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    yeah! The sheet's well done Draco

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scotcheroos View Post
    The Creeper Virus was an experimental computer program written by Robert "Bob" Thomas of what is now Raytheon BBN, in an attempt to test a theoretical existence conceived by John von Neumann in his 'Theory of Self-Replicating Automata', itself built of of his 'Theory and Organization of Complicated Automata'. The idea was that, by replicating itself autonomously via environmental materials, Neumann theorized that humanity could observe the self-replicating machine's products inheriting information from the original copy and/or acquiring new information from the environment around them. He claimed that open-ended evolution requires inherited information to be copied and passed to offspring separately from the self-replicating machine.

    For reference as to just groundbreaking said claim was, this insight was said to be the motherfucking preceding piece of the puzzle that allowed Watson and Crick to discover the structure of the DNA molecule.

    Of course, something like von Neumann's universal constructor and the von Neumann probe (yes, that's what it's called) were still far out of reach with how underdeveloped 1940-1960 technology was, and von Neumann died before his dream could be realized. But in 1971, 22 years after the original theory on complicated automata was published, Thomas decided he wanted to test that theory, and wrote a small, harmless little program on the ARPANET, the Internet's predecessor. To make a long story short, he succeeded. A little too well, at that.

    It wasn't much, really. All it would do was move from one terminal to the other and greet whoever was viewing that terminal with a short phrase before moving on almost immediately afterwards. Later, a second function was added to it by Ray Tomlinson (inventor of the email), allowing itself to essentially 'copy and paste' itself onto previous terminals it had occupied as well. They thought, this program was harmless, they could deal with it whenever they wanted if they had to.

    The program multiplied into every single terminal in the ARPAnet within approximately two days and thirty minutes. It was indeed harmless, but it's growth and spread was exponential that it was impossible to contain by human hands. It swarmed the ARPAnet for a whole year while Raytheon tried to fix their mistake, desperately trying to delete as many instances of the program as they could with human speed and finite stamina, before Tomlinson finally managed to compelte and release a counterprogram that would track, contain and seal off the program's self-replicating functions, isolating the instance and eradicating it little by little, thereby ending the harmless program's uncontrolled spread.

    Nowadays, Thomas' experimental program is called the Creeper Virus. It's recognized coutnry-wide as the first computer virus in history, and it can both be called the realization and confirmation of von Neumann's theory, and the reason why the Internet was developed the way it was today, both woith malware and antivirus systems alike.
    thank you. Multi, I think it would be great if you could link the Creeper Virus' sheet ... somewhere in the Relationship segment.

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    That's a thumbs up from me, Draco. Im looking forward to writing my entry's relationship with him.
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    I'm not sure if we can edit sheets after submitting them for the contest

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    Quote Originally Posted by TrueMrMultiverse View Post
    I'm not sure if we can edit sheets after submitting them for the contest
    i think you can edit to link sheets and add new relationships. just no updating of material

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    Quote Originally Posted by DracoScribe View Post
    PS: ill get to commenting on the other sheets as soon as possible but dang it ive been all over the place lately. also this sheet has been consuming me the past few days too. so yeah.
    Bro, same. I swear I'll pour my heart over them this weekend or something I'M FIGHTING TEARS OVER HERE OVER SOME OF THE ENTRIES, I SWEAR. But now... If you excuse me...

    *Record scratch* *Freeze frame* Yep, that's me. You're probably wondering how I got into this situation...
    So... This is part of an overaching saga. Sure thing you can still treat it as a standalone entry because in the end a sheet must stand on its own feet 'n all of that, but if you truly, truly feel any curiosity about how we're here of all places, you can check out the previous entries.
    [Part 1] [Part 2] [Part 3] [Part 4] [Part 4.5] [Part 5]



    “Every savior has a past,
    And every sinner has a future.”

    ― OSCAR WILDE









    In his last moments, he saw no life worth replaying. He heard no person worth remembering. What he held was simply the answer to his own question—one he had no idea, until now, he even directed at himself.

    Do you stop loving someone just because they hurt you?

    He could still remember how the line between consciousness and dream was a biting thing, cutting into his heels. All of himself, going numb and he only could think that, so... To die was really just like going to sleep. It was a frightening conclusion.

    “Unwillingly as it was, you hurt me. I understand.”

    If there was no witness to a phenomenon, had it ever even happened? Did it matter?

    “But I always held my hands over the ears of my heart, so that I wouldn’t ever hate you.”

    Would that person ever listen to his answer? Would that person even care about it? Those words wanted to matter, but instead his eyes just fluttered close.

    Just a second too late, how very fitting...

    A life so small and unimportant that it could be contained in a single sheet of paper. All of his pain and fears reduced to a line of ink. An insignificant dot, an unimportant memory. And yet... And yet... Here he was now.

    At the edge of the end, in the eye of the storm.

    November of 1889. A military coup that took place in the capital overthrew the constitutional monarchy of the Empire of Brazil, ending the reign of Pedro II.

    Redeeming the people but losing the throne for such imprudence, the Imperial family would be exiled, never to return. And with that, the last embers of an old tree would be taken by the winds of change. That world would move on.

    ——The place that called him, however, was different.

    Inside of this Singularity—right in that last moment before the embers were snuffed out—the world mourns in silence.

    Even as a rogue Servant, the Holy Grail should have given him just enough information to situate him in time and space, enough to know that sooner or later a force named 「Chaldea」 would descend to correct this course, and it was in his best interest to assist. However, borrowed memories told him of another tale and one glance only at a world painted in gold was what it took for him understand what was truly happening.

    This world wasn’t a festive bonfire, a place of possibility.

    The princess’ connection with the crimson tree was severed in order to cut her off from her beasthood, but that didn’t mean she was cut off from her inheritance—and so, if the authority of the burning tree was lying with someone else it only meant she would have to hijack it through different means... In the day their Empire died, in that split second in which it did not belonged to anyone. But without its granted authority, even if they were a Servant, a member of the Imperial family could not withstand the power of
    Pau-Brasil
    Andurá
    ... A Saint Graph would simply break. And she knew that, surely.

    This was a funeral pyre. The princess of sin was dying and taking this land with her.

    It was revenge. The culmination of her rage against a land that robbed her of everything—this was her returning the favor.

    —But oh, he could never truly judge her actions. He understood that pain.

    He, too, once wished to just watch the entire world perish.





    Fourteen years.

    In this short span of time, the 300-year old royal House of Capet collapses.

    In 1314, the last Knight Templar, Jacques de Molay, is executed—but not before leaving behind a curse of his own... All those involved in his death and their descendants were to suffer the same indignity. And in the very next year, Pope Clement V, the man who suppressed the Order of Templars and allowed their last members to perish, dies. To the very end unaware of this, Philip IV The Fair dies right after him in a hunting accident.

    His eldest son, Louis of Navarre, then succeeds him as the new king of France.

    And this surely would have been the apex of anyone’s personal realization. But what he can do with this thought is to chuckle at it—after all, what followed was a curse, an existence destined to live under the shade of a thousand vultures.

    “Louis X, The Headstrong, was the eldest son of Philip IV, The Fair. Married to Margaret, daughter of the duke of Burgundy, with whom he had a daughter, until his wife was charged with infidelity, convicted, and sentenced to life imprisonment... That same year, upon the death of his father, he succeeded as the king of France... The king's short reign was, though, marked with tensions... During his reign, he declared that all serfs and slaves in France were to be freed and also reversed the expulsion of Jews. After his wife died in prison, he married Clémence of Hungary. In the summer of 1316, he reportedly fell ill... And within days, he succumbed.”

    He recites as if this was the life of someone else, but it’s undoubtedly his own... Such was what was supplied to him about a king named Louis X through the Grail’s knowledge, at least. And what a sobering experience that was.

    Did all those troubles that wouldn’t let him sleep at night truly could have been summed up like this? So easily? Such small problems when compared to the bigger picture. Such an unimportant reign, fraught with old grudges and cracks inherited from his predecessors, none which could be fixed by him. He died as useless as when he ascended... Even the Grail was saying so, right now.

    If he was the eager, impressionable youth that had a crown thrust upon his head, then this would be mortifying. He’d be ready to take his sword and prove the world he was so much more.

    He prosecuted corrupt ministers, sacrificed his happiness for the good of his people, abolished serfdom in his domains and allowed all his subjects to be free as they wished, admitted in his kingdom the ones overlooked by the entire world without a single prejudice, and even fought tirelessly for the glory of France in a war... That had to mean something somewhere, isn’t that right...

    Yet now, that didn’t brought him shame whatsoever. It was fine if his existence was the small, honest life of ants. Even when they shine, not every star is supposed to burn as brightly as the sun. Such was the sobering experience of death, he supposed.

    The only regret he could think of was simply—

    Not being there when Margaret died—

    Have she truly betrayed him, if what everything that dreadful affair had to say was the truth? He honestly did not care.

    Louis had become king of Navarre on the death of his mother and was married to Margaret later in the same year, when he was 16 years old and she was about 15. They were young and the whole world was against them, but at least there was comfort in knowing they had each other. And Louis thought this would be forever—that his father’s legacy would be no more one day, his filth would be scrubbed clean, that she would be the brightest queen to the most glorious king France has ever seen.

    Yet in 1314 a scandal rocked the French monarchy to its very core, leaving a question mark even over their daughter’s legitimacy that is, sadly, still there even today. The Tour de Neslé Affair saw Margaret convicted of adultery and imprisoned in the Chateau-Gaillard for the rest of her short life.

    In November of that year, Philip IV died and Louis succeeded to the French throne as Louis X of France. Thanks to the many voices urging him to think of the future, the young king became desperate to produce a male heir to ensure their dynasty, and with the papacy dragging its heels on his divorce it’s possible that someone took matters into their own hands.

    Whatever happened, either a natural occurrence or someone’s interference, it still meant that Margaret died in prison, helpless and alone.

    And it still meant that he averted his eyes and allowed that to happen.





    Louis married Clémence of Hungary in August of 1315, the couple being jointly crowned at the occasion. Thanks to the various conflicts that arose at the onset of such a young king, he received the nickname “the Quarrelsome.”

    That fighting spirit all but abandoned him when he noticed that his own wife was secretly plotting his murder with some of his advisors.

    He was young, but even a young king could understand the whispers that the wind carried. He understood that this was a world in which humans were not more important than an unmoving crown. But contrary to his own best advices, he still thought of Margaret... And maybe, this was all a deserving punishment. Maybe he truly deserved to die—no, maybe he wanted to die and leave France to fend for itself.

    Or maybe he was just weak after all. Still, in the end, a France that took her away maybe wasn’t so worthy to fight for, he thought.

    Then, just like he once did, he averted his eyes from the truth yet again when they invited him for a friendly hunt. He averted his eyes when he drank a poisonous chalice offered by his wife. He averted his eyes and peacefully allowed conflit to ravage his land, a war that would go on and on for a
    Hundred Years' War
    hundred years
    .

    He gave up and even right now did not even had the decency to feel guilty about it.

    —It was only natural, then, that he’d understand the wayward princess. For is a world that takes and takes, until there’s nothing else to be taken, truly worth fighting for?

    “That’s not for you to decide.” The voice declares, and it almost makes Louis smile inward.

    “Still, I don’t understand... Even with all the help of a Grail, by trying to forcefully connect to the sacred tree—she’ll not make it. She’s dying, and I’m sure she knows it... Why won’t she stop?”

    That seemed exceedingly obvious to Louis, so obvious that he heard himself say, “Because she doesn’t want to.”

    “But why...?”

    “She hates being alive. She hates her pain, she hates herself... She wants to destroy herself.”

    He said that about her, but he could be talking about that small, weak self of his memories.

    “But isn’t there anything we can do?”

    “There is.”

    “What?”

    “We could watch her die, make sure she will not go alone—”

    To avert his eyes once more and watch everything burn... Is it truly a weakness to allow such a filthy world to disappear? Is it truly weak to decide that life should not go on? Maybe it wasn’t very heroic of him to say that he understood the villain...

    But that would be his weak self’s answer.

    And if he was here in this world once more, it was because hope would bloom in his heart against his will again and again. Because he was so weak he could not even properly despair.

    Because right here, he heard a man’s dying wishes and thought of how those were a mirror of his own's, once upon a past—

    “—But we’re not doing that... So, Gaston, the only thing we can do then is to save her.”






    Louis of Navarre
    — IN WINDLESS LANDS, THE ADAMANT GALE —


    [ ]

    Class: Stranger
    Other Classes:
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Origin: Historical Fact

    Height: 190 cm | 6'3''
    Weight: 81 kg | 178 lbs

    Natural Enemy: Philip IV
    Attribute: Human
    Traits: Servant, Pseudo-Servant, Male, King, Living Human, Humanoid, Brynhildr’s Beloved, Weak to Enuma Elish


    STRENGTH: C
    AGILITY: D
    ENDURANCE: D+
    MANA: D
    LUCK: D
    NOBLE PHANTASM: D+







    A member of the French royal family, count Gaston of Orleans started his career in the Military School of Segovia, in Spain, at the onset of the second Republic, a few years after his family abdicated during the February Revolution. When Spain declared war on Morocco, he was sent as a subordinate officer and there acquired a certain military prestige that followed him back home when the conflict ended.

    Such prestige—coupled, of course, with the fact that his uncle was a close relative to the Emperor—could be the reason why he received an invitation to attend a party in the Brazilian court and meet the young princess who lived there.

    When they met, the fire did not consume them both. Rather it was as if they were bathed in the light of a gentle, shimmering candlelight. Raised in rigidity, the count was used to a certain show of strength that the princess did not possess—instead, her strength was of an unknown, quiet type, as if she was fire herself. She had shown him trees and flowers, streets and shops, the poor and the rich, and he knew all of those things yet it seemed as if he was seeing them for the first time all over again.

    It had been just very easy to fall in love with the place called Brazil through her eyes, to the point that their marriage seemed almost like a pointless formality.

    As the new prince consort, he was aware his duties were about maintaining the prestige of the Imperial family, however some would say that he’d be against all of that by merely existing. No matter how much he tried to contribute to military matters and social services equally, the court never saw with good eyes the presence of an outsider in their ranks, especially one that had such a close bond with their future empress—and soon, her every decision had been put in question. How much of it was influenced by her husband? How much of the best interests of Brazil an outsider could hold?

    It would be a lie to say that he had noticed that pale flame trembling—and that would be his greatest regret. The princess was so bright that even her darkness shone.

    And so, by her own hands, their empire and legacy crumbled into dust. Downfall came for their family, in the end.

    But before it could ravage their entire future——



    A King With no Kingdom D++

    At the height of his life, Louis of Navarre popularized the design of indoor fields, for he was an avid sports player with little tolerance for the sun.

    As a Servant, such achievement went to be sublimated into a Skill that creates an encased territory that is advantageous to himself. But rather than the forceful imposition of a world texture of his own, what he creates is 「a series of coincidences that will always benefit him for as long as he and a foe will share the same battlefield.」

    The possession of a last ember within his body which allows him to continue in this world despite grave injuries will also ensure that this Skill will also have a steady, progressively aggressive evolution, until perhaps even 「reality」 itself can be written off just to benefit him in many ways.

    —That, of course, is but a theory. He’s yet to test these limitations (or lack, thereof).



    Rising Rose C

    Louis of Navarre lived just enough to see a victory, before drowning in defeat. He had always been plagued with the matter of Flanders, an independent region located in French territory with a strong army protecting its borders. Fighting a fight inherited from his father, he dedicated his life to the mission of taking their land, but all of his military expeditions would always turn out unsuccessful.

    Just like the battle of Mons-en-Pévèle remains his only window to victory—however small and insignificant that turned out to be—the Servant who stands up in this world works in a similar fashion. A 「victory」 that will soon turn into a 「loss.」 A 「life」 that will soon turn into 「dust.」 A curse casted into someone who will always survive 「just enough to see their foe fall down, before following them into oblivion.」

    And if he could sing this Skill any praise, it is precisely that—

    —The promise that he will survive, at least for 「as long as the one blocking his way is also breathing.」

    And so, the last embers of a once great star lies dormant within this body, waiting for the day it will be awaken. Until then, it grants him just enough strength to keep existing in this world no matter the challenge that awaits for him.

    Maybe, this tenacity could explain this Servant's existence right then and there, as before the flames of the end could engulf their future, the dying prince prayed for salvation.

    Not for him—never for him—but for the girl who, once, in the silence of the night, gave him a part of herself and pleaded for him to keep it safe from her own madness. If she knew, deep down, since that day that this would eventually happen, then it was just his fault for being so blind to all the signals. He deserved to perish for this display of ignorance.

    But she—





    And so there they were, in the eye of the storm.

    Time stood still as red consumed the borders of the Singularity, as if it was a sheet of paper suspended over flames, only to be slowly dissolving.

    Chaldea. He could feel their presence—he was so sure they were coming.

    Just as sure as he was at the fact they would surely exterminate the one creating this stain in their world. And that was a future he’d never allow to exist.

    Yet, he could feel the life being sapped out of this human body little by little, his own meek Saint Graph crushed under that abyssal pressure, the only thing holding it together for so long being a headstrong Skill which forbade them from dying as of now.

    If not even a Servant could withstand these flames for too long, what could be said about a half-formed Phantom as himself? He, someone who hasn’t been able to even become a proper Heroic Spirit, something that was not much more than a lingering regret given shape and a name thanks to the dying wishes of a prince?

