
Place of Origin: Germanic Folklore
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: B
Height: 170cm
Weight: 130lbs
Likes: Her daughters, relaxing
Dislikes: Eternally hunting
Talent: Eternally hunting
Natural Enemy: Sei Shounagon
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
A
Armament: Her chariot, a golden bow and arrow pair formed from Golden Service
Catalyst: The legend of Frau Gauden
Class Skills:
Riding A+: The ability to ride a mount. As someone known for riding a chariot and leading the wild hunt, she has a very high rank of this skill. At this rank, she is even capable of riding Phantasmal Beasts, though dragons are beyond her capability.
B
Magic Resistance B: She lived during a time where magic was high, and although she never faced any magic except for the curse she was put on, she still gains a fairly high rank of this skill.
Personal Skills:
Twelve Days of Yule B: The twelve days of Yule on which she got more powerful. Whenever she is summoned during any holiday associated with Yule to some degree, or six days on either side of that one, she will be gaining, in essence, Independent Action at rank B and a constant supply of mana, and her Noble Phantasm will take less mana to manifest.
Golden Service C: The capability to manifest gold and precious metals. She is capable of manifesting orbs of gold. If she intentionally gifts it to someone or is forced to by her noble phantasm, it will rank up their luck, while the gold itself, artificially hardened, also acts as her main weapon.
C
The Eternal Hunt A: The Wild Hunt that she led. In her case, this manifests as a skill that is the sublimation of her curse to never stop hunting. It prevents her from ever retreating, but it also prevents any other method of stopping her from hunting you that is below B rank to completely fail against her, and between B to A it would rank several times down.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Töchter der Jagd
Queen Of The Hunt, Unleash Your Children
D
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: B
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 100
This is the sublimation of her wagon and her children. When invoked, her wagon appears before her, pulled by four titanic hounds, each as big as a horse, while nineteen more surround her, keeping pace. Each one is a Monstrous Beast except for the pullers, which are each Phantasmal Beasts with powerful bites. In addition, the chariot can ram anyone with an B rank Anti Army hit. However, if this chariot ever reaches a crossroads, it will break. If someone else helps her to fix it, she will be compulsed to gift gold created by Golden Service to them.
Verfluchtes Heulen
Wolf, Howl and Never Leave
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 100
This sub-noble phantasm is the sublimation of her sending her children to people, which curses them. It passively manifests as a bounded field surrounding each dog for a small distance, ranking down he luck parameter of anyone not Gauden within that distance. In addition, when its true name is called for one dog, it moves to a certain point, the bounded field expands, and it gains an additional property. Unless it is moved with a noble phantasm above C rank or by Frau Gauden herself, it cannot be moved.
Lore: Frau Gauden was a wealthy woman who loved hunting. She loved hunting so much, in fact, that she declared that she didn't care about going to Paradise as long as she could hunt. She declared it one too many times, and her daughters were changed into dogs, while she was trapped on a chariot, to endlessly hunt and never stop. She would hunt especially on the twelve days of Yule. She was one of the eaders of the Wild Hunt.
Personality: She is stern and cruel, wishing everything to be under her control while she races through and hunts everyone down. However, she is also extremely depressed, as she can never stop hunting, and her daughters can never be transformed back to humans. Her wish for the grail would be that she had never said that she only wanted to hunt, and nothing else mattered. She knows that this would remove her from the Throne if it happened, but when it does, she will have no regrets.
Relationships:
Sei Shounagon: "You.. you're so peppy. How could you be that peppy? Well then, doesn't matter anyway, you will just be hunted down."
Jaguar Warrior: "Daughters, attack the cat! Huh. You're a god(dess)? Interesting. Would you like to discuss what it's like?"
Cu Chulainn (Caster): "Another leader of the Wild Hunt. Huh? You never led the Wild Hunt? Not you, the god inside you. Odin."
Creator Notes: I was really inspired!
