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Name: Cadmus
Title(s): King of Order (King of Curses), The First Greek Hero
Class: Gatekeeper
Other Classes: Lancer, Caster
Gender: Male
Place of Origin: Ancient Greece
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Attribute: Earth
Armament: Fists (Claws), Armor (Scales), Words (Curses)
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Creator Notes
Last edited by Hound of Ulster; October 21st, 2020 at 07:01 PM. Reason: formatting got messed up thats it i swear dont shoot
Literally at the last minute. Congrats, Ulster.
Yep, thanks! Thought I had time for the day, but both classes I had today held me back longer than normal due to the new term. There's a few things I wanted to address, like the synergy between the two Noble Phantasms and a whole Tactics section, but I might just complete and port it to the CaS thread that once voting week is complete, for posterity.
your Cadmus is gotten very good also i can feel with thetime pressure you had , correct me if i am wrong but habent you made already a Lancer Version of him ? out of curiousity have you seen my Teshub servant i would be curious to hear your oppinion ? and i would recomend that you make a blog with the index of your made servants ?
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; October 21st, 2020 at 12:34 PM.
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Thank you for you reaction and review ,About the Servant class ,the Remainer class is actually more wider as example wise Arthoria would /has qualifications for the class just besides .
About the Details in Chaoskämpfer sorry there was i basically in the thril of writing that you can perhaps understand the Feeling were your Imagination Shines . i just overdid it .
About the amount of Research yeah i dived Deep into te mythologic Lores and will in the next days make perhaps oe or two Thunder profiles in the normal servant thread.
Also i know that he is beyond the "powerhouse " title but this is outbalanced that in a regular Grailwar System he is nearly not summonable . As you must know i imagine my servants in a anime like Fashion and not in a Grand order way so do i think that the power of servants is balanced by either their personality flaws or that to summon them at first is difficult as they Need some Special or uniue catalysts or circumstance to come forth. and as lttle hint an summoning sytem that could summon him is the same as in my Fate Hokkaido jiken Story.
Also i saw now your Macbeth and Vortigern both are really good let me guess the defeat him and his noblephantasm would be a Dagger helpfull and convenient ?
About your Vortigern i am curious how he would think of my Teshub ?
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Honorable Mentions
Geraint Fardd Glas/Edward Williams (Caster/Faker): Was gonna be third place for quite a long time until Téshub usurped that position. You call it gimmicky, but I think it's just a pretty fun adventure to go through. Makes it fun to read his sheet.
Cadmus (Gatekeeper): So close. I love him, and even had Vortigern say something to him, but it just wasn't meant to be. There were a lot of great choices, and some just had to go by the wayside.
Edvard Munch / Dorian Gray (Foreigner): You can see what I have to say here.
Carl Tanzler von Cosel (Foreigner): I love the use of Elena and a Foreigner that isn't evil. Was a good contender for my vote. More thoughts.
Vortigern (Ruler): AH! RHONGOMYNIAD! No one's ever been able to wield that!
I really wanted to make that joke.
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It would seem, no matter the era, duty and compassion are often times unrewarded. Better to be forgotten and praised as you than remembered and scorned as I.
Last edited by Morg van Destro; November 10th, 2020 at 02:00 AM.
3 points: Cosel. Mostly tied with your Fersen sheet (hmm, just realized both your entries have "von" in their name...) but in the end this one tickled my fancy just a bit more. I really like how you wove together the ideas of a hopelessly obsessed romantic trying to bring back the one they love and a doctor striving with every fiber of their being to defeat death. He sounds like he'd make a great "tragic villain" character in a fanfic.
2 points: Brionac's Wielder. Though silly, this is just such a unique and creative idea I couldn't resist giving it a spot here. Otherwise I already wrote my thoughts a few pages back.
1 point: Marcus Aurelius. I have a soft spot for philosopher Servants so this merits a spot. Nothing off-the-wall (which wouldn't really fit who he is) but this is a very solid take on the guy that works in most of what he's famous for in an interesting way. His NP is unique where only "deliberate" attacks can affect him, I guess that makes him immune to collateral damage and some Berserker Servants.