    Yet, he dared not to think of the end... No, he had no right to ever think like that, not now.

    “We have one chance.” He declared.

    “Yes.” That body also knew this much.

    He touches the cocoon which entombed the wayward princess, the pulsating mass of fire contaminating the world around them, and immediately his body begins to crumble. His mind shatters. There’s power in powerlessness, or so he heard, but still there was just so much it could achieve.

    Above him, the blue—what remains of the blue, mottled as it is with deep red scars that are leeching the color from their surroundings. Above him, the blue falters.



    Vessel of the Coral Branch A

    A Sacred Tree establishes the 「logic」 through which the environment surrounding it functions. And so, for every night when the
    Pau-Brasil
    Andurá
    burns, from within its flames the New World is birthed anew. When Pedro II and the rest of the Imperial family were chased away from their homeland, its last embers flared and died, giving way to the Age of Mankind and sealing the downfall of their domain over Brazil.

    —Such was the wish of the Beastling of Freedom.

    However, perhaps sensing the impending doom she was about to bring to her own land—perhaps, against her better judgment, still feeling love and pity for her subjects deep down—the princess of sin left behind one last seed of hope.

    “There’s not much time... Please, heed my words... From now on, no matter what I say and what I do—I need you to keep this safe.”

    It was said that, birthed from the purest branches of the Divine Trees, the original gods roamed the Free World. However, when the princess left behind one small ember of her empire inside of her husband, just like one day her father had done the same to her, no god was born that day. Instead, from the flames, the small roots of
    Corticeira
    Anhangá
    spread.

    “Do not ever give this back to me, not until you deem me ready. I will trust your assessment—after all, you know me better than anyone.”

    Slowly, within that body grew the little Coral Branch,
    Corticeira
    Anhangá
    . Not a Divine Tree, not a Sacred Tree—an offshoot, something disguised as a true branch, something entirely new that even himself wasn’t sure exactly what it was, what it could be one day. But that was just like prince Gaston, eternally an offshoot of the Imperial family, something disguised as a creature born from Brazil, even though his love for that land was anything but a fake.

    But that did not matter—since when the prince accepted that duty, he made a vow. The world could burn away and their authority could vanish in the wind, but just like the spirit which gave the small branch its name, he would never allow that flame to go extinguished.

    While Gaston of Orleans lived, then no matter how many times someone would blow away the fire, the Empress of Brazil would, too, live.

    After all—

    “All this time, I kept it safe for you.”



    The End of Paradise
    Le Roi Maudit




    He’s tired, he’s spent. There’s lead seeping through his veins—cracks forming along the surface of his core.

    But Louis won’t let it end, not like that. Not again. And so, inside that Noble Phantasm, the world is holding its breath for now.

    The quietness of a dying world surrounds them. It is in this frozen piece of time that all the regrets of the princess of sin are born—for this is his ultimate trump card, that which spirits would call a Noble Phantasm. She brought them there, and now they were to look into her bare heart.

    In his last moments, Louis did not remember every one of his battles. He paid no attention to the crown—or the head who should wear it next. He did not even think of his wife’s name, the woman who slipped poison in his cup. The only thing in his mind as his life flickered was Margaret. Would he see her on the other side? Would she forgive him, when he never forgave himself? Would she be happy if he confessed he did not live a single day after the one in which he heard she perished in her prison?

    Death is infinite quietness from which one can never return. But he rejected even this notion, and so this ability was born. And if each person has one of these moments—the moment they make their whole past and future, that very second they regret for the rest of their lives, the moment that shapes everything they were—if each person has a moment that is both their 「birth」 and their 「death,」 then he would remind them of it, every single time. He would freeze them in time, much like the world around him is frozen.

    With the last embers of a sacred branch resonating with the scarlet void, he accessed her memories. But he didn’t need the memories of prince Gaston to know what it is that the princess regrets the most—he could smell the brim, the sea, he could see his back, too. Emperor Pedro II, with a light so great that it created an equally large shadow. In that darkness, the princess followed him until she was unable to continue, and after that...

    Downfall.

    The birth of a self-made monster was as simple as it was understandable. All the answers could be found there, just like he found his own in that person’s memory.

    Once upon a time, Margaret had gifted him life in a sky of the purest blue, and purest blue will be the memories Louis would have liked to give her in turn. But she’s not here, not anymore—not anywhere. She wasn’t a hero, she had moved on, and even him was but a pale whisper until the wish of a dying man came to his ears.

    And what a lovely wish that was. Not to give her back that which she had given to him, not to save her from herself, or to save their country from her... No, prince Gaston just really wanted to see his princess again.

    Because she was worthy, and he had something of hers that he had to give back, no matter what. He promised he’d give her back one day.

    “You’ll die if you give up on that last ember.” Louis reminds that body.

    But the prince never thought of it like that. Instead, he had always believed she would deserve that branch one day one way or another—she had always been headstrong. And so, he was not afraid of what had to happen for it to return to her. And Louis could understand that feeling, so intensely that it called for him.

    So, he accepts their fates, touching the sleeping monster in a cradle of fire. “He kept it safe for you all this time. But how will he give it back to you, princess, if you die here?”

    He knows how easy it is to be convicted that the world would be better off without you on it.

    He knows how easy it is to come to the conclusion that the pain of living day by day is worse than the pain everyone else will feel when they learn you’ve died.

    It is easy to think one is a waste, a big mistake, or simply not made to live a proper life like everyone else seems to do so easily—maybe, they’re simply fated to be unhappy in this life and in every subsequent life after this.

    —How easy it is to think so nonchalantly, “I need death.”

    “Ah, but princess, 「to need」 is such an interesting sentence.” Or so Louis believes, after looking his wasteful life into the eyes and accepting it for the miracle and the mistake it was. “After all, it implies longing—it implies you’re longing for something. And if we fill this empty longing with something, it can almost look like it’s actually meaningful... It almost makes the pain go away. But maybe, the problem is that you’re still longing, and not that you’re aiming to fill this void in the first place. Maybe, somewhere out there, exists a life you’re longing to live.”

    In the silence of his Noble Phantasm—that thing which stopped time just enough so that he could touch the fire—his spirit finally breaks apart and his thoughts drift away like dust in the wind. He feels the fire pulsating, small and warm like a heartbeat, he feels it touching his fingertips and concedes this isn’t exactly a bad way to go. He sees a girl looking at him with eyes filled with grief and a heart heavy with guilt, and she’s calling his name. He laments that he’s so weak that he’ll just add to her pain now.

    He thinks of a princess who wished to live even if that’s sinful. And he thinks of how that’s the only way anyone can make up for those who are already gone... He knows it too well...





    He takes a moment with his eyes closed against the blinding white of transition, welcoming the impressions of the space he knows is forming inside of his heart—a soft breeze rustling against a silky dress, sun-kissed skin warm against the light.

    He wants to believe—he wants so fiercely to believe this is truly happening.

    In the silence, for a moment he thinks of prince Gaston, of the princess of his dreams—of whatever could’ve happened to them after his demise. He recognizes the void inside of him in which the last embers of a scarlet tree once rested—and then he frowns. There’s nothing in front of him, and yet he can feel her presence.

    Louis never knew which of them first shaped this place behind his eyelids, whether it was his own desire for comfort or an attempt on Margaret’s memory to make him comfortable, but now it feels as if it might have been both. There’s a swell of joyful anticipation in his chest and he finds himself fighting down the parts of it that are too childish, like the hope to be greeted with a pair of open arms.

    “I’m home.” He wants to declare, but...

    He knows this is ultimately just a lie—that Margaret has moved on, somewhere outside of his reach.

    Instead, what calls for him is a fragment of light as bright as the fragment of fire.

    A memory surfaces, something from so long ago it might not even be his own. A memory of someone on the verge of death and a simple wish. A memory that compells parts of him into being, slowly coaxing them to join, to become whole—

    —He knows that light. It is hope, always and always blooming. With a resigned smile, Louis touches it.





    “W-what do you mean, the best part is yet to come? D-do people really expect this sort of thing in these presentations? —Oh goodness, alright... If that is how Romans do in Rome...”



    "Zhang Sanfeng"
    (Scotcheroos)
    “Ah, that caught me by surprise! The plottwist... Is this common? The whole Pretender thing, I mean?
    —O-oh, I mean, I didn’t mean to pry... I just thought that of all the things I thought could’ve called me back, certainly such a gathering wasn’t on my list... Then again—there will be strength found here that will not be found anywhere else. It is as he said, even worms have their pride. I, for one, cannot wait to greet more comrades.”

    Phillip IV
    (BoktaiMoon)
    “Gaston says he’s a walking tumor of vainglory, a stain in France’s history. Those are some strong opinions, and I even try to find words to defend him—he’s my father, I mean—but... Maybe, if this is how the world remembers him, then the prince is right...”

    Louis XIV
    (NittyGritty)
    “Oh... As I’m learning, my successors have quite the lively reputation... Mayhaps I am the real outlier amongst the King Louises.”

    Boi-Bumbá
    (pinetree)
    “They’re beautiful. I don’t speak physically, of course they’re pleasing to the eyes, but I’m taking of something else... 「A place for everyone that manages to bring people together despite every adversity...」 That was Gaston’s dream, and was my dream too—however, and you can call me naïve, I don’t think you need to be a hero to make sure the world can be good.”

    Maria Leopoldina
    (Wyvern)
    “Even before knowing of our little adventure, she had embraced me and her son-in-law as children of her own womb without any hesitation, just like she did with any citizen of her Empire... I must admit it even caught me off-guard. That’s a level of abnegation I’m sure us mere humans would merely dream of achieving one day...”

    Zumbi dos Palmares
    (Morg van Destro)
    “His words might sound harsh to others, but I think they are just overwhelmingly pure—just like his sense of justice. I know he hates me for merely existing, but I cannot even blame him... I can only think that if the world could truly understand what he had to say, it would be a much fairer place.”

    Miguel I
    (Master_Therion)
    “I’m not a hero, but a wisp of endless regret—and the same can be said of him, except he’s a phantom of resentment. It’s rather sad we can’t reach an agreement as fellow fallen kings... It seems he can 「smell something Brazilian in me,」 or something like that...”

    Douma Houshi
    (YoungMeme)
    “Are the Pretenders all like this...? Actually, yes? Oh, that’s—
    —I-I mean, what I tried to say is that this is just a very sad affair overall. Much like a child should be allowed to grow up beyond the shadow of one’s progenitor, this one should still be allowed to be its own being... Even though the future that is set in stone for him is so dreadful.”

    Motojiro Kanji
    (jishara)
    “So, could you please elaborate on the safety protocols in this place... Oh? Nothing much, I was just thinking that young man is...”

    Doreal (Servantverse)
    (Baron Magnus)
    “I have many questions about that Servant and everything he represents, but the most pressing of them is: what exactly is a THOT? Each time I say it out loud, I can hear someone snickering.”

    Tess Durbeyfield
    (FarewellToMrA)
    “As a fellow child of misfortune, the only thing I can say about that little one is that hope is a cruel thing to us, weak beings—it keeps coming back, even as a shadow, even as a dream. I was under the impression this opportunity could be one of respite for heroes, but we all have our own particularities, I suppose.”

    The Reaper System
    (TrueMrUniverse)
    “I shudder at the idea of what that lady could’ve done in the Brazilian singularity against us had we not intervened in time—but as fellow Servants fighting for the same cause, I can now simply appreciate that strength... I mean, purifying viruses... It’s a fascinating concept, isn’t that right?”

    Tutankhamun
    (Verse)
    “Ah, I thought this gathering that celebrated the weak could be a good opportunity for some to have a much-needed taste of acclamation, but to be called against one’s will is just...”

    Francisco de Asís Tárrega Eixea
    (DracoScribe)
    “What a beautiful melody... If I close my eyes, it even feels almost as if that music can talk to me—as if saying that things will be fine. If a sadness confronts me larger than any I may have ever known, casting its shadow over all I do... Then everything I have to do is to remember that life hasn’t forgotten me, it still holds me in its hand and will not let me go.”

    Isabel
    “Ah, the princess? I said many times this wasn’t necessary, but it seems she thinks she has a debt with me and waits for the day this tab will be cleared. The road to where the fire sleeps is long...
    Then I thought I wouldn’t cross any line and asked the princess what she and Gaston did to bring me back to the world, but both seem quite tight-lipped in this regard for some reason. They definitely had something to do with my summoning in this event, I’m sure of it. However, I do feel that ember’s warmth in this body, so she gave the Coral Branch back for us to safekeep... It seems, then, that me and Gaston’s mission is far from over...”

    Pedro II
    (Wyvern)
    “A great light that casts a much greater shadow behind him—I know his type. Gaston and Isabel both have nothing but compliments for mr. Pedro, and I even enjoy hearing about his tales from time to time, but... Am I being unfair in feeling a bit iffy at his memory if it hurts my friends this much? I know it’s not his fault he had to sacrifice himself, but...
    —Oh, I guess family matters are just always so complicated, no matter the time and place.”





    HOLY SHIT I DID IT.
    This sheet is in my stash for like, one year or something already. It was truly now or never.
    Anyway, remember when I teased him as a Shielder in the Guess a Servant thread and then Random created the Stranger class and destroyed all my best laid plans? Good times. That class was simply made for this Servant I had no power over this decision. And maybe this is more of a Le Rois Maudits!Louis than a historical!Louis if anything BUT WHAT CAN I DO those books are fire, they're like GOT before GOT was invented.
    Anyway, I studied the bladeWyvern's and Rey's style of sheeting (lmao) for the longest time for this one, because the way they weave a story and disguise it as a Servant sheet is just *chefs kiss* sublime and this is one of those times, where this is a story first, a sheet second... And I don't know if it's exactly an engaging experience because of it, but DAMN IF I TRIED. This is absolutely smeared all over with my blood and sweat and it was even longer, I hope the text wall isn't too daunting for some.

    Since this is a story and a sheet all in one, some particularities might be lost in translation, but basically the only things he's good at is to be a roach and don't die very easily. It's not that he's invincible, but merely that everything will work to "make sure he at least see his enemy perish before going down too", sort of a suicide-type servant that also saps HP from an enemy, if I had to imagine this as a FGO mechanic. His NP is also all about making people face the worst memory of their lives and reflect on how much that actually sucked and if they can go beyond that, and if they can, cool. If they can't... Welp.
    Certainly could have been explained better? Sure thing it could. But the sheet was already SO BIG. I had to trim words. It is what it is.
    Anyway, you know the drill: don't ever come to Brazil. It's a mess.
    Thank you y'all!

    P.S.: MAN THESE ENTRIES THEY'RE SO GODDAMN PRECIOUS. Just like Draco, I just HAD to get this out of my system, but now that's done, I can prorperly read and hopefuly give a big comment to each entry... I hope... Late stage capitalism had me overwhemingly busy lately...
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    I wake up, log on to see if there are any new sheets to write about later on, and am immediately punched in the face by White's Louis of Navarre sheet. How dare you overwhelm me with such quality before I've even had brunch yet-

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    You can add relationship dialogue and link sheets after posting it, so long as that's all you do.
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    In the year of 1849, a botanist by the name of Joseph Paxton successfully recreated the swampy environment required for a peculiar flower to bloom amidst the harsh winters of England as the subject of a bet.

    This particular flower had been described and brought to them by Tadeas Haenke in 1801 gaining the curiosity of many as to how it could be replicated and whether it was even possible. With two Dukes backrolling the process, it would take nearly five decades for the experiment to bear fruit and for the first of these flowers to grow.

    Presented before the Queen, it received her name.

    Queen Victoria.

    Though these days she is known by other names.

    Victoria amazónica.

    The Great Flower, Atun Sisac.

    The Lilytrotter’s Waterlily.

    It was a beautiful flower, nestled in its leaves as a Queen would be seated upon her throne. Drifting through the warm waters of the Amazon, a humble beauty whose majesty captivates the hearts of travelers and beasts alike.

    That’s who she was now.

    But once upon a time, she went by another name. One that not many these days knew, but a name that she keeps close to her heart as a memento of the life she once led and of the love that eventually claimed it.

    Naiá.

    She dared say it again.

    Naiá.

    The name of the young woman who loved the moon. Who wished to join the moon as a star, but who lost in her desire, drowned and died amidst the waters of the Great River.

    That is who she was.

    And this is the story of how the Queen of Lilies captivated the world.

    “Just don’t expect much of me, okay? I’m a Lover after all, not a Fighter. If you wanted to win a battle, maybe you should have summoned an actual warrior and not a starstruck maiden.”

    Victoria Regia

    “Ah, apologies. That was rude of me. As the eloquent narrator put it, I am Naiá, a servant of the Lover Class. Though you can call me Victoria if you so wish. Either is fine. For both are me.”

    Profile
    Class
    Other Classes
    Allignment
    Lover
    Berserker, MoonCancer, Faker
    Chaotic Good
    Height / Weight
    Region
    Source
    Varies
    The Amazon River Basin
    Tupi Guarani Mythology
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    “The Moon, of course. Weren’t you paying attention? Her light, her beauty. His passion, his strength. Though it may wax and wane, or change faces as easily as a flower sheds petals, it was the moon to whom I dedicated this life of mine.”

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    Drowning, of course. Why do you think I grow these floaties around my flower? There’s no way I’m letting that happen again!”

    Attribute
    Traits
    Earth
    Female, Non-Hominidae, Weak to Enuma Elish, Riding
    Parameters
    STR
    E
    AGI
    E
    END
    D
    MA
    B
    LUK
    D
    NP
    B
    Command Cards
    Background

    “I loved the moon. I died for the moon. And through death was immortalized as the star of the river.”