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Rider of the Paddy Fields
-- Benevolent Mother of Harvest --
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Caster, Avenger (Alter)
True Name: Dewi Sri
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: Javanese and Balinese mythology
Parameters:
STR: D
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: D
NP: C
Likes: Rice-based dishes, taking care of plants, snakes
Dislikes: Gods, "romantic love" (or at least her own definition of the term), synthetic pesticides
Talent: Farming, cooking, gardening
Natural Enemy:Batara GuruShiva
Armament: Plants, snakes, farming equipments
Catalyst: A bundle of (uncooked) rice
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Lore
Description
Relationships
Bond CE
Creator's notes
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Not sure if it was intentional, Bn, but you didn't rank one of the NPs, Wawacan Shridevi. I'll give a review later, everything looks pretty good so far.
The "third" NP is just an alternate release of the second, so they technically count as the same.
Oop, my mistake then. I didn’t really read your sheet, just scanned it over.
Frau Gauden: Hey, I'm no expert at anything like others here and I'm simply here to have fun, so I can't speak like I'm an authority. It's just a sheet maker exchanging tips with a fellow sheet maker... That being said, I figured what's my problem with your sheets: it's like eating a burger. It fills you and you even think, "man this is a good burger" while you're eating, but 5 minutes later you barely remember the taste. I think messing with colors and bold/italic would really benefit your sheets, because they'd at least give us the impression there's a progression going on. The way they're right now, it's like you're reading everything in a single breath. It's simultaneously too much and too little.
But, that's me just feeling that the formatting gets in the way of your ideas, because they're pretty cool otherwise. Like, you're far better at the game than you were at the beggining, and it shows. The ideas are still direct to the point (maybe I'm just someone that likes more meat in my burguers? But also I have to recognize that this is your style and I can't change it so I'm just learning to appreciate it. Bear with me), but they have way more substance now. And the figure in question fits the prompt and it's well made, all things considered. I know you have potential, if anything waaay more than I could ever at this age, so I'm always so interested in what the future will show us.
Dewi Sri: First of all, papa snek. I just want to pet it until it bites me.
Second of all, I absolutely love the way you found to present character lore to us. I swear I wait with baited breath the day you come here announcing you have an original story or a book in the making - Imma buy 5 copies of each.
Also, gushing over our lord and savior El aside, I love when someone brings a figure that isn't ~mainstream~ because not only their takes are fresh for this exact reason, but also we end up learning so much about other mythologies around the world. Like, what I'm supposed to do with this wholesome feeling left in me after I read the way this self-proclaimed rookie goddess goes about her life? It's just too good. You're really unmatched when it comes to character creation, we're only trying to be second best after you at this point...
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Ismail:Is he a rider or voyager? you use both. So I guess the founder of Mecca qualifies in your opinion because the pilgrimage is an important celebration for muslims? The premise, if I guess it right, is fine but it does not really feel like a sheet for the pilgrimage. It is a sheet about ismail. It misses the aspect of celebration, imo.
Dewi: dammit. even the greatest fall for the fake png trap. 10/10 would summon to get a good bowl of rice. pineapple-on-pizza freaks and Average Pizza Enjoyers put aside their differences to fight her for putting rice on pizza.
All the while Kamera and the Brazilians are watching with their weird pizza culture.
I digress. Very cute young mommy goddess
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
He is Voyager I forgot to change it from so of his skill though if was summon to Chaldea he would qualify a Rider. The skills embodied part of the Hajj and Eid Al Adha such as the nature of people travelled to Mecca in the first skill. The Stoning of the stone pillar where they say the devil lies that is still a practice of the Hajj and the sacrifice of cattle to feed to poor and how it that tradition stated with Ismail for the third skill as the Eid Al adha coincide with The Hajj.
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CASTER
"Aha, a party♡ How delightful, and plenty of adorable guests♡ Hexennacht? Well, that's just rude...
I suppose I'll make up for it with an un~for~gettable Sabbath♡"
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night, dawn, and the birth of stars
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Didn't expect you turn up another sheet today. This is fun one with the holidays though Is the whole sex thing a part of the holiday or it's just her quirky nature. Also like yeah I guess Ismail and Lorelei wouldn't get along due to their respected nature and I already imagine how the scenario would went if they ever met
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