Honorary Mentions: Axel von Fersen, Joaquin Murrieta, Vortigern, Edvard Munch/Dorian Gray
Quality of Life post:
Foreigner - Alexander Scriabin by RoydGolden
Faker - Gerald Fardd Glas/Edward Williams by Skull
Avenger – Joaquin Murrieta by WhiteFrenzy
Ruler – Vortigern by NittyGritty
Avenger – Hans Axel von Fersen by BnEl15
Saver – Louisette by Clyton
Shielder – Mozi by RoydGolden
Foreigner – Sigmund Freud by DelRey
Watcher – Laika by Perry Ellis.
Alter-Ego – MacBeth by Morg van Destro
Faker – Brionac' Wielder by Comun
Ruler – Marcus Aurelius by NMR-3
Avenger – Vortigern by Morg van Destro
Foreigner – Edvard Munch/Dorian Gray by DelRey
Foreigner – Carl Tanzler von Cosel by BnEl15
Avenger – Belphegor by GilgameshKingOfMemes
Foreigner – Helen Vaughan by TheLordOfAwesome
Remainer – Téshub by Kabalisto Koga
Gatekeeper – Cadmus by Hound of Ulster
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i can vote for 2 different sheets that were made my the same contributor, right?
People are aware voting's open, right? It's just usually this slow for people to vote?
3 points: Sigmund Freud. Creative lore and NPs tying his works to Kuranes and Dreamlands. I also enjoyed his personality as a humorous, perverted but ultimately good-natured psychologist genuinely trying to help his patients, as well as his relationship with other Servants in Chaldea.
2 points: Helen Vaughan. As someone else stated before, a truly terrifying Foreigner all around. Her NPs are relatively obvious considering her Outer God, but it still conveys this sense of primal fear, which you further supported with her lore, personality, and outlook towards humanity. Overall, good job.
1 point: Joaquin Murrieta. Hoo boy, he's so edgy, in a good way. his NPs are well-made, and I like your characterization of him as a "fallen hero of justice". An Avenger at its finest.
Honorable mentions: Louisette, Mozi, both Vortigerns
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I'm not familiar with his legend, so there's not much I can say about it, but the idea of a proto-Thunder God is interesting to see. The class also has some potential, although I feel the qualifications so far are still kind of vague. His personality is pretty straightforward, which I don't have any problem with, aside from being a little too much of a "big good" character. Then again, that in itself is not necessarily a flaw if you can use it well in a story.
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1 Point: Cosel
The first Foreigner I ever enjoyed, probably because the Lovecraftian elements didn't feel any intrusive. Also because I'm usually a fan of the wife guys, and your Cosel feels very incredibly wholesome for a corpse fucker, in a way I've only seen before in Shaman King's Faust. And even then, I'd say I like Cosel's approach better because the wholesome tone of the sheet and the faceclaim very successfully masks all the creepiness of his story.
2 points: Mozi
She's just the simple concept of pacifism, but with enough thought put into it to form a rich and complete character. I really like this style of character creation, of turning a single word into a believable human being. I love the emotional maturity on this lady, and the story behind her second Noble Phantasm is the exact kind of bullshit I find badass.
3 points: Vortigern
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SETO KAIBA! I couldn't have picked a better day of the year to read the sheets. I'm not a fan of when Servants based around its famous faceclaims go "haha funny memes" in the quotes, with stuff like "Screw the rules, I am Britain", but I can definitely overlook that with how amazingly this sheet nailed the serious parts of Kaiba's character. His whole aura of stoic smugness, his views on power, and most importantly, his central idea of rejecting the past for the sake of the future, it's all *chef's kiss* perfectly true to what it references. It's a sheet that shows you really understood what made Kaiba's character so good.
Honorable mentions: All of the Avengers. Not a single one of them wasn't great and it's a real shame I couldn't fit any (especially Murrieta) into my podium.