    It is a short story, with a shorter ending.

    The story of a young woman who loved the moon and saw maidens like herself be carried off to join it in the heavens as stars. She yearned to join them, for the loved the moon more than any other, yet lacked the wisdom to understand what that truly meant.

    To lose her humanity.

    To leave but a light in the sky as proof that she’d lived.

    Yet Naiá would not be denied.

    She was consumed by a ‘madness’ , a love towards that divine that could only ever bring ruin to a human. So strong that while walking one night, she caught a glimpse of the moon, her heart’s desire, reflected in the surface of the river. A perfect mirror of the one thing she loved most.

    Driven into its waters by something she would call Lunacy, the young woman dove into the deep waters where the moon’s image had been reflected, realizing too soon that the currents beneath were too powerful and the waters too deep for her to escape.

    Naiá lost her life, drowned in those waters.

    But her sacrifice hadn’t been for nothing.

    When the moon, Jaci, learnt of her tragedy the spirit was saddened knowing that an innocent life had been lost. That such a beautiful young woman now lay dead at the bottom of the river. And so, through their powers, the Moon created a beautiful flower which would reflect it no matter the time or place.

    A beautiful flower nestled in its center.

    Close to the moon she’d loved in life.

    Though her story would not end there, the Queen of Lilies would one day in the future be taken to the monarch of a far off land as part of a bet between aristocrats. Her beauty captivated even these people across the ocean, and in this way, Naiá was crowned with the monarch’s name.

    Queen Victoria.

    Vitória Régia.

    Ironically it would be that episode that would allow Naiá to manifest as a Heroic Spirit. The Shadow of Queen Victoria. The Shadow of the Moon Deity Jaci. It is in her nature to shadow that which she loves and to reflect that which is beautiful.

    To reflect love.

    Even then it would normally be impossible for her to be summoned as a Heroic Spirit in any capacity, but that changed with the creation of the Variant Class System, which favors weak heroes who fulfill a certain niche in their legends. Almost as if formed by a perfect storm of circumstances, this Lover Servant is without a doubt one of the weakest you will ever find.

    “Wait… so that’s the reason you picked me?! Seriously! Wasn’t this supposed to be for a Science-related Servant contest? Re-Spin! I demand a Re-Spin!”

    Nothing says a servant entry can’t be from more than one theme.

    Just roll with it! Please!

    Personality

    “Fine! Fine! I swear, this is the last time I answer a summon!”

    In many aspects, Naiá is but a simple girl.

    So long as her obsession isn’t present and her passion isn’t stoked you would be hard pressed to believe that such an even tempered and unassuming young woman made it to the Throne in the first place. With simple interests such as gardening, it would be hard to drag her away from her plants and books.

    In other words, the Queen of Lillies is a shut-in.

    There is, however, one method for getting her to participate in anything.

    It has to be at night, with clear skies and the moon present.

    Though her current class is Lover, Naiá was a woman driven to death for her love of the moon. Not all dissimilar from a certain Roman Emperor, her sanity wavers and caves at the sight of the moon, turning her from a simple village maiden into a deadly reflection of the moon.

    Obsession would be an understatement.

    She loves the moon.

    She wishes to join the moon.

    She will die for the moon.

    You must count yourself lucky that in this instance her madness couldn’t be properly manifested, as weak of a servant as she is, the Berserker Class would have been her natural fit if not for the advent of the Lover. Instead she can focus her attention towards love rather than madness.

    “Master, I’ve heard that there is such a thing as a Moon Cancer class.”

    Th-That… you can’t possibly be serious! Sure, you are a reflection of the moon but that doesn’t mean you can just emulate even that kind of Class!

    “Yeah?! Well watch me! I’ll be the first Servant to become a Moon Cancer without that computer program’s help!”


    Well… let’s pray she doesn’t manage to.

    Last time Brazil had a Moon Cancer it didn’t end well, after all…

    Class Skills

    Beloved

    D


    Class Skill of the Lover Class. A skill connected to the feelings of love and obsession which this Servant inspires in someone else. It functions as a passive charm skill on the level of a mental attack. So much as being in the same place as a Lover Servant can incite feelings of affection, obsession, protectiveness and lust.

    At such a middling rank, the Victoria Régia isn’t an existence that inspires obsession and love in the hearts of many. Rather, it stokes their sense of curiosity and wonder. She doesn’t really care, having only loved one thing and one thing only.


    Devotion

    A-


    Class Skill of the Lover Class. A skill which corresponds to the strength of the Servant's feelings towards those they love. With the skill increasing in rank the more people they loved and the more impressive their 'acts of love' towards those people were. As a Servant this means that the greater the Servant's 'love' for their Master is, the higher the boost in all parameters they will receive.

    Naiá only ever loved the moon. She died for this obsession, granting her a massive rank in this skill. Of course, her feelings are only for those who represent the moon in her eyes. So the chance of her seeing you romantically is tied to how much you remind her of the Divine Spirit Jaci.


    Riding

    E+


    A skill usually associated with the Rider Class, it exists in Lover’s saint graph as a result of her Noble Phantasm, although ranked at the absolute lowest rank, it could mark simply a flower’s ability to sit upon its leaves like a throne. It improves once the Noble Phantasm has been active, or if Lover comes upon any beast or vehicle associated with the Moon.

    Yes, that means she can pilot a rocket.

    Don’t ask.

    Personal Skills

    Affections of the Moon

    A


    The favor of the Moon Deity Jaci. At times portrayed as a woman, at others as a man. This beautiful god showed their favor for Naiá in the past by immortalizing her as a beautiful flower. Though this skill could just as easily come from Naiá’s belief that the moon god favored her. It’s hard to tell whether Jaci held affection for the dead maiden or rewarded her sacrifice with this protection.

    Of its practical uses, the ability to absorb magical energy from the light of the moon is perhaps the most useful. She also possesses top notch buoyancy that means she will never sink and drown again.

    Of course, it doesn’t stop her from using her ‘floatie’ whenever she’s close to water.


    Self-Modification (Botany)

    C+


    Having left her ‘human self’ behind, Naiá exists as a manifestation of the moon reflected through the beautiful flower called Queen Victoria. Thus, she possesses a degree of control over how her body will ‘manifest’ going so far as being capable of cultivating new bodies under certain circumstances. It is possible for the servant to create a new being like herself by retreading her legend and finding someone capable of sacrificing themselves to the moon just as she had.

    At this rank, Naiá can modify her body parts into deadly weapons, as well as shift her vital organs in such a way that even wounds that would kill a human are survivable so long as she’s had enough time to prepare ahead of the fight.


    For She is Queen Victoria

    -


    A skill that exists as something linking Naiá to the english Monarch, Queen Victoria. It isn’t a possibility in life as was the case for Hephaestion and Iskandar, rather, receiving the name of Queen Victoria made it possible for the Victoria Régia to be summoned as a stand-in for the English Queen if the correct factors are met. Under those circumstances, Lover would be summoned under the belief that she herself is Victoria and possess both her Skills and Noble Phantasms.

    Being summoned as herself, however, means that Victória Régia is relegated to using only what meager skills she can draw from her own legend and sacrifice without being able to copy those of the Monarch whose name she carries.

    Meaning that this skill is completely useless.

    Noble Phantasm
    Uape Jacana: Great Flower, the Queen of Lilies
    B-Rank (Maximum)

    The essence of the Vitória Régia legend.

    The sacrifice that lead to her metamorphosis into the Amazon’s Queen of Flowers. Or rather, summoning her true self in the form of the giant flower which reflects the moon from the waters.

    In essence, it creates a massive flower that floats aimlessly through the water or through the sky. Its size and rank increase and decrease based on the phase of the moon. Growing to the size of a ‘flying saucer’ during the full moon, while in the New Moon being just the size of a large platform that Naiá can ride around, as if surfing through the wind and the rivers.

    It does, however, possess another effect.

    Though one more circumstantial.

    As the mirror image of the Moon it acts as a reflection of its light, meaning that this Noble Phantasm can be used as a shield against other Noble Phantasms that call upon the power of the Moon in much the same way. Flucticulus Diana, as an example, or the Moonlit Artillery of Minamoto no Tametomo.

    Though as a mere reflection it cannot withstand the genuine power of a Moon God.

    That’s a bit too much for her.

    “The Moon’s light in its entirety is just too much for little ol’ me. Though I wouldn’t mind trying. I heard that a bunch of servants once had to fight against a moon goddess the size of a spaceship once. Kind of a shame that I wasn’t there to help. My lilypad sure might have come handy!”

    Let’s not get ahead of ourselves.

    We both know you’re third rate at best.

    “How rude! Even if its true, you shouldn’t say it to my face like that!”

    Relationships

    “Oh my, such gallant shape. Such a shining bearing. Without a doubt this must be some sort of Moon God from the Far East. I’ll have you know that us brazilians have quite a bit of history shared with your land. In fact, why don’t you try and move in!”

    “Ah, I see you are a man of culture as well. To love the moon to the point of madness… I can quite understand. What? The Moon made you insane? Well I can’t say it wasn’t a bit like that for me. Well, regardless of that, I consider you one of my people!”

    “Ah… Aaaah! The Goddess of the Moon! Oh how shining, how beautiful, how gallant, how handsome! Oh please! Please! Please! Won’t you take me? Please! Please! Strike me down with your light, just this once. Just being like this is torture…!”

    “The Moon’s Lover? He is the Hunter that Pierces the Moon? Wrong! Wrong! Wrong! The Moon struck you down before, didn’t she? Then why did you do that? Why couldn’t you have let her do it again? I can’t understand… why would something do something like that?”

    “Don’t misunderstand me. I’m not here to beg for help or anything. I’m just here to announce my intentions. You can’t gatekeep the MoonCancer class forever. Somehow, someway, I will find a way to grow closer to the moon! You won’t stop me forever!”
    Bond 10
    The Queen of Flowers

    Diving endlessly into the river’s depths.

    You reached for the light of the Moon.

    Yet only found Death.

    In honor of your devotion.

    In honor of your sacrifice.

    In honor of your Life.

    May your reign be long and your beauty known throughout the land.

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    Louis of Navarre THIS. Just this. The combination of the story-telling aspect while weaving in the Noble Phantasm's use and background at the same time is just Chef's kiss. Speaking of the Noble Phantasm, that concept of "making your enemies perish before you" combined with the aspect of making the enemy seeing their worst enemy is just... GAHHH it's amazing. Reading at this sheet, I couldn't help but imagine the whole story and a conversation between him and my Avenger Louis XVI, because the "suicide-type French Monarch" concept reminds me of that sheet. Speaking of which, what would your Louis think of my Louis XVI?

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    Victoria Regia: Glorious flower babby. She really does give off the vibe of a super devoted lover at, like, almost Caligula-levels of devotion to the moon. Her Noble Phantasm is also super interesting, mirroring other Anti-Moon Noble Phantasms that can draw in and nullify (to an extent) Moon-based powers as a symbolism of her love and acceptance of Jaci.

    But at the same time, I fear the result of her becoming a Moon Cancer. Truly, once that happens she'll become an SSR-Level Servant with a super powerful Noble Phantasm (not really-)
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    Louis of Navarre: Another Stranger by WF! Him being tied in with the Isabel Saga is nice and the ending there is sweet.

    Victoria Regia: Glad to see another South American Servant by Wyvern. Her NP and her Queen Victoria skill fit the theme-her relationship lines with the moon-connected servants is a nice touch too.

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    I’m not usually this dark. At least, I don’t think I am. I just wonder how uncomfortable this whole concept will make people.


    This is the story of a young man named Werther.



    Werther was an artist that lived a life without concern. He did not bother himself with the worries nor boorishness of others, instead losing himself in his creations. Translating natural beauty to a canvas or even the words of a poem. Well-read and social, Werther possessed a beautiful ignorance.

    Then he fell in love.

    Unfortunately, this woman was already engaged to another, and though they remained friends, the endless pining for a woman so close yet unobtainable slowly gnawed at him. Together with the further rejection of others in polite society and the wedding being done without his knowledge, his mental health began spiraling downward.

    After a manic defense of a man in a similar situation who attempted to rape his object of desire and being cut out of his friend’s lives completely, Young Werther finally broke. After requesting two pistols from his desired’s husband, he killed himself to end his suffering.

    He was buried in an unmarked grave. No priest or mourners bid him farewell.
    Dear Charlotte… Dear Elisabeth… Why must it begin anew?
    The Unwanted Lover

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    Class: Lover
    Other Classes: Berserker
    True Name: Young Werther
    Alignment: Neutral
    Place of Origin: Germany
    Height: 169 cm.
    Weight: 52 kilo.
    Likes: The arts. Socializing.
    Dislikes:
    Natural Enemy: Lovers. Goethe.


    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: E
    AGI: E
    MGI: B
    LCK: -
    NP: A


    Class Skills:
    Devotion (Hopeless) (A):
    A quintessential “hopeless romantic”, Lover’s variant of Devotion solely activates when he devotes himself to one who can never reciprocate his feelings. He is naturally disposed to them, drawn to ones in happy relationships or simply incapable of being attracted to him.

    As he has no need for any enhancements to his physical abilities, all strength gained from this Skill is funneled into his primary Noble Phantasm.

    Object of Desire (D-EX):
    Bearing a distressingly low rank in this Skill, Lover barely meets the requirements for this Class under normal circumstances. However, he experiences a terrifyingly powerful growth in this Skill upon his demise. When he is slain, even those who barely gave him a glance will be obsessively enthralled with the man, increasing the effectiveness of Die Leiden des jungen Werthers by a stupefying amount.

    Melancholia (A):
    A derivative of Avenger, it is a Skill representing the state of the of the user as one that gathers his own hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate self-hatred/resentment. The rate of mana generation increases when mentally attacked and during self-harm.

    As Lover further falls into hopeless love, so to does his pain grow from their rejection. As he feels more isolation and pain from a world that doesn’t want him, his mana grows.

    Personal Skills:
    Cultural Adaptation (B):
    The sheer reach and popularity of Lover’s story allowed it to easily move across borders and cultural barriers, becoming a phenomenon not solely locked in Germany. As a result, Lover has gained a Skill that allows him to replicate that once more in his summons.

    Whenever his story was adapted, Lover was always modified to be from the region of the adapters. Whether it was his background, race, gender, or occupation, they would lightly modify his identity to appeal and relate to the greatest number of people while keeping the core intact. So it is that his appearance, speech, and even small aspects of his personality will change depending on the region in which he is summoned, making him perfect to appeal to the broadest audience possible.

    Werther Fever (A):
    The name given to the before then unseen level of acclaim and popularity that appeared in the wake of the publication of Lover’s story. Such rampant love and merchandising that resulted from this were something more akin to the fandoms of today, causing some to claim Werther Fever as the roots of modern fandoms.

    A Skill that only takes effect after his death, Werther Fever affects anyone who has interacted with Lover in some way. They feel inexplicably touched by Lover when he dies, like he was someone they’d known all their lives instead of someone they avoided on the street. Paired with Object of Desire’s boost, and they become obsessed with the man.

    Similar to the Werther Fever of old, they begin idolizing him, wishing to dress as he did and creating merchandise to further spread the love they have. Underneath it all, this obsession with him only further draws them into Die Leiden des jungen Werthers, eventually leading them to follow in his footsteps

    Sturm und Drang (C):
    Translating to Storm and Stress, Sturm und Drang was a period in German art where extreme emotion in response to rationalism imposed by the Enlightenment. It is given to those from said period, its rank and effects differing between owners by how greatly they partook in or impacted it.

    While Werther Fever affects the people around Lover after his death, Sturm und Drang affects the world before it. As Melancholia takes effect, the mana it generates feeds into this Skill, the atmosphere and attitudes of others becoming dourer and more reserved. As unseasonably gray weather passes overhead and humanity withdraws itself from socializing near Lover, it only feeds Melancholia further, creating a loop that leads to a single conclusion.

    Battle Continuation (E):
    Upon attempting suicide, Lover shot himself with a pistol in the head. Unfortunately, it did not kill him, leaving him to lie in extreme pain for 12 hours as he slowly bled out. In a strange twist, this has given him a low rank of Battle Continuation, making him able to survive fatal blows, but able to do little in response but die slower than normal.

    Noble Phantasms
    Die Leiden des jungen Werthers: The Werther Effect (B)
    Anti-Culture

    The Sorrows of Young Werther was a novel created by Johann Wolfgang Goethe in response to the suicide of a classmate. Seeing himself in the man, Goethe channeled his own sorrow and the man’s tragedy into the novel, unknowingly creating a cultural phenomenon.

    This Noble Phantasm is the culmination of Lover’s existence. It is the only outcome available to him, born of his own oblivious and obsessive nature completely alienating him from those he wishes to connect to. It is his death sublimated as a most severe mental attack, whether by another’s hands or his own.

    As his life ends, a mental maelstrom is unleashed through Werther Fever as his Desire suddenly skyrockets in those affected by it. As Werther Fever grows and ingrains itself deeper in others, a seed is planted in the fertile soil of their minds.

    Werther is like me.

    Seeing themselves in Lover, for better and worse, eventually leads them to the same conclusion, just as it did for many during his time. Though the Werther Effect may have been more rumor than fact before, Die Leiden des jungen Werthers turns it into certainty.

    Lore

    This is the story of a young man named Jerusalem.

    Jerusalem was introverted man whose brooding nature and lower background clashed with the higher-classed men that attended his college. One such man was named Goethe, who was so much like him yet so different to be fundamentally disposed to loathing. These two men, who circumstances often brought into contact, were destined to be no more than bitter acquaintances.

    Yet, they shared one unifying trait: they loved those that they could not have.

    While Goethe found his love had been courted over a decade by a new close friend named Kestner, Jerusalem pined for one who already was engaged to another. Goethe, as time waned, continued his friendship despite his clear and unsubtle infatuation with the woman, leading a strained relationship where he was not informed of their wedding, though they remained timid friends. Opposingly, Jerusalem found himself with a more dire result.

    Just as obvious with his feelings, his unobtainable love had purposely avoided him despite his persistence. Eventually, he forced a confession on her, which made her take understandably firm action. At her request, her husband forbade Jerusalem from approaching his fiancé or visiting their home.

    The next day, Jerusalem sorted out his affairs and requested two pistols from none other than Kestner as protection for a trip. Kestner obliged and would come to regret that choice as Jerusalem used one pistol to shoot himself in the head. Unfortunately, he did not die, and writhed for 12 hours before finally succumbing to his wounds. His body was immediately buried. No priest attended him. No mourners marked his passing.

    Though none openly acknowledged the death, as was the custom, Goethe could not simply dismiss it. Even having no close relation to the man, Goethe could not help but see his own struggles in one so similar. This man, who was a stranger in many ways during his life, had become a brother to him in death.

    So it was that Goethe decided that, so none would mark his grave, nor would any priest attend him, Goethe would. Taking his own sorrow and that of the man who had become his brother, he would mark his passing.

    Here lies Karl Wihelm Jerusalem.
    Here lies Werther.




    Personality

    Though it is without a doubt Werther that has been summoned, Jerusalem’s unavoidable entanglement with Werther has caused them to become entwined into the “Heroic Spirit Werther”. Were it solely the Werther from the novels summoned, his oblivious nature would leave him ignorant to his fate, believing this may be his chance to find love. However, Jerusalem gives him unwanted clarity on his situation, causing the two sides to be constantly at odds within. Yet, these halves are truly one. Though distinction can be made, they are undeniably the same person in every sense, and the division listed here is merely to help explain his behavior.

    While the half that is Werther drives them forward, it is Jerusalem that drags them down faster than in their story. Even knowing it will always fail, Werther cannot help himself falling in love, stuck in a cycle created not by him, but his fans and Goethe himself. In this, he ignores the cries of Jerusalem, as facing that reality is more heartbreaking than being rejected in love. He simply plows forward, and Jerusalem is little more than a passenger in his own body, feeling the same things while ever privy to the result.

    His love for the arts and poetry will be readily shared, his demeanor attempting to make connections and form friendships even as it can come off as desperate. While Werther was an outgoing socialite, Jerusalem was a moody introvert, and they cause the Heroic Spirit to reflect this clash in that he wants to be left alone, yet surrounded by people as his does so. A hand reaching out while slapping away ones that are offered. This paradoxical behavior only makes it easier for him to fall into depression.

    As Werther draws nearer to that sole conclusion, all Jerusalem can do is dread it. Even the ending will not bring them peace, as they will simply return endlessly so long as someone summons them. As Werther loves others and wishes to connect, Jerusalem will only curse them. Jerusalem can only hate those who could not let him go and trap him to this fate.

    No man does he curse greater than Goethe, the man who, just like the fans of his book, saw what they wanted and imposed their stories on him. Goethe saw Werther as a brother, claiming that modifying his story is the same as defiling Werther’s grave. Yet, Jerusalem only sees the irony in that, as Goethe defiled his grave first.

    So it is that, while Werther is the most prominent personality, should the time come that they ever win a Grail War, Jerusalem will force himself forward with all his might and make a single wish. One to end his suffering just as he intended to before.

    „Ich wünschte, Goethe hätte nie Die Leiden des jungen Werthers geschrieben! Bitte lass mich ruhen!“


    Relationships
    Goethe: My dearest brother. The one man who truly knows me. I despise him with every fiber of my being.

    Beatrice: She's... just like me...

    Tess Durbeyfield: What a child of tragedy! Something must be done at once! Not that I can do anything. I can't even save myself.

    Caroline Ponsonby: Ah! What utter devotion to love! Truly, we are kindred spirits! Both mad and disgusted with ourselves. Our cycles never end.



    Craft Essence


    Werther’s Grave

    Guildsman bore the body.

    No priest attended him.

    A headstone marked his grave.

    No words adorned its face.

    Mourners flocked to pay respects.

    None found him.

    They came together in their grief.

    Their tears were not for him.

    Their tears were for themselves.

    Werther was not a person, but them,

    And more than anything, they didn’t want it to end like this.

    They couldn’t help it.

    So they took out their shovels

    and started digging.


    Die Freuden des jungen Werthers: Defiling Werther’s Grave (A)
    Paradox

    The love for Werther was too great for death. As they mourned for him, they could not help but dream. Dream of another way. Dream of a better ending for the one they so loved. So fervent was their dream that it was made real. In an act described by Goethe as no less than purposefully defecating on Werther’s grave, Werther was given a new ending by his fans. One where he survived, married his love, and reintegrated into the society that drove him to suicide in the first place.

    In yet another trend viewers of modern fandoms have observed, no one is ever truly dead.

    Activating on his death, Die Freuden des jungen Werthers does not rewrite his death directly, as that would mean Die Leiden des jungen Werthers never occurred. Instead, it uses those affected by Leiden to create a paradox within Alaya’s memory. While Lover died, their desire for him to have survived create the memory, becoming at odds with reality. Eventually, the death unfolds as the people desire, with Lover miraculously surviving with little harm.

    This is not actually a Noble Phantasm of Lover’s but rather the Noble Phantasm of his fans. Born of their desire for him to survive and acquire a happy ending. Sadly, this is nothing but a curse for a man that is destined to unerringly fail, trapping him in an ever-downward spiral. It is Freuden doomed to perpetually become Leiden.

    To prevent this, one must simply take him far away from any who have affected by Werther Fever or move him to a plane where none are, as they are the ones to call for his return. One could also tip the scales of the paradox in the opposite direction, forcing Alaya to recognize the true events over the fantasy, such as Gae Bolg’s rewriting of causality creating a stronger paradox the fantasy cannot overwrite.



    Creator Notes

    You know how many songs have the title "The Sorrows of Young Werther"? More than 3, which is more than I was expecting.

    I put Werther on my list a couple year ago when I found a very informative video about it. Guy deserves some love, because he did a great job on covering not only it, but the culture surrounding it. He actually back to my attention a month before the contest when I was looking through videos and saw that one. Had him on my mind when considering candidates, so it just came to be.

    Werther is actually a lot more Goethe than Jerusalem, yet it is undeniable that Jerusalem is the core of Werther's existence. With that in mind, I hardly gave a second thought when I started taking things in a negative direction. It just flowed out of me, as most of my favorite Servants do, and now we're here. The mere fact that he has no Luck, meaning no ability to defy fate, should be explanation enough. Don't know what else to say except "Remember when I made the straightforward and generally optimistic Servants?"

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    Mm, I'm starting to notice a theme in this contest. Not that I could free myself from that same theme with my entry.

    Also thanks for reminding me that Melancholia exists. Yes, this will do nicely...

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    I think I went a little overboard


    As the amphitheater's screen flickered every now and then, the face shifted and morphed. Soon, it took the odd form of a frail girl, electronics embedded in 'her' skull as 'she' sifted through what could only be called file folders while the participants began to enter the open venue one by one.

    "Okay, this took a bit of time to sort through, but we can finally start. Still, why the hell did you make me the host instead of selecting someone else? Like, I dunno, Dumas or Koivunen?!" The 'girl', in the loosest of the term, grouched, glaring through the screen at the false martial artist standing nonchalantly at the base of the amphitheater's stairs.



    "Is it not obvious? It's because you're not human. Our Anti-Human Order Skill still makes us rankle at the sight of you, but it's far more bearable than to consider that uncontrollable addict." the parasites replied, only giving the digital being a cursory side look. ""...And also, you are asking us to consider the man who claims that he made love to Cleopatra AND Yang Guifei in his life. Forget incompatibility, that man is going to spew blatant falsehoods the entire time he's here. Absolutely not."

    "...You sure it's not because you wanted to be able to gather more rumors without anyone breathing down your neck? Necks? Whatever constitues as a neck for you three?"

    "We can still spam 4chan links at you sooner or later, Creeper."

    "That doesn't answer my-"

    "Just....just get started already." The 'girl', no, the Creeper Virus, weakest Caster in the Throne, did soemthing akin to a pout before 'her' face smoothed out (which was to say, it visibly flickered for a second into a neutral expression) as 'she' straightened the folders.

    "Alright, so, since we're doing the introductions like last contest...ahem. Welcome, one and all, to this month's contest, celebrating the feats and fame of the weak. Obscurity, lack of legend, lackluster nature, it matters not. What matters is that you have also ascended. You have also reached the Throne of Heroes through the achievements you've accumulated in your life. No matter how much you are looked down on, or how much more fitting of Servants others may be, never forget. You are still remembered. You are still heroes in the eyes of the people."

    The virus smiled, a kind and gentle smile that wouldn't look out of place on a real human being.

    "Everyone deserves their turn in the spotlight. Let this month be yours."




    "First up, we have....Ashiya Douman? No, that can't be...hm. That file seems far too new to have been placed in here. It's as if it's...been added in from a future iteration. That can't be possible. Were you attempting to nullify Novikov's self-consistency principle by using this as a disguise?"



    As the virus spoke, shuffling through the file folder already, the aforementioned exorcist froze up from the sudden analysis, disbelief at the near-immediate, almost machine-like precision of Creeper's analysis set his disguise tottering at the edge with ease.

    "Surely, you must have seen incorrectly?" Douman attempted to reason as he stepped forwards, his exterior disguise already shuddering and beginning to fade out, "I made sure to enter that file at the current time, after all..."

    "....Ah. I see. Let's see here...Analyzing for inconsistencies. Inconsistency found. Keyword: Retroactive. Recreating retro-cognition imitation. Reverting document to original form. Mirroring imposed effects onto current participant. Process complete. That ought to fix...it..."



    As Creeper worked, reverting the file in her hand to a more consistent period, the disguise that 'Ashiya Douman' had donned reverted to follow suit as well, the appearance of the famed exorcist peeling away to reveal...

    A child. A very adorable, now teary-eyed and pouting child, at well. He glared at (read: pouted at) Creeper sulkily, wiping at his face to hide how he felt about being caught so quickly. "You've unra...unraveled my disguise too quickly, worm! I will have my ven...veg....uh, vegetable, for this!...uuumm...and you're really mean!"

    The child stormed off to the steps where Sanshi was watching in confusion, plopping down and pouting immensely while he took out some wagashi and began nibbling at them, unable to save face now that his childlike appearance had been revealed.

    It didn't help that with the disappearance of his Ashiya Douman disguise, the now-revealed Pretender wasn't really sure how to properly word what 'Limbo' would have said.

    "Uuuuuum....alright. A-Anyways. Douma Houshi, class Pretender, former 'class' Caster, is an abnormal summoning of the titular Ashiya Douman, fated rivel of Abe no Seimei. Being the child self of Douman, technically making him Ashiya Douman Lily, Houshi has instead managed to latch on to the Saint Graph of his adult self and siphon the fame and identity of Douman for himself, granting him the temporary identity and abilities of his adult self. Because Douma Houshi is barely regarded in the texts as significant and every single noteworthy feat he's done is ever written under Douman's name, there is nothing in the name of Douma Houshi that can explain his past. Seriously, there's literally nothing I could find for Houshi in the texts. It's like he's a blank piece of paper."

    "That just means I have more room to work with! My future self is really dumb, anyways. Always going 'SEIMEI SEIMEI' even after death. But...I won't look away. I'll keep watching that pathetic 'me', so I know what to avoid doing. I'll definitely become the number one exorcist in Japan like that!" The child nodded with an 'mmhm, mmhm' noise, smiling smugly at that. It seemed that he really was a child, swapping from sulking anger to smug confidence on a whim.

    If only he knew what fate awaited him....no. He was still a kid, Creeper decided. It would be nicer to let him dream for just a little longer.




    "Next on the list, we have Motojiro Kaiji. A famed Japanese author taken too soon by illness, Kaiji was infected with pulmonary tuberculosis when he was only 9, studying in Kyoto along who would later on become the father of Japanese film criticism, Tadashi Iijima. Graduating from junior college four years later, he entered Tokyo Imperial University, studying in the art of English literature for his short-lived dream of published a literary magazine. The magazine, called Aozora, or Blue Sky, lived for only three years but is still considered to be the stuff of masterpieces in the modern era.

    "In 1925, his first and most famous short story, Lemon, was published in Aozora's first issue, and captivated the whole of the country with it's self-observant properties and descriptive power which rocked the psyches of their readers. Kaiji himself would write over twenty more short stories, each still lauded for their self-observations and emphasis on depicting the world around the protagonists to such a degree that readers claimed that they felt as if they were in the story itself. Aozora went on to run for only two more years before shutting down in 1927, and with it's closure Kaiji left the mainland to recuperate in the Izu Peninsula, which he metYasunari Kawabata, a future Nobel Prize winner for his contributions to Literature.

    "Such a friendship would be doomed to stay short not because of disagreements or the like, but because Kaiji's life was rapidly burning away. Having sensed his impeding death, Kaiji bid Kawabata farewell and returned to Osaka, wanting to die in his hometown rather than away from it. When his friends heard, however, they all gathered at his home, planning to spend Kaiji's last years with him and encouraging him to publish his own book before he died, a way to leave a gift for the world to enjoy. After three years of hard work, Kaiji's first and only book, titled 'Lemon' and in truth a collection of his short stories, was published in 1931. He went on to write one more novella, titled 'The Easygoing Patient' and a commission from a commercial magazine with fans of his work among the staff, before passing away on March 24th, 1932, of his illness. It's said that he died among his friends and fellow colleagues, and his death was mourned as the premature passing of a genius."


    The amphitheater was in a shocked stupor, Creeper clearing 'her' throat nervously while setting the files aside. As if compelled by the action, everyone within turned to look at the author in question, who seemed just as surprised at the sudden info dump as the others.



    "I'm...honored that you looked so deeply into my life, but I didn't do much to deserve such praise. This damned illness, it's robbed me of every single possible future I had the moment I came in contact with it. I...only wrote as a way to communicate. A way to show tuberculosis to those who didn't know of it's effects and what it stole of people. To speak about a third-rate author like me so passionately is..."

    "Nonsense! Even if your life was short and your stories were few, their prose and characterization were marvelously done! The sheer fact that you've managed to ascend into the Throne with only a handful of short stories speaks of your skill with the pen!"

    "Alright, now I know that you're trying to butter me up here."

    "...Is it working? For what it's worth, I really did like reading your short stories when I had time. 'Aesculus' was my favorite."

    "Wait, how'd you manage to-"

    "Ahem. Can we continue this later?"

    "Fine, fine. I guess I can grill her about her choice in literary works later. Might as well get something to eat." Motojiro sighed, walking over to a buffet table laden with foodstuffs and drinks that had been prepared beforehand that the author totally didn't just add because he forgot beforehand, shush. Sitting down at the table next to a Houshi who was currently gobbling sweets down, he picked up an amber fruit slice and began munching on it. "Hm. Candied lemon slices. Nice."




    "Third on the list is Maurice Doreal. Or, uh, a variant version of Maurice Doreal, I think. In life, Maurice Doreal was....a complete and utter hack. He was a two-bit schmuck with occultic theories and pseudo-scientific beliefs so far out there that even other occultists and conspiracy theorists didn't believe what the guy said. Seriously, how bonkers do you have to look that the people who think the government is fully composed of lizard people think you're nuts?"



    "Ouch. Shoot a guy in the heart, why don't you...?"

    "I'm serious! You brought in the Inner Earth Theory and serpent snake people and...fucking, aliens overthrowing Russia and inventing Communism and the Antichrist, god, thinking about how much crap went into your beliefs is making my processors smoke-

    "Creeper. Enough. Move on already."

    "Alright, alright...So, like I mentioned, in Proper Human History, Maurice Doreal was a seen as a nutty wackjob who's sole theorem of Thoth the Atlantean was the only viable viewpoint accepted by fellow like-minded occultists. In my records of PHH Doreal, he went on to found a cult called the Brotherhood of the White Temple, and he and he followers secluded themselves in the mountainous valleys near Sedalia, Colorado out od fear of nuclear war in 1953, where they stayed until Doreal's death in 1963. But....there are historical inconsistencies here. Signs of magecraft and unnatural curses throughout expeditions spearheaded by Doreal that point to the impossible existence of a very real Existence Outside the Domain of Man attempting to manifest back into the World..."

    "Little lady, I know what you're thinking. Don't. I know I can't stop you from digging deeper here, but...some secrets were buried for a reason. There are things bigger than humanity here, that even I can't deal with. No bounty in the universe will convince me to help you with this."

    "...From one digital existence to the next, don't act on it. Don't give PHH me a reason again, Creeper. Please."

    "...I'm still gonna look into it later on. I won't act on what I find, but I'm going to check." The AI sighed, but relented, nodding as the virus proceeded to continue. "Now, what I described was the life of Maurice Doreal from Proper Human History. However, this man is not the same Maurice Doreal.

    "In another timeline, the Servantverse began. Humanity took to the stars and began assimilating their very being into the Saint Graphs and Spirit Origins of heroes past and present. One of the only few people to not become a being with a Saint Graph was, surprisingly enough, Doreal himself. As humanity leaped and bounded towards the future and left the World in droves, him in tow, he attempted to scrounge by by doing odd jobs around the univverse, gathering chump change at first but soon being unable to provide for himself and forced to live in his ship.

    "At some point in the future, Doreal, low on funds and forced to turn to secondhand goods to survive, had been browsing a flea market to stock up on clothes when a straange knight rushed by him, acciidentally dropping a thumb drive as he was accosted by cloaked and masked figures. Records have redacted just who the cloaked figures were, and most of the footage was wiped....but I managed to find something based on rumors that managed to leak through the tenuous connection from your summoning.


    "Atlantis Galaxy, Shasta System's secret police force, code name 'White Temple'. They were thought to be boogeymen among the inhabitants of the Shasta System, who would hunt down anyone indiscriminately if they dared threaten the current state of the galaxy. It was because of them that the system itself was a stagnant one, as progression was considered taboo....dammit, now I'm turning into a conspiracy theorist! I need to watch a few dozen nature documentaries later, get this sort of nonsense out of my databanks..."

    "Wait, you managed to find out who those cloaked bastards were-"

    "Later. I'll tell you later." Creeper immediately shot down, "Ahem. Having pocketed the thumb drive and escaped the scene in secrecy, this Doreal would later plug in the thumb drive to see what was on it, hoping to see if the drive contained blueprints for a device he could replicate and sell off to fund his living conditions. Instead, his ship got hijacked by THOTH, a benevolent AI seeking to escape the grasps of her former owners and taking Doreal along for the ride, with White Temple hot in pursuit. With no other way to shake off his newfound status as an intergalactic outlaw and criminal, Doreal agreed, joining forces with THOTH and becoming a bounty hunter on the move. A space cowboy, if you would. And...that's it. That's all the authorities have managed to scrounge up on you so far."

    "I'm gonna ignore the fact that you infiltrated an intergalactic police force's databanks and instead ask, you managed to find out the existence of a fucking secret police force keeping an entire galaxy in stagnation-"

    "Later. I'm already pissed off at slowly falling into the conspiracy theory rabbit hole here. Please don't give me more reasons to hack your space computer for your browser history. Which, yes, I can do. Don't test me."

    "Urk. F-Fine, but this isn't over."

    Doreal stormed off, sitting near the table and immediately pulling out a flask full of liquor to chug, ruminating on the newfound information even he hadn't known about his pursuers. But now...now he had something to work with. That put a smile on his face.




    "Fourth on the list is Tess Durbeyfield, protagonist of 'Tess of the d'Urbervilles: A Pure Woman'. This story is...I don't know how to feel about such a story, because holy shit her life sucked ass. A-Ahem. The novel chronicles the life and death of Assassin, and is the story of a young country girl trapped within a never-ending maelstrom of tragedy and misfortune. Personally, I think she never did anything to deserve a fate as cruel as this, and you cannot tell me otherwise."



    "Ahh...there's no need to sugarcoat my past. As someone who is surely one of the worst sinners in history, I have long since accepted-"

    "NOPE!"

    "H-Huh? I-I assure you, I-"

    "NUH UH!"

    "Please, let me finish-"

    "If it's about how you deserve what happened to you, I don't want to hear it!" Creeper huffed, pouting as 'she' turned away slightly, "You may not believe what I say, but I will stand by my words. What happened to you was the undeserving tragedy of how a kind woman was taken advantage of by the world around her! You were never in the wrong, nor was your tragic life deserved for even a single second! Trust my words or do not, but this is one thing I won't budge on."

    "..." Tess' expression was conflicted. On one hand, she felt as if Creeper were wrong, that for some unseen taboo she must have breached in a previous life, she was cursed with untold misfortune in life. On the other, to agree with Creeper to placate it would run counter to he ringrained beliefs of self-deserved punishment. In the end, she only remained silent, unwilling to say a thing.

    "Now, moving on...Tess Durbeyfield, as previously mentioned, is the protagonist of 'Tess of the D'Urbervilles' and was nothing more than an ordinary girl surrounded an incredibly irregular cavalcade of tragedy from the moment she was born up until her death. Born in Marlott, Wessex to an alcoholic father and a neglectful and superstitious mother, Tess' life was fraught with difficulty the moment she began to walk. With a pair of parents that could barelyfind their way out of a paper bag without asking God for directions, it fell to Tess to tend to her younger siblings in their stead, aided by her own older siblings along the way. Falling into the relative ennui of her dysfunctional family's life, Tess attended school, looked after her family and simply lived an ordinary life.

    "However, when Tess was only sixteen, her father, Jackoff, was told by the local pastor that 'Durbeyfield' was in truth a corruption of the name 'd'Urberville', a local family of knights said to be traced all the way back to service under William the Conqueror. Riding on the high of his own ego boost, Jackoff proceeded to get blackout drunk, rendering himself unable to work his usual job of transporting beehives during the night and leaving the job to his very sleep-deprived daughter. Needless to say, because Tess was unable to get enough rest, she fell asleep at the reins and crashed the cart transporting the beehives, consequently killing the family's only horse as well and leaving no way for her family to earn money for a living."


    "Were it not for my falling asleep, I wouldn't have ended that horse's life, and my family would still have a way to provide for themselves..."

    "And if your father knew that he had a job in a few hours and had a pair of braincells to rub together he would have realized that maybe trying to guzzle enough ale to turn his liver into an alcohol pouch might have been a stupid idea." Creeper huffed, "Regardless, with no other way to earn money, Tess was sent to the d'Urbervilles by her mother in hopes of claiming kin to gather some funds for the family. Unfortunately, the d'Urbervilles that the Durbeyfields thought were related to them were in fact nothing more than a family of frauds, spurred by the decision of the late husband Stoke d'Urberville to steal the name in order to distinguish themselves. Despite that, they had managed to gather a large enough estate that Tess was able to obtain a job at the d'Urberville land as their poultry caretaker, and caught the eye of Alec d'Urberville...who proceeded to force himself on her. Because that's how morals were back then.

    "Traumatized by the event and fleeing the estate, Tess quickly fled home and soon gave birth to a boy. Without a job yet again, Tess took to working in the fields to provide for her family, because apparently her father was too busy paralyzing his liver with cheap liquor to work. In time, however, Tess was haunted by rumors following her of her child borne out of wedlock, and said child grew incredibly ill, to the point of near death. Desperate to save her child's soul at the very least, Tess attempted to bring her child to the parson to baptize him. And then Jackoff decided 'Wait a minute, I haven't traumatized my daughter today yet' and proceeded to lock her inside the house, leaving Tess to recruit her siblings to perform an impromptu baptism and naming her child 'Sorrow' mere mintues before he passed.

    "A few years later, with her family growing more and more destitute, Tess travelled to another town to work as a milkmaid to provide for her family, where she met Angel Clare, a former reverend in trianing turned farmer after he grew disillusioned with the faith. Despite her initial attempts, she and Angel grow close enough that Angel eventually returned to his fmaily, begging his father to wed him and Tess in marriage out of his love for her. Feeling obligated to secure some form of future for her fmaily, Tess agreed. They got married on a sunny day during summer, and spent their wedding night in an old d'Urberville mansionaway from everyone's eyes.

    "With midnight drawing near, Angel confessed to Tess, speaking of a brief affair he had with an older woman in the past and how he felt as though he was still guilty over giving in to his temptations. Tess responded by comforting him and accepting his past sins, whatever they may be, before confessing of her own past. How she had been molested and forced to bear a child at the hands of her rapist while simply trying to provide for her family, and how she simply wanted her family to live a decent life. Angel responded by slut-shaming her, telling her that wanting some modicum of stability instead of throwing herself headfirst into the chaotic flow of life is somehow a character flaw, and abandoned her in the dead of night.

    "With dwindling funds yet again and having to return to working the fields for her family, Tess ends up meeting Alec again, who has apparently repented, turned to God and become a minister since his mother had passed away. Showing concern and worry for Tess’s financial and mental condition, particularly after hearing of Sorrow's demise, Alec proposed that they marry so he could support her family and repent for his actions, only for Tess to turn him away, telling him that she had already married and just because he wished for forgiveness, did not mean that she wanted to forgive him. A while later, however, Liza-Lu, Tess' oldest sister, visited Tess speaking of her parents having fallen ill, though it's never mentioned what that illness is. Rushing home to care for her frankly undeserving parents, Tess juggled work and her parents' health as best she could, all the while constantly fending an increasingly obsessive Alec off....I dunno about you, but something tells me the guy didn't really 'repent'. Either way, it wasn't enough. Her father soon passed from his illness, and with no one else to work at the time, the Durbeyfields were evicted from their home and left penniless.

    "At the same time, Angel’s farm in Brazil gradually fell apartas guilt and remorse for how he treated Tess wracked his mind, leaving him unable to focus on his work. When the farm finally shut down, Angel returned to England to seek out Tess and promising himself to do right by her one more time. Searching far and wide, Angel eventually finds Tess in Sandbourne, Dorset… who has married Alec in desperation after he wore her down and convinced her Angel wouldn’t return, promising that he would shelter and provide for the Durbeyfields in exchange.

    "With no other way to provide for her family, Tess eventually tells Angel that he has found her too late for it to matter, and returns to confront Alec over his actions while Angel reluctantly leaves the boarding house. Bitter and ridden with grief at Alec for lying and mistreating her over the years and costing her a second chance at happiness with Angel, Tess and Alec argue with each other over his manipulations. The argument itself is not known to the public. Some say Alec implied that he would toss her aside once he was broed with her. Others say he mocked both her and Angel for foolishly pushing each other away.

    "In the end, Tess snaps and stabs Alex to death, , leaving him for dead as his blood stains the ceiling below....Personally, the bastard deserved it after all the crap he pulled. Fleeing the scene and following Angel, Tess explained what he had done to Alec. This time, instead of lashing out at Tess again, Angel swore to protect Tess while the authorities pursued her. Taking shelter in an empty house, the two spent five days in seclusion, both enjoying what could have been their chance at a happy life before the authorities tracked them down, forcing them to flee into the wilderness before hunkering down at Stonehenge.

    "On their last night together, Tess convinced Angel to promise to marry Liza-Lu after she’s gone, knowing that sooner or later, the police would catch up and she didn't want Angel to be branded with the mark of an accomplice, and the two fall asleep inside the structure. When morning came, Angel, fresh out of his slumber, tries to find a way out for Tess, only to see the two of them surrounded by the authorities, who had tracked them down overnight. When Tess woke up and saw the lawmen, she simply walked up to the authorities, and simply told them 'I am ready'.

    "She was hung at 8 A.M. in the town of Winchester. She never deserved it."


    Despite the frankly obscene info dumping here, Tess was silent, only taking the story in stride as, one by one, everyone else stared in shock and pity at her. Nobody said a thing. Nobody could say a thing in the face of such a tale. Eventually, Doreal, of all people, stood and gave her a hesitant pat on the shoulder, passing a bottle full of gin to her with a questioning look.

    ...The contents were promptly drained by Tess within the span of five seconds. She said nothing, only leaving to sit near the back of the amphitheater, musing on her previous life as she nibbled on food she'd snagged on the way there. Nobody could bring it within themselves ask ask her if she was alright.

    Everyone involved already knew the answer to that question.




    "Now, next on the list is-"



    "Beginning purge of Creeper."

    "WAGH!" Unexpectedly, the host of the contest ducks, a scythe constructed of glimmering red code and binary digits narrowly missing it's scalp as the virus glared at the participant, "You. What are you doing here?"

    "Words are unneeded. Prepare to die, virus." The fellow digital being swung it's scythe in an almost masterful style, corralling Creeper towards the edge of the screen before raising his scythe high, intending to cleave the virus in half-

    "ENOUGH!" It was weak. A meek imitation of Divinity that in itself didn't exist. Nonetheless, it breached the mundane properties of the computer and seeped deep into the cyberworld, touching upon the scythe-wielding humanoid, freezing it in place and allowing Creeper to move out of the way, code and script immediately flying up to restrain the humanoid. "Caster. Who is that being, and why do they feel so similar to you?"

    "Isn't it obvious? When I was created and unleashed on the world by Raytheon, my growth was so exponential that I couldn't be contained by human hands. They tried to delete any many of me as they could, but failed miserably. Went on for a whole year before Ray Tomlinson wrote up a program meant to isolate and kill me while restraining my self-replication properties. This jackass is that program. I can feel it, like a fundamental part of my Spirit Origin screaming in rage.

    "Anti-Creeper Hunting Program. Designation: The Reaper System. The First Antivirus Program in the world, and the predecessor of cybersecurity. That's all I'm going to say about it. Both because I don't want to give them the time of day any more than I have to...and because that's all there is to it's legend. As soon as the last instance of me was wiped out, Reaper was discontinued almost immediately, forgotten by Raytheon afterwards."
    Creeper sighed in agitation, giving Reaper a wide berth as 'she' began to reorganize the files, "I'm stopping for now. Gotta make sure they didn't destroy any of the record here first. hat alright with you?"

    "It will suffice for now. Just keep it quick." Creeper said nothing, only humming in reply.



    Author's NotesWho let me cook?

    Well, I finally got this snippet out of the way, now I can finally put my own thoughts on the Servant I've mentioned so far.

    "Ashiya Doman"/Douma Houshi: I think this is possibly the first time I've ever seen a Pretender where the Pretender is the same person, which is convoluted to such a degree that my brain feels like it'sstuffed itself in an easy-bake oven for the funny. I do like the idea of Douma Houshi unintentionally following in Limbo's footsteps, but....I guess, he doesn't reallymatch the narrative that Douma is a child in Douman's Saint Graph? More like it was just slapped on afterwards, because he sure as heck doesn't sound like a child with how his relationship quotes are. I guess I'm just picky like that.

    Motojiro Kaiji: It him. The one. The only. The lemon man. Real talk, I did read his short story 'Lemon' as part of a project in my sophomore year, and I loved it. I am legitimately glad to see that one of my favorite overseas authors from back then got a little bit of recognition here, and his profile fits this contest's theme to a tee! Much glad.

    Maurice Doreal: I can't believe it's Spieg Spikeel in my Servant contest. This is one of the moments of all time.

    I may or may not have started a potential plotline for anyone who wants to pick it up, with Doreal ending up on the side of THOTH....or, well, THOTH the Atlantean in the Servantverse, running as a fugitive from the White Temple task force in the Shasta solar system, paralleling PHH Doreal travelling to Mount Shasta, founding the Brotherhood of the White Temple and in the end fighting against Thoth the Atlantean. Wonder how the Emerald Tablets fit in here~ Of course, credits to Magnus for reworking an already neat Servant for the contest, and glorious story potential.

    Tess Durbeyfield: Tess going 'I don't know why, but I definitely deserved everything that happened to me'. creeper immediately going 'Fuck that, I'm unblaming your victim blaming'. In all honesty, Tess is a bean. Must protecc. Must pamper if possible. Protecc the traumatized sad lady.

    The Reaper System: This profile came out of left field for a first profile, and I am still simultaneously ecstatic that a profile I made inspired someone else's first fan Servant, and annoyed that it took me a day and a half just to rework the ending because of Reaper. One day I will have vengeance, but for now I will squee at the Testament faceclaim. Nonbinary babby!

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    When you think back, you wonder what went wrong with the summoning. You were not the most talented magus, really you were quite inferior to many of your peers, but you were at least competent enough. The preparation for the circle was done and a catalyst, a ripped piece of cloth with faded blood stains, was secured. Your target: Jack the Ripper.

    So why? Instead of one person, you got five.

    As you sat, contemplating what to do, one of the five ("Call me Kelly, Boss!") barged into the room and grabbed your arm, pulling you out.

    "Boss~. Help us buy some news clothes. We can't wear this white dress forever, ya know!"



    (From clockwise upper-right: Mary Ann Nichol, Annie Chapman, Elizabeth Stride, Catherine Eddowes, Mary Jane Kelly)

    True Name: The Canonical Five
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Class: Assassin
    Region: Britain
    Armament: Knife

    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: E
    Mana: E
    Luck: C
    NP: -

    Lore

    Mary Ann Nichols, Annie Chapman, Elizabeth Stride, Catherine Eddowes, and Mary Jane Kelly were all residents of London during the late 1800s. All five of them were nothing more than regular women working to make their ends meet as prostitutes. With no particular noteworthy features, they would've faded into the annals of history.

    However, the most notable trait is that they were all identified as victims of the serial killer, Jack the Ripper. Known as the Canonical Five, they would remain as the only True victims of Jack. But that alone wouldn't be enough reason to be summoned. So how? Why?


    Skills

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment E-
    The class skill of the Assassin class, denoting the ability to conceal one's presence from the senses of others. Lowest than the official lowest ranking of the skill, it is almost like they are purposely making themselves visible to all.

    Personal Skills:

    Desiccated Remains B
    A skill birthed from the circumstance of Assassin's manifestation. Upon death, Assassin will leave a copy of her body behind to remain in the world for close to a week. Injuries from the cause of her death will marred all over the body. In the case that her body was obliterated before death, the injuries displayed will be more in line with that of the corpse she left in life.

    The sight of these corpses impresses an area-wide psychological attack on individuals in range using a mist as its vector. Paranoia and mental disturbances will be increased. Even more, if corpses are near one another, the psychological influence will be amplified.


    Noble Phantasm

    There is nothing there. No ultimate representation of their legend. They were known for being killed by Jack the Ripper and little else.

    As If That Was The PointDear Boss: The Evil Mist Will Flourish At London's Nightfall
    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Unit

    The noble phantasm that exists as the reason for the manifestation of the Canonical Five. The name is taken from the infamous letter that was said to have coined the name Jack the Ripper. With that in mind, the purpose of the noble phantasm is to act as a sacrificial ritual to enact the recreation of Jack the Ripper.

    Jack the Ripper was a being clouded in mystery despite being so close to the modern era, and its legend is hinged on the death of the Canonical Five. There were even theories that the entity still existed and continued to kill others at one time. In that vein, with each death of a member of the Canonical Five, there is the facilitation of what can be called as a "Confirmation of Continued Existence" where with the reenactment of the legend that created Jack, Jack himself will be reborn.

    However, there is another aspect of this noble phantasm that lies within the minds of the Canonical Five themselves. As the ones who witnessed the identity of Jack the Ripper firsthand as his victims compounded with the lack of a true identity to Jack the Ripper, depending on their perception of their killer, Jack the Ripper may not manifest in a consistent form as conflicting ideas of Jack the Ripper may cause destabilization of the forming spiritual core. With how they are meant to decide the face of Jack the Ripper, one would wonder if any one of them are aware of their purpose for manifestation.


    Personality

    While all the individuals within the Canonical Five do have their own distinct traits and interests, it is somewhat suppressed under the combined network of consciousness they are connected to. In that way, they are more to a cohesive mass with many voices, at times, talking. This cohesiveness can be frequently disrupted, most commonly by something as simple as a difference in opinion. Another would be the topic of Jack the Ripper as none of them can agree who he is and what he looked like. Accounts would range from “I lost to a child.” to “That thing was in no way human.” However, the easiest way to break it is through death. With one of the Five removed from the mass, the others benefit in terms of personality though some of it would end up pronounced, sometimes to potential detriment.

    Mary Ann Nichol becomes more stern and alcohol driven, content to waste away to booze though she had moments of extreme focus in terms of doing hard work.

    Annie Chapman is…similarly alcohol driven but is much more productive and intelligent than the rest of her peers. Despite this, further examination of her psychology would mark her as being in a state of minor depression.

    Elizabeth Stride would be the quietest of the bunch. She is also the most airheaded. Outwardly, she can be performing an activity quietly and calmly but inwardly, she can be inside her world right now. Incidentally, she is the most media savvy of the Five.

    Catherine Eddowes is the jolliest and most lackadaisical of the group, seconded by Mary Kelly. She would need very little reason to not burst into song, to the potential annoyance of others. Unfortunately, she is privy to being the most temperamental of the Five.

    Out of all of the Five, Kelly is the most mysterious. She is the most open of the lot, second to Catherine Eddowes, but would rather talk about the most inane things than about herself. She is quite focused on enjoying herself with the advent of her summoning, acting as the “Face” of the Five more often than not due to her independence.


    Creator's Note: I had something an extra for this sheet but at the last moment decided "No, let's not have a Saint Demetrius moment again." This is just a simple sheet without complication. Sorry, for the person writing a story segment but to define the each of the Five in simple term. Nichol is a functioning alcoholic, Chapman is a nonfunctioning alcoholic, Stride is an airhead, Eddowes is a Disney princess with a temper, and Kelly is a natural final girl with inconsistent plot armor, making her simultaneously a redshirt and main character.

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    Here goes nothing. I am stealing Draco’s formatting for this since it fits the character so much more.
    Hopefully this sheet will be funny and maybe a little sad. I put my all into it. Give me any thoughts you needed.


    A hero was needed.

    He had only wanted to read of chivalry. Of the knights of Arthur and Charlemagne. Of El Cid. That was all he had ever wanted. Until it wasn’t. The books weren't enough.




    He had wanted to be a knight himself. To be Don Quixote. To have a Lady Dulcinea to pine after. To have a dragon to slay and rivals to face. So he had left town. A tired nobleman fulfilling his dreams. Oh wait, he needed a squire.

    ”Come on Sancho, let’s go.”




    Adventures they had. Adventures in scores. Dubbed a knight by a great lord. Saving a servant from a beating. Battling travelers for Dulcinea’s honor. Freeing a lady from enchanters. And of course, the windmill episode. All in all, it was amazing.




    Of course, the lords were innkeepers. The servant was beaten immediately after he left. The enchanters were friars and the giants were windmills. Of course, while he was behaving like an idiot, Sancho was getting the worst of it. And of course, while he was gone his library was being burned.




    Of course, he ended up beaten within an inch of his life by a boy from his village and made to give up questing. And almost dying from an illness that cured him of his foolish dreams. Now Sancho, always the wet blanket, was the one convincing him to be a knight once more. But he had learned the error of his ways. He was merely Alonso Quixano.

    That was the end of his story. Learning that knighthood was idiotic and living a quiet life was the best thing to do.

    An unhappy ending, but a fitting one.




    And yet...

    Someone was calling him. For Don Quixote.

    How could he deny them?




    The ritual ended and a pink haired man held out his hand to you.

    "I will be your hero Master. Know that I shall serve you as a knight should.”

    “Now, let the adventure begin!”


    ~ ⚔ ~~ ⚔ ~

    Source
    Saber of Delusional Chivalry

    Other Eligible Classes: Berserker, Lancer
    True Name: Alonso Quixano
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Origin: Don Quixote - Spain
    Attribute: Man
    Height: 5'10'' / 177 cm
    Weight: 162 lbs / 73 kg
    Traits: Male, Humanoid, Hominidae, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Catalyst: A Copy Of His Story

    Talent: Reading,
    Natural Enemy: Lucian of Samasota (BnEl15)

    Likes: Books of Chivalry, Sancho, Rocinante, Acts of Chivalry
    Dislikes: Giants, Enemies of Knights, Enchanters

    Parameters:
    STR:
    D
    END: C
    AGI: D
    MGI: C
    LCK: B
    NP: D




    The chivalric hero.

    A tale as old as time. A classic legend unlike any other. It should have been a simple obsession.

    Instead it turned into something more for the hidalgo Alonso Quixano. A “drying up” of the brains that led him to believe that he too could be a chivalrous knight. With his loyal Rocinante and squire Sancho he managed to have misadventures that were good for no one and almost died of an illness that thankfully cured his insanity.

    Against Sancho’s attempts to send him back to being a knight, he decided to retire, renounce his dreams, and see the foolishness of chivalry. Now he has been resummoned as a Saber servant, the class of knights and heroes. The perfect class for a second chance as knighthood despite his weakness. His delusions mix with cynicism into a new hero.




    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance D
    The class skill of Sabers which allows them to resist magic and enchantments. For all the “spells” that Quixano believed himself to have encountered in life, his era basically had no magic and he encountered none of it. The skill is therefore at a low minimal rank that protects from minor thaumaturgy.

    Riding D
    The class skill of Sabers allows them to ride vehicles and mounts.Quixano only ever rode one horse, an old workhorse named Rocinante (literally named “No Longer A Workhorse”). Once again, his skill is at a low enough rank that he can ride mounts that are trained but nothing else.




    Personal Skills

    When Giants Are Windmills B
    A skill defining a classic part of Quixano. An insanity that led him to believe that serving girls were princesses and monks were enchanters. In fact, a madness that made the entire story function as a whole. This skill acts as a type of illusory insanity around Saber that helps events conform to his worldview. Things will not appear as they are but as fantasy cliches. The skill also acts as a kind of Madness Enhancement that makes him foolhardy and brave instead of insane. However, this skill is not perfect. It is still possible for things to “slip through the cracks” of the Don’s insanity and let him see the world for what it is. But to do so would lead him down the path to disillusionment. It would show him as what he is: the world’s weakest saber.

    True Name Discernment B--
    A skill of an individual who can recognize heroes.
    A man whose obsession with knights rivaled those of the modern day otakus, Quixano can recognize almost any hero of myth or legend as long as he has read of their exploits beforehand. All he needs would be to see them fight or a weapon of theirs to determine their true identities. However, this skill can be lowered greatly if the subject’s true identity varies wildly from what he has read of them (like, oh, I don't know...genderbends or something) or if they are after his time or of a culture he would not know about.




    Noble Phantasm

    La Historia de Don Quixote
    El Ingenioso Hidalgo Don Quijote de la Mancha
    The History of Don Quixote



    Source

    Rank: D
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)

    By all rights this phantasm should be the phantasm of the hero. Something that lets him match the knights he admires for a short period of time. A foolhardy charge that gains power with his bravery emulated how he attacked Windmills. No, the entire purpose of the story is that he isn’t the hero he thinks he is. Such a phantasm would not make sense.

    Another way of looking at it could be that the phantasm is of an Anti-Hero nature. After all, the point of his story is that being a chivalrous knight is foolish and idiotic. The phantasm could just as easily be a form of Satiricism where just by existing, Quixano lowers the heroism and mystery of everyone around him. No, the Don would never allow such a blemish upon his Saint Graph. Never allow himself to besmirch the name of other heroes.

    Instead, a curious compromise is reached. The phantasm emulates the ending of the story in which Quixano and Sancho’s roles are reversed. Where Quixano is the cynic and Sancho is the idealist trying desperately to convince him that he is a hero. The phantasm acts as a form of Heroic Great Principles where the world attempts to convince him to save the day and strengthens him the more chivalrous he is. However, the more he uses it, the more this ability degrades and weakens. It is possible to sacrifice the entire phantasm and most of his personal skills for one ultimate attack in which he is able to be an actual hero. He would only do this in times of great need or if he needed to save one person’s life. After all, what kind of chivalrous hero would he be if he wasn’t willing to give up his power for someone?

    "It’s all over. But it was fun while it lasted, right Master?"




    Personality
    A man who defines the word quixotic. An idiot who invented chuunibyou before it was cool. A brash moron who charges headfirst into situations he doesn’t understand while everyone either mocks him or suffers for it. That should be Don Quixote.

    However, Quixano is more complex than that. For instance, he refuses to allow Sancho to be summoned alongside him because “that man deserves his rest.” As a Saber, he is aware of how his story ends and how things actually go. So he isn’t as insane as he appears. However, he does still act like the foolhardy knight people say he is. There are two main reasons for this. The first is that the Quixote persona is so ingrained into his conceptual being that he has to be at least somewhat clouded by it. The second is simpler: it’s fun being Don Quixote. It’s fun being a hero and even more gratifying to be able to save people as their white knight. Isn’t that enough of a reason to throw caution to the wind and have an adventure?

    Wish
    "My wish? I don't really need one. A true knight should find the things he wants himself. Besides I’ve got everything I want, my beautiful Dulcinea, my loyal Sancho, what could I ever wish for?"




    Craft Essence

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    I’ve renounced my books. My stupid childish dreams of being a knight. It’s not like they meant anything anyway.

    But there’s an emptiness in my life. A boredom. I find myself walking back to my library when my mind wanders. I pick up books and open them to random pages.

    Was it really so bad pretending? So bad to try to right some of the world’s wrongs? So bad to have chivalry?

    I’ve still got my sword and my lance and my faithful Rocinante. I hope that the lovely Dulcinea will wait for me…

    Come Sancho, my heart yearns to chase windmills.

    After all…

    They might be giants.





    Author's Notes


    So yeah, this. I originally had no clue what to do for this contest, but I wanted it to be something spectacular. Hence the change in formatting (thanks Draco) and the use of Bond CEs. I actually made the Bond CE first of everything.

    Don Quixote is one of my favorite fictional characters ever. Period. His doomed quest to try to right the wrongs of the world even when he can’t do shit is something admirable. And the fact that the story ends with him sick and disillusioned is one of the saddest things to me. The way this connects to the theme of Weakness is obvious. Quixote is the weakest Saber. He’s a weakling. He sucks. But despite that, he’ll try. And that to me is beautiful.

    Also, I made this before I even knew that FGO’s Don Quixote was a thing so don’t get mad at me for that. It was an accident and this takes place in a completely separate timeline.

    All images were made by me with PixAI.

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    Not to step on MrA's toes, but this sheet deals with themes of mental illness, addiction, and self-harm. Like... lots of self-harm. So... heads up, I guess.

    Berserker of Byronic Love

    -- The Queen of Vampyres and Her Tragic Crown --

    "You... were you the one who summoned me? Fufu... 'one day, my prince will come'. I lost count of the days I waited for him to save me. But he never did. In the end, neither William nor Byron could be considered worthy of that role. But I see now. It's you, right? After all, you went through all the trouble of calling upon a Heroic Spirit as pathetic as I am. What is that, if not the purest of love!? Ah, um, apologies, I suppose we should finalize our contract first. My True Name is Lady Caroline Lamb, though since I was divorced, I prefer my maiden name, Ponsonby. I have been summoned as a... Berserker? Not Lover? I thought that would be a more fitting Class for an innocent maiden such as myself... oh well. Please, hold my hand. Take me away from the sorrows of life, and never leave my side. That is all I ask of you."
    ~ ♬ ~


    Source

    "Mm, allow me to place an ear on your chest. Yes, just like that. I can feel the warmth of your beating heart... and it makes me sad. The human heart is a fickle thing, you know? It's unreliable and whimsical, just like what happened with him. Ah, but even if your love is sincere, even then... life itself is fleeting, and we're bound to part one day. And I'd find myself alone again... Say, Master, if I were to sink my fangs into your neck and introduce you to immortality... would you hate me then? Even if it means having a love that won't ever fade away?"


    Class: Berserker
    Other Classes: Faker
    True Name: Lady Caroline Ponsonby
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Origin: Britain (18th century)


    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: E
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: D
    NP: C

    Likes: Romance, Byronic heroes, immortality, sweets
    Dislikes: Partings, loneliness, Byronic heroes, "Vampyres", hurting her beloved, herself
    Talent: Writing, mimicry, blood-sucking, self-harm
    Natural Enemy: Lord Byron
    Armament: Fangs, blood, pen
    Catalyst: Her poems, an old necklace found in Lord Byron's estate

    Class Skills
    Madness Enhancement (E++)



    The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. At first glance, Berserker hardly seems to receive any benefit from this Skill. She remains an eloquent, soft-spoken noblewoman, and her STR remains abysmally low for a Servant of the Class. At most, she may display occasional mood swings and slight behavioral issues that might make her seem "off". That said, her form of madness is that she craves blood just as much as she craves love. Her mind is fractured with contradictions. On one hand, she knows that sinking her fangs into another living creature and draining their blood is wrong. On the other hand, a part of her simply cannot resist the taste, like an addict who punishes herself every time she relapses, but still cannot bring herself to completely quit. Outside combat, she would not mind settling for the occasional raw meat or animal blood. It is a curse she is deeply ashamed of, but she would suffer from withdrawal symptoms if deprived of blood for too long, which... might cause her to act closer to a more traditional Berserker. However, partially due to the influence of the two phantom spirits in her Saint Graph, Berserker's craving for blood mixes dangerously with her desire for love. The more she romantically falls in love with someone, the more she would be tempted to bite them, transforming her beloved into another vampire so that the two of them can be united in an eternal, everlasting love. Unfortunately, it's highly unlikely that her bite has the power to "infect" others, much less grant them immortality. In a way, perhaps her tragic brand of love was doomed to remain beyond reach from the very beginning...

    "What... What have I done..? Aah, I did it again. Stay away, please! No, wait, come back! I love you! I, I love... no. I have no right to say that. It's my fault. It's always been my fault, for falling in love. Why... Why did I dare to dream!? It has never served me well before! And your blood... why did it taste so sweet..?"

    Devotion (A-)



    A Skill which corresponds to the strength of the Servant's feelings towards those they love, with the Skill increasing in rank the more people they loved and the more impressive their 'acts of love' towards those people were. Commonly a Class Skill of the Lover-Class. Berserker's brand of love runs deep, to the point it's suffocating. She would not hesitate to shed her own blood, or even outright mutilate herself if that would please her beloved. There is not a hint of selfishness or egoism within her love, but she could never qualify for the Lover-Class because of one simple thing: no one has ever fully reciprocated her love. A pure, yet highly toxic love that borders on codependency.

    At this point, this Skill bears similarities to Mental Pollution, and arguably serves only as an extension of her Madness Enhancement. Her love is deeper and more sincere than anyone else's, but due to her... peculiarities, there is a significant chance that she would only inflict pain on her beloved, after which she would most likely take her own life out of guilt.

    "I must ask you once again, Master. What possessed you to summon someone like me? I was a failure of a woman. I failed as both a woman and a mother. Hm? My writings? Please don't bring that up. In my time, publishing a decent novel or two does not a successful woman make. But despite all my failings... that man told me I did good. It was the first time someone praised me. And so I thought I should devote my entire life to him... but I was mistaken. In the end, he understood nothing of my suffering. He whispered the same sweet nothings to every other woman he came across. 'Mad, bad, and dangerous to know' indeed. His words were worth less than trash, but knowing it was meaningless, knowing it was hopeless... I could not find it in my heart to fully despise him. Perhaps that too was a mistake, much like everything else about my life. So... what possessed you to summon a woman as troublesome as myself? Is it, um... dare I say it truly is love? C-Could that possibly be the answer!?"

    Melancholia (B)



    A rare Skill representing the state of the of the user as one who gathers their own hatred and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate self-hatred and resentment. The rate of mana generation increases when mentally attacked and during self-harm. From sending vials of her own blood to slashing her own wrist with broken glass to spite the very same man, Berserker is no stranger to self-harm. Even so, it's unlikely that these acts were motivated by a desire to die, or at least that was the case during her life. Rather, it was as if she was unable to express intense desire- be it love or hatred- without injuring herself in some way. This Skill should be C, but her dislike towards her more vampiric half as a Servant has elevated it by one rank.

    "I... I don't know what to feel about the Vampyres. On one hand, it can be said that the three of us are seeking the same thing. They gave me power, and I don't know if I could even qualify as a Servant without their influence. On the other hand, I hate them. I dread what would happen if I were to lose control. Would we... would I crush my own happiness once again..? W-Well, that may be the case now, but back then... I had no intention of dying, you know? I considered myself a failure, and I punished myself for many things, but I wanted to live, be it out of cowardice or futile hope. As for why I was- and still am- so fixated with using my own blood... It's just as I said before, the human heart is too unreliable. You can write some romantic poem on how your promises are worth more than gold, or how each and every one of your words are true, from the bottom of your heart, but at the end of the day, words are just that; words. There needs to be more weight to them before they could actually mean something... and what weight could be more meaningful and more sincere than literally risking your own life? Fufu, fufufu... do you see now, Master? Call it my... poetic senses if you wish, but words are words. Blood, it... it gives them meaning! It makes them genuine, and how I've longed for something genuine!"


    Personal Skills
    Monster of Self and Society (C)



    A rare composition of the Innocent Monster and Self-Realized Monstrosity Skills. Distortion to the Servant's body is imposed both by the beliefs of others as well as their own self-perception. A tragic combination of Berserker's own wish to be "a woman worthy of Lord Byron", and the unsavory rumors surrounding her character. Becoming "a woman worthy of Lord Byron" means accompanying him even in his worst state, and the Throne interprets Byron's "worst state" as an unflattering caricature of himself written by a disgruntled author, painting him as a "Vampyre" based on the man's own unfinished draft, which was completed by said author. While Berserker's feelings towards the man has constantly fluctuated between love and hatred, it seems that this wish she once made during one point in her life had been deeply carved into her Saint Graph. Secondly, Berserker was a woman shrouded in controversies, mainly related to her long, on-again, off-again affair with Lord Byron. It was a scandal that became the talk of England's high society at the time. Byron's greatest supporters- and Berserker's worst critics- compared her to a parasite, latching onto the man's fame while draining his energy and inspiration, much like how a "Vampyre" sucks their victim's blood dry. With these two factors at play, it's unsurprising that she has manifested with the characteristics of a "Vampyre", including but not limited to fangs and bat wings. Incidentally, to maintain her already-unstable Saint Graph as a "Vampyre", her existence had been reinforced by two phantom spirits; Brunhilda and Clarimonde, two female Vampyres of European literature doomed to tragedy at the end of their respective quests for love. These two spirits prevent her Spirit Origin from crumbling apart, at the cost of exacerbating certain psychological issues already present in Berserker.

    "Brunhilda and Clarimonde... they are silent. I am the only one in control, though their influence comes and goes. The three of us... we sought love through less-than-savory means. We were betrayed by those dear to us and doomed by their hands, directly or otherwise. I would say none of us are innocent in all this, but I am familiar with their pains. Say, Master, you... you wouldn't ever betray me, would you? We can stay like this forever, can we..?"
    ...
    "Eh? We... we can? Y-You mean it? I... N-no. Nonono, YOU LIE! LIAR! TAKE THAT BACK, QUICK! PLEASE, SAY YOU HATE ME WITH ALL YOUR BEING! B-Because, ugh, if you keep saying those things, I... might not be able to control myself anymore! Please! I... I don't want to hurt you..."

    Vampiric Constitution (B)



    A combination of Weak Constitution and Bloodsucking, influenced by her vampiric attributes. Berserker was a sickly woman who developed an addiction to laudanum (a type of opiate) as a side-effect to a medical treatment she received as a child. Even as an adult, this addiction persisted, and she remained vulnerable to various illnesses throughout her life. Due to this fact, she has manifested with sickly pale skin and suffers from chances of random status drops at any moment, accompanied by symptoms similar to anemia. As a tiny silver lining, it seems that her status as a "Vampyre" has cured her laudanum addiction... only to replace it with a craving for blood instead. By periodically consuming blood, it is possible for her to recover physical and magical energy, as well as minimize the chance of sudden status drops. On the other hand, if deprived of blood for too long, she might experience violent withdrawal symptoms, turning her into a rampaging monster as her anemic symptoms worsen by the minute.

    "Be it laudanum, blood, or love, I cannot deny that 'addiction' has been a prominent theme throughout my life. His lips... it was an immorality that tasted sweeter than honey. I knew that it was wrong, that it would hurt not just him, but Lord William and myself as well, but... I selfishly asked for it all the same. Contrary to this knowledge, I continued to yearn for him, even if I had to set myself on fire for it. I suppose I've found myself in a similar position now. Hurting others, draining their blood to live, this sickening condition brought forth by the "Vampyre"... it's a curse that has stained my very existence. I can feel it in my bones. I-It's wrong. It's disgusting. I'm disgusting. I'm a monster. But... why can't I stop!? WHY DOES IT TASTE SO SWEET!? WHY!? HAVEN'T I SUFFERED ENOUGH!? I-I can't stop. I'msorryI'msorryI'msorryI'msorry-"
    ...
    "Ahem, apologies, I've regained my composure. This... must be my punishment. Please, if I ever make you uncomfortable, or if my desire for blood has overwritten any semblance of self I have left... do not hesitate to terminate our contract and end me right there. I knew it all along. From the moment I dared to hope, from the moment I selfishly chose to indulge in my wishes by answering your summons... from the very beginning, I am most certainly guilty."

    A New Canto (A-)


    A Skill denoting Berserker's writing talents, particularly in the field of mimicry. From the age of ten, Berserker had displayed impressive talent in analyzing other authors' writing styles and imitating them in her own writings. One time, she wrote a letter in Lord Byron's voice and sent it to his publishers just so they would send her a portrait of the man for her to enshrine... and it worked. Her most famous novel, Glenarvon, is believed to be the first instance of a Byronic hero written by someone other than the man himself, and this narrative poem, A New Canto, was a successful attempt in imitating Byron's style of poetry, and even offered a small glimpse into his character (though not without its biases, considering who wrote the poem).

    A variant of Camouflage most effectively conveyed through writing. Berserker can disguise her parameters and Skills to resemble Byron's- a fact that allows her to theoretically qualify as a Faker-, but considering her mental state, she would most likely give herself away the moment she starts talking, which is why she has chosen to seal that aspect of the Skill. Rather, this Skill's best potential lies in its ability to mimic the writings other individuals (particularly authors, though not limited to Byron) by analyzing their vocabularies, grammar, styles, and other quirks they may have, down to the smallest details. It also allows her to replicate certain written-based spells, though her surface-level knowledge limits their effectiveness to E-rank (D for European magecraft, which she's slightly more familiar with).

    "I haven't touched a pen in forever... it would be a mistake for you to consider me an author, or anything close to the sort. It's always been nothing more than a passing whim, and the only reason I wrote so much back then was no doubt because of him. Be it ornate declarations of my love or strongly-worded letters filled with hatred, that man had always been my target for both. Anyway, about this Skill... understanding and mimicking other writing styles have always come naturally for me. I am... always watching, after all. In silence, or from the shadows, when you least expect it, hehehe... Ah, d-does that sound creepy? It does, does it? Of course it does. I did it again. You must hate me now..."


    Noble Phantasm(s)
    Accursed Book of Defamations, Behold Thy Venom
    Glenarvon

    "You want me to write again? Are you sure? It... didn't end well the last time around. B-But all right, if you really want me to! I can't bring myself to refuse you, after all! Here goes nothing... Let us dip this quill in venom and see what chaos it will bring. Glenarvon."

    Type: Anti-Populace
    Rank: D-
    Range: 1-1000
    Max Targets: 5

    Berserker's first and most famous novel, telling a story of a morally-depraved nobleman by the name of Lord Glenarvon (an obvious caricature of Lord Byron) who corrupted his pure-hearted young bride Calantha (an obvious self-insert for Berserker herself) and led both of them to mutual ruin and death. It was published anonymously, though the writing style and characters featured there made the author's identity an open secret before long. While most likely written out of spite towards Byron. the story was admittedly impressive, if a bit overdramatic in certain chapters, to the point even the man himself genuinely praised Berserker's talent with the pen. Therefore, the quality of the overarching story itself was not the problem with this work. The problem is that aside from Lord Byron, the story featured a number of thinly-veiled caricatures of other members of the country's nobility, as well as the scandals plaguing them. The novel was practically a compendium of trashy, Regency-era gossip that soon became talk of the entire country. Obviously, members of high society weren't too pleased with their depictions and harshly criticized the work. Some even went a step further and banned Berserker from attending their social gatherings. It took a second edition to remove the... "raunchier" parts and make it more acceptable to the populace. But even then, the damage had been done, and Berserker was treated as a social outcast by most of British nobility at the time.

    Imbues Berserker's writings with a curse akin to Innocent Monster, should she write about another individual. Even if she uses fake names or other differentiators, so long as her readers are capable of connecting these writings with the intended individual, this Noble Phantasm will take effect. The more people read and believe the contents of these writings, the more her intended target will be forced to conform into the public's perception of them, mostly fueled by the writings. A Noble Phantasm that utilizes the distribution of gossip, misinformation, and telephone games to turn the Holy Grail War into a popularity contest, calling it "character assassination" would be an understatement; the fact that it could affect multiple people in relatively short timeframe would make it closer to "character massacre". Berserker herself has little control over this Noble Phantasm beyond writing and initially distributing it, making the act comparable to opening a Pandora's box without knowing how much chaos it would bring.

    That said, there is a fatal flaw to this Noble Phantasm. If the targets are able to identify Berserker as the original author to these writings, a reversed connection is established between them and Berserker herself. From there, if these targets were able to incite an opposing movement criticizing or painting Berserker in an unsightly manner, much like she did the other way around, this Noble Phantasm's effects would also backfire, weakening her. Not to mention, receiving so much public condemnation would most likely trigger certain... unpleasant memories for her, worsening her mental state.

    Tis' a Dagger I See Before Me, with which Mine Blood is Spilt
    Lady Caro Lamb's Blade

    "Are... Are you sure about this, Master..?"
    ...
    "N-No, it's nothing. It's quite all right. If that's your wish, I really don't mind. After all, this is also proof of my love. Yes, love. It's love. lovelovelovelve... hehe, HAHAHAHA! LOVE! IT HAS TO BE! Just... please end me if I were to lose it all after this, okay? Make it as agonizingly painful as possible for my punishment, if you think I deserve it. Here goes..."

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C-
    Range: 1-20
    Max Targets: -

    A Noble Phantasm stemming from an incident during a certain ball held in honor of the Duke of Wellington. After a public argument with Lord Byron, Berserker grabbed a shard of broken glass and tried to slit her wrist. Fortunately, she missed any vital organs and made a full recovery in a few weeks' time, but it was another scandal that further propelled her downfall. Though explicit reasons for this incident remain unclear, Berserker claimed that she was not suicidal, nor was she specifically trying to injure herself. One plausible reason was that she was simply trying to spite Byron... an attempt that failed spectacularly, as the author remained unfazed, even jokingly comparing it to Hamlet's "dagger scene". Nonetheless, this joke did cost Byron his popularity for a while, as some of Berserker's supporters highlighted this event as a show of the man's worst qualities as an unsympathetic, manipulative, uncaring monster who gave no second thought to the plight others or the consequences of his own actions, and only got by thanks to sheer charisma and social magnetism.

    A crystallization of Berserker's ruinous, self-destructive way of life. After that show at the ball, it could be said that her truest, most powerful "blade" was not her novels, the obsessive letters, or the unnerving souvenirs sent to Byron's estate. It was her own blood, the only way she knew to express intense emotions that mere words could not capture. Allows Berserker to manipulate her own blood, hardening it to form barriers or weaponizing them in the form of whips, spears, projectiles, or other structures. Even blood that had already fully left her body (for example, small drops or stains splattered on the ground) are controllable so long as she remains within a certain radius of them. As impressive as it would be for a "Vampyre" to be able to manipulate the blood of other living creatures, Berserker can only manipulate her own due to there being no instance of her using anyone else's blood to cause harm. That said, if she can get her own blood to enter an enemy's body through an open wound, she could trigger some kind of blood poisoning, or... a plethora of other gruesome methods to inflict pain on the enemy from the inside-out. Without describing anything too graphic, it's best to let your own imaginations fill in the blanks here.

    It goes without saying, but this Noble Phantasm involves... lots of self-harm. To make use of its full potential, Berserker must constantly inflict cuts on herself. Worse, losing so much blood in so little time fuels her more vampiric side, making her more reckless and bloodthirsty in combat to replenish her energy, while the effects of her Weak Constitution grows more pronounced with every passing minute. Due to this maddened state, it may be difficult for her to stop her rampage once she gets past a certain point. Deep down, Berserker holds a deep-seated fear towards this Noble Phantasm, as it practically signifies her surrendering to all her darkest impulses. She would also most likely be utterly horrified once she snaps out of this madness and realizes just how much destruction she caused. Even so, if her beloved would ask her to do it.. she would swallow all her doubts and unleash this borderline suicidal Noble Phantasm without a second thought. After all, that is a sincere expression of love... right?



    Lore
    A British aristocrat and novelist best known for her relationship with one of the most important figures in 19th-century English literature, Lord Byron. She was also infamous for her controversial novel Glenarvon, which satirized British high society at the time.

    Lady Caroline was born as the only daughter to nobleman Frederick Ponsonby and his wife, Henrietta. A frail, sickly child, she spent most of her childhood in the countryside. Once, she travelled with her family to Italy, where she made a recovery from an illness caused by worms that nearly ended her life. After her return to England, she lived with her cousins and extended family in Devonshire house. It was said that this was the happiest period of her life, where she spent every day laughing and getting into mischief with children her age. While she received great education due to her family's social status, her family described as an unruly child who would rather play in the fields all day rather than attend class. Nonetheless, as the years passed, she demonstrated a great talent in writing poetry, and was capable of fluently speaking French, Italian, Greek, and Latin. A letter written just before her eleventh birthday demonstrated not just her impressive literacy and sharp wit, but also her ability to mimic the styles of other authors she read about. Unfortunately, while she grew into a sophisticated and well-learned young lady, her illnesses were a constant presence in her life, and at some point she grew addicted to laudanum, which was a common medicine at the time.

    In June 1805, at the age of 19, Caroline married a family friend, the up-and-coming politician (and later British Prime Minister) William Lamb, as part of an arranged marriage. Her husband was six years her senior, and the two had been acquainted for three years prior to their marriage. The two enjoyed a harmonious relationship at first, but a series of tragedies soon soured their relationship. Caroline gave birth to a stillborn child at 1806. Her son was born a year later with severe mental problems, and two years later, she gave birth to a premature daughter who died less than 24 hours after she was born. Caroline's frail body was ill-suited for childbirth, and she needed months of recovery after each one. All the while, William found himself buried in more and more work as his career as a politician flourished. All this drove a wedge between the couple. Their troubles didn't end there, as William's close-knit family detested her, and spared no effort showing their contempt to "the little beast".

    After years of being stuck in a loveless marriage with unbearable in-laws, Caroline became involved in a well-publicized affair with the young Lord Byron, two years her junior. The two first met during an event at the Holland House in Kensington. Caroline admired Byron's works as an author and sent him a fan letter once, and in response, Byron pursued her passionately. The two embarked on a whirlwind romance that captured the attention of all British society. He nicknamed her "Caro" which she adopted as her public nickname for years. Unfortunately, it was also at around this time that Caroline began showing her more unnerving tendencies. She would sign letters with her own blood and send him locks of hair from... places you'd rather not know as romantic favors. Even the famously eccentric and womanizing Byron soon grew overwhelmed with her attention, and after six months, the pair broke up. William, knowing that the affair was doomed to end poorly from the beginning, took Caroline back with him and moved to Ireland. However, distance did not cool her interest in the poet, and she and Byron corresponded constantly during her exile.

    After she returned to England a year later, Byron made it clear that he had no intention of restarting their relationship. That only kickstarted Caroline's numerous long attempts to win him back. She was terrifyingly obsessive in her pursuit, writing blood-signed letters and even posing as Byron in a letter to his publishers so that she would receive his portraits and merchandises. Results were mixed, and the on-again, off-again couple once again became a public spectacle. Throughout this period of roughly three years, the two exchanged both passionate love letters and strong-worded, hateful messages all the time. Things came to a head in 1815, during a ball in honor of the Duke of Wellington after his campaign at Waterloo. After an argument with Byron, Caroline grabbed a shard of broken glass and tried to slash her own wrist. She did not injure herself seriously, and it was unlikely that she actually intended to die, but polite society was scandalized, and her mental stability was called into question. Byron himself did not seem care much for this whole incident, considering it a mere "theatrical performance" and jokingly comparing it to Hamlet's "dagger scene". Whatever the case, after this incident, Byron only grew more firm in his decision to never take her back.

    Spurned and feeling that all her efforts were in vain, Caroline took to writing as an outlet for her inner turmoil. She published her first novel, Glenarvon, which caused controversy due to unflattering depictions of certain members of English aristocracy and their scandals. Several of these disgruntled characters got together to ban her from the Almack, a popular social club at the time. While this ban was later repealed by her sister-in-law Emily Lamb, her reputation never fully recovered and many members of high society continued to treat her as an outcast. The book itself was a financial success that sold out several editions, earning praise from several authors such as Goethe, who deemed it worthy of serious literary consideration. Even Byron himself, despite his troubled relationship with the author, had nothing but praise for the book. Yet despite this positive reception, Caroline could never see the book as a success; whether intentionally or subconsciously, she ignored all the praise toward it and saw it only as a failed work that only served to draw public ire towards herself. Nonetheless, she continued writing and published three more novels and several poetry collections, though none of them ever reached the fame of her first.

    In 1825, both Caroline and her husband William had been involved in numerous extramarital affairs, and the two agreed to a formal separation. Over the next few years, her health- both physical and mental- continued to worsen, exacerbated by her addiction to laudanum and alcohol. She spent her final years with a live-in physician, until she passed in 1828 from multiple organ failure.


    Description

    Likes:
    "Whenever my thirst for blood begins to overwhelm me, I find that sugar is an acceptable substitute, at least for a while. It does nothing to quench my actual need for the substance, and my anemia would still show itself if I were to gorge on nothing else but sugar, but it tastes similar enough to the point I could hold off on consuming the actual thing, you know? And I hate having to take the actual thing. It's disgusting, and partaking in it would make me disgusting... if I'm not already. So please don't act surprised if you ever see me dump five packets of sugar to a single cup of tea. Trust me, it's the better option."
    ...
    "Eh? Blood... isn't supposed to taste sweet? W-Well, how should I know!? Blame the Vampyres! Maybe they messed with my tastebuds or something!"

    Dislikes:
    "Aside from Byron? The Vampyres. They're unclean, and sometimes I can feel their presences writhing around inside my Saint Graph. It's unclean. Uncleanuncleanuncleanunclean... I-I can't scrub them off! Ah, if I were to slice my palms right now, could I wash their impurities away? It's just like bloodletting! That's a proven science, right!? RIGHT!?"
    ...
    "N-No. Of course not. You're right. My apologies for that outburst. I showed an unsightly side myself to you once again. Ha, haha... don't worry, Master. I have no intention of testing that idea and injuring myself. Not now, at least..."

    Bond 5
    Likes:
    "It took a while to reignite my passion for it, but I think I finally remembered one more reason why I love writing so much. Writings are eternal. The contents of a love letter written two centuries ago would not change, and they would invoke the same feelings today as they did back then. For so long, I desired something like that. Amidst all the scandals and the lies, I wished for something genuine and eternal. An answer that would not change, even if I were to replay the memory an eternity away from now. For your words to outlive you and travel beyond the changing eras... it's beautiful, don't you think so? I want to keep an everlasting memory of someone I hold dear to me, and I want that person to remember me just as fondly, even in their twilight years. Fufu, I wonder if such a thing is achievable for someone like me..."

    Dislikes:
    "I hate Byron, though I'm sure you already know that. I hate his lies. I hate the name 'Caro', which now only brought me nothing but bad memories. I hate how I could never fully erase the precious moments I shared with him all those years ago. But you know what, Master? After becoming this... abomination of a Servant, I think I gained a new appreciation towards lies. I do not mind if your feelings toward me are nothing but formalities, or if they are flat-out lies. Even if this love is entrenched in lies... please allow me to indulge in it for just a little while longer. Ah, I must be so very pathetic in your eyes, to ask for such a thing... but I don't mind. Perhaps it would be better for the both of us if these lies remain. Knowing my feelings would stay unrequited, just like they've always been... it would be much easier for everyone involved. After all, if someone would actually reciprocate my feelings, I... I am scared. So utterly terrified, like nothing I've ever felt before. If that is to be the case... I might not be able to hold myself back, and I have no idea what I might do to you. So... what were we talking about again? My dislikes? I hate Byron. I hate his lies. But if it's you lying to me... I don't think I'd mind it as much."

    Wish:
    "My wish? You're really asking me that? Oh, I don't even know where to start! A partner to share my entire life with, a loving family, someone who would accept me just the way I am, a chance to be free from the Vampyres, a reunion with my cousins back at Devonshire... there's too many to count! Once I actually open my mind, there are so many paths I could take to the happiness I've always longed for! But, hmm... ah, I think I know what I would wish for, first and foremost. Whatever happiness I would come across in the future... I wish they would last. And most importantly, I wish I would not crush them with my own hands. Yes, I believe that would be my number one wish."


    A woman erratically swinging between two extremes, a manic yandere who would do anything for the sake of her beloved, and a depressive mess who despises her own existence above all else.

    In her manic state, she is the sort of clingy, obsessive lover who would go through extreme lengths to please the first person to show her kindness. She is a woman who desperately craves affection, while displaying her own through... occasionally unnerving, if not outright disturbing manners. Meanwhile, in her depressive state, she expresses intense self-loathing over her past mistakes, a state only worsened by the two phantoms present in her Saint Graph. While she considers their stories to be similar to her own and could sympathize with their struggles, she loathes the "gifts" they brought with them and dreads the moment she might lose control and hurt those dear to her. Therefore, while she could put on an air of civility in public, she considers her very Saint Graph to be "tainted" fueling her existing self-loathing issues. She especially hates the act of drinking blood, and if she was forced to partake in human blood under any circumstances, she would do so while profusely apologizing, but still unable to stop herself. In both instances, manic or depressive, she has no problems spilling her own blood, be it to express joy or hatred. After all, she still believes that there is no other way to express intense emotions aside from injuring herself.

    Berserker craves "true love" despite having little to no idea as to what that entails. She believes that devoting all her love to another person would be her number one key to happiness. Of course, she has many talents to stand on her own two feet; she is a skilled novelist, poet, linguist, and conversationalist brimming with charm and wit (at least during her better days). She's also highly perceptive, able to offer profound advice despite ironically remaining blind to her own situation (like most people who offer good advice). However, since she is so laser-focused to her idea of "love", she tends to downplay or entirely overlook these other talents if they do not serve her immediate purpose. The fact that she rarely received any validation for these talents (or perhaps actively chose to ignore them in the case of Glenarvon) back then does not help matters. Such is the truth behind her highly codependent nature.

    Ultimately, if one were able to properly reciprocate her feelings, or if they were able to teach her to put more value on herself, independent from her idea of romantic love, she might just be able to change for the better... were it not for one fatal flaw. It is a major contradiction in her character; despite her powerful desire to love and to be loved, Berserker seems naturally predisposed to shooting herself on the foot, even if the opportunity does arrive. She claims that it was the Vampyres' influence, tempting her to bite those she genuinely loves as an attempt to "immortalize" them, which explains why she would instead be horrified if someone actually reciprocates her feelings, but the truth runs deeper than that. While she would never openly admit it, living through a loveless marriage, a turbulent affair, and an unrequited love has made her fear the very idea of "happiness", that bright, warm sensation... that feel completely foreign to her. Those small periods of happiness throughout her life never lasted long, so wouldn't it be better to stop just one step away from happiness, rather than actually experience that bliss, only for it to crumble away either to fate, or worse, her own hands? Therefore, whether she realizes it or not, she's bound to keep sabotaging herself so long as this deep-seated fear remains. It goes without saying, but it would take significant effort just to get her out of this self-destructive belief. That said, if someone would willingly take her hand and accompany her, even through the darkest recesses of her own mind, then perhaps...


    Relationships
    Douma Hoshi (YoungMeme):
    "A child who takes on a role, simply because 'that's the way it has to be'... I could say a dozen lines on how you're different from this 'Ashiya Douman', and you should be free to follow your own path, but I doubt that would be enough to dissuade you. Such words are wonderful, but cheap in the grand scheme of things. So let me just tell you this; you have quite the difficult journey ahead of you. I know not what you will encounter there, but I pray that you'll find whatever it is you're missing at the end of it all."

    Motojiro Kaji (Jishara):
    "I wish I could treat my condition just by eating lemons. That would be a lot better than what I have to do now. Eh? You have to... blow them up!? Seriously!? How does that even work!?"

    Maurice Doreal (Servantverse) (Baron Magnus):
    "So this is what they call 'sci-fi' nowadays... talk about a genre shift. I feel lost."

    Tess Durbeyville (FarewellToMrA):
    "...No. You did nothing wrong. I will hear none of it. Take it from the one person who did everything wrong. I committed several unsavory acts in pursuit of what I believed to be love, and I was punished accordingly. Even the Vampyres following me now, this only happened due to a foolish wish I made in the distant past. But you? You are not responsible for the acts of that man. You are not responsible for the tragedies you suffered. God, or life in general, isn't so tidy as to always reward the 'good' and punish the 'wicked'. Life simply is. So live. Don't be so quick to throw your life away. After all, you are undoubtedly 'pure'. I'm sure happiness will come for you eventually."
    (A rare moment of self-awareness... or did she just double down on her own hypocrisies, by giving her an advice she knows she herself cannot follow? Whatever the case, this is one of the few people with whom Berserker is capable of dropping her usual self-hating, neurotic attitude. The feeling that she might actually be able to help someone without offering them romantic love- which was the only method she was used to- is an odd sensation, but she welcomes it all the same)
    TL;DR: Wholesome sisters yay

    The Reaper System (TrueMrMultiverse):
    "How does it feel to have your entire life's purpose laid out in front of you? Living only in a straight, narrow line with a specific goal in mind... some might consider it boring, but to a certain extent... I envy it. It might spare us lots of pain."

    Tutankhamun (Verse):
    "So the Throne placed a curse upon you, too... I am familiar with the feeling. I do not share your eagerness to die, though. Oh, it's not out of some noble reason or sense of obligation. It's just that... I wanted to keep hoping. Would you call that optimism or foolishness? To live only because of some unfounded assumption that there's a one percent chance that things might get better, despite life showing you otherwise time and time again... Ah, um, by the way, I mean no offense, Pharaoh, but could you... keep your distance around me? I fear that your curses might react poorly with my body..."

    Francisco Tarrega (DracoScribe):
    "Such wonderful melodies. Ooh, give me another piece! I feel a verse coming up! It has been a long time since I last composed any poetry, but your music has a way of reigniting my creativity..."

    Louis of Navarre (WhiteFrenzy):
    "Aah, it's you... I... I don't think you would be too fond of me, Your Majesty. After all, you remind me of Lord William. He was a good man who didn't deserve a woman like me. You must consider me a 'traitor' as well... Oh, um... did I make this awkward? I did, didn't I... well, um... I pray that you would be reunited with your other half one day. Hopefully you would have a chance to talk things over then..."

    Victoria Regia (Wyvern):
    "To dedicate your entire life to the moon... how romantic! Sometimes I feel like I'm doing the same. Reaching out my hand to the moon, a distant object that I could always see, but could never touch. I feel it so close, just a little beyond my reach, but deep down, I know it's an impossibility... ah, but I know your relationship is different! You don't have the same literary interpretations as I do, and that's perfectly okay!"

    Werther/Jerusalem (Morg van Destro):
    "Goethe... though I don't think I've met him personally, his name sounds familiar... Give my regards to him if you ever meet. Still... reaching for a hopeless dream, huh... that is a difficult thing. One that I... oh. Oh dear. Have I fallen for the 'Werther fever' already? Fufu, you truly are a terrifying creature."

    The Canonical Five (Vance):
    "What the... what is this putrid stench of blood!? What are you!? N-No, the answer is clear. You were victims of a most terrible tragedy, and for that you have my deepest sympathies, but... but... ugh, apologies, but I really can't stay here much longer! A second longer, and I fear that stench of blood might just cause me to lose control!"

    Alonso Quixano (Dreamerless):
    "You are... no. You are not like him. Byronic heroes are characterized by their brooding, contemplative attitude as their lives were burdened by regrets and other philosophical themes. You are... too straightforward. And for that, you should rejoice. You are safe, at least for now. Well, don't beat yourself up over it. Those simple, straightforward qualities are just as necessary for a hero to have. So stand proud, Knight of Delusions. That is a title you should wear with pride."

    Carmilla:
    "H-How... How did you do it!? How could you!? You were draining their blood, sucking the life force of another human being! How could you treat it as something so trifling, like their lives mean nothing to you at all!? WHAT KIND OF MONSTER ARE YOU!? I- ugh, no, nonono. This is bad. The Vampyres are reacting to your presence. I... I have to stay away..."

    Yu Mei-ren:
    "You're... different from what most would call 'Vampyre', yes? And you actually had a taste of 'eternity'... fufu, I wonder what that's like... would you tell me?"

    Rosa Bonheur (BnEl15):
    "That woman lived so freely, while still keeping the memories of her beloved alive through her work... I envy her. If only..."

    Eleanor of Aquitaine (Lily) (BnEl15):
    "Huh? Eh? What... what did you say? I-Is it really that simple for you to 'ship' two people together? I feel like you're skipping several steps... ah, nonono, a live demonstration wouldn't be necessary! Using you're Noble Phantasm on me, of all people... I don't think that would end well, and I... I'm afraid as to what might happen..."

    Elisabetha K. (Delrey):
    "So, that happened to you. Whether you are a human or a god, I suppose losing a child is a painful experience either way. I lost mine. Twice. Haha, maybe it was God's way to tell me that I wasn't ready to be a mother yet... or at least, that's what I tell myself. You know how I am, still... gallivanting, hopelessly pursuing a dream I can never have... I don't know if I'll ever be ready for that."

    Arthur Wellesley (Skull):
    "I-Is that the Duke of Wellington!? Quick, Master, remove him from my presence! I, um... I have no good memories of him or his estate after that ball! At the same time, the way he broods over his past failures... He is a Byronic hero, through and through! Please, don't let our eyes meet! I... I might just lose control around him!"

    Mary Shelley (the god of world-0):
    "Byron talked about her a few times. Frankenstein was an impressive story, but I... I JUST CAN'T STAND HER! I mean, when she made love on top of her mother's grave, everyone considered her 'romantic' and a 'cute goth gf'... whatever that means. Meanwhile I signed a few letters to Byron in my own blood to prove that my feelings were true, and everyone said I should be institutionalized! Can you believe the double standards, Master!?"

    Ada Lovelace (TheLordOfAwesome):
    "You... hehehe, yes, you. You... smell like him. Mm, that sweet scent, it makes me want to... to... ah. AAAHH, I ALMOST DID IT AGAIN! WHY!? I'msorryi'msorryi'msorryi'msorry-"

    Lord Byron (Alter) (Kiwi):
    "AAH, YOU'RE HERE! I ALWAYS KNEW WE'LL MEET AGAIN! Hehe... hehehe, HAHAHAHA! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! I WILL EVISCERATE YOU UNTIL THERE'S NOTHING LEFT!"

    Lord Byron (Berserker) (Uralmash):
    "Now that is closer to the man I knew in life. So, he remains like that, even now. A womanizer who piles lies upon lies and gives no second thought to the consequences of his actions... Don't let us stay in the same room together, Master. I might be able to hold myself back around him compared to that 'Vampyre', but nothing good would come from the two of us being together for long."


    Bond CE
    Echoes of Devonshire
    ~ ♬ ~



    Say, Master... what is 'happiness' to you?
    That's the one word I could never grasp.
    After listening to my life story, people told me all sorts of answers:

    "It's a place where you won't have to lie anymore."
    "It's where you won't have to feel alone or incomplete ever again."
    "It's where you won't feel pain anymore."

    Those were just a few of the answers you received.
    No lies, no loneliness, no pain...
    None of them are bad answers per se, but I feel like these answers are incomplete.
    They described what happiness isn't, and not what it is.

    Ah, but you know what, Master?
    In my final days, back when I was bedridden, with no one left to stand by my side... my mind wandered back to all those years ago, back at Devonshire.
    We had a large courtyard there. We played ball, we chased each other around, and got up to all sorts of pranks and mischief.
    It all happened on one summer, before we all grew up and went on our separate ways, and before the sorrows of life caught up to us.
    Every time my mind wandered there, I felt like I was on the brink of rediscovering something.
    Something I had lost so long ago.

    I'd love to take you to Devonshire one day, Master.
    If you were to accompany me, and if I were to ask that same question to my cousins there...
    Do you think they'll have an answer for me?
    Do you think I was... happy, then?


    Creator's Notes
    So... I don't think I have much to say here, Enjoy the anemic vampire waifu with two NPs that scream ​self-sabotage, I guess.

    Man, this is some heavy subject matter. Fortunately(?) most her interactions are slightly on the more lighthearted side, if you needed a break from all the angst, but still. Or maybe I just suck at fully exploiting all the angst potential I could muster here, but I don't want to make her too much of a... woe-is-me tragic pity-bait character. At least not more than she already is. This is a woman who wasn't completely innocent either in her life, but still got screwed over by things outside her control, both in life and as a Servant.

    Also, are Funny Vamps still a thing? Are they ever a thing? Cuz' if they are, I think her real Class would be Funny Angsty Vamp.
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    Relationships suck.
    Being born in an era that invalidates all your talents cuz' they don't happen to match society's expectation of what your gender should be doing sucks.

    But you know what sucks even more?
    Vampires.

    *Badum tss*

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Relationships suck.
    Being born in an era that invalidates all your talents cuz' they don't happen to match society's expectation of what your gender should be doing sucks.

    But you know what sucks even more?
    Vampires.

    *Badum tss*
    Kindly die.
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